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The story is set approximately seven years after the end of HPMOR, and Harry has already revolutionized the wizarding world. Despite this, not all is well. The Tower School of Doubt is opposed in its efforts to abolish death by a reactionary coalition of the "Honourable", lead by Draco Malfoy. Hermione Granger and those she has returned from Dementation continue to raise havoc in their quest to destroy Dementors, no matter how the wizarding governments of the world feel about it. And at the center remains Harry, still bound by an Unbreakable Vow, trying to unite the world and reach the stars.
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The story is set approximately seven years after the end of HPMOR, and Harry has already revolutionized the wizarding world. Despite this, not all is well. The Tower School of Doubt is opposed in its efforts to abolish death by a reactionary coalition of the "Honourable", lead led by Draco Malfoy. Hermione Granger and those she has returned Returned from Dementation continue to raise havoc in their quest to destroy Dementors, no matter how the wizarding governments of the world feel about it. And at the center remains Harry, still bound by an Unbreakable Vow, trying to unite the world and reach the stars.
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* AffablyEvil: [[spoiler: Meldh is rather friendly, even as he rewrites people's wills to serve him and destroys all they hold dear.]]
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* AffablyEvil: [[spoiler: Meldh is rather friendly, even as he rewrites people's wills to serve him and destroys all they hold dear.]]
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* AnachronicOrder:
* AndTheAdventureContinues: [[spoiler: After defeating the Three, Harry departs Earth in the now spacebound Tower, to travel to Sagittarius A* and seek the fate of Dumbledore and Atlantis. ]]
* AntiHero: [[spoiler: With age, Harry has become much more willing to use questionable tactics, such as manipulating the entire world's loyalties to ultimately end united under him. This is a part of why he decides to leave Earth in the end.]]
* AndTheAdventureContinues: [[spoiler: After defeating the Three, Harry departs Earth in the now spacebound Tower, to travel to Sagittarius A* and seek the fate of Dumbledore and Atlantis. ]]
* AntiHero: [[spoiler: With age, Harry has become much more willing to use questionable tactics, such as manipulating the entire world's loyalties to ultimately end united under him. This is a part of why he decides to leave Earth in the end.]]
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* AndTheAdventureContinues: [[spoiler: After defeating the Three, Harry departs Earth in the now spacebound Tower, to travel to Sagittarius A* and seek the fate of Dumbledore and Atlantis.
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* BackFromTheDead: Hermione, twice. [[spoiler: And at the end, Lucius Malfoy, bought back from death with the sacrifice of an entire star.]]
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** [[spoiler:At the end, Lucius Malfoy,bought brought back from death with the sacrifice of an entire star.]]
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** [[spoiler: The grand army of the Three, consisting of many Terresques, Basilisks, freed Dark Wizards, Unseelie, and ''hundreds of thousands of brainwashed Muggles''.]]
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** [[spoiler: The grand army of the Three, consisting of many Terresques, Terrasques, Basilisks, freed Dark Wizards, Unseelie, and ''hundreds of thousands of brainwashed Muggles''.]]
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* BagOfHolding: Exploitation of these effect are granted an entire Tower research department, the Extension Establishment.
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* BagOfHolding: Exploitation of these effect effects are granted an entire Tower research department, the Extension Establishment.
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** The uncontrollable compulsion to speak excess statements of truth, caused by an overdose of Veritaserum, is termed the "Uncontrollable Utterance Ailment" by magical medicine. Harry prefers to call it [[Literature/LifeTheUniverseAndEverything Prak]] syndrome.
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** Grindelwald was said to have possessed Satomi's Dogs, [[Franchise/DragonBall seven orange crystal balls, spangled with glowing red stars]]. (Additionally, the voice actor of Zeno, the absolute ruler of the **Dragon Ball** multiverse, is [[Creator/SatomiKoorogi Satomi Koorogi]].)
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** Grindelwald was said to have possessed Satomi's Dogs, [[Franchise/DragonBall seven orange crystal balls, spangled with glowing red stars]]. (Additionally, the voice actor of Zeno, the absolute ruler of the **Dragon Ball** ''Dragon Ball'' multiverse, is [[Creator/SatomiKoorogi Satomi Koorogi]].)
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* ShoutOut: While there are epigraphs set at the beginning and end of each chapter (ranging from plays to poems to texts), there are also several less direct references:
** Grindelwald was said to have possessed Satomi's Dogs, [[Franchise/DragonBall seven orange crystal balls, spangled with glowing red stars]]. (Additionally, the voice actor of Zeno, the absolute ruler of the **Dragon Ball** multiverse, is [[Creator/SatomiKoorogi Satomi Koorogi]].)
** Grindelwald was said to have possessed Satomi's Dogs, [[Franchise/DragonBall seven orange crystal balls, spangled with glowing red stars]]. (Additionally, the voice actor of Zeno, the absolute ruler of the **Dragon Ball** multiverse, is [[Creator/SatomiKoorogi Satomi Koorogi]].)
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* AlliterativeThemeNaming: Harry seems to be going for this with the names of the Tower's departments. Of which there happen to be twenty-six.
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* AlphabeticalThemeNaming: Harry seems to be going for this with the names of the Tower's departments. Of which there happen to be twenty-six.
* AlphabeticalThemeNaming: Harry seems to be going for this with the names of the Tower's departments. Of which there happen to be twenty-six.
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* AlliterativeThemeNaming: Harry seems to be going for this with the names of the Tower's departments. Of which there happen to be twenty-six.
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* NoodleIncident: The Salamander Incident. Whatever it is, it instantly convinces Hig that Harry could not possibly be Voldemort in any way, even though Harry is in fact partially Voldemort. It is later implied to have had something to do with using salamanders as a living shield against the killing curse, and that Moody and Bones thought the entire incident was cute.
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* NoodleIncident: The Salamander Incident. Whatever it is, it instantly convinces Hig that Harry could not possibly be Voldemort in any way, even though Harry is in fact partially Voldemort. It is later implied to have had something to do with using a swarm of salamanders as a living shield against the killing curse, and that Moody and Bones thought the entire incident was cute.
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* NoodleIncident: The Salamander Incident. Whatever it is, it instantly convinces Hig that Harry could not possibly be Voldemort in any way, even though Harry is in fact partially Voldemort.
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* NoodleIncident: The Salamander Incident. Whatever it is, it instantly convinces Hig that Harry could not possibly be Voldemort in any way, even though Harry is in fact partially Voldemort. It is later implied to have had something to do with using salamanders as a living shield against the killing curse, and that Moody and Bones thought the entire incident was cute.
