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The fic has been lost, but it has a [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zfRm6FM9afg illustrated Dramatic Reading]]. Both the fic and its sequel have been [[http://vgdivision.dreamwidth.org/1251.html missioned]] [[http://vgdivision.dreamwidth.org/2155.html by]] the WebOriginal/ProtectorsOfThePlotContinuum.
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The fic can be read [[https://web.archive.org/web/20120412045324/http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5736669/1/Left_2_Die_4ever here.]] It also has been lost, but it has a an [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zfRm6FM9afg illustrated Dramatic Reading]]. Both the fic and its sequel have been [[http://vgdivision.dreamwidth.org/1251.html missioned]] [[http://vgdivision.dreamwidth.org/2155.html by]] the WebOriginal/ProtectorsOfThePlotContinuum.
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* CoolOldGuy: Upon introduction of Bob, it's outright stated that he's fighting in World War II, thus making him around 80 years old assuming the story is set in the present day.
* GunsDoNotWorkThatWay: Upon running out of ammo, Bob chucks his gun at the zombies, which explodes because ''it has gunpower in it.''
* GunsDoNotWorkThatWay: Upon running out of ammo, Bob chucks his gun at the zombies, which explodes because ''it has gunpower in it.''
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* CoolOldGuy: Upon introduction of Bob, it's outright stated that he's fighting he fought in World War II, thus making him around 80 years old assuming the story is set in the present day.
* GunsDoNotWorkThatWay: Upon running out of ammo, Bob chucks his gun at the zombies, which explodes because ''it hasgunpower gunpowder in it.''
* GunsDoNotWorkThatWay: Upon running out of ammo, Bob chucks his gun at the zombies, which explodes because ''it has
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[[ThroughTheEyesOfMadness Read it]] [[http://vgdivision.dreamwidth.org/1251.html here]]. Also has a [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zfRm6FM9afg illustrated Dramatic Reading]]
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* BadassGrandpa: Upon introduction of Bob, it's outright stated that he's fighting in World War II, thus making him around 80 years old assuming the story is set in the present day.
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* {{BFG}}: The Prototip is a huge nuclear bomb launcher that can fire radiation and is somehow capable of giving zombies a combination of cancer, AIDS, and fire.
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* {{BFG}}: The Prototip is a huge nuclear bomb launcher BadassGrandpa: Upon introduction of Bob, it's outright stated that can fire radiation and he's fighting in World War II, thus making him around 80 years old assuming the story is somehow capable of giving zombies a combination of cancer, AIDS, and fire.
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A Fanfic of the Left 4 Dead series, it follows the story of the hero Bob, a sandwich man, and the original cast in the sequel. They series is written in a fashion similar to the writer's other fic ''Fanfic/BetaThreat'' and takes cues from other trollfics such as ''Fanfic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences'' and ''Fanfic/DoomRepercussionsOfEvil''.
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A Fanfic of the Left 4 Dead series, it follows the story of the hero Bob, a sandwich man, and the original cast in the sequel. They series is written in a fashion similar to the writer's other fic ''Fanfic/BetaThreat'' ''Fanfic/TheBetaThreat'' and takes cues from other trollfics such as ''Fanfic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences'' and ''Fanfic/DoomRepercussionsOfEvil''.
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[[ThroughTheEyesOfMadness Read it]] [[http://vgdivision.dreamwidth.org/1251.html here]].
Also has a [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zfRm6FM9afg illustrated Dramatic Reading]]
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Also has a [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zfRm6FM9afg illustrated Dramatic Reading]]
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[[ThroughTheEyesOfMadness Read it]] [[http://vgdivision.dreamwidth.org/1251.html here]].
here]]. Also has a [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zfRm6FM9afg illustrated Dramatic Reading]]
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A Fanfic of the Left 4 Dead series, it follows the story of the hero Bob, a sandwich man, and the original cast in the sequel. They series is written in a fashion similar to the writer's other fic ''Fanfic/BetaThreat'' and takes cues from other trollfics such as ''Fanfic/FullLifeConsequences'' and ''Fanfic/DoomRepercussionsOfEvil''.
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A Fanfic of the Left 4 Dead series, it follows the story of the hero Bob, a sandwich man, and the original cast in the sequel. They series is written in a fashion similar to the writer's other fic ''Fanfic/BetaThreat'' and takes cues from other trollfics such as ''Fanfic/FullLifeConsequences'' ''Fanfic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences'' and ''Fanfic/DoomRepercussionsOfEvil''.
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Dewicking per this thread, general cleanup
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A Fanfic of the Left 4 Dead series, it follows the story of the hero Bob, a sandwich man, and the original cast in the sequel. They series is written in a fashion similar to the writer's other fic Beta Threat and takes cues from other trollfics such as Full Life Consequences and Doom: Repercussions of Evil.
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A Fanfic of the Left 4 Dead series, it follows the story of the hero Bob, a sandwich man, and the original cast in the sequel. They series is written in a fashion similar to the writer's other fic Beta Threat ''Fanfic/BetaThreat'' and takes cues from other trollfics such as Full Life Consequences ''Fanfic/FullLifeConsequences'' and Doom: Repercussions of Evil.''Fanfic/DoomRepercussionsOfEvil''.
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* BadassGrandpa: If we are to take the story's claim about Bob fighting Nazis literally, he'd have to be well into his 80's at least.
* {{BFG}}: The Prototip weapon. A nuclear bomb launcher that can fire radiation and is somehow capable of giving zombies a combination of cancer, AIDS, and fire.
* ClusterFBomb
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* {{BFG}}: The Prototip weapon. A nuclear bomb launcher that can fire radiation and is somehow capable of giving zombies a combination of cancer, AIDS, and fire.
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* HopelessWithTech: Bob is so terrible with cars, he has to eat special pills and boost his IQ to 9999 just to realize that Molotov Cocktails are filled the same gasoline that goes inside cars.
* RocketJump
* RougeAnglesOfSatin
* SayItWithHearts: Bob is capable of pronouncing "!".
* ShoutOut: A mysterious government man in a suit that seems to know something about this mysterious crisis? Who shows up at the end of the story to take the heroes away? [[VideoGame/HalfLife Hmm...]]
* RocketJump
* RougeAnglesOfSatin
* SayItWithHearts: Bob is capable of pronouncing "!".
* ShoutOut: A mysterious government man in a suit that seems to know something about this mysterious crisis? Who shows up at the end of the story to take the heroes away? [[VideoGame/HalfLife Hmm...]]
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* HopelessWithTech: Bob is so terrible with cars, he has to eat special pills and boost his IQ to 9999 just to realize that Molotov Cocktails are filled with the same gasoline that goes inside cars.
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* SayItWithHearts: Bob is capable of pronouncing the symbol "!".
* ShoutOut: A mysterious government man in a suit that seems to know something aboutthis a mysterious crisis? Who crisis, who shows up at the end of the story to take the heroes away? away, is a clear reference to [[VideoGame/HalfLife Hmm...]]the G-Man]].
* SayItWithHearts: Bob is capable of pronouncing the symbol "!".
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* TrollFic
* ZombieApocalypse: A rather [[RougeAnglesOfSatin intersting]] example.
* ZombieApocalypse: A rather [[RougeAnglesOfSatin intersting]] example.
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[[ThroughTheEyesOfMadness Read it]] [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5736669/1/Left_2_Die_4ever here]].
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[[ThroughTheEyesOfMadness Read it]] [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5736669/1/Left_2_Die_4ever [[http://vgdivision.dreamwidth.org/1251.html here]].
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* CrazyAwesome: Quite a few, notably the part where Bob does eats pills to make himself supersmart and then fills a car with molotovs so he could go several hundreds miles per hour.
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* ShoutOut: A mysterious government man in a suit that seems to know something about this mysterious crisis? Who shows up at the end of the story to take the heroes away? [[HalfLife Hmm...]]
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* ShoutOut: A mysterious government man in a suit that seems to know something about this mysterious crisis? Who shows up at the end of the story to take the heroes away? [[HalfLife [[VideoGame/HalfLife Hmm...]]
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* BadassGrandpa: If we are to take the story's claim about Bob fighting Nazis literally, he'd have to be well into his 80's at least.
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[[InTheMouthOfMadness Read it]] [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5736669/1/Left_2_Die_4ever here]].
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not impossible. this is my best guess as to what they meant
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* BeyondTheImpossible: Quite a few, notably the part where Bob does eats pills to make himself supersmart and then fills a car with molotovs so he could go several hundreds miles per hour.
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* GunsDoNotWorkThatWay:
-->"!" yelled Bob. "NOMOREGUNSBULLETS!" So he threw the gunz and they eksploded because guns have gunpowder in them and they killed a hundred more zombies.
* HopelessWithTech: Bob is so terrible with cars, he has to eat special pills and boost his IQ to 9999 just to realize that Molotov Cocktails are filled the same gasoline that goes inside cars.
-->"!" yelled Bob. "NOMOREGUNSBULLETS!" So he threw the gunz and they eksploded because guns have gunpowder in them and they killed a hundred more zombies.
* HopelessWithTech: Bob is so terrible with cars, he has to eat special pills and boost his IQ to 9999 just to realize that Molotov Cocktails are filled the same gasoline that goes inside cars.
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-->"!" yelled Bob. "NOMOREGUNSBULLETS!" So he threw the gunz and they eksploded because guns have gunpowder in them and they killed a hundred more zombies.
* ZombieApocalypse: A rather intersting example.
-->"!" yelled Bob. "NOMOREGUNSBULLETS!" So he threw the gunz and they eksploded because guns have gunpowder in them and they killed a hundred more zombies.
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-->"!" yelled Bob. "NOMOREGUNSBULLETS!" So he threw the gunz and they eksploded because guns have gunpowder in them and they killed a hundred more zombies.
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Also has a [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zfRm6FM9afg illustrated Dramatic Reading]]
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-->"!" yelled Bob. "NOMOREGUNSBULLETS!" So he threw the gunz and they eksploded because guns have gunpowder in them and they killed a hundred more zombies.
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-->"!" yelled Bob. "NOMOREGUNSBULLETS!" So he threw the gunz and they eksploded because guns have gunpowder in them and they killed a hundred more zombies.zombies.
* ZombieApocalypse: A rather intersting example.
* ZombieApocalypse: A rather intersting example.
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* ShoutOut: A mysterious government man in a suit that seems to know something? Who shows up at the end of the story to take the heroes away? [[HalfLife Hmm...]]
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* ShoutOut: A mysterious government man in a suit that seems to know something? something about this mysterious crisis? Who shows up at the end of the story to take the heroes away? [[HalfLife Hmm...]]
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* ShoutOut: A mysterious government man in a suit that seems to know something? Who shows up at the end of the story to take the heroes away? [HalfLife Hmm...]]
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-->"You are not ''left 4 dead''. You are ''left 2 die 4 ever''! SO YOU CANNOT LIVe!"
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-->"You are not ''left 4 dead''. You are ''left 2 die 4 ever''! SO YOU CANNOT LIVe!"[=LIVe=]!"
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* BFG: The Prototip weapon. A nuclear bomb launcher that can fire radiation and is somehow capable of giving zombies a combination of cancer, AIDS, and fire.
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[[IntoTheMouthOfMadness Read it]] [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5736669/1/Left_2_Die_4ever here]].
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* BeyondTheImpossible: Quite a few, notably the part where Bob does eats pills to make himself supersmart and then fills a car with molotovs so he could go several hundreds miles per hour.
* ClusterFBomb
* RocketJump
* RougeAnglesOfSatin
* SayItWithHearts: Bob is capable of pronouncing "!".
* TitleDrop
* ClusterFBomb
* RocketJump
* RougeAnglesOfSatin
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* YouFailLogicForever:
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BeyondTheImpossible: Quite a few, notably the part where Bob does eats pills to make himself supersmart and then fills a car with molotovs so he could go several hundreds miles per hour.
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*BeyondTheImpossible: Quite a few, notably the part where Bob does eats pills to make himself supersmart and then fills a car with molotovs so he could go several hundreds miles per
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-->"You are not ''left 4 dead''. You are ''left 2 die 4 ever''! SO YOU CANNOT LIVe!"
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*YouFailLogicForever:
-->"!" yelled Bob. "NOMOREGUNSBULLETS!" So he threw the gunz and they eksploded because guns have gunpowder in them and they killed a hundred more zombies.