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* AmnesiaEpisode: The entire basis of the story.
* {{Angst}}: A lot of it.
* {{Angst}}: A lot of it.
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* GenFic: Despite the author's [[ShipperOnDeck tendencies]], there is to be no ship in this fic.
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* OhCrap: At the end of Chapter 1.
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* RealityEnsues: Perhaps Lilac believed that she would have been able to Dragon Boost out of that river and defy logic like she was always able to, but reality had other plans.
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* ShowerOfAngst: Carol takes one in Chapter 3.
* SickEpisode: Sort of. A lot of the story is set in a hospital, anyway.
* StuffBlowingUp: The robot in Chapter 1.
** See also DefeatEqualsExplosion.
* SickEpisode: Sort of. A lot of the story is set in a hospital, anyway.
* StuffBlowingUp: The robot in Chapter 1.
** See also DefeatEqualsExplosion.
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* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: The story is about Lilac, bringer of Freedom, losing her memories. [[CaptainObvious Go figure.]]
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* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: The story is about Lilac, bringer of Freedom, losing her memories. [[CaptainObvious Go figure.]]
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''Memories of a Freedom Lost'' is a VideoGame/{{Freedom Planet}} fanfiction written by author {{@/mpuppy4}}. It tells the story of main character Sash Lilac losing her memories in a freak accident, and how her friends, allies, and enemies deal with the situation.
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''Memories of a Freedom Lost'' is a VideoGame/{{Freedom Planet}} fanfiction written by author {{@/mpuppy4}}.[[{{@/mpuppy4}} Spookyrus]]. It tells the story of main character Sash Lilac losing her memories in a freak accident, and how her friends, allies, and enemies deal with the situation.
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The story can be read on [[https://www.deviantart.com/users/outgoing?https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12482492/1/Memories-of-a-Freedom-Lost FanFiction]], [[https://mpuppy4.deviantart.com/art/Memories-of-a-Freedom-Lost-Chapter-1-Riveredge-679900420 DeviantArt]], [[https://www.wattpad.com/story/141269199-memories-of-a-freedom-lost-a-freedom-planet-story Wattpad]], [[https://www.quotev.com/story/10952789/Memories-of-a-Freedom-Lost/1 Quotev]], and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/10876221 Archive of Our Own]].
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The story can be read on [[https://www.deviantart.com/users/outgoing?https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12482492/1/Memories-of-a-Freedom-Lost FanFiction]], [[https://mpuppy4.[[https://https://www.deviantart.com/art/Memories-of-a-Freedom-Lost-Chapter-1-Riveredge-679900420 com/spookyrus/art/Memories-of-a-Freedom-Lost-Chapter-1-Riveredge-679900420 DeviantArt]], [[https://www.wattpad.com/story/141269199-memories-of-a-freedom-lost-a-freedom-planet-story Wattpad]], [[https://www.quotev.com/story/10952789/Memories-of-a-Freedom-Lost/1 Quotev]], and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/10876221 Archive of Our Own]].
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The story can be read on [[https://www.deviantart.com/users/outgoing?https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12482492/1/Memories-of-a-Freedom-Lost FanFiction]], [[https://mpuppy4.deviantart.com/art/Memories-of-a-Freedom-Lost-Chapter-1-Riveredge-679900420 DeviantArt]], [[https://www.wattpad.com/story/141269199-memories-of-a-freedom-lost-a-freedom-planet-story Wattpad]], [[https://www.quotev.com/story/10952789/Memories-of-a-Freedom-Lost Quotev]], and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/10876221 Archive of Our Own]].
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The story can be read on [[https://www.deviantart.com/users/outgoing?https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12482492/1/Memories-of-a-Freedom-Lost FanFiction]], [[https://mpuppy4.deviantart.com/art/Memories-of-a-Freedom-Lost-Chapter-1-Riveredge-679900420 DeviantArt]], [[https://www.wattpad.com/story/141269199-memories-of-a-freedom-lost-a-freedom-planet-story Wattpad]], [[https://www.quotev.com/story/10952789/Memories-of-a-Freedom-Lost com/story/10952789/Memories-of-a-Freedom-Lost/1 Quotev]], and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/10876221 Archive of Our Own]].
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* DarkerAndEdgier: In comparison to the game itself, the story takes a more realistic and depressing approach. It deals with topics like brain damage, loss of identity, motor function failure and the effects this can have on the victim and those around them.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: In comparison to the game itself, source material, the story takes a more realistic and depressing approach. It deals with topics like brain damage, loss of identity, motor function failure and the effects this can have on the victim and those around them.
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''Memories of a Freedom Lost'' is a VideoGame/{{Freedom Planet}} fanfiction written by author [[https://www.deviantart.com/mpuppy4 mpuppy4]]. It tells the story of main character Sash Lilac losing her memories in a freak accident, and how her friends, allies, and enemies deal with the situation.
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''Memories of a Freedom Lost'' is a VideoGame/{{Freedom Planet}} fanfiction written by author [[https://www.deviantart.com/mpuppy4 mpuppy4]].{{@/mpuppy4}}. It tells the story of main character Sash Lilac losing her memories in a freak accident, and how her friends, allies, and enemies deal with the situation.
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''Memories of a Freedom Lost'' is a VideoGame/{{Freedom Planet}} fanfiction written by author mpuppy4. It tells the story of main character Sash Lilac losing her memories in a freak accident, and how her friends, allies, and rivals deal with the situation.
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''Memories of a Freedom Lost'' is a VideoGame/{{Freedom Planet}} fanfiction written by author mpuppy4. [[https://www.deviantart.com/mpuppy4 mpuppy4]]. It tells the story of main character Sash Lilac losing her memories in a freak accident, and how her friends, allies, and rivals enemies deal with the situation.
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The story can be read on [[https://www.deviantart.com/users/outgoing?https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12482492/1/Memories-of-a-Freedom-Lost [=FanFiction.net=]]], [[https://mpuppy4.deviantart.com/art/Memories-of-a-Freedom-Lost-Chapter-1-Riveredge-679900420 DeviantArt]], [[https://www.wattpad.com/story/141269199-memories-of-a-freedom-lost-a-freedom-planet-story Wattpad]], [[https://www.quotev.com/story/10952789/Memories-of-a-Freedom-Lost Quotev]], and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/10876221 Archive of Our Own]].
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The story can be read on [[https://www.deviantart.com/users/outgoing?https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12482492/1/Memories-of-a-Freedom-Lost [=FanFiction.net=]]], FanFiction]], [[https://mpuppy4.deviantart.com/art/Memories-of-a-Freedom-Lost-Chapter-1-Riveredge-679900420 DeviantArt]], [[https://www.wattpad.com/story/141269199-memories-of-a-freedom-lost-a-freedom-planet-story Wattpad]], [[https://www.quotev.com/story/10952789/Memories-of-a-Freedom-Lost Quotev]], and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/10876221 Archive of Our Own]].
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* TryingNotToCry: Carol at the beginning of Chapter 3, after first receiving the specifics on what happened to Lilac. [[TearsOfRemorse She breaks down as soon as she's alone.]]
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* TryingNotToCry: Carol at the beginning of Chapter 3, after first receiving the specifics on what happened to Lilac. [[TearsOfRemorse She breaks down as soon as she's alone.]]]]
* YourDoorWasOpen: The Magister's justification for coming into Lilac's hospital room unannounced in Chapter 2.
* YourDoorWasOpen: The Magister's justification for coming into Lilac's hospital room unannounced in Chapter 2.
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* FateWorseThanDeath: Lilac's amnesia could be considered this in several ways (then again, ''not'' in several others).
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* [[BroodingBoyGentleGirl Brooding Tomboy, Gentle Girl]]: Carol and Milla, though their relationship isn't portrayed as romantic.
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* OhCrap: At the end of chapter 1.
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* OhCrap: At the end of chapter Chapter 1.
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* ShoutOut: Blue being described as a "Stuffed Animal of Indeterminate Species" is a nod to GravityFalls.
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* ShoutOut: Blue being described as a "Stuffed Animal of Indeterminate Species" is a nod to GravityFalls.WesternAnimation/GravityFalls.
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* CannotCrossRunningWater: In Chapter 1, Lilac explicitly states this.
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* ReverseGrip: The way that Amnesilac incorrectly holds a pencil.
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* RapidFireNo: Carol upon bearing witness to Lilac's injured form in Chapter 1.
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** See also DefeatEqualsExplosion.
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** See also DefeatEqualsExplosion.DefeatEqualsExplosion.
* TryingNotToCry: Carol at the beginning of Chapter 3, after first receiving the specifics on what happened to Lilac. [[TearsOfRemorse She breaks down as soon as she's alone.]]
* TryingNotToCry: Carol at the beginning of Chapter 3, after first receiving the specifics on what happened to Lilac. [[TearsOfRemorse She breaks down as soon as she's alone.]]
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* ShowerOfAngst: Carol takes one in Chapter 3.
