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* CharacterNarrator: The entirety of Chapter 13, the beginning of Chapter 23, and half of Chapter 25 are told from Matt's perspective.
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* CharacterNarrator: The entirety of Chapter 13, the beginning of Chapter 23, 23 and half of Chapter 25 are told from Matt's perspective.perspective. For examples of ''entire'' chapters, there's Chapters 13 and 26.
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* {{Bowdlerise}}: When Wario and Waluigi's car run into Gourmet Guy in [[Recap/SMG4sMarioBloopersStupidMarioGolf "Stupid Mario Golf"]], they landed into his rear end while he gets a... sensual reaction. This was changed to the car exploding with all three coming out unharmed.
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** When Wario and Waluigi's car run into Gourmet Guy in [[Recap/SMG4sMarioBloopersStupidMarioGolf "Stupid Mario Golf"]], they landed into his rear end while he gets a... sensual reaction. This was changed to the car exploding with all three coming outunharmed.unharmed.
** Matt doesn't squish Bob's face like he does in [[Recap/SMG4sMarioBloopersStupidMarioGolf "Stupid Mario Golf"]], though he does give him a nice beating nonetheless.
** When Wario and Waluigi's car run into Gourmet Guy in [[Recap/SMG4sMarioBloopersStupidMarioGolf "Stupid Mario Golf"]], they landed into his rear end while he gets a... sensual reaction. This was changed to the car exploding with all three coming out
** Matt doesn't squish Bob's face like he does in [[Recap/SMG4sMarioBloopersStupidMarioGolf "Stupid Mario Golf"]], though he does give him a nice beating nonetheless.
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* CharacterNarrator: The entirety of Chapter 13 and the beginning of Chapter 23 are told from Matt's perspective.
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* CharacterNarrator: The entirety of Chapter 13 and 13, the beginning of Chapter 23 23, and half of Chapter 25 are told from Matt's perspective.
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** Peach and Daisy are not KFC like they were in [[Recap/SMG4sMarioBloopersStupidMarioGolf "Stupid Mario Golf"]]. The cake they were eating isn't so lucky, however.
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** Peach and Daisy are not turned into KFC like they were in [[Recap/SMG4sMarioBloopersStupidMarioGolf "Stupid Mario Golf"]]. The cake they were eating isn't so lucky, however.
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** Peach and Daisy are not KFC like they were in [[Recap/SMG4sMarioBloopersStupidMarioGolf "Stupid Mario Golf"]]. The cake they were eating isn't so lucky, however.
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** Peach and Daisy are not turned into KFC like they were in [[Recap/SMG4sMarioBloopersStupidMarioGolf "Stupid Mario Golf"]]. The cake they were eating isn't so lucky, however.
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** While Peach and Daisy are still turned into KFC like they were in [[Recap/SMG4sMarioBloopersStupidMarioGolf "Stupid Mario Golf"]], they are no longer eaten by Saiko.
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** While Peach and Daisy are still turned into not KFC like they were in [[Recap/SMG4sMarioBloopersStupidMarioGolf "Stupid Mario Golf"]], Golf"]]. The cake they are no longer eaten by Saiko.were eating isn't so lucky, however.
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** In Chapter 24, Saiko was shown eating KFC in a bikini in a scene based on [[Recap/SMG4sMarioBloopersStupidMarioGolf "Stupid Mario Golf"]]. In the original, she was in her regular attire and wasn't wearing a bikini when she was shown eating it... and, in fact, wasn't shown eating it at all, just intending to.
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** In Chapter 24, Saiko was shown eating KFC in a bikini while she's eating KFC after her brief appearance in a scene based on [[Recap/SMG4sMarioBloopersStupidMarioGolf "Stupid Mario Golf"]]. In the original, Golf"]], thanks to a wand she was in her regular attire and wasn't wearing stole from a bikini when she was shown eating it... and, in fact, wasn't shown eating it at all, just intending to.Magikoopa.
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* HotterAndSexier: Melony strips into a bikini for Axol at (his dream of) the fireworks show in Chapter 9. She doesn't do this in anything related to the love confession this fireworks show was meant to foreshadow, nor has [=SMG4=] shown Melony with a bikini at all[[note]]yet[[/note]].
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** Melony strips into a bikini for Axol at (his dream of) the fireworks show in Chapter 9. She doesn't do this in anything related to the love confession this fireworks show was meant to foreshadow, nor has [=SMG4=] shown Melony with a bikini atall[[note]]yet[[/note]].all[[note]]yet[[/note]].
** In Chapter 24, Saiko was shown eating KFC in a bikini in a scene based on [[Recap/SMG4sMarioBloopersStupidMarioGolf "Stupid Mario Golf"]]. In the original, she was in her regular attire and wasn't wearing a bikini when she was shown eating it... and, in fact, wasn't shown eating it at all, just intending to.
** Melony strips into a bikini for Axol at (his dream of) the fireworks show in Chapter 9. She doesn't do this in anything related to the love confession this fireworks show was meant to foreshadow, nor has [=SMG4=] shown Melony with a bikini at
** In Chapter 24, Saiko was shown eating KFC in a bikini in a scene based on [[Recap/SMG4sMarioBloopersStupidMarioGolf "Stupid Mario Golf"]]. In the original, she was in her regular attire and wasn't wearing a bikini when she was shown eating it... and, in fact, wasn't shown eating it at all, just intending to.
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* {{Bowdlerise}}: When Wario and Waluigi's car run into Gourmet Guy in [[Recap/SMG4sMarioBloopersStupidMarioGolf "Stupid Mario Golf"]], they landed into his rear end while he gets a... sensual reaction. This was changed to the car exploding with all three coming out unharmed.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: The Trench that attacks the [=SMG4=] Gang is revealed to be him surviving the events of the ''WesternAnimation/StarWarsTheCloneWars'' episode "[[Recap/StarWarsTheCloneWarsS7E4UnfinishedBusiness Unfinished Business]]".
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: SparedByTheAdaptation:
** The Trench that attacks the [=SMG4=] Gang is revealed to be him surviving the events of the ''WesternAnimation/StarWarsTheCloneWars'' episode "[[Recap/StarWarsTheCloneWarsS7E4UnfinishedBusiness UnfinishedBusiness]]".Business]]".
** While Peach and Daisy are still turned into KFC like they were in [[Recap/SMG4sMarioBloopersStupidMarioGolf "Stupid Mario Golf"]], they are no longer eaten by Saiko.
** The Trench that attacks the [=SMG4=] Gang is revealed to be him surviving the events of the ''WesternAnimation/StarWarsTheCloneWars'' episode "[[Recap/StarWarsTheCloneWarsS7E4UnfinishedBusiness Unfinished
** While Peach and Daisy are still turned into KFC like they were in [[Recap/SMG4sMarioBloopersStupidMarioGolf "Stupid Mario Golf"]], they are no longer eaten by Saiko.
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* VillainsOutShopping: DJ Octavio is seen playing golf in Chapter 23, not bothering anyone or doing anything evil... at least until Axol accidentally hits him.
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* CharacterNarrator: The entirety of Chapter 13 is told from Matt's perspective.
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* CharacterNarrator: The entirety of Chapter 13 is and the beginning of Chapter 23 are told from Matt's perspective.
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* TookALevelInJerkass: After some non-confrontational and even friendly scenes of the character in the author's past works (including this fic's [[Fanfic/MysteriesOfTheUniverse predecessor]]), Senbo Mazushi is back to causing trouble in Chapter 19. This could also fall under RevisitingTheRoots, as the character started out as a troublemaker in ''Fanfic/SaikoRocks''. Subverted in Chapter 22, when it's discovered he's innocent.
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* TookALevelInJerkass: After some non-confrontational and even friendly scenes of the character in the author's past works (including this fic's [[Fanfic/MysteriesOfTheUniverse predecessor]]), Senbo Mazushi is back to causing trouble in Chapter 19. This could also fall under RevisitingTheRoots, as the character started out as a troublemaker in ''Fanfic/SaikoRocks''. Subverted in Chapter 22, when it's later discovered he's innocent.
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* TookALevelInJerkass: After some non-confrontational and even friendly scenes of the character in the author's past works (including this fic's [[Fanfic/MysteriesOfTheUniverse predecessor]]), Senbo Mazushi is back to causing trouble in Chapter 19. This could also fall under RevisitingTheRoots, as the character started out as a troublemaker in ''Fanfic/SaikoRocks''.
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* TookALevelInJerkass: After some non-confrontational and even friendly scenes of the character in the author's past works (including this fic's [[Fanfic/MysteriesOfTheUniverse predecessor]]), Senbo Mazushi is back to causing trouble in Chapter 19. This could also fall under RevisitingTheRoots, as the character started out as a troublemaker in ''Fanfic/SaikoRocks''. Subverted in Chapter 22, when it's discovered he's innocent.
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** Also in Chapter 11 is a reference to the [[Recap/SouthParkS16E3FaithHilling O Long Johnson cat.]].
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** Also in Chapter 11 is a reference to the [[Recap/SouthParkS16E3FaithHilling O Long Johnson cat.]].cat]].
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You can read the story on Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14252414/1/SMG4-Secrets-of-The-Universe here]], or on Website/DeviantArt [[https://www.deviantart.com/cvgwjames/art/SMG4-Secrets-of-The-Universe-chapter-one-970529716 here]].
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You can read the story on Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14252414/1/SMG4-Secrets-of-The-Universe here]], or on Website/DeviantArt [[https://www.deviantart.com/cvgwjames/art/SMG4-Secrets-of-The-Universe-chapter-one-970529716 here]].com/cvgwjames/gallery/90059262/smg4-mysteries-of-the-universe here]]. Note that the latter link leads to a folder that shares the story and its illustrations with those of ''Fanfic/MysteriesOfTheUniverse''.
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* WarArc: One new subplot to the latter half of the Genesis Arc is [=SMG3=] dealing with memes who don't want him as ruler of the Internet Graveyard trying to get rid of him. The subplot truly gets started with Chapter 21, appropriately titled "Gearing Up For War".
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** Like with [[Fanfic/MysteriesOfTheUniverse the fic's predecessor]], [=SMG3=] is given more moments in the Internet Graveyard and with Terrance than in the original [[WebAnimation/Supermarioglitchy4sSuperMario64BloopersGenesisArc Genesis Arc]]. In particular, there's a subplot that deals with the Gravediggers of Chaos, a group of memes seeking to take out [=SMG3=] and overthrow him as ruler of the Internet Graveyard for bringing order.
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** Like with [[Fanfic/MysteriesOfTheUniverse the fic's predecessor]], [=SMG3=] is given more moments in the Internet Graveyard and with Terrance than in the original [[WebAnimation/Supermarioglitchy4sSuperMario64BloopersGenesisArc Genesis Arc]]. In particular, there's a subplot that deals with the Gravediggers of Chaos, a group of memes seeking to take out [=SMG3=] and overthrow him as ruler of for bringing order to the Internet Graveyard for bringing order.as ruler.
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** Like with [[Fanfic/MysteriesOfTheUniverse the fic's predecessor]], [=SMG3=] is given more moments in the Internet Graveyard and with Terrance than in the original [[WebAnimation/Supermarioglitchy4sSuperMario64BloopersGenesisArc Genesis Arc]].
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** Like with [[Fanfic/MysteriesOfTheUniverse the fic's predecessor]], [=SMG3=] is given more moments in the Internet Graveyard and with Terrance than in the original [[WebAnimation/Supermarioglitchy4sSuperMario64BloopersGenesisArc Genesis Arc]]. In particular, there's a subplot that deals with the Gravediggers of Chaos, a group of memes seeking to take out [=SMG3=] and overthrow him as ruler of the Internet Graveyard for bringing order.
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** In Chapter 20, Bob hooks up with a woman named Jenetaline.
