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** Also, [[SouthlandTales "Pimps don't commit suicide".]]
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* IKnewIt: Edrobot wrote "The Villain From Lighting Returns: Final Fantasy XIII" under the assumption that the game's villain would turn out to be [[spoiler: Bhunivelze]]. He turned out to be completely right about that.
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** In the first epilogue's dialogue between Andrew Hussie and [[spoiler:The Villain From VideoGame/LightingReturnsFinalFantasyXIII]], dialogue was cribbed from ''WaitingForGodot, {{Film/Paprika}}'', and ''Film/MysteryMen''.
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** In the first epilogue's dialogue between Andrew Hussie and [[spoiler:The Villain From VideoGame/LightingReturnsFinalFantasyXIII]], VideoGame/LightningReturnsFinalFantasyXIII]], dialogue was cribbed from ''WaitingForGodot, {{Film/Paprika}}'', and ''Film/MysteryMen''.
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It's still in the process of being ported to more popular sites like FanfictionDotNet and Ao3, [[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nSh1Vsvnvgh6uP0tqss50n5MQsFMUm2Sq5vQ5D3xfQM/pub but in the meantime you can read it here.]]
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* {{Crossover}} between {{Homestuck}}, LANoire, ''Franchise/{{Halo}}'', ''Franchise/MassEffect'', {{Bioshock}}, BioshockInfinite, ''VideoGame/RedDeadRedemption'', DoomPatrol, ''Series/GetSmart'', DeadPoetsSociety, and ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyXIII2''.
* [[EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep Everyone Calls Him The Evil Father From]] DeadPoetsSociety
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* {{Crossover}} between {{Homestuck}}, ''{{Homestuck}}, LANoire, ''Franchise/{{Halo}}'', ''Franchise/MassEffect'', {{Bioshock}}, BioshockInfinite, ''VideoGame/RedDeadRedemption'', Franchise/{{Halo}}, Franchise/MassEffect, VideoGame/{{BioShock1}}, VideoGame/BioShockInfinite, VideoGame/RedDeadRedemption, DoomPatrol, ''Series/GetSmart'', DeadPoetsSociety, Series/GetSmart, DeadPoetsSociety,'' and ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyXIII2''.
* [[EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep Everyone Calls Him The Evil Father From]]DeadPoetsSociety''Film/DeadPoetsSociety''.
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** In the first epilogue's dialogue between Andrew Hussie and [[spoiler:The Villain From Lighting Returns: Final Fantasy XIII]], VideoGame/LightingReturnsFinalFantasyXIII]], dialogue was cribbed from WaitingForGodot, {{Film/Paprika}}, ''WaitingForGodot, {{Film/Paprika}}'', and Film/MysteryMen.''Film/MysteryMen''.
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** A Luchador named RobLiefeld is blamed for having invented [[AtopTheFourthWall Youngbloods' Disease]]
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Cleaned the hottip from Ron The Death Eater. Removed that example since it\'s YMMV. If it\'s an invoked example, my apologies, feel free to re-add it with the invoked markup. Minus the hottip, please.
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* RonTheDeathEater: The Evil Father from DeadPoetsSociety[[hottip:*:AKA "Mr. Perry"]], who in this story murders people for [[GenericDoomsdayVillain no other reason than the fact that he's he's evil]].
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* TakeThat:
->TargetingComputer: But bruce! Star wasr is just a movie its not real! The force is just made up bullshit like Unicorns, the Loch Ness Monster, and [[AcceptablePoliticalTargets Tea Party]].
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* TheyKilledKennyAgain: Chole Phelps dies at least 5 different times in the same chapter.
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* FantasticRacism: Pops up here and there. Overcoming prejudice against [[spoiler:[[AttackOnTitan titans]]]] is basically the plot of Chapter 4.
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* FantasticRacism: Pops up here and there. Overcoming prejudice against [[spoiler:[[AttackOnTitan [[spoiler:[[Manga/AttackOnTitan titans]]]] is basically the plot of Chapter 4.
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* UnusualChapterNumbers: Chapter 15 is titled "Chapter 42" and chapter 20 is titled "Chapter 22".
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** [[spoiler: Travis' speech at the end is a variation of the [[FateStayNight Unlimited Blade Works chant]]]]
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* SpoilerTitle: Double subverted with the final chapter, "THIS TITLE HAS SPOILERS MAKING IT MORE AERODYNAMIC [[spoiler:ALSO SEIGNUR FRANCIES DIES]]"
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* AuthorAppeal: There's a few shout-outs to GrantMorrison, mostly because Edrobot is a huge fan of his.
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* AuthorAppeal: There's a few shout-outs to GrantMorrison, mostly because Edrobot (who wrote most of the outline) is a huge fan of his.
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* TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou: Vyro directly messes with the readers by making the book unbearably stupid, especially in the second epilogue.
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* TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou: Vyro directly messes with the readers by making the book unbearably stupid, especially in the second epilogue.epilogue.
* WackyWaysideTribe: [[DoomPatrol The Men From N.O.W.H.E.R.E.]] kidnap Travis at one point, and even (seemingly) kill Seigneur Français. But by the end of the chapter they've all but vanished in a PuffOfLogic.
* WackyWaysideTribe: [[DoomPatrol The Men From N.O.W.H.E.R.E.]] kidnap Travis at one point, and even (seemingly) kill Seigneur Français. But by the end of the chapter they've all but vanished in a PuffOfLogic.
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* AWizardDidIt: In Chapter 11, it's revealed that AT LEAST one chapter worth of inconsistencies and stupidity is because Vyro has a draft copy of the book, and he's writing bullshit to mess with people
* FeaturelessPlaneOfDisembodiedDialogue: All the time.
* ForTheEvulz: Signeur Francais' story-warping agent Vyro completely changes Trudy's world, helps Conroy Duex send Travis to Colombia, creates an evil corporation, and turns the ending into a shitty CYOA. Why? Because he can.
* ForTheEvulz: Signeur Francais' story-warping agent Vyro completely changes Trudy's world, helps Conroy Duex send Travis to Colombia, creates an evil corporation, and turns the ending into a shitty CYOA. Why? Because he can.
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* TimeParadox: [[spoiler: Cole Phelps becomes John Marston, who becomes Master Chief, who becomes Booker [=DeWitt=], who becomes Zachary Comstock, who then goes back to being Master Chief as part of a complicated time loop. And yet somehow later Cole, John, Booker and Chief are all fighting alongside each other in later chapters without so much as a mention of this.]]
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* TimeParadox: [[spoiler: Cole Phelps becomes John Marston, who becomes Master Chief, who becomes Booker [=DeWitt=], who becomes Zachary Comstock, who then goes back to being Master Chief as part of a complicated time loop. And yet somehow later Cole, John, Booker and Chief are all fighting alongside each other in later chapters without so much as a mention of this.]]]]
* TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou: Vyro directly messes with the readers by making the book unbearably stupid, especially in the second epilogue.
* TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou: Vyro directly messes with the readers by making the book unbearably stupid, especially in the second epilogue.
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* CliffHanger: "and no one knows if they survived. :( Keep reading to find out."
* RonTheDeathEater: The Evil Father from DeadPoetsSociety[[hottip:*:AKA "Mr. Perry"]], who in this story murders people for [[GenericDoomsdayVillain no other reason than the fact that he's he's evil]].
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* RonTheDeathEater: The Evil Father SongFic: Chapter 3 dips into this with lyrics from DeadPoetsSociety[[hottip:*:AKA "Mr. Perry"]], who in this story murders people for [[GenericDoomsdayVillain no other reason than the fact that he's he's evil]]."„The End“ from My Chemical Romance“."
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* {{Crossover}} between {{Homestuck}}, LANoire, ''Franchise/{{Halo}}'', ''FranchiseMassEffect'', {{Bioshock}}, BioshockInfinite, ''VideoGame/RedDeadRedemption'', DoomPatrol, ''Series/GetSmart'', DeadPoetsSociety, and ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyXIII2''.
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* {{Crossover}} between {{Homestuck}}, LANoire, ''Franchise/{{Halo}}'', ''FranchiseMassEffect'', ''Franchise/MassEffect'', {{Bioshock}}, BioshockInfinite, ''VideoGame/RedDeadRedemption'', DoomPatrol, ''Series/GetSmart'', DeadPoetsSociety, and ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyXIII2''.
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* {{Crossover}} between {{Homestuck}}, LANoire, {{Halo}}, MassEffect, {{Bioshock}}, BioshockInfinite, RedDeadRedemption, DoomPatrol, GetSmart, DeadPoetsSociety, and FinalFantasyXIII2.
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* {{Crossover}} between {{Homestuck}}, LANoire, {{Halo}}, MassEffect, ''Franchise/{{Halo}}'', ''FranchiseMassEffect'', {{Bioshock}}, BioshockInfinite, RedDeadRedemption, ''VideoGame/RedDeadRedemption'', DoomPatrol, GetSmart, ''Series/GetSmart'', DeadPoetsSociety, and FinalFantasyXIII2.''VideoGame/FinalFantasyXIII2''.
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It's still in the process of being ported to more popular sites like FanfictionDotNet and Ao3, but in the meantime you can read it here:
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It's still in the process of being ported to more popular sites like FanfictionDotNet and Ao3, [[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nSh1Vsvnvgh6uP0tqss50n5MQsFMUm2Sq5vQ5D3xfQM/pub but in the meantime you can read it here:
here.]]
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** Travis is named after Travis Tea, the alleged author of AtlantaNights.
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* {{Crossover}} between {{Homestuck}}, LANoir, {{Halo}}, MassEffect, {{Bioshock}}, BioshockInfinite, RedDeadRedemption, DoomPatrol, GetSmart, DeadPoetsSociety, and FinalFantasyXIII2.
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* {{Crossover}} between {{Homestuck}}, LANoir, LANoire, {{Halo}}, MassEffect, {{Bioshock}}, BioshockInfinite, RedDeadRedemption, DoomPatrol, GetSmart, DeadPoetsSociety, and FinalFantasyXIII2.
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* {{Crossover}} between {{Homestuck}}, LANoir, {{Halo}}, MassEffect, {{Bioshock}}, BioshockInfinite, RedDeadRedemption, DoomPatrol, GetSmart, DeadPoetsSociety, and FinalFantasyXIII2.
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** A Luchador named RobLiefeld is blamed for having invented [[AtopTheFourthWall Youngbloods' Disease]]
** The big twists at the end of Bioshock and BioshockInfinite are parodied, but in ways so outlandish that you'd be forgiven in thinking otherwise.
** Invoked in a later chapter:
->'''Targeting Computer:''' Bruce! You've switched off your targeting computer!\\
'''Troll Bruce Campbell:''' Yes I know. I did that because I'm going to use the force to blow it up as a refrence to [[StarWars start wars]]
* RonTheDeathEater: The Evil Father from DeadPoetsSociety[[hottip:*:AKA "Mr. Perry"]], who in this story murders people for [[GenericDoomsdayVillain no other reason than the fact that he's he'sevil]].evil]].
* TimeParadox: [[spoiler: Cole Phelps becomes John Marston, who becomes Master Chief, who becomes Booker [=DeWitt=], who becomes Zachary Comstock, who then goes back to being Master Chief as part of a complicated time loop. And yet somehow later Cole, John, Booker and Chief are all fighting alongside each other in later chapters without so much as a mention of this.]]
** The big twists at the end of Bioshock and BioshockInfinite are parodied, but in ways so outlandish that you'd be forgiven in thinking otherwise.
** Invoked in a later chapter:
->'''Targeting Computer:''' Bruce! You've switched off your targeting computer!\\
'''Troll Bruce Campbell:''' Yes I know. I did that because I'm going to use the force to blow it up as a refrence to [[StarWars start wars]]
* RonTheDeathEater: The Evil Father from DeadPoetsSociety[[hottip:*:AKA "Mr. Perry"]], who in this story murders people for [[GenericDoomsdayVillain no other reason than the fact that he's he's
* TimeParadox: [[spoiler: Cole Phelps becomes John Marston, who becomes Master Chief, who becomes Booker [=DeWitt=], who becomes Zachary Comstock, who then goes back to being Master Chief as part of a complicated time loop. And yet somehow later Cole, John, Booker and Chief are all fighting alongside each other in later chapters without so much as a mention of this.]]
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* [[EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep Everyone Calls Him The Evil Father From]] DeadPoetsSociety
** Also [[spoiler:The Villain From Lighting Returns: Final Fantasy XIII]] is not referred to as anything else.
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->''"TO BEGIN AT THE END, WE MUST END AT THE BEGINNING!"''
-->--Andrew Hussie
Inspired by AtlantaNights, Prospit Nights is a collaborative effort by the MSPaintAdventures forums that attempted to create [[SoBadItsGood the best, worst badfic of all time.]] As with AtlantaNights, each of the writers had to write a chapter using only a brief chapter and character outline without talking about their chapter with anyone else, leading to a nonsensical and convoluted plot that crosses over with everything from {{Bioshock}} to SamAndMax.
The "story" (such that it is), follows four kids; Trudy Tavis, Travis Trudy, Alex Alexson, and Vmsdfx Rewoi, as they stumble through a SBURB session that has fallen under seige by a malevolent entity known as Seigneur Français. But could the mysterious troll known as Reno Blight truly be behind everything? [[spoiler:Hell if I know.]]
The project was originally concieved by Edrobot (of Fanfic/JakeEnglishsMysteriousTheaterOfScientificRomanceFromTheYear3000 fame), though [=BlackHolePA=] took over about halfway through.
It's still in the process of being ported to more popular sites like FanfictionDotNet and Ao3, but in the meantime you can read it here:
!Tropes that can be found in this work include
* ArcWords: "To begin at the end, WE MUST END AT THE BEGINNING!"
** Also, [[SouthlandTales "Pimps don't commit suicide".]]
* BreakoutCharacter: Seigneur Français was originally an imaginary joke character from Webcomic/AlabasterTheDoomedSession, who Edrobot got permission to use.
* ParodySue: Trudy Travis. An [[HeroicAlbino Albino]], [[MixedAncestry Half-Japanese]] girl with mysterious powers that seem to change every chapter.
* ShoutOut:
** Trudy's land is [[FanFic/MyImmortal "The Land of Ebony and Darkness"]], while Travis' Land is [[FanFic/LightAndDarkTheAdventuresOfDarkYagami "The Land of Blood And Bananas".]]
* RonTheDeathEater: The Evil Father from DeadPoetsSociety[[hottip:*:AKA "Mr. Perry"]], who in this story murders people for [[GenericDoomsdayVillain no other reason than the fact that he's he's evil]].
-->--Andrew Hussie
Inspired by AtlantaNights, Prospit Nights is a collaborative effort by the MSPaintAdventures forums that attempted to create [[SoBadItsGood the best, worst badfic of all time.]] As with AtlantaNights, each of the writers had to write a chapter using only a brief chapter and character outline without talking about their chapter with anyone else, leading to a nonsensical and convoluted plot that crosses over with everything from {{Bioshock}} to SamAndMax.
The "story" (such that it is), follows four kids; Trudy Tavis, Travis Trudy, Alex Alexson, and Vmsdfx Rewoi, as they stumble through a SBURB session that has fallen under seige by a malevolent entity known as Seigneur Français. But could the mysterious troll known as Reno Blight truly be behind everything? [[spoiler:Hell if I know.]]
The project was originally concieved by Edrobot (of Fanfic/JakeEnglishsMysteriousTheaterOfScientificRomanceFromTheYear3000 fame), though [=BlackHolePA=] took over about halfway through.
It's still in the process of being ported to more popular sites like FanfictionDotNet and Ao3, but in the meantime you can read it here:
!Tropes that can be found in this work include
* ArcWords: "To begin at the end, WE MUST END AT THE BEGINNING!"
** Also, [[SouthlandTales "Pimps don't commit suicide".]]
* BreakoutCharacter: Seigneur Français was originally an imaginary joke character from Webcomic/AlabasterTheDoomedSession, who Edrobot got permission to use.
* ParodySue: Trudy Travis. An [[HeroicAlbino Albino]], [[MixedAncestry Half-Japanese]] girl with mysterious powers that seem to change every chapter.
* ShoutOut:
** Trudy's land is [[FanFic/MyImmortal "The Land of Ebony and Darkness"]], while Travis' Land is [[FanFic/LightAndDarkTheAdventuresOfDarkYagami "The Land of Blood And Bananas".]]
* RonTheDeathEater: The Evil Father from DeadPoetsSociety[[hottip:*:AKA "Mr. Perry"]], who in this story murders people for [[GenericDoomsdayVillain no other reason than the fact that he's he's evil]].
