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* BlackSheep - Duke Vallière is a Good Hero from a family of Evil.
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* NotWhatItLooksLike: Spoofed to hell and back when Louise walks in on Cattleya in a compromising position with one of her maids. [[spoiler:Cattleya was sucking her blood]].
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* NotWhatItLooksLike: NotWhatItLooksLike - Spoofed to hell and back when Louise walks in on Cattleya in a compromising position with one of her maids. [[spoiler:Cattleya was sucking her blood]].
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* WhiteSheep - Duke Vallière is a Good Hero from a family of Evil.
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* NotWhatItLooksLike: Spoofed to hell and back when Louise walks in on Cattleya in a compromising position with one of her maids. [[spoiler:Cattleya was sucking her blood]].
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* GameplayAndStorySegregation - Jokes about the morality system not working as advertised.
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* KarmaMeter - As a faux-novelization of the imaginary ''Familiar of Zero''-themed ''Overlord'' game, there is a morality system with three branches: Pragmatic Evil (conquer the village and exploit it), Indulgent Evil (burn the village because it pissed you off somehow) and Delusional Evil (either of above options, with the "For the Greater Good" excuse) and there is overlap. There are a source of GameplayAndStorySegregation jokes.
* LesbianVampire - [[spoiler:Cattleya]]
* LesbianVampire - [[spoiler:Cattleya]]
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overlap.
* LesbianVampire -[[spoiler:Cattleya]][[spoiler:Cattleya.]]
* LesbianVampire -
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* KarmaMeter - As a faux-novelization of the imaginary ''Familiar of Zero''-themem Zero''-themed ''Overlord'' game, there is a morality system with three branches: Pragmatic Evil (conquer the village and exploit it), Indulgent Evil (burn the village because it pissed you off somehow) and Delusional Evil (either of above options, with the "For the Greater Good" excuse) and there is overlap. There are a source of GameplayAndStorySegregation jokes.
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* KarmaMeter - As a faux-novelization of the imaginary ''Familiar of Zero''-theme ''Overlord'' game, there is a morality system with three branches: Pragmatic Evil (conquer the village and exploit it), Indulgent Evil (burn the village because it pissed you off somehow) and Delusional Evil (either of above options, with the "For the Greater Good" excuse) and there is overlap. There are a source of GameplayAndStorySegregation jokes.
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* KarmaMeter - As a faux-novelization of the imaginary ''Familiar of Zero''-theme Zero''-themem ''Overlord'' game, there is a morality system with three branches: Pragmatic Evil (conquer the village and exploit it), Indulgent Evil (burn the village because it pissed you off somehow) and Delusional Evil (either of above options, with the "For the Greater Good" excuse) and there is overlap. There are a source of GameplayAndStorySegregation jokes.
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* {{Epigraph}} - Each part start with a quote, most of them belonging to a blatantly evil or delusional evil figures.
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* DysfunctionalFamily: The Vallières. The Duke's and Karin's marriage is strained following the Henrietta's dethronement and peace treaty with Albion, both of which Karin is furiously against. The eldest child, Eleanor is distant and [[spoiler:responsible for the middle child, Cattleya, turning into the vampire]], and the youngest, Louise, is apparently dead from their POV.
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* DysfunctionalFamily: The Vallières. The Duke's and Karin's marriage is strained following the Henrietta's dethronement and peace treaty with Albion, Albion Rebellion, both of which Karin is furiously against. The eldest child, Eleanor is distant and [[spoiler:responsible for the middle child, Cattleya, turning into the vampire]], and the youngest, Louise, is apparently dead from their POV.
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* IHateYouVampireDad - [[spoiler:Cattleya to her great-great-great-great-great-great-great-grandfather Louis Vallière. Cattleya kills him after Louise nearly mortally wounded him.]]
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* IHateYouVampireDad - [[spoiler:Cattleya to her great-great-great-great-great-great-great-grandfather Louis Vallière. Cattleya kills him after Louise nearly mortally wounded him.]]
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* FriendlyNeighborhoodVampire - [[spoiler:Cattleya tries to be one.]]
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* IHateYouVampireDad - [[spoiler:Cattleya to her great-great-great-great-great-great-great-grandfather Louis Vallière. Cattleya kills him after Louise nearly mortally wounded him.]]
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* WeaksauceWeakness - [[spoiler:The less known vampire's weakness of being forced to count beans[=/=]coins is used by Louise to disable without Cattleya without killing her. And beating her down while she was counting. Louise was sorry about that.]]
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* WeaksauceWeakness - [[spoiler:The less known vampire's weakness of being forced to count beans[=/=]coins is used by Louise to disable without Cattleya without killing her. And beating her down while she was counting. Louise was sorry about that.]]
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* TheUnfavourite - Eleanor. Born of unplanned pregnancy when neither the Duke nor Karin were willing to retire yet, and thus was mostly raised by the household staff, resulting in the somewhat distant relationship with her parents. [[spoiler:And then her attempt to impress them resulted in Cattleya becoming a vampire, and she was nearly disowned for this. She now lives in Amstelredamme, and very rarely comes home.]]
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* WeaksauceWeakness - [[spoiler:The less known vampire's weakness of being forced to count beans[=/=]coins is used by Louise to disable without Cattleya without killing her. And beating her down while she was counting. Louise was sorry about that.]]
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* UnskilledButStrong - [[spoiler:Cattleya has no real clue how to use a sword, but she's so insanely fast and strong from being a vampire that it doesn't matter]]
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* BlackSheep - Duke Vallière is Good Hero in the family of Evil.
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* BlackSheep - Duke Vallière is Good Hero in the family of Evil. Evil.
*CannotCrossRunningWater - All Vampires stick true to traditional lore, including this.
*CannotCrossRunningWater - All Vampires stick true to traditional lore, including this.
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* LesbianVampire - [[spoiler:Cattleya]]
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* HornyDevils - Scarron. Is an incubus. A "confirmed bachelor" incubus.
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* HornyDevils - Scarron. Is an incubus. A "confirmed bachelor" incubus. With a half-incubus daughter. (No, not "succubus". Yes, "daughter".)
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* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment - The Dark and Evil Start of Evil Darkness (also Dark Evilness).
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* PlayingWithFire - Louise has learned a fire-based spell. And uses it for everything, up to and including warming her bath. And she threatens to set people on fire a lot.
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* PlayingWithFire - Louise has learned a fire-based spell. And uses it for everything, up to and including warming her bath. And she threatens to set people on fire a lot. lot.
* TheMedic- All blue minions. Scyl in particular, since he's a member of the Five-Minion Band.
* TheMedic- All blue minions. Scyl in particular, since he's a member of the Five-Minion Band.
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->''It was a dark and stormy night.''\\
-- '''Opening Words'''
->''Well, no, it wasn't. It was certainly stormy, for slashing rain whipped across the wind-tossed countryside, and the sky was covered from horizon to horizon in clouds the colour of lead. And it was most definitely dark, save for the moments when the entire world was cast into bleak contrast by calamitous crashes of blinding lightning. But it was still mid afternoon, and somewhere above the thick clouds the sun was high and bright, as marked by the patch of sky which was merely iron-coloured, rather than lead.\\ Hence, it was a dark and stormy mid-afternoon, which is a phrase with far less poetic cachet and precedence than its nocturnal cousin. Still, two out of three isn't bad. It's sixty-six point six recurring percent. It's a solid pass.''\\
-- '''The Words Right After The Opening Words'''
-- '''Opening Words'''
->''Well, no, it wasn't. It was certainly stormy, for slashing rain whipped across the wind-tossed countryside, and the sky was covered from horizon to horizon in clouds the colour of lead. And it was most definitely dark, save for the moments when the entire world was cast into bleak contrast by calamitous crashes of blinding lightning. But it was still mid afternoon, and somewhere above the thick clouds the sun was high and bright, as marked by the patch of sky which was merely iron-coloured, rather than lead.\\ Hence, it was a dark and stormy mid-afternoon, which is a phrase with far less poetic cachet and precedence than its nocturnal cousin. Still, two out of three isn't bad. It's sixty-six point six recurring percent. It's a solid pass.''\\
-- '''The Words Right After The Opening Words'''
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One dark and stormy night, well, no...more like a dark and stormy mid afternoon, as the sun had yet to near the horizon (although the clouds did hide it very well), a young, pink haired girl stumbled into a cave, seeking shelter from the storm. The pink haired girl was tired and wet, exhausted after traveling through the ferocious storm. The pink haired girl, one Louise de la Valliere François Le Blanc De La Vallière (as if you didn't already know that), was a failure. She hadn't summoned anything at all. She didn't have a familiar.
Then, through a series of events which are thoroughly Evil and not coincidental, Louise found herself asan evil overlady, dealing the new Overlord, or Overlady since she's female, of a tower which came with witless minions. So, kind a very old goblin(Minion!) named Gnarl. And so began the tale of like canon, but with more Saitos.
the world's most Evil Overlady known to history.
Then, through a series of events which are thoroughly Evil and not coincidental, Louise found herself as
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8753582/1/Overlady Overlady]]'' is a crossover between ''VideoGame/{{Overlord}}'' and ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1768170/EarthScorpion Earth Scorpion]].
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Saitos.
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Earth Scorpion.
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* EliteMinions - Literally. There's a band of five named minions conforming to the standard RPG "Fighter, Rogue, Mage, Healer, Bard" load-out who tend to end up running around on their own engaging in special operations for Louise. And stealing and breaking things when unsupervised.
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* EliteMinions [[EliteMooks Elite Minions]] - Literally. There's a band of five named minions conforming to the standard RPG "Fighter, Rogue, Mage, Healer, Bard" load-out who tend to end up running around on their own engaging in special operations for Louise. And stealing and breaking things when unsupervised.
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* DoubleEntrendre - So much of the humor in this. Especially when the subject of Scarron is raised, but there's also a running side joke about how Louise don't have a tall tower like previous (male) overlords.
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* [[Stripperiffic]] {{Stripperiffic}} - Comprehensively averted with Louise's armour, despite the best efforts of the universe. She was offered many forms of dress for women, with little protection. She then decided that she wanted the male-style ones, which look basically like the canon Overlords' ones.
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->''It was a dark and stormy night.''\\
-- '''Opening Words'''
->''Well, no, it wasn't. It was certainly stormy, for slashing rain whipped across the wind-tossed countryside, and the sky was covered from horizon to horizon in clouds the colour of lead. And it was most definitely dark, save for the moments when the entire world was cast into bleak contrast by calamitous crashes of blinding lightning. But it was still mid afternoon, and somewhere above the thick clouds the sun was high and bright, as marked by the patch of sky which was merely iron-coloured, rather than lead.\\ Hence, it was a dark and stormy mid-afternoon, which is a phrase with far less poetic cachet and precedence than its nocturnal cousin. Still, two out of three isn't bad. It's sixty-six point six recurring percent. It's a solid pass.''\\
-- '''The Words Right After The Opening Words'''
Louise de la Valliere as an evil overlady, dealing with witless minions. So, kind of like canon, but with more sAitos.
Written by EarthScorpion.
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*DoubleEntrendre - So much of the humor in this. Especially when the subject of Scarron is raised, but there's also a running side joke about how Louise don't have a tall tower like previous (male) overlords.
*[[EvilOverlord Evil Overlady]] - Louise herself. She shows unsuspected talent. There's also speculation from readers that Brimir might have been one (well, an EvilOverlord).
* EliteMinions - Literally. There's a band of five named minions conforming to the standard RPG "Fighter, Rogue, Mage, Healer, Bard" load-out who tend to end up running around on their own engaging in special operations for Louise. And stealing and breaking things when unsupervised.
*HornyDevil - Scarron. Is an incubus. A "confirmed bachelor" incubus.
*PlayingWithFire - Louise has learned a fire-based spell. And uses it for everything, up to and including warming her bath. And she threatens to set people on fire a lot.
*[[Stripperiffic]] - Comprehensively averted with Louise's armour, despite the best efforts of the universe. She was offered many forms of dress for women, with little protection. She then decided that she wanted the male-style ones, which look basically like the canon Overlords' ones.
-- '''Opening Words'''
->''Well, no, it wasn't. It was certainly stormy, for slashing rain whipped across the wind-tossed countryside, and the sky was covered from horizon to horizon in clouds the colour of lead. And it was most definitely dark, save for the moments when the entire world was cast into bleak contrast by calamitous crashes of blinding lightning. But it was still mid afternoon, and somewhere above the thick clouds the sun was high and bright, as marked by the patch of sky which was merely iron-coloured, rather than lead.\\ Hence, it was a dark and stormy mid-afternoon, which is a phrase with far less poetic cachet and precedence than its nocturnal cousin. Still, two out of three isn't bad. It's sixty-six point six recurring percent. It's a solid pass.''\\
-- '''The Words Right After The Opening Words'''
Louise de la Valliere as an evil overlady, dealing with witless minions. So, kind of like canon, but with more sAitos.
Written by EarthScorpion.
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!!! See ''VideoGames/Overlord'' and FamiliarOfZero. Specific tropes found in Overlady
*DoubleEntrendre - So much of the humor in this. Especially when the subject of Scarron is raised, but there's also a running side joke about how Louise don't have a tall tower like previous (male) overlords.
*[[EvilOverlord Evil Overlady]] - Louise herself. She shows unsuspected talent. There's also speculation from readers that Brimir might have been one (well, an EvilOverlord).
* EliteMinions - Literally. There's a band of five named minions conforming to the standard RPG "Fighter, Rogue, Mage, Healer, Bard" load-out who tend to end up running around on their own engaging in special operations for Louise. And stealing and breaking things when unsupervised.
*HornyDevil - Scarron. Is an incubus. A "confirmed bachelor" incubus.
*PlayingWithFire - Louise has learned a fire-based spell. And uses it for everything, up to and including warming her bath. And she threatens to set people on fire a lot.
*[[Stripperiffic]] - Comprehensively averted with Louise's armour, despite the best efforts of the universe. She was offered many forms of dress for women, with little protection. She then decided that she wanted the male-style ones, which look basically like the canon Overlords' ones.