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''Isle of She-Beasts'' is an ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls Equestria Girls]]'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/234842/Phantom-Dragon Phantom-Dragon]] with [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/255052/Mechazilla88 Mechazilla88]] serving as the Co-Author. It can be found [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/510362/isle-of-she-beasts here]] Website/FimfictionDotNet. This fic takes some heavy inspirations from ''Literature/TheIslandOfDoctorMoreau'' and ''Franchise/JurassicPark''
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''Isle of She-Beasts'' is an ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls Equestria Girls]]'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/234842/Phantom-Dragon Phantom-Dragon]] with [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/255052/Mechazilla88 Mechazilla88]] serving as the Co-Author. It can be found [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/510362/isle-of-she-beasts here]] Website/FimfictionDotNet.Platform/FimfictionDotNet. This fic takes some heavy inspirations from ''Literature/TheIslandOfDoctorMoreau'' and ''Franchise/JurassicPark''
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* TheDogBitesBack: Literally. After witnessing Spike coming back to save her from Cozy Glow’s abuse, Loona gets her revenge on Cozy Glow by beating her to a pulp, but barely.
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* TheDogBitesBack: Literally. After witnessing Spike coming back to save her from Cozy Glow’s abuse, Loona gets her revenge on Cozy Glow by beating her to a pulp, but barely.barely.
* UnwantedHarem: In the beginning, Spike wanted nothing to do with the She-Beasts, and Reverse-Hybrids, but was willing to cooperate with them in order to survive and escape the island. It becomes a zig-zag as Spike starts to develop and his love for each of the girls are realized.
* UnwantedHarem: In the beginning, Spike wanted nothing to do with the She-Beasts, and Reverse-Hybrids, but was willing to cooperate with them in order to survive and escape the island. It becomes a zig-zag as Spike starts to develop and his love for each of the girls are realized.
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* OurZombiesAreDifferent: The Berserker Chrysalis creates zombified minions thanks to the parasites she injects in them via through her stinger tail.
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* InterspeciesRomance: Technically, the girls started out as humans, before they were genetically altered into undergoing a forced {{Animorphism}} that turns them into HalfHumanHybrid. The same for Leggy Lamb, Beatrice, Loona, and Marina who started out as ordinary animals, before they became FunnyAnimals Reverse-Hybrids. Nevertheless, Spike still loves them all.
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* GrewASpine: On some occasions, instead of running from dangerous situations like he initially does, or like a realistic person, Spike would have a sudden burst of courage to play the big hero and save the girls…without a plan which usually gets him badly injured.
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* GrewASpine: On some occasions, instead of running from dangerous situations like he initially does, or like a realistic person, Spike would have a sudden burst of courage to play the big hero and save the girls…without a plan which usually gets him badly injured.
injured at best or nearly killed at worst.
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* BrattyHalfPint: Cozy Glow, cranked up to 11, with a whip, and abuse towards poor Loona. Luckily, she got her comeuppance.
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* TantrumThrowing: How Cozy Glow reacts when Loona disobeys her. Going as far as whipping her and putting the dog on a timeout.
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* GrewASpine: On some occasions, instead of running from dangerous situations like he initially does, or like a realistic person, Spike would have a sudden burst of courage to play the big hero and save the girls…without a plan.
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* GrewASpine: On some occasions, instead of running from dangerous situations like he initially does, or like a realistic person, Spike would have a sudden burst of courage to play the big hero and save the girls…without a plan.
plan which usually gets him badly injured.
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* IsleOfGiantHorrors: This island Spike is stuck on doesn't only have beastman hybrids, it also has monstrous chimera-like beasts that are the size of tractors and the apex predator on the island is a colossal dragon-like beast named Ēferno
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* IsleOfGiantHorrors: This island Spike is stuck on doesn't not only have beastman hybrids, but it also has monstrous chimera-like beasts creatures that are the size of tractors and the apex predator on the island is a colossal dragon-like beast named Ēferno
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''Isle of She-Beasts'' is an ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls Equestria Girls]]'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/234842/Phantom-Dragon Phantom-Dragon]] with [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/255052/Mechazilla88 Mechazilla88]] serving as the Co-Author. It can be found [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/510362/isle-of-she-beasts here]] Website/FimfictionDotNet.
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''Isle of She-Beasts'' is an ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls Equestria Girls]]'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/234842/Phantom-Dragon Phantom-Dragon]] with [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/255052/Mechazilla88 Mechazilla88]] serving as the Co-Author. It can be found [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/510362/isle-of-she-beasts here]] Website/FimfictionDotNet.
Website/FimfictionDotNet. This fic takes some heavy inspirations from ''Literature/TheIslandOfDoctorMoreau'' and ''Franchise/JurassicPark''
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''Isle of She-Beasts'' is an ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls Equestria Girls]]' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/234842/Phantom-Dragon Phantom-Dragon]] with [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/255052/Mechazilla88 Mechazilla88]] serving as the Co-Author. It can be found [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/510362/isle-of-she-beasts here]] Website/FimfictionDotNet.
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''Isle of She-Beasts'' is an ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls Equestria Girls]]' Girls]]'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/234842/Phantom-Dragon Phantom-Dragon]] with [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/255052/Mechazilla88 Mechazilla88]] serving as the Co-Author. It can be found [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/510362/isle-of-she-beasts here]] Website/FimfictionDotNet.
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''Isle of She-Beasts'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/234842/Phantom-Dragon Phantom-Dragon]] with [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/255052/Mechazilla88 Mechazilla88]] serving as the Co-Author. It can be found [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/510362/isle-of-she-beasts here]] Website/FimfictionDotNet.
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''Isle of She-Beasts'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' an ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls Equestria Girls]]' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/234842/Phantom-Dragon Phantom-Dragon]] with [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/255052/Mechazilla88 Mechazilla88]] serving as the Co-Author. It can be found [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/510362/isle-of-she-beasts here]] Website/FimfictionDotNet.
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* AbusiveParent: To say that Grogar is a shit father would be an understatement. He put Shade through some very nasty training when he was young to "toughen him up" and he put an inhibitor chip in Newt's brain to keep him in line.
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* AbusiveParent: To say that Grogar is a shit father to both of his "sons" would be an understatement. He put Shade through some very nasty training when he was young to "toughen him up" and he put an inhibitor chip in Newt's brain to keep him in line.
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* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: Spike's first step to recovering his gynophobia (fear of women), and the start of a beautiful relationship with the She-Beasts.
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* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: Spike's first step to recovering from his gynophobia (fear of women), and the start of a beautiful relationship with the She-Beasts.
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* DartboardOfHate: Dr. Grogar has one for his old rival, Professor Merlin Starswirl.
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* DartboardOfHate: Dr. Grogar has one for his old rival, Professor Merlin Starswirl.
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* IsleOGiantHorrors: This island Spike is stuck on doesn't only have beastman hybrids, it also has monstrous chimera-like beasts that are the size of tractors and the apex predator on the island is a colossal dragon-like beast named Ēferno
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20-year-old Nathan "Spike" Draco hopes to become a wildlife photographer, but suffers from a severe case of gynophobia. He joined a marine biology crew to study and take pictures of marine wildlife. However, thanks to a storm and a sabotage, Spike would quickly find himself on an unchartered island with the rest of the crew missing.
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20-year-old Nathan "Spike" Draco hopes to become a wildlife photographer, but suffers from a severe case of gynophobia. He joined a marine biology crew to study and take pictures of marine wildlife. However, thanks to a storm and a sabotage, Spike would quickly find himself on an unchartered island with the rest of the crew missing.
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** Tirek, Chrysalis, Cozy Glow, Sombra, and The Storm King. These individuals were Grogar's previous benefactors and when they got impatient and threatened to cut his founding, Grogar trapped them and became victims of his experiments as a result and turning them into nearly mindless Berserkers. Do NOT feel sorry for these people as each one of them were horrible: Tirek was an arms dealer who sold weapons to third world countries and gave Grogar his first test subject, who was his own brother; Chrysalis was a sex trafficker who kidnapped young women off the streets and sells them as prostitutes, she was also [[AbusiveParent verbally and emotionally abusive to her children]]; Cozy Glow was a SpoiledBrat with an [[HairTriggerTemper explosive temper]] and had ties with the mafia as well as abused poor Loona when she was still a normal dog; Sombra was [[CorruptCorporateExecutive corporate scumbag]] who was sexually abusive to his fiancé, Radiant Hope, and he [[BabyFactory treated her as nothing more than a baby maker]]; And the Storm King was a big time Californian crime lord who ruled the west coast with an iron fist. On top of that, they were the ones who let Ēferno loose which destroyed Grogar's credibility in the first place.
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** Tirek, Chrysalis, Cozy Glow, Sombra, and The Storm King. These individuals were Grogar's previous benefactors and when they got impatient and threatened to cut his founding, Grogar trapped them and became victims of his experiments as a result and turning them into nearly mindless Berserkers. Do NOT feel sorry for these people as each one of them were horrible: horrible pieces of work: Tirek was an arms dealer who sold weapons to third world countries and gave Grogar his first test subject, who was his own brother; Chrysalis was a sex trafficker who kidnapped young women off the streets and sells them as prostitutes, she was also [[AbusiveParent verbally and emotionally abusive to her children]]; Cozy Glow was a SpoiledBrat with an [[HairTriggerTemper explosive temper]] and had ties with the mafia as well as abused poor Loona when she was still a normal dog; Sombra was [[CorruptCorporateExecutive corporate scumbag]] who was sexually abusive to his fiancé, Radiant Hope, and he [[BabyFactory treated her as nothing more than a baby maker]]; And the Storm King was a big time Californian crime lord who ruled the west coast with an iron fist. On top of that, they were the ones who let Ēferno loose which destroyed Grogar's credibility in the first place.
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* IsleOGiantHorrors: This island Spike is stuck on doesn't only have beastman hybrids, it also has monstrous chimera-like beasts that are the size of tractors and the apex predator on the island is a colossal dragon-like beast named Ēferno
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** Blueblood, Rarity's BastardBoyfriend who not only treated her like crap but tried to let Grogar take her first instead of him. Needless to say, [[EvenEvilHasStandards even the mad scientist was disgusted]] and [[RewardedAsATraitorDeserves experimented on him first]], turning him into a [[KarmicTransformation literal]] ButtMonkey.
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** Blueblood, Rarity's BastardBoyfriend who not only treated her like crap but tried to let Grogar take experiment on her first instead of him. Needless to say, [[EvenEvilHasStandards even the mad scientist was disgusted]] and [[RewardedAsATraitorDeserves experimented on him first]], turning him into a [[KarmicTransformation literal]] ButtMonkey.
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''Isle ofShe-Beasts'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/234842/Phantom-Dragon Phantom-Dragon]] with [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/255052/Mechazilla88 Mechazilla88]] serving as the Co-Author. It can be found [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/510362/isle-of-she-beasts here]] Website/FimfictionDotNet.
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''Isle ofShe-Beasts'' of She-Beasts'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/234842/Phantom-Dragon Phantom-Dragon]] with [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/255052/Mechazilla88 Mechazilla88]] serving as the Co-Author. It can be found [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/510362/isle-of-she-beasts here]] Website/FimfictionDotNet.
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This fic was written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/234842/Phantom-Dragon Phantom-Dragon]] with [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/255052/Mechazilla88 Mechazilla88]] serving as the Co-Author. It can be found [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/510362/isle-of-she-beasts here]] Website/FimfictionDotNet.
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** Tirek, Chrysalis, Cozy Glow, Sombra, and The Storm King. These individuals were Grogar's previous benefactors and when they got impatient and threatened to cut his founding, Grogar trapped them and became victims of his experiments as a result and turning them into nearly mindless Berserkers. Do NOT feel sorry for these people as each one of them were horrible people: Tirek was an arms dealer who sold weapons to third world countries and gave Grogar his first test subject, who was his own brother; Chrysalis was a sex trafficker who kidnapped young women off the streets and sells them as prostitutes, she was also verbally and emotionally abusive to her children; Cozy Glow was a spoiled brat with an explosive temper and had ties with the mafia as well as abused poor Loona when she was still a normal dog; Sombra was corporate scumbag who was sexually abusive to his fiancé, Radiant Hope, and he treated her as nothing more than a baby maker; And the Storm King was a big time Californian crime lord who ruled the west coast with an iron fist. On top of that, they were the ones who let Ēferno loose which destroyed Grogar's credibility in the first place.
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** Tirek, Chrysalis, Cozy Glow, Sombra, and The Storm King. These individuals were Grogar's previous benefactors and when they got impatient and threatened to cut his founding, Grogar trapped them and became victims of his experiments as a result and turning them into nearly mindless Berserkers. Do NOT feel sorry for these people as each one of them were horrible people: horrible: Tirek was an arms dealer who sold weapons to third world countries and gave Grogar his first test subject, who was his own brother; Chrysalis was a sex trafficker who kidnapped young women off the streets and sells them as prostitutes, she was also [[AbusiveParent verbally and emotionally abusive to her children; children]]; Cozy Glow was a spoiled brat SpoiledBrat with an [[HairTriggerTemper explosive temper temper]] and had ties with the mafia as well as abused poor Loona when she was still a normal dog; Sombra was [[CorruptCorporateExecutive corporate scumbag scumbag]] who was sexually abusive to his fiancé, Radiant Hope, and he [[BabyFactory treated her as nothing more than a baby maker; maker]]; And the Storm King was a big time Californian crime lord who ruled the west coast with an iron fist. On top of that, they were the ones who let Ēferno loose which destroyed Grogar's credibility in the first place.
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* AlwaysSavetheGirl: Spike's first step to recovering his gynophobia (fear of women), and the start of a beautiful relationship with the She-Beasts.
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* BigBadEnsemble: Downplayed example. While Dr. Grogar is the overall BigBad of the story, Spike and the girls often run into a slew of secondary antagonists such as [[TheDragon Shade]] [[TheHeavy Stalker]], the Berserkers (Tirek, Chrysalis, Sombra, Cozy Glow, and the Storm King), [[ButtMonkey Blueblood]], and [[ChaoticNeutral Eferno]].
* DartboardOfHate: Dr. Grogar has one for his old rival, Professor Merlin Starswirl.
* DartboardOfHate: Dr. Grogar has one for his old rival, Professor Merlin Starswirl.
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This fic was written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/234842/Phantom-Dragon Phantom-Dragon]] with [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/255052/Mechazilla88 Mechazilla88]] serving as the Co-Author.
Co-Author. It can be found [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/510362/isle-of-she-beasts here]] Website/FimfictionDotNet.
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* AbusiveParent: To say that Grogar is a shit father would be an understatement. He put Shade through very nasty training when he was young to "toughen him up" and he put an inhibitor chip in Newt's brain to keep him in line.
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* AbusiveParent: To say that Grogar is a shit father would be an understatement. He put Shade through some very nasty training when he was young to "toughen him up" and he put an inhibitor chip in Newt's brain to keep him in line.
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This fic was written by {[https://www.[[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/234842/Phantom-Dragon Phantom-Dragon]] with [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/255052/Mechazilla88 Mechazilla88]] serving as the Co-Author.
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: How Spike gradually falls in love with each of the girls and vice versa. ((Spoiler Unlike the derange teenager who nearly molested him when he was six)) each of the girls looked after Spike, wanting him to be taken cared and comfortable as possible. In return, Spike tends to go out of his way and saved them from most of Grogar’s creations running lose.
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: How Spike gradually falls in love with each of the girls and vice versa. ((Spoiler [[spoiler: Unlike the derange teenager who nearly molested him when he was six)) six]] each of the girls looked after Spike, wanting him to be taken cared and comfortable as possible. In return, Spike tends to go out of his way and saved them from most of Grogar’s creations running lose.lose.
* {{Fanservice}}: In a manner of speaking, to the appeals of the furry fandom.
* GrewASpine: On some occasions, instead of running from dangerous situations like he initially does, or like a realistic person, Spike would have a sudden burst of courage to play the big hero and save the girls…without a plan.
* KickTheDog: Literally, how Cozy Glow “plays” with Loona to make the latter obedient.
* NiceGuy: Spike. While he may be scared of women, the thought of abandoning any helpless female — women, She-Beasts, even Reverse-Hybrid — to a life-threatening situation is beneath him.
* TigerVsDragon: One of Ēferno's rivals on the island is a tiger-man hybrid and it's heavily implied that they clash quite often.
* {{Tsundere}}: Loona to a T.
* TheDogBitesBack: Literally. After witnessing Spike coming back to save her from Cozy Glow’s abuse, Loona gets her revenge on Cozy Glow by beating her to a pulp, but barely.
* {{Fanservice}}: In a manner of speaking, to the appeals of the furry fandom.
* GrewASpine: On some occasions, instead of running from dangerous situations like he initially does, or like a realistic person, Spike would have a sudden burst of courage to play the big hero and save the girls…without a plan.
* KickTheDog: Literally, how Cozy Glow “plays” with Loona to make the latter obedient.
* NiceGuy: Spike. While he may be scared of women, the thought of abandoning any helpless female — women, She-Beasts, even Reverse-Hybrid — to a life-threatening situation is beneath him.
* TigerVsDragon: One of Ēferno's rivals on the island is a tiger-man hybrid and it's heavily implied that they clash quite often.
* {{Tsundere}}: Loona to a T.
* TheDogBitesBack: Literally. After witnessing Spike coming back to save her from Cozy Glow’s abuse, Loona gets her revenge on Cozy Glow by beating her to a pulp, but barely.
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20-year-old Nathan "Spike" Draco hopes to become a wildlife photographer, but suffers from a severe case of gynophobia. He joined a marine biology crew to study and take pictures of marine wildlife. However, thanks to a storm and a sabotage, Spike would quickly find himself on an unchartered island with the rest of the crew missing.
While searching for his missing crewmates, Spike would quickly discover that the island is home to a mad scientist who experiments on people by turning them into half-human half-animal hybrids. Spike quickly escapes but finds himself lost within the island's wilderness where the mad doctor's unholy experiments roam about.
Spike would then run into a group of she-beasts who were once normal college girls that came to this island a year prior and have been trying to fight off their more animalistic urges. Spike is going to have to get over his phobia and work with these beast girls if he has any chance of getting off this island, if at all...
This fic was written by {[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/234842/Phantom-Dragon Phantom-Dragon]] with [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/255052/Mechazilla88 Mechazilla88]] serving as the Co-Author.
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!!The story contains examples of:
*AbhorrentAdmirer:
**A deranged teenage girl who was arrested for almost molesting a minor; Spike, traumatizing him to have gynophobia.
**Cozy Glow to Loona, considering how horribly the former terrified the latter, which says a lot.
* AbusiveParent: To say that Grogar is a shit father would be an understatement. He put Shade through very nasty training when he was young to "toughen him up" and he put an inhibitor chip in Newt's brain to keep him in line.
*AssholeVictim:
** Tirek, Chrysalis, Cozy Glow, Sombra, and The Storm King. These individuals were Grogar's previous benefactors and when they got impatient and threatened to cut his founding, Grogar trapped them and became victims of his experiments as a result and turning them into nearly mindless Berserkers. Do NOT feel sorry for these people as each one of them were horrible people: Tirek was an arms dealer who sold weapons to third world countries and gave Grogar his first test subject, who was his own brother; Chrysalis was a sex trafficker who kidnapped young women off the streets and sells them as prostitutes, she was also verbally and emotionally abusive to her children; Cozy Glow was a spoiled brat with an explosive temper and had ties with the mafia as well as abused poor Loona when she was still a normal dog; Sombra was corporate scumbag who was sexually abusive to his fiancé, Radiant Hope, and he treated her as nothing more than a baby maker; And the Storm King was a big time Californian crime lord who ruled the west coast with an iron fist. On top of that, they were the ones who let Ēferno loose which destroyed Grogar's credibility in the first place.
** Blueblood, Rarity's BastardBoyfriend who not only treated her like crap but tried to let Grogar take her first instead of him. Needless to say, [[EvenEvilHasStandards even the mad scientist was disgusted]] and [[RewardedAsATraitorDeserves experimented on him first]], turning him into a [[KarmicTransformation literal]] ButtMonkey.
*AdaptationSpeciesChange: Loona is a hellhound in canon, whereas in this story, she was a wolf-dog genetically altered to be an anthropomorphic Reverse-Hybrid.
*AlwaysSavetheGirl: Spike's first step to recovering his gynophobia (fear of women), and the start of a beautiful relationship with the She-Beasts.
*BattleHarem: All of the girls are capable fighters.
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: How Spike gradually falls in love with each of the girls and vice versa. ((Spoiler Unlike the derange teenager who nearly molested him when he was six)) each of the girls looked after Spike, wanting him to be taken cared and comfortable as possible. In return, Spike tends to go out of his way and saved them from most of Grogar’s creations running lose.
While searching for his missing crewmates, Spike would quickly discover that the island is home to a mad scientist who experiments on people by turning them into half-human half-animal hybrids. Spike quickly escapes but finds himself lost within the island's wilderness where the mad doctor's unholy experiments roam about.
Spike would then run into a group of she-beasts who were once normal college girls that came to this island a year prior and have been trying to fight off their more animalistic urges. Spike is going to have to get over his phobia and work with these beast girls if he has any chance of getting off this island, if at all...
This fic was written by {[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/234842/Phantom-Dragon Phantom-Dragon]] with [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/255052/Mechazilla88 Mechazilla88]] serving as the Co-Author.
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!!The story contains examples of:
*AbhorrentAdmirer:
**A deranged teenage girl who was arrested for almost molesting a minor; Spike, traumatizing him to have gynophobia.
**Cozy Glow to Loona, considering how horribly the former terrified the latter, which says a lot.
* AbusiveParent: To say that Grogar is a shit father would be an understatement. He put Shade through very nasty training when he was young to "toughen him up" and he put an inhibitor chip in Newt's brain to keep him in line.
*AssholeVictim:
** Tirek, Chrysalis, Cozy Glow, Sombra, and The Storm King. These individuals were Grogar's previous benefactors and when they got impatient and threatened to cut his founding, Grogar trapped them and became victims of his experiments as a result and turning them into nearly mindless Berserkers. Do NOT feel sorry for these people as each one of them were horrible people: Tirek was an arms dealer who sold weapons to third world countries and gave Grogar his first test subject, who was his own brother; Chrysalis was a sex trafficker who kidnapped young women off the streets and sells them as prostitutes, she was also verbally and emotionally abusive to her children; Cozy Glow was a spoiled brat with an explosive temper and had ties with the mafia as well as abused poor Loona when she was still a normal dog; Sombra was corporate scumbag who was sexually abusive to his fiancé, Radiant Hope, and he treated her as nothing more than a baby maker; And the Storm King was a big time Californian crime lord who ruled the west coast with an iron fist. On top of that, they were the ones who let Ēferno loose which destroyed Grogar's credibility in the first place.
** Blueblood, Rarity's BastardBoyfriend who not only treated her like crap but tried to let Grogar take her first instead of him. Needless to say, [[EvenEvilHasStandards even the mad scientist was disgusted]] and [[RewardedAsATraitorDeserves experimented on him first]], turning him into a [[KarmicTransformation literal]] ButtMonkey.
*AdaptationSpeciesChange: Loona is a hellhound in canon, whereas in this story, she was a wolf-dog genetically altered to be an anthropomorphic Reverse-Hybrid.
*AlwaysSavetheGirl: Spike's first step to recovering his gynophobia (fear of women), and the start of a beautiful relationship with the She-Beasts.
*BattleHarem: All of the girls are capable fighters.
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: How Spike gradually falls in love with each of the girls and vice versa. ((Spoiler Unlike the derange teenager who nearly molested him when he was six)) each of the girls looked after Spike, wanting him to be taken cared and comfortable as possible. In return, Spike tends to go out of his way and saved them from most of Grogar’s creations running lose.
