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** The Batarian Hegemony did this when they [[BullyingADragon kept supporting raids on human space.]]

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** The Batarian Hegemony did this when they [[BullyingADragon kept supporting raids on human space.]]]] And it turns out that the batarians were only fighting ''two'' of GDI's ''eight'' standing fleets. And this is before GDI starts mobilizing for ''full-scale war'' due to the geth attacks and [[spoiler: Kane bringing out Temple Prime]]. When the latter two events happen, GDI rolls out the Ninth Fleet and begins building and training the Tenth and Eleventh battle fleets within a three month period to finish the batarians off.

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-->“That big walker,” she ordered. “We’re going to [[{{Firefly}} kill it with our brains.]]”

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-->“That big walker,” she ordered. “We’re going to [[{{Firefly}} kill it with our brains.]]”]]” Later on there's a GDI frigate captain named [[Creator/NathanFillion Nathan]] [[Series/{{Firefly}} Reynolds]] who says taht they're going to send the geth "to the special hell."


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** Telfair's Orca squadron is named [[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined Athena]] [[ActorAllusion Squad]].
** Wrex [[MetronomicManMashing smashed a Scrin Intruder]], before muttering [[Film/TheAvengers "Puny Scrin"]].
** In the same chapter, Wrex also mentions that he thought a [[Videogame/GearsOfWar guard named Carmine was already dead, and that his helmet kept restricting his vision.]]

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** A more villainous example (and its not clear yet what's caused it) is [[spoiler: the Collectors starting the harvest a few years earlier than expected]].

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** A more villainous example (and its not clear yet what's caused it) is [[spoiler: the Collectors starting the harvest a few years earlier than expected]].expected]]. And Kane suspect that [[spoiler: he actually caused them to attack by revealing Temple Prime]].


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** Kane revealing [[spoiler: Temple Prime, a two-kilometer long space station]] which comes out of ''nowhere'' and pretty much sends everyone scrambling to respond and figure out how the hell he managed to build it.
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* AmusingInjuries: As with ''Fanfic/TiberiumWars'', the dim lighting and constant floor-level mist exist solely because Kane finds it hilarious that people keep bumping into stuff. It turns out that both Kane and Miranda have omnitool modifications that let them spot things hidden in the mists so they don't stumble.
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** Amusingly, [[spoiler: Kane]] also advocates this, going by [[spoiler: Temple Prime]].


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* LoopholeAbuse: [[spoiler: Temple Prime]] doesn't ''technically'' violate the UHAT treaty, because it isn't a ''warship''.

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** Sparatus ''knows'' Garrus' [[NoKillLikeOverkill tendencies.]] He also knows [[HumansAreWarriors what humans are like.]] He decides that the best way to kill Saren is to ''pair them up''.



** When Sparatus asks if [[HumansAreWarriors humanity's aggression, ruthlessness, and violence]] are flaws or benefits, Garrus' response is "Yes."



* RammingAlwaysWorks: ''Udina,'' surprisingly. He manages to take out the Battlemind by ramming an aircar into it, sending both twenty feet until they hit a wall and causes the Battlemind to stain everything in a twenty-foot radius to be covered in silvery gore.

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* RammingAlwaysWorks: ''Udina,'' [[spoiler: ''Udina,'']] surprisingly. He manages to take out [[spoiler: the Battlemind Battlemind]] by ramming an aircar into it, sending both twenty feet until they hit a wall and causes [[spoiler: the Battlemind Battlemind]] to stain everything in a twenty-foot radius to be covered in silvery gore.


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** Shepard's reaction to [[spoiler: the cybernetic augments to replace her lost arm]] is [[Videogame/DeusExHumanRevolution "I didn't ask for this."]] Then she mentions that even though she didn't ask for them, they still ''kick ass''.
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**Whenever a character thinks about Admiral Parker, the words "strategic" and "collateral" tend to appear in the narration.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Well...[[WorldOfBadass everyone.]] But especially Garrus, humanity, and Kaidan. Goodness, Kaidan. Once a soft-spoken biotic Marine, now a soft-spoken GDI biotic Marine who happens to be a Tiberium mutant and can toss around Wolverine walkers like they're made of Styrofoam.
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* UnflinchingWalk:
** Garrus would ''like'' to do one of these, but he thinks it's unprofessional, so he abstains.
** Later, he does an inversion, as he walks ''towards'' a Scrin Battlemind, deftly sidestepping and ignoring the aircars being thrown at him.
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* NotMyDriver: This happens while Shepard and Anderson [[spoiler: are leaving the Citadel Tower]], where the [[spoiler: two GDI soldiers driving their aircar are actually badguys who ambushed the actual aircar driver/escort and took their armor.]]
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* SharedUniverse: With Charnobyl's ''Fanfic/EaglesFall'' and ''The Verge War'' stories.
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* ContinuityNod: There are a number of references to ''Fanfic/EaglesFall'', such as a turian naval officer who was the son of the turian admiral in charge of the battle at Shanxi, as well as Locke, alive and well and apparently working for Phoenix. Also, WordOfGod confirms that Anastacia Telfair is the descendant of Sandra Telfair from ''Fanfic/TiberiumWars''. Later on, there is also Captain Aldis Rawne, a descendant of Commander Rawne from the same story, as well as several references to the omnipresent mist in Nod facilities (itself a RunningGag).

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* ContinuityNod: There are a number of references to ''Fanfic/EaglesFall'', such as a turian naval officer who was the son of the turian admiral in charge of the battle at Shanxi, as well as Locke, alive and well and apparently working for Phoenix. Also, WordOfGod confirms that Anastacia Telfair is the descendant of Sandra Telfair from ''Fanfic/TiberiumWars''. Later on, there is also Captain Aldis Rawne, a descendant of Commander Rawne from the same story, as well as several references to the omnipresent mist and dim lighting in Nod facilities (itself a RunningGag).
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* ContinuityNod: There are a number of references to ''Fanfic/EaglesFall'', such as a turian naval officer who was the son of the turian admiral in charge of the battle at Shanxi, as well as Locke, alive and well and apparently working for Phoenix. Also, WordOfGod confirms that [[spoiler: Anastacia Telfair is the descendant of Sandra Telfair and Commander Karrde from ''Tiberium Wars'']].

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* ContinuityNod: There are a number of references to ''Fanfic/EaglesFall'', such as a turian naval officer who was the son of the turian admiral in charge of the battle at Shanxi, as well as Locke, alive and well and apparently working for Phoenix. Also, WordOfGod confirms that [[spoiler: Anastacia Telfair is the descendant of Sandra Telfair and from ''Fanfic/TiberiumWars''. Later on, there is also Captain Aldis Rawne, a descendant of Commander Karrde Rawne from ''Tiberium Wars'']].the same story, as well as several references to the omnipresent mist in Nod facilities (itself a RunningGag).
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Take Earth from the ''CommandAndConquer [[CommandAndConquerTiberium Tiberium]]'' setting, as of the end of ''Command and Conquer 3: Tiberium Wars'', and put it in the ''MassEffect'' setting, following the same timeline. The result? ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5851454/1/Renegade Renegade]],'' an AlternateHistory[=/=]AlternateUniverse fanfic that loosely follows the plot of the first ''[[MassEffect1 Mass Effect]]'' game.

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Take Earth from the ''CommandAndConquer [[CommandAndConquerTiberium Tiberium]]'' setting, as of the end of ''Command and Conquer 3: Tiberium Wars'', and put it in the ''MassEffect'' ''Franchise/MassEffect'' setting, following the same timeline. The result? ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5851454/1/Renegade Renegade]],'' an AlternateHistory[=/=]AlternateUniverse fanfic that loosely follows the plot of the first ''[[MassEffect1 ''[[VideoGame/MassEffect1 Mass Effect]]'' game.



* ContinuityDrift: The original version of the story specifies that the turian Councilor's name is Velarn, but it wasn't until ''MassEffect3'' came out that we learned that Velarn is the ''salarian'' Councilor's name.

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* ContinuityDrift: The original version of the story specifies that the turian Councilor's name is Velarn, but it wasn't until ''MassEffect3'' ''VideoGame/MassEffect3'' came out that we learned that Velarn is the ''salarian'' Councilor's name.
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* GambitPileup: The Reapers are plotting something. Kane is ''also'' plotting something. The Shadow Broker got involved when sending Zaeed after the mercenaries, and there's also Phoenix, the Renegade-incarnation of Cerberus. The quarian Migrant Fleet is hiding something. At the moment, GDI is just scrambling to keep up.

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* GambitPileup: The Reapers are plotting something. Kane is ''also'' plotting something. The Shadow Broker got involved when sending Zaeed after the mercenaries, and there's also Phoenix, the Renegade-incarnation of Cerberus. The quarian Migrant Fleet is hiding something. At the moment, GDI is just scrambling to keep up. And now [[spoiler: the Collectors]] have joined in....
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* PlanetOfHats: Averted. Shepard asks how Reegar got into the armory, then sees his omnitool, and assumes that since he's a quarian, he hacked the door. He swiftly counters that he doesn't know that much about tech, and instead fabricated several explosives using his omnitool.
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** Throughout Chapter Thirteen, many characters surviving near death experiences echo [[CallOfDutyBlackOps Frank Woods]]' catchphrase: "Can't kill me."

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** Throughout Chapter Thirteen, many characters surviving near death experiences echo [[CallOfDutyBlackOps [[VideoGame/CallOfDutyBlackOps Frank Woods]]' catchphrase: "Can't kill me."
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* IdenticalGrandson: Lieutenant Anastasia Telfair's description almost exactly matches that of Lieutenant Sandra Telfair, her ancestor from the ''Tiberium'' games, save for having some blonde streaks in her hair and blue eyes. Captain Aldis rawne, a Nod ship captain, also closely resembles Commander Rawne from ''Fanic/TiberiumWars.''

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* IdenticalGrandson: Lieutenant Anastasia Telfair's description almost exactly matches that of Lieutenant Sandra Telfair, her ancestor from the ''Tiberium'' games, save for having some blonde streaks in her hair and blue eyes. Captain Aldis rawne, Rawne, a Nod ship captain, also closely resembles Commander Rawne from ''Fanic/TiberiumWars.''Fanfic/TiberiumWars.''

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* IdenticalGrandson: Lieutenant Anastasia Telfair's description almost exactly matches that of Lieutenant Sandra Telfair, her ancestor from the ''Tiberium'' games, save for having some blonde streaks in her hair and blue eyes.

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* IdenticalGrandson: Lieutenant Anastasia Telfair's description almost exactly matches that of Lieutenant Sandra Telfair, her ancestor from the ''Tiberium'' games, save for having some blonde streaks in her hair and blue eyes. Captain Aldis rawne, a Nod ship captain, also closely resembles Commander Rawne from ''Fanic/TiberiumWars.''



** Captain [[VideoGame/JaggedAlliance Ivan Dolvich]]. There's also a [[VideoGame/ModernWarfare Private Wallcroft]].

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** Captain [[VideoGame/JaggedAlliance Ivan Dolvich]].Dolvich and Major Barry Unger]]. There's also a [[VideoGame/ModernWarfare Private Wallcroft]].


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** One Citadel Spectre is named [[Literature/CodexAlera Octavian]].
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** A more villainous example (and its not clear yet what's caused it) is [[spoiler: the Collectors starting the harvest a few years earlier than expected]].
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** By the "Ghosts" interlude, things have leapt completely off the rails, with [[spoiler: the Collectors starting their attacks a couple of years early.]]
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* ApocalypticLog: A Nod Marked of Kane cyborg leaves one on the colony of Eskirk while dying, detailing [[spoiler: the Collectors' arrival.]]


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** Thane [[spoiler: is a Citadel Spectre]] in this timeline.


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* FromBadToWorse: The story starts out with things bad, with the Scrin backing up the geth and Sovereign on Eden Prime. Then the Scrin [[spoiler: attack the Citadel itself]]. Then [[spoiler: the Collectors start showing up a whole lot earlier....]]

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** Peptuck has stated that GDI and Nod forces will throw down with a Reaper however.



* DynamicEntry: Garrus and Zaeed are both fans of this kind of entry. Locke's Phoenix team uses this as well when they ambush Miranda's squad. Pops up so often in Chapter 12 that the chapter is even titled "Dynamic Entry."

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* DynamicEntry: Garrus and Zaeed are both fans of this kind of entry. Locke's Phoenix team uses this as well when they ambush Miranda's squad. Pops up so often in Chapter 12 that the chapter is even titled "Dynamic Entry."" The Scrin Battlemind also favors this method of entering the battlefield.



* [[ImplacableMan Implacable Ship]]: When [[spoiler: Sovereign]] attacks Eden Prime, [[spoiler: it takes a direct broadside from a GDI orbital defense platform, which has six dreadnought-grade ion cannons on it, without blinking.]]

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* [[ImplacableMan Implacable Ship]]: ImplacableMan:
** All of the Scrin sect known as Reaper-18 exhibit these traits, with warrior forms that can wade through small arms fire without slowing (Intruders) take dozens of grenades without stopping (the Ravagers), can actively regenerate from any injuries and require antitank weapons to put down (Corrupters) or simply tanking fire from entire GDI platoons, complete with biotics, and not even giving a damn (the Battleminds).
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When [[spoiler: Sovereign]] attacks Eden Prime, [[spoiler: it takes a direct broadside from a GDI orbital defense platform, which has six dreadnought-grade ion cannons on it, without blinking.]]



* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler: Kane]]. When you're [[spoiler: the head of an infamous terrorist/criminal/fanatical religious organization]] who manages to steal [[spoiler: the Tacitus]], one of the most valuable artifacts to both the Citadel and GDI, then turn around and negotiate a compromise between the two to make yourself look like the reasonable and level-headed one, you're a definite case of this.

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[[spoiler: Kane]]. When you're [[spoiler: the head of an infamous terrorist/criminal/fanatical religious organization]] who manages to steal [[spoiler: the Tacitus]], one of the most valuable artifacts to both the Citadel and GDI, then turn around and negotiate a compromise between the two to make yourself look like the reasonable and level-headed one, you're a definite case of this. In fact, [[spoiler: this is pretty much Kane's entire methodology, as he doesn't have the massive base of support he had on Earth, and is forced to play the role of secretive manipulator using his minimal resources to make himself look bigger than he really is.]]
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** Throughout Chapter Thirteen, many characters surviving near death experiences echo [[CallOfDutyBlackOps Frank Woods]]' catchphrase: "Can't kill me."
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** The Scrin Battlemind uses this as its primary means of getting around. Garrus eventually gets annoyed that it's stealing his schtick.

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* RammingAlwaysWorks: ''Udina,'' surprisingly. He manages to take out the Battlemind by ramming an aircar into it, sending both twenty feet until they hit a wall and causes the Battlemind to stain everything in a twenty-foot radius to be covered in silvery gore.
* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: GDI does ''not'' take the Batarian Hegemony's funding of pirates and slavers lightly.



* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: GDI does ''not'' take the Batarian Hegemony's funding of pirates and slavers lightly.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Literally. Nod and Phoenix are violently hostile to one another, but in Chapter 12, [[spoiler: both Miranda and Locke are trying to assist the GDI Embassy against the Scrin. Miranda is killing Masterminds to keep them from teleporting in reinforcements, while Locke is trying to analyze the Masterminds so that the Illusive Man can hack them and do the Scrin equivalent of a [[=DDoS=]] attack.]]

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* PoorCommunicationKills: Literally. Nod and Phoenix are violently hostile to one another, but in Chapter 12, [[spoiler: both Miranda and Locke are trying to assist the GDI Embassy against the Scrin. Miranda is killing Masterminds to keep them from teleporting in reinforcements, while Locke is trying to analyze the Masterminds so that the Illusive Man can hack them and do the Scrin equivalent of a [[=DDoS=]] attack. Then again, from Miranda's [[OhCrap reaction]] to Locke's arrival, neither Phoenix or Nod are exactly on speaking terms.]]
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** When Jacob and Zaeed are talking in Chapter 9, mention is made of a "maxim" that "The enemy of my enemy is my enemy's enemy." Which is [[SchlockMercenary Maxim Twenty-Nine]].

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** When Jacob and Zaeed are talking in Chapter 9, mention is made of a "maxim" that "The enemy of my enemy is my enemy's enemy." Which is [[SchlockMercenary [[Webcomic/SchlockMercenary Maxim Twenty-Nine]].
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* OneManArmy: The first chapter has Shepard eliminate 500 Batarians by herself, and it just gets better from there.

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* OneManArmy: The first chapter has Shepard eliminate 500 Batarians by herself, holding off five hundred Batarian slavers with "her rifle and shouted profanity", and it just gets better from there.
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** Tali is her canon self mixed with the stealth skills of [[SplinterCell Sam Fisher]] and [[MetalGearSolid Solid Snake]], with a [[VideoGame/{{Crysis}} Nanosuit]].

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** Tali is her canon self mixed with the stealth skills of [[SplinterCell Sam Fisher]] and [[MetalGearSolid [[Franchise/MetalGear Solid Snake]], with a [[VideoGame/{{Crysis}} Nanosuit]].

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