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** In the first sequel, Luffy goes ballistic over Zoro hiding the fact he delivered information under torture... because the swordsman was in pain all along over it and his unaware crewmates couldn't help him to move on.
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** In the first sequel, Luffy goes ballistic not over Zoro hiding the fact he delivered information under torture... but because the swordsman was in pain all along over it and his unaware crewmates couldn't help him to move on.
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* IronWoobie: Zoro was really put through the blender here, being tortured until he snitched on his crewmates and blaming himself for not being strong enough to resist. Being Zoro, he refuses to lay down and die.
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* AdultFear: Starvation. Sanji had to live through this, and now one of his crewmates suffered the same fate while he wasn't there to help.
** Even worse, Zoro was deliberately tortured by a bounty hunter wanting any crumb of information about the crew. Needless to say, he's not happy when he comes back to his lair to find his prey fled and immediately starts to tag him.
** Even worse, Zoro was deliberately tortured by a bounty hunter wanting any crumb of information about the crew. Needless to say, he's not happy when he comes back to his lair to find his prey fled and immediately starts to tag him.
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: Starvation is about as cruel a way to die as any.
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** DueToTheDead: After Zoro recovers, Sanji takes the crew back to the island to give her a proper burial.
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** In the first sequel, Luffy goes ballistic over Zoro hiding the fact he delivered information under torture... [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming because the swordsman was in pain all along over it and his unaware crewmates couldn't help him to move on.]]
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** In the first sequel, Luffy goes ballistic over Zoro hiding the fact he delivered information under torture... [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming because the swordsman was in pain all along over it and his unaware crewmates couldn't help him to move on.]]
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: As he was unaware of refeeding syndrome, Luffy gives a snack to Zoro to help him to go better. The swordsman anters into shock and almost dies because of it.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: As he was unaware of refeeding syndrome, Luffy gives a snack to Zoro to help him to go better. The swordsman anters enters into shock and almost dies because of it.
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** In the first sequel, Luffy goes ballistic over Zoro hiding the fact he delivered information under torture... [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming because the swordsman was in pain all along over it and his unaware crewmantes couldn't help him to move on.]]
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** In the first sequel, Luffy goes ballistic over Zoro hiding the fact he delivered information under torture... [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming because the swordsman was in pain all along over it and his unaware crewmantes crewmates couldn't help him to move on.]]
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: As he was unaware of refeeding syndrome, Luffy gives a snack to Zoro to help him to go better. The swordsman anters into shock and almost dies because of it.
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* PapaWolf: Luffy and Sanji when they finally meet the Alchemist. Never smackdown was so deserved.
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After finishing the fic with 17 chapters, the author wrote two sequels: ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7614748/1/The-Panaceam-Report The Panaceam Report]]'' and ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7845142/30/Thirty-Tales-of-a-Swordsman Espionage]]''
* AwesomenessByAnalysis: The Alchemist's fighting style is learning as much he can about his adversary then playing on his weakness to deliver a CurbStompBattle. He's quite disgruntled and out of his depths when his prey does something unexpected.
* IGaveMyWord: Luffy isn't happy about Sanji hiding the truth about Zoro's ordeal but lets him off the hook because promises are SeriousBusiness.
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* NothingPersonal: The Alchemist is flat-out cold about torturing his unfortunate prisoners, he only wants information and feels no pleasure about it.
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* NothingPersonal: The Alchemist is flat-out cold about torturing his unfortunate prisoners, he only wants information and feels no pleasure about it. When he comes back in the third part, he has no problems working with his previous victims. Zoro on the other hand...
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** Actually, the whole crew is baying for the Alchemist's blood. You do not mess with a Strawhat if you like living.
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** Actually, the whole crew is baying for the Alchemist's blood. You do not mess with a Strawhat if you like living.living.
** An unexpectedly sweet version in the first sequel, when Luffy says he won't accept Zoro not trusting his crewmates to help him with his grief a second time.
* TranquilFury: Luffy goes ''still'' when he sees the Alchemist threatening Zoro and Usopp. As anyone will say you, a still Luffy is '''bad news'''.
* WhatTheHellHero: Sanji doesn't hit Luffy when the captain's carelessness endangers Zoro's recovery, but only because he flat-out states he's going to do it if Luffy doesn't leave the room.
** In the first sequel, Luffy goes ballistic over Zoro hiding the fact he delivered information under torture... [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming because the swordsman was in pain all along over it and his unaware crewmantes couldn't help him to move on.]]
** An unexpectedly sweet version in the first sequel, when Luffy says he won't accept Zoro not trusting his crewmates to help him with his grief a second time.
* TranquilFury: Luffy goes ''still'' when he sees the Alchemist threatening Zoro and Usopp. As anyone will say you, a still Luffy is '''bad news'''.
* WhatTheHellHero: Sanji doesn't hit Luffy when the captain's carelessness endangers Zoro's recovery, but only because he flat-out states he's going to do it if Luffy doesn't leave the room.
** In the first sequel, Luffy goes ballistic over Zoro hiding the fact he delivered information under torture... [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming because the swordsman was in pain all along over it and his unaware crewmantes couldn't help him to move on.]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Zoro's reaction about him finally breaking and betraying his crewmates. Unrelenting abuse is no excuse, damnit!
** Luffy is devastated when his attempt to help his first mate on the road to recovery only manages to make Zoro so sick the swordsman almost dies.
* NothingPersonal: The Alchemist is flat-out cold about torturing his unfortunate prisoners, he only wants information and feels no pleasure about it.
** Luffy is devastated when his attempt to help his first mate on the road to recovery only manages to make Zoro so sick the swordsman almost dies.
* NothingPersonal: The Alchemist is flat-out cold about torturing his unfortunate prisoners, he only wants information and feels no pleasure about it.
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* SecretKeeper: After hearing what happened with the Alchemist, Sanji cannot explain the situation to the crew because Zoro made him promise he would keep mum.
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* DeathByAdaptation: Perona. The Strawhats managed to rescue Zoro, but they came too late for her.
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The Alchemist's birth name is actually Magnus Panaceam, which plays a role in the first sequel.
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The Alchemist's birth name is actually Magnus Panaceam, which plays a role in the first sequel.sequel.
* PoorCommunicationKills: Luffy deciding to watch over Zoro when Sanji goes to sleep doesn't want to disturb the cook, so decides he can prepare a snack for him and the swordsman on his own. The result is Zoro going into shock because of refeeding syndrom and Sanji very much tears Luffy a new one over it.
* ShownTheirWork: The author made in-depths research about starvation and its consequences for this fic.
* ThisIsUnforgivable: Sanji is ''irate'' after learning the Alchemist poisoned Zoro's food to break him further. And of course, there's the little matter of him almost killing his crewmate...
** Actually, the whole crew is baying for the Alchemist's blood. You do not mess with a Strawhat if you like living.
* PoorCommunicationKills: Luffy deciding to watch over Zoro when Sanji goes to sleep doesn't want to disturb the cook, so decides he can prepare a snack for him and the swordsman on his own. The result is Zoro going into shock because of refeeding syndrom and Sanji very much tears Luffy a new one over it.
* ShownTheirWork: The author made in-depths research about starvation and its consequences for this fic.
* ThisIsUnforgivable: Sanji is ''irate'' after learning the Alchemist poisoned Zoro's food to break him further. And of course, there's the little matter of him almost killing his crewmate...
** Actually, the whole crew is baying for the Alchemist's blood. You do not mess with a Strawhat if you like living.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6313329/1/Mindshattered Mindshattered]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' FanFic by Velkyn Karma, taking place after the Strawhat separation on Sabaody and quickly veering in AlternateUniverse territory.
Feeling one of their crewmates in trouble, a small group composed of Sanji, Luffy, Nami, Usopp and Brook decides to go and help. The result is Sanji reliving one of his worst nightmares, Zoro having to put himself together and a very persistent bounty hunter trailing the Strawhats to claim his prize back... and maybe more.
!Contains examples of:
*AdultFear: Starvation. Sanji had to live through this, and now one of his crewmates suffered the same fate while he wasn't there to help.
** Even worse, Zoro was deliberately tortured by a bounty hunter wanting any crumb of information about the crew. Needless to say, he's not happy when he comes back to his lair to find his prey fled and immediately starts to tag him.
* IronWoobie: Zoro was really put through the blender here, being tortured until he snitched on his crewmates and blaming himself for not being strong enough to resist. Being Zoro, he refuses to lay down and die.
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The Alchemist's birth name is actually Magnus Panaceam, which plays a role in the first sequel.
Feeling one of their crewmates in trouble, a small group composed of Sanji, Luffy, Nami, Usopp and Brook decides to go and help. The result is Sanji reliving one of his worst nightmares, Zoro having to put himself together and a very persistent bounty hunter trailing the Strawhats to claim his prize back... and maybe more.
!Contains examples of:
*AdultFear: Starvation. Sanji had to live through this, and now one of his crewmates suffered the same fate while he wasn't there to help.
** Even worse, Zoro was deliberately tortured by a bounty hunter wanting any crumb of information about the crew. Needless to say, he's not happy when he comes back to his lair to find his prey fled and immediately starts to tag him.
* IronWoobie: Zoro was really put through the blender here, being tortured until he snitched on his crewmates and blaming himself for not being strong enough to resist. Being Zoro, he refuses to lay down and die.
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The Alchemist's birth name is actually Magnus Panaceam, which plays a role in the first sequel.
