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* TakeThat: In the author's notes of chapter 12, the author recalls how Turles is overall redundant to the series as his role was already filled by Vegeta and Raditz. He then wondered if the reason he is [[AdaptedOut not included]] in ''Webcomic/DragonBallMultiverse'' is because of the evil Kakarot the author is using, only to say the series has more problems than [[Anime/DragonBallGT GT]] and [[Anime/DragonBallSuper Super]] combined.

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* TakeThat: TakeThat:
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In the author's notes of chapter 12, the author recalls how Turles is overall redundant to the series as his role was already filled by Vegeta and Raditz. He then wondered if the reason he is [[AdaptedOut not included]] in ''Webcomic/DragonBallMultiverse'' is because of the evil Kakarot the author is using, only to say the series has more problems than [[Anime/DragonBallGT GT]] and [[Anime/DragonBallSuper Super]] combined.combined.
** The second part of the epilogue has Lord Sadala calling the concept of Saiyans from another universe "cheap" and critizing the use of RuleOfCool at the expense of [[CatharsisFactor meaning]]. While a [[SelfDeprecation form of deprecation]] towards ''Super'' and the Universe 6 Saiyans, is also a critique towards any fan story using similar ideas with the Saiyans (like ''Multiverse'' and some variations of ''AF'')
--> '''Lord Sadala:''' Hmph! A tournament between Saiyans from another universe. Sounds cheap, don't you think? (...) Well, you're not missin' anything, stories like those are [[FandomSpecificPlot a dime in a dozen]]. Every once in a while I hear the folk tales from some of the races we save, and they all have things in common, so much I memorized some of the recurring ideas in all of them. All of them are cool on paper, but void of meaning.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Taura is killed off, and the Tree of Might is destroyed, allowing Cabba to archieve his dream of turning into a member of the Elite Saiyans and fight alongside Frost. [[TheBadGuyWins But Camelo achieve her goal of returning to the Demon Realm]], [[KarmaHoudini doesn't suffer consequences for her actions]], and due to her involvement Sadala and its army is crippled, with Cabba suffering SurvivorGuilt and Caulifla abandoning her home out of shame about her aunt.]]

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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Taura is killed off, and the Tree of Might is destroyed, allowing Cabba to archieve his dream of turning into a member of the Elite Saiyans and fight alongside Frost. [[TheBadGuyWins But Camelo achieve her goal of returning to the Demon Realm]], [[KarmaHoudini doesn't suffer consequences for her actions]], and due to her involvement Sadala and its army is crippled, crippled with at least one thousand individuals dying, with Cabba suffering SurvivorGuilt SurvivorGuilt, Renso being arrested and Caulifla abandoning her home out of shame about her aunt.]]
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* ColorMotiff: The color of the uniforms of the Saiyans have a symbolism. Once a soldier is promoted, they can choose a uniform of color gray, pink or green. The purple underpiece of the uniform is based on the royal coat of arms.

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* ColorMotiff: ColorMotif: The color of the uniforms of the Saiyans have a symbolism. Once a soldier is promoted, they can choose a uniform of color gray, pink or green. The purple underpiece of the uniform is based on the royal coat of arms.
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* ColorMotiff: The color of the uniforms of the Saiyans have a symbolism. Once a soldier is promoted, they can choose a uniform of color gray, pink or green. The purple underpiece of the uniform is based on the royal coat of arms.
** Blue: The color of the common soldiers. They represent the royal family, as soldiers are meant to be an extension of them.
** Gray: The color of members of the Elite. It represents loyalty to the kingdom of Sadala.
** Pink: The color of members of the Elite. It represents loyalty to the people from all races.
** Green: The color of members of the Elite. It represents loyalty to comrades.
** Silver: The color of the royal family, worn by the king.
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[[caption-width-right:250:Cabba and the fruit of the Tree of Might]]

-> "''You're full of optimism, aren't you? But, I'll work really hard to get into the forces! I'll become an Elite Hero, just like Frost! I'll become the youngest Elite, too!"''
->-- '''Cabba'''


[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12797409/1/Sadala-Chronicles-The-Saiyan-and-the-devil-s-fruit "Sadala Chronicles: The Saiyan and the Devil's fruit."]] [[note]] Previously known as ''I'll become an Elite Hero! The young Saiyan and the fruit! [[/note]] is a fanfic published by [=TrueUtopian=] about Cabba, the Saiyan from Universe 6 and his origin on how he became an Elite member of the Sadala Army. Is a [[AlternateUniverseFic alternate universe]] prequel to Anime/DragonBallSuper.

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-> "''You're full of optimism, aren't you? But,
[[caption-width-right:250: ''Even if it takes me forever, I'll work really hard make sure to get into the forces! I'll become an Elite Hero, just like Frost! I'll become the youngest Elite, too!"''
Elite!'']]

-> "''Are you sure you want to enter the Coliseum games? I'm telling you, the Elite members are not easy, especially for someone of your size, and the creatures you may face can put your life on the line."''
->-- '''Cabba'''


'''Cabba's father, chapter 5'''


[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12797409/1/Sadala-Chronicles-The-Saiyan-and-the-devil-s-fruit "Sadala Chronicles: The Saiyan and the Devil's fruit."]] [[note]] Previously known as ''I'll become an Elite Hero! The young Saiyan and the fruit! [[/note]] is a fanfic published by [=TrueUtopian=] about Cabba, the Saiyan from Universe 6 and his origin on how he became an Elite member of the Sadala Army. Is a [[AlternateUniverseFic alternate universe]] prequel to Anime/DragonBallSuper.
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* CallForward:
** In chapter 6, after Doctor Yarrow checks if Cabba is capable of entering into the Lad Sarced games, he comments on how Cabba has some "oddity" about his body. Is a subtle reference to the S-cells, as Cabba will become a Super Saiyan during ''Super''.
** in chapter 8, Vidalia slaps Cabba's hand and tells him she doesn't participate in the Coliseum games to make friends, just like Caulifla with Goku in the Tournament of Power. [[spoiler: Also counts as FiveSecondForeshadowing of Vidalia's real identity.]]

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* CallForward:
** In chapter 6, after Doctor Yarrow checks if
BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Taura is killed off, and the Tree of Might is destroyed, allowing Cabba is capable to archieve his dream of entering turning into a member of the Lad Sarced games, he comments on how Cabba has some "oddity" about his body. Is a subtle reference Elite Saiyans and fight alongside Frost. [[TheBadGuyWins But Camelo achieve her goal of returning to the S-cells, as Demon Realm]], [[KarmaHoudini doesn't suffer consequences for her actions]], and due to her involvement Sadala and its army is crippled, with Cabba will become a Super Saiyan during ''Super''.
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suffering SurvivorGuilt and Caulifla abandoning her home out of shame about her aunt.]]
* CallForward: In
chapter 8, Vidalia slaps Cabba's hand and tells him she doesn't participate in the Coliseum games to make friends, just like Caulifla with Goku in the Tournament of Power. [[spoiler: Also counts as FiveSecondForeshadowing of Vidalia's real identity.]]



* GreatOffscreenWar: There are mentions of a war between Frost forces, which includes the Saiyans, and the dreadful Space Pirates, that included a warmonger named Lusk, and this war is the motivation for Taura's actions, but the war itself is never the focus.

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** In chapter 6, after Doctor Yarrow checks if Cabba is capable of entering into the Lad Sarced games, he comments on how Cabba has some "oddity" about his body. [[spoiler: Not only is this a subtle reference to the S-cells that will make him go Super Saiyan in the tournament against Universe 7, is also a clue of his pure heart that is what the villains are after.]]
* GreatOffscreenWar: There are mentions of a war between Frost forces, which includes the Saiyans, and the dreadful Space Pirates, that included a warmonger named Lusk, and this war is the motivation for Taura's actions, but the war itself is never the focus.focus until a brief showcase in the epilogue.



* LateArrivalSpoiler: Averted. [[spoiler: The story treats Frost as a complete heroic individual, despite his true nature as evil in the series.]]

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* LateArrivalSpoiler: Averted. [[spoiler: The story treats Frost as a complete heroic individual, despite his true nature as evil in the series.series until the very epilogue.]]



** The leader of the Space Pirates is a Namekian named Lusk, a nod to [[Anime/DragonBallZLordSlug Lord Slug]]. Taura despising him is based on Turles and Slug TeethClenchedTeamwork in ''Videogame/DragonBallXenoverse2''.

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** The A leader of the Space Pirates is a Namekian named Lusk, a nod to [[Anime/DragonBallZLordSlug Lord Slug]]. Taura despising him is based on Turles and Slug TeethClenchedTeamwork in ''Videogame/DragonBallXenoverse2''.
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* EvilMakesYouUgly: Consuming the fruit of the Tree of Might grants immense power to the person, but it alters their physical appearance. Taura went from having a normal skin tone to having an almost vampiric grayish one, similar to powder. [[spoiler: Reviving with the Tree of Might likewise made Esparra have red eyes and a [[UndeathlyPallor unnatural gray skin]]]].


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* ResurrectionSickness: [[spoiler: After being revived thanks to the Tree of Might, Esparra is affected by an unnatural gray skin and red eyes, alongside amnesia and blindness. He can't remember how he died.]]
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** In chapter 5, the narration points out how there were diamonds encrusted on the graves of the fallen Saiyans. [[spoiler: Esparra is revived from a diamond made out of his ashes.]]

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** In chapter 5, the narration points out how there were are diamonds encrusted on the graves of the fallen Saiyans. [[spoiler: Esparra is revived from a diamond made out of his ashes.]]
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** Esparra's fate. He disappeared one day and was found on a nameless planet, so nobody knows what happened to him. Renso remembers he was worried about something and went to investigate it, but then ended up dead. [[spoiler: Even after reviving, he doesn't remember how he ended up in a cave and ended up dying soon after, revealing nothing.]]

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** Esparra's fate. He disappeared one day and was found on a nameless planet, so nobody knows what happened to him. Renso remembers he was worried about something and went to investigate it, but then ended up dead. [[spoiler: Even after reviving, he doesn't remember how he ended ends up in a cave and ended up dying soon after, revealing nothing.]]
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* BeingGoodSucks: In chapter 20, after surviving the nightmare that was the Tree of Might and with trauma from his SurvivorGuilt and being [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything tortured]] by [[spoiler: Camelo]], Cabba asks his reporter mother if any of the Space Pirates ever felt regret for their actions. She states that no, some of them [[EvilFeelsGood felt proud of their actions like the rotten eggs they were]].
-> '''Cabba:''' ''How I envy evil not feeling any sort of regret.''

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* BeingGoodSucks: In chapter 20, after surviving the nightmare that was the Tree of Might and with trauma from his SurvivorGuilt and being [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything tortured]] by [[spoiler: Camelo]], Cabba asks his reporter mother if any of the Space Pirates ever felt regret for their actions. She states that no, some of them [[EvilFeelsGood felt proud of their actions like the rotten eggs they were]].
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'''Cabba:''' ''How I envy evil not feeling any sort of regret.''
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* AdaptationAmalgamation: The fanfic originally started only as an adaptation of ''Anime/DragonBallZTheTreeOfMight'' due to the use of the Tree of Might and Turles as a character, but later chapters started to implement elements from ''Anime/DragonBallZLordSlug'' due to the creation of Lusk, a Slug analogue.

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* AdaptationAmalgamation: The fanfic originally started only as an adaptation of ''Anime/DragonBallZTheTreeOfMight'' due to the use of the Tree of Might and Turles as a character, but later chapters started to implement elements from ''Anime/DragonBallZLordSlug'' due to the creation of Lusk, a Slug analogue.analog.



** In both versions, Cabba and Auta Magetta are never implied to know each other as they never interact in neither the anime or manga. In this tale, Cabba and Magetta are friends after meeting in the Meteor Desert.
* BeingGoodSucks: In chapter 20, after surviving the nightmare that was the Tree of Might and with trauma from his SurvivorGuilt and being [[DoesThisRemindsYouOfAnything tortured]] by [[spoiler: Camelo]], Cabba asks his reporter mother if any of the Space Pirates ever felt regret for their actions. She states that no, some of them [[EvilFeelsGood felt proud of their actions like the rotten eggs they were]].
--> '''Cabba:''' ''How I envy evil not feeling any sort of regret.''

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** In both versions, Cabba and Auta Magetta are never implied to know each other as they never interact in neither the anime or manga. In this tale, Cabba and Magetta are friends after meeting in the Meteor Desert.
Desert, with Cabbain particular finding him as a sort of best friend.
* BeingGoodSucks: In chapter 20, after surviving the nightmare that was the Tree of Might and with trauma from his SurvivorGuilt and being [[DoesThisRemindsYouOfAnything [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything tortured]] by [[spoiler: Camelo]], Cabba asks his reporter mother if any of the Space Pirates ever felt regret for their actions. She states that no, some of them [[EvilFeelsGood felt proud of their actions like the rotten eggs they were]].
--> -> '''Cabba:''' ''How I envy evil not feeling any sort of regret.''
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* BeingGoodSucks: In chapter 20, after surviving the nightmare that was the Tree of Might and with trauma from his SurvivorGuilt and being [[DoesThisRemindsYouOfAnything tortured]] by [[spoiler: Camelo]], Cabba asks his reporter mother if any of the Space Pirates ever felt regret for their actions. She states that no, some of them [[EvilFeelsGood felt proud of their actions like the rotten eggs they were]].
--> '''Cabba:''' ''How I envy evil not feeling any sort of regret.''
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** Esparra's fate. He disappeared one day and was found on a nameless planet, so nobody knows what happened to him. Renso remembers he was worried about something and went to investigate it, but then ended up dead. [[spoiler: Even after reviving, he didn't remember much and ended up dying soon after.]]

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** Esparra's fate. He disappeared one day and was found on a nameless planet, so nobody knows what happened to him. Renso remembers he was worried about something and went to investigate it, but then ended up dead. [[spoiler: Even after reviving, he didn't doesn't remember much how he ended up in a cave and ended up dying soon after.after, revealing nothing.]]

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* CentralTheme: Temptation. During the story, Cabba is constantly being tempted to eat the fruit of the Tree of Might to gain more power, while Taura has been seduced by the power of the fruit.
* CompositeCharacter: Taura is Turles analog, but she has a twin brother named Esparra. This is a combination of Turles with his minions, Rezun and Rakasei.



* CentralTheme: Temptation. During the story, Cabba is constantly being tempted to eat the fruit of the Tree of Might to gain more power, while his enemy Taura has been seduced by the power of the fruit.
* CompositeCharacter: Taura is Turles analog, but she has a twin brother named Esparra. This is a combination of Turles with his minions, Rezun and Rakasei.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: There are a lot of mentions about Caulifla and Renso's father. [[spoiler: Because his revival is the BigBad's plan.]]


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* {{Foreshadowing}}:
** Esparra, Renso's father is mentioned quite a bit over the course of the story. [[spoiler: Because his revival is the BigBad's plan.]]
** In chapter 5, the narration points out how there were diamonds encrusted on the graves of the fallen Saiyans. [[spoiler: Esparra is revived from a diamond made out of his ashes.]]


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* TheUnreveal:
** Cabba's uncle fate. While he passed away during the war, how he died is never discussed. Cabba sometimes wonders how he died, like a coward trying to run away; a brave warrior or as an accident. By the end of the story, his fate still remains unknown.
** Esparra's fate. He disappeared one day and was found on a nameless planet, so nobody knows what happened to him. Renso remembers he was worried about something and went to investigate it, but then ended up dead. [[spoiler: Even after reviving, he didn't remember much and ended up dying soon after.]]
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* CentralTheme: Temptation. During the story, Cabba is constantly being tempted to eat the fruit of the Tree of Might to gain more power, while his enemy Taura has been seduced by the power of the fruit.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12797409/1/Sadala-Chronicles-The-Saiyan-and-the-devil-s-fruit "Sadala Chronicles: The Saiyan and the Devil's fruit."]] [[note]] Previously known as ''I'll become an Elite Hero! The young Saiyan and the fruit! [[/note]] is a fanfic published by [=TrueUtopian=] about Cabba, the Saiyan from Universe 6 and his origin on how he became an Elite member of the Sadala Army. Is a [[AlternateUniverseFanfic alternate universe]] prequel to Anime/DragonBallSuper.

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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12797409/1/Sadala-Chronicles-The-Saiyan-and-the-devil-s-fruit "Sadala Chronicles: The Saiyan and the Devil's fruit."]] [[note]] Previously known as ''I'll become an Elite Hero! The young Saiyan and the fruit! [[/note]] is a fanfic published by [=TrueUtopian=] about Cabba, the Saiyan from Universe 6 and his origin on how he became an Elite member of the Sadala Army. Is a [[AlternateUniverseFanfic [[AlternateUniverseFic alternate universe]] prequel to Anime/DragonBallSuper.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12797409/1/Sadala-Chronicles-The-Saiyan-and-the-devil-s-fruit "Sadala Chronicles: The Saiyan and the devil's fruit."]] [[note]] Previously known as ''I'll become an Elite Hero! The young Saiyan and the fruit! [[/note]] is an on-going fanfic published by [=TrueUtopian=] about Cabba, the Saiyan from Universe 6 and his origin on how he became an Elite member of the Sadala Army. Is a prequel to Anime/DragonBallSuper.

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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12797409/1/Sadala-Chronicles-The-Saiyan-and-the-devil-s-fruit "Sadala Chronicles: The Saiyan and the devil's Devil's fruit."]] [[note]] Previously known as ''I'll become an Elite Hero! The young Saiyan and the fruit! [[/note]] is an on-going a fanfic published by [=TrueUtopian=] about Cabba, the Saiyan from Universe 6 and his origin on how he became an Elite member of the Sadala Army. Is a [[AlternateUniverseFanfic alternate universe]] prequel to Anime/DragonBallSuper.



The fanfic started to get published in January, 2018. While an origin story for Cabba, it also serves as an adaptation of the concepts of ''Anime/DragonBallZTheTreeOfMight'' and ''Anime/DragonBallZLordSlug''.

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The fanfic started to get published in January, 2018.2018 and finished publication in April, 2019. While an origin story for Cabba, it also serves as an adaptation of the concepts of ''Anime/DragonBallZTheTreeOfMight'' and ''Anime/DragonBallZLordSlug''.

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* AlternateSelf: Following the MirrorUniverse established by the main series, the fic explores what an alternate counterpart to Turles, the Tree of Might and other characters would be like.

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* AlternateSelf: Following the MirrorUniverse established by the main series, the fic story explores what an alternate counterpart to Turles, the Tree of Might and other characters would be like.



* DecompositeCharacter: While the fanfic combines elements and characters of ''Tree of Might'' with the Universe 6 characters, some roles are divided.
** Son Goku's role in the original story is divided between Cabba (TheHero who faces his EvilCounterpart) and [[spoiler: Esparra (as the father of one of the protagonists that destroys the Tree of Might)]]
** Gohan's role in the original story is divided between Cabba (a young [[TheEveryman relatable]] main protagonist with a personal beef against the BigBad), Caulifla (a natural born prodigy with a family of heroes with no humble attributes) and [[spoiler: Esparra (an innocent individual that turns into TheBerserk due to the BigBad actions)]].
** Piccolo's role in ''Tree of Might'' and the Saiyan saga is divided between Renso (the mentor figure) and Pirina (a Namekian criminal).
** The role of Icarus is divided between Cabba's dinosaur (the purple dinosaur that is a simple pet) and Magetta (Cabba's non-human friend during the story).
** Turles role itself is divided into three different antagonists: Taura (a rogue Saiyan that consumes the fruit of the Tree of Might and [[WeCanRuleTogether temps the protagonist to join their side]]), Camelo (the cold ManipulativeBastard) and Lusk (an IdenticalStranger SpacePirate)
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** In March 2019, the author also took the time to rewrite chapter 2. The scenes with Cabba's parents were rewriten to include the characterization from the later chapters (a reporter and a NonActionGuy with lung problems), as they were {{Living Prop}}s in the original, and the pet dinosaur added the detail that it was a feathered velociraptor. Likewise, the bully threatening Cabba with an energy contradicted a later chapter where Cabba's school used a power limiter, so it was rewriten with just his fists.

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** In March 2019, the author also took the time to rewrite chapter 2. The scenes with Cabba's parents were rewriten to include the characterization from the later chapters (a reporter and a NonActionGuy with lung problems), as they were {{Living Prop}}s in the original, and the pet dinosaur added the detail that it the pet dinosaur was a feathered velociraptor. Likewise, the bully threatening Cabba with an energy contradicted a later chapter where Cabba's school used a power limiter, so it was rewriten with to just using his fists.
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** In March 2019, the author also took the time to rewrite chapter 2. The scenes with Cabba's parents were rewriten to include the characterization from the later chapters (a reporter and a NonActionGuy with lung problems), as there were {{Living Prop}}s in the original, and the pet dinosaur added the detail that it was a feathered velociraptor. Likewise, the bully threatening Cabba with an energy contradicted a later chapter where Cabba's school used a power limiter, so it was rewriten with just his fists.

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** In March 2019, the author also took the time to rewrite chapter 2. The scenes with Cabba's parents were rewriten to include the characterization from the later chapters (a reporter and a NonActionGuy with lung problems), as there they were {{Living Prop}}s in the original, and the pet dinosaur added the detail that it was a feathered velociraptor. Likewise, the bully threatening Cabba with an energy contradicted a later chapter where Cabba's school used a power limiter, so it was rewriten with just his fists.

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* AdaptationAmalgamation: The fanfic originally started only as an adaptation of ''Anime/DragonBallZTheTreeOfMight'' due to the use of the Tree of Might and Turles as a character, but later chapters started to implement elements from ''Anime/DragonBallZLordSlug'' due to the creation of Lusk, a Slug analogue.



** In March 2019, the author also took the time to rewrite chapter 2. The scenes with Cabba's parents were rewriten to include the characterization from the later chapters (a reporter and a NonActionGuy with lung problems), as there were {{Living Prop}}s in the original, and the pet dinosaur added the detail that it was a feathered velociraptor. Likewise, the bully threatening Cabba with an energy contradicted a later chapter where Cabba's school used a power limiter, so it was rewriten with just his fists.



* WholePlotReference: The fic is based in ''Anime/DragonBallZTheTreeOfMight'', with the fruit of the Tree of Might being a plot-relevant deal. There are also many references to ''Anime/DragonBallZLordSlug''.

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* AdaptationalBadass: The Tree of Might and its fruit get a complete change from its inspiration. In its movie debut and the many videogames, the fruit only grants its user a power boost. In the fic, not only it grants its users that, but also serves as a healing fruit to revive Cabba's pet dinosaur, and can turn anyone that is trapped in its vines into mindless plant monster.

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* AdaptationalBadass: The Tree of Might and its fruit get a complete change from its inspiration. In its movie debut and the many videogames, the fruit only grants its user a power boost. In the fic, not only it grants its users that, but also serves as a healing fruit to revive Cabba's pet dinosaur, and [[spoiler:and can turn anyone that is trapped in its vines into mindless plant monster.]]



** In the anime, is implied Cabba and Caulifla met at one point but were never that close to begin with (and the manga outright has them both meet for the first time). In this tale, they are something of child rivals, with Caulifla constantly teasing him by calling a bamboo whinner and Cabba wanting her to acknowledge him.

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** In the anime, is implied Cabba and Caulifla met at one point but were never that close to begin with (and the manga outright has them both meet for the first time). In this tale, they are something of child rivals, with Caulifla constantly teasing him by calling a bamboo whinner and Cabba wanting her to acknowledge him.



** Magetta takes the cake: he is from a group of Metal Men brought to Sadala for construction purposes, but decided to participate in the games after winning a contest of rock castles. His friendship with Cabba doesn't exist in canon.

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** Magetta takes the cake: he is from a group of Metal Men brought to Sadala for construction purposes, purposes but decided to participate in the games after winning a contest of rock castles. His friendship with Cabba doesn't exist in canon.



** In March 2019, in part thanks in finding an editor, the author fixed grammatical mistakes in the first chapter, but also changed the title from "the young Saiyan and the fruit" to just "the Saiyan and the fruit" in order to have a DoubleMeaningTitle. Likewise, a sentence was added to foreshadow future events, specifically the fact Cabba has a book in his possession that is not related to Frost.

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** In March 2019, in part thanks in finding an editor, the author fixed grammatical mistakes in the first chapter, but also changed the title from "the young Saiyan and the fruit" to just "the Saiyan and the fruit" in order to have a DoubleMeaningTitle. Likewise, a sentence was added to foreshadow future events, specifically events.
--> '''Original:''' His room had many posters of
the fact Cabba has Emperor of the Universe.\\
'''Revision''': His room had many posters of the Emperor of the Universe, and behind one of them there was
a copy of his favorite (and only) book in his possession that is not related to Frost.



--> ''While Cabba was able to participate, he couldn't help but feel somewhat helpless to hear such words. It was like all the time he invested in training for years were for naught, as he was going to be overshadowed by everyone else. Everyone would think of the eight times champion who worked directly with Frost, or the second place which fought alongside the Arlians in a war. Even a delinquent was better than him since they were toddlers. By contrast, he was just a kid, with no exceptional abilities except for some vague oddity or even a family name to hold into. He was normal, he was average, he was simply Cabba.''

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--> ---> ''While Cabba was able to participate, he couldn't help but feel somewhat helpless to hear such words. It was like all the time he invested in training for years were for naught, as he was going to be overshadowed by everyone else. Everyone would think of the eight times champion who worked directly with Frost, or the second place which fought alongside the Arlians in a war. Even a delinquent was better than him since they were toddlers. By contrast, he was just a kid, with no exceptional abilities except for some vague oddity or even a family name to hold into. He was normal, he was average, he was simply Cabba.''''
* PosthumousCharacter:
** Cabba's uncle died during the war against the Space Pirates, and he was named after him by his father. He was a regular soldier with nothing remarkable to his name.
** Caulifla's father, Esparra, was found dead on mysterious circumstances in a nameless planet a decade before the events of the story. He was the champion of the Coliseum, known for defeating the Phototauros. [[spoiler: Reviving him is part of Taura's motivation, and she succeeds thanks to the Tree of Might.]]
** The Phototauros, a giant plant monster the size of a planet and its breed were killed off by Esparra and Taura decades before the events of the story.
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* OriginalCharacter: Almost every character is created for this fic, including Taura who is meant to be seen as an DistaffCounterpart to Turles.
** Cabba's family has only been alluded in canon, but never explored. The author created a father, mother and small brother for him, alongside a pet dinosaur based on Icarus.

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* OriginalCharacter: Almost every character is created for this fic, including Taura who is meant to be seen as an a DistaffCounterpart to Turles.
** Cabba's family has only been alluded in canon, canon but never explored. The author created a father, mother and small brother for him, alongside a pet dinosaur based on Icarus.



** During November 2018, the author decided to re-read the fanfic and fix typos and minor inconsistencies. However, he also changed the Saiyans having "holidays" during the first chapter (for consistency with their U7 counterparts) for "a celebration against the Space Pirates" and including a mention of Cabba's parents as non-combatant Saiyans.
** In March 2019, in part thanks in finding an editor, the author fixed grammatical mistakes in the first chapter, but also changed the title from "the young Saiyan and the fruit" to just "the Saiyan and the fruit" in order to have a DoubleMeaningTitle. Likewise, a sentence was added to foreshadow future events, expecifically the fact Cabba has a book in his posession that is not related to Frost.

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** During November 2018, the author decided to re-read the fanfic and fix typos and minor inconsistencies. However, he also He changed the Saiyans having "holidays" during the first chapter (for consistency with their U7 counterparts) for "a celebration against the Space Pirates" and including a mention of Cabba's parents as non-combatant Saiyans.
** In March 2019, in part thanks in finding an editor, the author fixed grammatical mistakes in the first chapter, but also changed the title from "the young Saiyan and the fruit" to just "the Saiyan and the fruit" in order to have a DoubleMeaningTitle. Likewise, a sentence was added to foreshadow future events, expecifically specifically the fact Cabba has a book in his posession possession that is not related to Frost.



--> ''While Cabba was able to participate, he couldn't help but feel somewhat helpless to hear such words. It was like all the time he invested into training for years were for naught, as he was going to be overshadowed by everyone else. Everyone would think of the eight times champion who worked directly with Frost, or the second place which fought alongside the Arlians in a war. Even a delinquent was better than him since they were toddlers. By contrast, he was just a kid, with no exceptional abilities except for some vague oddity or even a family name to hold into. He was normal, he was average, he was simply Cabba.''

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--> ''While Cabba was able to participate, he couldn't help but feel somewhat helpless to hear such words. It was like all the time he invested into in training for years were for naught, as he was going to be overshadowed by everyone else. Everyone would think of the eight times champion who worked directly with Frost, or the second place which fought alongside the Arlians in a war. Even a delinquent was better than him since they were toddlers. By contrast, he was just a kid, with no exceptional abilities except for some vague oddity or even a family name to hold into. He was normal, he was average, he was simply Cabba.''

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* OrwellianRetcon: During November 2018, the author decided to re-read the fanfic and fix typos and minor inconsistencies. However, he also changed the Saiyans having "holidays" during the first chapter (for consistency with their U7 counterparts) for "a celebration against the Space Pirates" and including a mention of Cabba's parents as non-combatant Saiyans.

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During November 2018, the author decided to re-read the fanfic and fix typos and minor inconsistencies. However, he also changed the Saiyans having "holidays" during the first chapter (for consistency with their U7 counterparts) for "a celebration against the Space Pirates" and including a mention of Cabba's parents as non-combatant Saiyans.
** In March 2019, in part thanks in finding an editor, the author fixed grammatical mistakes in the first chapter, but also changed the title from "the young Saiyan and the fruit" to just "the Saiyan and the fruit" in order to have a DoubleMeaningTitle. Likewise, a sentence was added to foreshadow future events, expecifically the fact Cabba has a book in his posession that is not related to Frost.



* WorldTree: The Tree of Might, also known as Tree of Eternal Bliss, similar to its inspiration is a giant-sized tree that can grant a delicious looking fruit capable of healing and boosting power. [[AdaptationalBadass Unlike its inspiration]], it can absorb the planet inhabitants and turn them into the mutant, mindless and seemingly immortal [[PlantPerson vine creatures]] that the BigBad uses as its revolutionary army, and due to this the insides of the tree are a mess of different energies that can left energy-sensing users blind.

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* WorldTree: The Tree of Might, also known as Tree of Eternal Bliss, similar to its inspiration is a giant-sized tree that can grant a delicious looking fruit capable of healing and boosting power. [[AdaptationalBadass Unlike its inspiration]], it can absorb the planet inhabitants and turn them into the mutant, mindless and seemingly immortal [[PlantPerson vine creatures]] that the BigBad uses as its revolutionary army, and due to this the insides of the tree are a mess of different energies that can left leave energy-sensing users blind.
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* SavedByCanon: while the fic reaches DarkFic levels after chapter 10, the truth is that as a prequel, the canon characters will end up surviving this tale unlike most of the originals.
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* AlternateSelf: The story takes place in Universe 6, which is already a MirrorUniverse to the ''Dragon Ball'' universe, but the tale has a DistaffCounterpart to Turles named Taura, which is Caulifla' aunt.
* AdaptationalBadass: The Tree of Might and its fruit get a complete change from its inspiration. In its movie debut and the many videogames, the fruit only grants its user a power boost. In the fic, not only it grants its users that, but also serves as a healing fruit to revive Cabba's pet dinosaur.

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* AlternateSelf: The story takes place in Universe 6, which is already a Following the MirrorUniverse to established by the ''Dragon Ball'' universe, but main series, the tale has a DistaffCounterpart fic explores what an alternate counterpart to Turles named Taura, which is Caulifla' aunt.
Turles, the Tree of Might and other characters would be like.
* AdaptationalBadass: The Tree of Might and its fruit get a complete change from its inspiration. In its movie debut and the many videogames, the fruit only grants its user a power boost. In the fic, not only it grants its users that, but also serves as a healing fruit to revive Cabba's pet dinosaur. dinosaur, and can turn anyone that is trapped in its vines into mindless plant monster.



** In chapter 6, after the doctor checks if Cabba is capable of entering into the Lad Sarced games, he comments on how Cabba has some "oddity" about his body. Is a subtle reference to the S-cells, as Cabba will become a Super Saiyan during ''Super''.

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** In chapter 6, after the doctor Doctor Yarrow checks if Cabba is capable of entering into the Lad Sarced games, he comments on how Cabba has some "oddity" about his body. Is a subtle reference to the S-cells, as Cabba will become a Super Saiyan during ''Super''.
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** During chapter 15, Caulifla copies Cabba's energy kicks while fighting the vine monsters and thinks to herself "[[Videogame/DragonBallLegends mind if I take your movie?]]", one of Shallot's quotes when using a move from another character.

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** During chapter 15, Caulifla copies Cabba's energy kicks while fighting the vine monsters and thinks to herself "[[Videogame/DragonBallLegends mind if I take your movie?]]", move?]]", one of Shallot's quotes when using a move from another character.
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The fanfic started to get published in January, 2018. While an origin story for Cabba, it also serves as an adaptation of the concepts of ''Anime/DragonBallZTheTreeOfMight''.

The author is not a native English-speaker, so don't be surprised to see any typo. He will thank you if you help him.

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The fanfic started to get published in January, 2018. While an origin story for Cabba, it also serves as an adaptation of the concepts of ''Anime/DragonBallZTheTreeOfMight''.

The author is not a native English-speaker, so don't be surprised to see any typo. He will thank you if you help him.
''Anime/DragonBallZTheTreeOfMight'' and ''Anime/DragonBallZLordSlug''.

Beware of spoilers.
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* Foreshadowing: There are a lot of mentions about Caulifla and Renso's father. [[spoiler: Because his revival is the BigBad's plan.]]

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* Foreshadowing: {{Foreshadowing}}: There are a lot of mentions about Caulifla and Renso's father. [[spoiler: Because his revival is the BigBad's plan.]]
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** Son Goku's role in the original story is divided between Cabba (the Hero who faces his EvilCounterpart) and [[spoiler: Esparra (as the father of one of the protagonists that destroys the Tree of Might)]]
** Gohan's role in the original story is divided between Cabba (a young [[TheEveryman relatable]] main protagonist with a personal beef against the antagonist), Caulifla (a natural born prodigy with a family of heroes with no humble attributes) and [[spoiler: Esparra (an innocent individual that turns into TheBerserk due to the BigBad actions)]].

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** Son Goku's role in the original story is divided between Cabba (the Hero (TheHero who faces his EvilCounterpart) and [[spoiler: Esparra (as the father of one of the protagonists that destroys the Tree of Might)]]
** Gohan's role in the original story is divided between Cabba (a young [[TheEveryman relatable]] main protagonist with a personal beef against the antagonist), BigBad), Caulifla (a natural born prodigy with a family of heroes with no humble attributes) and [[spoiler: Esparra (an innocent individual that turns into TheBerserk due to the BigBad actions)]].



** Turles role itself is divided into many characters: Taura (a rogue Saiyan that consumes the fruit of the Tree of Might and [[WeCanRuleTogether temps the protagonist to join their side]]), Camelo (the cold ManipulativeBastard) and Lusk (an IdenticalStranger SpacePirate)

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** Turles role itself is divided into many characters: three different antagonists: Taura (a rogue Saiyan that consumes the fruit of the Tree of Might and [[WeCanRuleTogether temps the protagonist to join their side]]), Camelo (the cold ManipulativeBastard) and Lusk (an IdenticalStranger SpacePirate)

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