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* IJustWantToBeBadass: Both Clementine ''and'' Sarah. Both of them know that they need to be tougher in order to survive in the new world, so both start making strides to cope to their environment and prove themselves to everyone else. Only problem is, it can occasionally cloud their judgement, especially during times of grief.
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* IJustWantToBeBadass: Both Clementine ''and'' Sarah. Both of them know that they need to be tougher in order to survive in the new world, so both start making strides to cope to with their environment and prove themselves to everyone else. Only problem is, it can occasionally cloud their judgement, especially during times of grief.
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** Carver claims he's this with Clementine, stating they're both of strong body and mind with the determination to survive. Only difference is Clementine is still innocent and idealistic, something Carver sees as weakness and wants to change.
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** Carver claims he's this with Clementine, stating they're both of strong body and mind with the determination to survive. Only difference is Clementine is still innocent and idealistic, something Carver sees as a weakness and wants to change.
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* NotSoDifferentRemark: Clementine informs Nick how Zeke also had a difficult life before the outbreak, being abandoned by his mother, abused by his father, and losing his younger brother and only friend. [[spoiler: It's this revelation that leads to Nick's HeroicSacrifice.]]
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* NotSoDifferentRemark: NotSoDifferentRemark:
** Clementine informs Nick how Zeke also had a difficult life before the outbreak, being abandoned by his mother, abused by his father, and losing his younger brother and only friend. [[spoiler: It's this revelation that leads to Nick's HeroicSacrifice.]]]]
** Carver claims he's this with Clementine, stating they're both of strong body and mind with the determination to survive. Only difference is Clementine is still innocent and idealistic, something Carver sees as weakness and wants to change.
** Clementine informs Nick how Zeke also had a difficult life before the outbreak, being abandoned by his mother, abused by his father, and losing his younger brother and only friend. [[spoiler: It's this revelation that leads to Nick's HeroicSacrifice.
** Carver claims he's this with Clementine, stating they're both of strong body and mind with the determination to survive. Only difference is Clementine is still innocent and idealistic, something Carver sees as weakness and wants to change.
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* NotSoDifferentRemark: Clementine informs Nick how Zeke also had a difficult life before the outbreak, being abandoned by his mother, abused by his father, and losing his younger brother and only friend. [[spoiler: It's this revelation that leads to Nick's HeroicSacrifice.]]
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* BreakTheCutie: As usual for any story set in the world of The Walking Dead.
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: Jonah and some of his followers at New Haven. It might appear to be a peaceful settlement with safety and food, but it's also [[spoiler: a human slaughterhouse.]]
* BreakTheCutie: As usual for any story set in the world of The Walking Dead.
* BreakTheCutie: As usual for any story set in the world of The Walking Dead.
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* ImAHumanitarian: [[spoiler: The residents of Hayfield survive by killing other survivors, sometimes even residents.]]
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* ContrastingSequelMainCharacter: Zeke is this to Clementine. While Clementine grew up in a loving environment that was taken away from her, Zeke's life has been a constant uphill battle since he was little, being raised in an abusive home and having to take care of his younger brother, Decker.
* ComingOfAgeStory: Not just for Clementine this time, but also for Sarah and Zeke.
* ComingOfAgeStory: Not just for Clementine this time, but also for Sarah and Zeke.
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* ContrastingSequelMainCharacter: Zeke is this to Clementine. While Clementine grew up in a loving environment that was taken away from her, her by the outbreak, Zeke's life has been a constant uphill battle since he was little, being battle, having been raised in an abusive home and having to take care of his younger brother, Decker.
* ComingOfAgeStory: Not just forClementine this time, Clementine, but also for Sarah and Zeke.
* ComingOfAgeStory: Not just for
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** Zeke serves as a ContrastingSequelMainCharacter for Lee Everett.
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** Zeke serves as a ContrastingSequelMainCharacter for Lee Everett.Clementine.
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* AntiHero: Zeke is a Type 2 AntiHero. He cares about his friends and traveling companions, but his traumatic childhood has left some very deep scars.
* BreakTheCutie: As usual for any story set in the world of The Walking Dead.
* BreakTheCutie: As usual for any story set in the world of The Walking Dead.
* DarkerAndEdgier: A lot of Sarah's character development becomes this, as she is almost [[AttemptedRape raped]] and even becomes suicidal at one point.
* InterruptedSuicide: At her absolute lowest point [[spoiler: Sarah is prepared to commit suicide by slitting her own wrists, only to be stopped by a hallucination of Zeke.]]
* PosthumousCharacter: Zeke's little brother Decker, is mentioned in almost every chapter despite being dead for over a year.
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* SwitchingPOV: The story is told through the perspectives of Clementine Clementine, Zeke and Zeke.later Sarah.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Sarah. Initially considered TheLoad in Season 2, Sarah is given much more awareness of her environment, as well as a determination to become more independent and not as sheltered as her father, Carlos, wants her to be.
* AdaptationalJerkass: Carlos, who was well-meaning with his actions, is given several KickTheDog moments that paint him as a more broken man.
* AdaptationalJerkass: Carlos, who was well-meaning with his actions, is given several KickTheDog moments that paint him as a more broken man.
* ContrastingSequelMainCharacter: Zeke is this to Clementine. While Clementine grew up in a loving environment that was taken away from her, Zeke's life has been a constant uphill battle since he was little, being raised in an abusive home and having to take care of his younger brother, Decker.
* IJustWantToBeBadass: Both Clementine ''and'' Sarah. Both of them know that they need to be tougher in order to survive in the new world, so both start making strides to cope to their environment and prove themselves to everyone else. Only problem is, it can occasionally cloud their judgement, especially during times of grief.
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** Genevieve takes on [[SuspiciouslySimilarSubstitute AJ's role as the baby of the group]].
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** Zeke serves as a ContrastingSequelMainCharacter for Clementine.
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** Zeke serves as a ContrastingSequelMainCharacter for Clementine.Lee Everett.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12168155/1/Old-Scars Old Scars]] is a Family/Hurt/Comfort fanfic based on the Episodic [[Creator/TellTaleGames Telltale]] franchise, VideoGame/TheWalkingDead. Written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5429585/WalkingDeadRox WalkingDeadRox]], the story is told through the perspectives of the two main characters: Clementine and Zeke, the latter being an Original Character created by the author.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12168155/1/Old-Scars Old Scars]] is a Family/Hurt/Comfort fanfic based on the Episodic [[Creator/TellTaleGames Telltale]] franchise, VideoGame/TheWalkingDead. Written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5429585/WalkingDeadRox WalkingDeadRox]], the story is a retelling of the events of Season 2 with several twists and turns, while being told through the perspectives of the two main characters: Clementine and Zeke, the latter being an Original Character created by the author.
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Old Scars is a Family/Hurt/Comfort fanfic based on the Episodic [[Creator/TellTaleGames Telltale]] franchise, VideoGame/TheWalkingDead. Written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5429585/WalkingDeadRox WalkingDeadRox]], the story is told through the perspectives of the two main characters: Clementine and Zeke, the latter being an Original Character created by the author.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12168155/1/Old-Scars Old Scars Scars]] is a Family/Hurt/Comfort fanfic based on the Episodic [[Creator/TellTaleGames Telltale]] franchise, VideoGame/TheWalkingDead. Written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5429585/WalkingDeadRox WalkingDeadRox]], the story is told through the perspectives of the two main characters: Clementine and Zeke, the latter being an Original Character created by the author.
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* KidsWildernessEpic: Much of Zeke's childhood revolved around him and his brother exploring the wilderness to get away from their father.
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Old Scars is a Family/Hurt/Comfort fanfic based on the Episodic [[Creator/TellTaleGames Telltale]] franchise, VideoGame/TheWalkingDead. Written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5429585/WalkingDeadRox WalkingDeadRox]], the story is told through the perspectives of the two main characters: Clementine and Ezekiel, the latter being an Original Character created by the author.
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Old Scars is a Family/Hurt/Comfort fanfic based on the Episodic [[Creator/TellTaleGames Telltale]] franchise, VideoGame/TheWalkingDead. Written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5429585/WalkingDeadRox WalkingDeadRox]], the story is told through the perspectives of the two main characters: Clementine and Ezekiel, Zeke, the latter being an Original Character created by the author.
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* RoundedCharacter: Sarah is given much more development here than she did in Season 2. We learn that she was bullied in school due to her anxieties and was sheltered by her father as a result. She is also more capable and self-aware than others realize and wants to be more independent.
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* RoundedCharacter: Sarah is given much more development here than she did in Season 2. We learn that she was bullied in school due to her anxieties and was sheltered by which led to her father as a result. sheltering her from the outside world. She is also more capable and self-aware than others some realize and wants to be more independent.
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* HeroicBSOD: Zeke has a pretty big one after saving Sarah from a potential rapist.
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''Clementine, a young girl who has traumatizing past and who seeks love and attention after she believes that she lost everyone. A mysterious archer, a life full of trial and a little love is all alone now. How will things change?''
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''Clementine, a young girl who has with a traumatizing past and who only seeks love and attention after she believes that she to have lost everyone. everyone close to her. A mysterious archer, archer with a life full of trial and a tribulation and little love is all alone now.alone. How will things change?''
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** Sarah experiences her first crush and relationship with Zeke.
** [[DeathByNewberyMedal Zeke’s lovable sidekick brother was murdered right in front of him]].
** Sarah starts to disagree with her father.
** [[StrengthEqualsWorthiness Both Clementine and Sarah learn how to become stronger and look out for themselves]].
** [[DeathByNewberyMedal Zeke’s lovable sidekick brother was murdered right in front of him]].
** Sarah starts to disagree with her father.
** [[StrengthEqualsWorthiness Both Clementine and Sarah learn how to become stronger and look out for themselves]].
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* DecompositeCharacter: AJ is never conceived in this story. His role is split between Clementine and Genevieve.
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* AdaptationEarlyAppearance: Everyone is introduced to Clementine shortly after the events of Season 1, instead of being introduced after Clementine travels with Christa for a year and a half.
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* OriginalCharacter: Zeke and Genevieve.
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** Zeke serves as the ContrastingSequelMainCharacter for Clementine.
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Old Scars is a Family/Hurt/Comfort fanfic based on the Episodic [[Creator/TellTaleGames]] Telltale franchise, VideoGame/TheWalkingDead. Written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5429585/WalkingDeadRox WalkingDeadRox]], the story is told through the perspectives of the two main characters: Clementine and Ezekiel, the latter being an Original Character created by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5429585/WalkingDeadRox WalkingDeadRox]].
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Old Scars is a Family/Hurt/Comfort fanfic based on the Episodic [[Creator/TellTaleGames]] Telltale [[Creator/TellTaleGames Telltale]] franchise, VideoGame/TheWalkingDead. Written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5429585/WalkingDeadRox WalkingDeadRox]], the story is told through the perspectives of the two main characters: Clementine and Ezekiel, the latter being an Original Character created by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5429585/WalkingDeadRox WalkingDeadRox]].
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* HeroicBSOD: Zeke has a pretty big one after saving Sarah from a potential rapist.
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* HeroicBSOD: Zeke has a pretty big one after saving Sarah from a potential rapist.rapist.
* SwitchingPOV: The story is told through the perspectives of Clementine and Zeke.
* SwitchingPOV: The story is told through the perspectives of Clementine and Zeke.
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** [[Death By Newbery Medal Zeke’s lovable sidekick brother was murdered right in front of him]].
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Old Scars is a Family/Hurt/Comfort fanfic based on the Episodic TellTale franchise, VideoGame/TheWalkingDead. Written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5429585/WalkingDeadRox WalkingDeadRox]], the story is told through the perspectives of the two main characters: Clementine and Ezekiel, the latter being an Original Character created by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5429585/WalkingDeadRox WalkingDeadRox]].
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Old Scars is a Family/Hurt/Comfort fanfic based on the Episodic TellTale [[Creator/TellTaleGames]] Telltale franchise, VideoGame/TheWalkingDead. Written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5429585/WalkingDeadRox WalkingDeadRox]], the story is told through the perspectives of the two main characters: Clementine and Ezekiel, the latter being an Original Character created by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5429585/WalkingDeadRox WalkingDeadRox]].
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''Clementine, a young girl who has traumatizing past and who seeks love and attention after she believes that she lost everyone. A mysterious archer, a life full of trial and a little love is all alone now. How will things change?''
Old Scars is a Family/Hurt/Comfort fanfic based on the Episodic TellTale franchise, VideoGame/TheWalkingDead. Written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5429585/WalkingDeadRox WalkingDeadRox]], the story is told through the perspectives of the two main characters: Clementine and Ezekiel, the latter being an Original Character created by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5429585/WalkingDeadRox WalkingDeadRox]].
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* AbusiveParents: Both Zeke and Sarah are examples of this, although it’s much more serious with Zeke.
* ComingOfAgeStory: Not just for Clementine this time, but also for Sarah and Zeke.
** Sarah experiences her first crush and relationship with Zeke.
** [[Death By Newbery Medal Zeke’s lovable sidekick brother was murdered right in front of him]].
** Sarah starts to disagree with her father.
** [[StrengthEqualsWorthiness Both Clementine and Sarah learn how to become stronger and look out for themselves]].
** HeroicBSOD: Zeke has a pretty big one after saving Sarah from a potential rapist.
Old Scars is a Family/Hurt/Comfort fanfic based on the Episodic TellTale franchise, VideoGame/TheWalkingDead. Written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5429585/WalkingDeadRox WalkingDeadRox]], the story is told through the perspectives of the two main characters: Clementine and Ezekiel, the latter being an Original Character created by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5429585/WalkingDeadRox WalkingDeadRox]].
!!This Fanfic Contains Examples of…
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* AbusiveParents: Both Zeke and Sarah are examples of this, although it’s much more serious with Zeke.
* ComingOfAgeStory: Not just for Clementine this time, but also for Sarah and Zeke.
** Sarah experiences her first crush and relationship with Zeke.
** [[Death By Newbery Medal Zeke’s lovable sidekick brother was murdered right in front of him]].
** Sarah starts to disagree with her father.
** [[StrengthEqualsWorthiness Both Clementine and Sarah learn how to become stronger and look out for themselves]].
** HeroicBSOD: Zeke has a pretty big one after saving Sarah from a potential rapist.
