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* ElementalHair: Bajin, who also literally has fire powers.
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* ElementalHair: Bajin, who also literally has Bajin is a redhead with fire powers.
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* ElementalHair: Bajin, who also literally has fire powers.
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* FieryRedhead: Bajin, who also literally has fire powers.
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Mi Tru Lov is an Webcomic/{{Axis Powers Hetalia}} fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 10 chapters.
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Mi Tru Lov is an Webcomic/{{Axis Powers Hetalia}} fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 10 11 chapters.
* FieryRedhead: Bajin, who also literally has fire powers.
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** ''"sie"'' is used instead of "she" in chapter 11.
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** "I" is often misspelt as ''"je"''.
** ''"repomdre me"''. Even the {{Gratuitous French}} is riddled with {{Rouge Angles of Satin}}.
* GratuitousForeignLanguage: A rare Proto-Indo-European example. "Sister" is misspelt as ''"swésor"'', which is the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Indo-European_vocabulary#Kinship Proto-Indo-European]] term for a female sibling.
** ''"repomdre me"''. Even the {{Gratuitous French}} is riddled with {{Rouge Angles of Satin}}.
* GratuitousForeignLanguage: A rare Proto-Indo-European example. "Sister" is misspelt as ''"swésor"'', which is the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Indo-European_vocabulary#Kinship Proto-Indo-European]] term for a female sibling.
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Mi Tru Lov is an Webcomic/{{Axis Powers Hetalia}} fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 7 chapters.
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Mi Tru Lov is an Webcomic/{{Axis Powers Hetalia}} fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 7 10 chapters.
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* GratuitousGerman: At the end of chapter 10.
---> den she waved her hund, and I eas frei!
---> den she waved her hund, and I eas frei!
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* GratuitousFrench: ''"je work"'' , or "je worke", assuming that "worker" is even a verb.
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** Also, when Kawaiilyn finds out that Russia is going to [[spoiler:marry one of her cousins]]:
---> '''Kawaiilyn''': SNERTLEKTES NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!
---> '''Kawaiilyn''': SNERTLEKTES NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!
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* MeetTheInLaws: When Kawaiilyn finds out that Russia is planning to marry [[spoiler:Snoteleks, or Vommy, if she ''"profess 2 be betah in da night"'']
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* MeetTheInLaws: When Kawaiilyn finds out that Russia is planning to marry [[spoiler:Snoteleks, or Vommy, if she ''"profess 2 be betah in da night"'']
night"'']]. She doesn't take too well to the idea of Russia being her ''"coosin in lah"''.
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* ElementalPowers: Vommy, Snoteleks, Russia, Kawaiilyn [[spoiler:and Bajin.]]
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* ElementalPowers: Vommy, Snoteleks, Russia, Kawaiilyn [[spoiler:and Bajin.]]
and Bajin.
* MeetTheInLaws: When Kawaiilyn finds out that Russia is planning to marry [[spoiler:Snoteleks, or Vommy, if she ''"profess 2 be betah in da night"'']
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* ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler:Kawaiilyn and Bajin's dad.]]
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* ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler:Kawaiilyn Kawaiilyn and Bajin's dad.]]
dad.
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Mi Tru Lov is an Webcomic/{{AxisPowersHetalia}} fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 7 chapters.
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Mi Tru Lov is an Webcomic/{{AxisPowersHetalia}} Webcomic/{{Axis Powers Hetalia}} fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 7 chapters.
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Mi Tru Lov is an Webcomic/{{AxisPowersHetalia Axis Powers Hetalia}} fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 7 chapters.
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Mi Tru Lov is an Webcomic/{{AxisPowersHetalia Axis Powers Hetalia}} Webcomic/{{AxisPowersHetalia}} fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 7 chapters.
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Mi Tru Lov is an Webcomic/[[AxisPowersHetalia Axis Powers Hetalia]] fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 7 chapters.
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Mi Tru Lov is an Webcomic/[[AxisPowersHetalia Webcomic/{{AxisPowersHetalia Axis Powers Hetalia]] Hetalia}} fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 7 chapters.
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Mi Tru Lov is an [[AxisPowersHetalia Axis Powers Hetalia]] fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 7 chapters.
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Mi Tru Lov is an [[AxisPowersHetalia Webcomic/[[AxisPowersHetalia Axis Powers Hetalia]] fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 7 chapters.
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* RightForTheWrongReasons: Kawaiilyn uses what could be counted as {{InsaneTrollLogic}} to deduce that the portal is to the Hetalia world: she's arguing with her sister, and a random portal appears because {{RealityIsOutToLunch}}, so it must be to the Hetalia world. She is somehow right.
** She also implies that Bajin is dead with almost no evidence to support her theory. England confirms that it's likely that she will die, but they don't have to worry, [[spoiler:as Bajin goes to join Vommy and Snoteleks after waking up]]
** She also implies that Bajin is dead with almost no evidence to support her theory. England confirms that it's likely that she will die, but they don't have to worry, [[spoiler:as Bajin goes to join Vommy and Snoteleks after waking up]]
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* RightForTheWrongReasons: Kawaiilyn uses what could be counted as {{InsaneTrollLogic}} {{Insane Troll Logic}} to deduce that the portal is to the Hetalia world: she's arguing with her sister, and a random portal appears because {{RealityIsOutToLunch}}, {{Reality Is Out To Lunch}}, so it must be to the Hetalia world. She is somehow right.
** She also implies that Bajin is dead with almost no evidence to support her theory. England confirms that it's likely that she will die, but they don't have to worry, [[spoiler:as Bajin goes to join Vommy and Snoteleks after wakingup]]
up.]]
** She also implies that Bajin is dead with almost no evidence to support her theory. England confirms that it's likely that she will die, but they don't have to worry, [[spoiler:as Bajin goes to join Vommy and Snoteleks after waking
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* RightForTheWrongReasons: Kawaiilyn uses what could be counted as {{InsaneTrollLogic}} to deduce that the portal is to the Hetalia world: she's arguing with her sister, and a random portal appears because {{RealityIsOutToLunch}}, so it must be to the Hetalia world. She is somehow right.
** She also implies that Bajin is dead with almost no evidence to support her theory. England confirms that it's likely that she will die, but they don't have to worry, [[spoiler:as Bajin goes to join Vommy and Snoteleks after waking up]]
** She also implies that Bajin is dead with almost no evidence to support her theory. England confirms that it's likely that she will die, but they don't have to worry, [[spoiler:as Bajin goes to join Vommy and Snoteleks after waking up]]
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Mi Tru Lov is an [[AxisPowersHetalia Axis Powers Hetalia]] fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 6 chapters.
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Mi Tru Lov is an [[AxisPowersHetalia Axis Powers Hetalia]] fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 6 7 chapters.
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* BigNo: Occurs in chapter four, only it's misspelt as [[RougeAngelsOfSatin ''"moooooo!"'']]
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* BigNo: Occurs in chapter four, only it's misspelt as [[RougeAngelsOfSatin [[RougeAnglesOfSatin ''"moooooo!"'']]
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* BigNo: Occurs in chapter four, only it's misspelt as [[RougeAngelsOfSatin ''"moooooo!"'']]
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** This occurs several times in chapter 7, in instances such as this:
---> "YELLL!" we ol yelled
---> "YELLL!" we ol yelled
* LoveDodecahedron: Between Kawaiilyn and pretty much every canon character mentioned.
* PerfectlyCromulentWord: ''"[[RougeAnglesOfSatin covfefe]]"'' is used as a misspelling of coffee many times in chapter 7.
** ''"excquestioned"''
** ''"somebloke"''
** ''"excquestioned"''
** ''"somebloke"''
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** ''"rememememememememememebered"''
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*AccidentalMisnaming: America is constantly referred to as Murcia, a region in Spain.
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The fanfic follows a 14-year-old Japanese girl named Kawaiilyn Sugoi. After her sister Bajin tells her that she is not kawaii, she jumps into a mysterious portal. From thereon, we see Kawaiilyn arrive and take to life in the Hetalia world, which includes but by no means is limited to: fangirling over the main characters before falling in love with Japan; befriending the canon characters; becoming involved in efforts to stop her cousins [[UnfortunateNames Vommy and Snoteleks]] teaming up with Russia to kill the other nations.
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The fanfic follows a 14-year-old Japanese girl named Kawaiilyn Sugoi. After her sister Bajin tells her that she is not kawaii, she jumps into a mysterious portal. From thereon, we see Kawaiilyn arrive and take to life in the Hetalia world, which includes but by no means is limited to: fangirling over the main characters before falling in love with Japan; befriending the canon characters; becoming involved in efforts to stop her cousins [[UnfortunateNames Vommy and Snoteleks]] teaming up with Russia to kill the other nations. nations and gaining elemental powers.
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* ElementalPowers: Vommy, Snoteleks, Russia, Kawaiilyn [[spoiler:and Bajin]]
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Bajin.]]
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Mi Tru Lov is an [[AxisPowersHetalia Axis Powers Hetalia]] fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 5 chapters.
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Mi Tru Lov is an [[AxisPowersHetalia Axis Powers Hetalia]] fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 5 6 chapters.
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*UnfortunateName: Vommy and Snoteleks.
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* ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler:Kawaiilyn and Bajin's dad]]
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* ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler:Kawaiilyn and Bajin's dad]]
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*ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler:Kawaiilyn and Bajin's dad]]
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* GratuitousJapanese: Random lines of dialogue are in Japanese, some rendered in the Latin alphabet and others not.
** There is one instance of Japan's Japanese switching alphabets halfway through:
--->'''Japan''': Damare, イングランド、親愛なるばか!
* InfoDump: Kawaiilyn explaining her backstory to the canon characters.
** There is one instance of Japan's Japanese switching alphabets halfway through:
--->'''Japan''': Damare, イングランド、親愛なるばか!
* InfoDump: Kawaiilyn explaining her backstory to the canon characters.
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*LongLostRelative: Vommy and Snoteleks. Kawaiilyn doesn't seem to know a lot about them, other than the fact that they're her cousins who somehow manifested in the Hetalia world before her.
*MostFanficWritersAreGirls
*OutOfCharacterMoment: Pretty much every canon character with a line of dialogue.
*MostFanficWritersAreGirls
*OutOfCharacterMoment: Pretty much every canon character with a line of dialogue.
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** Several words and phrases in the fic are completely unintelligible, such as ''"ja d gke."'', ''[[AccidentalInnuendo "prostitute e gud ladder"]]'' and ''"ranke"''.
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** Several words and phrases in the fic are completely unintelligible, such as ''"ja d gke."'', ''[[AccidentalInnuendo "prostitute e gud ladder"]]'' and ''"ranke"''.''"ranke"''.
*TechnicolorEyes: Kawaiilyn has hetereochromia: one eye is black and the other is red.
*YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Kawaiilyn's hair is purple.
*TechnicolorEyes: Kawaiilyn has hetereochromia: one eye is black and the other is red.
*YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Kawaiilyn's hair is purple.
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[[caption-width-right:250:The totally-not-taken-from-Google-Images cover.]]
Mi Tru Lov is an [[AxisPowersHetalia Axis Powers Hetalia]] fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 5 chapters.
The fanfic follows a 14-year-old Japanese girl named Kawaiilyn Sugoi. After her sister Bajin tells her that she is not kawaii, she jumps into a mysterious portal. From thereon, we see Kawaiilyn arrive and take to life in the Hetalia world, which includes but by no means is limited to: fangirling over the main characters before falling in love with Japan; befriending the canon characters; becoming involved in efforts to stop her cousins [[UnfortunateNames Vommy and Snoteleks]] teaming up with Russia to kill the other nations.
The spelling of the fanfic is notoriously poor, despite the alleged help of the author's "fren bey". It has progressively worsened as the fic has continued, with only a few unintelligible words in the first chapter compared to about 15 in the 5th. Perhaps the only existing critique of this fic, updated with every new chapter, can be found [[https://www.quotev.com/story/7857155/The-Big-Book-of-Mary-Sues-II here]]. It is confirmed by the author to be a "satirical fiction".
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!! ''Mi tru lov'' contains examples of:
*DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: ''"Eye woke upp on the flor. as ii woke up, I was on da flor."''
** "''it was in Japanese but i know japanoise as I am japoniose and my parents taught me japapnois so i speak jaipennese."''
** "''as i read the let, it red"''
** "''thro da foret to da hose to you left. the hose on you left is were we r. "''
** Kawaillyn reiterates three times in chapter two that she cried because she was shocked.
* RougeAnglesOfSatin: England is the worst example of this, having his name misspelt as ''"pengland"'' , ''"etnalgand"'', ''"englnad"'', ''"Englejn"'', ''"ngla"'', ''"nglen"'', and ''"ngland"''. There is only one instance of it being spelled correctly.
** Japan is referred to as ''"jpan"'', ''"jaan"'', ''"jpn"'', ''"jpane"'', ''"jpern"'' and ''"jpen"'' with two instances of correct spellings.
** Many characters have one or no correct spellings to their names at all.
** Snoteleks' name is misspelt as ''"seokenjtls"'' the second time it's mentioned.
** "Konnichiwa" is misspelt as ''"knihcia"'', ironically when Japan says it.
** Several words and phrases in the fic are completely unintelligible, such as ''"ja d gke."'', ''[[AccidentalInnuendo "prostitute e gud ladder"]]'' and ''"ranke"''.
[[caption-width-right:250:The totally-not-taken-from-Google-Images cover.]]
Mi Tru Lov is an [[AxisPowersHetalia Axis Powers Hetalia]] fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 5 chapters.
The fanfic follows a 14-year-old Japanese girl named Kawaiilyn Sugoi. After her sister Bajin tells her that she is not kawaii, she jumps into a mysterious portal. From thereon, we see Kawaiilyn arrive and take to life in the Hetalia world, which includes but by no means is limited to: fangirling over the main characters before falling in love with Japan; befriending the canon characters; becoming involved in efforts to stop her cousins [[UnfortunateNames Vommy and Snoteleks]] teaming up with Russia to kill the other nations.
The spelling of the fanfic is notoriously poor, despite the alleged help of the author's "fren bey". It has progressively worsened as the fic has continued, with only a few unintelligible words in the first chapter compared to about 15 in the 5th. Perhaps the only existing critique of this fic, updated with every new chapter, can be found [[https://www.quotev.com/story/7857155/The-Big-Book-of-Mary-Sues-II here]]. It is confirmed by the author to be a "satirical fiction".
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!! ''Mi tru lov'' contains examples of:
*DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: ''"Eye woke upp on the flor. as ii woke up, I was on da flor."''
** "''it was in Japanese but i know japanoise as I am japoniose and my parents taught me japapnois so i speak jaipennese."''
** "''as i read the let, it red"''
** "''thro da foret to da hose to you left. the hose on you left is were we r. "''
** Kawaillyn reiterates three times in chapter two that she cried because she was shocked.
* RougeAnglesOfSatin: England is the worst example of this, having his name misspelt as ''"pengland"'' , ''"etnalgand"'', ''"englnad"'', ''"Englejn"'', ''"ngla"'', ''"nglen"'', and ''"ngland"''. There is only one instance of it being spelled correctly.
** Japan is referred to as ''"jpan"'', ''"jaan"'', ''"jpn"'', ''"jpane"'', ''"jpern"'' and ''"jpen"'' with two instances of correct spellings.
** Many characters have one or no correct spellings to their names at all.
** Snoteleks' name is misspelt as ''"seokenjtls"'' the second time it's mentioned.
** "Konnichiwa" is misspelt as ''"knihcia"'', ironically when Japan says it.
** Several words and phrases in the fic are completely unintelligible, such as ''"ja d gke."'', ''[[AccidentalInnuendo "prostitute e gud ladder"]]'' and ''"ranke"''.
