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* IllGirl:
** Jill has always had a bad heart. Less than a year after arriving in Flower Bud Village, she is left bedbound and dying due to heart failure.
** Jamie's mother died of a genetic defect that gave her a sudden heart attack. [[spoiler:Jamie inherited this and also dies of cardiac arrest]].
** Jill has always had a bad heart. Less than a year after arriving in Flower Bud Village, she is left bedbound and dying due to heart failure.
** Jamie's mother died of a genetic defect that gave her a sudden heart attack. [[spoiler:Jamie inherited this and also dies of cardiac arrest]].
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* DeathByDespair: Jamie's mother died of a sudden stress-induced heart attack. This is very similar to a Takotsubo cardiomyopathy. [[spoiler:Jamie]] also dies of this after [[spoiler:he freaks out, believing he gave Jill a fatal heart attack]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6167538/1/Mind-Brigade Mind Brigade]]'' is a three-chapter ''VideoGame/HarvestMoonMagicalMelody'' fanfic that was written for a contest. It's a dark Jamie-focused story.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6167538/1/Mind-Brigade Mind Brigade]]'' by Ekoaleko is a three-chapter ''VideoGame/HarvestMoonMagicalMelody'' fanfic that was written for a contest. It's a dark Jamie-focused story.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6167538/1/Mind-Brigade Mind Brigade]]'' is a three-chapter ''VideoGame/HarvestMoonMagicalMelody'' that was written for a contest. It's a dark Jamie-focused story.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6167538/1/Mind-Brigade Mind Brigade]]'' is a three-chapter ''VideoGame/HarvestMoonMagicalMelody'' fanfic that was written for a contest. It's a dark Jamie-focused story.
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->-''There were two things in the world that were always, always inescapable, no matter how far you ran and how desperately you hid. The first was death. The second, truth.''
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->-''There were two things in the world that were always, always inescapable, no matter how far you ran and how desperately you hid. The first was death. The second, truth.''
The Harvest Goddess has turned to stone. Jamie is the only one who can save her, but he doesn't know how. Things change when a new person, a bright-eyed farmer named "Jill", arrives in Flower Bud Village. Jamie instantly hates this new girl and wants to be the one to save the Goddess. Barely a season after arriving in town, Jill's health takes a sudden turn for the worse and she is hospitalized. Alex asks Jamie to fill in on her farm while she's bedbound, which the man begrudgingly accepts.
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6167538/1/Mind-Brigade Mind Brigade]]'' is a three-chapter ''VideoGame/HarvestMoonMagicalMelody'' that was written for a contest. It's a dark Jamie-focused story.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* AdaptationNameChange: The female protagonist's CanonName is "Amanda", but the fanfic calls her "Jill" instead.
* AlternateUniverseFic: The story uses ''Magical Melody'' as its basis but it deviates heavily once Jill is hospitalized.
* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Jamie]] dies of a heart attack but [[spoiler:Jill is given his heart and recovers]]. It's also shown that [[spoiler:Eve didn't get abortion after all and decided to keep the baby, naming her [[DeadGuyJunior after Jamie]]]].
* DarkFic: All the fluff is taken out of the characters and is replaced with dark realism.
* DeadGuyJunior: [[spoiler:Eve]] names her daughter after [[spoiler:the recently deceased Jamie]].
* IllGirl:
** Jill has always had a bad heart. Less than a year after arriving in Flower Bud Village, she is left bedbound and dying due to heart failure.
** Jamie's mother died of a genetic defect that gave her a sudden heart attack. [[spoiler:Jamie inherited this and also dies of cardiac arrest]].
* MistakenForPregnant: Eve spreads a rumor that Jill is pregnant because she looks a little rotund. It's not true.
* SnowMeansDeath: Subverted with [[spoiler:Jill]], who narrowly escapes death. Instead, [[spoiler:Jamie]] died that same winter day [[spoiler:due to the shock of thinking he had given Jill a fatal heart attack]].
The Harvest Goddess has turned to stone. Jamie is the only one who can save her, but he doesn't know how. Things change when a new person, a bright-eyed farmer named "Jill", arrives in Flower Bud Village. Jamie instantly hates this new girl and wants to be the one to save the Goddess. Barely a season after arriving in town, Jill's health takes a sudden turn for the worse and she is hospitalized. Alex asks Jamie to fill in on her farm while she's bedbound, which the man begrudgingly accepts.
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6167538/1/Mind-Brigade Mind Brigade]]'' is a three-chapter ''VideoGame/HarvestMoonMagicalMelody'' that was written for a contest. It's a dark Jamie-focused story.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* AdaptationNameChange: The female protagonist's CanonName is "Amanda", but the fanfic calls her "Jill" instead.
* AlternateUniverseFic: The story uses ''Magical Melody'' as its basis but it deviates heavily once Jill is hospitalized.
* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Jamie]] dies of a heart attack but [[spoiler:Jill is given his heart and recovers]]. It's also shown that [[spoiler:Eve didn't get abortion after all and decided to keep the baby, naming her [[DeadGuyJunior after Jamie]]]].
* DarkFic: All the fluff is taken out of the characters and is replaced with dark realism.
* DeadGuyJunior: [[spoiler:Eve]] names her daughter after [[spoiler:the recently deceased Jamie]].
* IllGirl:
** Jill has always had a bad heart. Less than a year after arriving in Flower Bud Village, she is left bedbound and dying due to heart failure.
** Jamie's mother died of a genetic defect that gave her a sudden heart attack. [[spoiler:Jamie inherited this and also dies of cardiac arrest]].
* MistakenForPregnant: Eve spreads a rumor that Jill is pregnant because she looks a little rotund. It's not true.
* SnowMeansDeath: Subverted with [[spoiler:Jill]], who narrowly escapes death. Instead, [[spoiler:Jamie]] died that same winter day [[spoiler:due to the shock of thinking he had given Jill a fatal heart attack]].
