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* DownerBeginning: A given when you look at the premise, but the first few chapters are the farthest thing from an uplifting read.
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* DownerBeginning: A given when you look at the premise, but the first few chapters are the farthest thing The prologue involves Hilda dying quite horribly, and it doesn't get better from an uplifting read. there. [[spoiler: At first.]]
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* DiedInYourArmsTonight: Hilda ends up succumbing to her injuries in Johanna's arms.
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* DiedInYourArmsTonight: Hilda ends up succumbing succumbs to her injuries in Johanna's arms.
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: How Hilda goes out. First, she plummets from who knows how many feet from the mountain the weather station was on, being crushed by rubble on the way down. Then, once she wakes up, her entire body is in agony, her legs have been trapped and pulverized by a lone piece of debris, and a pipe has been lodged into her chest, with the removal of the latter causing her to pass out from critical blood loss. ''And she's still just barely alive afterwards'', having only moments to spare to say goodbye to Johanna before dying from her injuries.
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: How Hilda goes out. First, she plummets from who knows how many feet from the mountain the weather station was on, being crushed by rubble on the way down. Then, once she wakes up, her entire body is in agony, her legs have been are trapped and pulverized by a lone piece some of the debris, and a pipe has been lodged into her chest, with the removal of the latter causing her to pass out from critical blood loss. ''And she's still just barely alive afterwards'', having only moments to spare to say goodbye to Johanna before dying from her injuries.
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* SequelHook: [[spoiler: The epilogue ends with Alfur and another Elf beginning a discussion about the identity of Hilda's dad.]]
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* LighterAndSofter: [[spoiler: Compared to the rest of the story, the epilogue is a retelling of ''The Black Hound''.]]
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* ShoutOut: [[spoiler: Towards the end, one of the Marra tries to make a remark on Twintail's bad sense of humor. Only to be met with a DeathStare, resulting in the former Marra [[WesternAnimation/ABugsLife shutting up.]]]]
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* ShoutOut: [[spoiler: Towards the end, one of the Marra tries to make a remark on Twintail's bad sense of humor. Only to be met with a DeathStare, DeathGlare, resulting in the former Marra [[WesternAnimation/ABugsLife shutting up.]]]]
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* ShoutOut: [[spoiler: Towards the end, one of the Marra tries to make a remark on Twintail's bad sense of humor. Only to be met with a DeathStare, resulting in the former Marra [[WesternAnimation/ABugsLife shutting up.]]]]
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* ItsAllMyFault: How Frida sees Hilda's death as this because of how she lashed out on her in "The Ghost".
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* ItsAllMyFault: How Frida sees Hilda's death as this because of how she lashed out on her in "The Ghost".
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** Raven blames himself as well, as he had assumed that Hilda had already died when the weather station collapsed when she was in fact alive (albeit horrifically injured).
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** Raven blames himself as well, as he had assumed that Hilda had already died when the weather station collapsed when she was in fact alive (albeit horrifically critically injured).
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Hilda comes back from the dead two times: once in Chapter 7 when the House in the Woods grants Johanna's wish to revive her, and definitively in the climax, in the form of a ghost.]]
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Over the course of the story, Hilda comes back from the dead no more than two times: once in Chapter 7 when the House in the Woods grants Johanna's wish to revive her, and definitively in the climax, in the form of a ghost.]]
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/20245246/chapters/47981089 Requiem For An Adventurer]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/{{Hilda}}'' AlternateUniverseFic by authors jdubbam and Newgame+LD, exploring one simple question: What if, [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/HildaS1E10 in Hilda's rush to free the captive baby Weather Spirit]], things went [[KilledOffForReal horribly]], '''[[TheHeroDies horribly]]''' wrong?
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/20245246/chapters/47981089 Requiem For An Adventurer]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/{{Hilda}}'' AlternateUniverseFic by authors jdubbam and Newgame+LD, exploring one simple question: What if, [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/HildaS1E10 in Hilda's rush to free the captive baby Weather Spirit]], things went wrong? [[KilledOffForReal horribly]], Horribly]], '''[[TheHeroDies horribly]]''' wrong?
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* DarkFic: Very much so -- Hilda's death in the prologue almost immediately cements this, and it doesn't let up from there.
* DespairEventHorizon: ''Everyone'' in the aftermath of Hilda's death. Johanna, Frida, and Raven get it the worst, though.
* DespairEventHorizon: ''Everyone'' in the aftermath of Hilda's death. Johanna, Frida, and Raven get it the worst, though.
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* DarkFic: Very much so -- Hilda's death in the prologue almost immediately cements this, and it doesn't let up from there.
* DespairEventHorizon: ''Everyone'' in the aftermath of Hilda's death. Johanna, Frida, and Raven get it theworst, though. worst out of everyone.
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* MistakenForMurderer: Johanna, in her grief, erroneously deduces that Victoria ''meant'' to leave Hilda to die. Later, when confronting Victoria in the House in the Woods, Johanna is seconds away from killing her herself until she realizes that, as much as she wants to do it, it's not what Hilda would want.
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* MistakenForMurderer: Johanna, in her grief, erroneously deduces that Victoria ''meant'' to leave Hilda to die. Later, when confronting Victoria in the House in the Woods, Johanna is seconds away from killing her herself until she realizes that, as much as she wants to do it, it's not what Hilda would want.
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* YankTheDogsChain: [[spoiler: Hilda is revived by the House in The Woods through the story's halfway point, only to die once more as soon as she returns the House it takes back everything the gang wished for.]]
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* YankTheDogsChain: [[spoiler: Hilda is revived by the House in The Woods through at the story's halfway point, only to die once more as soon as she returns when the House it takes back everything the gang wished for.]]
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/20245246/chapters/47981089 Requiem For An Adventurer]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/{{Hilda}}'' AlternateUniverseFic by authors jdubbam and Newgame+LD, exploring a simple but canon-altering question: What if, [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/HildaS1E10 in Hilda's rush to free the captive baby Weather Spirit]], things went [[KilledOffForReal horribly]], '''[[TheHeroDies horribly]]''' wrong?
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/20245246/chapters/47981089 Requiem For An Adventurer]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/{{Hilda}}'' AlternateUniverseFic by authors jdubbam and Newgame+LD, exploring a one simple but canon-altering question: What if, [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/HildaS1E10 in Hilda's rush to free the captive baby Weather Spirit]], things went [[KilledOffForReal horribly]], '''[[TheHeroDies horribly]]''' wrong?
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Their lives forever uprooted, Hilda's friends and family struggle to get by as circumstances wind up pulling them into a plot greater than any of them could have imagined --- one that could very well spell doom for all of Trolberg.
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Their lives forever uprooted, Hilda's friends and family struggle to get by as circumstances wind up pulling them into a plot greater than any of them could have imagined --- -- one that could very well spell doom for all of Trolberg.
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* DiedInYourArmsTonight: Hilda ends up passing away in her mother's clasp.
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* DiedInYourArmsTonight: Hilda ends up passing away in succumbing to her mother's clasp.injuries in Johanna's arms.
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* CryIntoChest: When Frida apologizes to Hilda, after she is resurrected, Hilda just hugs Frida tightly, with David joining in for a group hug. Frida tears up as she hugs back and buries her face in Hilda's shoulder.
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* CryIntoChest: [[spoiler: When Frida apologizes to Hilda, after she is resurrected, Hilda just hugs Frida tightly, with David joining in for a group hug. Frida tears up as she hugs back and buries her face in Hilda's shoulder.]]
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* PartingWordsRegret: Upon learning of Hilda's death, Frida regretted the hurtful words she said to her during their falling out in "The Ghost". In a later chapter, she got the chance to apologize to Hilda when she was briefly resurrected by The House in the Woods, bringing closure between them.
* YankTheDogsChain: [[spoiler: Hilda is revived by the House in The Woods through the story's halfway point, only to die once more as soon as he returns the House it takes back everything the gang wished for.]]
* YankTheDogsChain: [[spoiler: Hilda is revived by the House in The Woods through the story's halfway point, only to die once more as soon as he returns the House it takes back everything the gang wished for.]]
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* PartingWordsRegret: Upon learning of Hilda's death, Frida regretted the hurtful words she said to her during their falling out in "The Ghost". [[spoiler: In a later chapter, she got the chance to apologize to Hilda when she was briefly resurrected by The House in the Woods, bringing closure between them.
them.]]
* YankTheDogsChain: [[spoiler: Hilda is revived by the House in The Woods through the story's halfway point, only to die once more as soon ashe she returns the House it takes back everything the gang wished for.]]
* YankTheDogsChain: [[spoiler: Hilda is revived by the House in The Woods through the story's halfway point, only to die once more as soon as
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* PartingWordsRegret: Upon learning of Hilda's death, Frida regretted the hurtful words she said to her during their falling out in "The Ghost". In a later chapter, she got the chance to apologize to Hilda when she was briefly resurrected by The House in the Woods, bringing closure between them.
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* PartingWordsRegret: Upon learning of Hilda's death, Frida regretted the hurtful words she said to her during their falling out in "The Ghost". In a later chapter, she got the chance to apologize to Hilda when she was briefly resurrected by The House in the Woods, bringing closure between them.them.
* YankTheDogsChain: [[spoiler: Hilda is revived by the House in The Woods through the story's halfway point, only to die once more as soon as he returns the House it takes back everything the gang wished for.]]
* YankTheDogsChain: [[spoiler: Hilda is revived by the House in The Woods through the story's halfway point, only to die once more as soon as he returns the House it takes back everything the gang wished for.]]
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Hilda comes back from the dead in the climax, in the form of a ghost.]]
* BloodierAndGorier: The story goes above and beyond any of the violence we've seen in both the show and the graphic novels. Characters are impaled, battered, burned, among other such things, with at times extensive detail going into their injuries.
* BloodierAndGorier: The story goes above and beyond any of the violence we've seen in both the show and the graphic novels. Characters are impaled, battered, burned, among other such things, with at times extensive detail going into their injuries.
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Hilda comes back from the dead two times: once in Chapter 7 when the House in the Woods grants Johanna's wish to revive her, and definitively in the climax, in the form of a ghost.]]
* BloodierAndGorier: The story goes above and beyond any of the violence we've seen in both the show and the graphic novels. Characters are impaled, battered, burned, among other such things, withat times extensive detail going into their injuries.injuries at times.
* BloodierAndGorier: The story goes above and beyond any of the violence we've seen in both the show and the graphic novels. Characters are impaled, battered, burned, among other such things, with