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* HiddenHeartOfGold: Bernard is obviously moved by the sacrifice of the brain bot, and later honors it with a placard.
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* HiddenHeartOfGold: Bernard is obviously moved by the sacrifice of the brain bot, and later honors it with a placard. [[JerkassFacade Not that he'd ever admit it though]].
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* WritersBlock: Music Man is struggling with songwriting since he has nothing to inspire him after his [[FakingTheDead apparent death]].
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* HiddenHeartOfGold: Bernard is obviously moved by the sacrifice of the brain bot, and later honors it with a placard.
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* TranquilFury: Megamind, [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness in a frighteningly OOC moment]], when he's preparing to finally kill Metro Man. [[spoiler:At least that's what he pretends to do.]]
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* TranquilFury: Megamind, [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness in a frighteningly OOC moment]], when he's preparing to finally kill Metro Man. [[spoiler:At least that's what he pretends to do.[[spoiler:Turns out it was only an act.]]
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* TranquilFury: Megamind, when he's preparing to finally kill Metro Man. [[spoiler:At least that's what he pretends to do.]]
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* TranquilFury: Megamind, [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness in a frighteningly OOC moment]], when he's preparing to finally kill Metro Man. [[spoiler:At least that's what he pretends to do.]]
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* DisneyDeath: [[spoiler: Minion]]Minion]].
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* ThatManIsDead: [[spoiler:Owen keeps trying to get people to use his chosen name of Fire Bug rather than his normal one or Beetle-Bomber]]
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* TranquilFury: Megamind, when he's preparing to finally kill Metro Man. [[spoiler:At least that's what he pretends to do.]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7032514/1/Rain-on-the-Just Rain on the Just]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/58021/N-L-Rummi N. L. Rummi]] certainly reads like a believable sequel to the film.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7032514/1/Rain-on-the-Just Rain on the Just]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/58021/N-L-Rummi N. L. Rummi]] certainly reads like a believable sequel to the film.
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* DamselInDistress: Roxanne
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** BadassDamsel: She tries to pry out details of her kidnapper's plan, manages to have the presence of mind to activate a tracking device, attempts to escape on her own by smashing open a window, warns Megamind that [[spoiler:Owen]] has a gun as soon as her boyfriend arrives, nearly wrestles a weapon out of [[spoiler:Owen's]] hands when he gets too close, and spends her entire captivity trying to keep things under control.
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* DamselInDistress: Roxanne
** BadassDamsel: SheRoxanne is kidnapped (again).
*DamselOutOfDistress: Roxanne tries to pry out details of her kidnapper's plan, manages to have the presence of mind to activate a tracking device, attempts to escape on her own by smashing open a window, warns Megamind that [[spoiler:Owen]] has a gun as soon as her boyfriend arrives, nearly wrestles a weapon out of [[spoiler:Owen's]] hands when he gets too close, [[DefiantCaptive and spends her entire captivity trying to keep things under control.]]
** BadassDamsel: She
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Meanwhile, life continues to have complications as a new villain has apparently targeted the city. Bombs are being left in various locations around Metro City. At each site, a card is left behind with the image of a bug and fire on it.
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* IfYouKillHimYoullBeJustLikeHim: [[spoiler:Thankfully Minion talks him out of that and Megamind just plays the part of one approaching the slippery slope instead]].
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* IfYouKillHimYoullBeJustLikeHim: IfYouKillHimYouWillBeJustLikeHim: [[spoiler:Thankfully Minion talks him out of that and Megamind just plays the part of one approaching the slippery slope instead]].
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** LoonyFan: He goes to some rather disturbing length to "help" his idol, including [[spoiler:blowing up several buildings, kidnapping Roxanne, and offering up a trapped Metro Man as a gift]].
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** LoonyFan: He goes to some rather disturbing length lengths to "help" his idol, including [[spoiler:blowing up several buildings, kidnapping Roxanne, and offering up a trapped Metro Man as a gift]].
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** BadassDamsel: She tries to pry out details of her kidnapper's plan, manages to have the presence of mind to activate a tracking device, attempts to escape on her own by smashing open a window, warns Megamind that [[spoiler:Owen]] has a gun as soon as her boyfriend arrives, nearly wrestles a weapon out of [[spoiler:Owen's]] hands when he gets too close, and spends her entire captivity trying to keep things under control.
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* DamselInDistress: Roxanne
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** BadassDamsel: She tries to pry out details of her kidnapper's plan, manages to have the presence of mind to activate a tracking device, attempts to escape on her own by smashing open a window, warns Megamind that [[spoiler:Owen]] has a gun as soon as her boyfriend arrives, nearly wrestles a weapon out of [[spoiler:Owen's]] hands when he gets too close, and spends her entire captivity trying to keep things under control.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7032514/1/Rain-on-the-Just Rain on the Just]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/58021/N-L-Rummi N. L. Rummi]] certainly reads like a believable sequel to the film.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7032514/1/Rain-on-the-Just Rain on the Just]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/58021/N-L-Rummi N. L. Rummi]] certainly reads like a believable sequel to the film.
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* BeserkButton: BerserkButton: In regards to Megamind, don't put Roxanne in danger, don't blow up parts of his city, and [[spoiler:don't try to kill Minion]]. He doesn't react well to that last one at all.
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* BeserkButton: In regards to Megamind, don't put Roxanne in danger, don't blow up parts of his city, and [[spoiler:don't try to kill Minion]]. He doesn't react well to that last one at all.
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After the events of the [[Film/{{Megamind}} film]], not everything is completely settled. It isn't easy to change overnight, after all. While Megamind deals with his new status as a hero (and the obsessive fanboys that can come with that role), Music Man (formerly known as Metro Man) is beginning to realize that maybe he didn't think the entire FakingTheDead plan out fully. Roxanne tries to help out both of them as much as possible while her boyfriend tries to gather the courage to say those three little words...
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After the events of the [[Film/{{Megamind}} film]], not everything is completely settled. It isn't easy to change overnight, after all. While Megamind deals with his new status as a hero (and the obsessive fanboys that can come with that role), Music Man (formerly known as Metro Man) Man or Wayne) is beginning to realize that maybe he didn't think the entire FakingTheDead plan out fully. Roxanne tries to help out both of them as much as possible while her boyfriend tries to gather the courage to say those three little words...
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* CallBack: Once more, Roxanne gets tied up to a chair.
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* {{Lampshading}}: In the words of Roxanne, "Is it too much to ask to not be tied to a chair for once?"
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* ChekhovsGun: The paradox gun
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* ChekhovsGunman: The guy Roxanne bumps into at the coffee shop with the phone.
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** BadassDamsel: She tries to pry out details of her kidnapper's plan, manages to have the presence of mind to activate a tracking device, attempts to escape on her own by smashing open a window, warns Megamind that [[spoiler:Owen]] has a gun as soon as her boyfriend arrives, nearly wrestles a weapon out of [[spoiler:Owen's]] hands when he gets too close, and spends her entire captivity trying to keep things under control.
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After the events of the [[Film/{{Megamind}} film]], not everything is completely settled. It isn't easy to change overnight, after all. While Megamind deals with his new status as a hero (and the obsessive fanboys that can come with that role), Music Man (formerly known as Metro Man) is beginning to realize that maybe he didn't think the entire FakeTheDead FakingTheDead plan out fully. Roxanne tries to help out both of them as much as possible, but possible while her boyfriend tries to gather the courage to say those three little words...
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bug and fire on it.
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After the events of the [[Film/{{Megamind}} film]], not everything is completely settled. It isn't easy to change overnight, after all. While Megamind deals with his new status as a hero (and the obsessive fanboys that can come with that role), Music Man (formerly known as Metro Man) is beginning to realize that maybe he didn't think the entire FakeTheDead plan out fully. Roxanne tries to help out both of them as much as possible, but life continues to have complications as a new villain has apparently targeted the city. Bombs are being planeted and only a card is left at the scene as a clue...
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7032514/1/Rain-on-the-Just Rain on the Just]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/58021/N-L-Rummi N. L. Rummi]] certainly reads like a believable sequel to the film.
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* {{Fanboy}}: Owen gives off the impression of being a particularly obsessive one.
* ShoutOut: Megamind references [[TheIncredibles Buddy/Syndrome's actions in the film]] as a reason why they can't just brush off Owen's attention
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7032514/1/Rain-on-the-Just Rain on the Just]]'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/58021/N-L-Rummi N. L. Rummi]] certainly reads like a believable sequel to the film.
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* {{Fanboy}}: Owen gives off the impression of being a particularly obsessive one.
* ShoutOut: Megamind references [[TheIncredibles Buddy/Syndrome's actions in the film]] as a reason why they can't just brush off Owen's attention