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* FixFic: Raditz survives and joins the Z-Fighters, along with other future events. ChiChi is being forced to face the unpleasant reality of Gohan being part Saiyan and agrees to let him train more than in the default timeline. Fortunately, she’s also written in a more sympathetic light in this fic than in the canon manga and anime. Her shrewish/harridan nature is being cut back a bit too. She still has her moments though, both on and off the battlefield on multiple occasions.
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* FixFic: Raditz survives and joins the Z-Fighters, along with other future events. ChiChi [=ChiChi=] is being forced to face the unpleasant reality of Gohan being part Saiyan and agrees to let him train more than in the default timeline. Fortunately, she’s also written in a more sympathetic light in this fic than in the canon manga and anime. Her shrewish/harridan nature is being cut back a bit too. She still has her moments though, both on and off the battlefield on multiple occasions.
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[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/267629/mlp-xenoverse MLP: Xenoverse!]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ‘‘VideoGame/DragonballXenoverse’’ crossover story written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/117780/Alphamon_Ouryuken Alphamon_Ouryuken]], [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/93982/Brother+Malachai Brother Malachai]],
[[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/195429/Blank+Scroll Blank Scroll]], and
[[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/172163/ShadowLDrago ShadowLDrago]].
[[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/195429/Blank+Scroll Blank Scroll]], and
[[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/172163/ShadowLDrago ShadowLDrago]].
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[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/267629/mlp-xenoverse MLP: Xenoverse!]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ‘‘VideoGame/DragonballXenoverse’’ ''VideoGame/DragonballXenoverse'' crossover story written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/117780/Alphamon_Ouryuken Alphamon_Ouryuken]], [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/93982/Brother+Malachai Brother Malachai]],
Malachai]], [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/195429/Blank+Scroll Blank Scroll]], and
and [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/172163/ShadowLDrago ShadowLDrago]].
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* AllExplainedInTheManual: Played with, the Authors will often give information about events in the footnotes and comment sections of the various chapters.
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* AllExplainedInTheManual: AllThereInTheManual: Played with, the Authors will often give information about events in the footnotes and comment sections of the various chapters.
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* {{Cuckoolander}}: Pinkie.
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* {{Cuckoolander}}: {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Pinkie.
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* GiveMyRegardsinTheNextWorld / SeeYouInHell: Pinkie Pie to Spice in Ch. 3:
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--> Pinkie Pie: “And we’ll be here waiting for you if you are foolish enough to do so….And say ‘hi’ to Tirek for us when you get there, will you?”
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--> Pinkie Pie: “And we’ll be here waiting for you if you are foolish enough to do so…. And say ‘hi’ to Tirek for us when you get there, will you?”
* NotNowKiddo: More like “Not now Pinkie” or sometimes “Not now Twilight” in the fanfic.
* PrecisionFStrike: Curse words are mixed in with the joke terms from the English Z Dub and MLP:FIM episodes and fanfics. Occasionally, actual curse words will be used in place of “ponyfeathers(in future chapters to be released), buck, Taratrus, and HFIL.
* PrecisionFStrike: Curse words are mixed in with the joke terms from the English Z Dub and MLP:FIM episodes and fanfics. Occasionally, actual curse words will be used in place of “ponyfeathers(in future chapters to be released), buck, Taratrus, and HFIL.
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* RoaringRamapgeofRevenge: Pinkie Pie Buu in the Room of Spirit and Time after she thinks the two saiyans from the past kill Chiaotzu. “Congratulations, you found my RageButton, Enjoy.”
NotNow,Kiddo: More like “Not now Pinkie” or sometimes “Not now Twilight” in the fanfic.
* TookaLevelinBadass: All of the Equestrian Patrollers-especially Pinkie Pie.
PrecisionFStrike: Curse words are mixed in with the joke terms from the English Z Dub and MLP:FIM episodes and fanfics. Occasionally, actual curse words will be used in place of “ponyfeathers(in future chapters to be released), buck, Taratrus, and HFIL.
NotNow,Kiddo: More like “Not now Pinkie” or sometimes “Not now Twilight” in the fanfic.
* TookaLevelinBadass: All of the Equestrian Patrollers-especially Pinkie Pie.
PrecisionFStrike: Curse words are mixed in with the joke terms from the English Z Dub and MLP:FIM episodes and fanfics. Occasionally, actual curse words will be used in place of “ponyfeathers(in future chapters to be released), buck, Taratrus, and HFIL.
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* RoaringRamapgeofRevenge: RougeAnglesOfSatin: The story has no shortage of grammatical and continuity errors. Not all of which has been fixed. Ex: The Advisor from Dragonball Zero, Minus, and BS Super: Broly has erroneously been described as a squid instead of a lizard.
* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: Pinkie Pie Buu in the Room of Spirit and Time after she thinks the two saiyans from the past kill Chiaotzu. “Congratulations, you found myRageButton, Rage Button, Enjoy.”
NotNow,Kiddo: More like “Not now Pinkie” or sometimes “Not now Twilight” in the fanfic.
* TookaLevelinBadass: TookALevelInBadass: All of the Equestrian Patrollers-especially Pinkie Pie.
PrecisionFStrike: Curse words are mixed in with the joke terms from the English Z Dub and MLP:FIM episodes and fanfics. Occasionally, actual curse words will be used in place of “ponyfeathers(in future chapters to be released), buck, Taratrus, and HFIL.Pie.
* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: Pinkie Pie Buu in the Room of Spirit and Time after she thinks the two saiyans from the past kill Chiaotzu. “Congratulations, you found my
PrecisionFStrike: Curse words are mixed in with the joke terms from the English Z Dub and MLP:FIM episodes and fanfics. Occasionally, actual curse words will be used in place of “ponyfeathers(in future chapters to be released), buck, Taratrus, and HFIL.
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* VisionQuest: Pretty much what Twi went through for a moment after she drank the Ultra Divine Water. Discord even Lampshaded: it when Twi asked what was going on.
* WhoWritesThisCrap?!: The story has no shortage of grammatical and continuity errors. Not all of which has been fixed. Ex: The Advisor from Dragonball Zero, Minus, and BS Super: Broly has erroneously been described as a squid instead of a lizard.
* WhoWritesThisCrap?!: The story has no shortage of grammatical and continuity errors. Not all of which has been fixed. Ex: The Advisor from Dragonball Zero, Minus, and BS Super: Broly has erroneously been described as a squid instead of a lizard.
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* VisionQuest: Pretty much what Twi went through for a moment after she drank the Ultra Divine Water. Discord even Lampshaded: Lampshaded it when Twi asked what was going on.
* WhoWritesThisCrap?!: The story has no shortage of grammatical and continuity errors. Not all of which has been fixed. Ex: The Advisor from Dragonball Zero, Minus, and BS Super: Broly has erroneously been described as a squid instead of a lizard.on.
* WhoWritesThisCrap?!: The story has no shortage of grammatical and continuity errors. Not all of which has been fixed. Ex: The Advisor from Dragonball Zero, Minus, and BS Super: Broly has erroneously been described as a squid instead of a lizard.
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[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/267629/mlp-xenoverse MLP: Xenoverse!]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ‘‘VideoGame/DragonballXenoverse’’ crossover story written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/117780/Alphamon_Ouryuken Alphamon_Ouryuken]], [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/93982/Brother+Malachai Brother Malachai]],
[[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/195429/Blank+Scroll Blank Scroll]], and
[[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/172163/ShadowLDrago ShadowLDrago]].
In the world of Dragonball, several distortions end up altering the timeline and changing the past. Seeking the strength to help stop these mysterious changes, Time Patroler Trunks gathers the Dragon Balls and makes a wish for warriors powerful enough to help him fix the timeline…
In a distant far away world, six mares who have saved their world countless times are summoned to a to the New World by Shenron and Trunks (with Spike unknowingly hitching a ride), who asks for their help in saving the timeline of his own world, after some debate the group agrees.
However things start to get worse as the ones distorting time start altering it further, causing certain events to happen earlier than usual! As well as the merger of several different timelines! Now they must not only adjust to their new bodies, but find a way to defeat these new enemies and save all of time!
!!''MLP: Xenoverse'' contains examples of:
* AlternateContinuity: The events of this story take place after Season 4 of MLP and start directly after Rainbow Rocks.
* AllExplainedInTheManual: Played with, the Authors will often give information about events in the footnotes and comment sections of the various chapters.
* TheAtoner: Piccolo, Raditz, [[spoiler: and Pinkie.]]
* BloodKnight: Vegeta and Nappa.
* BreakingTheFourthWall: Pinkie, of course. A LOT. She even goes on “commercials” for the “show!”
* {{Cuckoolander}}: Pinkie.
* EasterEggs
* FillerArc: Brother Malachai has a more than mild distaste for the shortened/gutted arcs of DBZ Kai (although even he would admit some parts in the original Z went too long, such as Freiza nearly taking an entire season to charge up a ball of Ki). As such, he’s brought back some of the elements and references to various filler arcs in either sub-chapters or flashbacks.
* FixFic: Raditz survives and joins the Z-Fighters, along with other future events. ChiChi is being forced to face the unpleasant reality of Gohan being part Saiyan and agrees to let him train more than in the default timeline. Fortunately, she’s also written in a more sympathetic light in this fic than in the canon manga and anime. Her shrewish/harridan nature is being cut back a bit too. She still has her moments though, both on and off the battlefield on multiple occasions.
* TheFoodPoisoningIncident: Pinkie eating the ENTIRE TREE of Hallucinogenic Fruit (including *the whole tree itself*) while in Garlic Jr's Palace results in a nasty side-effect.
* GoneHorriblyRight: Majin Pinkie after her first Majin Absorption.
* GiveMyRegardsinTheNextWorld / SeeYouInHell: Pinkie Pie to Spice in Ch. 3:
--> Spice: “Even if I die… Garlic Jr. will win the day, and he will bring me back! Mark my words, He and we, the Markiyan Monarchs and Disciples of Garlic Jr. WILL rule this planet! Even if we have to crawl out of Hell itself to make that happen!”
--> Pinkie Pie: “And we’ll be here waiting for you if you are foolish enough to do so….And say ‘hi’ to Tirek for us when you get there, will you?”
* TheGrovel: What the Arlian King/Dictator does before executed by Vegeta.
* GunFu: Launch and Mai.
* HeelRealization: [[spoiler: Pinkie (sort of) after accidentally killing Goku.]]
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone?: Basically the reaction of the Mane Six and Spike after they realized they have killed (other than Sombra, which was indirect, possibly inadvertent, and at a distance) for the first time when fighting Garlic Jr. and his minions.
* NeverSayDie: This is made fun of as the Saban/Ocean Dub were infamous for trying to avoid this word. As occasionally, the terms “alternate dimension” or “other realm” are used in place of the terms death and the afterlife.
* PurpleProse: For better or for worse, the co-author Brother Malachai at times. Also infamous for run-ons.
* RoaringRamapgeofRevenge: Pinkie Pie Buu in the Room of Spirit and Time after she thinks the two saiyans from the past kill Chiaotzu. “Congratulations, you found my RageButton, Enjoy.”
NotNow,Kiddo: More like “Not now Pinkie” or sometimes “Not now Twilight” in the fanfic.
* TookaLevelinBadass: All of the Equestrian Patrollers-especially Pinkie Pie.
PrecisionFStrike: Curse words are mixed in with the joke terms from the English Z Dub and MLP:FIM episodes and fanfics. Occasionally, actual curse words will be used in place of “ponyfeathers(in future chapters to be released), buck, Taratrus, and HFIL.
* UnorthodoxSheathing: See Dragonball Under Anime and Manga for Trunks (he stays the same) and Pinkie Pie Buu after her first absorption. As she makes her swords out of her own body mass she simply ABSORBS the blades when she’s done using them.
* VisionQuest: Pretty much what Twi went through for a moment after she drank the Ultra Divine Water. Discord even Lampshaded: it when Twi asked what was going on.
* WhoWritesThisCrap?!: The story has no shortage of grammatical and continuity errors. Not all of which has been fixed. Ex: The Advisor from Dragonball Zero, Minus, and BS Super: Broly has erroneously been described as a squid instead of a lizard.
[[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/195429/Blank+Scroll Blank Scroll]], and
[[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/172163/ShadowLDrago ShadowLDrago]].
In the world of Dragonball, several distortions end up altering the timeline and changing the past. Seeking the strength to help stop these mysterious changes, Time Patroler Trunks gathers the Dragon Balls and makes a wish for warriors powerful enough to help him fix the timeline…
In a distant far away world, six mares who have saved their world countless times are summoned to a to the New World by Shenron and Trunks (with Spike unknowingly hitching a ride), who asks for their help in saving the timeline of his own world, after some debate the group agrees.
However things start to get worse as the ones distorting time start altering it further, causing certain events to happen earlier than usual! As well as the merger of several different timelines! Now they must not only adjust to their new bodies, but find a way to defeat these new enemies and save all of time!
!!''MLP: Xenoverse'' contains examples of:
* AlternateContinuity: The events of this story take place after Season 4 of MLP and start directly after Rainbow Rocks.
* AllExplainedInTheManual: Played with, the Authors will often give information about events in the footnotes and comment sections of the various chapters.
* TheAtoner: Piccolo, Raditz, [[spoiler: and Pinkie.]]
* BloodKnight: Vegeta and Nappa.
* BreakingTheFourthWall: Pinkie, of course. A LOT. She even goes on “commercials” for the “show!”
* {{Cuckoolander}}: Pinkie.
* EasterEggs
* FillerArc: Brother Malachai has a more than mild distaste for the shortened/gutted arcs of DBZ Kai (although even he would admit some parts in the original Z went too long, such as Freiza nearly taking an entire season to charge up a ball of Ki). As such, he’s brought back some of the elements and references to various filler arcs in either sub-chapters or flashbacks.
* FixFic: Raditz survives and joins the Z-Fighters, along with other future events. ChiChi is being forced to face the unpleasant reality of Gohan being part Saiyan and agrees to let him train more than in the default timeline. Fortunately, she’s also written in a more sympathetic light in this fic than in the canon manga and anime. Her shrewish/harridan nature is being cut back a bit too. She still has her moments though, both on and off the battlefield on multiple occasions.
* TheFoodPoisoningIncident: Pinkie eating the ENTIRE TREE of Hallucinogenic Fruit (including *the whole tree itself*) while in Garlic Jr's Palace results in a nasty side-effect.
* GoneHorriblyRight: Majin Pinkie after her first Majin Absorption.
* GiveMyRegardsinTheNextWorld / SeeYouInHell: Pinkie Pie to Spice in Ch. 3:
--> Spice: “Even if I die… Garlic Jr. will win the day, and he will bring me back! Mark my words, He and we, the Markiyan Monarchs and Disciples of Garlic Jr. WILL rule this planet! Even if we have to crawl out of Hell itself to make that happen!”
--> Pinkie Pie: “And we’ll be here waiting for you if you are foolish enough to do so….And say ‘hi’ to Tirek for us when you get there, will you?”
* TheGrovel: What the Arlian King/Dictator does before executed by Vegeta.
* GunFu: Launch and Mai.
* HeelRealization: [[spoiler: Pinkie (sort of) after accidentally killing Goku.]]
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone?: Basically the reaction of the Mane Six and Spike after they realized they have killed (other than Sombra, which was indirect, possibly inadvertent, and at a distance) for the first time when fighting Garlic Jr. and his minions.
* NeverSayDie: This is made fun of as the Saban/Ocean Dub were infamous for trying to avoid this word. As occasionally, the terms “alternate dimension” or “other realm” are used in place of the terms death and the afterlife.
* PurpleProse: For better or for worse, the co-author Brother Malachai at times. Also infamous for run-ons.
* RoaringRamapgeofRevenge: Pinkie Pie Buu in the Room of Spirit and Time after she thinks the two saiyans from the past kill Chiaotzu. “Congratulations, you found my RageButton, Enjoy.”
NotNow,Kiddo: More like “Not now Pinkie” or sometimes “Not now Twilight” in the fanfic.
* TookaLevelinBadass: All of the Equestrian Patrollers-especially Pinkie Pie.
PrecisionFStrike: Curse words are mixed in with the joke terms from the English Z Dub and MLP:FIM episodes and fanfics. Occasionally, actual curse words will be used in place of “ponyfeathers(in future chapters to be released), buck, Taratrus, and HFIL.
* UnorthodoxSheathing: See Dragonball Under Anime and Manga for Trunks (he stays the same) and Pinkie Pie Buu after her first absorption. As she makes her swords out of her own body mass she simply ABSORBS the blades when she’s done using them.
* VisionQuest: Pretty much what Twi went through for a moment after she drank the Ultra Divine Water. Discord even Lampshaded: it when Twi asked what was going on.
* WhoWritesThisCrap?!: The story has no shortage of grammatical and continuity errors. Not all of which has been fixed. Ex: The Advisor from Dragonball Zero, Minus, and BS Super: Broly has erroneously been described as a squid instead of a lizard.
