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%% During the story involving thr logging company, Cassie does lampshade the need for Andalites to have a phonetic language when they don't have mouths. Marco guessed it's for interplanetary relations. Ax confirms and explains this in [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/4713362/chapters/10765475#workskin Chapter 3 of The Recovery]].

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%% During the story involving thr the logging company, Cassie does lampshade the need for Andalites to have a phonetic language when they don't have mouths. Marco guessed it's for interplanetary relations. Ax confirms and explains this in [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/4713362/chapters/10765475#workskin Chapter 3 of The Recovery]].



%% Many RationalFic main characters often have an underlying assumption that they know what's best for everybody. Cassie is no different, except she's got the other Animorphs to refuse to put up with that kind of bullshit.

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%% Many RationalFic main characters often have an underlying assumption that they know what's best for everybody. Cassie is no different, except she's got the other Animorphs to refuse to put up with that kind of bullshit.bullshit.

%% https://archiveofourown.org/works/6115642/chapters/14017508#workskin
%% Reality of using oatmeal against Yeerks

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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Jordan, one of Rachel's younger sisters.
--> ''Jordan was a couple of years younger than Rachel, and looked like Rachel in miniature. I don't mean that she looked how Rachel had at her age; Rachel at her age had worn khaki shorts and had the lean muscles of an amateur gymnast and gone lizard-catching with me in the river. I mean that if you looked at Rachel now and tried to imagine her a couple of years younger, you'd have a pretty good picture of Jordan.''



%% During the story involving 5hr logging company, Cassie does lampshade the need for Andalites to have a phonetic language when they don't have mouths. Marco guessed it's for interplanetary relations. Ax confirms and explains this in [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/4713362/chapters/10765475#workskin Chapter 3 of The Recovery]].

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%% During the story involving 5hr thr logging company, Cassie does lampshade the need for Andalites to have a phonetic language when they don't have mouths. Marco guessed it's for interplanetary relations. Ax confirms and explains this in [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/4713362/chapters/10765475#workskin Chapter 3 of The Recovery]].



%% Ever since the Dapsen logging incident, Cassie has confided that her Study Group was actually an Environmental Activist group.m

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%% Ever since the Dapsen logging incident, Cassie has confided that her Study Group was actually an Environmental Activist group.m
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%% Many RationalFic main characters often have an underlying assumption that she knows what's best for everybody. Cassie is no different, except she's got the other Animorphs to refuse to put up with that kind of bullshit.

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%% Many RationalFic main characters often have an underlying assumption that she knows they know what's best for everybody. Cassie is no different, except she's got the other Animorphs to refuse to put up with that kind of bullshit.
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* DwindlingParty: In ''The Translocation'', same as the book it's covering ''The Decision'', except the first disappearance occurs only sometime after the Animorphs reach Galuit. And this time, the order is not only different, but has a logical pattern in the form of thought-speak range: shortest to longest, Rachel, Marco, Jake, Cassie, Tobias, Ax.
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* HollywoodChameleons: Defied when Marco asks Cassie if she has chameleons available for acquiring.
--> '''Cassie:''' Contrary to popular belief, the Wildlife Rehabilitation Center does not function solely as a source of DNA for shapeshifting guerilla warriors. And chameleons don't have nearly as good camoflage as the cartoons would have you believe. Now, cuttlefish, on the other hand…”
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* HandSignals: According to Ax, andalites used this method to communicate before proceeding with thought-speak.

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* HandSignals: According to Ax, andalites used this method to communicate before proceeding with thought-speak. Cassie's asked him to teach her this language.
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%% Unlike in canon, the shark chips ''aren't'' [[LoadBearingBoss vaporized when the underwater base self-destructs]]
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* TakeAThirdOption: In ''The Offer'', on top of what they do in canon with what the Ellimist "provides", they accept his other offer…on the condition that the Animorphs remain to fight.

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* TakeAThirdOption: In ''The Offer'', on top of what they do in canon with what the Ellimist "provides", they accept his other offer…on the condition that the Animorphs remain to fight. What this means exactly is that it's ''other people'' who are taken to the Ellimist's refuge planet instead of the Animorphs.



* TemptingFate: Marco discusses this when he heard Cassie drugged Jake/Temrash's sandwich with sedative. He said as he looked to the sky, “Oh, nothing. Just waiting for Tobias to come streaking across the sky screaming 'he's escaped!' That sort of thing always happens when somebody starts talking optimistically. No one streaked across the sky until ''lunch'', and it was ''Ax'' who did rather than Tobias, who had been held hostage.

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* TemptingFate: Marco discusses this when he heard Cassie drugged Jake/Temrash's sandwich with sedative. He said as he looked to the sky, “Oh, nothing. Just waiting for Tobias to come streaking across the sky screaming 'he's escaped!' That sort of thing always happens when somebody starts talking optimistically. " No one streaked across the sky until ''lunch'', and it was ''Ax'' who did rather than Tobias, who had been held hostage.
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* EmotionBomb: During one of Temrash's escape attempts, Cassie staggers him by emanating her negative emotions (he had beaned her with a rock moments ago). She considers the possible uses of this "thought-speak emotional blast" later on.

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* EmotionBomb: During one of Temrash's escape attempts, Cassie staggers him by emanating her negative emotions (he had beaned her with a rock moments ago). She considers the possible uses of this "thought-speak emotional blast" later on.on, and applies them in later books.
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* ItGetsEasier: Cassie fears this of her team, [[https://archiveofourown.org/chapters/12777149 thus why she moralizes]] despite coming off as a hypocrite sometimes.
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* HandSignals: According to Ax, andalites used this method to communicate before proceeding with thought-speak.
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** And we get Capt. Torreli in ''The Endemic'', who tussles with a hork-bajir, and body-flips her over.

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** And we get Capt. Torreli in ''The Endemic'', who tussles with a hork-bajir, and body-flips her over. And this feat is enough for all other Controllers to be stunned in disbelief long enough for him to escape and for Ax to get between him and the enemy.
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** And we get Capt. Torreli in ''The Endemic'', who tussles with a hork-bajir, and body-flips her over.
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%% During the story involving 5hr logging company, Cassie does lampshade the need for Andalites to have a phonetic language when they don't have mouths. Marco guessed it's for interplanetary relations.

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%% During the story involving 5hr logging company, Cassie does lampshade the need for Andalites to have a phonetic language when they don't have mouths. Marco guessed it's for interplanetary relations.
relations. Ax confirms and explains this in [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/4713362/chapters/10765475#workskin Chapter 3 of The Recovery]].
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* TheMainCharactersDoEverything

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* TheMainCharactersDoEverythingLaResistance: This time around, the Animorphs (plus the Chee, the free Hork-Bajir, and the Yeerk Peace Movement later on) aren't the ''only'' groups resisting the Yeerk invasion. There's also the Star Defenders, and who knows who else the Animorphs don't know, and they made a point to not find out; if they ever get Controlled again, there's no point in bringing them all down with them.
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* TheMainCharactersDoEverything



%% According to the Star Defenders, Yeerks need to make a little pinhole wound in the ear to get in. It's tiny and hard to see, but it takes more than three days to heal, so they're able to track that.

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%% According to the Star Defenders, Yeerks need to make a little pinhole wound in the ear to get in. It's tiny and hard to see, but it takes more than three days to heal, so they're able to track that.that.

%% Many RationalFic main characters often have an underlying assumption that she knows what's best for everybody. Cassie is no different, except she's got the other Animorphs to refuse to put up with that kind of bullshit.
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* TheConfidant: Cassie starts building up a number of these, starting with Melissa (after urging Rachel), the cook who saw the lobsters (i.e. morphed Marco and Ax), Rachel's father (after confirming with Tobias—with Melissa's help—that he isn't a Controller) as a "waypoint" for ex-Controllers to escape to, Erek and the Chee King (to escort those ex-Controllers out), and goes on from there.

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* TheConfidant: Cassie starts building up a number of these, starting with Melissa (after urging Rachel), the cook who saw the lobsters (i.e. morphed Marco and Ax), Rachel's father (after confirming with Tobias—with Melissa's help—that he isn't a Controller) as a "waypoint" for ex-Controllers to escape to, to [[spoiler:(and she eventually confesses this to Rachel after the crocodile incident, who doesn't take it well)]], Erek and the Chee King (to escort those ex-Controllers out), and goes on from there.
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* NonPoweredCostumedHero: The Star Defenders. They first debuted in ''The Reaction'' when one of their number[[spoiler:, Melissa Chapman, alias Cat,]] rescued Rachel and Cassie from Controllers that almost spotted them. That said, [[spoiler:Melissa]] only "knows" them as Andalite bandits in human morphs.

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* NonPoweredCostumedHero: The Star Defenders. They first debuted in ''The Reaction'' when one of their number[[spoiler:, Melissa Chapman, alias Cat,]] rescued Rachel and Cassie from Controllers that almost spotted them. That said, [[spoiler:Melissa]] only "knows" them the Animorphs as Andalite bandits in using human morphs.
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* CodeName: The Star Defenders have these: so far, there's Cat/[[spoiler:Melissa]], Liz(ard), and Crow.

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* CodeName: The Star Defenders have these: so far, there's Cat/[[spoiler:Melissa]], Liz(ard), Liz(ard)/Amanda, and Crow.
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* CodeName: The Star Defenders have these: so far, there's Cat/[[spoiler:Melissa]], Liz(ard), and Crow.

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%% Ever since the Dapsen logging incident, Cassie has confided that her Study Group was actually an Environmental Activist group.

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%% Ever since the Dapsen logging incident, Cassie has confided that her Study Group was actually an Environmental Activist group.m

%% According to the Star Defenders, Yeerks need to make a little pinhole wound in the ear to get in. It's tiny and hard to see, but it takes more than three days to heal, so they're able to track that.
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* NonPoweredCostumedHero: The Star Defenders. They first debuted in ''The Reaction'' when one of their number rescued Rachel and Cassie from Controllers that almost spotted them.

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* NonPoweredCostumedHero: The Star Defenders. They first debuted in ''The Reaction'' when one of their number number[[spoiler:, Melissa Chapman, alias Cat,]] rescued Rachel and Cassie from Controllers that almost spotted them.them. That said, [[spoiler:Melissa]] only "knows" them as Andalite bandits in human morphs.
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* NonPoweredCostumedHero: The Star Defenders.

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* NonPoweredCostumedHero: The Star Defenders. They first debuted in ''The Reaction'' when one of their number rescued Rachel and Cassie from Controllers that almost spotted them.
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* TheShrink: Johnson, the school counselor recommended by the school to Cassie in ''The Incubation''.

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* TheShrink: Johnson, the school counselor recommended by the school to Cassie in ''The Incubation''. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, he supports the Sharing, if he isn't a non-Controller member already]].
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* TeamDad: Jake, with Marco regularly teasing him with parent jokes.
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* StableTimeLoop: ''The Incubation'', just like ''The Forgotten'' in the original, is about resolving a Sario Rip. The twist is, the Animorphs now know it's coming thanks to Cassie convincing Jake to share his visions to the group, and they have to figure out how to make sure they survive it.

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* StableTimeLoop: ''The Incubation'', just like ''The Forgotten'' in the original, is about resolving a Sario Rip. The twist is, the Animorphs now know it's coming thanks to Cassie convincing Jake to share his visions to the group, and they have to figure out how to make sure they survive it. [[spoiler: Ultimately, the problem resolved itself just like in canon, but in this version, the Animorphs get to take home a stripped Bug Fighter]].
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* StableTimeLoop: ''The Incubation'', just like ''The Forgotten'' in the original, is about resolving a Sario Rip. The twist is, the Animorphs now know it's coming thanks to Cassie convincing Jake to share his visions to the group, and they have to figure out how to make sure they survive it.
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* TheShrink: Johnson, the school counselor recommended by the school to Cassie in ''The Incubation''.
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* TheConfidant: Cassie starts building up a number of these, starting with Melissa (after urging Rachel), the cook who saw the lobsters (i.e. morphed Marco and Ax), Rachel's father (after confirming with Tobias—with Melissa's help—that he isn't a Controller), and goes on from there.

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* TheConfidant: Cassie starts building up a number of these, starting with Melissa (after urging Rachel), the cook who saw the lobsters (i.e. morphed Marco and Ax), Rachel's father (after confirming with Tobias—with Melissa's help—that he isn't a Controller), Controller) as a "waypoint" for ex-Controllers to escape to, Erek and the Chee King (to escort those ex-Controllers out), and goes on from there.
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%% When Cassie stood in opposition to acquiring termites to no avail, she realizes her exasperation to the team's stubbornness is probably what Marco feels most of the time.

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%% When Cassie stood in opposition to acquiring termites to no avail, she realizes her exasperation to the team's stubbornness is probably what Marco feels most of the time.time.

%% Ever since the Dapsen logging incident, Cassie has confided that her Study Group was actually an Environmental Activist group.
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%% During the story involving 5hr logging company, Cassie does lampshade the need for Andalites to have a phonetic language when they don't have mouths. Marco guessed it's for interplanetary relations.

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%% During the story involving 5hr logging company, Cassie does lampshade the need for Andalites to have a phonetic language when they don't have mouths. Marco guessed it's for interplanetary relations.relations.

%% When Cassie stood in opposition to acquiring termites to no avail, she realizes her exasperation to the team's stubbornness is probably what Marco feels most of the time.

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