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* PriceOnTheirHead: Acenath gets her first bounty after Fishman Island. It is 50 million berries. It also beats out Charlotte Linlin as the having the youngest bounty at two-years-old

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* PriceOnTheirHead: Acenath gets her first bounty after Fishman Island. It is 50 million berries. It also beats out Charlotte Linlin as the having the youngest bounty at two-years-oldtwo-years-old.

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* ThatCameOutWrong: When Gambia tells Luffy that he and Bartolomeo found Acenath, who ran off the Sunny to see Dressrosa's living toys, his exact wording sounds like the lead-in to a IHaveYourWife type threat.

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* SoProudOfYou:
** Garp is very happy to have lived to see his grandson marry, if aghast that he wasn't invited.
** When Luffy goes absolutely indignant at the thought of Absalom touching Nami and declares his intent to save his wife, Sanji outright cries in pride at the man his captain is acting like, even hugging him.
* ThatCameOutWrong: PlayedForDrama. When Gambia tells Luffy that he and Bartolomeo found Acenath, who ran off the Sunny to see Dressrosa's living toys, his exact wording sounds like the lead-in to a an IHaveYourWife type threat.threat. Fortunately, he gets to explain before Luffy actually hurts him and Gambia understands the confusion.
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* PriceOnTheirHead: Acenath gets her first bounty after Fishman Island. It is 50 million berries.

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* PriceOnTheirHead: Acenath gets her first bounty after Fishman Island. It is 50 million berries. It also beats out Charlotte Linlin as the having the youngest bounty at two-years-old
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* HiddenDepths: Mihawk turns out to be an ordained priest and has the legal authority to marry two people in matrimony.

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* HiddenDepths: Mihawk turns out to be an ordained priest and has the legal authority to marry two people in matrimony. He's also a serial [[ShipperOnDeck shipper]] with a StringTheory board filled with potential ships.
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* Nami understandably gets angry when Ace nearly drowns after breaking the rule about not playing near the railings.

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* ** Nami understandably gets angry when Ace nearly drowns after breaking the rule about not playing near the railings.
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* Nami understandably gets angry when Ace nearly drowns after breaking the rule about not playing near the railings.

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* LoveObstructingParents: Moria is initially outraged over Zoro marrying his surrogate daughter Perona before switching gears to wanting grandkids.



* OverprotectiveDad: Moria is initially outraged over Zoro marrying his surrogate daughter Perona before switching gears to wanting grandkids.
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* AdaptationalBadass: [[spoiler:Nami has Conqueror's Haki]].
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* ComplimentBackfire: Diamante's praise of Bellamy winning his block falls flat because he accidentally revealed he had no faith that Bellamy could pull it off.
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* DistinctionWithoutADifference: Subverted. Luffy starts clarifying that he didn't extort Morgans, only to realize that what he did was the definition of extortion.


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* InstantSeduction: Luffy revealing that he extorted Big News Morgans for 500 million in gold causes Nami to have sex with him on the spot.

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