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** She does it again while sober later on in an attempt to convince Hisao to stay with her in his dorm room instead of going out for a morning run while it's raining.
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* DoorStopper: Post-expansion, the entirety of the fanfic spans over 1000 pages in PDF form. Be prepared for a long haul if you attempt to read it all in one go.
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* BookEnds: A minor one, and only if you're using the optional musical cues provided by the author: the final tune played in the final chapter is Wiosna, which just so happens to be the opening theme for ''Katawa Shoujo'', thus indicating that the story is finally at an end.
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** At the end of the story (post-expansion), [[spoiler: they actually do become sisters, when Lilly and Akira's parents adopt Hanako.]]
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* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: A subtle variation. Lilly admits to Hanako that her friendship with Hisao could have lead to romantic feelings given the time and under the right circumstances, but since she cannot see, falling in love is a gradual process to her. (no love at first sight for her) When she realized Hisao was more drawn to Hanako, Lilly preemptively friendzoned Hisao in order to give Hanako a chance. Lilly also mentions to Hisao that this is probably what Hanako would do if she thought the shoe was on the other foot. (even if she was mistaken)
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* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: A subtle variation. Lilly admits to Hanako that her friendship with Hisao could have lead to romantic feelings given the time and under the right circumstances, but since she cannot see, falling in love is a gradual process to her. (no ([[IncrediblyLamePun no love at first sight for her) her]]) When she realized Hisao was more drawn to Hanako, Lilly preemptively friendzoned Hisao in order to give Hanako a chance. Lilly also mentions to Hisao that this is probably what Hanako would do if she thought the shoe was on the other foot. (even if she was mistaken)
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** Kenji appears to have watched DeathNote at some point.
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** Kenji appears to have watched DeathNote ''Manga/DeathNote'' at some point.
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** Lilly's mother mentioning how she always wanted to wake someone up using her mother's "ladle and frying pan" method is a reference to [[AzumangaDaioh Osaka]] who wanted to do the same.
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** Lilly's mother mentioning how she always wanted to wake someone up using her mother's "ladle and frying pan" method is a reference to [[AzumangaDaioh [[Manga/AzumangaDaioh Osaka]] who wanted to do the same.
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* {{Samurai}}: Akira compares her father to one, and she's not far off the mark.
* SomethingCompletelyDifferent: Instead of events as seen (and narrated) through a character's viewpoint, chapter 57 is a collection of emails and internet messages between Hanako and just about everyone in the cast.
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** Averted in Lily's case, as she chose to stay in Japan.
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** Averted in Lily's case, as she chose to stay in Japan. However, the trope pops up again [[spoiler: after Hanako failed her exams, while Hisao and Lily leave Yamaku to attend university.]]
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* {{Samurai}}: Akira compares her father to one, and she's not that far off the mark.
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* {{Samurai}}: Akira compares her father to one, and she's not that far off the mark.
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** After the expansion, [[spoiler: Hanako bouncing back from failing her exams to being able to graduate the next year.]]
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** After the expansion, [[spoiler: Hanako bouncing back from failing her exams to being able to graduate on the next year.attempt.]]
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*TakeThat: In his email correspondence with Hanako, Hiroyuki had quite a few jabs at Jigoro (The man had sent copies of his autobiography to Yamaku's library).
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* CultureClash: Ultimately, this is the root cause for much of the conflict within the Satou family.
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* LameExcuse: Hanako got Lilly to give her anticonception pills under the excuse of menstruation pains. She admits the excuse was blatantly transparent and is thankful to Lilly for being a good sport and playing along without asking any awkward questions.
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*KickedUpstairs: Happened to Hiroyuki [[spoiler: after his heart attack meant that it would literally kill him if he remained at his current position. Lily noted that after the reassignment and his return to Japan, her father "aged at least a decade".]]
* LameExcuse: Hanako got Lilly to give heranticonception anti-conception pills under the excuse of menstruation pains. She admits the excuse was blatantly transparent and is thankful to Lilly for being a good sport and playing along without asking any awkward questions.
* LameExcuse: Hanako got Lilly to give her
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* BrutalHonesty: Dialled UpToEleven whenever Akira interacts with her father.
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* BrutalHonesty: Dialled UpToEleven whenever Akira interacts with her father. Also counts as CallingTheOldManOut.
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** In her diary, Hanako also noted that she was on birth control pills. [[spoiler: During their first sex session in Scotland, Hisao didn't have a condom on...]]
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* NoodleIncident: Near the end of the story, Hisao asks Lilly, Shizune and Misha to give his parents a tour of the school and keep them busy while he searches for Hanako. Lilly and Shizune take the opportunity to pry several embarrassing childhood stories out of Hisao's mom and Misha taunts Hisao about it over the phone later. Since that part is told from Hanako's perspective, she doesn't hear what exactly Misha found out.
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* NoodleIncident: Near the end of the story, story (pre-expansion), Hisao asks Lilly, Shizune and Misha to give his parents a tour of the school and keep them busy while he searches for Hanako. Lilly and Shizune take the opportunity to pry several embarrassing childhood stories out of Hisao's mom and Misha taunts Hisao about it over the phone later. Since that part is told from Hanako's perspective, she doesn't hear what exactly Misha found out.
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** Who could forget the final words of the story? It's the very sentence most associated with Hanako after the release of the full game.
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** Who could forget the final words of the story? story (pre-expansion)? It's the very sentence most associated with Hanako after the release of the full game.
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* SittingOnTheRoof: Hanako goes here near the end of the story to avoid everyone else.
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* SittingOnTheRoof: Hanako goes here near the end of the story (pre-expansion) to avoid everyone else.
**In the expansion, [[spoiler: it turns out that even the third option is not needed, as her parents decide to return to Japan]].
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* TraumaCongaLine: Hanako, Hisao and Lilly each go through one of these in the second half of the story.
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* TraumaCongaLine: Hanako, Hisao and Lilly each go through one of these in the second half of the story.story(pre-expansion).
**In the expansion, Hanako goes through this as [[spoiler: she suffers a major panic attack, fails her exams and had to remain behind in Yamaku alone]].
**In the expansion, Hanako goes through this as [[spoiler: she suffers a major panic attack, fails her exams and had to remain behind in Yamaku alone]].
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* TheUnfavorite: [[spoiler: Akira has felt she was this in the eyes of her parents for a very long time and eventually has to admit to herself that her resistence towards mending the rifts in the family partially stems from the fear that doing so will just mean she'll go back to that role.]]
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* TheUnfavorite: [[spoiler: Akira has felt she was this in the eyes of her parents for a very long time and eventually has to admit to herself that her resistence resistance towards mending the rifts in the family partially stems from the fear that doing so will just mean she'll go back to that role.]]
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* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler:When Hisao gets into an accident in front of Hanako, she so paralyzed by fear she can't even call for help. Her guilt about this sends her into a severe relapse and her actions drag Hisao and Lilly into a heroic BSOD of their own.]]
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* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler:When Hisao gets into an accident in front of Hanako, she was so paralyzed by fear she can't even call for help. Her guilt about this sends her into a severe relapse and her actions drag Hisao and Lilly into a heroic BSOD of their own.]]]]
**In the expansion, [[spoiler: her cellphone going off in the lecture theatre triggers a major panic attack]].
**In the expansion, [[spoiler: her cellphone going off in the lecture theatre triggers a major panic attack]].
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* HotLibrarian: Played with. [[spoiler: While Hanako is not a conventional beauty, you don't get hotter than ''having sex in a school library with a librarian''.]]
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* HotLibrarian: Played with. [[spoiler: While Hanako is not a conventional beauty, you don't get hotter than ''having sex in a school library with a librarian''. ]]
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Hanako's, Hisao's and Lilly's 'little crippled family' gets violently shattered by events in the second half of the story. But they eventually come out of it much closer than before and it's completely due to each of them making a sincere effort to fix the situation.
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Hanako's, Hisao's and Lilly's 'little crippled family' gets violently shattered by events in the second half of the story. story (before the expansion). But they eventually come out of it much closer than before and it's completely due to each of them making a sincere effort to fix the situation.situation.
**After the expansion, [[spoiler: Hanako bouncing back from failing her exams to being able to graduate the next year.]]
**After the expansion, [[spoiler: Hanako bouncing back from failing her exams to being able to graduate the next year.]]
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*HotLibrarian: Played with. [[spoiler: While Hanako is not a conventional beauty, you don't get hotter than ''having sex in a school library with a librarian''. ]]
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*UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: A ringing cellphone in a lecture hall [[spoiler: causes Hanako to have a massive panic attack. It also helped to derail her graduation plans, as the panic attack severely affected her performance at the exams.]]
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*{{Irony}}
** The Satous run a medical company [[spoiler: and the patriach has a heart attack]].
**A more dramatic one if you've played Lily's route. [[spoiler: If she dates Hisao, she demands quite a bit of honesty from him]]. In the fic, it is very clear that she has not been very honest with family members, and her parents are quite lacking in that department when interacting with her.
** The Satous run a medical company [[spoiler: and the patriach has a heart attack]].
**A more dramatic one if you've played Lily's route. [[spoiler: If she dates Hisao, she demands quite a bit of honesty from him]]. In the fic, it is very clear that she has not been very honest with family members, and her parents are quite lacking in that department when interacting with her.
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*{{Samurai}}: Akira compares her father to one, and she's not that far off the mark.
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**FridgeBrilliance [[spoiler: when you consider Akira's personality as something a deeply traditional Japanese father would disapprove of in a daughter, much less the eldest one who might become his heiress.]]
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* BrutalHonesty: Dialled UpToEleven whenever Akira interacts with her father.
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*ChekhovsSkill: Hanako's first aid class proved to be useful in Scotland.
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* HalfBreedDiscrimination: Akira reveals that she was the only child with of mixed race at her school and got picked on as a result. [[spoiler: Fear of this persisting was the deciding factor in a LOT of decisions Lilly's parents made.]]
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* HalfBreedDiscrimination: Akira reveals that she was the only child with of mixed race at her school and got picked on as a result. [[spoiler: Fear of this persisting was the deciding factor in a LOT of decisions Lilly's parents made.]]
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[[spoiler: HappilyAdopted: Hanako, eventually, though it takes her some time to take the step.]]
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[[spoiler: HappilyAdopted: Hanako, eventually, though it takes her some time to take the step.]]
* HalfBreedDiscrimination: Akira reveals that she was the only child with of mixed race at her school and got picked on as a result. [[spoiler: Fear of this persisting was the deciding factor in a LOT of decisions Lilly's parents made.]]
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** In the expansion, she poses another one to [[spoiler: Lilly's parents]]: 'Do you love Miss Ikezawa?'