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* HugeSchoolgirl: Standing at 174 centimeters tall (almost 5'9") Tomoyo certainly qualifies as this.
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* HugeSchoolgirl: HugeSchoolgirl / StatuesqueStunner: Standing at 174 centimeters tall (almost 5'9") and being the tallest of the female characters, Tomoyo certainly qualifies as this.
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* TokenMiniMoe: With a height of only 136 centimeters (just under 4'6"), Chiyoko easily qualifies as this.
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* TokenMiniMoe: With a height of only 136 centimeters (just under 4'6"), Chiyoko easily qualifies as this.this, at least among the main supporting characters.
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* BigShutUp: Hachiro does this to Tadao and Sojiro to stop their arguing in Chapter 2.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Hachiro gave a brutal one of these to Tadao and Sojiro in Chapter 2. You see, the two had been fighting with each other, both verbally and physically, ever since the day that Konata and Kagami got engaged. They had also threatened to disown their daughters if they went through with the wedding. That was just too much for him to take, especially because of a memory in which two friends of his who were gay jumped off a bridge and committed suicide, which he brings up after he sees Konata and Kagami on the same bridge, contemplating suicide.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Hachiro gave a brutal one of these to Tadao and Sojiro in Chapter 2. You see, the two had been fighting with each other, both verbally and physically, ever since the day that Konata and Kagami got engaged. They had also threatened to disown their daughters if they went through with the wedding. That was just too much for him to take, especially because of a memory in which two of his college friends of his who were also gay jumped off a bridge and committed suicide, which he brings brought up after he sees saw Konata and Kagami standing on the very same bridge, and contemplating suicide.
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* BerserkButton: ''DO NOT'', hit a woman within sight of Hachiro, especially if one of the woman you hit happens to be his wife. Tadao and Sojiro learned this the hard way, and it resulted with him slamming their heads together.
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* BerserkButton: ''DO NOT'', NOT'' hit a woman within sight of Hachiro, especially ''especially'' if one of the woman you women you've hit happens to be his wife. Tadao and Sojiro learned this the hard way, and it resulted with him slamming their heads together.
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* BerserkButton: ''Do not, under any circumstances'', hit a woman within sight of Hachiro, especially if one of the woman you hit happens to be his wife, as Tadao and Sojiro learned the hard way. It resulted with them getting their heads slammed together.
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* BerserkButton: ''Do not, under any circumstances'', ''DO NOT'', hit a woman within sight of Hachiro, especially if one of the woman you hit happens to be his wife, as wife. Tadao and Sojiro learned this the hard way. It way, and it resulted with them getting him slamming their heads slammed together.
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** The opposite is also true. It's not a good idea to insult Mariko when Chiyoko is nearby.
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** The opposite is also true. It's not never a good idea to insult Mariko when Chiyoko is nearby.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Just barely averted with Konata and Kagami during Chapter 2. They were hit hard by the actions of their respective fathers, and were about to jump off the bridge. Thankfully for everyone involved, Hachiro talked them out of it.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Just barely averted with Konata and Kagami during Chapter 2. They were hit hard by the actions of their respective fathers, and were about to jump off the bridge. Thankfully for everyone involved, Hachiro talked managed to talk them out of it.
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* PapaWolf: Arguably Hachiro, to Konata and Kagami, at least in Chapter 2, despite not being related to them in any way.
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** While on honeymoon in NYC, Tsukasa and Miyuki visit the 9/11 Memorial on its opening day, and solemnly remember the Japanese citizens who were killed in the attacks.
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* NamesTheSame: Subverted. Although the ''After Story'' subtitle quickly calls to mind ''VisualNovel/Clannad'', and a few characters share their names with ''CLANNAD'' characters (such as Tomoyo and Furukawa), this story is MUCH happier, and to top it all off, Konata survives birth, unlike [[spoiler:Nagisa, (well, the first time through before the light orbs were brought into play)]].
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* NamesTheSame: Subverted. Although the ''After Story'' subtitle quickly calls to mind ''VisualNovel/Clannad'', and a few characters share their names with ''CLANNAD'' characters (such as Tomoyo and Furukawa), this story is MUCH happier, and to top it all off, Konata survives giving birth, unlike [[spoiler:Nagisa, (well, the first time through before the light orbs were brought into play)]].
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Hiyori, Patricia, Misao, and Ayano are suspiciously absent from all three weddings, though Patricia's absence can be hand-waved by saying she returned to America, and Misao's absence probably stems from her dislike of Konata. As for Hiyori, she may very well still be drawing Yutaka/Minami manga, and Ayano's absence can't possibly be rationalized, though she may have had plans with Misao's brother on all three occassions.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Hiyori, Patricia, Misao, and Ayano are suspiciously absent from all three weddings, though Patricia's absence can be hand-waved by saying she returned to America, and Misao's absence was probably stems out of protest for Konata "stealing" Kagami from her dislike of Konata. her. As for Hiyori, she may very well still be drawing Yutaka/Minami manga, and Ayano's absence can't possibly be rationalized, though she may have had plans with Misao's brother on all three occassions.occassions, or got coerced by Misao into not going.
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* BabiesEverAfter: One of the rare non-ending examples. Konata gave birth to Kanata in Chapter 20. And Chapter 28 confirmed that another baby is on the way.
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* BabiesEverAfter: One of the rare non-ending examples. Konata gave birth to Kanata in Chapter 20. And Chapter 28 confirmed that another baby is on the way.way, and an author note at the end of one chapter mentioned that a future arc will involve Tsukasa and Miyuki adopt a child, rather than go through the ordeal of artificial insemination and pregnancy.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: The hypnosis scenes during the honeymoons of Konata and Kagami, and later Yutaka and Minami. Subverted in the former case in that the scene was brought up at the beginning of the next chapter.
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* NamesTheSame: Subverted. Although the ''After Story'' subtitle quickly calls to mind ''VisualNovel/CLANNAD'', and a few characters share their names with ''CLANNAD'' characters (such as Tomoyo and Furukawa), this story is MUCH happier, and to top it all off, Konata survives birth, unlike [[spoiler:Nagisa, (well, the first time through before the light orbs were brought into play)]].
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* NamesTheSame: Subverted. Although the ''After Story'' subtitle quickly calls to mind ''VisualNovel/CLANNAD'', ''VisualNovel/Clannad'', and a few characters share their names with ''CLANNAD'' characters (such as Tomoyo and Furukawa), this story is MUCH happier, and to top it all off, Konata survives birth, unlike [[spoiler:Nagisa, (well, the first time through before the light orbs were brought into play)]].
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* NamesTheSame: Subverted. Although the ''After Story'' subtitle quickly calls to mind ''VisualNovel/CLANNAD'', and a few characters share their names with ''CLANNAD'' characters (such as Tomoyo and Furukawa), this story is MUCH happier, and to top it all off, Konata survives birth, unlike [[spoiler:Nagisa, (well, the first time through before the light orbs were brought into play)]].
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* RealityEnsues: The illegality of same-sex marriages in Japan is brought up in Chapter 2. Konata and Kagami are wed in Japan thanks to some string-pulling, while Tsukasa and Miyuki exploit a loophole and get married in New York, while Yutaka and Minami marry in Connecticut (both states recognized same-sex marriage in the time the story is set in; the United States would eventually legalize same-sex marriage in all states in July 2015).
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* RealityEnsues: The illegality of same-sex marriages in Japan is brought up in Chapter 2. Konata and Kagami are wed in Japan thanks to some string-pulling, while Tsukasa and Miyuki exploit a loophole and get married in New York, while Yutaka and Minami marry in Connecticut Connecticut, since Japan recognizes same-sex marriages if they take place where it's legal (both states recognized same-sex marriage in the time the story is set in; the United States would eventually legalize same-sex marriage in all states in July 2015).
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** In the first part of Chapter 24: Chiyoko comes down with a pretty nasty cold/flu virus.
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** In the first part of Chapter 24: Chiyoko comes down with a pretty nasty cold/flu virus.virus, which Yutaka also came down with in ''Holiday Vacation''.
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* {{Keet}}: Tatsuya and Katsuhiko both fit this trope perfectly
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* {{Keet}}: Tatsuya and Katsuhiko both fit this trope perfectlyperfectly.
* NoodleIncident: How Hiroko and Mikoto got injured as stated at the end of Chapter 31. All we know is that it involved a big red button.
* NoodleIncident: How Hiroko and Mikoto got injured as stated at the end of Chapter 31. All we know is that it involved a big red button.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7550345/1/Lucky-Star-After-Story Lucky Star: After Story]]'' is the third and final part of a 3-story Konata and Kagami story arc, after two earlier fanfics ''Fanfic/TheDayEverythingChanged'' and ''Fanfic/HolidayVacation'', and was written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2689121/Mr-FanficGuy Mr. Fanfic Guy]]. The first chapter was uploaded on November 14, 2011 and as of February 29, 2016, there have been 31 chapters.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7550345/1/Lucky-Star-After-Story Lucky Star: After Story]]'' is the third and final part of a 3-story Konata and Kagami story arc, after two earlier fanfics ''Fanfic/TheDayEverythingChanged'' and ''Fanfic/HolidayVacation'', and was written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2689121/Mr-FanficGuy Mr. Fanfic Guy]]. The first chapter was uploaded on November 14, 2011 and as of the most recent chapter (Chapter 31) was uploaded on February 29, 2016, there have been 31 chapters.
after a nearly three year hiatus.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7550345/1/Lucky-Star-After-Story Lucky Star: After Story]]'' is the third and final part of a 3-story Konata and Kagami story arc, after two earlier fanfics ''Fanfic/TheDayEverythingChanged'' and ''Fanfic/HolidayVacation'', and was written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2689121/Mr-FanficGuy Mr. Fanfic Guy]]. The first chapter was uploaded on November 14, 2011 and as May 15, 2013, there have been 30 chapters.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7550345/1/Lucky-Star-After-Story Lucky Star: After Story]]'' is the third and final part of a 3-story Konata and Kagami story arc, after two earlier fanfics ''Fanfic/TheDayEverythingChanged'' and ''Fanfic/HolidayVacation'', and was written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2689121/Mr-FanficGuy Mr. Fanfic Guy]]. The first chapter was uploaded on November 14, 2011 and as May 15, 2013, of February 29, 2016, there have been 30 31 chapters.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Hiyori, Patricia, Misao, and Ayano are suspiciously absent from all three weddings, though Patricia's absence can be hand-waved by saying she returned to America, and Misao's absence probably stems from her dislike of Konata.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Hiyori, Patricia, Misao, and Ayano are suspiciously absent from all three weddings, though Patricia's absence can be hand-waved by saying she returned to America, and Misao's absence probably stems from her dislike of Konata. As for Hiyori, she may very well still be drawing Yutaka/Minami manga, and Ayano's absence can't possibly be rationalized, though she may have had plans with Misao's brother on all three occassions.
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** Mariko and Chiyoko sustained injuries during the Tohoku Earthquake and Tsunami on March 11, 2011, when their school collapsed. Several friends of theirs were outright killed in the disaster.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Hiyori, Patricia, Misao, and Ayano are suspiciously absent from all three weddings, though Patricia's absence can be hand-waved by saying she returned to America, and Misao's absence probably stems from her dislike of Konata.
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* RealityEnsues: The illegality of same-sex marriages in Japan is brought up in Chapter 2. Konata and Kagami are wed in Japan thanks to some string-pulling, while Tsukasa and Miyuki exploit a loophole and get married in New York, while Yutaka and Minami marry in Connecticut (both states recognize same-sex marriage).
** In Chapter 29, Yutaka and Minami are assaulted by a homophobic man after he sees them kissing while on honeymoon in Rhode Island. One of the bystanders who assault the man compare him to a member of the Westboro Baptist Church.
** In Chapter 29, Yutaka and Minami are assaulted by a homophobic man after he sees them kissing while on honeymoon in Rhode Island. One of the bystanders who assault the man compare him to a member of the Westboro Baptist Church.
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* RealityEnsues: The illegality of same-sex marriages in Japan is brought up in Chapter 2. Konata and Kagami are wed in Japan thanks to some string-pulling, while Tsukasa and Miyuki exploit a loophole and get married in New York, while Yutaka and Minami marry in Connecticut (both states recognize recognized same-sex marriage).
marriage in the time the story is set in; the United States would eventually legalize same-sex marriage in all states in July 2015).
** In Chapter 29, Yutaka and Minami are assaulted by a homophobic man after he sees them kissing while on honeymoon in Rhode Island. One of the bystanders whoassault defend the man pair compare him to a member of the Westboro Baptist Church.Church, a group infamous for their slogan "God Hates Fags" and for [[Main/EvenEvilHasStandards disgusting even the Ku Klux Klan]].
** In Chapter 29, Yutaka and Minami are assaulted by a homophobic man after he sees them kissing while on honeymoon in Rhode Island. One of the bystanders who
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See also ''Fanfic/SakiAfterStory'', another story by the same author.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Hachiro gave a brutal one of these to Tadao and Sojiro in Chapter 2. You see, the two had been fighting with each other, both verbally and physically, ever since the day that Konata and Kagami got engaged. They had also threatened to disown their daughters if they went through with the wedding. That was just too much for him to take.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Hachiro gave a brutal one of these to Tadao and Sojiro in Chapter 2. You see, the two had been fighting with each other, both verbally and physically, ever since the day that Konata and Kagami got engaged. They had also threatened to disown their daughters if they went through with the wedding. That was just too much for him to take.take, especially because of a memory in which two friends of his who were gay jumped off a bridge and committed suicide, which he brings up after he sees Konata and Kagami on the same bridge, contemplating suicide.
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* TearsOfRemorse: Mikoto sheds more than a few of these in Chapter 28.
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* TearsOfRemorse: Mikoto sheds more than a few of these in Chapter 28.28 after she lets it slip that Yutaka and Minami are engaged.
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* RealityEnsues: The illegality of same-sex marriages in Japan is brought up in Chapter 2. Konata and Kagami are wed in Japan thanks to some string-pulling, while Tsukasa and Miyuki exploit a loophole and get married in New York, while Yutaka and Minami marry in Connecticut (both states recognize same-sex marriage).
** In Chapter 29, Yutaka and Minami are assaulted by a homophobic man after he sees them kissing while on honeymoon in Rhode Island. One of the bystanders who assault the man compare him to a member of the Westboro Baptist Church.
** In Chapter 29, Yutaka and Minami are assaulted by a homophobic man after he sees them kissing while on honeymoon in Rhode Island. One of the bystanders who assault the man compare him to a member of the Westboro Baptist Church.
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* WhatTheHellHero / TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Hachiro gave a brutal one of these to Tadao and Sojiro in Chapter 2. You see, the two had been fighting with each other, both verbally and physically, ever since the day that Konata and Kagami got engaged. They had also threatened to disown their daughters if they went through with the wedding. That was just too much for him to take.
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* WhatTheHellHero / TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: WhatTheHellHero: Hachiro gave a brutal one of these to Tadao and Sojiro in Chapter 2. You see, the two had been fighting with each other, both verbally and physically, ever since the day that Konata and Kagami got engaged. They had also threatened to disown their daughters if they went through with the wedding. That was just too much for him to take.
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* [[FiveManBandConcert Five Girl Band Concert]]: In Chapter 19, the band Red Roses and Blue Violets (organized by 5 of the original characters) perform "Castle in the Sky" at a Halloween party concert. As for the members, Ayaka is the bassist, Nanami is the lead guitarist, Mariko is the drummer, Chiyoko is the first lead vocalist and the keyboard player, and Tomoyo is the second lead vocalist and is the percussion player.
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* [[FiveManBandConcert Five Girl Band Concert]]: In Chapter 19, the band Red Roses and Blue Violets (organized by 5 of the original characters) perform "Castle in the Sky" at a Halloween party concert. As for the members, Ayaka is the bassist, Nanami is the lead guitarist, Mariko is the drummer, Chiyoko is the first lead vocalist singer and the keyboard player, and Tomoyo is the second other lead vocalist singer and is the percussion player.
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* TsurimeEyes: Mariko, Chiyoko, and Tomoyo all sport this eyestyle.
* VocalTagTeam: [[TokenMiniMoe Chiyoko]] and [[HugeSchoolgirl Tomoyo]] are the two lead vocalists for Red Roses and Blue Violets.
* VocalTagTeam: [[TokenMiniMoe Chiyoko]] and [[HugeSchoolgirl Tomoyo]] are the two lead vocalists for Red Roses and Blue Violets.
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* TsurimeEyes: Mariko, Chiyoko, and Tomoyo and Mikoto all sport this eyestyle.
* VocalTagTeam: [[TokenMiniMoe Chiyoko]] and [[HugeSchoolgirl Tomoyo]] are the two leadvocalists singers for Red Roses and Blue Violets.
* VocalTagTeam: [[TokenMiniMoe Chiyoko]] and [[HugeSchoolgirl Tomoyo]] are the two lead
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* [[OfficialCouple Official Couples]]: Konata and Kagami, Tsukasa and Miyuki, and Yutaka and Minami.
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* [[SickEpisode Sick Chapter]]: Two so far.
** In the first part of Chapter 24: Chiyoko comes down with a pretty nasty cold/flu virus.
** And in the first half of Chapter 26: Yutaka develops appendicitis, which ends up requiring surgery.
** In the first part of Chapter 24: Chiyoko comes down with a pretty nasty cold/flu virus.
** And in the first half of Chapter 26: Yutaka develops appendicitis, which ends up requiring surgery.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7550345/1/Lucky-Star-After-Story Lucky Star: After Story]]'' is the third and final part of a 3-story Konata and Kagami story arc, after two earlier fanfics ''The Day Everything Changed'' and ''Holiday Vacation'', and was written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2689121/Mr-FanficGuy Mr. Fanfic Guy]]. The first chapter was uploaded on November 14, 2011 and as May 15, 2013, there have been 30 chapters.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7550345/1/Lucky-Star-After-Story Lucky Star: After Story]]'' is the third and final part of a 3-story Konata and Kagami story arc, after two earlier fanfics ''The Day Everything Changed'' ''Fanfic/TheDayEverythingChanged'' and ''Holiday Vacation'', ''Fanfic/HolidayVacation'', and was written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2689121/Mr-FanficGuy Mr. Fanfic Guy]]. The first chapter was uploaded on November 14, 2011 and as May 15, 2013, there have been 30 chapters.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7550345/1/Lucky-Star-After-Story Lucky Star: After Story]]'' is the concluding fanfic of a 3-story Konata and Kagami story arc, after two earlier fanfics ''The Day Everything Changed'' and ''Holiday Vacation'', and was written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2689121/Mr-FanficGuy Mr. Fanfic Guy]]. The first chapter was uploaded on November 14, 2011 and as May 15, 2013, there have been 30 chapters.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7550345/1/Lucky-Star-After-Story Lucky Star: After Story]]'' is the concluding fanfic third and final part of a 3-story Konata and Kagami story arc, after two earlier fanfics ''The Day Everything Changed'' and ''Holiday Vacation'', and was written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2689121/Mr-FanficGuy Mr. Fanfic Guy]]. The first chapter was uploaded on November 14, 2011 and as May 15, 2013, there have been 30 chapters.
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* GenkiGirl: Ayaka and Mariko are the biggest examples throughout the story.
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* {{Keet}}: Tatsuya and Katsuhiko both fit this trope perfectly