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* DisproportionateRetribution: Mayumi throwing a cup at him made the Vulture livid.
--> '''Vulture''': You worm... '''I'll BITE YOUR FACE OFF AND EAT YOUR CORPSE FOR THAT!'''
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* RantInducingSlight: Mayumi throwing a cup at him made the Vulture livid.
--> '''Vulture''': You worm... '''I'll BITE YOUR FACE OFF AND EAT YOUR CORPSE FOR THAT!'''

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* EveryoneHasStandards: Anyone who meets the Vulture is greatly disturbed by his IAmAHumanitarian tendencies.

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Anyone who meets the Vulture is greatly disturbed by his IAmAHumanitarian tendencies.tendencies.
** Marie Vincennes may not like Asuka, [[spoiler:but even she admits Asuka didn't deserve to be MindRape.]]
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* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted. After [[spoiler:Asuka is shot]], Misato has her taken off the active roster and prepared to see a therapist given her [[spoiler:Possession by Bardiel]] is what resulted in the accident.
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* SuperhumanTransfusion: [[spoiler: After Asuka is shot, she is in need of a transfusion to survive. But her bloodtype is O, and the only one around with that bloodtype is Spider-Man, who is nervous about this occurring.]]
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* DoubleStandard: [[spoiler:Bardiel infected Asuka]] starts spouting this line of thinking, yet is hypocritical about it when it's pointed out, especially by Spider-Man.
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* TookALevelInJerkass: [[spoiler:After being possessed by Bardiel]], Asuka's snippy personality gets to an insanely grating level, that even strangers can't put up with her anymore. [[spoiler:This actually bites her in the ass because her friends are noticing and connecting the dots.]]
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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: The CentralTheme of the third arc seems to be that while the characters' past can justify their present actions somewhat, they need to act more mature. An example is Maria confronting [[spoiler:Bardiel possessed]] Asuka, or Maya deciding to forgive Ritsuko for her actions.
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* AntiheroSubstitute: [[spoiler:She-Venom touts herself as one to Spider-Man, but Shinji thinks she could go about it without the cruelty she displays.]]

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* AdaptationalNameChange: Minor spelling change. Martin Li is instead Martin ''Lee''.



** [[spoiler: Given the similar abilities, Bardiel is Venom...With Touji as the host.]]

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** [[spoiler: Given the similar abilities, Bardiel is Venom...With Touji as the host.]] [[spoiler: And Asuka becomes She-Venom.]]



** Kotei may be a punk to Shinji, but that doesn't mean he knows how to be a nice guy.

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** Kotei may be a punk to Shinji, but that doesn't mean he knows how to be does get a nice guy.few PetTheDog moments notably when he helps Mayumi.



** Shinji has organic webbing as in ''Film/SpiderManTrilogy''. Asuka builds a set of artificial webshooters like the comic versions that Shinji uses at one point.



** Kenichiro Yashida references how his sister Mariko left Japan with [[ComicBook/{{Wolverine}} a Canadian..]]

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** Kenichiro Yashida references how his sister Mariko left Japan with [[ComicBook/{{Wolverine}} a Canadian..]] Becomes {{Foreshadowing}} when Logan shows up in chapter 33.



** Chapter 33 is titled ''Sins Past.''



* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Mariko Yashida is Akihiko/Daken's mother here.



* RoguesGalleryTransplant: In this universe, the Yashida family from ''{{ComicBook/Wolverine}}'' are more closely associated with battling a now Japanese Spider-Man.

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* RoguesGalleryTransplant: In this universe, the Yashida family from ''{{ComicBook/Wolverine}}'' are more closely associated with battling a now Japanese Spider-Man. However Logan does show up to settle his old score with them.


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* WholeEpisodeFlashback: Chapter 33 is set after the devastation of Kokoro but before Shinji leaves for Tokyo-3, and wraps up the fate of Kenichiro Yashida/Silver Samurai.
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* AllForNothing: [[spoiler:Chapter 31 starts with Gendo in a cell, and realizes that Yui has played him for a fool, and all he had left was Shinji, whom he absolutely destroyed his relationship with.]]

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* BitchInSheepsClothing:
** {{Downplayed}} with Tsuyoshi Kotei, the [[TheBully Flash Thompson]] {{Expy}}. To most people he's a widely popular student, to Shinji he's a rival and bully.
** [[spoiler:Yui Ikari plays the trope much better, in that she is AffablyEvil to her son, but Shinji gets such horrible headaches that he eventually realizes its his Spider-Sense ''screaming'' at him that he's in danger.]]

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BitchInSheepsClothing: {{Downplayed}} with Tsuyoshi Kotei, the [[TheBully Flash Thompson]] {{Expy}}. To most people he's a widely popular student, to Shinji he's a rival and bully.
** [[spoiler:Yui Ikari plays the trope much better, in that she is AffablyEvil to her son, but Shinji gets such horrible headaches that he eventually realizes its his Spider-Sense ''screaming'' at him that he's in danger.]]
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* {{Deconstruction}}: Of [[spoiler: Yui Ikari. Most fanfics tend to portray her as a sort of BigGood, whereas this work argues that her hands aren't clean either. While initially seeming to be well-meaning and kind, Shinji swiftly discovers that his mother is a manipulative, abusive {{Narcissist}} obsessed with using Evangelion as a monument to her legacy. She's also envious of Shinji's powers and achievements, attempting a GrandTheftMe to replace him.]]



* DisappointedByTheMotive: Shinji is livid with the Rhino who did the terrible things because he wanted to be a "big shot."

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* DisappointedByTheMotive: Shinji is livid with the Rhino who did the terrible things because he wanted to be a "big shot."" [[spoiler: He's just as disgusted when he discovers the same is also Yui's motive.]]

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* BitchInSheepsClothing: {{Downplayed}} with Tsuyoshi Kotei, the [[TheBully Flash Thompson]] {{Expy}}. To most people he's a widely popular student, to Shinji he's a rival and bully.

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* BitchInSheepsClothing: BitchInSheepsClothing:
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{{Downplayed}} with Tsuyoshi Kotei, the [[TheBully Flash Thompson]] {{Expy}}. To most people he's a widely popular student, to Shinji he's a rival and bully.bully.
** [[spoiler:Yui Ikari plays the trope much better, in that she is AffablyEvil to her son, but Shinji gets such horrible headaches that he eventually realizes its his Spider-Sense ''screaming'' at him that he's in danger.]]
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* NotAfraidOfYouAnymore: [[spoiler:After his fight with Venom/Bardiel, Shinji is disciplined by his father, who notes that it's the first time he's actually acknowledged him as his son, and figures out that he's just as insecure as he is since he's made no effort to be with Shinji in the past. So he leaves and tells his father he's not scared of him anymore.]]

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* NervesOfSteel: [[spoiler:After a moment of surprise, Shinji activates Unit 01's SelfDestructMechanism and unblinkingly threatens Gendo with a TakingYouWithMe against Bardiel unless he deactivates the Dummy Plug.]]



* NervesOfSteel: [[spoiler:After a moment of surprise, Shinji activates Unit 01's SelfDestructMechanism and unblinkingly threatens Gendo with a TakingYouWithMe against Bardiel unless he deactivates the Dummy Plug.]]
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* NervesOfSteel: [[spoiler:After a moment of surprise, Shinji activates Unit 01's SelfDestructMechanism and unblinkingly threatens Gendo with a TakingYouWithMe against Bardiel unless he deactivates the Dummy Plug.]]
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* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler:Shinji activates the SelfDestructMechanism of Unit 01 to [[Blackmail]] Gendo with this if he didn't deactivate the Dummy Plug during the Bardiel fight.]]

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* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler:Shinji activates the SelfDestructMechanism of Unit 01 to [[Blackmail]] {{Blackmail}} Gendo with this if he didn't deactivate the Dummy Plug during the Bardiel fight.]]
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* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler:Shinji activates the SelfDestructMechanism of Unit 01 to [[Blackmail]] Gendo with this if he didn't deactivate the Dummy Plug during the Bardiel fight.]]
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** [[spoiler: Given the similar abilities, Bardiel is Venom.]]

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** [[spoiler: Given the similar abilities, Bardiel is Venom.Venom...With Touji as the host.]]
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** [[spoiler:Maria Vincennes is implied to be Black Cat.]]
** [[spoiler: Given the similar abilities, Bardiel is Venom.]]
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Chapter 28 has the American Branch of NERV wiped out, including Mari Makinami and the Richards family]]. Though it's implied they might be coming back.

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** The future Shinji quotes [[ComicBook/Watchmen Rorschach's]] declaration to ''never compromise. Even in the face of Armageddon.''


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* BadFuture: Leliel shows Shinji a future where an older Spider-Man is shot down in the Kokoro graveyard by Misato and the police. According to the Angel, Misato found out that Shinji was Spider-Man at the worst possible time and never forgave him for it. It's indicated she sold out to [[MegaCorp Alchemex]] for revenge.



** The scene wher Spider-Man battles Doctor Octopus on a train is taken straight from ''Film/SpiderMan2''

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** Yamashiro's deceased wife was named Mei
** The alternate futures Leliel shows Shinji are based on the future seen in ''Amazing Spider Man #500'' and the ''ComicBook/MarvelComics2'' setting with Shinji's daughter as Spider-Girl.
** The future Shinji quotes [[ComicBook/Watchmen Rorschach's]] declaration to ''never compromise. Even in the face of Armageddon.''

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** Professor Inumaru takes inspiration from both Curt Connors/The Lizard and Miles Warren/The Jackel.



** The scene wher Spider-Man battles Doctor Octopus on a train is taken straight from '''Film/SpiderMan2''
** Kenichiro Yashida references how his sister Mariko left Japan with [[ComicBook/Wolverine a Canadian..]]

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** Kenichiro Yashida references how his sister Mariko left Japan with [[ComicBook/Wolverine [[ComicBook/{{Wolverine}} a Canadian..]]

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* TheCameo: J. Jonah Jameson makes a few unnamed appearance calling Spider-Man a menace.



* MythologyGag: Shinji isn't the first Spider [[spoiler:[[SpiderManJapan to pilot mecha]]]]

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* MythologyGag: MythologyGag:
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Shinji isn't the first Spider [[spoiler:[[SpiderManJapan to pilot mecha]]]]mecha]]]]
** The scene wher Spider-Man battles Doctor Octopus on a train is taken straight from '''Film/SpiderMan2''
** Kenichiro Yashida references how his sister Mariko left Japan with [[ComicBook/Wolverine a Canadian..]]

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* GenreSavvy: Doctor Octopus points out that Professor Inumaru taking the Spider to the school he teaches at was a negligible decision at best. So for whatever reason it was there, it was not there for ''professional'' reasons.



* RealityEnsues: Doctor Octopus points out that Professor Inumaru taking the Spider to the school he teaches at was a negligible decision at best. So for whatever reason it was there, it was not there for ''professional'' reasons.

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!!Spoilers for the Kokoro Arc (Chapter 1-13) will be unmarked. YouHaveBeenWarned!

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!!Tropes:

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!!Spoilers for the Kokoro Arc (Chapter 1-13) will be unmarked. YouHaveBeenWarned!
!!Shinji Ikari: The Amazing Spider-Man provides examples of:



** [[spoiler:Tachiageru Yamagishi talks about Mayumi like she's a thing than a person. He even allowed his daughter to die. Makes sense given he's the [[AdaptationalNameChange Holy Goblin]]]].

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** [[spoiler:Tachiageru Tachiageru Yamagishi talks about Mayumi like she's a thing than a person. He even allowed his daughter to die. Makes sense given he's the [[AdaptationalNameChange Holy Goblin]]]].Goblin]].



* AdaptationalOriginConnection: The origins of Spidey's powers [[MythologyGag once again]] is shared with several of his foes here [[spoiler:they are the result of HERZ & SEELE experimenting with Angel DNA]]

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* AdaptationalOriginConnection: The origins of Spidey's powers [[MythologyGag once again]] is shared with several of his foes here [[spoiler:they they are the result of HERZ & SEELE experimenting with Angel DNA]]DNA.



* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler:Professor Inumaru]] lost his leg during Second Impact.

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* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler:Professor Inumaru]] Professor Inumaru lost his leg during Second Impact.



* AxCrazy: Several of Spider-Man's enemies: Like Vulture, Doctor Octopus, and [[spoiler:Holy Goblin]].

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* AxCrazy: Several of Spider-Man's enemies: Like Vulture, Doctor Octopus, and [[spoiler:Holy Goblin]].Holy Goblin.



** Yashida doesn't like people snooping around in his personal things. [[spoiler:He killed a nosy guard who saw a picture of him and his brother when they were kids.]]

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** Yashida doesn't like people snooping around in his personal things. [[spoiler:He He killed a nosy guard who saw a picture of him and his brother when they were kids.]]



** Shinji calls out his teacher for how distant he is. The man listens to him and truly bonds with him. [[spoiler:Needless to say the man becomes an Uncle Ben {{Expy}} and dies]].

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** Shinji calls out his teacher for how distant he is. The man listens to him and truly bonds with him. [[spoiler:Needless Needless to say the man becomes an Uncle Ben {{Expy}} and dies]].dies.



** Shinji becomes Spider-Man, and [[spoiler:Naoko Akagi becomes Doctor Octopus]].

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** Shinji becomes Spider-Man, and [[spoiler:Naoko spoiler:Naoko Akagi becomes Doctor Octopus]].Octopus.



* TheConspiracy: When Shinji finds out Professor Inumaru was working with someone on the spider, he asks who they are. [[spoiler: It's HERZ and SEELE.]]

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* TheConspiracy: When Shinji finds out Professor Inumaru was working with someone on the spider, he asks who they are. [[spoiler: It's HERZ and SEELE.]]



* DesignerBaby: Tachiageru Yamagishi reveals to Shinji that he wanted a child, but found no woman he could really connect with, so he had Mayumi designed with women "He never bothered knowing the name of." Hearing this said so casually disturbs both Shinji and Mayumi. [[spoiler:Turns out the mother is an Angel.]]
* DiegeticSoundtrackUsage: During Chapter 13' [[TheStinger stinger]] Shinji is listening to his SDAT to pass time and decides to listen to Track 1. It happens to be Cruel Angel's Thesis, Evangelion's OP [[spoiler:Considering he is listening to it while on the train to Tokyo-3, this counts as {{Foreshadowing}}]]

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* DesignerBaby: Tachiageru Yamagishi reveals to Shinji that he wanted a child, but found no woman he could really connect with, so he had Mayumi designed with women "He never bothered knowing the name of." Hearing this said so casually disturbs both Shinji and Mayumi. [[spoiler:Turns Turns out the mother is an Angel.]]
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* DiegeticSoundtrackUsage: During Chapter 13' [[TheStinger stinger]] Shinji is listening to his SDAT to pass time and decides to listen to Track 1. It happens to be Cruel Angel's Thesis, Evangelion's OP [[spoiler:Considering Considering he is listening to it while on the train to Tokyo-3, this counts as {{Foreshadowing}}]]{{Foreshadowing}}.



* DoomedHometown: [[spoiler:Shinji's home city of Kokoro thanks to the Holy Goblin.]] Many of the refugees end up in Tokyo-3 [[spoiler:[[FromBadToWorse right on time for the Angels to start attacking]]]]
* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Yashida loves his brother dearly. [[spoiler:When he learns he was murdered, he becomes the Silver Samurai.]]

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* DoomedHometown: [[spoiler:Shinji's Shinji's home city of Kokoro thanks to the Holy Goblin.]] Goblin. Many of the refugees end up in Tokyo-3 [[spoiler:[[FromBadToWorse right on time for the Angels to start attacking]]]]
* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Yashida loves his brother dearly. [[spoiler:When When he learns he was murdered, he becomes the Silver Samurai.]]



** [[spoiler:Yamagishi]] does not hide his disdain for [[AssimilationPlot Instrumentality]].
---> [[spoiler:'''Yamagishi''']]: The old men disgust me...They think they have God's creatures under control. That the scenario they constructed will lead them to Heaven. What foolish piece of work man is...They do not understand.

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** [[spoiler:Yamagishi]] Yamagishi does not hide his disdain for [[AssimilationPlot Instrumentality]].
---> [[spoiler:'''Yamagishi''']]: '''Yamagishi''': The old men disgust me...They think they have God's creatures under control. That the scenario they constructed will lead them to Heaven. What foolish piece of work man is...They do not understand.



---> [[spoiler:'''Yamagishi''']]: Ruined? I gave them '''purpose'''! [[spoiler:You were but a weak willed child before the spider made you who you are! My daughter wouldn't even exist without me!]] Amid the sands of time and fate all people's lives are without meaning! SEELE understands that mankind is at an evolutionary dead end. It is the reason behind their scenario! But the old men made a crucial mistake...They believe Instrumentality will lead to the ultimate salvation of mankind...But they were '''WRONG'''! Mankind disrupted the cycle of life by stabbing Adam with the Lance of Longinus. The end of humanity is coming, and the Angels will see to it's destruction. SEELE dare plan to encase themselves in immortal bodies so they could control the destiny of the world through instrumentality...But they will fall all the same!

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---> [[spoiler:'''Yamagishi''']]: '''Yamagishi''': Ruined? I gave them '''purpose'''! [[spoiler:You were but a weak willed child before the spider made you who you are! My daughter wouldn't even exist without me!]] Amid the sands of time and fate all people's lives are without meaning! SEELE understands that mankind is at an evolutionary dead end. It is the reason behind their scenario! But the old men made a crucial mistake...They believe Instrumentality will lead to the ultimate salvation of mankind...But they were '''WRONG'''! Mankind disrupted the cycle of life by stabbing Adam with the Lance of Longinus. The end of humanity is coming, and the Angels will see to it's destruction. SEELE dare plan to encase themselves in immortal bodies so they could control the destiny of the world through instrumentality...But they will fall all the same!



* {{Foil}}: [[spoiler:Yamagishi is Gendo Ikari, but '''WAY''' worse. For example, while Gendo may be distant, it's clear that he cares for Shinji (In his own, messed up way). Yamagishi didn't give a damn about his daughter.]]

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* {{Foil}}: [[spoiler:Yamagishi Yamagishi is Gendo Ikari, but '''WAY''' worse. For example, while Gendo may be distant, it's clear that he cares for Shinji (In his own, messed up way). Yamagishi didn't give a damn about his daughter.]]



* FusionFic: In this story Shinji becomes Spider-Man, a few OC's become his rogues, and [[spoiler:Naoko Akagi becomes Doctor Octopus]].

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* FusionFic: In this story Shinji becomes Spider-Man, a few OC's become his rogues, and [[spoiler:Naoko Naoko Akagi becomes Doctor Octopus]].Octopus.



* HalfHumanHybrid: [[spoiler:Mayumi is a human/angel hybrid not unlike Rei and Kaworu. However, she's biologically unstable]].
* HeKnowsTooMuch: The reason why TheConspiracy [[spoiler:wants to get rid of Naoko Akagi]].

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* HalfHumanHybrid: [[spoiler:Mayumi Mayumi is a human/angel hybrid not unlike Rei and Kaworu. However, she's biologically unstable]].
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* HeKnowsTooMuch: The reason why TheConspiracy [[spoiler:wants wants to get rid of Naoko Akagi]].Akagi.



* ILetGwenStacyDie: [[spoiler:This naturally comes up given it has to do with Spider-Man. Sadly, nobody could've predicted Mayumi.]]

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* ILetGwenStacyDie: [[spoiler:This This naturally comes up given it has to do with Spider-Man. Sadly, nobody could've predicted Mayumi.]]



* ItsAllAboutMe: [[spoiler:When Shinji found out Mayumi was meant to spy on him for her father, he gave her the cold shoulder. Kotei confronts him and points out to him that doing this is really selfish.]]

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* ItsAllAboutMe: [[spoiler:When When Shinji found out Mayumi was meant to spy on him for her father, he gave her the cold shoulder. Kotei confronts him and points out to him that doing this is really selfish.]]



* KarmicDeath: [[spoiler:Yamagishi, as the Holy Goblin, gets killed by his own statue of David and Goliath, by Shinji and his daughter. [[BackFromTheDead But then again, this is a Goblin we're talking about.]]]]

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* KarmicDeath: [[spoiler:Yamagishi, Yamagishi, as the Holy Goblin, gets killed by his own statue of David and Goliath, by Shinji and his daughter. [[BackFromTheDead But then again, this is a Goblin we're talking about.]]]]]]



* NothingIsTheSameAnymore: [[spoiler:Chapter 13 ends with Kokoro so throughly wrecked that people just outright abandon it. Kotei is missing, Mayumi is dead, every OC is a supervillain who will die or go insane at some point...Oh, and Shinji gets a letter from his father.]]
--> [[spoiler:'''Gendo Ikari''': '''COME.''']]

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* NothingIsTheSameAnymore: [[spoiler:Chapter Chapter 13 ends with Kokoro so throughly wrecked that people just outright abandon it. Kotei is missing, Mayumi is dead, every OC is a supervillain who will die or go insane at some point...Oh, and Shinji gets a letter from his father.]]
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--> [[spoiler:'''Gendo '''Gendo Ikari''': '''COME.''']]'''



* ParentsAsPeople: Yamashiro did what he thought was best for Shinji. But since he has trouble expressing emotion, Shinji grew up thinking he never cared. [[spoiler:The two had just gotten to a point where they were finally bonding when the burglar killed him.]]

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* ParentsAsPeople: Yamashiro did what he thought was best for Shinji. But since he has trouble expressing emotion, Shinji grew up thinking he never cared. [[spoiler:The The two had just gotten to a point where they were finally bonding when the burglar killed him.]]



* RageBreakingPoint: [[spoiler:Naoko Akagi]] is publicly humiliated by a crowd who call her "Old Hag" or insult her decision to sleep with her boss. This leads to [[spoiler:the creation of Doctor Octopus.]]

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* RageBreakingPoint: [[spoiler:Naoko Akagi]] Naoko Akagi is publicly humiliated by a crowd who call her "Old Hag" or insult her decision to sleep with her boss. This leads to [[spoiler:the the creation of Doctor Octopus.]]



* RealityEnsues: [[spoiler:Doctor Octopus points out that Professor Inumaru taking the Spider to the school he teaches at was a negligible decision at best.]] So for whatever reason it was there, it was not there for ''professional'' reasons.

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* RealityEnsues: [[spoiler:Doctor Doctor Octopus points out that Professor Inumaru taking the Spider to the school he teaches at was a negligible decision at best.]] best. So for whatever reason it was there, it was not there for ''professional'' reasons.



* SatanicArchetype: [[spoiler:Yamagishi turns himself into "Satan, the Angel of Temptation." In other words, the Holy Goblin.]]

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* SatanicArchetype: [[spoiler:Yamagishi Yamagishi turns himself into "Satan, the Angel of Temptation." In other words, the Holy Goblin.]]



* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Naoko Akagi doesn't commit suicide. She becomes Doctor Octopus.]]
* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Despite the changes to the Eva timeline here Shinji still answers his father's summons to Tokyo-3...[[spoiler:though in this case this is also due to [[DoomedHometown Kokoro's destruction]]]]
* TheStinger: Chapter 13 has one after the Author's Notes [[spoiler:where Shinji is on a crowded train heading to Tokyo-3 ]]

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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Naoko Naoko Akagi doesn't commit suicide. She becomes Doctor Octopus.]]
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Despite the changes to the Eva timeline here Shinji still answers his father's summons to Tokyo-3...[[spoiler:though though in this case this is also due to [[DoomedHometown Kokoro's destruction]]]]
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* TheStinger: Chapter 13 has one after the Author's Notes [[spoiler:where where Shinji is on a crowded train heading to Tokyo-3 ]]Tokyo-3.



* VillainRespect: Doctor Octopus has this for Spider-Man. [[spoiler:[[SecretSecretKeeper It's the only reason she hasn't revealed his true identity.]]]]

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* VillainRespect: Doctor Octopus has this for Spider-Man. [[spoiler:[[SecretSecretKeeper [[SecretSecretKeeper It's the only reason she hasn't revealed his true identity.]]]]]]



* WhamLine: When [[spoiler:Professor Inumaru]] is kidnapped, he's brought face to face with the BigBad of the Kokoro Arc. And reveals his name in bold.
--> '''Professor Inumaru''': [[spoiler:'''Yamagishi.''']]
* WorthyOpponent: Doctor Octopus/[[spoiler:Naoko Akagi]] feels this way about Shinji after he saves the train.

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* WhamLine: When [[spoiler:Professor Inumaru]] Professor Inumaru is kidnapped, he's brought face to face with the BigBad of the Kokoro Arc. And reveals his name in bold.
--> '''Professor Inumaru''': [[spoiler:'''Yamagishi.''']]
'''Yamagishi.'''
* WorthyOpponent: Doctor Octopus/[[spoiler:Naoko Akagi]] Octopus/Naoko Akagi feels this way about Shinji after he saves the train.



-> [[spoiler:♫ Zankoku na tenshi no you ni ♫]]
-> [[spoiler:♫ Shounen yo shinwa ni nare... ♫]]

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-> [[spoiler:♫ Zankoku na tenshi no you ni ♫]]

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* EvilIsPetty: [[spoiler:Gendo Ikari starts dripping into this throughout the story, culminating in Chapter 26, where he bars Shinji from seeing an injured Rei for being "Unstable" after tackling him the previous chapter.]]

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