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* CrossoverShip: Lincoln Loud and Hekapoo.
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: It's obvious even to Leni that Hekapoo and Lincoln are interested in each other. The only ones that don't see that their more than friends is Lincoln and Hekapoo themselves and even then even they aren't sure they mean it when they say they're not dating.
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: It's obvious even to Leni that Hekapoo and Lincoln are interested in each other. The only ones that don't see that their they're more than friends is Lincoln and Hekapoo themselves and even then even they aren't sure they mean it when they say they're not dating.
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** Chapter 23 has Lincoln making [[WesternAnimation/AdventureTime bacon pancakes, whilst singing about it]].
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* InsistantTerminology: Hekapoo flirts with Lincoln because she likes to ''tease'' him, ''not'' because shes falling in love with him
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Lincoln and Hekapoo insist their just friends and don't have feelings for each other. Nobody buys this for a second.
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* FantasticRacism: Hekapoo starts to realize her hatred of monster is this, especially after she starts seeing the parallels with regular racism from the history books she's reading.
* InsistantTerminology: Hekapoo flirts with Lincoln because she likes to ''tease'' him, ''not'' because shes falling in love with him
* NothingIsTheSameAnymore: Hekapoo can't stop thinking about what she's been learning about discrimination on Earth and comparing it to the monster situation on Mewni. The problem is that Hekapoo has had her mind made up about this subject for at least several centuries. So it's hard for her to accept changing it.
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* SayItWithHearts: Hekapoo might not have realized it when her flame took on a heart shape when she was talking about Lincoln, but Leni certainly did.
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* SayItWithHearts: Hekapoo might not have realized it when realize that her flame took on has started to take the shape of a heart shape when she was whenever 'teasing' or talking about Lincoln, but Leni certainly did.has.
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* SayItWithHearts: Hekapoo might not have realized it when her flame took on a heart shape when she was talking about Lincoln, but Leni certainly did.
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: That Hekapoo and Lincoln have a thing between them so obvious that the only one who can't see it is Lincoln himself, and even then even he doesn't sound like he believes himself when he says she isn't his girlfriend.
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: That It's obvious even to Leni that Hekapoo and Lincoln have a thing between them so obvious are interested in each other. The only ones that the only one who can't don't see it that their more than friends is Lincoln himself, and Hekapoo themselves and even then even he doesn't sound like he believes himself they aren't sure they mean it when he says she isn't his girlfriend.they say they're not dating.
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* AgeLift: The Loud House characters are aged up by four years.
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* AgeLift: The Loud House characters are aged up by four three years.
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: In "Mewnipendance Day", Hekapoo shows the same narrow-minded [[FantasticRacism bigotry]] towards monsters, as she does in the show. Not only thinking all monsters are evil, but also claiming humans aren't capable of doing anything bad... until Lincoln gives her a history book on Adolf Hitler. After reading a few pages, she's so shocked she dunks her head into a lava pit to muffle her horrified screams. After Lincoln talks to her about keeping an open mind, she starts to question her beliefs.
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* CharacterizationMarchesOn: Everyone from the Loud side of the crossover is three years older and like in reality, not everybody remains the same person they were when they were kids.
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* ShipperOnDeck: The second Star see's that Lincoln and Hekapoo are close friends, she makes it her mission to hook them up. She even already has a shipping name for em, "Lincapoo". His sister's aren't far behind upon meeting her, sans Lori.
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** When breaking into Saint Olga's school, Hekapoo disguises herself to look like a certain [[WesternAnimation/AdventureTime fire princess]].
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** In chapter 21, when talking about the new student (soon revealed to be Hekapoo), Lincoln warns that for all he and Star know, they could be a [[WesternAnimation/TotalDrama delinquent with a green mohawk]]. The fact that he Star lampshade the specifity of that might be a reference to one of the author's [[FanFic/TotalLoudIsland other Loud House crossovers]].
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** In chapter 21, when talking about the new student (soon revealed to be Hekapoo), Lincoln warns that for all he and Star know, they could be a [[WesternAnimation/TotalDrama delinquent with a green mohawk]]. The fact that he and Star lampshade the specifity of that might be a reference to one of the author's [[FanFic/TotalLoudIsland other Loud House crossovers]].
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** In chapter 21, when talking about the new student (soon revealed to be Hekapoo), Lincoln warns that for all he and Star know, they could be a [[WesternAnimation/TotalDrama delinquent with a green mohawk]]. The fact that he Star lampshade the specifity of that might be a reference to one of the author's [[FanFic/TotalLoudIsland other Loud House crossovers]].
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* [[spoiler: {{Reincarnation}}: There are strong hints that Lincoln's fate has, throughout his past lives, always been intertwined with the Butterfly families. He hears about a white dragon that destroyed their original spellbook, and Celina the shy's epitaph mentions an 'orange prince' as her love. When the monitors in father times dimension focus on him, they show him points in his previous lives that involve members of the Butterfly queen stretching back centuries that he has no memory of. When he first meets Glossaryck, it's mentioned how he finds his laugh strangely familiar, and when when Celina is briefly brought up, Glassaryck simply states that he "doesn't need to tell [Lincoln] that", implying it's something Linconl already knows.]]
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* [[spoiler: {{Reincarnation}}: There are strong hints that Lincoln's fate has, throughout his past lives, always been intertwined with the Butterfly families. He hears about a white dragon that destroyed their original spellbook, and Celina the shy's epitaph mentions an 'orange prince' as her love. When the monitors in father times dimension focus on him, they show him points in his previous lives that involve members of the Butterfly queen stretching back centuries that he has no memory of. When he first meets Glossaryck, it's mentioned how he finds his laugh strangely familiar, and when when Celina is briefly brought up, Glassaryck simply states that he "doesn't need to tell [Lincoln] that", implying it's something Linconl Lincoln already knows.]]
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* MsFanservice: Hekapoo is already the series's HOTTEST girl (figuratively and literally). So her 'Hailey' human form pretty much reduces the boy students into [[PervertedDrooling drooling pigs]]. With Rusty even betting her bust size.
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* MsFanservice: Hekapoo is already the series's HOTTEST girl (figuratively and literally). So her 'Hailey' human form pretty much reduces the boy students into [[PervertedDrooling drooling pigs]]. With pigs]], with Rusty even betting her bust size.
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* PastLifeMemories:[[spoiler: The time monitors in father times dimension show Lincoln memories of his past lives. Which all involve the past Butterfly Queens in some manner. The images are familiar to him, but he doesn't actually remember any of this as the room was showing him images from his timeline. Not his memories.]]
* PoorCommunicationKills: Subverted. Lincoln explains everything about why he had the scissors to Hekapoo the first time they meet and is willing to just hand them over without a fight since they do actually belong to her. Giving Hekapoo a better first impression of humans far quicker than Marco had. Though only just, as she still needs convincing before she considers humans as anything but magicless meat-wads.
* PoorCommunicationKills: Subverted. Lincoln explains everything about why he had the scissors to Hekapoo the first time they meet and is willing to just hand them over without a fight since they do actually belong to her. Giving Hekapoo a better first impression of humans far quicker than Marco had. Though only just, as she still needs convincing before she considers humans as anything but magicless meat-wads.
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* PastLifeMemories:[[spoiler: The time monitors in father times dimension show Lincoln memories of his past lives. Which all involve the past Butterfly Queens in some manner. The images are familiar to him, but he doesn't actually remember any of this as the room was showing him images from his timeline. Not timeline, not his memories.]]
* PoorCommunicationKills: Subverted. Lincoln explains everything about why he had the scissors to Hekapoo the first time they meet and is willing to just hand them over without a fight since they do actually belong toher. Giving her, giving Hekapoo a better first impression of humans far quicker than Marco had. Though only just, as she still needs convincing before she considers humans as anything but magicless meat-wads.
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* [[spoiler: {{Reincarnation}}: There are strong hints that Lincoln's fate has, throughout his past lives lives, always been intertwined with the Butterfly families. He hears about a white dragon that destroyed their original spellbook, and Celina the shy's epitaph mentions an 'orange prince' as her love. When the monitors in father times dimension focus on him, they show him points in his previous lives that involve members of the Butterfly queen stretching back centuries that he has no memory of. When he first meets Glossaryck, it's mentioned how he finds his laugh strangely familiar, and when when Celina is briefly brought up, Glassaryck simply states that he "doesn't need to tell [Lincoln] that", implying it's something Linconl already knows.]]
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* CasanovaWannabe: Rusty, one of Lincoln's friends, thinks he's a lady's man. Constantly flirting and hitting on multiple girls, usually ending with him getting smacked. Even when Star goes crazy from mewberty, and was cocooning every single boy in school, she tosses him aside like a piece of trash. What's REALLY pathetic, is that he WANTED her to cocoon him.
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* CasanovaWannabe: Rusty, one of Lincoln's friends, thinks he's a lady's man. Constantly man, constantly flirting and hitting on multiple girls, usually ending with him getting smacked. Even when Star goes crazy from mewberty, and was cocooning every single boy in school, she tosses him aside like a piece of trash. What's REALLY pathetic, is that he WANTED her to cocoon him.
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* BreakTheScientist: When Lincoln introduces Star to his family, by using her intro no less, Lisa scoffs and (as expected) dismisses the idea of her being a "magical princess from another dimension", and magic in general. Until she creates her laser puppies, per Lily's request, leaving the family, but most importantly Lisa, unable to process what they just saw. The final nail was when she used her Sparkle Glitter Bomb Expand spell to turn the attic into her new room. Resulting in the little [[InsufferableGenius know-it-all's]] brain to shut down. After which she refuses to be involved with anything related to Star's magic.
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* BreakTheScientist: When Lincoln introduces Star to his family, by using her intro no less, Lisa scoffs and (as expected) dismisses the idea of her being a "magical princess from another dimension", and magic in general. Until she creates her laser puppies, per Lily's request, leaving the family, but most importantly Lisa, unable to process what they just saw. The final nail was when she used her Sparkle Glitter Bomb Expand spell to turn the attic into her new room. Resulting room, resulting in the little [[InsufferableGenius know-it-all's]] brain to shut down. After which she refuses to be involved with anything related to Star's magic.
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* TheBeastmaster: Out of all of the siblings, the laser puppies bond closest with Lily. Who can order them around enough that they'll attack someone on her command.
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* TheBeastmaster: Out of all of the siblings, the laser puppies bond closest with Lily. Who Lily, who can order them around enough that they'll attack someone on her command.
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* AllMenArePerverts: Star tells Hailey that all guys have a perverted side when they catch Lincoln checking the disguised Hekapoo out during class. An interesting case since neither is bothered by this since Star considers iperfectly normal and Lincoln unlike Rusty doesn't let it control him, while Hekapoo is "pleased" that Lincoln finds her that attractive.
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* AllMenArePerverts: Star tells Hailey that all guys have a perverted side when they catch Lincoln checking the disguised Hekapoo out during class. An interesting case since neither is bothered by this since Star considers iperfectly it perfectly normal and Lincoln unlike Rusty doesn't let it control him, while Hekapoo is "pleased" that Lincoln finds her that attractive.
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* AllMenArePerverts: Star tells Hailey that all guys have a perverted side when they catch Lincoln checking the disguised Hekapoo out during class. An interesting case since neither is bothered by this since Star considers it perfectly normal and Lincoln unlike Rusty doesn't let it control him. While Hekapoo is "pleased" that Lincoln finds her that attractive.
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* AllMenArePerverts: Star tells Hailey that all guys have a perverted side when they catch Lincoln checking the disguised Hekapoo out during class. An interesting case since neither is bothered by this since Star considers it perfectly iperfectly normal and Lincoln unlike Rusty doesn't let it control him. While him, while Hekapoo is "pleased" that Lincoln finds her that attractive.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13525853/1/Louds-vs-the-Forces-of-Evil Louds vs. the Forces of Evil]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/StarVsTheForcesOfEvil'' and ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse'' crossover written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/9924900/Ninjamon1228 Ninjamon1218]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13525853/1/Louds-vs-the-Forces-of-Evil Louds vs. the Forces of Evil]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/StarVsTheForcesOfEvil'' and ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse'' crossover written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/9924900/Ninjamon1228 Ninjamon1218]]
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* LikesOlderWomen: Hekapoo is at least [[OlderThanTheyLook over 10'000 years old]]. This however doesn't unnerve or make her any less attractive to Lincoln. Then again it probably doesn't hurt that despite her age Hekapoo looks like a pretty girl his age anyway.
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* LikesOlderWomen: Hekapoo is at least [[OlderThanTheyLook over 10'000 10,000 years old]]. This however doesn't unnerve or make her any less attractive to Lincoln. Then again it probably doesn't hurt that despite her age Hekapoo looks like a pretty girl his age anyway.
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* StalkerWithoutACrush: Toffee is revealed to have a file on Lincoln, going as far back as his childhood.
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*** The Scythe of Sorrow spell Star uses is based on [[Anime/DragonBallSuper Goku Black's Sickle of Sorrow]].
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** In Chapter 18, whilst channel surfing at Jackie's house, Star flips past ''WesternAnimation/PhineasAndFerb'', ''WesternAnimation/EdEddNEddy'', ''Anime/DragonBall'', and ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverseTheMovie''.
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: In "Mewnipendance Day", Hekapoo shows the same narrow-minded [[FantasticRacism bigotry]] towards monsters, as she does in the show. Not only thinking all monsters are evil, but also claiming humans aren't capable of doing anything bad... until Lincoln gives her a history book on Adolf Hitler. After reading a few pages, she's so shocked she dunks her head into a lava pit to muffle her horrifying screams. After Lincoln talks to her about keeping an open mind, she starts to question her beliefs.
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: In "Mewnipendance Day", Hekapoo shows the same narrow-minded [[FantasticRacism bigotry]] towards monsters, as she does in the show. Not only thinking all monsters are evil, but also claiming humans aren't capable of doing anything bad... until Lincoln gives her a history book on Adolf Hitler. After reading a few pages, she's so shocked she dunks her head into a lava pit to muffle her horrifying horrified screams. After Lincoln talks to her about keeping an open mind, she starts to question her beliefs.
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* BreakTheScientist: When Lincoln introduces Star to his family, by using her intro no less. Lisa scoffs and(as expected) dismisses the idea of her being a "magical princess from another dimension", and magic in general. Until she creates her laser puppies, per Lily's request, leaving the family, but most importantly Lisa, unable to process what they just saw. The final nail was when she used her Sparkle Glitter Bomb Expand spell to turn the attic into her new room. Resulting in the little [[InsufferableGenius know-it-all's]] brain to shut down. After which she refuses to be involved with anything related to Star's magic.
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* BreakTheScientist: When Lincoln introduces Star to his family, by using her intro no less. less, Lisa scoffs and(as and (as expected) dismisses the idea of her being a "magical princess from another dimension", and magic in general. Until she creates her laser puppies, per Lily's request, leaving the family, but most importantly Lisa, unable to process what they just saw. The final nail was when she used her Sparkle Glitter Bomb Expand spell to turn the attic into her new room. Resulting in the little [[InsufferableGenius know-it-all's]] brain to shut down. After which she refuses to be involved with anything related to Star's magic.
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** When Lisa joins Star and Lincoln's trip to Father Time's realm in Freeze Day, and they see her past in the monitors. Star is quick to call Lisa's life "Boooooring". And the worst part, Lisa agrees. Despite her dedication to science, seeing her do the same routine of test, study, and experimentation, has left her life hollow and dull. Compared to all the adventures her brother goes on, and the fun activities her sister's do. This is why she now tries to loosen up and have more fun, and study less.
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* LikesOlderWomen: Hekapoo is at least [[OlderThanTheyLook over 1000 years old]]. This however doesn't unnerve or make her any less attractive to Lincoln. Then again it probably doesn't hurt that despite her age Hekapoo looks like a pretty girl his age anyway.
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--> [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} Birdie, no!]]
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Jackie and Sam are cousins.
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* MyhtologyGag: In the first chapter, Lincoln quotes his show's theme song.
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