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* CallForward:
** Khorieus disposes of Bernard Marquand's corpse in the Denerim Chantry's well.
** Merrill is learning about Blood Magic [[spoiler:and uses this knowledge to help Solona and Kallian remove the poison from Khorieus]].
* TheChosenMany: The ''Warhammer'' heroes are known as the "Ninety-Nine" and are part of the cosmic game between the Crone and the Raven. The Thedasians that traveled with the Ninety-Nine are specifically chosen by the ''Warhammer'' gods and are called the 'God-Marked.' For example [[spoiler: Kallian]] and [[spoiler:Solona]] are patrons of the gods [[spoiler:[[WarGod Khaine]]]] and [[spoiler:[[TheSmartGuy Hoeth]]]], respectively.
* ContinuityNod: The Author's stories generally contain many of these from the various Black Library novels to the Army Books/Codexes and RPG games.
** Khorieus disposes of Bernard Marquand's corpse in the Denerim Chantry's well.
** Merrill is learning about Blood Magic [[spoiler:and uses this knowledge to help Solona and Kallian remove the poison from Khorieus]].
* TheChosenMany: The ''Warhammer'' heroes are known as the "Ninety-Nine" and are part of the cosmic game between the Crone and the Raven. The Thedasians that traveled with the Ninety-Nine are specifically chosen by the ''Warhammer'' gods and are called the 'God-Marked.' For example [[spoiler: Kallian]] and [[spoiler:Solona]] are patrons of the gods [[spoiler:[[WarGod Khaine]]]] and [[spoiler:[[TheSmartGuy Hoeth]]]], respectively.
* ContinuityNod: The Author's stories generally contain many of these from the various Black Library novels to the Army Books/Codexes and RPG games.
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* TheChosenMany: The ''Warhammer'' heroes are known as the "Ninety-Nine" and are part of the cosmic game between the Crone and the Raven. The Thedasians that traveled with the Ninety-Nine are specifically chosen by the ''Warhammer'' gods and are called the 'God-Marked.' For example [[spoiler: Kallian]] and [[spoiler:Solona]] are
* ContinuityNod: The
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** Haakon lampshaded that his and Aedan's journey is turning out to be like something out of ''[[Literature/GotrekAndFelix My Travels with Gotrek]]''.
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** Haakon lampshaded lampshades that his and Aedan's journey is turning out to be like something out of ''[[Literature/GotrekAndFelix My Travels with Gotrek]]''.
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** Illenya was surprised and disgusted to learn that [[InterspeciesRomance interspecies breeding between elves and humans]] exists in Thedas.[[note]]Human/elf interbreeding does exist in the ''Warhammer'' world but not too often. In ''Gilead's Blood'' by Dan Abnett, there is a half elf character who was thought by some and even the elves to be human.[[/note]]
** Sereda couldn't fathom the idea that commoner dwarves are allowed to fight as it is against tradition when it is the Warrior and Noble caste who are allowed to bearing arms and go into battle, while other castes solely fulfill their given roles, such as the blacksmiths that makes and provide the weapons. Vanyra finds this incredulous as in the ''Warhammer'' world ''every'' dwarf regardless of their occupation and background ''should'' learn how to fight (given to [[EverythingTryingToKillYou lots of enemies and monsters roaming about]]), and finds Sereda's views (and Thedas dwarfs in general) sounding like a ''[[HumansAreMorons umgi]]''.
** The ''Warhammer'' dwarfs shocked to see beardless male dwarves, as they deeply value their beards. Vanyra really finds it appalling that [[ApeShallNeverKillApe deadly inter-fighting occurs between Thedas dwarves]] (although she reluctantly admits that there is one case where Dawi grow violent against their own kind -- the Chaos Dwarfs). Also, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking dwarven alcohol sucks]].
* CurbStompBattle: This is what you get for bringing a badass from a WorldOfBadass to go toe-to-toe with some poor schmuck in Thedas.
* DanceBattler: Illenya and Yransair.
** Sereda couldn't fathom the idea that commoner dwarves are allowed to fight as it is against tradition when it is the Warrior and Noble caste who are allowed to bearing arms and go into battle, while other castes solely fulfill their given roles, such as the blacksmiths that makes and provide the weapons. Vanyra finds this incredulous as in the ''Warhammer'' world ''every'' dwarf regardless of their occupation and background ''should'' learn how to fight (given to [[EverythingTryingToKillYou lots of enemies and monsters roaming about]]), and finds Sereda's views (and Thedas dwarfs in general) sounding like a ''[[HumansAreMorons umgi]]''.
** The ''Warhammer'' dwarfs shocked to see beardless male dwarves, as they deeply value their beards. Vanyra really finds it appalling that [[ApeShallNeverKillApe deadly inter-fighting occurs between Thedas dwarves]] (although she reluctantly admits that there is one case where Dawi grow violent against their own kind -- the Chaos Dwarfs). Also, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking dwarven alcohol sucks]].
* CurbStompBattle: This is what you get for bringing a badass from a WorldOfBadass to go toe-to-toe with some poor schmuck in Thedas.
* DanceBattler: Illenya and Yransair.
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** Illenya was surprised and disgusted to learn that [[InterspeciesRomance interspecies breeding between elves and humans]] exists in Thedas.[[note]]Human/elf interbreeding does exist in the ''Warhammer'' world world, but not too often.is rare. In ''Gilead's Blood'' by Dan Abnett, there is a half elf character who was thought by some and even the elves to be human.[[/note]]
** Seredacouldn't can't fathom the idea that commoner dwarves are allowed to fight fight, as it is against tradition when it is among Thedan dwarves only the Warrior and Noble caste who are allowed to bearing bear arms and go into battle, while other castes solely fulfill their given roles, such as the blacksmiths that makes and provide the weapons. Vanyra finds this incredulous incredulous, as in the ''Warhammer'' world ''every'' dwarf regardless of their occupation and background ''should'' learn how to fight (given to [[EverythingTryingToKillYou lots of enemies and monsters roaming about]]), and finds Sereda's views (and Thedas dwarfs in general) sounding to sound like a those of ''[[HumansAreMorons umgi]]''.
** The ''Warhammer'' dwarfs are shocked to see beardless male dwarves, as they deeply value their beards. Vanyrareally also finds it appalling that [[ApeShallNeverKillApe deadly inter-fighting occurs between Thedas dwarves]] (although she reluctantly admits that there is one case where Dawi grow violent against their own kind -- the Chaos Dwarfs). Also, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking dwarven alcohol sucks]].
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* TheDreaded: The Thedans referred Khorieus as the "Silverite Chevalier."
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* FireForgedFriends: Khorieus, Illenya, and Yransair.
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* GivingRadioToTheRomans
** Vanyra intially considered of giving her knowledge of gunpowder weapons to the Thedas dwarves, but later decided not to because she doesn't trust them to use them for good use when they could possibly use them against each other over their petty in-fighting.
** Vanyra intially considered of giving her knowledge of gunpowder weapons to the Thedas dwarves, but later decided not to because she doesn't trust them to use them for good use when they could possibly use them against each other over their petty in-fighting.
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* GivingRadioToTheRomans
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** Vanyra intially considered of giving her knowledge of gunpowder weapons to the Thedas dwarves, but later decided not to because she doesn't trust them to usethem it for good use when they could possibly use them against each other over their petty in-fighting.infighting.
** Vanyra intially considered of giving her knowledge of gunpowder weapons to the Thedas dwarves, but later decided not to because she doesn't trust them to use
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* GladiatorGames: This is how we're introduce to the vampire bard Alejandro Cassimere.
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* {{Gorn}}: Considering that this ''is'' a ''Warhammer'' crossover, the author's stories in general tend to go into [[NightmareFuel horrific detail]] about the battles being fought and the way things get killed. So expect for LudicrousGibs, BodyHorror, and NauseaFuel.
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* {{Gorn}}: Considering that this ''is'' is a ''Warhammer'' crossover, the author's stories in general tend to go into [[NightmareFuel horrific detail]] about the battles being fought and the way things get killed. So expect for LudicrousGibs, BodyHorror, and NauseaFuel.
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* UnknownRival:
** Jacob Darius to Khorieus.
** The Darkspawn Vanguard to Vanyra.
** Jacob Darius to Khorieus.
** The Darkspawn Vanguard to Vanyra.
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* WorthyOpponent: Khorieus views Jacob Darius as one [[spoiler:after he finally kills him.]]
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''March of the Inevitable'' is a CrossOver {{Fanfic}} of ''Franchise/DragonAge'' and ''{{TabletopGame/Warhammer}}'' written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2143142/SpartAl412 SpartAl412]]. The story begins with the High Elf Chracian warrior Khorieus inadvertently flung through the Realms of Chaos by a Lord of Change following a hunt on a Chaos cultist and lands in Denerim. Initially, he along with city elf Kallian Tabris attempt to find a way back to his world while running afoul of the Templars but only to encounter others from his world who also find themselves in the same predicament. It is gradually reveal that [[PowersThatBe higher forces]] are at work in guiding these heroes to face [[AStormIsComing something]] that the world of Thedas isn't prepare for.
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''March of the Inevitable'' is a CrossOver {{Fanfic}} of ''Franchise/DragonAge'' and ''{{TabletopGame/Warhammer}}'' ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer}}'' written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2143142/SpartAl412 SpartAl412]]. The story begins with the High Elf Chracian warrior Khorieus inadvertently flung through the Realms of Chaos by a Lord of Change following a hunt on a Chaos cultist and lands in Denerim. Initially, he along with city elf Kallian Tabris attempt to find a way back to his world while running afoul of the Templars but only to encounter others from his world who also find themselves in the same predicament. It is gradually reveal that [[PowersThatBe higher forces]] are at work in guiding these heroes to face [[AStormIsComing something]] that the world of Thedas isn't prepare for.
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-->"[[IsThatTheBestYouCanDo Is that the best you got!?]] I've met ''Grombolgi''[[note]]translation: [[{{Hobbits}} halfings]][[/note]] tougher than you lot!"
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** Vaughan Kendells gets his comeuppance as in ''Origins'', but this time he [[KickTheSonOfABitch gets brutally rounded up by Khorieus "until blood matted his gauntlet"]] and finally "gutted like a pig" by Shianni. Even the Templars, who are investigating his death, have zero sympathy for the bastard.
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** Vaughan Kendells gets his comeuppance as in ''Origins'', but this time he [[KickTheSonOfABitch gets brutally rounded up by Khorieus "until blood matted his gauntlet"]] gauntlet" and finally "gutted like a pig" by Shianni. Even the Templars, who are investigating his death, have zero sympathy for the bastard.
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* FanService: Khorieus and Yransair has a [[ShirtlessScene shirtless]] spar at the dalish camp. This leads to Kallian going off for some [[ADateWithRosiePalms "private"]] time.
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* FanService: Khorieus and Yransair has a [[ShirtlessScene shirtless]] spar at the dalish camp. This leads to Kallian [[IllBeInMyBunk going off for some [[ADateWithRosiePalms "private"]] time."private" time]].
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: Given that there will be ''ninety-nine'' protagonists along with their companions, which would double to a total of '''198''' or more.
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* BiggerBad: The Raven/[[spoiler:Tzeentch]], along with the other [[spoiler:three Gods of Chaos]].
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''March of the Inevitable'' is a CrossOver FanFic of ''Franchise/DragonAge'' and ''{{TabletopGame/Warhammer}}'' written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2143142/SpartAl412 SpartAl412]]. The story begins with the High Elf Chracian warrior Khorieus inadvertently flung through the Realms of Chaos by a Lord of Change following a hunt on a Chaos cultist and lands in Denerim. Initially, he along with city elf Kallian Tabris attempt to find a way back to his world while running afoul of the Templars but only to encounter others from his world who also find themselves in the same predicament. It is gradually reveal that [[PowersThatBe higher forces]] are at work in guiding these heroes to face [[AStormIsComing something]] that the world of Thedas isn't prepare for.
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''March of the Inevitable'' is a CrossOver FanFic {{Fanfic}} of ''Franchise/DragonAge'' and ''{{TabletopGame/Warhammer}}'' written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2143142/SpartAl412 SpartAl412]]. The story begins with the High Elf Chracian warrior Khorieus inadvertently flung through the Realms of Chaos by a Lord of Change following a hunt on a Chaos cultist and lands in Denerim. Initially, he along with city elf Kallian Tabris attempt to find a way back to his world while running afoul of the Templars but only to encounter others from his world who also find themselves in the same predicament. It is gradually reveal that [[PowersThatBe higher forces]] are at work in guiding these heroes to face [[AStormIsComing something]] that the world of Thedas isn't prepare for.
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* BadassCrew: So far Khorieus, Illenya, Yransair, Kallian, Solona, and Theron in ''Blood of the Phoenix''. If the Ninety-Nine plus companions are truly united into one force it will be a sight to truly behold how badass they are.
* BadassGrandpa: The High Elves and Dwarfs are centuries old and some of them [[OlderThanTheyLook looked like they're in their thirties]]. Jacob Darius is a Templar at his prime and was expecting his grandchild. Warrior Priest Albrecht Krieger count for The Empire.
* BadassGrandpa: The High Elves and Dwarfs are centuries old and some of them [[OlderThanTheyLook looked like they're in their thirties]]. Jacob Darius is a Templar at his prime and was expecting his grandchild. Warrior Priest Albrecht Krieger count for The Empire.
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* {{Anticlimax}}: The siege of Isammar shortly ended with [[spoiler:the Vanguard having [[BoomHeadshot his head blown off]] by Vanyra, and causing the Vanguard's leaderless officers to fighting each other for leadership and leaving the entire Darkspawn army fall into disarray, thus making the Legion of the Dead to easily rout them before TheCavalry from Orzammar arrived]]. The Legion and including Sereda even deemed the whole thing a "disappointment."
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* {{Anticlimax}}: The siege of Isammar shortly ended endes with [[spoiler:the Vanguard having [[BoomHeadshot his head blown off]] by Vanyra, and causing the Vanguard's leaderless officers to fighting each other for leadership and leaving the entire Darkspawn army fall into disarray, thus making the Legion of the Dead to easily rout them before TheCavalry from Orzammar arrived]]. The Legion and including Sereda even deemed the whole thing a "disappointment."
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** The Blood Mage Marius want to summon some demons to help him stop some pursuing Templars, but only to open a portal to and stare in utter horror at the [[EldritchLocation Realm of Chaos]] before getting skewered by a Templar's blade. It seems that his death spared him from a FateWorseThanDeath, but his soul is presumably punished in eternal damnation.
** Like in ''Origins'', Vaughan Kendells gets his comeuppance but this time he [[KickTheSonOfABitch gets brutally rounded up by Khorieus "until blood matted his gauntlet"]] and finally [[ExactWords "gutted like a pig"]] by Shianni. Even the Templars, who are investigating his death, have zero sympathy for the bastard.
* AtopAMountainOfCorpses: This figuratively happened when [[spoiler:Kallian journeyed into Khorieus' mind and finding endless bodies of all his enemies that he had slain throughout his life]].
* BackToBackBadasses: When Lothaire and Albrecht finally meet with each other during a Darkspawn attack in ''A War in Winter''.
* ActionGirl: Kallian, Illenya, Solona, Vanyra, Melusine, Ehlenien, and Karsten.
** Like in ''Origins'', Vaughan Kendells gets his comeuppance but this time he [[KickTheSonOfABitch gets brutally rounded up by Khorieus "until blood matted his gauntlet"]] and finally [[ExactWords "gutted like a pig"]] by Shianni. Even the Templars, who are investigating his death, have zero sympathy for the bastard.
* AtopAMountainOfCorpses: This figuratively happened when [[spoiler:Kallian journeyed into Khorieus' mind and finding endless bodies of all his enemies that he had slain throughout his life]].
* BackToBackBadasses: When Lothaire and Albrecht finally meet with each other during a Darkspawn attack in ''A War in Winter''.
* ActionGirl: Kallian, Illenya, Solona, Vanyra, Melusine, Ehlenien, and Karsten.
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** The Blood Mage Marius want wants to summon some demons to help him stop some pursuing Templars, but can only to open a portal to and stare in utter horror at the [[EldritchLocation Realm of Chaos]] before getting skewered by a Templar's blade. It seems that his death spared him from a FateWorseThanDeath, but his soul is presumably punished in with eternal damnation.
**Like in ''Origins'', Vaughan Kendells gets his comeuppance as in ''Origins'', but this time he [[KickTheSonOfABitch gets brutally rounded up by Khorieus "until blood matted his gauntlet"]] and finally [[ExactWords "gutted like a pig"]] pig" by Shianni. Even the Templars, who are investigating his death, have zero sympathy for the bastard.
* AtopAMountainOfCorpses: This happens figurativelyhappened when [[spoiler:Kallian journeyed journeys into Khorieus' mind and finding endless finds the bodies of all his the enemies that he had has slain throughout his life]].
* %%* BackToBackBadasses: When Lothaire and Albrecht finally meet with each other during a Darkspawn attack in ''A War in Winter''.
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* AtopAMountainOfCorpses: This happens figuratively
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* BadassGrandpa: The High Elves and Dwarfs are centuries old and some of them [[OlderThanTheyLook looked like in their thirties]]. Jacob Darius is a Templar at his prime and was expecting his grandchild. Warrior Priest Albrecht Krieger count for The Empire.
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* BadassGrandpa: The High Elves and Dwarfs are centuries old and some of them [[OlderThanTheyLook looked like they're in their thirties]]. Jacob Darius is a Templar at his prime and was expecting his grandchild. Warrior Priest Albrecht Krieger count for The Empire.
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** Khorieus: "I am Khorieus Alatanrieth! And you will bettered by death you waste!"
** Rahkan-hotep: "I am Rahkan-hotep, barbarians! [[JusticeWillPrevail Let justice in Phakth's name be done!]]"
** Melusine: "I have fought and slain many demons, ''Herr'' Templar. I have conflagrated barbarian champions of the Ruinous Powers, savage warlords of the greenskins, undead horrors that stalk the night, piratical elves from across the ocean and the dwarves of the dark east. Take this message to your fellows, do not follow us for if you do, then I will be less than merciful."
** Rahkan-hotep: "I am Rahkan-hotep, barbarians! [[JusticeWillPrevail Let justice in Phakth's name be done!]]"
** Melusine: "I have fought and slain many demons, ''Herr'' Templar. I have conflagrated barbarian champions of the Ruinous Powers, savage warlords of the greenskins, undead horrors that stalk the night, piratical elves from across the ocean and the dwarves of the dark east. Take this message to your fellows, do not follow us for if you do, then I will be less than merciful."
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** Khorieus: '''Khorieus:''' "I am Khorieus Alatanrieth! And you will bettered by death you waste!"
**Rahkan-hotep: '''Rahkan-hotep:''' "I am Rahkan-hotep, barbarians! [[JusticeWillPrevail Let justice in Phakth's name be done!]]"
**Melusine: '''Melusine:''' "I have fought and slain many demons, ''Herr'' Templar. I have conflagrated barbarian champions of the Ruinous Powers, savage warlords of the greenskins, undead horrors that stalk the night, piratical elves from across the ocean and the dwarves of the dark east. Take this message to your fellows, do not follow us for if you do, then I will be less than merciful."
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--->'''Random mercenary:''' You better give yourself up dwarf! You're just going to make it worse for yourself!
--->'''Haakon:''' Give up!? Ha! Now you're funny manling! [[YouWillBeSpared I will kill you last]].
--->'''Haakon:''' Give up!? Ha! Now you're funny manling! [[YouWillBeSpared I will kill you last]].
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--->'''Random mercenary:''' You better give yourself up dwarf! You're just going to make it worse for yourself!
--->'''Haakon:'''yourself!\\
'''Haakon:''' Give up!? Ha! Now you're funny manling! [[YouWillBeSpared I will kill you last]].
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'''Haakon:''' Give up!? Ha! Now you're funny manling! [[YouWillBeSpared I will kill you last]].
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* BeastlyBloodsports: While being pursued by militiamen Kallian ran into a cockfighting ring which has nugs instead of roosters.
* BiggerBad: The Raven/[[spoiler:Tzeentch]] and along with the other [[spoiler:three Gods of Chaos]].
* BiggerBad: The Raven/[[spoiler:Tzeentch]] and along with the other [[spoiler:three Gods of Chaos]].
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* BeastlyBloodsports: While being pursued by militiamen militiamen, Kallian ran runs into a cockfighting ring which has nugs instead of roosters.
* BiggerBad: TheRaven/[[spoiler:Tzeentch]] and Raven/[[spoiler:Tzeentch]], along with the other [[spoiler:three Gods of Chaos]].
* BiggerBad: The
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** Khorieus dispose Bernard Marquand's corpse in the Denerim Chantry's well.
** Merrill is learning about Blood Magic [[spoiler:in which she use her knowledge to help Solona and Kallian removing the poison from Khorieus]].
* TheChosenMany: The Warhammer heroes are known as the 'Ninety-Nine' and are part of the cosmic game between the 'Crone' and the 'Raven'. The Thedasians that traveled with the Ninety-Nine are specifically chosen by the Warhammer Gods and are called the 'God-Marked.' For example [[spoiler: Kallian]] and [[spoiler:Solona]] are patrons of the gods [[spoiler:[[WarGod Khaine]]]] and [[spoiler:[[TheSmartGuy Hoeth]]]], respectively.
** Merrill is learning about Blood Magic [[spoiler:in which she use her knowledge to help Solona and Kallian removing the poison from Khorieus]].
* TheChosenMany: The Warhammer heroes are known as the 'Ninety-Nine' and are part of the cosmic game between the 'Crone' and the 'Raven'. The Thedasians that traveled with the Ninety-Nine are specifically chosen by the Warhammer Gods and are called the 'God-Marked.' For example [[spoiler: Kallian]] and [[spoiler:Solona]] are patrons of the gods [[spoiler:[[WarGod Khaine]]]] and [[spoiler:[[TheSmartGuy Hoeth]]]], respectively.
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** Khorieus dispose disposes of Bernard Marquand's corpse in the Denerim Chantry's well.
** Merrill is learning about Blood Magic[[spoiler:in which she use her [[spoiler:and uses this knowledge to help Solona and Kallian removing remove the poison from Khorieus]].
* TheChosenMany: TheWarhammer ''Warhammer'' heroes are known as the 'Ninety-Nine' "Ninety-Nine" and are part of the cosmic game between the 'Crone' Crone and the 'Raven'. Raven. The Thedasians that traveled with the Ninety-Nine are specifically chosen by the Warhammer Gods ''Warhammer'' gods and are called the 'God-Marked.' For example [[spoiler: Kallian]] and [[spoiler:Solona]] are patrons of the gods [[spoiler:[[WarGod Khaine]]]] and [[spoiler:[[TheSmartGuy Hoeth]]]], respectively.
** Merrill is learning about Blood Magic
* TheChosenMany: The
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** The Crone/[[spoiler:Morai-Heg]] mentions the involvement of the Kreeqar-gan, which is a name used in the ''Time of Legends'' series for one of the Warhammer setting's greatest evils, [[spoiler:Nagash]].
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** The Crone/[[spoiler:Morai-Heg]] mentions the involvement of the Kreeqar-gan, which is a name used in the ''Time of Legends'' series for one of the Warhammer ''Warhammer'' setting's greatest evils, [[spoiler:Nagash]].
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* CosmicChessGame: The sudden appearance of Warhammer characters in Thedas is all deliberately part of a conflict between the 'Crone' ([[spoiler:Morai-Heg]]) and the 'Raven' ([[spoiler:Tzeentch]]). It is clearly implied that the Raven has destroyed an unspeakable number of realities, and Thedas is the only recent reality facing imminent destruction. This is why the Crone is determined not to lose and is why she has chosen the 'Ninety-Nine' and their companions, the God-Marked, to prevent the Raven from claiming the 'Dragonsoul' ([[spoiler:the Archdemon's soul]]). Both use a game board to plot the "pieces" of their destinies.
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* CosmicChessGame: The sudden appearance of Warhammer ''Warhammer'' characters in Thedas is all deliberately part of a conflict between the 'Crone' ([[spoiler:Morai-Heg]]) and the 'Raven' ([[spoiler:Tzeentch]]). It is clearly implied that the Raven has destroyed an unspeakable number of realities, and Thedas is the only recent reality facing imminent destruction. This is why the Crone is determined not to lose and is why she has chosen the 'Ninety-Nine' and their companions, the God-Marked, to prevent the Raven from claiming the 'Dragonsoul' ([[spoiler:the Archdemon's soul]]). Both use a game board to plot the "pieces" of their destinies.
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** Kallian is quite surprised of the concept of humans being bound into servitude towards elves in the Warhammer world.
** Illenya was surprised and disgusted to learn that [[InterspeciesRomance interspecies breeding between elves and humans]] exists in Thedas.[[note]]Human/elf interbreeding does exist in the Warhammer world but not too often. In ''Gilead's Blood'' by Dan Abnett, there is a half elf character who was thought by some and even the elves to be human.[[/note]]
** Sereda couldn't fathom the idea that commoner dwarves are allowed to fight as it is against tradition when it is the Warrior and Noble caste who are allowed to bearing arms and go into battle, while other castes solely fulfill their given roles, such as the blacksmiths that makes and provide the weapons. Vanyra finds this incredulous as in the Warhammer world ''every'' dwarf regardless of their occupation and background ''should'' learn how to fight (given to [[EverythingTryingToKillYou lots of enemies and monsters roaming about]]), and finds Sereda's views (and Thedas dwarfs in general) sounding like a ''[[HumansAreMorons umgi]]''.
** For all Warhammer dwarfs they are shock to see beardless male dwarves whereas Warhammer dwarfs deeply valued their beards. Vanyra really find it appalling that [[ApeShallNeverKillApe deadly inter-fighting occurs between Thedas dwarves]] (though she reluctantly admits that the only exception when Warhammer dwarfs that get ever more violent with their own kind are the Chaos Dwarfs). Also, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking dwarven alcohol sucks]].
** Illenya was surprised and disgusted to learn that [[InterspeciesRomance interspecies breeding between elves and humans]] exists in Thedas.[[note]]Human/elf interbreeding does exist in the Warhammer world but not too often. In ''Gilead's Blood'' by Dan Abnett, there is a half elf character who was thought by some and even the elves to be human.[[/note]]
** Sereda couldn't fathom the idea that commoner dwarves are allowed to fight as it is against tradition when it is the Warrior and Noble caste who are allowed to bearing arms and go into battle, while other castes solely fulfill their given roles, such as the blacksmiths that makes and provide the weapons. Vanyra finds this incredulous as in the Warhammer world ''every'' dwarf regardless of their occupation and background ''should'' learn how to fight (given to [[EverythingTryingToKillYou lots of enemies and monsters roaming about]]), and finds Sereda's views (and Thedas dwarfs in general) sounding like a ''[[HumansAreMorons umgi]]''.
** For all Warhammer dwarfs they are shock to see beardless male dwarves whereas Warhammer dwarfs deeply valued their beards. Vanyra really find it appalling that [[ApeShallNeverKillApe deadly inter-fighting occurs between Thedas dwarves]] (though she reluctantly admits that the only exception when Warhammer dwarfs that get ever more violent with their own kind are the Chaos Dwarfs). Also, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking dwarven alcohol sucks]].
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** Kallian is quite surprised of the concept of humans being bound into servitude towards elves in the Warhammer ''Warhammer'' world.
** Illenya was surprised and disgusted to learn that [[InterspeciesRomance interspecies breeding between elves and humans]] exists in Thedas.[[note]]Human/elf interbreeding does exist in theWarhammer ''Warhammer'' world but not too often. In ''Gilead's Blood'' by Dan Abnett, there is a half elf character who was thought by some and even the elves to be human.[[/note]]
** Sereda couldn't fathom the idea that commoner dwarves are allowed to fight as it is against tradition when it is the Warrior and Noble caste who are allowed to bearing arms and go into battle, while other castes solely fulfill their given roles, such as the blacksmiths that makes and provide the weapons. Vanyra finds this incredulous as in theWarhammer ''Warhammer'' world ''every'' dwarf regardless of their occupation and background ''should'' learn how to fight (given to [[EverythingTryingToKillYou lots of enemies and monsters roaming about]]), and finds Sereda's views (and Thedas dwarfs in general) sounding like a ''[[HumansAreMorons umgi]]''.
**For all Warhammer The ''Warhammer'' dwarfs they are shock shocked to see beardless male dwarves whereas Warhammer dwarfs dwarves, as they deeply valued value their beards. Vanyra really find finds it appalling that [[ApeShallNeverKillApe deadly inter-fighting occurs between Thedas dwarves]] (though (although she reluctantly admits that the only exception when Warhammer dwarfs that get ever more there is one case where Dawi grow violent with against their own kind are -- the Chaos Dwarfs). Also, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking dwarven alcohol sucks]].
** Illenya was surprised and disgusted to learn that [[InterspeciesRomance interspecies breeding between elves and humans]] exists in Thedas.[[note]]Human/elf interbreeding does exist in the
** Sereda couldn't fathom the idea that commoner dwarves are allowed to fight as it is against tradition when it is the Warrior and Noble caste who are allowed to bearing arms and go into battle, while other castes solely fulfill their given roles, such as the blacksmiths that makes and provide the weapons. Vanyra finds this incredulous as in the
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* {{Gorn}}: Considering that this ''is'' a Warhammer crossover, the author's stories in general tend to go into [[NightmareFuel horrific detail]] about the battles being fought and the way things get killed. So expect for LudicrousGibs, BodyHorror, and NauseaFuel.
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* {{Gorn}}: Considering that this ''is'' a Warhammer ''Warhammer'' crossover, the author's stories in general tend to go into [[NightmareFuel horrific detail]] about the battles being fought and the way things get killed. So expect for LudicrousGibs, BodyHorror, and NauseaFuel.
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* HeroOfAnotherStory: Each of the Ninety-Nine are characters from the author's other Warhammer stories. Some of them are the protagonists of their own stories while others are {{Ascended Extra}}s and {{Early Bird Cameo}}s.
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* HeroOfAnotherStory: Each of the Ninety-Nine are characters from the author's other Warhammer ''Warhammer'' stories. Some of them are the protagonists of their own stories while others are {{Ascended Extra}}s and {{Early Bird Cameo}}s.
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* HumansAreSpecial: When discussing of Solona agreeing to come to the Warhammer world, Illenya ask if she is ready for the [[WarIsHell wars]] of their world to which Yransair replies: "She is a human, she will adapt and learn."
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* HumansAreSpecial: When discussing of Solona agreeing to come to the Warhammer ''Warhammer'' world, Illenya ask if she is ready for the [[WarIsHell wars]] of their world to which Yransair replies: "She is a human, she will adapt and learn."
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** Solona Amell ultimately intended to go with the High Elves to the Warhammer world, where magic is generally accepted (depending on the location and custom) rather than being put on the run by the Templars and Chantry.
** Khorieus briefly pondered on bringing some elves of the Sabrae clan to his world, but quickly dismissed the idea given the exact [[ForeverWar nature]] [[EverythingTryingToKillYou of]] [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt his]] [[CrapsackWorld world]].
** Khorieus briefly pondered on bringing some elves of the Sabrae clan to his world, but quickly dismissed the idea given the exact [[ForeverWar nature]] [[EverythingTryingToKillYou of]] [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt his]] [[CrapsackWorld world]].
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** Solona Amell ultimately intended to go with the High Elves to the Warhammer ''Warhammer'' world, where magic is generally accepted (depending on the location and custom) rather than being put on the run by the Templars and Chantry.
** Khorieus brieflypondered on considers bringing some elves of the Sabrae clan to his world, but quickly dismissed dismisses the idea given the exact [[ForeverWar nature]] [[EverythingTryingToKillYou of]] [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt his]] [[CrapsackWorld world]].
** Khorieus briefly
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* LanguageBarrier: Fortunately, both denizens of Thedas and the Warhammer world share the [[FantasyCounterpartCulture same language]] (Brettonia/Orlais, Albion/Ferelden, etc.). However, [[AliensSpeakingEnglish the Ferelden language]] is difficult to grasp for most of the Warhammer natives because Ferelden's counterpart, Albion, is a small, isolated island in which the Albion language is not very common.
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* LanguageBarrier: Fortunately, both denizens of Thedas and the Warhammer ''Warhammer'' world share the [[FantasyCounterpartCulture same language]] (Brettonia/Orlais, Albion/Ferelden, etc.). However, [[AliensSpeakingEnglish the Ferelden language]] is difficult to grasp for most of the Warhammer ''Warhammer'' natives because Ferelden's counterpart, Albion, is a small, isolated island in which the Albion language is not very common.
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* NoodleIncident: There are certain events the Warhammer characters will mention about their pasts but is only explained in the various non-crossover stories.
* NoSell: The lack of the Winds of Magic in Thedas is a concerning point for some of the Warhammer natives, such as the inability to creating runes without the Winds. However, there are some magic-users that have no problems wielding their brand of magic.
** The Warhammer natives' magics are not to say that they are immune to the Templars' AntiMagic abilities but they are not completely hampered by it. It is demonstrated with the Templars that fought Yransair were still able to resist a number of his spells.
* NoSell: The lack of the Winds of Magic in Thedas is a concerning point for some of the Warhammer natives, such as the inability to creating runes without the Winds. However, there are some magic-users that have no problems wielding their brand of magic.
** The Warhammer natives' magics are not to say that they are immune to the Templars' AntiMagic abilities but they are not completely hampered by it. It is demonstrated with the Templars that fought Yransair were still able to resist a number of his spells.
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* NoodleIncident: There are certain events the Warhammer ''Warhammer'' characters will mention about their pasts but is which are only explained in the various non-crossover stories.
*NoSell: NoSell:
** The lack of the Winds of Magic in Thedas is a concerning point for some of theWarhammer ''Warhammer'' natives, such as the inability who are for instance unable to creating runes without the Winds. However, there are some magic-users that have no problems wielding their brand of magic.
**The Warhammer natives' magics are While not to say that they are immune to the Templars' AntiMagic abilities but they abilities, the ''Warhammer'' natives are not completely hampered by it. It them. This is demonstrated with when the Templars that fought Yransair were still able to resist a number of his spells.
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** The lack of the Winds of Magic in Thedas is a concerning point for some of the
**
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* OneManArmy: Generally the Warhammer characters, but special mention should go to Vanyra Skorrisdottir for single-handedly annihilating nearly an entire Darkspawn war band within the span of a single chapter.
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* OneManArmy: Generally the Warhammer ''Warhammer'' characters, but special mention should go to Vanyra Skorrisdottir for single-handedly annihilating nearly an entire Darkspawn war band within the span of a single chapter.
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* TrappedInAnotherWorld: The premise of certain residents of the Warhammer world stranded in Thedas.
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* TrappedInAnotherWorld: The premise of certain the story is that a number of residents of the Warhammer ''Warhammer'' world become stranded in Thedas.
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* WhatTheHellAreYou: Anyone that is a Templar, a mercenary, or just unlucky enough to face any Warhammer badass ends up wondering what the hell are they up against.
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* WhatTheHellAreYou: Anyone that is a Templar, a mercenary, or just unlucky enough to face any Warhammer ''Warhammer'' badass ends up wondering what the hell are they up against.
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--->'''[[spoiler:Elena]]''': What are you?
--->'''Yransair''': We are the ''Asur'', human. The High Elves of Ulthuan, the Children of Isha, the Heirs of Asuryan, we have come from another plane of reality and we seek our way home.
--->'''Yransair''': We are the ''Asur'', human. The High Elves of Ulthuan, the Children of Isha, the Heirs of Asuryan, we have come from another plane of reality and we seek our way home.
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--->'''[[spoiler:Elena]]''': What are you?
--->'''Yransair''':you?\\
'''Yransair''': We are the ''Asur'', human. The High Elves of Ulthuan, the Children of Isha, the Heirs of Asuryan, we have come from another plane of reality and we seek our way home.
--->'''Yransair''':
'''Yransair''': We are the ''Asur'', human. The High Elves of Ulthuan, the Children of Isha, the Heirs of Asuryan, we have come from another plane of reality and we seek our way home.
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* YouKilledMyFather: Interesting inverted. The Guardsman [[spoiler:Daltyn]] that Khorieus killed [[spoiler:and used his intestines as a measuring unit]] brought the wrath of his [[spoiler:elven]] mother Lirena. [[spoiler:After she poisoned Khorieus, she suddenly had [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone a change of heart]] when she recognized Kallian (as she knew her mother) and learned that Khorieus saved her from Vaughan, and allowed herself to be killed by Illenya for atonement as there is no known cure for the poison.]]
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* YouKilledMyFather: Interesting inverted. The Guardsman [[spoiler:Daltyn]] that Khorieus killed [[spoiler:and used his intestines as a measuring unit]] brought the wrath of his [[spoiler:elven]] mother Lirena. [[spoiler:After she poisoned Khorieus, she suddenly had [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone a change of heart]] when she recognized Kallian (as she knew her mother) and learned that Khorieus saved her from Vaughan, and allowed herself to be killed by Illenya for atonement as there is no known cure for the poison.]]]]
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* HumansAreSpecial / HumansAreWarriors: When discussing of Solona agreeing to come to the Warhammer world, Illenya ask if she is ready for the [[WarIsHell wars]] of their world to which Yransair replies: "She is a human, she will adapt and learn."
* TheHomewardJourney: The goal of every Warhammer characters
* TheHomewardJourney: The goal of every Warhammer characters
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* HumansAreSpecial / HumansAreWarriors: HumansAreSpecial: When discussing of Solona agreeing to come to the Warhammer world, Illenya ask if she is ready for the [[WarIsHell wars]] of their world to which Yransair replies: "She is a human, she will adapt and learn."
* TheHomewardJourney: The goal of everyWarhammer characters ''Warhammer'' character.
* TheHomewardJourney: The goal of every
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* BadassBoast / MyNameIsInigoMontoya
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* BadassBoast / MyNameIsInigoMontoyaBadassBoast:
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*** This between him and a mercenary.
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--->'''Haakon:''' Give up!? Ha! Now your funny manling! [[YouWillBeSpared I will kill you last]].
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--->'''Haakon:''' Give up!? Ha! Now your you're funny manling! [[YouWillBeSpared I will kill you last]].
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* FanService: Khorieus and Yransair has a [[ShirtlessScene shirtless]] spar at the dalish camp. This leads to Kallian having some [[ADateWithRosiePalms 'private']] time.
* FireForgedFriends / TrueCompanions: Khorieus, Illenya, and Yransair.
* FishOutOfWater
* FireForgedFriends / TrueCompanions: Khorieus, Illenya, and Yransair.
* FishOutOfWater
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* FanService: Khorieus and Yransair has a [[ShirtlessScene shirtless]] spar at the dalish camp. This leads to Kallian having going off for some [[ADateWithRosiePalms 'private']] "private"]] time.
*FireForgedFriends / TrueCompanions: FireForgedFriends: Khorieus, Illenya, and Yransair.
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* HopeSpot:
** House Arekan are almost close to retaking Arekan Thaig from the Darkspawn with guns provided by Dorandor Ironheart [[spoiler:until a horde of Orcs shows up]].
** House Arekan are almost close to retaking Arekan Thaig from the Darkspawn with guns provided by Dorandor Ironheart [[spoiler:until a horde of Orcs shows up]].
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* HopeSpot:
**HopeSpot: House Arekan are almost close to retaking Arekan Thaig from the Darkspawn with guns provided by Dorandor Ironheart [[spoiler:until a horde of Orcs shows up]].
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* SwitchingPOV
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* WhamLine
** "[[spoiler:WAAAAAAGGGGHHHH!]]." Chapter 10 of "Ninety Nine Blades".
** "[[spoiler:WAAAAAAGGGGHHHH!]]." Chapter 10 of "Ninety Nine Blades".
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* WhamLine
**WhamLine: "[[spoiler:WAAAAAAGGGGHHHH!]]." Chapter 10 of "Ninety Nine Blades".
**
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* WhatTheHellAreYou: Anyone that is a Templar, mercenary, or that is unlucky for facing, generally, any Warhammer Badass are wondering what the hell are they up against.
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* WhatTheHellAreYou: Anyone that is a Templar, a mercenary, or that is just unlucky for facing, generally, enough to face any Warhammer Badass are badass ends up wondering what the hell are they up against. against.
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* BackToBackBadasses:
** When Lothaire and Albrecht finally meet with each other during a Darkspawn attack in ''A War in Winter''.
** When Lothaire and Albrecht finally meet with each other during a Darkspawn attack in ''A War in Winter''.
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* BackToBackBadasses:
**BackToBackBadasses: When Lothaire and Albrecht finally meet with each other during a Darkspawn attack in ''A War in Winter''.
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* CurbStompBattle: This is what you get for bringing a {{Badass}} from a WorldOfBadass to go toe-to-toe with some poor schmuck in Thedas.
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* CurbStompBattle: This is what you get for bringing a {{Badass}} badass from a WorldOfBadass to go toe-to-toe with some poor schmuck in Thedas.
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* {{Badass}}
** ActionGirl: Kallian, Illenya, Solona, Vanyra, Melusine, Ehlenien, and Karsten.
** BadassCrew: So far Khorieus, Illenya, Yransair, Kallian, Solona, and Theron in ''Blood of the Phoenix''. If the Ninety-Nine plus companions are truly united into one force it will be a sight to truly behold how badass they are.
** BadassGrandpa: The High Elves and Dwarfs are centuries old and some of them [[OlderThanTheyLook looked like in their thirties]]. Jacob Darius is a Templar at his prime and was expecting his grandchild. Warrior Priest Albrecht Krieger count for The Empire.
** OneManArmy: Generally the Warhammer characters, but special mention should go to Vanyra Skorrisdottir for single-handedly annihilating nearly an entire Darkspawn war band within the span of a single chapter.
** ActionGirl: Kallian, Illenya, Solona, Vanyra, Melusine, Ehlenien, and Karsten.
** BadassCrew: So far Khorieus, Illenya, Yransair, Kallian, Solona, and Theron in ''Blood of the Phoenix''. If the Ninety-Nine plus companions are truly united into one force it will be a sight to truly behold how badass they are.
** BadassGrandpa: The High Elves and Dwarfs are centuries old and some of them [[OlderThanTheyLook looked like in their thirties]]. Jacob Darius is a Templar at his prime and was expecting his grandchild. Warrior Priest Albrecht Krieger count for The Empire.
** OneManArmy: Generally the Warhammer characters, but special mention should go to Vanyra Skorrisdottir for single-handedly annihilating nearly an entire Darkspawn war band within the span of a single chapter.
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* {{Badass}}
**ActionGirl: Kallian, Illenya, Solona, Vanyra, Melusine, Ehlenien, and Karsten.
** * BadassCrew: So far Khorieus, Illenya, Yransair, Kallian, Solona, and Theron in ''Blood of the Phoenix''. If the Ninety-Nine plus companions are truly united into one force it will be a sight to truly behold how badass they are.
** * BadassGrandpa: The High Elves and Dwarfs are centuries old and some of them [[OlderThanTheyLook looked like in their thirties]]. Jacob Darius is a Templar at his prime and was expecting his grandchild. Warrior Priest Albrecht Krieger count for The Empire. \n** OneManArmy: Generally the Warhammer characters, but special mention should go to Vanyra Skorrisdottir for single-handedly annihilating nearly an entire Darkspawn war band within the span of a single chapter.
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* OutsideContextHero: The Ninety-Nine.
* OutsideContextVillain: The [[spoiler:Chaos Gods]] and their pawns.
* OutsideContextVillain: The [[spoiler:Chaos Gods]] and their pawns.
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* OutsideContextHero: OutsideContextProblem:
** The Ninety-Nine.
* OutsideContextVillain: ** The [[spoiler:Chaos Gods]] and their pawns.
** The Ninety-Nine.