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* [[BigBrotherInstinct Big Sister Instinct]]: Jazz [[spoiler:spends the last half of the fic taking care of Danny after the traumatic attempted vivisection, and trying to get him and their parents to talk about what happened.]]
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* FantasticRacism: Danny's parents' blind hatred of ghosts is what prevents them from realizing that Phantom is telling the truth about not being evil, and [[spoiler:its implied that they can't accept what Danny is because of that fear/hatred, with his mother even [[FreudianSlip accidentally]] saying that they can "fix" him]].
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* TheyWouldCutYouUp: Danny's worst fears throughout the canon show were of this happening to him as a result of his ghost half. Here, those fears are realized... with his ''own parents'' being the ones to attempt it.
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* CueTheFlyingPigs: Danny thinks that asking his parents to let him go would work, but his bad cop thoughts say that he has the chance of Plasmius freeing him than them believing him. He tries it anyway, but gets shocked for it, causing his bad cop thoughts to say "IToldYouSo."
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* CueTheFlyingPigs: Danny thinks that asking his parents to let him go would work, but his bad cop thoughts say that he has the chance of Plasmius freeing him than them believing him. He tries it appealing to them anyway, but gets shocked for it, causing his bad cop thoughts to say "IToldYouSo."
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* CueTheFlyingPigs: Danny thinks that asking his parents to let him go would work, but his bad cop thoughts say that he has the chance of Plasmius freeing him than them believing him. He tries it anyway, but gets shocked for it, causing his bad cop thoughts to say "IToldYouSo."
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* GoodCopBadCop: Jack plays the Bad cop to Maddie's Good cop when interrogating Danny in his phantom form. Maddie expresses sympathy when Danny lies that he died.
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* GoodCopBadCop: Jack plays the Bad cop to Maddie's Good cop when interrogating Danny in his phantom form. Maddie expresses sympathy when Danny lies that he died. Internally, Danny's own ''thoughts'' are a version of Good cop, bad cop. Outside of parentheses, Danny tries to be rational and calm, while inside parentheses, Danny's other side starts freaking out and chastizing him.
* ElectricTorture: Danny's parents do this to him every so often, to make him sit still.
* ElectricTorture: Danny's parents do this to him every so often, to make him sit still.
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* ImNotHungry: Danny [[HeroicBSOD becomes so messed up]] that he is given a bowl of soup and doesn't eat it, saying as much to Jazz, who notices when it becomes cold.
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* SirSwearsALot: Narratively and in dialogue, Danny swears every now and then (mainly hell, damn, and Christ).
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* SleepDarts: Maddie hits Danny with one in Chapter 1. It knocks him out completely until he wakes up to the trope below.
* TranquilizerDart: Maddie hits Danny with one in Chapter 1. It knocks him out completely until he wakes up to the trope below.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:The realization of what they did to Danny hits Maddie and Jack ''hard'']].
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:The realization of what they did to Danny hits Maddie and Jack ''hard'']]. Jazz blames herself when she tries to make Danny go downstairs to talk to their parents about what had happened and he sees that they hadn't cleaned up the basement at all.
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* WhamLine: Right as Maddie is about to deliver a sedative to Danny's system.
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* FirstPersonPointOfView: FirstPersonPerspective: The fic is portrayed in Danny's point of view.
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* TitleDrop: In the Narrative, Danny says in Chapter one: "I, the enigmatic ghost kid, was here to play 'lab rat.'"
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Has a sequel called [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6158179/1/Wasteland Wasteland]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:One that ''really'' emphasizes the "bitter" part; Maddie and Jack find out the truth and Danny survives. However, the Fenton family is understandably traumatized by the incident; Danny's relationship with his parents is broken possibly beyond repair, Maddie and Jack have to deal with the guilt and regret and Jazz is a nervous wreck]].
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:The realization of what they did to Danny hits Maddie and Jack ''hard'']].
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* ThatWasNotADream: Danny passes out at the end of chapter two. When he wakes up he wonders if it was a nightmare, until he sees the bandages on his chest.
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* StrappedToAnOperationTable: Danny ends up the one on the operation table.
* ThatWasNotADream: Danny passes out at the end of chapter two. When he wakes up he wonders if it was a nightmare, until he sees the bandages on hischest.chest.
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-->'''Danny''': "Mom, Dad, no!"
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-->'''Danny''': "Mom, Dad, no!"
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A ''DannyPhantom'' fanfic exploring one of the darker concepts of the series: What would happen if Jack and Maddie caught Danny while he was in ghost form?
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A ''DannyPhantom'' ''WesternAnimation/DannyPhantom'' fanfic exploring one of the darker concepts of the series: What would happen if Jack and Maddie caught Danny while he was in ghost form?
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A ''DannyPhantom'' fanfic exploring one of the darker concepts of the series: What would happen if Jack and Maddie caught Danny while he was in ghost form?
Has a sequel called [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6158179/1/Wasteland Wasteland]]
!!''Lab Rat'' contains examples of:
* DarkFic
* PlayingWithSyringes: The general guise of the plot revolves around vivisection.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone:
* ThatWasNotADream: Danny passes out at the end of chapter two. When he wakes up he wonders if it was a nightmare, until he sees the bandages on his chest.
Has a sequel called [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6158179/1/Wasteland Wasteland]]
!!''Lab Rat'' contains examples of:
* DarkFic
* PlayingWithSyringes: The general guise of the plot revolves around vivisection.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone:
* ThatWasNotADream: Danny passes out at the end of chapter two. When he wakes up he wonders if it was a nightmare, until he sees the bandages on his chest.
