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* CerebusCallback: [[spoiler:Brain's CatchPhrase makes a return... while he is using Starlight for Project Janissary.]]
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* CerebusCallback: [[spoiler:Brain's CatchPhrase catchphrase makes a return... while he is using Starlight for Project Janissary.]]
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* AllLoveIsUnrequited: It turns out Lightning had fallen for Twilight! Time will tell how he will react to her clone...
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* CompetingWithACorpse: Starla resents the fact that Lightning has fallen in love with Twilight.
-->'''Starla:''' I love you, Lightning Dawn. I've always loved you and I married you and I don't deserve to be treated like this. I... I never expected you to be eternally faithful; you're a male after all, and you have male needs that I won't always be able to meet, that's the way things are. But I thought that it would be like my father, that there would be mistresses but however long they lasted, a week, a month, a year, the affair would always end and you'd come back to me. But I shouldn't have to share my marriage with the ghost of a dead mare!
-->'''Starla:''' I love you, Lightning Dawn. I've always loved you and I married you and I don't deserve to be treated like this. I... I never expected you to be eternally faithful; you're a male after all, and you have male needs that I won't always be able to meet, that's the way things are. But I thought that it would be like my father, that there would be mistresses but however long they lasted, a week, a month, a year, the affair would always end and you'd come back to me. But I shouldn't have to share my marriage with the ghost of a dead mare!
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** In "Artie's Choice", Rainbow Dash gives a brief one to [[TautologicalTemplar Starla and Starfleet as a whole for acting like they're the heroes and the Equestrians are the villains when it was Starfleet who invaded Equestria and forced it under Starfleet's rule]].
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** In "Artie's Choice", Rainbow Dash gives a brief one to [[TautologicalTemplar Starla and Starfleet as a whole for acting like they're the heroes and the Equestrians are the villains when it was Starfleet the Space Ponies who invaded Equestria and forced it under Starfleet's rule]].
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* WorldsSmallestViolin: {{Subverted|Trope}}. Pinkie plays a violin while Kitty is telling her tragic {{backstory}}, Kitty notices and tells her to keep playing because she finds it fitting.
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* WorldsSmallestViolin: {{Subverted|Trope}}. Pinkie plays a violin while Kitty is telling her tragic {{backstory}}, {{backstory}}; Kitty notices and tells her to keep playing because she finds it fitting.
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This is a HateFic by Scipio Smith, based on Creator/DakariKingMykan's infamous ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic''. It can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/278960/my-brave-pony-starfleet-nemesis here]].
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This is a HateFic DeconstructionFic by Scipio Smith, Creator/ScipioSmith, based on Creator/DakariKingMykan's infamous ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic''. It can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/278960/my-brave-pony-starfleet-nemesis here]].
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* AndIMustScream: [[spoiler:Following her defeat at the hands of Sentinel Three, Starlight Glimmer is carted off to Professor Brain. He had decided to maker her part of Project Janissary and when he starts drilling into her, she is incapable of moving so she can only scream on the inside.]]
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* AndIMustScream: [[spoiler:Following her defeat at the hands of Sentinel Three, Starlight Glimmer is carted off to Professor Brain. He had decided to maker make her part of Project Janissary and when he starts drilling into her, she is incapable of moving so she can only scream on the inside.]]
* CerebusCallback: [[spoiler:Brain's CatchPhrase makes a return... while he is using Starlight for Project Janissary.]]
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** [[spoiler:Professor Brain is shocked to discover that Pinkie Pie survived her encounter with the Sentinels [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall because to him Pinkie was just an immature]] WomanChild.]]
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** [[spoiler:Professor Brain is shocked to discover that Pinkie Pie survived her encounter with the Sentinels [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall because to him Pinkie was just an immature]] WomanChild.[[ManChild Womanchild]].]]
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-->"That sweetroll is lying officer, I never stole it, ugggh." (''cue unconsciousness'')
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-->"That sweetroll is lying officer, I never stole it, ugggh." (''cue unconsciousness'')''[falls unconscious]''
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* TheyChangedItNowItSucks: InUniverse: Grand Ruler's opinion of ''Starfleet Magic'' under its [[FanFic/FallOfStarfleetRebirthOfFriendship new writer]]. [[DeconstructionFic Probably because it is no longer pro-Starfleet propaganda and instead portrays Starfleet as horrible as they actually are]].
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* TheyChangedItNowItSucks: InUniverse: InUniverse. Grand Ruler's opinion of ''Starfleet Magic'' under its [[FanFic/FallOfStarfleetRebirthOfFriendship new writer]]. [[DeconstructionFic Probably because it is no longer pro-Starfleet propaganda and instead portrays Starfleet as horrible as they actually are]].
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** ''Promotory''; Inquiomerus drops this bombshell regarding who the caribou are working with.
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** ''Promotory''; In "Promotory", Inquiomerus drops this bombshell regarding who the caribou are working with.
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** ''Couples Therapy''; [[spoiler:"Twilight Sparkle"/Evenfall]] says this line regarding her motivations.
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** ''Couples Therapy''; In "Couples Therapy", [[spoiler:"Twilight Sparkle"/Evenfall]] says this line regarding her motivations.