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** Valerie, a.k.a. [[spoiler:Miss Valentine of Baroque Works]] gets one of these in character elaboration.
*** As does Grace, a.k.a. [[spoiler:Miss Goldenweek]], though hers is much more tragic rather than dark.

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** Similar to the canon Straw Hats, all of the new members in the story so far have their own painful pasts. For some like Gin, Nojiko, Johnny, Yosaku and Vivi, their stories can be learned through the canon, other members' pasts are unique to the story.
*** Alvida's story just extends off her being fully aware of her original fat appearance and wanting to be truly beautiful, while still suffering over the fear of getting fat again and those who who bring up her old appearance.
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Valerie, a.k.a. [[spoiler:Miss Valentine of Baroque Works]] gets one of these in character elaboration.
Works]]'s parents ran a chocolate shop, but street thugs killed her parents and burned the shop and her parent's remains to the ground.
*** As does Grace, a.k.a. [[spoiler:Miss Goldenweek]], though hers is much more tragic rather than dark.Goldenweek]]'s parents were painters who went to another island to show off their artwork, but ended up dying when a storm hit the ship they were on.
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** It was even worse for Luffy as the Celestial Dragons made it so he'd be moved to a new level every week until he died.

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** It was even worse for Luffy Luffy, as the Celestial Dragons made it so he'd be moved to a new level every week until he died.



* SecretKeeper: Zoro acts as this for Luffy from the beginning of the Drum Island Arc (Chapter 37) to the end of the Alabasta saga, at which point he informs the rest of his crew (Chapter 63) who then become one to Robin who hasn't been told yet. Ace also finds out, though to a slightly lesser degree, in Chapter 47.

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* SecretKeeper: Zoro acts as this for Luffy from the beginning of the Drum Island Arc (Chapter 37) to the end of the Alabasta saga, at which point he informs the rest of his crew (Chapter 63) 63), who then become one to Robin Luffy for Robin, who hasn't been told yet. Ace also finds out, though to a slightly lesser degree, in Chapter 47.
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** It's even worse for Luffy as the Celestial Dragons made it so he'll be moved to a new level every week until he dies.

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** It's It was even worse for Luffy as the Celestial Dragons made it so he'll he'd be moved to a new level every week until he dies.died.

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* ACupAngst: Grace shows this when Sanji gives all the girls belly dancer outfits.



** Vivi has an intense one towards unfair laws like the ones on Ruluka and Skypeia, or royals who abuse their status such as Wapol.



** It's even worse for Luffy as the Celestial Dragons made it so he'll be moved to a new level every week until he dies.



* RunningGag: Whenever there’s a Lemon, Sanji gets the inexplicable urge to murder Luffy. He has no idea why, but he still beat him up every time. After the sixth Lemon, however, most of the fans no longer found it funny, so while Sanji still gets the urge to kill Luffy, he's no longer acting on it…though it's not for lack of trying.
* SecretKeeper: Zoro acts as this for Luffy from the beginning of the Drum Island Arc (Chapter 37) to the end of the Alabasta saga, at which point he informs the rest of his crew (Chapter 63). Ace also finds out, though to a slightly lesser degree, in Chapter 47.

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* RunningGag: Whenever there’s a Lemon, Sanji gets the inexplicable urge to murder Luffy. He has no idea why, but he still beat him up every time. After the sixth Lemon, however, most of the fans no longer found it funny, so while Sanji still gets the urge to kill Luffy, he's no longer acting the crew makes sure he can't act on it…though it's not for lack of trying.
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* SecretKeeper: Zoro acts as this for Luffy from the beginning of the Drum Island Arc (Chapter 37) to the end of the Alabasta saga, at which point he informs the rest of his crew (Chapter 63).63) who then become one to Robin who hasn't been told yet. Ace also finds out, though to a slightly lesser degree, in Chapter 47.
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* RagsToRiches: After Alabasta, the author writes in the fourth movie, Dead End Adventure. Between winning the race, winning the bets they placed on themselves, and looting Gasparde's ship, the Straw Hats walk away with a grand total of 800,000,000 berries. Then the author writes in the Rainbow Mist filler arc, where the Straw Hats hoard all of the treasures that they can from Ape's Concert onto the ship, and successfully get away. With the Merry full to bursting, they now have 3 ''billion'' berries. And now they're in Skypiea, where the City of Gold is, and Nami is still eager to get more money…
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By far the most popular ''One Piece'' fan fiction in the entire fandom, the longest Peggy Sue fic in the fandom in regards to word count, and in canon progression, it is second only to ''Fanfic/OnceAgain''.

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By far the most popular ''One Piece'' fan fiction in the entire fandom, the longest Peggy Sue fic in the fandom in regards to word count, and in canon progression, it is takes third place, barely behind ''Fanfic/SecondWind'' for second only to ''Fanfic/OnceAgain''.
with ''Fanfic/OnceAgain'' in first.

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** Many present have this reaction when Vivi accidentally says Crocodile’s name, either because of her carelessness or the fact that they’re up against a Warlord.

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** Many present have this reaction when Vivi accidentally says Crocodile’s name, either because of her carelessness or the fact that they’re up against a Warlord.Warlord.
* YoungerThanTheyLook: Despite looking like a young girl, Grace says she's 14.
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* CatapultNightmare: Ace has one of these in Chapter 79 about Luffy standing at his grave and mourning him, while Blackbeard mocks him for dying. It serves as a harsh reminder of Luffy's warning to him in Alabasta to be careful when he fights Blackbeard.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Every time Sanji beat up Luffy after a Lemon, beats him up worse than the time before. Luckily after the 6th lemon, Sanji's been unable to beat up Luffy anymore.

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* DisproportionateRetribution: Every time Sanji beat up Luffy after a Lemon, he beats him up worse than the time before. Luckily after the 6th lemon, Sanji's been unable to beat up Luffy anymore.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Every time Sanji beat up Luffy after a Lemon, beats him up worse than the time before. Luckily after the 6th lemon, Sanji's been unable to beat up Luffy anymore.
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 52. With almost every advantage imaginable, it comes as a shock when Luffy [[spoiler:loses against Crocodile outside of Rainbase, impaled and buried alive just as in canon]].

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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 52. With almost every advantage imaginable, it comes as a shock when Luffy [[spoiler:loses against to Crocodile outside of Rainbase, impaled and buried alive just as in canon]].

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* RunningGag: Whenever there’s a Lemon, Sanji gets the inexplicable urge to murder Luffy. He has no idea why, but he still beats him up every time. As of more recent chapters the beating up part has begun to go away because people stopped finding it funny and others began to complain about it.

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* RunningGag: Whenever there’s a Lemon, Sanji gets the inexplicable urge to murder Luffy. He has no idea why, but he still beats beat him up every time. As of more recent chapters After the beating up part has begun sixth Lemon, however, most of the fans no longer found it funny, so while Sanji still gets the urge to go away because people stopped finding it funny and others began to complain about it.kill Luffy, he's no longer acting on it…though it's not for lack of trying.
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* DeathGlare: En route to Loguetown, Fullbody draws up near the Straw Hats' ship and starts to rant about capturing them again. Due to the fact that Luffy had just finished telling his crew about the events of the Gray Terminal fire, the furious crew responds to Fullbody the same way that Shanks reacted to the Lord of the Coast after saving Luffy.

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* DeathGlare: En route to Loguetown, Fullbody draws up near the Straw Hats' ship and starts to rant about capturing them again. Due to the fact that Luffy had just finished telling his crew about the events of the Gray Terminal fire, the furious crew responds to Fullbody the same way that Shanks reacted to the Lord of the Coast after saving Luffy.Luffy, and Fullbody reacts the same way the Lord of the Coast did.
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* ShoutOut: When Ace stops Smoker from going after Luffy and crew in Alabasta, Zoro encourages the rest of the crew to flee: "[[YuGiOhTheMoviePyramidOfLight Talk later! Run now!]]"

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* ShoutOut: When Ace stops Smoker from going after Luffy and crew in Alabasta, Zoro encourages the rest of the crew to flee: "[[YuGiOhTheMoviePyramidOfLight "[[Anime/YuGiOhTheMoviePyramidOfLight Talk later! Run now!]]"
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* ShoutOut: When Ace stops Smoker from going after Luffy and crew in Alabasta, Zoro encourages the rest of the crew to flee: "[[YuGiOhTheMoviePyramidOfLight Talk later! Run now!]]"
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** Everyone present has this reaction when Luffy shows up in giant form.
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* {{Understatement}}: In Chapter 32, after Brogy cheerfully informs the half of the Straw Hats that are with him that the log pose takes one year to set, everyone falls off the log they're sitting on except for Gin, who quips, "That's not good."
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 52. With almost every advantage imaginable, it comes as a shock when Luffy [[spoiler:loses against Crocodile outside of Rainbase, impaled and buried alive just as in canon]].
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** In Chapter 25, the Straw Hats have this reaction when Luffy first demonstrates the Moonwalk technique.
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* BringMyBrownPants: During the Goa Incident, which happened a year before Luffy set out on his journey again, he terrifies the nobility of the Goa Kingdom to this extent by taking out their guards with Conqueror's Haki and vowing to ensure that one day, the world will know the truth about the Gray Terminal fire.


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** In Loguetown, Gin does this to a group of pirates that attacked him out of vengeance towards Don Krieg.


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* OneManArmy: Extremely common, of course, but Gin bears particular mention; his joining the Straw Hats results in the Monster Trio becoming the Monster Quartet.
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* DeathGlare: En route to Loguetown, Fullbody draws up near the Straw Hats' ship and starts to rant about capturing them again. Due to the fact that Luffy had just finished telling his crew about the events of the Gray Terminal fire, the furious crew responds to Fullbody the same way that Shanks reacted to the Lord of the Coast after saving Luffy.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10215988/1/Luffy-s-Renewed-Adventure Luffy’s Renewed Adventure]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' PeggySue {{Harem}} FanFiction by F-ckthesystem125. A cataclysmic event leaves Luffy as the sole survivor of the Straw Hat Pirates, and after enduring years in Impel Down, he’s rescued by an old man from the future with the power of the Open-Open Fruit. Using this power, Luffy is sent back to the past to try his adventures again, this time with more strength, more experience, more knowledge, more crewmates…and his eyes opened to women courtesy of the aforementioned power.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10215988/1/Luffy-s-Renewed-Adventure Luffy’s Renewed Adventure]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' PeggySue {{Harem}} PeggySue[=/=]{{Harem}} FanFiction by F-ckthesystem125. A cataclysmic event leaves Luffy as the sole survivor of the Straw Hat Pirates, and after enduring years in Impel Down, he’s rescued by an old man from the future with the power of the Open-Open Fruit. Using this power, Luffy is sent back to the past to try his adventures again, this time with more strength, more experience, more knowledge, more crewmates…and his eyes opened to women courtesy of the aforementioned power.
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* ForcedToWatch: In canon, Arlong only held himself back from interfering when Zoro and Sanji fought Hachi and Kuroobi. In this one, Luffy holds him down to keep him from doing anything but watching as his CoDragons lose.


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** The Cocoyasi villagers do this when Luffy throws Arlong to the ground to keep him from doing anything else but watching as Sanji and Zoro take out Kuroobi and Hachi.

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* BigShutUp: Gin does this in Chapter 13, in response to Krieg ordering him to submit to death. It came as the result of Luffy giving several implications that the Krieg Pirates weren't as strong as they thought, but even he was surprised that he managed to turn Gin fully against his overly prideful captain.

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* BigShutUp: BigShutUp:
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Gin does this in Chapter 13, 13 in response to Krieg ordering him to submit to death. It came as the result of Luffy giving several implications that the Krieg Pirates weren't as strong as they thought, but even he was surprised that he managed to turn Gin fully against his overly prideful captain.captain.
** Luffy does this in Chapter 18 in response to Johnny ranting about how Nami killed Usopp, knowing both from his Haki and his future knowledge (and even his past knowledge) that the sniper was alive and Nami wouldn't kill anyone.



* DefrostingIceQueen: Luffy gets Nami to defrost a lot faster in this fic, due to making her see early on that not all pirates are evil, and that he knew what it was like to lose someone he loved. Doesn’t stop her from stealing the Merry when it comes to that, but she doesn’t bother to put up a JerkassFacade when Luffy and crew come to the island.

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* DefrostingIceQueen: Luffy gets Nami to defrost a lot faster in this fic, due to making her see early on that not all pirates are evil, and that he knew what it was like to lose someone he loved. loved, to the point where he manages to convince her to tell him the truth about Arlong before they reach the Baratie. Doesn’t stop her from stealing the Merry when it comes to that, but she doesn’t bother to put up a the JerkassFacade when Luffy and crew come to she put up for the island.Straw Hats fails as soon as she lays eyes on Luffy.

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* BigWhat: A ''lot.''

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* BigShutUp: Gin does this in Chapter 13, in response to Krieg ordering him to submit to death. It came as the result of Luffy giving several implications that the Krieg Pirates weren't as strong as they thought, but even he was surprised that he managed to turn Gin fully against his overly prideful captain.
* BigWhat: A ''lot.''''lot,'' even if you exclude the ones from canon.



** Everyone present has this reaction when Luffy swallows the [=MH5=] bomb and blows the gas back at Krieg, remaining perfectly unharmed thanks to his immunity.

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** Everyone present has this reaction when Luffy swallows the [=MH5=] bomb bomb, and then again when he blows the gas back at Krieg, remaining perfectly unharmed thanks to his immunity.



* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Miss Valentine is smart enough to surrender to Luffy after he Curb-Stomps Mr. 5. Twice. That and showing off the Six Powers.

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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: KnowWhenToFoldEm:
** As in canon, the Krieg Pirates promptly surrender after Luffy defeats Krieg.
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Miss Valentine is smart enough to surrender to Luffy after he Curb-Stomps Mr. 5. Twice. That and showing off the Six Powers.

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* BigWhat: Igaram has this reaction when he learns of Vivi’s decision to go with the Straw Hats.

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* BigWhat: A ''lot.''
** In Chapter 12, the Baratie chefs have this reaction when Luffy shows absolutely no concern about the Krieg Pirates.
** In Chapter 13, the Krieg Pirates have this reaction when Luffy breaks Pearl's shields without lifting a finger, through the Iron Body technique.
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Igaram has this reaction when he learns of Vivi’s decision to go with the Straw Hats.


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** Usopp has this reaction when Luffy decimates the Black Cat Pirates with a demonstration of Conqueror's Haki, with Zoro, Nami, and Jango equally stunned.
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* ContinuityNod: In canon, Luffy mentioned when fighting against the Alvida Pirates that he would be satisfied with a pirate crew of about 10 crew members. After Alvida joins his crew in Logue Town, the group ends up 10 members by the time they enter the Grand Line.

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* ContinuityNod: In canon, Luffy mentioned when fighting against the Alvida Pirates that he would be satisfied with a pirate crew of about 10 crew members. members before entering the Grand Line, however he enters with only 5. After Alvida joins his crew in Logue Town, the group actually ends up with 10 crew members by the time they enter the Grand Line.



* RunningGag: Whenever there’s a Lemon, Sanji gets the inexplicable urge to murder Luffy. He has no idea why, but he still beats him up every time.

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* RunningGag: Whenever there’s a Lemon, Sanji gets the inexplicable urge to murder Luffy. He has no idea why, but he still beats him up every time. As of more recent chapters the beating up part has begun to go away because people stopped finding it funny and others began to complain about it.
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*ContinuityNod: In canon, Luffy mentioned when fighting against the Alvida Pirates that he would be satisfied with a pirate crew of about 10 crew members. After Alvida joins his crew in Logue Town, the group ends up 10 members by the time they enter the Grand Line.
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* FingerPokeOfDoom: Of all the Six Powers, ''Shigan'' (Finger Pistol) is the only one that Luffy hasn’t used in actual combat; it’s implied that he doesn’t particularly like that particular technique.

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* FingerPokeOfDoom: Of all the Six Powers, ''Shigan'' (Finger Pistol) is the only one that Luffy hasn’t used in actual combat; it’s implied that he doesn’t particularly very much like that particular technique.



* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: The Open-Open Fruit is this. Zoro lampshades how feeble the power seems from the name when Luffy tells him about the fruit, but when he explains that it can open ''anything'' you can think of, including portals in time, which affords one the capability of [[BackFromTheDead undoing death]] or [[UnPerson preventing birth]], Zoro retracts that opinion very quickly.

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* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: The Open-Open Fruit is this. Zoro lampshades how feeble the power seems from the name when Luffy tells him about the fruit, but when he explains that it can open ''anything'' you can think of, including portals in time, which affords one the capability of [[BackFromTheDead undoing death]] or [[UnPerson preventing birth]], Zoro retracts that opinion very quickly.

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