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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/2009961 Keystone]] is a ''Machinima/RedVsBlue'' fanfiction explaining the backstory of Leonard and Allison Church's romance from childhood to present day, starting from the day fourteen years old Leonard and his father Lawrence are moving in a new place and Allison is their very troubled neighbour.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/2009961 Keystone]] is a ''Machinima/RedVsBlue'' ''WebAnimation/RedVsBlue'' fanfiction explaining the backstory of Leonard and Allison Church's romance from childhood to present day, starting from the day fourteen years old Leonard and his father Lawrence are moving in a new place and Allison is their very troubled neighbour.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/2009961 Keystone]] is a ''{{Machinima/RedVsBlue}}'' fanfiction explaining the backstory of Leonard and Allison Church's romance from childhood to present day, starting from the day fourteen years old Leonard and his father Lawrence are moving in a new place and Allison is their very troubled neighbour.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/2009961 Keystone]] is a ''{{Machinima/RedVsBlue}}'' ''Machinima/RedVsBlue'' fanfiction explaining the backstory of Leonard and Allison Church's romance from childhood to present day, starting from the day fourteen years old Leonard and his father Lawrence are moving in a new place and Allison is their very troubled neighbour.
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* PuritySue: Another interpretation of [[spoiler:Caitlin]], besides the [[ShrinkingViolet Shrinking Violet]].
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* [[AdaptationalIntelligence Adaptational Intelligence]]: Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] is already familiar with AI and is the one who [[spoiler:creates FILSS]]
* [[AdaptationalPersonalityChange Adaptational Personality Change]]: In this story, the Allison's AI is not obtained by splitting the Alpha (at first), but through the military data. She doesn't act like Agent Texas, rather speaks in a cold and professional way.
* [[AfraidOfDoctors Afraid of Doctors]]/[[AggressiveCategorism Aggressive Categorism]]: Leonard holds contempt for mental health professionals, including Aiden Price although he will later [[AscendedExtra work with him]].
* [[AntiNepotism Anti Nepotism]]: Lawrence has Leonard help him in the office, but is adamant on not displaying any favoritism. Years later, Leonard has Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] join his work to help him during the summer but treats her coldly.
* [[AwkwardFirstSleepover Awkward First Sleepover]]: When Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] comes to her friend Mahala's house and they have their [[FirstKiss first kiss]].
* [[BackstoryHorror Backstory Horror]]: Allison's childhood.
* [[BenevolentBoss Benevolent Boss]]: Leonard's mentor on the job, Stephen.
* [[BerserkButton Berserk Button]]: Smoking weed when Allison is present will anger her greatly. It reminds her of [[spoiler:her mother's abusive partner]].
* [[BigNo Big "NO!"]]: Leonard in several occasions, namely when the officials come in [[spoiler:to [[BreakingBadNewsGently tell him about Allison's death]], at the Cemetery and when the AI is lost.]]
* [[AdaptationalPersonalityChange Adaptational Personality Change]]: In this story, the Allison's AI is not obtained by splitting the Alpha (at first), but through the military data. She doesn't act like Agent Texas, rather speaks in a cold and professional way.
* [[AfraidOfDoctors Afraid of Doctors]]/[[AggressiveCategorism Aggressive Categorism]]: Leonard holds contempt for mental health professionals, including Aiden Price although he will later [[AscendedExtra work with him]].
* [[AntiNepotism Anti Nepotism]]: Lawrence has Leonard help him in the office, but is adamant on not displaying any favoritism. Years later, Leonard has Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] join his work to help him during the summer but treats her coldly.
* [[AwkwardFirstSleepover Awkward First Sleepover]]: When Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] comes to her friend Mahala's house and they have their [[FirstKiss first kiss]].
* [[BackstoryHorror Backstory Horror]]: Allison's childhood.
* [[BenevolentBoss Benevolent Boss]]: Leonard's mentor on the job, Stephen.
* [[BerserkButton Berserk Button]]: Smoking weed when Allison is present will anger her greatly. It reminds her of [[spoiler:her mother's abusive partner]].
* [[BigNo Big "NO!"]]: Leonard in several occasions, namely when the officials come in [[spoiler:to [[BreakingBadNewsGently tell him about Allison's death]], at the Cemetery and when the AI is lost.]]
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* [[AdaptationalIntelligence Adaptational Intelligence]]: AdaptationalIntelligence: Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] is already familiar with AI and is the one who [[spoiler:creates FILSS]]
*[[AdaptationalPersonalityChange Adaptational Personality Change]]: AdaptationalPersonalityChange: In this story, the Allison's AI is not obtained by splitting the Alpha (at first), but through the military data. She doesn't act like Agent Texas, rather speaks in a cold and professional way.
*[[AfraidOfDoctors Afraid of Doctors]]/[[AggressiveCategorism Aggressive Categorism]]: AfraidOfDoctors: Leonard holds contempt for mental health professionals, including Aiden Price although he will later [[AscendedExtra work with him]].
*[[AntiNepotism Anti Nepotism]]: AntiNepotism: Lawrence has Leonard help him in the office, but is adamant on not displaying any favoritism. Years later, Leonard has Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] join his work to help him during the summer but treats her coldly.
*[[AwkwardFirstSleepover Awkward First Sleepover]]: AwkwardFirstSleepover: When Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] comes to her friend Mahala's house and they have their [[FirstKiss first kiss]].
*[[BackstoryHorror Backstory Horror]]: BackstoryHorror: Allison's childhood.
*[[BenevolentBoss Benevolent Boss]]: BenevolentBoss: Leonard's mentor on the job, Stephen.
*[[BerserkButton Berserk Button]]: BerserkButton: Smoking weed when Allison is present will anger her greatly. It reminds her of [[spoiler:her mother's abusive partner]].
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* [[ControlFreak Control Freak]]: Leonard, as pointed out by his assistant Jackie. His obsession with control, often in an [[IWorkAlone I Work Alone]] way, impacts the quality of his work and the work of his employees.
* [[DotingGrandparent Doting Grandparent]]: Lawrence.
* [[DescentIntoAddiction Descent into addiction]]: Leonard becomes addicted to [[spoiler:working on Allison's AI form in order to bring her back]].
* [[DoggedNiceGuy Dogged Nice Guy]]: Leonard has moments of this during his teenage years, before his relationship with Allison becomes more stable.
* [[EntitledBastard Entitled Bastard]]: Leonard towards his own father, expecting him to always take care of things for him and to take him in his house multiple times when he's well into adulthood. Can be an [[UngratefulBastard Ungrateful Bastard]] at moments.
* [[EveryoneLovesBlondes Everyone loves blondes]]: Leonard thinks Allison's blond hair is one of her most attractive features.
* [[FinancialAbuse Financial Abuse]]: Allison steals money from Leonard and he hides it from her.
* [[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse Freudian Excuse is No Excuse]]: Leonard's [[spoiler:torture of Allison's AI and abusive behaviour towards Valerie]] are not justifiable.
* [[HotScientist Hot Scientist]]: Allison's attraction towards Leonard. The [[RavenHairIvorySkin Raven Hair, Ivory Skin]] adds to it but she especially [[SexySpectacles requests that he keeps his glasses on]] during intimate moments.
[[GoGetterGirl Go-Getter Girl]]: Jackie and Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]].
[[GuiltComplex Guilt Complex]]: Leonard but due to his [[HairTriggerTemper Hair-Trigger Temper]] he only makes it worse, hence [[WhyWeCantHaveNiceThings Why We Can't Have Nice Things]].
[[HopeIsScary Hope is Scary]]: Allison feels this way about her and Leonard's romance.
[[InsecureLoveInterest Insecure Love Interest]]: Both Leonard and Allison fall under this, the former because he thinks he's not enough for his partner and the latter because she is used to abusive relationships and has developed commitment issues.
[[LawfulPushover Lawful Pushover]]: [[spoiler:Caitlin]] when it comes to to the project she's working on with Leonard.
[[LoveMartyr Love Martyr]]: Everyone, but most prominently [[spoiler:Caitlin]].
[[DadsOffFightingInTheWar Mom's Off Figthing in the War]]: Allison, who then becomes the [[MissingMom Missing Mom]].
[[NervousWreck Nervous Wreck]]: [[spoiler:Caitlin]] during the anniversary dinner scene.
[[OnceDoneNeverForgotten Once Done, Never Forgotten]]: Played with. At first Leonard gets away with snapping at Allison when she confessed she cheated. But as [[GoneMadFromTheRevelation he finds out]] through the AI that [[spoiler:she was raped]], he is going to regret it forever.
[[OocIsSeriousBusiness OOC is Serious Business]]: When the overly demure and submissive [[spoiler:Caitlin]] decides to take courage and dump Leonard.
[[PlaguedByNightmares Plagued by Nightmares]]: Leonard after losing Allison.
[[PreInsanityReveal Pre-Insanity reveal]]: The whole story, arguably, as Leonard has already lost his last marble by the time he shows up in canon.
[[PungeonMaster Pungeon Master]]: Leonard's father, Lawrence, with dad jokes and puns.
[[PuritySue Purity Sue]]: Another interpretation of [[spoiler:Caitlin]], besides the [[ShrinkingViolet Shrinking Violet]].
[[SamaritanSyndrome Samaritan Syndrome]]: [[spoiler:Caitlin]], again. It takes her years before she eventually gives up on Leonard.
[[StrictParentsMakeSneakyKids Strict Parents Make Sneaky Kids]]: Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] and Mahala learn to lie to their parents in order to hang out together and pursue their romance...[[OhCrap Until Mahala's mom finds out.]]
[[StrongFamilyResemblance Strong Family Resemblance]]: Leonard [[FamilyEyeResemblance has Lawrence's eyes]] but is mostly more similar to his mother Neira, including being prone to severe mental illness which made her [[AxCrazy dangerous for herself and others]]. He definitely did [[TurnOutLikeHisFather Turn Out Like His Mother]].
[[SpoiledBrat Spoiled Brat]]: Leonard has moments of this despite always being very hardworking because of the way he acts towards his father (see [[EntitledBastard Entiled Bastard]] above).
[[TheoryTunnelvision Theory Tunnelvision]]: Leonard believes he can [[spoiler:turn the AI into the real Allison]] despite being presented with evidence that he can't.
[[TheAlcoholic The Alcoholic]]: Leonard starts showing signs of this in early adulthood already, and progressively gets worse [[spoiler:after he loses Allison]]. Also [[DrowningMySorrows drinks heavily]] after [[spoiler:his break up with Caitlin to the point that he gets sick and his daughter has to help him]].
[[TheLostLenore The Lost Lenore]]: Allison after her passing.
[[TheScrooge The Scrooge]]: Allison sees Leonard as this.
[[TokenHouseguest Token Houseguest]]: Allison, at first.
[[TooMuchAlike Too Much Alike]]: The fact that both Allison and Leonard have aggressive personalities, even with different mindsets, is what causes most arguments overall.
[[TrappedWithTheTherapySession Trapped with the Therapy Session]]: Dinner, for most of them. Either Lawrence witnesses problems [[SlapSlapKiss between Allison and Leonard]], or Allison witnesses problems between Leonard and Lawrence. Years later, it's the tension between Leonard, [[spoiler:Valerie and Caitlin]].
[[TroubledButCute Troubled, but cute]]: Allison as a teenager in the first few chapters, being that [[BrokenBird mysterious girl from a broken home]].
[[WellDoneDadGuy "Well Done Dad!" Guy]]: Lawrence, by doing everything and anything for his son, but is never met with gratitude. Leonard himself has moments of this while [[spoiler:wanting to involve Valerie in his own work]] but he [[AbusiveParents disregards her aspirations in doing so]].
[[WellDoneSonGuy "Well Done Daughter!" Girl]]: Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]].
[[WhenItAllBegan When It All Began]]: The whole story, starting with the first meeting between Allison and Leonard in chapter 1.
[[YourTraditionIsNotMine Your Tradition Is Not Mine]]: Leonard stops paying attention to his and his father's Jewish traditions. In turn Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] decides to try to get closer to them.
* [[DotingGrandparent Doting Grandparent]]: Lawrence.
* [[DescentIntoAddiction Descent into addiction]]: Leonard becomes addicted to [[spoiler:working on Allison's AI form in order to bring her back]].
* [[DoggedNiceGuy Dogged Nice Guy]]: Leonard has moments of this during his teenage years, before his relationship with Allison becomes more stable.
* [[EntitledBastard Entitled Bastard]]: Leonard towards his own father, expecting him to always take care of things for him and to take him in his house multiple times when he's well into adulthood. Can be an [[UngratefulBastard Ungrateful Bastard]] at moments.
* [[EveryoneLovesBlondes Everyone loves blondes]]: Leonard thinks Allison's blond hair is one of her most attractive features.
* [[FinancialAbuse Financial Abuse]]: Allison steals money from Leonard and he hides it from her.
* [[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse Freudian Excuse is No Excuse]]: Leonard's [[spoiler:torture of Allison's AI and abusive behaviour towards Valerie]] are not justifiable.
* [[HotScientist Hot Scientist]]: Allison's attraction towards Leonard. The [[RavenHairIvorySkin Raven Hair, Ivory Skin]] adds to it but she especially [[SexySpectacles requests that he keeps his glasses on]] during intimate moments.
[[GoGetterGirl Go-Getter Girl]]: Jackie and Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]].
[[GuiltComplex Guilt Complex]]: Leonard but due to his [[HairTriggerTemper Hair-Trigger Temper]] he only makes it worse, hence [[WhyWeCantHaveNiceThings Why We Can't Have Nice Things]].
[[HopeIsScary Hope is Scary]]: Allison feels this way about her and Leonard's romance.
[[InsecureLoveInterest Insecure Love Interest]]: Both Leonard and Allison fall under this, the former because he thinks he's not enough for his partner and the latter because she is used to abusive relationships and has developed commitment issues.
[[LawfulPushover Lawful Pushover]]: [[spoiler:Caitlin]] when it comes to to the project she's working on with Leonard.
[[LoveMartyr Love Martyr]]: Everyone, but most prominently [[spoiler:Caitlin]].
[[DadsOffFightingInTheWar Mom's Off Figthing in the War]]: Allison, who then becomes the [[MissingMom Missing Mom]].
[[NervousWreck Nervous Wreck]]: [[spoiler:Caitlin]] during the anniversary dinner scene.
[[OnceDoneNeverForgotten Once Done, Never Forgotten]]: Played with. At first Leonard gets away with snapping at Allison when she confessed she cheated. But as [[GoneMadFromTheRevelation he finds out]] through the AI that [[spoiler:she was raped]], he is going to regret it forever.
[[OocIsSeriousBusiness OOC is Serious Business]]: When the overly demure and submissive [[spoiler:Caitlin]] decides to take courage and dump Leonard.
[[PlaguedByNightmares Plagued by Nightmares]]: Leonard after losing Allison.
[[PreInsanityReveal Pre-Insanity reveal]]: The whole story, arguably, as Leonard has already lost his last marble by the time he shows up in canon.
[[PungeonMaster Pungeon Master]]: Leonard's father, Lawrence, with dad jokes and puns.
[[PuritySue Purity Sue]]: Another interpretation of [[spoiler:Caitlin]], besides the [[ShrinkingViolet Shrinking Violet]].
[[SamaritanSyndrome Samaritan Syndrome]]: [[spoiler:Caitlin]], again. It takes her years before she eventually gives up on Leonard.
[[StrictParentsMakeSneakyKids Strict Parents Make Sneaky Kids]]: Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] and Mahala learn to lie to their parents in order to hang out together and pursue their romance...[[OhCrap Until Mahala's mom finds out.]]
[[StrongFamilyResemblance Strong Family Resemblance]]: Leonard [[FamilyEyeResemblance has Lawrence's eyes]] but is mostly more similar to his mother Neira, including being prone to severe mental illness which made her [[AxCrazy dangerous for herself and others]]. He definitely did [[TurnOutLikeHisFather Turn Out Like His Mother]].
[[SpoiledBrat Spoiled Brat]]: Leonard has moments of this despite always being very hardworking because of the way he acts towards his father (see [[EntitledBastard Entiled Bastard]] above).
[[TheoryTunnelvision Theory Tunnelvision]]: Leonard believes he can [[spoiler:turn the AI into the real Allison]] despite being presented with evidence that he can't.
[[TheAlcoholic The Alcoholic]]: Leonard starts showing signs of this in early adulthood already, and progressively gets worse [[spoiler:after he loses Allison]]. Also [[DrowningMySorrows drinks heavily]] after [[spoiler:his break up with Caitlin to the point that he gets sick and his daughter has to help him]].
[[TheLostLenore The Lost Lenore]]: Allison after her passing.
[[TheScrooge The Scrooge]]: Allison sees Leonard as this.
[[TokenHouseguest Token Houseguest]]: Allison, at first.
[[TooMuchAlike Too Much Alike]]: The fact that both Allison and Leonard have aggressive personalities, even with different mindsets, is what causes most arguments overall.
[[TrappedWithTheTherapySession Trapped with the Therapy Session]]: Dinner, for most of them. Either Lawrence witnesses problems [[SlapSlapKiss between Allison and Leonard]], or Allison witnesses problems between Leonard and Lawrence. Years later, it's the tension between Leonard, [[spoiler:Valerie and Caitlin]].
[[TroubledButCute Troubled, but cute]]: Allison as a teenager in the first few chapters, being that [[BrokenBird mysterious girl from a broken home]].
[[WellDoneDadGuy "Well Done Dad!" Guy]]: Lawrence, by doing everything and anything for his son, but is never met with gratitude. Leonard himself has moments of this while [[spoiler:wanting to involve Valerie in his own work]] but he [[AbusiveParents disregards her aspirations in doing so]].
[[WellDoneSonGuy "Well Done Daughter!" Girl]]: Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]].
[[WhenItAllBegan When It All Began]]: The whole story, starting with the first meeting between Allison and Leonard in chapter 1.
[[YourTraditionIsNotMine Your Tradition Is Not Mine]]: Leonard stops paying attention to his and his father's Jewish traditions. In turn Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] decides to try to get closer to them.
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* [[ControlFreak Control Freak]]: ControlFreak: Leonard, as pointed out by his assistant Jackie. His obsession with control, often in an [[IWorkAlone I Work Alone]] IWorkAlone way, impacts the quality of his work and the work of his employees.
*[[DotingGrandparent Doting Grandparent]]: DotingGrandparent: Lawrence.
*[[DescentIntoAddiction Descent into addiction]]: DescentIntoAddiction: Leonard becomes addicted to [[spoiler:working on Allison's AI form in order to bring her back]].
*[[DoggedNiceGuy Dogged Nice Guy]]: DoggedNiceGuy: Leonard has moments of this during his teenage years, before his relationship with Allison becomes more stable.
*[[EntitledBastard Entitled Bastard]]: EntitledBastard: Leonard towards his own father, expecting him to always take care of things for him and to take him in his house multiple times when he's well into adulthood. Can be an [[UngratefulBastard Ungrateful Bastard]] UngratefulBastard at moments.
times.
*[[EveryoneLovesBlondes Everyone loves blondes]]: EveryoneLovesBlondes: Leonard thinks Allison's blond hair is one of her most attractive features.
*[[FinancialAbuse Financial Abuse]]: FinancialAbuse: Allison steals money from Leonard and he hides it from her.
*[[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse Freudian Excuse is No Excuse]]: FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Leonard's [[spoiler:torture of Allison's AI and abusive behaviour towards Valerie]] are not justifiable.
*[[HotScientist Hot Scientist]]: Scientist: Allison's attraction towards Leonard. The [[RavenHairIvorySkin Raven Hair, Ivory Skin]] adds to it but she especially [[SexySpectacles [[GlassesAreSexy requests that he keeps his glasses on]] during intimate moments.
[[GoGetterGirl Go-Getter Girl]]:moments.
* GoGetterGirl: Jackie andCarolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]].
[[GuiltComplex Guilt Complex]]:Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]].
* GuiltComplex: Leonard but due to his [[HairTriggerTemper Hair-Trigger Temper]] he only makes it worse, hence [[WhyWeCantHaveNiceThings Why We Can't Have NiceThings]].
[[HopeIsScary Hope is Scary]]:Things]].
* HopeIsScary: Allison feels this way about her and Leonard'sromance.
[[InsecureLoveInterest Insecure Love Interest]]:romance.
* InsecureLoveInterest: Both Leonard and Allison fall under this, the former because he thinks he's not enough for his partner and the latter because she is used to abusive relationships and has developed commitmentissues.
[[LawfulPushover Lawful Pushover]]:issues.
* LawfulPushover: [[spoiler:Caitlin]] when it comes to to the project she's working on withLeonard.
[[LoveMartyr Love Martyr]]:Leonard.
* LoveMartyr: Everyone, but most prominently[[spoiler:Caitlin]].
[[DadsOffFightingInTheWar Mom's Off Figthing in the War]]:[[spoiler:Caitlin]].
* DadsOffFightingInTheWar: Allison, who then becomes the [[MissingMom MissingMom]].
[[NervousWreck Nervous Wreck]]:Mom]].
* NervousWreck: [[spoiler:Caitlin]] during the anniversary dinnerscene.
[[OnceDoneNeverForgotten Once Done, Never Forgotten]]:scene.
* OnceDoneNeverForgotten: Played with. At first Leonard gets away with snapping at Allison when she confessed she cheated. But as [[GoneMadFromTheRevelation he finds out]] through the AI that [[spoiler:she was raped]], he is going to regret itforever.
[[OocIsSeriousBusiness OOC is Serious Business]]:forever.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: When the overly demure and submissive [[spoiler:Caitlin]] decides to take courage and dumpLeonard.
[[PlaguedByNightmares Plagued by Nightmares]]:Leonard.
* PlaguedByNightmares: Leonard after losingAllison.
[[PreInsanityReveal Pre-Insanity reveal]]:Allison.
* PreInsanityReveal: The whole story, arguably, as Leonard has already lost his last marble by the time he shows up incanon.
[[PungeonMaster Pungeon Master]]:canon.
* PungeonMaster: Leonard's father, Lawrence, with dad jokes andpuns.
[[PuritySue Purity Sue]]:puns.
* PuritySue: Another interpretation of [[spoiler:Caitlin]], besides the [[ShrinkingViolet ShrinkingViolet]].
[[SamaritanSyndrome Samaritan Syndrome]]:Violet]].
* SamaritanSyndrome: [[spoiler:Caitlin]], again. It takes her years before she eventually gives up onLeonard.
[[StrictParentsMakeSneakyKids Strict Parents Make Sneaky Kids]]:Leonard.
* StrictParentsMakeSneakyKids: Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] and Mahala learn to lie to their parents in order to hang out together and pursue their romance...[[OhCrap Until Mahala's mom finds out.]]
[[StrongFamilyResemblance Strong Family Resemblance]]:]]
* StrongFamilyResemblance: Leonard [[FamilyEyeResemblance has Lawrence's eyes]] but is mostly more similar to his mother Neira, including being prone to severe mental illness which made her [[AxCrazy dangerous for herself and others]]. He definitely did [[TurnOutLikeHisFather Turn Out Like HisMother]].
[[SpoiledBrat Spoiled Brat]]:Mother]].
* SpoiledBrat: Leonard has moments of this despite always being very hardworking because of the way he acts towards his father (see [[EntitledBastard Entiled Bastard]]above).
[[TheoryTunnelvision Theory Tunnelvision]]:above).
* TheoryTunnelvision: Leonard believes he can [[spoiler:turn the AI into the real Allison]] despite being presented with evidence that hecan't.
[[TheAlcoholic The Alcoholic]]:can't.
* TheAlcoholic: Leonard starts showing signs of this in early adulthood already, and progressively gets worse [[spoiler:after he loses Allison]]. Also [[DrowningMySorrows drinks heavily]] after [[spoiler:his break up with Caitlin to the point that he gets sick and his daughter has to help him]]. \n\n[[TheLostLenore The Lost Lenore]]:
* TheLostLenore: Allison after herpassing.
[[TheScrooge The Scrooge]]:passing.
* TheScrooge: Allison sees Leonard asthis.
[[TokenHouseguest Token Houseguest]]:this.
* TokenHouseguest: Allison, atfirst.
[[TooMuchAlike Too Much Alike]]:first.
* TooMuchAlike: The fact that both Allison and Leonard have aggressive personalities, even with different mindsets, is what causes most argumentsoverall.
[[TrappedWithTheTherapySession Trapped with the Therapy Session]]:overall.
* TrappedWithTheTherapySession: Dinner, for most of them. Either Lawrence witnesses problems [[SlapSlapKiss between Allison and Leonard]], or Allison witnesses problems between Leonard and Lawrence. Years later, it's the tension between Leonard, [[spoiler:Valerie andCaitlin]].
[[TroubledButCute Troubled, but cute]]:Caitlin]].
* TroubledButCute: Allison as a teenager in the first few chapters, being that [[BrokenBird mysterious girl from a brokenhome]].
[[WellDoneDadGuy "Well Done Dad!" Guy]]:home]].
* WellDoneDadGuy: Lawrence, by doing everything and anything for his son, but is never met with gratitude. Leonard himself has moments of this while [[spoiler:wanting to involve Valerie in his own work]] but he [[AbusiveParents disregards her aspirations in doingso]].
[[WellDoneSonGuy "Well Done Daughter!" Girl]]: Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]].
[[WhenItAllBegan When It All Began]]:so]].
* WellDoneSonGuy: Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]].
* WhenItAllBegan: The whole story, starting with the first meeting between Allison and Leonard in chapter1.
[[YourTraditionIsNotMine Your Tradition Is Not Mine]]:1.
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[[GuiltComplex Guilt Complex]]:
* GuiltComplex: Leonard but due to his [[HairTriggerTemper Hair-Trigger Temper]] he only makes it worse, hence [[WhyWeCantHaveNiceThings Why We Can't Have Nice
[[HopeIsScary Hope is Scary]]:
* HopeIsScary: Allison feels this way about her and Leonard's
[[InsecureLoveInterest Insecure Love Interest]]:
* InsecureLoveInterest: Both Leonard and Allison fall under this, the former because he thinks he's not enough for his partner and the latter because she is used to abusive relationships and has developed commitment
[[LawfulPushover Lawful Pushover]]:
* LawfulPushover: [[spoiler:Caitlin]] when it comes to to the project she's working on with
[[LoveMartyr Love Martyr]]:
* LoveMartyr: Everyone, but most prominently
[[DadsOffFightingInTheWar Mom's Off Figthing in the War]]:
* DadsOffFightingInTheWar: Allison, who then becomes the [[MissingMom Missing
[[NervousWreck Nervous Wreck]]:
* NervousWreck: [[spoiler:Caitlin]] during the anniversary dinner
[[OnceDoneNeverForgotten Once Done, Never Forgotten]]:
* OnceDoneNeverForgotten: Played with. At first Leonard gets away with snapping at Allison when she confessed she cheated. But as [[GoneMadFromTheRevelation he finds out]] through the AI that [[spoiler:she was raped]], he is going to regret it
[[OocIsSeriousBusiness OOC is Serious Business]]:
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: When the overly demure and submissive [[spoiler:Caitlin]] decides to take courage and dump
[[PlaguedByNightmares Plagued by Nightmares]]:
* PlaguedByNightmares: Leonard after losing
[[PreInsanityReveal Pre-Insanity reveal]]:
* PreInsanityReveal: The whole story, arguably, as Leonard has already lost his last marble by the time he shows up in
[[PungeonMaster Pungeon Master]]:
* PungeonMaster: Leonard's father, Lawrence, with dad jokes and
[[PuritySue Purity Sue]]:
* PuritySue: Another interpretation of [[spoiler:Caitlin]], besides the [[ShrinkingViolet Shrinking
[[SamaritanSyndrome Samaritan Syndrome]]:
* SamaritanSyndrome: [[spoiler:Caitlin]], again. It takes her years before she eventually gives up on
[[StrictParentsMakeSneakyKids Strict Parents Make Sneaky Kids]]:
* StrictParentsMakeSneakyKids: Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] and Mahala learn to lie to their parents in order to hang out together and pursue their romance...[[OhCrap Until Mahala's mom finds out.
[[StrongFamilyResemblance Strong Family Resemblance]]:
* StrongFamilyResemblance: Leonard [[FamilyEyeResemblance has Lawrence's eyes]] but is mostly more similar to his mother Neira, including being prone to severe mental illness which made her [[AxCrazy dangerous for herself and others]]. He definitely did [[TurnOutLikeHisFather Turn Out Like His
[[SpoiledBrat Spoiled Brat]]:
* SpoiledBrat: Leonard has moments of this despite always being very hardworking because of the way he acts towards his father (see [[EntitledBastard Entiled Bastard]]
[[TheoryTunnelvision Theory Tunnelvision]]:
* TheoryTunnelvision: Leonard believes he can [[spoiler:turn the AI into the real Allison]] despite being presented with evidence that he
[[TheAlcoholic The Alcoholic]]:
* TheAlcoholic: Leonard starts showing signs of this in early adulthood already, and progressively gets worse [[spoiler:after he loses Allison]]. Also [[DrowningMySorrows drinks heavily]] after [[spoiler:his break up with Caitlin to the point that he gets sick and his daughter has to help him]].
* TheLostLenore: Allison after her
[[TheScrooge The Scrooge]]:
* TheScrooge: Allison sees Leonard as
[[TokenHouseguest Token Houseguest]]:
* TokenHouseguest: Allison, at
[[TooMuchAlike Too Much Alike]]:
* TooMuchAlike: The fact that both Allison and Leonard have aggressive personalities, even with different mindsets, is what causes most arguments
[[TrappedWithTheTherapySession Trapped with the Therapy Session]]:
* TrappedWithTheTherapySession: Dinner, for most of them. Either Lawrence witnesses problems [[SlapSlapKiss between Allison and Leonard]], or Allison witnesses problems between Leonard and Lawrence. Years later, it's the tension between Leonard, [[spoiler:Valerie and
[[TroubledButCute Troubled, but cute]]:
* TroubledButCute: Allison as a teenager in the first few chapters, being that [[BrokenBird mysterious girl from a broken
[[WellDoneDadGuy "Well Done Dad!" Guy]]:
* WellDoneDadGuy: Lawrence, by doing everything and anything for his son, but is never met with gratitude. Leonard himself has moments of this while [[spoiler:wanting to involve Valerie in his own work]] but he [[AbusiveParents disregards her aspirations in doing
[[WellDoneSonGuy "Well Done Daughter!" Girl]]: Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]].
[[WhenItAllBegan When It All Began]]:
* WellDoneSonGuy: Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]].
* WhenItAllBegan: The whole story, starting with the first meeting between Allison and Leonard in chapter
[[YourTraditionIsNotMine Your Tradition Is Not Mine]]:
* YourTraditionIsNotMine: Leonard stops paying attention to his and his father's Jewish traditions. In turn Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] decides to try to get closer to them.
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[[StrictParentsMakeSneakyKids Strict Parents Make Sneaky Kids]]: Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] and Mahala learn to lie to their parents in order to hang out together and [[SchoolgirlLesbians pursue their romance]]...[[OhCrap Until Mahala's mom finds out.]]
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[[StrictParentsMakeSneakyKids Strict Parents Make Sneaky Kids]]: Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] and Mahala learn to lie to their parents in order to hang out together and [[SchoolgirlLesbians pursue their romance]]...romance...[[OhCrap Until Mahala's mom finds out.]]
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[[AbusiveParents Abusive Parents]]: Mutiple examples.
* Allison's parents.
** Her mother's boyfriend [[spoiler:[[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil abused Allison]] when she was twelve]].
** [[spoiler:Turns out, [[CrossesTheLineTwice her mother was aware and didn't do anything to stop him]]]].
* Leonard's mother, Neira, who often lashed out due to severe mental illness.
* Leonard himself towards Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]]
* Mahala's mother is overly strict and doesn't approve of her friendships and relationships.
[[AdaptationalIntelligence Adaptational Intelligence]]: Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] is already familiar with AI and is the one who [[spoiler:creates FILSS]]
[[AdaptationalPersonalityChange Adaptational Personality Change]]: In this story, the Allison's AI is not obtained by splitting the Alpha (at first), but through the military data. She doesn't act like Agent Texas, rather speaks in a cold and professional way.
[[AfraidOfDoctors Afraid of Doctors]]/[[AggressiveCategorism Aggressive Categorism]]: Leonard holds contempt for mental health professionals, including Aiden Price although he will later [[AscendedExtra work with him]].
[[AntiNepotism Anti Nepotism]]: Lawrence has Leonard help him in the office, but is adamant on not displaying any favoritism. Years later, Leonard has Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] join his work to help him during the summer but treats her coldly.
[[AwkwardFirstSleepover Awkward First Sleepover]]: When Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] comes to her friend Mahala's house and they have their [[FirstKiss first kiss]].
[[BackstoryHorror Backstory Horror]]: Allison's childhood.
[[BenevolentBoss Benevolent Boss]]: Leonard's mentor on the job, Stephen.
[[BerserkButton Berserk Button]]: Smoking weed when Allison is present will anger her greatly. It reminds her of [[spoiler:her mother's abusive partner]].
[[BigNo Big "NO!"]]: Leonard in several occasions, namely when the officials come in [[spoiler:to [[BreakingBadNewsGently tell him about Allison's death]], at the Cemetery and when the AI is lost.]]
[[BrokenBird Broken bird]]: Allison.
[[CommitmentIssues Commitment Issues]]: Allison, [[FreudianExcuse given her history]].
[[CallForward Call-Forward]]: The final exchange during Leonard's break up with [[spoiler:Caitlin Suh]]
* Allison's parents.
** Her mother's boyfriend [[spoiler:[[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil abused Allison]] when she was twelve]].
** [[spoiler:Turns out, [[CrossesTheLineTwice her mother was aware and didn't do anything to stop him]]]].
* Leonard's mother, Neira, who often lashed out due to severe mental illness.
* Leonard himself towards Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]]
* Mahala's mother is overly strict and doesn't approve of her friendships and relationships.
[[AdaptationalIntelligence Adaptational Intelligence]]: Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] is already familiar with AI and is the one who [[spoiler:creates FILSS]]
[[AdaptationalPersonalityChange Adaptational Personality Change]]: In this story, the Allison's AI is not obtained by splitting the Alpha (at first), but through the military data. She doesn't act like Agent Texas, rather speaks in a cold and professional way.
[[AfraidOfDoctors Afraid of Doctors]]/[[AggressiveCategorism Aggressive Categorism]]: Leonard holds contempt for mental health professionals, including Aiden Price although he will later [[AscendedExtra work with him]].
[[AntiNepotism Anti Nepotism]]: Lawrence has Leonard help him in the office, but is adamant on not displaying any favoritism. Years later, Leonard has Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] join his work to help him during the summer but treats her coldly.
[[AwkwardFirstSleepover Awkward First Sleepover]]: When Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] comes to her friend Mahala's house and they have their [[FirstKiss first kiss]].
[[BackstoryHorror Backstory Horror]]: Allison's childhood.
[[BenevolentBoss Benevolent Boss]]: Leonard's mentor on the job, Stephen.
[[BerserkButton Berserk Button]]: Smoking weed when Allison is present will anger her greatly. It reminds her of [[spoiler:her mother's abusive partner]].
[[BigNo Big "NO!"]]: Leonard in several occasions, namely when the officials come in [[spoiler:to [[BreakingBadNewsGently tell him about Allison's death]], at the Cemetery and when the AI is lost.]]
[[BrokenBird Broken bird]]: Allison.
[[CommitmentIssues Commitment Issues]]: Allison, [[FreudianExcuse given her history]].
[[CallForward Call-Forward]]: The final exchange during Leonard's break up with [[spoiler:Caitlin Suh]]
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* [[AbusiveParents Abusive Parents]]: Mutiple examples.
* [[AdaptationalIntelligence Adaptational Intelligence]]: Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] is already familiar with AI and is the one who [[spoiler:creates
* [[AdaptationalPersonalityChange Adaptational Personality Change]]: In this story, the Allison's AI is not obtained by splitting the Alpha (at first), but through the military data. She doesn't act like Agent Texas, rather speaks in a cold and professional
* [[AfraidOfDoctors Afraid of Doctors]]/[[AggressiveCategorism Aggressive Categorism]]: Leonard holds contempt for mental health professionals, including Aiden Price although he will later [[AscendedExtra work with
* [[AntiNepotism Anti Nepotism]]: Lawrence has Leonard help him in the office, but is adamant on not displaying any favoritism. Years later, Leonard has Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] join his work to help him during the summer but treats her
* [[AwkwardFirstSleepover Awkward First Sleepover]]: When Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] comes to her friend Mahala's house and they have their [[FirstKiss first
* [[BackstoryHorror Backstory Horror]]: Allison's
* [[BenevolentBoss Benevolent Boss]]: Leonard's mentor on the job,
* [[BerserkButton Berserk Button]]: Smoking weed when Allison is present will anger her greatly. It reminds her of [[spoiler:her mother's abusive partner]].
* [[BigNo Big "NO!"]]: Leonard in several occasions, namely when the officials come in [[spoiler:to [[BreakingBadNewsGently tell him about Allison's death]], at the Cemetery and when the AI is lost.
[[BrokenBird Broken bird]]:
* BrokenBird: Allison.
* [[CommitmentIssues Commitment Issues]]: Allison, [[FreudianExcuse given her
* [[CallForward Call-Forward]]: The final exchange during Leonard's break up with [[spoiler:Caitlin Suh]]
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[[ControlFreak Control Freak]]: Leonard, as pointed out by his assistant Jackie. His obsession with control, often in an [[IWorkAlone I Work Alone]] way, impacts the quality of his work and the work of his employees.
[[DotingGrandparent Doting Grandparent]]: Lawrence.
[[DescentIntoAddiction Descent into addiction]]: Leonard becomes addicted to [[spoiler:working on Allison's AI form in order to bring her back]].
[[DoggedNiceGuy Dogged Nice Guy]]: Leonard has moments of this during his teenage years, before his relationship with Allison becomes more stable.
[[EntitledBastard Entitled Bastard]]: Leonard towards his own father, expecting him to always take care of things for him and to take him in his house multiple times when he's well into adulthood. Can be an [[UngratefulBastard Ungrateful Bastard]] at moments.
[[EveryoneLovesBlondes Everyone loves blondes]]: Leonard thinks Allison's blond hair is one of her most attractive features.
[[FinancialAbuse Financial Abuse]]: Allison steals money from Leonard and he hides it from her.
[[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse Freudian Excuse is No Excuse]]: Leonard's [[spoiler:torture of Allison's AI and abusive behaviour towards Valerie]] are not justifiable.
[[HotScientist Hot Scientist]]: Allison's attraction towards Leonard. The [[RavenHairIvorySkin Raven Hair, Ivory Skin]] adds to it but she especially [[SexySpectacles requests that he keeps his glasses on]] during intimate moments.
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* [[DotingGrandparent Doting Grandparent]]:
* [[DescentIntoAddiction Descent into addiction]]: Leonard becomes addicted to [[spoiler:working on Allison's AI form in order to bring her
* [[DoggedNiceGuy Dogged Nice Guy]]: Leonard has moments of this during his teenage years, before his relationship with Allison becomes more
* [[EntitledBastard Entitled Bastard]]: Leonard towards his own father, expecting him to always take care of things for him and to take him in his house multiple times when he's well into adulthood. Can be an [[UngratefulBastard Ungrateful Bastard]] at
* [[EveryoneLovesBlondes Everyone loves blondes]]: Leonard thinks Allison's blond hair is one of her most attractive
* [[FinancialAbuse Financial Abuse]]: Allison steals money from Leonard and he hides it from
* [[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse Freudian Excuse is No Excuse]]: Leonard's [[spoiler:torture of Allison's AI and abusive behaviour towards Valerie]] are not
* [[HotScientist Hot Scientist]]: Allison's attraction towards Leonard. The [[RavenHairIvorySkin Raven Hair, Ivory Skin]] adds to it but she especially [[SexySpectacles requests that he keeps his glasses on]] during intimate moments.
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[[TroubledButCute Troubled, but cute]]: Allison as a teenager in the first few chapters, being that mysterious girl from a [[BrokenBird broken home]].
[[WellDoneDadGuy "Well Done Dad!" Guy]]: Lawrence, by doing everything and anything for his son, but is never met with gratitude. Leonard himself has moments of this while [[spoiler:wanting to involve Valerie in his own work]] but he [[AbusiveParents disregards her aspirations and in doing so]].
[[WellDoneDadGuy "Well Done Dad!" Guy]]: Lawrence, by doing everything and anything for his son, but is never met with gratitude. Leonard himself has moments of this while [[spoiler:wanting to involve Valerie in his own work]] but he [[AbusiveParents disregards her aspirations and in doing so]].
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[[TroubledButCute Troubled, but cute]]: Allison as a teenager in the first few chapters, being that [[BrokenBird mysterious girl from a [[BrokenBird broken home]].
[[WellDoneDadGuy "Well Done Dad!" Guy]]: Lawrence, by doing everything and anything for his son, but is never met with gratitude. Leonard himself has moments of this while [[spoiler:wanting to involve Valerie in his own work]] but he [[AbusiveParents disregards her aspirationsand in doing so]].
[[WellDoneDadGuy "Well Done Dad!" Guy]]: Lawrence, by doing everything and anything for his son, but is never met with gratitude. Leonard himself has moments of this while [[spoiler:wanting to involve Valerie in his own work]] but he [[AbusiveParents disregards her aspirations
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[[PungeonMaster Pungeon Master]]: Leonard's father, Lawrence, with dad jokes and puns, [[Adorkable tries to lighten the mood]].
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[[CallForward Call-Forward]]: The final exchange during Leonard's break up with [[spoiler:Caitlin Suh]]
-->[[spoiler:Caitlin]]: Goodbye, Leonard Church. I hope I never hear your name again.
-->'''Leonard''': Goodbye, [[spoiler:Caitlin Suh]]. [[RuleBreakerRuleNamer YOU WILL]]!
-->[[spoiler:Caitlin]]: Goodbye, Leonard Church. I hope I never hear your name again.
-->'''Leonard''': Goodbye, [[spoiler:Caitlin Suh]]. [[RuleBreakerRuleNamer YOU WILL]]!
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[[Foreshadowing Fore-shadowing]]: The final exchange during Leonard's break up with [[spoiler:Caitlin Suh]]
-->[[spoiler:Caitlin]]: Goodbye, Leonard Church. I hope I never hear your name again.
-->'''Leonard''': Goodbye, [[spoiler:Caitlin Suh]]. [[RuleBreakerRuleNamer YOU WILL]]!
-->[[spoiler:Caitlin]]: Goodbye, Leonard Church. I hope I never hear your name again.
-->'''Leonard''': Goodbye, [[spoiler:Caitlin Suh]]. [[RuleBreakerRuleNamer YOU WILL]]!
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[[AntiNepotism Anti Nepotism]]: Lawrence has Leonard help him in the office, but is adamant on not displaying any favoritism. Years later, Leonard has Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] join his work to help him during the summer but treats her coldly.
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[[AntiNepotism Anti Nepotism]]: Lawrence has Leonard help him in the office, but is adamant on not displaying any. Years later, instead Leonard has Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] [[Nepotism join his work]] to help him during the summer.
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[[StrongFamilyResemblance Strong Family Resemblance]]: Leonard [[FamilyEyeResemblance has Lawrence's eyes]] but is mostly more similar to his mother Neira, including being prone to severe mental illness which made her [[AxCrazy dangerous for herself and others]]. He definitely [[TurnedOutLikeHisFather Turned Out Like His Mother]].
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[[StrongFamilyResemblance Strong Family Resemblance]]: Leonard [[FamilyEyeResemblance has Lawrence's eyes]] but is mostly more similar to his mother Neira, including being prone to severe mental illness which made her [[AxCrazy dangerous for herself and others]]. He definitely [[TurnedOutLikeHisFather Turned did [[TurnOutLikeHisFather Turn Out Like His Mother]].
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-->'''Leonard''': Goodbye, [[spoiler:Caitlin Suh]]. You will!
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-->'''Leonard''': Goodbye, [[spoiler:Caitlin Suh]]. You will!
[[RuleBreakerRuleNamer YOU WILL]]!
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[[DadsOffFigthingInTheWar Mom's Off Figthing in the War]]: Allison, who then becomes the [[MissingMom Missing Mom]].
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[[StrictParentsMakeSneakyKids Strict Parents Make Sneaky Kids]]: Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] and Mahala learn to lie to their parents in order to hang out together and [[HighSchoolLesbians pursue their romance]]...[[OhCrap Until Mahala's mom finds out.]]
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[[StrictParentsMakeSneakyKids Strict Parents Make Sneaky Kids]]: Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] and Mahala learn to lie to their parents in order to hang out together and [[HighSchoolLesbians [[SchoolgirlLesbians pursue their romance]]...[[OhCrap Until Mahala's mom finds out.]]
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** [[spoiler:Turns out, [[CrossesTheLineTwice her mother was aware and didn't do anything to stop him]]].
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[[AdaptationalPersonalityChange]]: In this story, the Allison's AI is not obtained by splitting the Alpha (at first), but through the military data. She doesn't act like Agent Texas, rather speaks in a cold and professional way.
[[Adorkable Adorkable]]: Leonard's father, Lawrence, with his dad jokes and [[PungeonMaster puns]].
[[Adorkable Adorkable]]: Leonard's father, Lawrence, with his dad jokes and [[PungeonMaster puns]].
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[[AdaptationalPersonalityChange Adaptational Personality Change]]: In this story, the Allison's AI is not obtained by splitting the Alpha (at first), but through the military data. She doesn't act like Agent Texas, rather speaks in a cold and professional
[[Adorkable Adorkable]]: Leonard's father, Lawrence, with his dad jokes and [[PungeonMaster puns]].
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-->[spoiler:Caitlin]: Goodbye, Leonard Church. I hope I never hear your name again.
-->Leonard: Goodbye, [[spoiler:Caitlin Suh]]. You will!
-->Leonard: Goodbye, [[spoiler:Caitlin Suh]]. You will!
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[[GeekTurnOn Geek Turn-on]]/[[HotScientist Hot Scientist]]: Allison's attraction towards Leonard. The [[RavenHairIvorySkin Raven Hair, Ivory Skin]] adds to it but she especially [[SexySpectacles requests that he keeps his glasses on]] during intimate moments.
[[GoGetterGirl Go-Getter Girl]]: Jackie and Carolina/[spoiler:Valerie].
[[GoGetterGirl Go-Getter Girl]]: Jackie and Carolina/[spoiler:Valerie].
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[[GoGetterGirl Go-Getter Girl]]: Jackie and
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[[Nepotism Nepotism]]: Subverted, Lawrence has Leonard help him in the office, but is [[AntiNepotism adamant on not displaying any favoritism]]. Years later, Leonard too has Carolina/[spoiler:Valerie] help him during the summer.
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[[WhenItAllBegan When It All Began]]: The whole story, starting with the first meeting between Allison and Leonard in chapter 1.
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[[StrongFamilyResemblence Strong Family Resemblence]]: Leonard [[FamilyEyeResemblence has Lawrence's eyes]] but is mostly more similar to his mother Neira, including being prone to severe mental illness which made her [[AxCrazy dangerous for herself and others]]. He definitely [[TurnedOutLikeHisFather Turned Out Like His Mother]].
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[[Token Houseguest]]: Allison, at first.
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[[Foreshadowing Foreshadowing]]: The final exchange during Leonard's break up with [spoiler:Caitlin Suh]
[spoiler:Caitlin]: Goodbye, Leonard Church. I hope I never hear your name again.
Leonard: Goodbye, Caitlin. You will!
[spoiler:Caitlin]: Goodbye, Leonard Church. I hope I never hear your name again.
Leonard: Goodbye, Caitlin. You will!
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[[TrappedWithTheTherapySession Trapped with the Therapy Session]]: Dinner, for most of them. Either Lawrence witnesses problems [[SlapSlapKiss between Allison and Leonard]], or Allison witnesses problems between Leonard and Lawrence. Years later, it's the tension between Leonard, [[Valerie and Caitlin]].
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[[TrappedWithTheTherapySession Trapped with the Therapy Session]]: Dinner, for most of them. Either Lawrence witnesses problems [[SlapSlapKiss between Allison and Leonard]], or Allison witnesses problems between Leonard and Lawrence. Years later, it's the tension between Leonard, [[Valerie [[spoiler:Valerie and Caitlin]].Caitlin]].
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** Her mother's boyfriend [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil]] abused Allison when she was twelve.
** Turns out, her mother was aware and didn't do anything to stop him.
** Turns out, her mother was aware and didn't do anything to stop him.
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** Her mother's boyfriend [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil]] [[spoiler:[[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil abused Allison Allison]] when she was twelve.twelve]].
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[[Adorkable]]: Leonard's father, Lawrence, with his [[DadJoke dad jokes]] and [[PungeonMaster puns]].
[[Awkward first sleepover]]: When Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] comes to her friend Mahala's house and they have their [[first kiss]].
[[BackstoryHorror]]: Allison's childhood.
[[BerserkButton]]: Smoking weed when Allison is present will anger her greatly. It reminds her of [[spoiler:her mother's abusive partner, who abused her when she was twelve]].
[[BrokenBird]]: Allison.
[[Awkward first sleepover]]: When Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] comes to her friend Mahala's house and they have their [[first kiss]].
[[BackstoryHorror]]: Allison's childhood.
[[BerserkButton]]: Smoking weed when Allison is present will anger her greatly. It reminds her of [[spoiler:her mother's abusive partner, who abused her when she was twelve]].
[[BrokenBird]]: Allison.
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[[Adorkable Adorkable]]: Leonard's father, Lawrence, with his
[[AwkwardFirstSleepover Awkward First Sleepover]]: When Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] comes to her friend Mahala's house and they have their
[[BackstoryHorror]]:
[[BackstoryHorror Backstory Horror]]: Allison's
[[BerserkButton]]:
[[BenevolentBoss Benevolent Boss]]: Leonard's mentor on the job, Stephen.
[[BerserkButton Berserk Button]]: Smoking weed when Allison is present will anger her greatly. It reminds her of [[spoiler:her mother's abusive
[[BigNo Big "NO!"]]: Leonard in several occasions, namely when the officials come in [[spoiler:to [[BreakingBadNewsGently tell him about Allison's death]], at the Cemetery and when the AI is lost.]]
[[BrokenBird Broken bird]]: Allison.
[[CommitmentIssues Commitment Issues]]: Allison, [[FreudianExcuse given her history]].
[[ControlFreak Control Freak]]: Leonard, as pointed out by his assistant Jackie. His obsession with control, often in an [[IWorkAlone I Work Alone]] way, impacts the quality of his work and the work of his employees.
[[DotingGrandparent Doting Grandparent]]: Lawrence.
[[DescentIntoAddiction Descent into addiction]]: Leonard becomes addicted to [[spoiler:working on Allison's AI form in order to bring her back]].
[[DoggedNiceGuy Dogged Nice Guy]]: Leonard has moments of this during his teenage years, before his relationship with Allison becomes more stable.
[[EntitledBastard Entitled Bastard]]: Leonard towards his own father, expecting him to always take care of things for him and to take him in his house multiple times when he's well into adulthood. Can be an [[UngratefulBastard Ungrateful Bastard]] at moments.
[[EveryoneLovesBlondes Everyone loves blondes]]: Leonard thinks Allison's blond hair is one of her most attractive features.
[[FinancialAbuse Financial Abuse]]: Allison steals money from Leonard and he hides it from her.
[[Foreshadowing Foreshadowing]]: The final exchange during Leonard's break up with [spoiler:Caitlin Suh]
[spoiler:Caitlin]: Goodbye, Leonard Church. I hope I never hear your name again.
Leonard: Goodbye, Caitlin. You will!
[[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse Freudian Excuse is No Excuse]]: Leonard's [[spoiler:torture of Allison's AI and abusive behaviour towards Valerie]] are not justifiable.
[[GeekTurnOn Geek Turn-on]]/[[HotScientist Hot Scientist]]: Allison's attraction towards Leonard. The [[RavenHairIvorySkin Raven Hair, Ivory Skin]] adds to it but she especially [[SexySpectacles requests that he keeps his glasses on]] during intimate moments.
[[GoGetterGirl Go-Getter Girl]]: Jackie and Carolina/[spoiler:Valerie].
[[GuiltComplex Guilt Complex]]: Leonard but due to his [[HairTriggerTemper Hair-Trigger Temper]] he only makes it worse, hence [[WhyWeCantHaveNiceThings Why We Can't Have Nice Things]].
[[HopeIsScary Hope is Scary]]: Allison feels this way about her and Leonard's romance.
[[InsecureLoveInterest Insecure Love Interest]]: Both Leonard and Allison fall under this, the former because he thinks he's not enough for his partner and the latter because she is used to abusive relationships and has developed commitment issues.
[[LawfulPushover Lawful Pushover]]: [[spoiler:Caitlin]] when it comes to to the project she's working on with Leonard.
[[LoveMartyr Love Martyr]]: Everyone, but most prominently [[spoiler:Caitlin]].
[[DadsOffFigthingInTheWar Mom's Off Figthing in the War]]: Allison, who
[[Nepotism Nepotism]]: Subverted, Lawrence has Leonard help him in the office, but is [[AntiNepotism adamant on not displaying any favoritism]]. Years later, Leonard too has Carolina/[spoiler:Valerie] help him during the summer.
[[NervousWreck Nervous Wreck]]: [[spoiler:Caitlin]] during the anniversary dinner scene.
[[OnceDoneNeverForgotten Once Done, Never Forgotten]]: Played with. At first Leonard gets away with snapping at Allison when she confessed she cheated. But as [[GoneMadFromTheRevelation he finds out]] through the AI that [[spoiler:she was
[[BrokenBird]]: Allison.
[[OocIsSeriousBusiness OOC is Serious Business]]: When the overly demure and submissive [[spoiler:Caitlin]] decides to take courage and dump Leonard.
[[PlaguedByNightmares Plagued by Nightmares]]: Leonard after losing Allison.
[[PreInsanityReveal Pre-Insanity reveal]]: The whole story, arguably, as Leonard has already lost his last marble by the time he shows up in canon.
[[Prequel Prequel]]/[[WhenItAllBegan When It All Began]]: The whole story, starting with the first meeting between Allison and Leonard in chapter 1.
[[PuritySue Purity Sue]]: Another interpretation of [[spoiler:Caitlin]], besides the [[ShrinkingViolet Shrinking Violet]].
[[SamaritanSyndrome Samaritan Syndrome]]: [[spoiler:Caitlin]], again. It takes her years before she eventually gives up on Leonard.
[[StrictParentsMakeSneakyKids Strict Parents Make Sneaky Kids]]: Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] and Mahala learn to lie to their parents in order to hang out together and [[HighSchoolLesbians pursue their romance]]...[[OhCrap Until Mahala's mom finds out.]]
[[Strong Family Resemblence]]: Leonard [[FamilyEyeResemblence has Lawrence's eyes]] but is mostly more similar to his mother Neira, including being prone to severe mental illness which made her [[AxCrazy dangerous for herself and others]]. He definitely [[HeTurnedOutLikeHisFather Turned Out Like His Mother]].
[[SpoiledBrat Spoiled Brat]]: Leonard has moments of this despite always being very hardworking because of the way he acts towards his father (see [[EntitledBastard Entiled Bastard]] above).
[[TheoryTunnelvision Theory Tunnelvision]]: Leonard believes he can [[spoiler:turn the AI into the real Allison]] despite being presented with evidence that he can't.
[[TheAlcoholic The Alcoholic]]: Leonard starts showing signs of this in early adulthood already, and progressively gets worse [[spoiler:after he loses Allison]]. Also [[DrowningMySorrows drinks heavily]] after [[spoiler:his break up with Caitlin to the point that he gets sick and his daughter has to help him]].
[[TheLostLenore The Lost Lenore]]: Allison after her passing.
[[TheScrooge The Scrooge]]: Allison sees Leonard as this.
[[Token Houseguest]]: Allison, at first.
[[TooMuchAlike Too Much Alike]]: The fact that both Allison and Leonard have aggressive personalities, even with different mindsets, is what causes most arguments overall.
[[TrappedWithTheTherapySession Trapped with the Therapy Session]]: Dinner, for most of them. Either Lawrence witnesses problems [[SlapSlapKiss between Allison and Leonard]], or Allison witnesses problems between Leonard and Lawrence. Years later, it's the tension between Leonard, [[Valerie and Caitlin]].
[[TroubledButCute Troubled, but cute]]: Allison as a teenager in the first few chapters, being that mysterious girl from a [[BrokenBird broken home]].
[[WellDoneDadGuy "Well Done Dad!" Guy]]: Lawrence, by doing everything and anything for his son, but is never met with gratitude. Leonard himself has moments of this while [[spoiler:wanting to involve Valerie in his own work]] but he [[AbusiveParents disregards her aspirations and in doing so]].
[[WellDoneSonGuy "Well Done Daughter!" Girl]]: Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]].
[[YourTraditionIsNotMine Your Tradition Is Not Mine]]: Leonard stops paying attention to his and his father's Jewish traditions. In turn Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] decides to try to get closer to them.
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Keystone is a ''{{Machinima/RedVsBlue}}'' fanfiction explaining the backstory of Leonard and Allison Church's romance from childhood to present day, starting from the day fourteen years old Leonard and his father Lawrence are moving in a new place and Allison is their very troubled neighbour.
!!This story contains examples of the following tropes:
[[AbusiveParents]]: Mutiple examples.
* Allison's parents.
** Her mother's boyfriend [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil]] abused Allison when she was twelve.
** Turns out, her mother was aware and didn't do anything to stop him.
* Leonard's mother, Neira, who often lashed out due to severe mental illness.
* Leonard himself towards Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]]
* Mahala's mother is overly strict and doesn't approve of her friendships and relationships.
[[AdaptationalPersonalityChange]]: In this story, the Allison's AI is not obtained by splitting the Alpha (at first), but through the military data. She doesn't act like Agent Texas, rather speaks in a cold and professional way.
[[Adorkable]]: Leonard's father, Lawrence, with his [[DadJoke dad jokes]] and [[PungeonMaster puns]].
[[Awkward first sleepover]]: When Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] comes to her friend Mahala's house and they have their [[first kiss]].
[[BackstoryHorror]]: Allison's childhood.
[[BerserkButton]]: Smoking weed when Allison is present will anger her greatly. It reminds her of [[spoiler:her mother's abusive partner, who abused her when she was twelve]].
[[BrokenBird]]: Allison.
!!This story contains examples of the following tropes:
[[AbusiveParents]]: Mutiple examples.
* Allison's parents.
** Her mother's boyfriend [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil]] abused Allison when she was twelve.
** Turns out, her mother was aware and didn't do anything to stop him.
* Leonard's mother, Neira, who often lashed out due to severe mental illness.
* Leonard himself towards Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]]
* Mahala's mother is overly strict and doesn't approve of her friendships and relationships.
[[AdaptationalPersonalityChange]]: In this story, the Allison's AI is not obtained by splitting the Alpha (at first), but through the military data. She doesn't act like Agent Texas, rather speaks in a cold and professional way.
[[Adorkable]]: Leonard's father, Lawrence, with his [[DadJoke dad jokes]] and [[PungeonMaster puns]].
[[Awkward first sleepover]]: When Carolina/[[spoiler:Valerie]] comes to her friend Mahala's house and they have their [[first kiss]].
[[BackstoryHorror]]: Allison's childhood.
[[BerserkButton]]: Smoking weed when Allison is present will anger her greatly. It reminds her of [[spoiler:her mother's abusive partner, who abused her when she was twelve]].
[[BrokenBird]]: Allison.