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Fanfic/RedBundle is a ''WesternAnimation/StarVsTheForcesOfEvil'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/9981687/ Prinnyramza]] that asks the question "If eight minutes were sixteen years than couldn't a second have been another hour?"
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Fanfic/RedBundle is a ''WesternAnimation/StarVsTheForcesOfEvil'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/9981687/ Prinnyramza]] that asks the question "If eight minutes were sixteen years than years, then couldn't a second have been another hour?"
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: [[spoiler: Turns out, no, parents will not be happy to know that their teenage son has gotten someone pregnant and they won't care if you say you're thirty if you still look fourteen.]]
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* WhatTheHellIsThatAccent: Alphonso. When he speaks his words like with descriptions such as they "fizzed like a bottle of club soda"
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* WhatTheHellIsThatAccent: Alphonso. When he speaks his words like with are given descriptions such as they "fizzed like a bottle of club soda"
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* RealityEnsues: [[spoiler: Turns out, no, parents will not be happy to know that their teenage son has gotten someone pregnant and they won't care if you say you're thirty if you still look fourteen.]]
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* RealityEnsues: SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: [[spoiler: Turns out, no, parents will not be happy to know that their teenage son has gotten someone pregnant and they won't care if you say you're thirty if you still look fourteen.]]
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* AffablyEvil: The manticore in Chapter 9 is friendly with the main characters up until he finds out Star is the princess of Mewni.
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* [[spoiler: Abusive Parents: Jackie's birth mother who got a servant to abandon Jackie when she was a kid]]
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* [[spoiler: Abusive Parents: AbusiveParents: Jackie's birth mother who got a servant to abandon Jackie when she was a kid]]
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* [[spoiler: Abusive Parents: Jackie's birth mother who got a servant to abandon Jackie when she was a kid]]
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Events from some episodes are implied to happen in the background, such as the Bounce Lounge closing and
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Events from some episodes are implied to happen in the background, such as the Bounce Lounge closing andand
* WhatTheHellIsThatAccent: Alphonso. When he speaks his words like with descriptions such as they "fizzed like a bottle of club soda"
* WhatTheHellIsThatAccent: Alphonso. When he speaks his words like with descriptions such as they "fizzed like a bottle of club soda"
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* StationsOfCanon: Events from some episodes are implied to happen in the background, such as the Bounce Lounge closing and
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* StationsOfCanon: TheStationsOfTheCanon: Events from some episodes are implied to happen in the background, such as the Bounce Lounge closing and
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* RealityEnsues: [[spoiler: Turns out, no, parents will not be happy to know that their teenage son has gotten someone pregnant and they won't care if you say you're thirty if you still look fourteen.]]
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* RealityEnsues: [[spoiler: Turns out, no, parents will not be happy to know that their teenage son has gotten someone pregnant and they won't care if you say you're thirty if you still look fourteen.]]]]
* StationsOfCanon: Events from some episodes are implied to happen in the background, such as the Bounce Lounge closing and
* StationsOfCanon: Events from some episodes are implied to happen in the background, such as the Bounce Lounge closing and
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* DisappearedDad: Implied with Fergerson.
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*[[spoiler: DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Discussed and averted. While the reader knows Hekapoo and Marco's relationship was consensual because of Marco's true age, Marco's mom is horrified by the implication of an adult woman having a child with her physically teenage son.]]
*RealityEnsues: [[spoiler: Turns out, no, parents will not be happy to know that their teenage son has gotten someone pregnant and they won't care if you say you're thirty if you still look fourteen.]]
*[[spoiler: DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Discussed and averted. While the reader knows Hekapoo and Marco's relationship was consensual because of Marco's true age, Marco's mom is horrified by the implication of an adult woman having a child with her physically teenage son.]]
*RealityEnsues: [[spoiler: Turns out, no, parents will not be happy to know that their teenage son has gotten someone pregnant and they won't care if you say you're thirty if you still look fourteen.]]
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Can be read on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/9705695/chapters/21899396 AO3]] or [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12739894/1/Red-Bundle FF.Net]]
Not to be confused with Fanfic/LikeFatherLikeDaughter, another story centered around Marco having a daughter with Hekapoo.
Not to be confused with Fanfic/LikeFatherLikeDaughter, another story centered around Marco having a daughter with Hekapoo.
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After finding Hekapoo in his closet stealing a hoodie, Marco later tries to have a conversation with her only to find out that said hoodie was made into a blanket for Hekapoo's new baby, his daughter.
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After finding Hekapoo in his closet stealing a hoodie, Marco later tries to have a conversation with her only to find out that said hoodie was made into a blanket for Hekapoo's new baby, his daughter. What comes next is a very awkward time as Marco has to explain his situation to the people closest to him.
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RedBundle is a ''WesternAnimation/StarVsTheForcesOfEvil'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/9981687/ Prinnyramza]] that asks the question "If eight minutes were sixteen years than couldn't a second have been another hour?"
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RedBundle is a ''WesternAnimation/StarVsTheForcesOfEvil'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/9981687/ Prinnyramza]] that asks the question "If eight minutes were sixteen years than couldn't a second have been another hour?"
After finding Hekapoo in his closet stealing a hoodie, Marco later tries to have a conversation with her only to find out that said hoodie was made into a blanket for Hekapoo's new baby, his daughter.
Can be read on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/9705695/chapters/21899396 AO3]] or [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12739894/1/Red-Bundle FF.Net]]
Not to be confused with Fanfic/LikeFatherLikeDaughter, another story centered around Marco having a daughter with Hekapoo.
After finding Hekapoo in his closet stealing a hoodie, Marco later tries to have a conversation with her only to find out that said hoodie was made into a blanket for Hekapoo's new baby, his daughter.
Can be read on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/9705695/chapters/21899396 AO3]] or [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12739894/1/Red-Bundle FF.Net]]
Not to be confused with Fanfic/LikeFatherLikeDaughter, another story centered around Marco having a daughter with Hekapoo.
