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* SlasherSmile: Luffy gets something like this when he sends the rest of his crew, except Robin, off to hunt the South Bird as training…and punishment for insulting him.
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* SparedByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Sabo]] and [[spoiler:Thatch.]]
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* SparedByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Sabo]] Sabo, [[spoiler:since the fic was started long before it was revealed that he was actually alive,]] and [[spoiler:Thatch.]]
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* {{Troll}}: Luffy certainly acts this way towards all his opponents (especially evident with Arlong and Crocodile), but even outside of that, he appears to get a kick out of pissing people off (such as with the White Berets in Skypeia). His strength, general maturity, and knowledge of the future allows him to get away with this.
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* {{Troll}}: Luffy certainly acts this way towards all his opponents (especially evident with Arlong and Crocodile), Crocodile; with the latter case, when he's locked in a sea prism stone cage, he annoys Crocodile so much that by the time Vivi arrives, he's able to shut up the Warlord's Evil Laughing by threatening to do another of his impressions), but even outside of that, he appears to get a kick out of pissing people off (such as with the White Berets in Skypeia).Skypiea). His strength, general maturity, and knowledge of the future allows him to get away with this.
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* CliffHanger: Many of the chapters, but none more than Chapter 61, where the fic dead-ends smack in the middle of Enies Lobby. The fandom is still hoping that after one and a half years, Victor will come back and resume his work.
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* CrashIntoHello: When Luffy accidentally uses [[spoiler:Geppou]] for the first time, he ends up catapulting himself several dozens meters away...Right into Robin's bosom.
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* CrashIntoHello: When Luffy accidentally uses [[spoiler:Geppou]] for the first time, he ends up catapulting himself several dozens meters away...Right away…right into Robin's bosom.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Future!Luffy, and Luffy himself after gaining his memories.
* DarkerAndEdgier: While still fun-filled, this fic deals with Luffy's knowledge of his crewmates', Sabo's and Ace's deaths, and how he will do whatever he can to protect them all. [[spoiler:He often gets nightmares about everyone dying and you'd better not anger him when he's in a foul mood.]]
* DarkerAndEdgier: While still fun-filled, this fic deals with Luffy's knowledge of his crewmates', Sabo's and Ace's deaths, and how he will do whatever he can to protect them all. [[spoiler:He often gets nightmares about everyone dying and you'd better not anger him when he's in a foul mood.]]
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Future!Luffy, Future Luffy, and Luffy himself after gaining his memories.
* DarkerAndEdgier: While still fun-filled, this fic deals with Luffy's knowledge of his crewmates', Sabo's and Ace's deaths, and how he will do whatever he can to protect them all. [[spoiler:He often gets nightmares about everyonedying dying, and you'd better not anger him when he's in a foul mood.]]
* DarkerAndEdgier: While still fun-filled, this fic deals with Luffy's knowledge of his crewmates', Sabo's and Ace's deaths, and how he will do whatever he can to protect them all. [[spoiler:He often gets nightmares about everyone
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* DeadFic: Unfortunately seems to be heading this direction. The story hasn't been updated for an entire year and there hasn't been ''any'' activity from the author whatsoever during that timespan.
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* DeadFic: Unfortunately seems to be heading this direction. The story It hasn't been updated for an entire year since August of 2013, and there hasn't been ''any'' activity nobody has heard from the author whatsoever during that timespan. since then either.
* EvilLaugh: Several of the enemies get this, such as Crocodile, Enel, and Spandam. But in Chapter 60, Luffy also gets one when he considers [[spoiler:reviving Pluton himself]]…or at least that's what it seems like he's thinking.
** Enel also attempts one of these with Luffy. Well, it's a hit, but still harmless to him.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Luffy does this both literally and figuratively to [[spoiler:Spandam.]] It won't surprise anyone to learn that he greatly deserved it.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Luffy does this both literally and figuratively to [[spoiler:Spandam.]] [[spoiler:Spandam]]. It won't surprise anyone to learn that he greatly deserved it.it.
* LongRunner: As stated above, there are many Peggy Sue fan fictions for One Piece, but even though it's on an indefinite hiatus, none are yet longer than this.
* LongRunner: As stated above, there are many Peggy Sue fan fictions for One Piece, but even though it's on an indefinite hiatus, none are yet longer than this.
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* OutOfCharacter: Surprisingly averted. Despite Luffy being much more mature than in canon, he's still the Luffy we know -- except he's technically over thirty years old now.
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* OutOfCharacter: Surprisingly averted. Despite Luffy being much more mature than in canon, he's still the Luffy we know for the most part -- except he's technically over thirty years old now.
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* PeggySue: Duh.
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* PeggySue: Duh.Well, obviously.
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* SparedByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Sabo and Thatch.]]
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* SparedByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Sabo [[spoiler:Sabo]] and Thatch.[[spoiler:Thatch.]]
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* SuperMode: For the most part averted. Oh sure, Luffy still has his gears, but he doesn't need to use them. He's only used Gear Third, but that was when he fought Crocodile. Justified that he's a Yonko-level pirate in the middle of Paradise -- his baseline strength is probably equal to that of the upper tier Warlords.
* TookALevelInBadass: Luffy again, of course (in the alternate future, he managed to ''kill Akainu''. Too late to save anyone, but still!), but the other Straw Hats also got stronger thanks to his training. [[spoiler:Sanji and Zoro can somewhat use Observation Haki.]]
** Also, Future!Coby, who became an admiral and ate the Time Time Fruit. Luffy resolves to make sure he makes it to that level of strength again.
* TookALevelInBadass: Luffy again, of course (in the alternate future, he managed to ''kill Akainu''. Too late to save anyone, but still!), but the other Straw Hats also got stronger thanks to his training. [[spoiler:Sanji and Zoro can somewhat use Observation Haki.]]
** Also, Future!Coby, who became an admiral and ate the Time Time Fruit. Luffy resolves to make sure he makes it to that level of strength again.
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* SuperMode: For the most part averted. Oh sure, Luffy still has his gears, but he doesn't need to use them. He's only used Gear Third, but that was when he fought Crocodile. Justified that he's a Yonko-level pirate in the middle of Paradise -- his baseline strength is probably equal to that of the upper tier Warlords.
* TookALevelInBadass: Luffy again, of course (in the alternate future, he managed to ''kill Akainu''. Too late to save anyone, and he wasn't conscious of his actions at the time, but still!), but the other Straw Hats also got stronger thanks to his training. [[spoiler:Sanji and Zoro can somewhat use ObservationHaki.Haki by the end of the Skypiea arc.]]
** Also,Future!Coby, Future Coby, who became an admiral and ate the Time Time Fruit."Toki Toki no Mi/Time-Time Fruit". Luffy resolves to make sure he makes it to that level of strength again.
* TookALevelInBadass: Luffy again, of course (in the alternate future, he managed to ''kill Akainu''. Too late to save anyone, and he wasn't conscious of his actions at the time, but still!), but the other Straw Hats also got stronger thanks to his training. [[spoiler:Sanji and Zoro can somewhat use Observation
** Also,
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* {{Troll}}: Luffy certainly acts this way towards all his opponents (especially evident with Arlong and Crocodile), but even outside of that, he appears to get a kick out of pissing people off (such as with the White Berets in Skypeia). His strength, general maturity, and knowledge of the future allows him to get away with this.
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That is no longer accurate. It may be that it\'s the only one to reach Rob Lucci…but I\'m not sure if that\'s true, either.
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Easily the longest ''OnePiece'' PeggySue FanFic in the entire fandom. It is the only one that has managed to reach Crocodile ''at all''.
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Easily the longest ''OnePiece'' PeggySue FanFic in the entire fandom. It is the only one that has managed to reach Crocodile ''at all''.
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* OnlySaneMan: Robin seems to be the only one to understand Luffy is smarter than he let on, rather than an overpowered idiot with occasional bouts of common sense.
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* OnlySaneMan: Robin seems to be the only one to understand Luffy is ''much'' smarter than he let lets on, rather than an overpowered idiot with occasional bouts of common sense.sense. That can be blamed on her general maturity and world-savviness. It also helps that while Luffy is physically seventeen, mentally he's around the same age as Robin, if not older, making it easier for Robin to connect with him.
* OfficialCouple: Luffy and Robin are set to become the main couple, but other than some bouts of ShipTease, it really hasn't taken over the story.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Luffy again, of course (In the alternate future, he managed to ''kill Akainu''. Too late to save anyone, but still!), but the other Straw Hats also got stronger thanks to his training. [[spoiler: Sanji and Zoro can somewhat use Observation Haki.]]
** Also, Future!Coby, who became an admiral and ate the Time Time Fruit.
** Luffy also gains higher bounties -- his first bounty is [[spoiler:70 million]] and his second is [[spoiler:160 million]].
** Also, Future!Coby, who became an admiral and ate the Time Time Fruit.
** Luffy also gains higher bounties -- his first bounty is [[spoiler:70 million]] and his second is [[spoiler:160 million]].
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* TookALevelInBadass: Luffy again, of course (In (in the alternate future, he managed to ''kill Akainu''. Too late to save anyone, but still!), but the other Straw Hats also got stronger thanks to his training. [[spoiler: Sanji [[spoiler:Sanji and Zoro can somewhat use Observation Haki.]]
** Also, Future!Coby, who became an admiral and ate the Time TimeFruit.
Fruit. Luffy resolves to make sure he makes it to that level of strength again.
** Luffy also gains higher bounties -- his first bounty is [[spoiler:70 million]] and his second one is [[spoiler:160 million]].
** Also, Future!Coby, who became an admiral and ate the Time Time
** Luffy also gains higher bounties -- his first bounty is [[spoiler:70 million]] and his second one is [[spoiler:160 million]].
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* {{Troll}}: Luffy certainly acts this way towards all his opponents (especially evident with Arlong and Crocodile), but even outside of that, he appears to get a kick out of pissing people off (such as with the White Berets in Skypeia). His strength, general maturity, and knowledge of the future allows him to get away with this.
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* {{Troll}}: Luffy certainly acts this way towards all his opponents (especially evident with Arlong and Crocodile), but even outside of that, he appears to get a kick out of pissing people off (such as with the White Berets in Skypeia). His strength, general maturity, and knowledge of the future allows him to get away with this.
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** In fact, he even takes advantage of this to piss off his enemies -- especially when he was stuck in that cage by Crocodile. By the time Vivi arrived, Crocodile was almost ready to tear his hear out.
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** In fact, he even takes advantage of this to piss off his enemies -- especially when he was stuck in that cage by Crocodile. By the time Vivi arrived, Crocodile was almost ready to tear his hear out.hair out because Luffy was annoying him so badly.
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* TheStationsOfCanon: Has this feel to it, though there ''are'' deviations -- chances are that the story won't really deviate noticeably until around the Whitebeard War Saga.
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* TheStationsOfCanon: TheStationsOfTheCanon: Has this feel to it, though there ''are'' deviations -- chances are that the story won't really deviate noticeably until around the Whitebeard War Saga.
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Luffy kept his memories -- meaning that until Robin joined the crew, he was by far the most world-savvy member of the crew. And even with Robin he's still MrExposition. He's still a manchild, though.
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Luffy kept his memories -- meaning that until Robin joined the crew, joined, he was by far the most world-savvy member of the crew. And even with Robin he's still MrExposition. He's still a manchild, though.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Luffy does this both literally and figuratively to [[spoiler: Spandam.]] It won't surprise anyone to learn that he greatly deserved it.
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** In fact, he even takes advantage of this to piss off his enemies -- especially when he was stuck in that cage by Crocodile. By the time Vivi arrived, Crocodile was almost ready to tear his hear out.
* KickTheSonOfABitch: Luffy does this both literally and figuratively to[[spoiler: Spandam.[[spoiler:Spandam.]] It won't surprise anyone to learn that he greatly deserved it.
* KickTheSonOfABitch: Luffy does this both literally and figuratively to
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* SuperMode: For the most part averted. Oh sure, Luffy still has his gears, but he doesn't need to use them. He's only used Gear Third, but that was when he fought Crocodile.
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* TheStationsOfCanon: Has this feel to it, though there ''are'' deviations -- chances are that the story won't really deviate noticeably until around the Whitebeard War Saga.
* SuperMode: For the most part averted. Oh sure, Luffy still has his gears, but he doesn't need to use them. He's only used Gear Third, but that was when he fought Crocodile. Justified that he's a Yonko-level pirate in the middle of Paradise -- his baseline strength is probably equal to that of the upper tier Warlords.
* SuperMode: For the most part averted. Oh sure, Luffy still has his gears, but he doesn't need to use them. He's only used Gear Third, but that was when he fought Crocodile. Justified that he's a Yonko-level pirate in the middle of Paradise -- his baseline strength is probably equal to that of the upper tier Warlords.
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* {{Troll}}: Luffy certainly acts this way towards all his opponents (especially evident with Arlong and Crocodile), but even outside of that, he appears to get a kick out of pissing people off (such as with the White Berets in Skypeia).
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* {{Troll}}: Luffy certainly acts this way towards all his opponents (especially evident with Arlong and Crocodile), but even outside of that, he appears to get a kick out of pissing people off (such as with the White Berets in Skypeia). His strength, general maturity, and knowledge of the future allows him to get away with this.
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* {{Troll}}: Luffy certainly acts this way towards all his opponents(especially evident with Arlong and Crocodile), but even outside of that, he appears to get a kick out of pissing people off(such as with the White Berets in Skypeia).
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* {{Troll}}: Luffy certainly acts this way towards all his opponents(especially opponents (especially evident with Arlong and Crocodile), but even outside of that, he appears to get a kick out of pissing people off(such off (such as with the White Berets in Skypeia).
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* {{Troll}}: Luffy certainly acts this way towards all his opponents(especially evident with Arlong and Crocodile), but even outside of that, he appears to get a kick out of pissing people off(such as with the White Berets in Skypeia).
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* TookALevelInJerkass: Justified with Luffy -- after seeing his friends dying in front of him, he's determined to make them strong enough to survive this time around, as well as getting stronger himself. [[spoiler:The recurring nightmares and subsequent lack of sleep doesn't help.]]
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* TookALevelInJerkass: Justified with Luffy -- after seeing his friends dying in front of him, he's determined to make them strong enough to survive this time around, as well as getting stronger himself. [[spoiler:The recurring nightmares and subsequent lack of sleep doesn't help.]]]]
* {{Troll}}: Luffy certainly acts this way towards all his opponents(especially evident with Arlong and Crocodile), but even outside of that, he appears to get a kick out of pissing people off(such as with the White Berets in Skypeia).
* {{Troll}}: Luffy certainly acts this way towards all his opponents(especially evident with Arlong and Crocodile), but even outside of that, he appears to get a kick out of pissing people off(such as with the White Berets in Skypeia).
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* GroinAttack: In chapter 61, Luffy kicks [[spoiler: Spandam]] so hard in the crotch that even ''Lucci'' winces in sympathy.
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Easily the longest ''OnePiece'' PeggySue FanFic in the entire fandom. It is the only one that has managed to reach Crocodile ''at all''.
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* SparedByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Sabo and Thatch.]]
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* {{Manchild}}: Luffy, since he's technically an adult mentally -- or at least as much as an adult that Luffy can be.
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Wrong trope. My bad.
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* ContinuityNod: Luffy ''still'' wants [[BrickJoke a bronze statue.]]
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* ContinuityNod: Luffy ''still'' wants [[BrickJoke [[RunningGag a bronze statue.]]
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* ContinuityNod: Luffy ''still'' wants [[BrickJoke a bronze statue.]]
* CrashIntoHello: When Luffy accidentally uses [[spoiler:Geppou]] for the first time, he ends up catapulting himself several dozens meters away...Right into Robin's bosom.
* CrashIntoHello: When Luffy accidentally uses [[spoiler:Geppou]] for the first time, he ends up catapulting himself several dozens meters away...Right into Robin's bosom.
* FlatWhat: How Luffy tends to react when the others (usually Sanji, Nami and Usopp) are stunned because he subverted IdiotHero.
* IdiotHero: Aside from Robin and Zoro, ''everyone'' thinks Luffy is one. It's actually {{Subverted}}. He's childish and pretty much crazy, but he's quite smart and mature when he needs to be.
* MoodWhiplash: Luffy became quite skilled at this.
* IdiotHero: Aside from Robin and Zoro, ''everyone'' thinks Luffy is one. It's actually {{Subverted}}. He's childish and pretty much crazy, but he's quite smart and mature when he needs to be.
* MoodWhiplash: Luffy became quite skilled at this.
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* TookALevelInJerkass: Justified with Luffy -- after seeing his friends dying in front of him, he's determined to make them strong enough to survive this time around, as well as getting stronger himself. [[spoiler:The recurring nightmares and subsequent lack of sleep doesn't help.]]
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* TookALevelInJerkass: Justified with Luffy -- after seeing his friends dying in front of him, he's determined to make them strong enough to survive this time around, as well as getting stronger himself. [[spoiler:The recurring nightmares and subsequent lack of sleep doesn't help.]]
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* SuperMode: For the most averted. Oh sure, Luffy still has his gears, but he doesn't need to use them. He's only used Gear Third, but that was when he fought Crocodile.
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* SuperMode: For the most part averted. Oh sure, Luffy still has his gears, but he doesn't need to use them. He's only used Gear Third, but that was when he fought Crocodile.
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* TheDreaded: Thanks to his actions during the civil war and a subsequent interview, the entire world now knows that Luffy defeated Crocodile, resulting in this.
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** Luffy also gains higher bounties -- his first bounty is [[spoiler:70 million]] and his second is [[spoiler:160 million]].
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* AlmightyJanitor: How everyone see Luffy after he tells them about his brother[[spoiler:s "Blue Gentleman Sabo" and]] "Fire Fist Ace", his friend Shanks, his grandfather "Hero of the Marine" Garp and his father. [[spoiler:Oh, and he gets to phone Whitebeard about the Blackbeard issue.]]
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* AlmightyJanitor: How everyone see Luffy after he tells them about his brother[[spoiler:s "Blue Gentleman Sabo" and]] "Fire Fist Ace", his friend Shanks, his grandfather "Hero of the Marine" Garp and his father.Garp. [[spoiler:Oh, and he gets to phone Whitebeard about the Blackbeard issue.]]
** [[spoiler:The funniest part is that the crew still doesn't know about Luffy's father.]]
** [[spoiler:The funniest part is that the crew still doesn't know about Luffy's father.]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9306947/1/Once-again Once Again]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' time travel FanFiction written by [=TheVictor=]. A 7-year old Luffy is approached by his future self. It seems Luffy's entire crew died at the hands of Fleet Admiral Akainu right after defeating the Yonkou Kaidou. Luffy and his future self fuse together, making him both much stronger and much smarter as he repeats his adventure again, hoping to avoid the same fate as well as correct some mistakes.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9306947/1/Once-again Once Again]]'' again]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' time travel FanFiction written by [=TheVictor=]. A 7-year old Luffy is approached by his future self. It seems Luffy's entire crew died at the hands of Fleet Admiral Akainu right after defeating the Yonkou Kaidou. Luffy and his future self fuse together, making him both much stronger and much smarter as he repeats his adventure again, hoping to avoid the same fate as well as correct some mistakes.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: While still fun-filled, this fic deals with Luffy's knowledge of his crewmates', Sabo's and Ace's deaths, and how he will do whatever he can to protect them all. [[spoiler: He often get nightmares about everyone dying and you'd better not anger him when he's in a foul mood.]]
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* DarkerAndEdgier: While still fun-filled, this fic deals with Luffy's knowledge of his crewmates', Sabo's and Ace's deaths, and how he will do whatever he can to protect them all. [[spoiler: He [[spoiler:He often get gets nightmares about everyone dying and you'd better not anger him when he's in a foul mood.]]
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* TookALevelInJerkass: Justified with Luffy - After seeing his friends dying in front of him, he's determined to make them strong enough to survive this time around, as well as getting stronger himself. [[spoiler:The recurring nightmares and subsequent lack of sleep doesn't help.]]
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* TookALevelInJerkass: Justified with Luffy - After -- after seeing his friends dying in front of him, he's determined to make them strong enough to survive this time around, as well as getting stronger himself. [[spoiler:The recurring nightmares and subsequent lack of sleep doesn't help.]]
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* OutOfCharacter: Surprisingly averted. Despite Luffy being much more mature than in canon, he's still the Luffy we know - Except he's technically over thirty years old now.
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* OutOfCharacter: Surprisingly averted. Despite Luffy being much more mature than in canon, he's still the Luffy we know - Except -- except he's technically over thirty years old now.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Luffy again, of course (In the alternate future, he managed to ''kill Akainu''. Too late to save anyone, but still!), but the other Strawhats also got stronger thanks to his training. [[spoiler: Sanji and Zoro can somewhat use Observation Haki.]]
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* TookALevelInBadass: Luffy again, of course (In the alternate future, he managed to ''kill Akainu''. Too late to save anyone, but still!), but the other Strawhats Straw Hats also got stronger thanks to his training. [[spoiler: Sanji and Zoro can somewhat use Observation Haki.]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9306947/1/Once-again Once Again]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' time travel FanFiction written by The Victor. A 7-year old Luffy is approached by his future self. It seems Luffy's entire crew died at the hands of Fleet Admiral Akainu right after defeating the Yonkou Kaidou. Luffy and his future self fuse together, making him both much stronger and much smarter as he repeats his adventure again, hoping to avoid the same fate as well as correct some mistakes.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9306947/1/Once-again Once Again]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' time travel FanFiction written by The Victor.[=TheVictor=]. A 7-year old Luffy is approached by his future self. It seems Luffy's entire crew died at the hands of Fleet Admiral Akainu right after defeating the Yonkou Kaidou. Luffy and his future self fuse together, making him both much stronger and much smarter as he repeats his adventure again, hoping to avoid the same fate as well as correct some mistakes.
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'''Once Again''' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' time travel fanfiction written by The Victor. A 7-year old Luffy is approached by his future self. It seems Luffy's entire crew died at the hands of Fleet Admiral Akainu right after defeating the Yonkou Kaidou. Luffy and his future self fuse together, making him both much stronger and much smarter as he repeats his adventure again, hoping to avoid the same fate as well as correct some mistakes.
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* AlmightyJanitor: How everyone see Luffy after he tells them about his brother[[spoiler:s "Blue Gentleman Sabo" and]] "Fire Fist Ace", his friend Shanks, his grandfather "Hero of the Marine" Garp and his father. [[spoiler: Oh, and he gets to phone Whitebeard about the Blackbeard issue.]]
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* AlmightyJanitor: How everyone see Luffy after he tells them about his brother[[spoiler:s "Blue Gentleman Sabo" and]] "Fire Fist Ace", his friend Shanks, his grandfather "Hero of the Marine" Garp and his father. [[spoiler: Oh, [[spoiler:Oh, and he gets to phone Whitebeard about the Blackbeard issue.]]
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Luffy kept his memories - meaning that until Robin joined the crew, he was by far the most world-savvy member of the crew. And even with Robin he's still MrExposition. He's still a manchild, though.
* CurbStompBattle: Many, many, of Luffy's fights, which make sense, seeing as he's a Yonko-level pirate in the middle of East Blue and, eventually, Paradise, the first half of the Grand Line. His fight with Crocodile was the only major fight he's had that doesn't count, but it was still a little one-sided. [[spoiler:His fight with Mihawk doesn't count because it wasn't really a fight -- they stopped as soon as Luffy saw that Zoro was okay.]]
* CurbStompBattle: Many, many, of Luffy's fights, which make sense, seeing as he's a Yonko-level pirate in the middle of East Blue and, eventually, Paradise, the first half of the Grand Line. His fight with Crocodile was the only major fight he's had that doesn't count, but it was still a little one-sided. [[spoiler:His fight with Mihawk doesn't count because it wasn't really a fight -- they stopped as soon as Luffy saw that Zoro was okay.]]
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Luffy kept his memories - -- meaning that until Robin joined the crew, he was by far the most world-savvy member of the crew. And even with Robin he's still MrExposition. He's still a manchild, though.
* CurbStompBattle: Many, many, of Luffy's fights, which make sense, seeing as he's a Yonko-level pirate in the middle of East Blue and, eventually, Paradise, the first half of the Grand Line. His fight with Crocodile was the only major fight he's had thatdoesn't count, wasn't one, but it was still a little one-sided. [[spoiler:His fight with Mihawk doesn't count because it wasn't really a fight -- they stopped as soon as Luffy saw that Zoro was okay.]]
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* PeggySue: Duh.
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* TookALevelInJerkass: Justified with Luffy - After seeing his friends dying in front of him, he's determined to make them strong enough to survive this time around, as well as getting stronger himself. [[spoiler: The recurring nightmares and subsequent lack of sleep doesn't help.]]
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* TookALevelInJerkass: Justified with Luffy - After seeing his friends dying in front of him, he's determined to make them strong enough to survive this time around, as well as getting stronger himself. [[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The recurring nightmares and subsequent lack of sleep doesn't help.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: Many, many, of Luffy's fights, which make sense, seeing as he's a Yonko-level pirate in the middle of East Blue and, eventually, Paradise, the first half of the Grand Line. His fight with Crocodile was the only major fight he's had that doesn't count, but it was still a little one-sided. [[spoiler:His fight with Mihawk doesn't count because it wasn't really a fight -- they stopped as soon as Luffy saw that Zoro was okay.]]
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'''Once Again''' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' time travel fanfiction written by The Victor. A 7-year old Luffy is approached by his future self. It seems Luffy's entire crew died at the hands of Fleet Admiral Akainu right after defeating the Yonkou Kaidou. Luffy and his future self fuse together, making him both much stronger and much smarter as he repeats his adventure again, hoping to avoid the same fate as well as correct some mistakes.
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!Examples
* AlmightyJanitor: How everyone see Luffy after he tells them about his brother[[spoiler:s "Blue Gentleman Sabo" and]] "Fire Fist Ace", his friend Shanks, his grandfather "Hero of the Marine" Garp and his father. [[spoiler: Oh, and he gets to phone Whitebeard about the Blackbeard issue.]]
* [[RedEyesTakeWarning Black Arm, Take Warning]]: Luffy will sometimes lose control of his Armament Haki when sufficiently angered by something. [[spoiler: For example, Blackbeard's face.]]
* BunnyEarsLawyer: Luffy kept his memories - meaning that until Robin joined the crew, he was by far the most world-savvy member of the crew. And even with Robin he's still MrExposition. He's still a manchild, though.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Future!Luffy, and Luffy himself after gaining his memories.
* DarkerAndEdgier: While still fun-filled, this fic deals with Luffy's knowledge of his crewmates', Sabo's and Ace's deaths, and how he will do whatever he can to protect them all. [[spoiler: He often get nightmares about everyone dying and you'd better not anger him when he's in a foul mood.]]
* DeadpanSnarker: Surprisingly, Luffy, although pretty much everyone get it at some point.
* OnlySaneMan: Robin seems to be the only one to understand Luffy is smarter than he let on, rather than an overpowered idiot with occasional bouts of common sense.
* OutOfCharacter: Surprisingly averted. Despite Luffy being much more mature than in canon, he's still the Luffy we know - Except he's technically over thirty years old now.
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: The very premise of the fic.
* TookALevelInBadass: Luffy again, of course (In the alternate future, he managed to ''kill Akainu''. Too late to save anyone, but still!), but the other Strawhats also got stronger thanks to his training. [[spoiler: Sanji and Zoro can somewhat use Observation Haki.]]
** Also, Future!Coby, who became an admiral and ate the Time Time Fruit.
* TookALevelInJerkass: Justified with Luffy - After seeing his friends dying in front of him, he's determined to make them strong enough to survive this time around, as well as getting stronger himself. [[spoiler: The recurring nightmares and subsequent lack of sleep doesn't help.]]
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!Examples
* AlmightyJanitor: How everyone see Luffy after he tells them about his brother[[spoiler:s "Blue Gentleman Sabo" and]] "Fire Fist Ace", his friend Shanks, his grandfather "Hero of the Marine" Garp and his father. [[spoiler: Oh, and he gets to phone Whitebeard about the Blackbeard issue.]]
* [[RedEyesTakeWarning Black Arm, Take Warning]]: Luffy will sometimes lose control of his Armament Haki when sufficiently angered by something. [[spoiler: For example, Blackbeard's face.]]
* BunnyEarsLawyer: Luffy kept his memories - meaning that until Robin joined the crew, he was by far the most world-savvy member of the crew. And even with Robin he's still MrExposition. He's still a manchild, though.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Future!Luffy, and Luffy himself after gaining his memories.
* DarkerAndEdgier: While still fun-filled, this fic deals with Luffy's knowledge of his crewmates', Sabo's and Ace's deaths, and how he will do whatever he can to protect them all. [[spoiler: He often get nightmares about everyone dying and you'd better not anger him when he's in a foul mood.]]
* DeadpanSnarker: Surprisingly, Luffy, although pretty much everyone get it at some point.
* OnlySaneMan: Robin seems to be the only one to understand Luffy is smarter than he let on, rather than an overpowered idiot with occasional bouts of common sense.
* OutOfCharacter: Surprisingly averted. Despite Luffy being much more mature than in canon, he's still the Luffy we know - Except he's technically over thirty years old now.
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: The very premise of the fic.
* TookALevelInBadass: Luffy again, of course (In the alternate future, he managed to ''kill Akainu''. Too late to save anyone, but still!), but the other Strawhats also got stronger thanks to his training. [[spoiler: Sanji and Zoro can somewhat use Observation Haki.]]
** Also, Future!Coby, who became an admiral and ate the Time Time Fruit.
* TookALevelInJerkass: Justified with Luffy - After seeing his friends dying in front of him, he's determined to make them strong enough to survive this time around, as well as getting stronger himself. [[spoiler: The recurring nightmares and subsequent lack of sleep doesn't help.]]
