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[[https://www.fanfiktion.de/s/5a4050830003873028116f61/1/Lightening-God-Alchemist Lightening God Alchemist]] is a German Fanfiction by the fanfiction artist invisibleyoungwitch.
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[[https://www.fanfiktion.de/s/5a4050830003873028116f61/1/Lightening-God-Alchemist Lightening God Alchemist]] is a German Fanfiction by the fanfiction [[https://www.fanfiktion.de/ Fanfiktion.de]] artist invisibleyoungwitch.
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[[https://www.fanfiktion.de/s/5a4050830003873028116f61/1/Lightening-God-Alchemist Lightening God Alchemist Alchemist]] is a German Fanfiction by the fanfiction artist invisibleyoungwitch.
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* AdultFear: A barely seen example, but Chris Mustang is presented with her adoptive son suffering from PTSD and her adoptive daughter actually signs up for the army herself, where she could suffer the same fate, if not even a worse fate than her brother.
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* NotInThisForYourRevolution: Downplayed by Evelyn, as she does seek to support her brother in his bid to become the Fuhrer and change Amestris, but she is mostly in the army to save Roy and all of the other Ishval veterans from being branded as war-criminals
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* NotInThisForYourRevolution: Downplayed by Evelyn, as she does seek to support her brother in his bid to become the Fuhrer and change Amestris, but she is mostly in the army to save Roy and all of the other Ishval veterans from being branded as war-criminalswar-criminals.
*WarIsHell: With the Eastern Rebellion it is literally spelled out for everyone.
*WarIsHell: With the Eastern Rebellion it is literally spelled out for everyone.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Roy literally embodies this trope, before Ishval.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Roy literally embodies this trope, before Ishval.Ishval.
*NotInThisForYourRevolution: Downplayed by Evelyn, as she does seek to support her brother in his bid to become the Fuhrer and change Amestris, but she is mostly in the army to save Roy and all of the other Ishval veterans from being branded as war-criminals
*NotInThisForYourRevolution: Downplayed by Evelyn, as she does seek to support her brother in his bid to become the Fuhrer and change Amestris, but she is mostly in the army to save Roy and all of the other Ishval veterans from being branded as war-criminals
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*AdultFear: A barely seen example, but Chris Mustang is presented with her adoptive son suffering from PTSD and her adoptive daughter actually signs up for the army herself, where she could suffer the same fate, if not even a worse fate than her brother.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Roy literally embodies this trope, before Ishval.
* DeadpanSnarker: Evelyn is most certainly not above this. [[subscript:'''Evelyn''': And what are you planning to do with it? Do you want to earn your money by lighting other people's fireplaces, because they can't manage to do it themselves?]]
* DeadpanSnarker: Evelyn is most certainly not above this. [[subscript:'''Evelyn''': And what are you planning to do with it? Do you want to earn your money by lighting other people's fireplaces, because they can't manage to do it themselves?]]
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Roy literally embodies this trope, before Ishval.
* DeadpanSnarker: Evelyn is most certainly not above this. [[subscript:'''Evelyn''': And what are you planning to do with it? Do you want to earn your money by lighting other people's fireplaces, because they can't manage to do it themselves?]]Ishval.
* DeadpanSnarker: Evelyn is most certainly not above this. [[subscript:'''Evelyn''': And what are you planning to do with it? Do you want to earn your money by lighting other people's fireplaces, because they can't manage to do it themselves?]]
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* DeadpanSnarker: Evelyn is most certainly not above this. [[subscript:'''Evelyn''': And what are you planning to do with it? Do you want to earn your money by lighting other people's fireplaces, because they can't manage to do it themselves?]]
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* DeadpanSnarker: Evelyn is most certainly not above this. [[subscript:'''Evelyn''': And what are you planning to do with it? Do you want to earn your money by lighting other people's fireplaces, because they can't manage to do it themselves?]]
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Roy literally embodies this trope, before Ishval.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Roy literally embodies this trope, before Ishval.Ishval.
*DeadpanSnarker: Evelyn is most certainly not above this. [[subscript:'''Evelyn''': And what are you planning to do with it? Do you want to earn your money by lighting other people's fireplaces, because they can't manage to do it themselves?]]
*DeadpanSnarker: Evelyn is most certainly not above this. [[subscript:'''Evelyn''': And what are you planning to do with it? Do you want to earn your money by lighting other people's fireplaces, because they can't manage to do it themselves?]]
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*TheBabyOfTheBunch: While she works as a nurse treating wounded soliders during the Eastern Rebellion, Evelyn is the youngest of all the nurses.
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* AffectionateGestureToTheHead: It is said that Roy used to pat his sister's head often when they were younger. He does so again to calm his sister down, after she worries about his plan to join the army.
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* AffectionateGestureToTheHead: It is said that Roy used to pat his sister's head often when they were younger. He does so again to calm his sister down, after she worries about his plan to join the army.army.
*BigBrotherInstinct: Roy literally embodies this trope, before Ishval.
*BigBrotherInstinct: Roy literally embodies this trope, before Ishval.
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* ActionGirl: Evelyn is a soldier and State Alchemist who adopted the technique of her brother, except for lightening replacing flames, thus her title.
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* ActionGirl: Evelyn is a soldier and State Alchemist who adopted the technique of her brother, except for lightening replacing flames, thus her title.title.
*AffectionateGestureToTheHead: It is said that Roy used to pat his sister's head often when they were younger. He does so again to calm his sister down, after she worries about his plan to join the army.
*AffectionateGestureToTheHead: It is said that Roy used to pat his sister's head often when they were younger. He does so again to calm his sister down, after she worries about his plan to join the army.
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*Action Girl: Evelyn is a soldier and State Alchemist who adopted the technique of her brother, except for lightening replacing flames, thus her title.
*Action Girl: Evelyn is a soldier and State Alchemist who adopted the technique of her brother, except for lightening replacing flames, thus her title.
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After the Eastern Rebellion comes to an end Evelyn Mustang, the younger sister to the "Hero of Ishval" Roy Mustang, signs up for the Amestrian army with ambitions of her own. But what are the secrets that she keeps hidden even from the people she calls her friends? What does the woman Evelyn Mustang keep hidden behind the facade of the human weapon "Lightening God", while seemingly only seeking to support her brother in becoming the Fuhrer thus also seeking to look like a naive young woman who fell for the sweet promises of the state, despite all warnings?
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After the Eastern Rebellion comes to an end Evelyn Mustang, the younger sister to the "Hero of Ishval" Roy Mustang, signs up for the Amestrian army with ambitions of her own. But what are the secrets that she keeps hidden even from the people she calls her friends? What does the woman Evelyn Mustang keep hidden behind the facade of the human weapon "Lightening God", while seemingly only seeking to support her brother in becoming the Fuhrer thus also seeking to look like a naive young woman who fell for the sweet promises of the state, despite all warnings?warnings?
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Lightening God Alchemist is a German Fanfiction by the fanfiction artist invisibleyoungwitch.
After the Eastern Rebellion comes to an end Evelyn Mustang, the younger sister to the "Hero of Ishval" Roy Mustang, signs up for the Amestrian army with ambitions of her own. But what are the secrets that she keeps hidden even from the people she calls her friends? What does the woman Evelyn Mustang keep hidden behind the facade of the human weapon "Lightening God", while seemingly only seeking to support her brother in becoming the Fuhrer thus also seeking to look like a naive young woman who fell for the sweet promises of the state, despite all warnings?
After the Eastern Rebellion comes to an end Evelyn Mustang, the younger sister to the "Hero of Ishval" Roy Mustang, signs up for the Amestrian army with ambitions of her own. But what are the secrets that she keeps hidden even from the people she calls her friends? What does the woman Evelyn Mustang keep hidden behind the facade of the human weapon "Lightening God", while seemingly only seeking to support her brother in becoming the Fuhrer thus also seeking to look like a naive young woman who fell for the sweet promises of the state, despite all warnings?
