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* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler: The author mentioned this outright and has so far killed off Teuchi, Ino, Tazuna, Gaara, Tenten, Tenten (GuttedLikeAFish), Sakura's Parents and possibly Ayame and Aoba.]]
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* TournamentArc: Chapters 29 through 31. NotJustATournament for Danzo [[spoiler: as he mind-controlled Naruto to ensure the might of the Jinchuuriki could not be questioned...by having him show no mercy to his opponents,]] and Orochimaru, [[spoiler: who used the heightened paranoia to attack somewhere completely different than expected.]]
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* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: From the moment the Kyuubi starts ''talking'', he begins trying to mold Naruto his way. Especially visible in chapters 17 and 29.
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* OutGambitted: [[spoiler: Orochimaru managed to get around all the precautions the Hokage and Danzo set into place by '''not''' attacking Konoha but its allies instead while Kabuto got Sasuke's eyes.eyes and samples. Kyuubi outsmarted the seal and Naruto outsmarted him.]]
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* OutGambitted: [[spoiler: Orochimaru managed to get around all the precautions the Hokage and Danzo set into place.place by '''not''' attacking Konoha but its allies instead while Kabuto got Sasuke's eyes. Kyuubi outsmarted the seal and Naruto outsmarted him.]]
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* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Kabuto ripped out Sasuke's eyes in Chapter 31.]]
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Orochimaru spares Hebi, an orphan girl who reminds him of Anko. [[spoiler: then again, considering what we gleam of Anko's own training, maybe it wasn't a good thing at all.]]
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* MonsterSobStory: [[spoiler: Shukkaku's story.]]
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* CryForTheDevil: [[spoiler: Kyuubi, Shukkaku.]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler: The author mentioned this outright and has so far killed off Teuchi, Ino, Tazuna, Gaara, Tenten, Sakura and possibly Ayame, Sakura's Parents, Parents and possibly Ayame and Aoba.]]
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He, Sakura, and Sai end up as members of Team 13, under the guidance of Aoba. Unique in that it takes a realistic look at what the shinobi world is like and how death is sudden and quick, with Naruto forced to deal being the Jinchuuriki as well as the live of a shinobi. It's a bit of a DarkFic, fair warning.
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** [[spoiler: Turn out that was a lie.]]
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He, Sakura, and Sai end up as members of Team 13, under the guidance of Aoba. Unique in that it takes a realistic look at what the shinobi world is like and how death is sudden and quick, with Naruto forced to deal being the Jinchuuriki as well as the live of a shinobi.
shinobi. It's a bit of a DarkFic, fair warning.
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* MindRape: [[spoiler: What Danzo did to Naruto using his sharingan, according to Kyuubi.]]
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* ThroughTheEyesOfMadness: Mostly with Naruto[[spoiler:, but Sakura in chapter 29 is disturbing.]]
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* TrainingFromHell: Sakura via Anko. [[spoiler: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]] in that we see what happens in the end result and it is '''not''' pleasant. She may never regain her sanity.]]
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* WillNotTellALie: Kyuubi, [[spoiler: at least, that's what ''he'' says.]]
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* AbortedDeclarationOfLove: Hinata, during the first part of the Chuunin Exam.
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He, Sakura, and Sai end up as members of Team 13, under the guidance of Aoba. Unique in that it takes a realistic look at what the shinobi world is like and how death is sudden and quick, with Naruto forced to deal being the Jinchuuriki as well as the live of a shinnobi.
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* TakeThatKiss: Kurotsuchi to Naruto, after trapping him and his team and stealing their scrolls during the Chuunin Exam.
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* TakeThatKiss: Kurotsuchi to Naruto, after trapping him and his team and stealing their scrolls during the Chuunin Exam. [[spoiler: Kyuubi-Controlled]] Naruto to Kurotsuchi, later on.
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* ImAHumanitarian: [[spoiler: When ever the Kyuubi takes over, he has a tendency to turn Naruto into a cannibal.]]
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* AdaptationDyeJob: Naruto has black hair here.
* GreenEyedMonster: Sakura gets this bad in Chapter 23.
* MotivationalKiss: Karin gives on to Naruto in Chapter 23 on the cheek. Sakura promptly tops it by kissing him on the lips.
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* TragicMonster: Shukaku, you have to feel bad for him.
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* FakingTheDead: [[spoiler: Ami and the Kusa and Leaf Genin "Killed" during the first test.]]
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* BlatantItemPlacement: [[spoiler: Naruto learned his mother was Orochimaru's student and was killed when Kyuubi broke free by a scroll far way from the section it was supposed to be and open...then Danzo, who wasn't there, conveniently asked him the right questions. Averted, since Chapter Three and Thirteen foreshadow Danzo's purposefully placing the scroll in the archives for Naruto to find.]]
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* BreakTheCutie: The author must hate the kids for the sheer amount of angst.
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* InterrogatedForNothing: [[spoiler: Naruto, by Sakura after both were tricked by someone posing as their teacher. Naruto was told it was a pain tolerance test and Sakura was told he gave the mission that got Ino killed away.]]
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: In preparation of the Chuunin Exams [[spoiler: or rather, so that they can't participate]] Kakashi delivers this to his own team, completely crushing Sasuke especially.
-->The Uchiha had its limbs twisted and broken; his eyes snapped shut because of sand and his breathing irregular.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Danzo and [[spoiler: apparently the Sandaime to an extent, given the events of chapter 14.]] [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: Kyuubi's]] MindRape driven manipulation may take the cake, however.
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I\'m way too meticulous...
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9125398/1/Introverted Introverted]] is a Naruto fanfiction by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3864170/Shadenight123 Shadenight123]]. Naruto has become [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin introverted]] due a mistake that [[spoiler: ended up with Teuchi being killed]].
He, Sakura, and Sai end up as members of Team 13, under the guidance of Aoba. Unique in that it takes a realistic look at what the shinobi world is like and how death is sudden and quick, with Naruto forced to deal being the Jinchuuriki as well as the live of a shinnobi.
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!!Tropes found in this fanfiction:
* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler: The author mentioned this outright and has so far killed off Teuchi, Ino, the Bridge Builder from the Wave arc, and possibly Ayame.]]
* ChildSoldiers: Yeah, this series doesn't try to glorify it either.
* CrapsackWorld: Pointed out, numerous times.
* DeadpanSnarker: Sai
* SealedEvilInACan: Kyuubi [[spoiler: arguably.]]
He, Sakura, and Sai end up as members of Team 13, under the guidance of Aoba. Unique in that it takes a realistic look at what the shinobi world is like and how death is sudden and quick, with Naruto forced to deal being the Jinchuuriki as well as the live of a shinnobi.
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!!Tropes found in this fanfiction:
* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler: The author mentioned this outright and has so far killed off Teuchi, Ino, the Bridge Builder from the Wave arc, and possibly Ayame.]]
* ChildSoldiers: Yeah, this series doesn't try to glorify it either.
* CrapsackWorld: Pointed out, numerous times.
* DeadpanSnarker: Sai
* SealedEvilInACan: Kyuubi [[spoiler: arguably.]]
