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-->'''Prologue''': ''On the longest day of the thousandth year, Darklight Star will escape and wrought vengeance upon Equestria'...'I'm sorry dear reader for my mistake... ~[Original Timeline] Twilight Sparkle.''

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-->'''Prologue''': ''On the longest day of the thousandth year, Darklight Star will escape and wrought vengeance upon Equestria'...'I'm Equestria...[plotline glimpse irrelevant to example]...I'm sorry dear reader for my mistake... ~[Original Timeline] Twilight Sparkle.''
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-->Prologue: 'On the longest day of the thousandth year, Darklight Star will escape and wrought vengeance upon Equestria'...'I'm sorry dear reader for my mistake... ~[Original Timeline] Twilight Sparkle.'
-->Chapters 1 and 2: *Twilight bucks about with time spells and gets trapped in the past before Nightmare Moon's rise*

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-->Prologue: 'On -->'''Prologue''': ''On the longest day of the thousandth year, Darklight Star will escape and wrought vengeance upon Equestria'...'I'm sorry dear reader for my mistake... ~[Original Timeline] Twilight Sparkle.'
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-->'''Chapters
1 and 2: 2''': *Twilight bucks about with time spells and gets trapped in the past before Nightmare Moon's rise*
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->Prologue: 'On the longest day of the thousandth year, Darklight Star will escape and wrought vengeance upon Equestria'...'I'm sorry dear reader for my mistake... ~[Original Timeline] Twilight Sparkle.'
->Chapters 1 and 2: *Twilight bucks about with time spells and gets trapped in the past before Nightmare Moon's rise*

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->Prologue: -->Prologue: 'On the longest day of the thousandth year, Darklight Star will escape and wrought vengeance upon Equestria'...'I'm sorry dear reader for my mistake... ~[Original Timeline] Twilight Sparkle.'
->Chapters -->Chapters 1 and 2: *Twilight bucks about with time spells and gets trapped in the past before Nightmare Moon's rise*
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* DoomedByCanon: As follows (paraphrased for space)...
->Prologue: 'On the longest day of the thousandth year, Darklight Star will escape and wrought vengeance upon Equestria'...'I'm sorry dear reader for my mistake... ~[Original Timeline] Twilight Sparkle.'
->Chapters 1 and 2: *Twilight bucks about with time spells and gets trapped in the past before Nightmare Moon's rise*
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* TrappedInThePast: Twilight Sparkle/Blue Star

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** BadassDamsel: ...turns into this after a few sentences from Blue Star about why she shouldn't learn to properly fight.

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** BadassBookworm: ...is crushed when it's revealed it was an accidental asswhooping and she's a complete nerd...
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BadassDamsel: ...but then turns into this after a few sentences from Blue Star about why she shouldn't learn to properly fight.

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* BadAss: Firefly's initial mental picture of [[spoiler: Lady]] Blue Star.

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* BadAss: Firefly's initial mental picture of [[spoiler: Lady]] Blue Star.Star...
** BadassDamsel: ...turns into this after a few sentences from Blue Star about why she shouldn't learn to properly fight.
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* {{Expy}}: Each of the G1 ponies serves as these to Twilight's friends. She does not some differences though, such as Surprise being slightly more levelheaded than Pinkie Pie, Posey being more likely to stutter than run in fear of another pony, and Firefly being more disciplined than Rainbow Dash. Sparkler, on the other hoof, is almost a perfect match of Rarity.

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* {{Expy}}: Each of the G1 ponies serves as these to Twilight's friends. She does not notice some differences though, such as Surprise being slightly more levelheaded than Pinkie Pie, Posey being more likely to stutter than run in fear of another pony, and Firefly being more disciplined than Rainbow Dash. Sparkler, on the other hoof, is almost a perfect match of Rarity.

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* RetroactivePrecognition: Blue Star knows everything that's supposed to have been done by Starswirl V [[spoiler:before she accidentally usurped his Court position]] and sets out to make all the same accomplishments, and more. MeanwhileInTheFuture the "more" is clearly evident. She also intends to prevent [[MadGod Nightmare Moon's]] [[StartOfDarkness rise]] when the time comes, and knows the exact time and place it occurs.

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* RetroactivePrecognition: Blue Star knows everything that's supposed to have been done by Starswirl V [[spoiler:before she accidentally usurped his Court position]] and sets out to make all the same accomplishments, and more. MeanwhileInTheFuture the "more" is clearly evident. She also intends
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: Twilight may not have ''intended''
to go back in time, but she's certainly going to use the oppurtunity and prevent [[PhysicalGod Luna's]] [[StartOfDarkness transformation into]] [[MadGod Nightmare Moon's]] [[StartOfDarkness rise]] Moon]] when the time comes, and knows the exact time and place it occurs.comes.
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* RetroactivePrecognition: Blue Star knows everything that's supposed to have been done by Starswirl V [[spoiler:before she accidentally usurped his Court position]] and sets out to make all the same accomplishments, and more. MeanwhileInTheFuture the "more" is clearly evident. She also intends to prevent [[MadGod Nightmare Moon's]] [[StartOfEvil rise]] when the time comes, and knows the exact time and place it occurs.

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* RetroactivePrecognition: Blue Star knows everything that's supposed to have been done by Starswirl V [[spoiler:before she accidentally usurped his Court position]] and sets out to make all the same accomplishments, and more. MeanwhileInTheFuture the "more" is clearly evident. She also intends to prevent [[MadGod Nightmare Moon's]] [[StartOfEvil [[StartOfDarkness rise]] when the time comes, and knows the exact time and place it occurs.
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* RetroactivePrecognition: Blue Star knows everything that's supposed to have been done by Starswirl V [[spoiler:before she accidentally usurped his Court position]] and sets out to make all the same accomplishments, and more. MeanwhileInTheFuture the "more" is clearly evident. She also intends to prevent [[MadGod Nightmare Moon's]] [[StartOfEvil rise]] when the time comes, and knows the exact time and place it occurs.

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* Expy: Each of the G1 ponies serves as these to Twilight's friends. She does not some differences though, such as Surprise being slightly more levelheaded than Pinkie Pie, Posey being more likely to stutter than run in fear of another pony, and Firefly being more disciplined than Rainbow Dash. Sparkler, on the other hoof, is almost a perfect match of Rarity.

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* Expy: {{Expy}}: Each of the G1 ponies serves as these to Twilight's friends. She does not some differences though, such as Surprise being slightly more levelheaded than Pinkie Pie, Posey being more likely to stutter than run in fear of another pony, and Firefly being more disciplined than Rainbow Dash. Sparkler, on the other hoof, is almost a perfect match of Rarity.Rarity.
**Ironic in that Twilight's friends are themselves expies of the G1 ponies.


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* MeanwhileInTheFuture: The story alternates each chapter between Blue Star!Twilight in the past and Neo-Twilight and Trixie's friendshipping adventures in the new future.
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* Expy: Each of the G1 ponies serves as these to Twilight's friends. She does not some differences though, such as Surprise being slightly more levelheaded than Pinkie Pie, Posey being more likely to stutter than run in fear of another pony, and Firefly being more disciplined than Rainbow Dash. Sparkler, on the other hoof, is almost a perfect match of Rarity.
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My Choices: Twisted Tales Through Time is a MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic FanFic written by koolerkid.

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My Choices: Twisted Tales Through Time is a MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic FanFic written by koolerkid.
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* [[Magitek]]: Equestria as of [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/16358/9/My-Choices%3A-Twisted-Tales-Through-Time/Chapter-Eight chapter eight]].

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* [[Magitek]]: {{Magitek}}: Equestria as of [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/16358/9/My-Choices%3A-Twisted-Tales-Through-Time/Chapter-Eight chapter eight]].
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* Magitek: Equestria as of [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/16358/9/My-Choices%3A-Twisted-Tales-Through-Time/Chapter-Eight chapter eight]].

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* Magitek: [[Magitek]]: Equestria as of [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/16358/9/My-Choices%3A-Twisted-Tales-Through-Time/Chapter-Eight chapter eight]].
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* Magitek: Equestria as of []http://www.fimfiction.net/story/16358/9/My-Choices%3A-Twisted-Tales-Through-Time/Chapter-Eight chapter eight]].

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* Magitek: Equestria as of []http://www.[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/16358/9/My-Choices%3A-Twisted-Tales-Through-Time/Chapter-Eight chapter eight]].
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* Magitek: Equestria as of []http://www.fimfiction.net/story/16358/9/My-Choices%3A-Twisted-Tales-Through-Time/Chapter-Eight chapter eight]].
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* LetsGetDangerous: Star Swirl V's [[spoiler: Nerve Severing Spell]] causes this reaction in Blue Star, bringing out her [[FanNickname Doctor]] [[WatchMen Manehattan]] / [[StarCraft Protoss Archon]] / [[AvatarTheLastAirbender Avatar State]] mode.

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* LetsGetDangerous: Star Swirl V's [[spoiler: Nerve Severing Spell]] causes this reaction in Blue Star, bringing out her [[FanNickname Doctor]] [[WatchMen Manehattan]] / [[StarCraft Protoss Archon]] / [[AvatarTheLastAirbender Avatar State]] mode.[[SuperMode mode]].
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''On secret assignment from [[PhysicalGod Princess Celestia]] herself, Twilight investigates a powerful magical artifact for clues to the mystery of Luna's transformation in the evil Nightmare Moon. Incautious use of the [[ArtifactOfDoom artifact]] sends Twilight hurtling back in time. Can Twilight discover what caused Luna's transformation? And will she ever make it home again?''

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''On secret assignment from [[PhysicalGod Princess Celestia]] herself, Twilight investigates a powerful magical artifact for clues to the mystery of Luna's transformation in into the evil Nightmare Moon. Incautious use of the [[ArtifactOfDoom artifact]] sends Twilight hurtling back in time. Can Twilight discover what caused Luna's transformation? And will she ever make it home again?''
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My Choices: Twisted Tales Through Time

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My Choices: Twisted Tales Through Time
Time is a MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic FanFic written by koolerkid.


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You can read it [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/16358/My-Choices%3A-Twisted-Tales-Through-Time here]].
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* LetsGetDangerous: Star Swirl V's [[spoiler: Nerve Severing Spell]] causes this reaction in Blue Star, bringing out her [[FanNickname Doctor]] [[Watchmen Manehattan]] / [[StarCraft Protoss Archon]] / [[AvatarTheLastAirbender Avatar State]] mode.

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* LetsGetDangerous: Star Swirl V's [[spoiler: Nerve Severing Spell]] causes this reaction in Blue Star, bringing out her [[FanNickname Doctor]] [[Watchmen [[WatchMen Manehattan]] / [[StarCraft Protoss Archon]] / [[AvatarTheLastAirbender Avatar State]] mode.
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* LetsGetDangerous: Star Swirl V's [[spoiler: Nerve Severing Spell]] causes this reaction in Blue Star, bringing out her [[FanNickname Doctor]] [[Watchmen Manehattan]] / [[Starcraft Protoss Archon]] / [[AvatarTheLastAirbender Avatar State]] mode.

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* LetsGetDangerous: Star Swirl V's [[spoiler: Nerve Severing Spell]] causes this reaction in Blue Star, bringing out her [[FanNickname Doctor]] [[Watchmen Manehattan]] / [[Starcraft [[StarCraft Protoss Archon]] / [[AvatarTheLastAirbender Avatar State]] mode.
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* LetsGetDangerous: Star Swirl V's [[spoiler: Nerve Severing Spell]] causes this reaction in Blue Star, bringing out her [[FanNickname Doctor]] [[Watchmen Manehattan]]/[[Starcraft Protoss Archon]]/[[AvatarTheLastAirbender Avatar State]] mode.

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* LetsGetDangerous: Star Swirl V's [[spoiler: Nerve Severing Spell]] causes this reaction in Blue Star, bringing out her [[FanNickname Doctor]] [[Watchmen Manehattan]]/[[Starcraft Manehattan]] / [[Starcraft Protoss Archon]]/[[AvatarTheLastAirbender Archon]] / [[AvatarTheLastAirbender Avatar State]] mode.
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* FanNickname: In order to differentiate the original Twilight that time traveled from the one in the new timeline, the readerbase occasionally refers to Original Twilight/Blue Star as Bluelight, [[=TwiBlue=]], or some other merging of the names depending on the commenter.

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* FanNickname: In order to differentiate the original Twilight that time traveled from the one in the new timeline, the readerbase occasionally refers to Original Twilight/Blue Star as Bluelight, [[=TwiBlue=]], [=TwiBlue=], or some other merging of the names depending on the commenter.
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* FanNickname: In order to differentiate the original Twilight that time traveled from the one in the new timeline, the readerbase occasionally refers to Original Twilight/Blue Star as Bluelight, TwiBlue, or some other merging of the names depending on the commenter.

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* FanNickname: In order to differentiate the original Twilight that time traveled from the one in the new timeline, the readerbase occasionally refers to Original Twilight/Blue Star as Bluelight, TwiBlue, [[=TwiBlue=]], or some other merging of the names depending on the commenter.
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* Badass: Firefly's initial mental picture of [[spoiler: Lady]] Blue Star.

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* Badass: BadAss: Firefly's initial mental picture of [[spoiler: Lady]] Blue Star.

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* CultOfEvil: Possibly the Order of the Stars, although [[spoiler: Celestia's]] involvement suggests they may not be so evil after all... [[FridgeHorror or maybe even worse than expected.]]

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\n* CultOfEvil: Possibly the Order Badass: Firefly's initial mental picture of the Stars, although [[spoiler: Celestia's]] involvement suggests they may not be so evil after all... [[FridgeHorror or maybe even worse than expected.]]
Lady]] Blue Star.




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* LetsGetDangerous: Star Swirl V's [[spoiler: Nerve Severing Spell]] causes this reaction in Blue Star, bringing out her [[FanNickname Doctor]] [[Watchmen Manehattan]]/[[Starcraft Protoss Archon]]/[[AvatarTheLastAirbender Avatar State]] mode.
* ReligionOfEvil: Possibly the Order of the Stars, although [[spoiler: Celestia's]] involvement suggests they may not be so evil after all... [[FridgeHorror or maybe even worse than expected.]]
* ShrinkingViolet: Posey. Being the Past Era counterpart to Fluttershy, this was inevitable.



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My Choices: Twisted Tales Through Time

''On secret assignment from [[PhysicalGod Princess Celestia]] herself, Twilight investigates a powerful magical artifact for clues to the mystery of Luna's transformation in the evil Nightmare Moon. Incautious use of the [[ArtifactOfDoom artifact]] sends Twilight hurtling back in time. Can Twilight discover what caused Luna's transformation? And will she ever make it home again?''

!!This fan fic contains examples of:

*CultOfEvil: Possibly the Order of the Stars, although [[spoiler: Celestia's]] involvement suggests they may not be so evil after all... [[FridgeHorror or maybe even worse than expected.]]

*FanNickname: In order to differentiate the original Twilight that time traveled from the one in the new timeline, the readerbase occasionally refers to Original Twilight/Blue Star as Bluelight, TwiBlue, or some other merging of the names depending on the commenter.

*StableTimeLoop: Averted, Twilight Sparkle/Blue Star's going back in time created a new history for Equestria.

*WordOfGod: Confirmed the branch timeline conventions explained in [[http://img607.imageshack.us/img607/3104/brianexplainsafimfic.gif this GIF]] are in effect.

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