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* AbuseMistake: When Mobei-jun comes across a whipped and beaten Shang Qinghua, which by demon standards is a sign of approval and thinks that Shang Qinghua managed to win his wife's affection...until he realizes that Shang Qinghua was left with his wounds untreated and in pain which reveals something is deeply wrong. [[SafeSaneAndConsensual The lack of aftercare tells him something is wrong]] even before Shang Qinghua reveals that he had been beaten by Second Wife for accidentally exposing her money laundering.
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* LoveTriangle: In the original timeline, both Liu Qingge and Shen Qingqiu fought over Yue Qingyuan's love and favor. Here, Yue Qingyuan and Liu Qingge try to win the affections of the deliberately oblivious Shen Qingqiu only to be blindsided by the arrival of Luo Binghe.
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* TriangRelations: In the original timeline, both Liu Qingge and Shen Qingqiu fought over Yue Qingyuan's love and favor. Here, Yue Qingyuan and Liu Qingge try to win the affections of the deliberately oblivious Shen Qingqiu only to be blindsided by the arrival of Luo Binghe.
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-->'''Shen Qingqiu'': If you end up marrying another man in another ten years, and have a conversation like this with Liu Qingge, perhaps you ought to consider a better talking point than ‘please don’t harass your replacement'. Just as a suggestion. It isn’t really helping your case.
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-->'''Shen Qingqiu'': Qingqiu''': If you end up marrying another man in another ten years, and have a conversation like this with Liu Qingge, perhaps you ought to consider a better talking point than ‘please don’t harass your replacement'. Just as a suggestion. It isn’t really helping your case.
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--> Luo Binghe: It was power that determined justice, in the end.
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--> Luo Binghe: '''Luo Binghe''': It was power that determined justice, in the end.
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** Shen Qingqiu spends most of his time trying to avoid having to interact Yue Qingyuan and passive-aggressively sniping at him whenever he's forced to.
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** Shen Qingqiu spends most of his time trying to avoid having to interact with Yue Qingyuan and passive-aggressively sniping at him whenever he's forced to.
