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** Lincoln's teenage appearance is based on Future Trunks from [[Anime/DragonBallZ Dragon Ball Z]]. With the same ponytail hairstyle and orange jacket.

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** Lincoln's teenage appearance is based on Future Trunks from [[Anime/DragonBallZ Dragon Ball Z]].''Anime/DragonBallZ''. With the same ponytail hairstyle and orange jacket.



---> [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} Birdie, no!]]

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---> ----> [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} Birdie, no!]]



** In Chapter 18, whilst channel surfing at Jackie's house, Star flips past ''WesternAnimation/PhineasAndFerb'', ''WesternAnimation/EdEddNEddy'', ''Anime/DragonBall'', and ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverseTheMovie''.

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** In Chapter 18, whilst channel surfing at Jackie's house, Star flips past ''WesternAnimation/PhineasAndFerb'', ''WesternAnimation/EdEddNEddy'', ''Anime/DragonBall'', ''Manga/DragonBall'', and ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverseTheMovie''.

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* AdaptedOut: The Box of Truth isn't used due to the presence of Hekapoo, who, recognizing what it is, chucks it into a dimensional portal.

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The Box of Truth isn't used due to the presence of Hekapoo, who, recognizing what it is, chucks it into a dimensional portal.portal.
** The Diazes, due to being replaced by the Louds.

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Gag Boobs has been renamed to Boob Based Gag. Changing to the proper trope where appropriate and cutting misuse.


** Rusty bet Zach that the new student [[MsFanservice Hailey]] had [[GagBoobs F-cups]]. He wins.

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** Rusty bet Zach that the new student [[MsFanservice Hailey]] had [[GagBoobs F-cups]].F-cups. He wins.



* GagBoobs: Hekapoo asks an ogling Zach and Rusty if they've never seen a girl with F-cups before.
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** In Chapter 31, when Hekapoo chuck the Box of Truth into a dimensional portal, it ends up in WesternAnimation/{{Amphibia}}. Specifically Newtopia, where it beans Marcy in the back of her head.

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** In Chapter 31, when Hekapoo chuck chucks the Box of Truth into a dimensional portal, it ends up in WesternAnimation/{{Amphibia}}. Specifically Newtopia, where it beans Marcy in the back of her head.
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* AdaptedOut: The Box of Truth isn't used due to the presence of Hekapoo, who, recognizing what it is, chucks it into a dimensional portal.


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** In Chapter 31, when Hekapoo chuck the Box of Truth into a dimensional portal, it ends up in WesternAnimation/{{Amphibia}}. Specifically Newtopia, where it beans Marcy in the back of her head.
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* AllMenArePerverts: Star tells Hailey that all guys have a perverted side when they catch Lincoln checking the disguised Hekapoo out during class. An interesting case since neither is bothered by this since Star considers it perfectly normal and Lincoln unlike Rusty doesn't let it control him, while Hekapoo is "pleased" that Lincoln finds her that attractive.

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* AllMenArePerverts: Star tells Hailey that all guys have a perverted side when they catch Lincoln checking the disguised Hekapoo out during class. An interesting case since neither is bothered by this since Star considers it perfectly normal and Lincoln Lincoln, unlike Rusty Rusty, doesn't let it control him, while Hekapoo is "pleased" that Lincoln finds her that attractive.
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** Chapter 24 starts with Star and Lincoln playing ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros''.

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** Chapter 24 starts with Star and Lincoln playing ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros''.''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros'', and ends with Hekapoo realizing [[WesternAnimation/RickAndMorty she was a terrible parent]].
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: It's obvious even to Leni that Hekapoo and Lincoln are interested in each other. The only ones that don't see that they're more than friends is Lincoln and Hekapoo themselves and even then even they aren't sure they mean it when they say they're not dating.

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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: It's obvious even to Leni [[TheDitz Leni]] that Hekapoo and Lincoln are romantically interested in each other. The only ones that don't see that they're more than friends is are Lincoln and Hekapoo themselves and even then even they aren't sure they mean it when they say they're not dating.they don't like each other like that.



* InsistentTerminology: Hekapoo flirts with Lincoln because she likes to ''tease'' him, ''not'' because shes falling in love with him.

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* InsistentTerminology: Hekapoo flirts with Lincoln because she likes to ''tease'' him, ''not'' because shes she's falling in love with him.him.
* LapPillow: One of the ways Hekapoo enjoys ''teasing'' Lincoln is by sitting in his lap.



* LikesOlderWomen: Hekapoo is at least [[OlderThanTheyLook over 10,000 years old]]. This however doesn't unnerve or make her any less attractive to Lincoln. Then again it probably doesn't hurt that despite her age Hekapoo looks like a pretty girl his age anyway.

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* LikesOlderWomen: Hekapoo is at least [[OlderThanTheyLook over 10,000 years old]]. This however doesn't unnerve or make her any less attractive to Lincoln. Then again it probably doesn't hurt that despite her age Hekapoo looks like a pretty teenage girl his age anyway.
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** When Hekapoo helps Lincoln, Star, and Lana babysit Buff Frog's kids, she ends up having several flashbacks to her time raising Queen Festivia, and how she essentially manipulated the drunk queen into waging a war against monsters with no regard for her feelings. This, combined with her realizations regarding [[FantasticRacism her own bigotry]], force her to acknowledge that she's been a pretty terrible person.

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** When Hekapoo helps Lincoln, Star, and Lana babysit Buff Frog's kids, she ends up having several flashbacks to her time raising Queen Festivia, and how she essentially manipulated the girl she'd raised like her own daughter into becoming a drunk queen into waging to get her to wage a war against monsters with no regard for monsters, then yelling that she regrets raising her feelings.after the girl sobered up enough to realize it was wrong. This, combined with her realizations regarding [[FantasticRacism her own bigotry]], force her to acknowledge that she's been a pretty terrible person.
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** When Hekapoo helps Lincoln, Star, and Lana babysit Buff Frog's kids, she ends up having several flashbacks to her time raising Queen Festiva, and how she essentially manipulated the drunk queen into waging a war against monsters with no regard for her feelings. This, combined with her realizations regarding [[FantasticRacism her own bigotry]], force her to acknowledge that she's been a pretty terrible person.

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** When Hekapoo helps Lincoln, Star, and Lana babysit Buff Frog's kids, she ends up having several flashbacks to her time raising Queen Festiva, Festivia, and how she essentially manipulated the drunk queen into waging a war against monsters with no regard for her feelings. This, combined with her realizations regarding [[FantasticRacism her own bigotry]], force her to acknowledge that she's been a pretty terrible person.

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** When Hekapoo helps Lincoln, Star, and Lana babysit Buff Frog's kids, she ends up having several flashbacks to her time raising Queen Festiva, and how she ensentially manipulated the drunk queen into waging a war against monsters with no regard for her feelings. This, combined with her realizations regarding [[FantasticRacism her own bigotry]], force her to acknowledge that she's been a pretty terrible person.

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** When Hekapoo helps Lincoln, Star, and Lana babysit Buff Frog's kids, she ends up having several flashbacks to her time raising Queen Festiva, and how she ensentially essentially manipulated the drunk queen into waging a war against monsters with no regard for her feelings. This, combined with her realizations regarding [[FantasticRacism her own bigotry]], force her to acknowledge that she's been a pretty terrible person.



* InsistentTerminology : Hekapoo flirts with Lincoln because she likes to ''tease'' him, ''not'' because shes falling in love with him.

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* InsistentTerminology : ImmortalImmaturity: Hekapoo is centuries old at least and a TimeAbyss at most. However physically and mentally she is a teenager.
* InsistentTerminology:
Hekapoo flirts with Lincoln because she likes to ''tease'' him, ''not'' because shes falling in love with him.



* SayItWithHearts: Hekapoo might not realize that her flame has started to take the shape of a heart whenever 'teasing' or talking about Lincoln, but Leni certainly has.

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* SayItWithHearts: Hekapoo might not realize notice that her flame has started to take the shape of a heart whenever 'teasing' or talking thinking about Lincoln, but Leni certainly has.

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* InsistentTerminology : Hekapoo flirts with Lincoln because she likes to ''tease'' him, ''not'' because shes falling in love with him

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* InsistentTerminology : Hekapoo flirts with Lincoln because she likes to ''tease'' him, ''not'' because shes falling in love with himhim.
* LadyDrunk: To Hekapoo's regret she had allowed Festivia to turn herself into a drunk so that she was easier for the MHC to manipulate.
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* ParentalSubstitute: Hekapoo raised Festivia in leu of her real mother. She now realizes she did a terrible job.

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** When Tom tries to pull his stunt with Mr. Candle this time, he doesn't have the benefit of a heart to heart with a sympathetic ear, but is threatened with holy violence by Jackie into telling Star the truth. Resulting in him hurting Star far more and him feeling terrible for putting her in this position.

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** When Tom tries to pull his stunt with Mr. Candle this time, he doesn't have the benefit of a heart to heart with a sympathetic ear, but is threatened with holy violence by Jackie into telling Star the truth. Resulting truth, resulting in him hurting Star far more and him feeling terrible for putting her in this position.position.
** When Hekapoo helps Lincoln, Star, and Lana babysit Buff Frog's kids, she ends up having several flashbacks to her time raising Queen Festiva, and how she ensentially manipulated the drunk queen into waging a war against monsters with no regard for her feelings. This, combined with her realizations regarding [[FantasticRacism her own bigotry]], force her to acknowledge that she's been a pretty terrible person.
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--> [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} Birdie, no!]]

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--> ---> [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} Birdie, no!]]
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** Chapter 24 starts with Star and Lincoln playing ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros''.
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** In "Mewnipendance Day", Hekapoo shows the same narrow-minded [[FantasticRacism bigotry]] towards monsters, as she does in the show. Not only thinking all monsters are evil, but also claiming humans aren't capable of doing anything bad... until Lincoln gives her a history book on Adolf Hitler. After reading a few pages, she's so shocked she dunks her head into a lava pit to muffle her horrifying screams. After Lincoln talks to her about keeping an open mind, she starts to question her beliefs.

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** In "Mewnipendance Day", Hekapoo shows the same narrow-minded [[FantasticRacism bigotry]] towards monsters, as she does in the show. Not only thinking all monsters are evil, but also claiming humans aren't capable of doing anything bad... until Lincoln gives her a history book on Adolf Hitler. After reading a few pages, she's so shocked she dunks her head into a lava pit to muffle her horrifying horrified screams. After Lincoln talks to her about keeping an open mind, she starts to question her beliefs.

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