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* LivingBattery: When its robot shell is destroyed, it turns out that E-123 Omega has one of these; the author commented that this was planned for absolutely ages.

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* LivingBattery: When its robot shell is destroyed, it It turns out that E-123 Omega [[spoiler:E-123 Omega]] has one of these; the author commented that this was planned for absolutely ages.
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* LivingBattery: When its robot shell is destroyed, it turns out that E-123 Omega has one of these; the author commented that this was planned for absolutely ages.
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The story is praised for maintaining the core personalities of the Canon Characters while exploring what could happen if they used their powers for darker and more selfish purposes in another world - for example, Sonic was reimagined as something of a mascot of an extremist left-wing political party that seems perfectly happy to be funded by criminal activities.

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The story is praised for maintaining the core personalities of the Canon Characters while exploring what could happen if they used their powers for darker and more selfish purposes in another world - for example, Sonic was reimagined as something of a mascot of an extremist left-wing a political party that seems perfectly happy to be funded by criminal activities.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: [[spoiler: Silver turns out be Shadow's son.]]


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* SexSlave: Knuckles forces Tails to serve as his sex toy in exchange for protection from the other inmates, knowing that Tails would never make it on his own.

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* ABNegative: Subverted. Shadow the Hedgehog does have a rare blood type - but it's B-. And so does Silver.
** In a case of DidDoTheResearch, WordOfGod is that it was chosen to combine drama with {{Foreshadowing}}...

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* ABNegative: Subverted. Shadow the Hedgehog does have a rare blood type - but it's B-. And so does Silver.
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Silver. In a case of DidDoTheResearch, WordOfGod is that it was chosen to combine drama with {{Foreshadowing}}...



* TheAlcatraz: Shadow has apparently tried to escape Prison Island and failed - and apparently he's actually gotten the furthest of any convict. He's pretty angry at Sonic for insisting that he can.

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* TheAlcatraz: TheAlcatraz:
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Shadow has apparently tried to escape Prison Island and failed - and apparently he's actually gotten the furthest of any convict. He's pretty angry at Sonic for insisting that he can.
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* AssholeVictim: Silver was sent to prison for killing someone who would have later raped and killed a bus full of children. Since his only evidence was his physic foresight, he's treated just the same as the other super-powered criminals.

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* AssholeVictim: Silver was sent to prison for killing someone who would have later raped and killed a bus full of children. Since his only evidence was his physic psychic foresight, he's treated just the same as the other super-powered criminals.

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* BloodierAndGorier: It's not just darker. The writer takes great pleasure in writing bloody battle scenes, some of the scenes in the riot arc being undeniable {{Gorn}}.



* {{Gorn}}: There are a large number of unashamedly bloody scenes that sometimes sink to OverdrawnAtTheBloodBank levels. While not every battle scene involves a fountain of blood, the writer clearly enjoys it when they do.
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* {{Gorn}}: There are a large number of unashamedly bloody scenes that sometimes sink to OverdrawnAtTheBloodBank levels. While not every battle scene involves a fountain of blood, the writer clearly enjoys it when they do.
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* FaceDeathWithDignity: [[spoiler: Nack]] faces Mephiles during the riot and takes two bullets to the leg, and they have some brilliant back-and-forth - but when Mephiles offers him a trade, his life for snitching, he throws out some awesome lines:
--> '''Mephiles:''' So, do you have any memorable last words?
--> '''[[spoiler:Nack:]]''' Yeah... Guess I'm gonna die the way I lived. At the wrong end of a gun...
--> '''Mephiles:''' Very nice. Very poetic. ''(fires twice)'' Now you get to die... all alone.
--> '''[[spoiler:Nack:]]''' See you in hell, Mephiles...
** He doesn't die right there, either. Even after taking four bullets, he gets the HELL of a {{Tearjerker}} conversation, before his very last words...
--> Dying in the arms of somebody who cares... is all that makes life worth living...
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** WordOfGod is that the author used this 'psychic' approach as opposed to the contorted time-travelling that took place in Sonic2006 (when Silver first canonically appeared).

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** WordOfGod is that the author used this 'psychic' approach as opposed to the contorted time-travelling that took place in Sonic2006 VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog2006 (when Silver first canonically appeared).
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* TheNicknamer: Sonic and Shadow both come up with a variety of nicknames for the group. It's rare that they'll ever call anyone by their actual name.
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* AbsurdlySpaciousSewer: The gang end up in one of these. It's even the title of the chapter.

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* AbsurdlySpaciousSewer: The gang end up in one of these.these in chapter 76. It's even the title of the chapter.
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* AbsurdlySpaciousSewer: The gang end up in one of these. It's even the title of the chapter.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Sonic asks Shadow to get rid of the dead weight on their team, hoping the black and red hedgehog will just scare Silver away. Shadow has other ideas, culminating in him [[spoiler: murdering Espio and Vector in the prison shower.]] Sonic is understandably horrified.

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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Sonic asks Shadow to get rid of the dead weight on their team, hoping the black and red hedgehog will just scare Silver away. Shadow has other ideas, a different definition of 'dead weight' culminating in him [[spoiler: murdering Espio and Vector in the prison shower.]] Sonic is understandably horrified.
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* DoesNotLikeGuns: Guns make Sonic very uncomfortable. When the group get their hands on a crate of firearms, he's the only one hesitant to use them.

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* DeadFic: NOT TRUE. While some Followers fear it to be true, the story continues, although it is split between two accounts.

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* DeadFic: NOT TRUE. While some Followers fear It looked like it to be true, for a time, but the story continues, although it is split between two accounts.author returned after a two-year hiatus with the explanation that she'd been tied down with Bulimia Nervosa.



** But the story itself is better known for its meta-inversion. The readers don't need to forgive the protagonists for any of their crimes to enjoy the story, and are encouraged to remember. At first glance that's just the writer being inoffensive to RealLife victims. It's odd though; you find yourself feeling sorry for them a lot. Don't worry; there's nothing wrong with you. WordOfGod is that this is exactly how you're ''supposed'' to feel; the conditions in the prison are so horrific, so corrupt, so inhumane, that even these murderers and rapists are getting DisproportionateRetribution. That clash of emotions you're getting? That's ''intentional.'' You have to feel it to believe it.
* EmbarrassingFirstName: Shadow the Hedgehog's full name is [[GenderBlenderName "Ursula Leslie Robotnik",]] which is why he insists that everybody call him Shadow, but Sonic occasionally embarrasses him with it. At one point he explains that it means "Oops, we expected a girl."

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** But the The story itself is better known for its presents meta-inversion. The readers don't need to forgive the protagonists for any of their crimes to enjoy the story, and are encouraged to remember. At first glance that's just the writer being inoffensive to RealLife victims. It's odd though; remember, but you find yourself feeling sorry for them a lot. Don't worry; there's nothing wrong with you. WordOfGod is that this is exactly how you're ''supposed'' to feel; the conditions in the prison are so horrific, so corrupt, so inhumane, that even these murderers and rapists are getting DisproportionateRetribution. That clash of emotions you're getting? That's ''intentional.'' You have to feel it to believe it.
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* EmbarrassingFirstName: Shadow the Hedgehog's full name is [[GenderBlenderName "Ursula Leslie Robotnik",]] which is why he insists that everybody call him Shadow, but Sonic occasionally embarrasses him with it. At one point he explains jokes that it means "Oops, we expected a girl."



* FiveManBand: Okay, they're bad... but they're still the guys you should be rooting for, and there's five of them. They fit so neatly they don't need the slightest ounce of justification.

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* FiveManBand: Okay, they're bad... but they're still the guys you should be rooting for, and there's five of them. They fit so neatly as they don't need the slightest ounce of justification.do in canon.



* IfItsYouItsOkay: Shadow is not gay. [[spoiler: That doesn't stop him from getting hot and heavy with Sonic.]] They're interrupted before it can actually go anywhere, though.

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* IfItsYouItsOkay: Shadow is not gay. [[spoiler: That doesn't stop him from getting hot and heavy with Sonic.]] They're interrupted before it can actually go anywhere, though.[[spoiler:Sonic.]]



* IncorruptiblePurePureness: The prison doctor Amy Rose Blossom is intended to be this. However she is not a PuritySue due to her SympathyForTheDevil, a flaw which has her sympathising with the convicts whom the story actually revolves around. She is far from the Protagonist, and while she proves very convincing, certainly doesn't control the other characters.

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* IncorruptiblePurePureness: The prison doctor Amy Rose Blossom is intended to be this. However she is not a PuritySue due to her SympathyForTheDevil, a flaw which has her sympathising with the convicts whom the story actually revolves around. She is far from the Protagonist, and while she proves very convincing, certainly doesn't control the other characters.



* PsychicPowers: Silver has [[MindOverMatter telekinesis]] and can [[{{Seers}} predict the future.]] Upon arrival at Prison Island he's given an injection that takes away those powers.

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* PsychicPowers: Silver has [[MindOverMatter telekinesis]] and claims he can [[{{Seers}} predict the future.]] Upon arrival at Prison Island he's given an injection that takes away those powers.



* RapeAsBackStory: Shadow the Hedgehog was sexually abused by his Foster parents. Later it is explained via flashback that his Foster father repeatedly forced him to have sex with his (willing) Foster mother, leading him to interpret sex as an act of punishment, rather than pleasure. The reason it is not discussed in depth is because, quite simply, he doesn't want to talk about it.

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* RapeAsBackStory: Shadow the Hedgehog was sexually abused by his Foster parents. Later it is explained via flashback that his Foster father repeatedly forced him to have sex with his (willing) Foster mother, leading him to interpret sex as an act of punishment, rather than pleasure. The reason it is not discussed in depth is because, quite simply, he doesn't want to talk about it.



** Shadow and Silver had elements of this, [[spoiler: until it was revealed that they were father and son.]]

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** Shadow and Silver had elements of this, [[spoiler: until it [[spoiler:it was revealed that they were father and son.]]



* StrawMisogynist: Heterosexual major character Shadow the Hedgehog hates women, loudly classing them as sub-people. This is how he justifies his violence towards them to himself. The sole exception seems to be Maria. Interestingly, his hatred for women is the sole facet of his personality that is neither justified nor explained.
** This seems to be intentional. Subtext suggests that Shadow doesn't ''really'' hate women (at least no more so than he dislikes just about every other living creature); he just rapes and murders them and claims that he did so because he hates them.

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* StrawMisogynist: Heterosexual major character Shadow the Hedgehog hates women, loudly classing them as sub-people. This is how he justifies his violence towards them to himself. The sole himself, the exception seems to be being Maria. Interestingly, his hatred for women is the sole facet of his personality that is neither justified nor explained.
** This seems to be intentional.
Subtext suggests that Shadow doesn't ''really'' hate women (at least no more so than he dislikes just about every other living creature); everyone else); he just rapes and murders them and claims that he did so because he hates them.



* [[VillainProtagonist Villain Protagonists:]] The whole main cast consists of violent convicted criminals. They don't even have a particuarly heroic goal; they just want to escape. But because the story is centered on them, they get the SympatheticPOV and you completely forget they're a collection of terrorists, serial killers and rapists (even though the writer never lets you forget).

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* [[VillainProtagonist Villain Protagonists:]] The whole main cast consists of violent convicted criminals. They don't even have a particuarly particularly heroic goal; motive; they just want to escape. But because the story is centered on them, they get the SympatheticPOV and you completely can almost forget they're a collection of terrorists, serial killers and rapists (even though the writer never lets you forget).rapists.



-->But y'know what… what's weird? My dad was always sayin' I was a total fuck-up as a son and a Merc… When I first got locked up in medium-sec, he… he visited just to remind me… He was like that to [[spoiler:Nic,]] too. Treated her like a failure as soon as she could walk… And last time he visited, he told me I was gonna die alone and a failure… Y'know, him bein' so wrong 'bout that is… kinda makin' this the best day of my life…

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-->But -->"But y'know what… what's weird? My dad was always sayin' I was a total fuck-up as a son and a Merc… When I first got locked up in medium-sec, he… he visited just to remind me… He was like that to [[spoiler:Nic,]] too. Treated her like a failure as soon as she could walk… And last time he visited, he told me I was gonna die alone and a failure… Y'know, him bein' so wrong 'bout that is… kinda makin' this the best day of my life…life…"



* WouldntHurtAChild: Shadow would never hurt a child.

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* WouldntHurtAChild: Shadow would never hurt a child.Shadow.



* YourHeadAsplode: Silver kills a future rapist in this matter. However nobody believes this was really going to happen and even the author suggests he may simply be insane.
* YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters: Sonic, Manic and Tails consider themselves this to some degree, being members of an undefined extremist political party opposing the current government. Sonic is even one of its mascots. However Sonic robbed banks, Manic has destroyed government buildings, and Tails committed international fraud to fund them. The author suggests that the party they belong to should currently be thought of as being on a level with the IRA.
** The IRA is officially responsible for at least 2000 deaths and a lot more deaths can be attributed to supporters who weren't acting on orders. WordOfGod is that the author ''knows'' this, and even though 'only' 36% of those deaths were civilian, it still makes Sonic's status as a political mascot a little less heroic...

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* YourHeadAsplode: Silver kills a (suggested) future rapist in this matter. However nobody believes this was really going to happen and even the author suggests he may simply be insane.
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* YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters: Sonic, Manic and Tails consider themselves this to some degree, being members of an undefined extremist political party opposing the current government. Sonic is even one of its mascots. However Sonic robbed banks, Manic has destroyed government buildings, and Tails committed international fraud to fund them.
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The author suggests that compares them to the party they belong to should currently be thought of as being on a level with the IRA.
** The IRA is officially responsible for at least 2000 deaths
Irish Republican Army (or IRA) and a lot more deaths can be attributed to supporters who weren't acting on orders. WordOfGod is that the author ''knows'' this, and even though 'only' 36% of those deaths were civilian, it still makes Sonic's status as a political mascot a little less heroic...
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: E-123 Omega is probably the only guard who does his job properly.

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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: E-123 Omega is probably the only guard who does his job properly. He seems to sincerely question the inhumane acts performed by the Warden, obliges Silver's request to visit a sectioned [[spoiler: Shadow,]] and listens to what Sonic has to say.

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* PornWithPlot: There is a MASSIVE amount of graphically detailed porn in this story. Interspersed with a massive amount of drama.

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* PornWithPlot: There is a MASSIVE amount of graphically detailed porn in this story. some of the scenes. Interspersed with a massive amount of drama. drama and violence. To quote WordOfGod though...
--> '''Breech:''' ''(quoted from a chat)'' "Well YAH, I don't JUST write hardcore, ya know. Some of my best stuff is almost 85% free of sex."
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* BeneathTheMask:
** Shadow has a lot going on under the psychopathic exterior, but one of his more pitiable qualities is his subconscious desire for somebody who is strong enough to control him; this is what draws him to Sonic.
** Despite his physical inadequacy, Silver has shown signs of being increasingly crazy.
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: Vector is at the top of a criminal empire and he's just as dangerous if not more so as his subordinates. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] because he had to climb his way to the top, he wouldn't be in that position if he wasn't {{Badass}}.

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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: Vector is at the top of a criminal empire and he's just as dangerous if not more so as his subordinates. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] because he had to climb his way to the top, he wouldn't be in that position if he wasn't {{Badass}}.badass.

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* DueToTheDead: There is a funeral in which nine convicts are buried in the prison grounds. One of the prison customs is that the killer, if known, should dig the grave; otherwise one of their closest should do it. Shadow ends up digging and filling in four graves, and attends the funeral, showing great respect for the dead. Several other cons follow his example.

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* DueToTheDead: There is a funeral in which nine convicts are buried in the prison grounds. One of the prison customs is that the killer, if known, should dig the grave; otherwise one of their closest should do it. Shadow ends up digging and filling in four graves, and attends the their funeral, showing great respect for the dead. Several other cons follow his example.example.
** Interestingly, while it is mentioned that 'several wardens' and Amy Rose attend, Mephiles is ''not'' mentioned as attending, another thing that makes him all the less humane.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: During the funeral, it's not just our heroes who show respect for the dead; other convicts are shown to break down emotionally, including a Jock described as being "as broad as he is tall" as his bitch is lowered. At the same time, the other convicts do not mock them for it.

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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Emphasised. During the funeral, it's not just our heroes who show funeral after the riot, as nine convicts are buried Silver is surprised at how much respect for Shadow shows to the dead; dead, even the ones he killed, with other convicts following his example. Extras who are shown to break down emotionally, including characterised only as being convicts follow his example and UnnamedCharacters display huge emotion for various losses. Notably, a Jock described as being "as "almost as broad as he is was tall" who would otherwise be a LivingProp breaks down in tears as his bitch is lowered. At the same time, the other convicts do not mock them for it.lowered:
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--> Jock: ''(bursting into tears)'' "You can't put him down there! He's afraid of the dark!"
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* DueToTheDead: There is a funeral in which nine convicts are buried in the prison grounds. One of the prison customs is that the killer, if known, should dig the grave; otherwise one of their closest should do it. Shadow ends up digging and filling in four graves, and attends the funeral, showing great respect for the dead. Several other cons follow his example.


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** After the riot Shadow gives the eulogy of a character named as a rabbit called Johnny Lightfoot. In the Fleetway series a similar character called Johnny Lightfoot was also killed off for real.
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* ALighterShadeOfBlack: The protragonists that you should be rooting for are criminals - not framed, not vandals, but murderers and rapists. Mephiles is portrayed as being worse because he is so corrupt and sadistic.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: E-123 Omega is probably the only guard who does his job properly.
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* FreakyFridayFlip: Finivetus and Eggman do this to [[spoiler: Sonic and Scourge.]] Everyone is very much creeped out.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Sonic asks Shadow to get rid of the dead weight on their team, hoping the black and red hedgehog will just scare Silver away. Shadow has other ideas, culminating in him [[spoiler: murdering Espio and Vector in the prison shower.]] Sonic is understandably horrified.


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* KilledOffForReal: As of Chapter 73, [[spoiler: Nack, Manic, Vector and Espio]] are all dead.


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* PutOnABus: Mina Mongoose. The author doesn't like her all that much, so she probably won't make another appearance.
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** Scourge tries this on to Sonic when the two of them become cell mates. He fails. [[spoiler: The second time, however...]]

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** Scourge tries this on to Sonic when the two of them become cell mates. He fails. [[spoiler: The second time, however...]]



* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: This is the reason for Shadow's infatuation with Amy. It's also the why he develops feelings for [[spoiler: Sonia.]]

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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: This is the reason for Shadow's infatuation with Amy. It's also the why he develops feelings for [[spoiler: Sonia.]]

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