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*** [[Film/StarCrash Stella Star]], [[Film/BattleBeyondTheStars Saint-Exmin]], and {{ComicBook/Barbarella}} are all aliases of [[{{ComicBook/Femforce}} Stormy Tempest]].



** Orlando underwent a sex change while pregnant, and the child from the end of [[Literature/OrlandoABiography her namesake novel]] was painfully pulled out of her body and died

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** Orlando underwent a [[MisterSeahorse sex change while pregnant, pregnant]], and the child from the end of [[Literature/OrlandoABiography her namesake novel]] was painfully pulled out of her body and died



** Captain Harlock marries [[{{Franchise/Metroid}} Samus Aran]], [[Film/StarCrash Stella Star]], [[Film/BattleBeyondTheStars Saint-Exmin]], and {{ComicBook/Barbarella}}
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*** Mina/Mysta is to be the mother of Yoko Littner (who was conceived during a threesome with [[Literature/TheHistoryOfTheRunestaff Dorian Hawkmoon]] and [[{{Series/Andromeda}} Captain Dylan Hunt]])

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*** Mina/Mysta is to be the mother of Yoko Littner (who was conceived during a threesome an orgy with [[Series/DoctorWho Time Lords]], [[Literature/TheHistoryOfTheRunestaff Dorian Hawkmoon]] and [[{{Series/Andromeda}} Captain Dylan Hunt]])
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*** [[WesternAnimation/WanderOverYonder Lord Dominator]] is the daughter of [[WesternAnimation/InvaderZIm Tak]], with he father being either a [[Series/CaptainVideo Video Ranger]] or a [[ComicStrip/DanDare Treen]].

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*** [[WesternAnimation/WanderOverYonder Lord Dominator]] is the daughter of [[WesternAnimation/InvaderZIm Tak]], with he the father being either a [[Series/CaptainVideo Video Ranger]] or a [[ComicStrip/DanDare Treen]].
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** Greta Mors take up the mantle of Captain Nemo, which is later filled by his descendant Harlock, and then by his descendant Sally Quasar. With no way of leaving this universe, [[WesternAnimation/RickAndMorty Rick Sanchez]] decides to become the next Ishmael, a role that is taken up later by Commando Cody, and then later by Halo Jones.

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** Greta Mors take up the mantle of Captain Nemo, which is later filled by his her descendant Harlock, and then by his descendant Sally Quasar. With no way of leaving this universe, [[WesternAnimation/RickAndMorty Rick Sanchez]] decides to become the next Ishmael, a role that is taken up later by Commando Cody, and then later by Halo Jones.
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** Myth/PaulBunyan [[https://www.amazon.com/League-Extraordinary-Gentlemen-Tempest-ebook/dp/B07L395339 is shown to be part of Prospero’s unleashed horrors]]; here, he fights against the eldritch monsters

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** In the original comic, Myth/PaulBunyan [[https://www.amazon.com/League-Extraordinary-Gentlemen-Tempest-ebook/dp/B07L395339 is shown to be part of Prospero’s unleashed horrors]]; horrors; here, he fights against the eldritch monstersmonsters.



** The Antichrist is now ComicStrip/DennisTheMenaceUK, corrupted by [[Literature/TheElricSaga Stormbringer]]

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** The Antichrist is now ComicStrip/DennisTheMenaceUK, [[ComicStrip/DennisTheMenaceUK Dennis the Menace]], corrupted by [[Literature/TheElricSaga Stormbringer]]
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*** Mina/Mysta and Orlando/Futura are the parents of [[{{Franchise/Halo}} Master Chief]], and many other SPARTANs are implied to have been fathered by [[Literature/EndersGame Ender Wiggin]].

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*** Mina/Mysta and Orlando/Futura are the parents of [[{{Franchise/Halo}} Master Chief]], and many other SPARTANs are implied to have been fathered by [[Literature/EndersGame Ender Wiggin]].Wiggin]] is implifed to have fathered many other SPARTAN troops.



*** [[WesternAnimation/WanderOverYonder Lord Dominator]] is the daughter of [[WesternAnimation/InvaderZIm Tak]], with he father being either a [[Series/CaptainVideo Video Ranger]] or a [[ComicStrip/DanDare]].

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*** [[WesternAnimation/WanderOverYonder Lord Dominator]] is the daughter of [[WesternAnimation/InvaderZIm Tak]], with he father being either a [[Series/CaptainVideo Video Ranger]] or a [[ComicStrip/DanDare]].[[ComicStrip/DanDare Treen]].
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*** Mina/Mysta and Orlando/Futura are the parents of [[{{Franchise/Halo}} Master Chief]]

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*** Mina/Mysta and Orlando/Futura are the parents of [[{{Franchise/Halo}} Master Chief]]Chief]], and many other SPARTANs are implied to have been fathered by [[Literature/EndersGame Ender Wiggin]].



*** Mina/Mysta is to be the mother of Yoko Littner (who was conceived during a foursome with [[Literature/TheHistoryOfTheRunestaff Dorian Hawkmoon]], [[Literature/EndersGame Ender Wiggin]] and [[{{Series/Andromeda}} Captain Dylan Hunt]])

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*** Mina/Mysta is to be the mother of Yoko Littner (who was conceived during a foursome threesome with [[Literature/TheHistoryOfTheRunestaff Dorian Hawkmoon]], [[Literature/EndersGame Ender Wiggin]] Hawkmoon]] and [[{{Series/Andromeda}} Captain Dylan Hunt]])
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*** [Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Yoko Littner]] is implied to become [[{{Literature/Lensman}} Clarissa Kinnison]]

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*** [Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Yoko Littner]] is implied to become [[{{Literature/Lensman}} Clarissa Kinnison]]

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** In Epilogue 3, Orlando/Futura becomes [[Franchise/MassEffect Commander Shepherd]] and the [[TabletopGame/Warhammer40000 God-Emperor of Mankind]], and [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Yoko Littner]] is implied to become [[{{Literature/Lensman}} Clarissa Kinnison]]

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Orlando/Futura becomes [[Franchise/MassEffect Commander Shepherd]] and the [[TabletopGame/Warhammer40000 God-Emperor of Mankind]], and [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Mankind]] (with other heroines becoming Canoness of the Adepta Sororitas).
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Yoko Littner]] is implied to become [[{{Literature/Lensman}} Clarissa Kinnison]]Kinnison]]
*** [[WesternAnimation/InvaderZim Tak]] takes on a new humanoid disguise as Tanya the Space Siren[[note]]archenemy of Captain Bruce Warren from Buster Brown Comics[[/note]] and finally becomes Lelith Hesperax the Drukhari Wych; her husbands/henchmen Bandor and Kabe were originally [[Series/CaptainVideo a Video Ranger]] and a [[ComicStrip/DanDare Treen]].



** Greta Mors take up the mantle of Captain Nemo. With no way of leaving this universe, [[WesternAnimation/RickAndMorty Rick Sanchez]] decides to become the next Ishmael, a role that is taken up later by Commando Cody.

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** Greta Mors take up the mantle of Captain Nemo. Nemo, which is later filled by his descendant Harlock, and then by his descendant Sally Quasar. With no way of leaving this universe, [[WesternAnimation/RickAndMorty Rick Sanchez]] decides to become the next Ishmael, a role that is taken up later by Commando Cody.Cody, and then later by Halo Jones.



*** [[WesternAnimation/WanderOverYonder Lord Dominator]] is the artificial daughter of [[WesternAnimation/InvaderZIm Tak]]

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*** [[WesternAnimation/WanderOverYonder Lord Dominator]] is the artificial daughter of [[WesternAnimation/InvaderZIm Tak]]Tak]], with he father being either a [[Series/CaptainVideo Video Ranger]] or a [[ComicStrip/DanDare]].
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-->'''Mina/Mysta''': [[Anime/CaptainHarlock]]’s a true individualist, serving no god or government, only the cries of the oppressed. He is truly a worthy successor to the Nemo bloodline.

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-->'''Mina/Mysta''': [[Anime/CaptainHarlock]]’s [Anime/CaptainHarlock]'s a true individualist, serving no god or government, only the cries of the oppressed. He is truly a worthy successor to the Nemo bloodline.
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-->'''Mina/Mysta''': [[Anime/CaptainHarlock]]’s a true individualist, serving no god or government, only the cries of the oppressed. He is truly a worthy successor to the Nemo bloodline.
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** Said crew includes Gale's old Girl Squad, liberated slaves from {{Literature/Gor}}, [[Film/AmazonWomenOnTheMoon Ultu Amazons]], [[Franchise/FlashGordon Dale Arden]], [[WesternAnimation/TinyToonsAdventures Marcia the]] [[WesternAnimation/DuckDodgers Martian Princess]], [[Series/SpacePatrolUS Carol Darlisle]], [[Series/RockyJonesSpaceRanger Vena Rey]], [[{{Film/Aliens}} Newt the]] {{Franchise/Predator}}, [[{{ComicBook/Femforce}} Stormy Tempest]], [[Manga/UruseiYatsura Lum Invader]], [[Anime/CowboyBebop Faye Valentine]], and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers a 3D printed clone of]] [[{{WesternAnimation/Futurama}} Bender]].

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** Said crew includes Gale's old Girl Squad, liberated slaves from {{Literature/Gor}}, [[Film/AmazonWomenOnTheMoon Ultu Amazons]], [[Franchise/FlashGordon Dale Arden]], [[WesternAnimation/TinyToonsAdventures [[WesternAnimation/TinyToonAdventures Marcia the]] [[WesternAnimation/DuckDodgers Martian Princess]], [[Series/SpacePatrolUS Carol Darlisle]], [[Series/RockyJonesSpaceRanger Vena Rey]], [[{{Film/Aliens}} Newt the]] {{Franchise/Predator}}, [[{{ComicBook/Femforce}} Stormy Tempest]], [[Manga/UruseiYatsura Lum Invader]], [[Anime/CowboyBebop Faye Valentine]], and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers a 3D printed clone of]] [[{{WesternAnimation/Futurama}} Bender]].

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* AmazonBrigade: Gale Allen and Her Girl Squadron; later, the Star Fems and their crew

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* AmazonBrigade: Gale Allen and Her Girl Squadron; later, the Star Fems and their crewcrew.
** Said crew includes Gale's old Girl Squad, liberated slaves from {{Literature/Gor}}, [[Film/AmazonWomenOnTheMoon Ultu Amazons]], [[Franchise/FlashGordon Dale Arden]], [[WesternAnimation/TinyToonsAdventures Marcia the]] [[WesternAnimation/DuckDodgers Martian Princess]], [[Series/SpacePatrolUS Carol Darlisle]], [[Series/RockyJonesSpaceRanger Vena Rey]], [[{{Film/Aliens}} Newt the]] {{Franchise/Predator}}, [[{{ComicBook/Femforce}} Stormy Tempest]], [[Manga/UruseiYatsura Lum Invader]], [[Anime/CowboyBebop Faye Valentine]], and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers a 3D printed clone of]] [[{{WesternAnimation/Futurama}} Bender]].



** After accidentally killing Mysta’s robot, [[{{WesternAnimation/Futurama}} Bender]] volunteers to fill the position.

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** After accidentally killing Mysta’s robot, [[{{WesternAnimation/Futurama}} Bender]] volunteers 3D prints a clone of himself to fill the position.take its place.
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* MagicalGirl/{{Mon}}: Teams of both band together to protect Japan from eldritch monsters during Prospero's apocalypse.

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* MagicalGirl/{{Mon}}: MagicalGirl / {{Mon}}: Teams of both band together to protect Japan from eldritch monsters during Prospero's apocalypse.
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* LovecraftLite: After Prospero[[spoiler:/Nyarlathotep]] unleashes eldritch horrors on humanity, the world’s superheroes, wizards, witches and spies unite to fight back. According to Mina/Mysta, it will end with Harry Potter, Captain Marvel, and Santa Claus slaying Cthulhu, thus ushering in a new era for humanity

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* LovecraftLite: After Prospero[[spoiler:/Nyarlathotep]] unleashes eldritch horrors on humanity, the world’s superheroes, wizards, witches and spies unite to fight back. According to Mina/Mysta, it will end with Harry Potter, Captain Marvel, and Santa Claus slaying Cthulhu, thus ushering in a new era for humanityhumanity.
* MagicalGirl/{{Mon}}: Teams of both band together to protect Japan from eldritch monsters during Prospero's apocalypse.



** Prospero claims that the [[Literature/TheWarOfTheWorlds Molluscs]] were native to [[Franchise/CthulhuMythos Yuggoth]].



** When Emma Peel becomes Gale Allen, she is accepted as the sister to [[{{Literature/Amtor}} Princess Duare]].



*** Mina/Mysta is to be the mother of Yoko Littner (whose father is either [[Literature/EndersGame Ender Wiggin]] or [[{{Series/Andromeda}} Captain Dylan Hunt]])

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*** Mina/Mysta is to be the mother of Yoko Littner (whose father is either (who was conceived during a foursome with [[Literature/TheHistoryOfTheRunestaff Dorian Hawkmoon]], [[Literature/EndersGame Ender Wiggin]] or and [[{{Series/Andromeda}} Captain Dylan Hunt]])



* SparedByTheAdaptation: At least one of the Star Fems saved [[{{Film/Aliens}} Ripley and Newt]] [[Film/Alien3 from a crash landing]].

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* SparedByTheAdaptation: At least one of the Star Fems saved [[{{Film/Aliens}} Ripley and Newt]] [[Film/Alien3 from a crash landing]].landing]], allowing Newt to be raised as a {{Franchise/Predator}}.


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* TooSpicyForYogSothoth: Not even the Deep Ones can stand [[WesternAnimation/SpongebobSquarepants Squidward's clarinet music]].

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* {{Irony}}: The Star Fems are servants of the Oyeresu, allegories for traditionalist interpretations of angels and God from the Bible, who wear {{stripperiffic}} spandex and are in an open bisexual group marriage.

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* {{Irony}}: The Star Fems are [[WarriorMonk warrior-priestess]] servants of the Oyeresu, allegories for traditionalist interpretations of angels and God from the Bible, who wear {{stripperiffic}} spandex and are in an open bisexual group marriage.



** Greta Mors take up the mantle of Captain Nemo. With no way of leaving this universe, [[WesternAnimation/RickAndMorty Rick Sanchez]] decides to become the next Ishmael.

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** Greta Mors take up the mantle of Captain Nemo. With no way of leaving this universe, [[WesternAnimation/RickAndMorty Rick Sanchez]] decides to become the next Ishmael. Ishmael, a role that is taken up later by Commando Cody.



* {{Multiverse}}: The existence of the world of LXG (and this fic) is explained using the TheWorldAsMyth concept from ''Literature/TheNumberOfTheBeast'', and is also revealed to be a part of the Eternal Champion multiverse

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* {{Multiverse}}: The existence of the world of LXG (and this fic) is explained using the TheWorldAsMyth concept from ''Literature/TheNumberOfTheBeast'', and is also revealed to be a part of the Eternal Champion multiversemultiverse.
* NiceJobFixingItVillain: [[spoiler: By attempting to make her a vampire, Dracula/Prospero/Nyarlathotep had infected Mina with magic, which was then passed along to her daughter who (also thanks to Prospero) was born at an asylum and adopted by a wizard family. Mina's daughter would be the mother of Harry Potter, who would become England's Eternal Champion against the eldritch horrors released by Prospero. Also, that same magic within Mina allowed the Elohim/Oyeresu to transform her, Emma and Orlando into the [[WarriorMonk warrior-priestess]] Star Fems.]]
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* LovecraftLite: After Prospero unleashes eldritch horrors on humanity, the world’s superheroes, wizards, witches and spies unite to fight back. According to Mina/Mysta, it will end with Harry Potter, Captain Marvel, and Santa Claus slaying Cthulhu, thus ushering in a new era for humanity

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* LovecraftLite: After Prospero Prospero[[spoiler:/Nyarlathotep]] unleashes eldritch horrors on humanity, the world’s superheroes, wizards, witches and spies unite to fight back. According to Mina/Mysta, it will end with Harry Potter, Captain Marvel, and Santa Claus slaying Cthulhu, thus ushering in a new era for humanity
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*** Harlock is the father of Satin Astro ([[MyOwnGrandpa who becomes her own ancestor]]) and ancestor to [[ComicBook/TheBalladOfHaloJones Halo Jones and Sally Quasar]]

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*** Harlock is and Samus are the father parents of Satin Astro ([[MyOwnGrandpa who becomes her own ancestor]]) and ancestor ancestors to [[ComicBook/TheBalladOfHaloJones Halo Jones and Sally Quasar]]
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*** Mina/Mysta is to be the mother of Yoko Littner (whose father is either [[Literature/EndersGame Ender Wiggin]] or [[{{Series/Andromeda}} Captain Dylan Hunt]]

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*** Mina/Mysta is to be the mother of Yoko Littner (whose father is either [[Literature/EndersGame Ender Wiggin]] or [[{{Series/Andromeda}} Captain Dylan Hunt]]Hunt]])
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*** The Priest-Kings of [[Literature/Gor}} and [[Literature/EndersGame Formics]] are implied to be of similar species, as are the [[{{Franchise/Alien}} Xenomorphs]] and [[{{Franchise/Metroid Space Pirates]].

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*** The Priest-Kings of [[Literature/Gor}} {{Literature/Gor}} and [[Literature/EndersGame Formics]] are implied to be of similar species, as are the [[{{Franchise/Alien}} Xenomorphs]] and [[{{Franchise/Metroid [[{{Franchise/Metroid}} Space Pirates]].

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** In Epilogue 3, Emma/Gale and Orlando/Futura are the parents of Samus Aran, Mina/Mysta and Orlando/Futura are the parents of [[{{Franchise/Halo}} Master Chief]], Harlock is the father of Satin Astro ([[MyOwnGrandpa who becomes her own ancestor]]) and ancestor to [[ComicBook/TheBalladOfHaloJones Halo Jones and Sally Quasar]], Mina/Mysta is to be the mother of Yoko Littner (whose father is either [[Literature/EndersGame Ender Wiggin]] or [[{{Series/Andromeda}} Captain Dylan Hunt]], and [[WesternAnimation/WanderOverYonder Lord Dominator]] is the artificial daughter of [[WesternAnimation/InvaderZIm Tak]]

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Emma/Gale and Orlando/Futura are the parents of Samus Aran, Aran
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Mina/Mysta and Orlando/Futura are the parents of [[{{Franchise/Halo}} Master Chief]], Chief]]
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Harlock is the father of Satin Astro ([[MyOwnGrandpa who becomes her own ancestor]]) and ancestor to [[ComicBook/TheBalladOfHaloJones Halo Jones and Sally Quasar]], Quasar]]
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Mina/Mysta is to be the mother of Yoko Littner (whose father is either [[Literature/EndersGame Ender Wiggin]] or [[{{Series/Andromeda}} Captain Dylan Hunt]], and Hunt]]
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[[WesternAnimation/WanderOverYonder Lord Dominator]] is the artificial daughter of [[WesternAnimation/InvaderZIm Tak]]Tak]]
*** The Priest-Kings of [[Literature/Gor}} and [[Literature/EndersGame Formics]] are implied to be of similar species, as are the [[{{Franchise/Alien}} Xenomorphs]] and [[{{Franchise/Metroid Space Pirates]].
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** Mina is the grandmother of Harry Potter

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** Mina is and Allan are the grandmother grandparents of Harry Potter



** In Epilogue 1, Orlando is the mother of [[ComicBook/CaptainBritain Roma]] and [[Franchise/TombRaider Lara Croft]], and father of {{Franchise/Shantae}}

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** In Epilogue 1, Orlando is the mother of [[ComicBook/CaptainBritain Roma]] and [[Franchise/TombRaider Lara Croft]], and father of {{Franchise/Shantae}} {{VideoGame/Shantae}}
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* {{Multiverse}}: The existence of the world of LXG (and this fic) is explained using the TheWorldAsMyth concept from Literature/TheNumberOfTheBeast, and is also revealed to be a part of the Eternal Champion multiverse

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* {{Multiverse}}: The existence of the world of LXG (and this fic) is explained using the TheWorldAsMyth concept from Literature/TheNumberOfTheBeast, ''Literature/TheNumberOfTheBeast'', and is also revealed to be a part of the Eternal Champion multiverse



** In Epilogue 1, Orlando is the mother of [[ComicBook/CaptainBritain Roma]] and [[Franchise/TombRaider Lara Croft]]

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** In Epilogue 1, Orlando is the mother of [[ComicBook/CaptainBritain Roma]] and [[Franchise/TombRaider Lara Croft]] Croft]], and father of {{Franchise/Shantae}}

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** Mina, Emma, and Orlando become Planet Comics heroines Mysta of the Moon, Gale Allen, and Futura respectively

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** Mina, Emma, and Orlando become Planet Comics heroines Mysta of the Moon, Gale Allen, and Futura respectively respectively.[[note]]With Nyarlathotep declaring himself to still be their enemy, he could be implied to fill the role of Mars, God of War from Planet Comics[[/note]]



* CorporateSponsoredSuperhero: Every modern superhero is funded by big-name companies to the point that [[EngineeredHeroics they create supervillains with staged battles to boost their popularity]]. However, rescuing people from regular criminals, disasters or suicide is very real.



** [[ComicStrip/DanDare The Treens]] are descended from the King and Queen of {{Literature/Perelandra}}.



** In Epilogue 3, Emma/Gale and Orlando/Futura are the parents of Samus Aran, Harlock is the father of Satin Astro ([[MyOwnGrandpa who becomes her own ancestor]]), Mina/Mysta is to be the mother of Yoko Littner, and [[WesternAnimation/WanderOverYonder Lord Dominator]] is the artificial daughter of [[WesternAnimation/InvaderZIm Tak]]

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** In Epilogue 3, Emma/Gale and Orlando/Futura are the parents of Samus Aran, Mina/Mysta and Orlando/Futura are the parents of [[{{Franchise/Halo}} Master Chief]], Harlock is the father of Satin Astro ([[MyOwnGrandpa who becomes her own ancestor]]), ancestor]]) and ancestor to [[ComicBook/TheBalladOfHaloJones Halo Jones and Sally Quasar]], Mina/Mysta is to be the mother of Yoko Littner, Littner (whose father is either [[Literature/EndersGame Ender Wiggin]] or [[{{Series/Andromeda}} Captain Dylan Hunt]], and [[WesternAnimation/WanderOverYonder Lord Dominator]] is the artificial daughter of [[WesternAnimation/InvaderZIm Tak]]
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* HeroicAlbino: When Mina becomes Mysta of the Moon, she obtains the body of an eternally young albino woman.
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->''“I finished reading [[ComicBook/LeagueOfExtraordinaryGentlemen LXG]] Volume 6: The Tempest a few weeks ago, and I was immensely disappointed. The story was shit, the characters were flat, and the whole thing was just a real crappy way to end a saga. So, I have decided to [[{{WesternAnimation/Futurama}} write my own ending. With blackjack and hookers! In fact, forget the blackjack!]] Starting with the revelation of the Antichrist's identity, I'm putting my own spin on how LXG should have ended out, and hopefully do it with the same creative storytelling spirit that the series started out with.”''
-->-- ‘Opening blurb of the author, Saberlord Oboeshoes, on why he wrote [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/20367067/chapters/48298930 this fic]]’

!!League of Extraordinary Gentlemen: TempestRewrite contains examples of:

* AdaptationalHeroism:
** James Bond is no longer a sociopathic magic-hating rapist, but a secret {{Series/Torchwood}} agent doing his part to save humanity (although still a womanizing SmugSnake)
** Harry Potter is no longer the Antichrist, but a {{Paragon}} worthy of Excalibur.
** Myth/PaulBunyan [[https://www.amazon.com/League-Extraordinary-Gentlemen-Tempest-ebook/dp/B07L395339 is shown to be part of Prospero’s unleashed horrors]]; here, he fights against the eldritch monsters
* AdaptationalModesty: The Lunites are given clothes to match [[Film/AmazonWomenOnTheMoon their source material]]
* AdaptationalVillainy:
** The Antichrist is now ComicStrip/DennisTheMenaceUK, corrupted by [[Literature/TheElricSaga Stormbringer]]
** Emma discovers that Bond had good reason to kill her loved ones:
*** Her father was a communist about to defect to the Soviet Union with his technology
*** Her uncle Hugo put RevengeBeforeReason and was willing to kill Emma for it
*** [[Series/TheAvengers1960s Her Cliff House friends]] had converted to the [[Franchise/CthulhuMythos Esoteric Order of Dagon]] and commited suicide when the [[Film/MissionImpossibleFilmSeries IMF]] caught up with them.
* AmazonBrigade: Gale Allen and Her Girl Squadron; later, the Star Fems and their crew
* AscendedExtra: Greta Mors, Dennis the Menace, Lara Croft, Dan Dare, Mysta of the Moon, and Lovecraft’s creations all have much more pivotal roles in the story
* BlackComedyRape: The Lunites attempt to impregnate themselves by kidnapping young [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Maza_of_the_Moon Ultu]] men and performing oral sex on them
* BrotherSisterIncest:
** Jack Nemo and Greta Mors have been in an unhealthy relationship since their teens
** Their daughters Shakti and Chanda confess their intimate feelings to each other on their last night on Earth, kiss and make love.
* CompositeCharacter:
** [[{{Literature/Gladiator}} Hugo Danner]] is the first ComicBook/CaptainAmerica
** Mary Poppins is one of the [[Literature/TheBible Elohim]], who are also the Elder Gods, the [[Literature/TheSpaceTrilogy Eldila]], the [[Literature/TheSpaceOdysseySeries Monolith Creators]], and a faction the [[Creator/MichaelMoorcock Lords of Law]] [[note]] with Lovecraft’s Outer Gods being a faction of the Chaos Lords[[/note]]
** [[spoiler:Prospero and Dracula are just two of the many forms of Nyarlathotep, who is also The Bent One. Some of his other forms include [[Series/TwinPeaks Killer BOB,]] [[Film/{{Hellraiser}} Pinhead]], [[Literature/{{It}} Pennywise]], and [[WesternAnimation/GravityFalls Bill Cipher.]] ]]
** Maleldil the Young is also [[Creator/MarvelComics Uatu the Watcher]]
** Mina, Emma, and Orlando become Planet Comics heroines Mysta of the Moon, Gale Allen, and Futura respectively
** The Black Martians of {{Literature/Barsoom}} are the WesternAnimation/LooneyTunes [[WesternAnimation/DuckDodgers Martians]]
** In Epilogue 3, Orlando/Futura becomes [[Franchise/MassEffect Commander Shepherd]] and the [[TabletopGame/Warhammer40000 God-Emperor of Mankind]], and [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Yoko Littner]] is implied to become [[{{Literature/Lensman}} Clarissa Kinnison]]
* CrossoverCosmology: Between Lovecraft, The Space Trilogy, Moorcock, and Marvel.
* DeadManWriting: Bond left a tape for Emma to play after killing him
* DeadGuyJunior: Orlando impregnates Mina and Emma on their wedding night. Mina and Orlando name their son Allan after Allan Quartermain, while Emma names her daughter Samantha after her mother. All three later have many more children, who are all named after long-lost friends and lovers.
* DeathByAdaptation:
** Mina lost her son Quincey in a miscarriage
** Orlando underwent a sex change while pregnant, and the child from the end of [[Literature/OrlandoABiography her namesake novel]] was painfully pulled out of her body and died
* {{Deconstruction}}: Of [[Literature/TimeEnoughForLove Lazarus Long]] and his pro-incest views.
** He is in a world where people are put off by his holier-than-thou behavior. His incestuous relationship with [[Literature/ToSailBeyondTheSunset his mother]] is met with disgust, and his long-winded defense of such is met with physical silencing.
** When Lazarus mentors a teenage Jack Nemo, he accuses Jack of holding sexual feelings for his half-sister Greta, and refuses to allow Jack’s studies/work to progress until they act on those (non-existent) feelings. The end result of Jack and Greta doing so is an unhealthy, unnatural relationship.
** The same type of relationship is shared by their daughters, but they do have genuine romantic love for each other, albeit as being able to trust only each other as a result of life as double agents.
** In Epilogue 3, after the Star Fems and Anime/CaptainHarlock settle on [[VideoGame/HaloWars Arcadia]], they form a simple society based on the views that Long preached. However, they seem to have come to these views naturally.
* DudeMagnet: When Emma becomes Princess Gale Allen of Venus, several men, including [[{{Literature/Amtor}} Carson Napier]] and ComicStrip/DanDare, ask her for a date.
* EveryoneHasLotsOfSex: It’s based on an Alan Moore series, so of course this happens
* GenderBender:
** As Futura, Orlando can now change her gender at will ([[{{Hermaphrodite}} and go in-between]])
** In Epilogue 2, Nyarlathotep becomes [[LightNovel/HaiyoreNyarkoSan Nyarko-san]]
* HeroicAlbino: When Mina becomes Mysta of the Moon, she obtains the body of an eternally young albino woman.
* HeroicSacrifice: Done by [[WesternAnimation/StarVsTheForcesOfEvil Heckapoo]] to save Mina from [[spoiler:Prospero/Nyarlathotep]]
* HotterAndSexier: This story has a lot more sex than the original comic; it also ends with our heroines in [[{{Stripperiffic}} much more revealing clothes]]
* {{Irony}}: The Star Fems are servants of the Oyeresu, allegories for traditionalist interpretations of angels and God from the Bible, who wear {{stripperiffic}} spandex and are in an open bisexual group marriage.
* LegacyCharacter:
** All modern superheroes are this, with sidekicks taking up their mentors’ roles through the years
** Greta Mors take up the mantle of Captain Nemo. With no way of leaving this universe, [[WesternAnimation/RickAndMorty Rick Sanchez]] decides to become the next Ishmael.
** After accidentally killing Mysta’s robot, [[{{WesternAnimation/Futurama}} Bender]] volunteers to fill the position.
* LetsSeeYouDoBetter: See the quote at the top of the page
* LibertariansInSpace: After turning the deceased Ghroth into Arcadia, the Star Fems and Harlock set up an individualistic society with a minarchist government
* LovecraftLite: After Prospero unleashes eldritch horrors on humanity, the world’s superheroes, wizards, witches and spies unite to fight back. According to Mina/Mysta, it will end with Harry Potter, Captain Marvel, and Santa Claus slaying Cthulhu, thus ushering in a new era for humanity
* MasterOfDisguise: Emma and Orlando flawlessly pass themselves off as [[Series/SecretDiaryOfACallGirl Belle and Bambi]] for their assassination plot
* {{Multiverse}}: The existence of the world of LXG (and this fic) is explained using the TheWorldAsMyth concept from Literature/TheNumberOfTheBeast, and is also revealed to be a part of the Eternal Champion multiverse
* ObfuscatingStupidity: Turns out, Bond was faking his incompetence in Black Dossier
* OutWithABang: How Emma assassinates Bond
* {{Polyamory}}:
** After escaping Earth on the Meteor II, the incestuous Nemo-Mors girls form a foursome with Dennis Brennan and Morty Smith
** The main story ends with a marriage between Mina/Mysta, Emma/Gale, and Orlando/Futura. In Epilogue 3, their marriage is joined by [[Literature/EndersGame Ender Wiggin]] and [[{{ComicBook/Femforce}} Stormy Tempest]].
** Captain Harlock marries [[{{Franchise/Metroid}} Samus Aran]], [[Film/StarCrash Stella Star]], [[Film/BattleBeyondTheStars Saint-Exmin]], and {{ComicBook/Barbarella}}
* RelatedInTheAdaptation:
** All superheroes are connected to Hugo Danner, Hugo Hercules, or Franchise/DocSavage in some way
** Mina is the grandmother of Harry Potter
** [[WesternAnimation/GravityFalls Wendy Corduroy]] is a descendant of Paul Bunyan
** [[Film/RadarMenFromTheMoon Commando Cody]] is the son of James Bond and [[Literature/YouOnlyLiveTwice Kissy Suzuki]]
** Captain Harlock is the space-faring descendant of Captain Nemo, Captain Robur, Captain Mors, four of the Seven Stars, and Morty Smith.
** In Epilogue 1, Orlando is the mother of [[ComicBook/CaptainBritain Roma]] and [[Franchise/TombRaider Lara Croft]]
** In Epilogue 3, Emma/Gale and Orlando/Futura are the parents of Samus Aran, Harlock is the father of Satin Astro ([[MyOwnGrandpa who becomes her own ancestor]]), Mina/Mysta is to be the mother of Yoko Littner, and [[WesternAnimation/WanderOverYonder Lord Dominator]] is the artificial daughter of [[WesternAnimation/InvaderZIm Tak]]
* SparedByTheAdaptation: At least one of the Star Fems saved [[{{Film/Aliens}} Ripley and Newt]] [[Film/Alien3 from a crash landing]].
* SpiritualAntithesis: To the original comic
** Harry Potter, spies, superheroes, and everything else Moore hates is given a much more positive treatment
** Rather than have Emma and Orlando coerce Jason King into killing Bond, they do it themselves
** Instead of having Cthulhu be a footnote, his awakening causes worldwide insanity
** The protagonists don’t make it safely to Lincoln Island and escaping Earth with all their friends and associates; the island succumbs to madness and the ones who escape Earth just barely do
** Instead of the world being taken over by Prospero’s horrors, modern-day heroes band together to save humanity
** The main story still ends with a wedding, but between the main heroines rather than two minor characters
** The comic’s final page (not counting the epilogues) was a piss-take on comics legend Stan Lee; this story ends with numerous space-faring pulp sci-fi characters being reinvented in a style not unlike that of comics legend Alan Moore.
* TakeThat:
** Rather than being Moore’s mouthpiece against superheroes, Captain Universe defends them against Moore's arguments (and mocks Moore's use of the term 'fascist')
** After killing Bond, Emma plays a tape in which he mocks the futility of her plan as well as Moore's take on spies
** Mina's talk with Harry Potter is a rebuttal of Moore's views on the character
** The US government gave in to the demands of [[Literature/AtlasShrugged John Galt]] just to make him stop speaking
** The wedding from ''{{Literature/Twilight}}'' is the one massacred by the zombies from "[[Music/AvengedSevenfold A Little Piece of Heaven]]".
** The main cast of ''WesternAnimation/TeenTitansGo'' are part of the horrors released on the world
** Orlando/Futura is sent to {{Literature/Gor}}, where sexual slavery is realistically portrayed as horrific
** Ender Wiggin's repressed bisexuality is a jab at his [[Creator/OrsonScottCard creator's]] homophobia
* TruerToTheText:
** James Bond and Harry Potter are as heroic as they are in their sources
** When {{ComicBook/Psylocke}} briefly appears, she’s how she originally was prior to her body swap with Kwannon
** In the comic, Cthulhu fights the military forces of New Zealand like a common kaiju; here, his awakening brings worldwide insanity like his namesake mythos prophesied
* {{Tuckerization}}: Dennis Brennan, grandson of four of the Seven Stars, is named after British comics creators Dennis M. Reader and Paddy Brennan.
* VenusIsWet: As per the tradition of classic pulp sci-fi
* WhamLine:
-->'''Prospero''': [[{{Literature/Dracula}} Listen to them ... children of the night ... what music they make!]]
* WorldOfFunnyAnimals: One exists in the form of the state of [[ComicBook/DisneyDucksComicUniverse Calisota]]
* ZombieApocalypse: Part of the horrors unleashed by Prospero

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