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* FakeRelationship
** An odd example, as the faking doesn't consciously begin until one of the parties is already dead. In order to quell rumors that he went mad, Tom has to pretend that he really was in love with Merope all along and claims that he's still mourning Merope when he's actually mourning the relationship he could've had with Cecilia instead. When people expect him to talk about his relationship with Merope, he substitutes his feelings for Cecilia instead. His hatred for Merope is so strong that he tries to say "Merope is the most beautiful girl in the world" to prove to himself that the Veritaserum he's been dosed with has worn off.
** For a straight example, when Tessie realizes she really loves Algie, who her family would disapprove of her marrying for being a Muggle, Earldom and associated wealth or no, Tom hatches a plan to pretend to be the man she's courting, and it just so happens that he really enjoys Muggle-Touring and his Muggle friend Algie happens to be with them a lot. Tessie thinks Tom is handsome and charming, of course, and her family would be happy to see them together, but Tom thinks she's annoying and only dances with her exactly enough to maintain the ruse.
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** Tom pretends to go see a movie as an alibi for him [[spoiler:dosing Cecilia with Amortentia]]- the plan is to sit down somewhere near the back of the theater with a Disillusioned Dobby, have Dobby Apparate them outside while Disillusioned [[spoiler:and walk to Threepworple Manor to dose Cecilia's tea, make sure she drinks her tea]], and then Apparate back into the theater before the movie ends. The movie is ''The Triumph of the Rat'', a 1926 silent film about a former criminal pretending to be high class until he tries courting an actual aristocrat, only to be exposed for the fraud he is and sent back to his old criminal haunts in disgrace, where even they no longer respect him, forcing him to live out the rest of his days scavenging with the rats. The premise mirrors Tom's extremely precarious position in Wizarding Britain, where people seem to think he's actually a Wizard.

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** Tom pretends to go see a movie as an alibi for him [[spoiler:dosing Cecilia with Amortentia]]- the plan is to sit down somewhere near the back of the theater with a Disillusioned Dobby, have Dobby Apparate them outside while Disillusioned [[spoiler:and walk to Threepworple Manor to dose Cecilia's tea, make sure she drinks her tea]], and then Apparate back into the theater before the movie ends. The movie is ''The Triumph of the Rat'', a 1926 silent film about a former criminal pretending to be high class until he tries courting an actual aristocrat, only to be exposed for the fraud he is and sent back to his old criminal haunts in disgrace, where even they no longer respect him, forcing him to live out the rest of his days scavenging with the rats. The premise mirrors Tom's extremely precarious position in Wizarding Britain, where people seem to think he's actually a Wizard.Wizard and one wrong move could blow the entire con and send his family and subsequently Tommy into disgrace.
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* CreepyChild: It's filtered through the perspective of his father, but even as a barely day-old newborn, Tommy is far too aware of the world around him for his age, likely thanks to his natural Legilimency abilities allowing him to see people's thoughts, and he also started using accidental magic when he was only days old, and violent magic, at that, which is much earlier than normal. Once he's mobile, he doesn't crawl normally for the first few months and instead tries to slither like a snake, and his babbling sounds distinctly more like Parseltongue than English. The Riddles, especially his father, love the hell out of him and are immensely proud of him and all that he is, though, because that's ''their'' boy and all of that means that he's very powerful and from a great bloodline. It's no wonder that the matrons at Wool's in Hermione's timeline thought he was a devil child, though.

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* CreepyChild: It's filtered through the perspective of his father, but even as a barely day-old newborn, Tommy is far too aware of the world around him for his age, likely thanks to his natural Legilimency abilities allowing him to see people's thoughts, and he also started using accidental magic when he was only days old, and violent magic, at that, which is much earlier than normal. Once he's mobile, he doesn't crawl normally for the first few months and instead tries to slither like a snake, and his babbling sounds distinctly more like Parseltongue than English.English, which Hermione is slightly bemused by, but Tom finds genuinely adorable. The Riddles, especially his father, love the hell out of him and are immensely proud of him and all that he is, though, because that's ''their'' boy and all of that means that he's very powerful and from a great bloodline. It's no wonder that the matrons at Wool's in Hermione's timeline thought he was a devil child, though.
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* MalignedMixedMarriage: Tessie Prewett's family is very displeased that their daughter is marrying Algie, a Muggle, even though that Muggle is heir to an Earlship and a family fortune. Axel went so far as to blame Tom for introducing her to Algie and ruining her honor, and challenged him to a duel, which Axel lost. Tom manages to convince Hermione to be his date by reminding her that merely being seen at the wedding will piss off blood purists, as it will be taken as a political statement in favor of mixed marriages.
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* BreastExpansion: Hermione takes a wet-nurse potion so that she can feed the infant Tommy, and one of the effects is that it enlarges her breasts because they're literally engorged with milk, to the point of looking disproportionate on the bony, half-starved frame she sports for the first year or so of her time with the Riddles. Flat chests happen to be in style, though, and Tom's narration frequently points out her "unfashionable" figure. When Mrs. Riddle takes the potion so she can feed Tommy while Hermione's out, Squire Riddle makes it quite clear that he enjoys this particular effect on his wife, much to Tom's discomfort.

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* BreastExpansion: Hermione takes a wet-nurse potion so that she can feed the infant Tommy, and one of the effects is that it enlarges her breasts because they're literally engorged with milk, to the point of looking disproportionate on the bony, half-starved frame she sports for the first year or so of her time with the Riddles. Flat chests happen to be in style, though, and Tom's narration frequently points out her "unfashionable" figure. When Mrs. Riddle takes the potion so she can feed Tommy while Hermione's out, Squire Riddle makes it quite clear that he enjoys this particular effect on his wife, [[ParentalSexualitySquick much to Tom's discomfort.discomfort]].
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** Tessie also mentions offhand that her brother Axel once "forgot his elbow" when he Apparated. It was clearly fixed, but the thought of it brings Tom's mind back to witnessing Ignis's splinchings, threatening to turn his stomach all over again.

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** Tessie also mentions offhand that her brother Axel once "forgot his elbow" when he Apparated. It was Axel is clearly fixed, no worse for wear thanks to the wonders of healing magic, but the thought of it brings Tom's mind back to witnessing Ignis's splinchings, threatening to turn his stomach all over again.

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* BreastExpansion: Hermione takes a wet-nurse potion so that she can feed the infant Tommy, and one of the effects is that it enlarges her breasts because they're literally engorged with milk, to the point of looking disproportionate on the bony, half-starved frame she sports for the first year or so of her time with the Riddles. Flat chests happen to be in style, though, and Tom's narration frequently points out her "unfashionable" figure. When Mrs. Riddle takes the potion so she can feed Tommy while Hermione's out, Squire Riddle makes it quite clear that he enjoys this particular effect on his wife, much to Tom's discomfort.



* ParentalSexualitySquick: After Mrs Riddle takes a wet-nurse potion so as to share in feeding little Tommy, Tom considers the effect on her figure to be unfashionable -- but his father is instead eyeing her in a way that has Tom quickly finishing his breakfast and excusing himself from the table.


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* ParentalSexualitySquick: After Mrs Riddle takes a wet-nurse potion so as to share in feeding little Tommy, Tom considers the effect on her figure to be unfashionable -- but his father is instead eyeing her in a way that has Tom quickly finishing his breakfast and excusing himself from the table.
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* TallDarkAndHandsome: Just as his son was in canon as a young man, Tom is at least OneHeadTaller than Hermione with perfectly coiffed jet-black hair and very dark eyes, and even Hermione describes him as classically handsome. He believes he got his looks from his mother, and at one point briefly (''very'' briefly) bemoans that [[SoBeautifulItsACurse if he'd been ugly, Merope wouldn't have ruined his life]].

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* TallDarkAndHandsome: Just as his son was in canon as a young man, Tom is at least OneHeadTaller than Hermione with perfectly coiffed jet-black hair and very dark eyes, and even Hermione describes him as classically handsome. Wizarding Britain agrees, and after only a day, he winds up in Witch Weekly as the most eligible bachelor and a contender for the Most Charming Smile award. He believes he got his looks from his mother, and at one point briefly (''very'' briefly) bemoans that [[SoBeautifulItsACurse if he'd been ugly, Merope wouldn't have ruined his life]].
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''In the Bleak Midwinter'' is an ongoing ''Literature/HarryPotter'' fanfiction by [=TheLoud=], posted on Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13013582/ here]]), and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn ([[https://archiveofourown.org/works/15430560 here]]).

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''In the Bleak Midwinter'' is an ongoing ''Literature/HarryPotter'' fanfiction by [=TheLoud=], posted on Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13013582/ here]]), and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn ([[https://archiveofourown.org/works/15430560 here]]).
here]]). The fic also has an AudioAdaptation read by voice actor Sam Gabriel, which can be heard on one's preferred podcast platform or downloaded from [[https://www.samgabrielvo.com/category/inthebleakmidwinter/ her personal website]].

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* NoNameGiven: Most of Tom and Hermione's werewolf employees go by the pseudonyms they submitted their stories under for the ''Loup Garou'' project. Not even their bosses know their actual names. Only Ignis and Eric use any part of their actual names, and Eric never gives his surname.


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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Most of Tom and Hermione's werewolf employees go by the pseudonyms they submitted their stories under for the ''Loup Garou'' project. Not even their bosses know their actual names. Only Ignis and Eric use any part of their actual names, and Eric never gives his surname.
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* GoodOldFisticuffs: The first time Tom meets Serpens Malfoy, he winds up punching the man in the face, causing him to drop his wand, which Tom then picks up, unintentionally winning the wand's allegiance and claiming it for himself, despite being a muggle.

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* GoodOldFisticuffs: The first time Tom meets Serpens Malfoy, he winds up punching the man in the face, causing [[spoiler:causing him to drop his wand, which Tom then picks up, unintentionally winning the wand's allegiance and claiming it for himself, despite being a muggle.muggle]].
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* MetaphoricallyTrue: Tom is very careful to not outright lie to any Wizards in any ways that could be found out and frequently lies by omission or says things in a way that let people come to conclusions that are advantageous to him. For instance, he tells Serpens Malfoy, who already suspects that Tom isn't a Pureblood, that he isn't a muggleborn wizard, and lets him decide that means he's a halfblood, not that he's (gasp) a completely magicless muggle playing at being a Wizard.
-->'''Tom''': "Don't put words in my mouth, Miss Granger. I did not lie. I never claimed to be a pureblood wizard."
-->'''Hermione''': "Yes but… You stole Malfoy’s wand and threatened him with it! That does strongly imply that you are at least a wizard."
-->'''Tom''': "No it doesn’t. I could have been threatening to shove it up his nose. Would have served him right, too."
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* FairForItsDay: Tom uses the period-accurate and then-proper term "negro" in reference to those of African descent when talking about how ''Literature/UncleTomsCabin'' brought about the end of slavery in America. He's casually prejudiced, but in ways that lie more along class lines than racial or ethnic lines, typical for English landed gentry of the time- he regards "commoners" and those he considers lowborn with subtle disdain at best. With that said, he's also cool with two of his werewolf employees being a gay couple as long as they keep their love lives quiet, a shockingly tolerant reaction for the time.
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* BedlamHouse: Cecilia, under the influence of Amortentia keyed to Tom, starts listing off a bunch of modern (by 1927 standards) psychiatric treatments that Tom could try for his madness, such as electronarcosis, running electricity through his brain; drugging him with barbiturates so he sleeps for days on end; and "malarial therapy", deliberately infecting him with malaria, which "only" has a 15% death rate. All of them justifiably sound terrible to Tom, not the least because he isn't even insane to begin with.

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* AffectionateNickname: Mary Riddle has an endless supply of cutesy nicknames for her infant grandson and doesn't ever seem to use the same name more than once onscreen, and her pool of names only grows the more she learns about the Wizarding world and its body of creatures. Tommy is called everything from a bludger to a puffskein.
* AlienGenderConfusion: Dobby admits that he has trouble telling humans apart by appearance alone and is reliant on TertiarySexualCharacteristics to tell the sexes apart. He didn't realize Cecilia is a woman until Tom referred to her with feminine pronouns because she doesn't have long hair or apparent "teats", as her hair is bobbed and her clothing gives her a flat-chested figure in 1920s fashion.



* AncestralName
** At least three consecutive generations of Riddle men are named Tom. There's Squire Thomas Riddle I, current head of the family, Heir Thomas Riddle II, the story's narrator, and his young son Thomas "Tommy" Marvolo Riddle III. As the story is written solely from Heir Tom's perspective, Squire Riddle is referred to in narration as "Tom's father", while his son is Tommy. Tom's mother calls her husband Thomas, her son Tom, and her grandson Tommy.
** A background character is Sirius Black II, great-grandfather of Sirius Black III, Harry's godfather. Since he's the only Sirius Black alive right now, he's referred to as just Sirius, making it a little odd to read about a Sirius being a frothing blood supremacist, something Harry's beloved godfather would never be.
* AtrociousAlias: While gathering suitably "pathetic" life stories from werewolves about the tragedies of life with lycanthropy, all of the contributions are written under pseudonyms of each author's choice. The silliest one is "Unicorn Pants", bearing in mind that "pants" in UK English refers to underwear rather than trousers. When UP is offered a traveling sales job with Tom and Hermione's fledgling Wolfsbane company, he abandons the name after a couple minutes of his bosses and coworkers attempting to say it with a straight face and tells everyone to just call him Eric, his actual name.



* BedlamHouse: Cecilia, under the influence of Amortentia keyed to Tom, starts listing off a bunch of modern (by 1927 standards) psychiatric treatments that Tom could try for his madness, such as electronarcosis, running electricity through his brain; drugging him with barbiturates so he sleeps for days on end; and "malarial therapy", deliberately infecting him with malaria, which "only" has a 15% death rate. All of them justifiably sound terrible to Tom, not the least because he isn't even insane to begin with.
* BlueBlood: The Riddles are a Squire family, essentially making them a kind of fancy landlord that owns a village, but in the hierarchy of British nobility, they rank below even baronets (who aren't permitted in the House of Lords) and are technically not nobility as they aren't conferred titles, despite all of their wealth and upper-crust associates and pretensions. Tom feels a little insecure about how low his family is compared to people like Cecilia's family, who are Baronets, and his friend Algie, who is inbred and lacking in talents, yet is heir to an Earldom.
* ConsummateLiar: Tom is such a good liar that he can tell even obvious lies with enough conviction to make listeners think he's telling the truth. While working out a plausible cover story to [[spoiler:swindle Borgin and Burke out of Slytherin's Locket, which Merope pawned some months prior]], Tom acts out the story and says to Hermione that [[spoiler:the store's piece is a replica and that he actually owns the real one]], which she knows is false, but he says it so convincingly that she genuinely asks him "Really?" As a muggle who has unintentionally made people think the Riddles are a wealthy but as-yet-unknown Wizarding family, this is an important and useful skill to have.
* CreepyChild: It's filtered through the perspective of his father, but even as a barely day-old newborn, Tommy is far too aware of the world around him for his age, likely thanks to his natural Legilimency abilities allowing him to see people's thoughts, and he also started using accidental magic when he was only days old, and violent magic, at that, which is much earlier than normal. Once he's mobile, he doesn't crawl normally for the first few months and instead tries to slither like a snake, and his babbling sounds distinctly more like Parseltongue than English. The Riddles, especially his father, love the hell out of him and are immensely proud of him and all that he is, though, because that's ''their'' boy and all of that means that he's very powerful and from a great bloodline. It's no wonder that the matrons at Wool's in Hermione's timeline thought he was a devil child, though.
* TheDandy: Tom pays a lot of attention to fashion trends and goes so far as to discard and replace his wardrobe every single year whenever the styles change. He also constantly needles Hermione to dress and style her hair in "modern" late 1920s fashion, and even refers to her curvy figure and natural long bushy hair as "unfashionable". When he invites her to Algie and Tessie's wedding as his date, he tells her that they'll have to go dress shopping because the formal dress she bought two years prior, shortly after she brought them Tommy, is two years out of fashion, and he can't possibly let her be seen in public wearing such rags, let alone on his arm, at a wedding.



* FairForItsDay: Tom uses the period-accurate and then-proper term "negro" in reference to those of African descent when talking about how ''Literature/UncleTomsCabin'' brought about the end of slavery in America. He's casually prejudiced, but in ways that lie more along class lines than racial or ethnic lines, typical for English landed gentry of the time- he regards "commoners" and those he considers lowborn with subtle disdain at best. With that said, he's also cool with two of his werewolf employees being a gay couple as long as they keep their love lives quiet, a shockingly tolerant reaction for the time.



* FitnessNut: Tom is an ardent practitioner of Swedish gymnast Jørgen Peter Müller's system of calisthenics, and cites his beautiful physique and physical prowess to his daily Müller system exercises, which he performs in the nude, per Müller's instructions. He judges other men who are out of shape and even tries to get Hermione to start doing them. Some of Müller's exercises are still recommended to this day by modern physical therapists, so Tom's obsession is likely well-founded.
* ForHalloweenIAmGoingAsMyself: It's revealed that wizards are known to go out on Halloween into muggle areas and guise, or sing for treats in costume, just dressed as themselves where they won't stick out at all amongst the muggle guisers also in costume. Tom, who very nearly considers himself a Wizard by the time of his first post-Tommy Halloween, always wears his most Victorian-looking Wizarding clothes on Halloween and the muggles all assume he's dressed up as a vampire. And to the Riddles' tenants, he may as well be a vampire for how much rent he charges.



* GooGooGodlike: Tommy commits his first act of accidental magic when he's about three days old- he sets Hermione's hair on fire. Accidental magic this early is highly unusual and it's an indication of his sheer power.



* GoodOldFisticuffs: The first time Tom meets Serpens Malfoy, he winds up punching the man in the face, causing him to drop his wand, which Tom then picks up, unintentionally winning the wand's allegiance and claiming it for himself, despite being a muggle.
* GreenEyedMonster: Tom is too polite to let it show or affect their working relationship (much), but he secretly hates Ignis, who he thinks looks like a tramp even disregarding his werewolf injuries, for drawing Hermione's attention away from himself and sees him as romantic competition. When Hermione agrees to try brewing Wolfsbane for Ignis, he secretly hopes that he gets poisoned by the potion and dies. Complicating this is that his experiences with Merope have made him refuse to acknowledge that he is, in fact, in love with Hermione.



* MeaningfulEcho: The first time Tom is vulnerable with Hermione is after Cecilia ends things with him for good, leaving him in tears. Hermione tells him, "You shouldn’t cry alone. It’s much better for one’s mental health to cry on someone’s shoulder," before pulling him into a hug and letting him sob his heart out on her shoulder until he's cried out. A couple years later, after [[spoiler:their meeting with Woolsey goes horribly wrong and Ignis is nearly killed]], Hermione cries from rage and fear, and Tom repeats her line back to her before offering her a hug, which she gratefully accepts as she cries into his chest.
* MetaphoricallyTrue: Tom is very careful to not outright lie to any Wizards in any ways that could be found out and frequently lies by omission or says things in a way that let people come to conclusions that are advantageous to him. For instance, he tells Serpens Malfoy, who already suspects that Tom isn't a Pureblood, that he isn't a muggleborn wizard, and lets him decide that means he's a halfblood, not that he's (gasp) a completely magicless muggle playing at being a Wizard.
-->'''Tom''': "Don't put words in my mouth, Miss Granger. I did not lie. I never claimed to be a pureblood wizard."
-->'''Hermione''': "Yes but… You stole Malfoy’s wand and threatened him with it! That does strongly imply that you are at least a wizard."
-->'''Tom''': "No it doesn’t. I could have been threatening to shove it up his nose. Would have served him right, too."
* NoNameGiven: Most of Tom and Hermione's werewolf employees go by the pseudonyms they submitted their stories under for the ''Loup Garou'' project. Not even their bosses know their actual names. Only Ignis and Eric use any part of their actual names, and Eric never gives his surname.
* NoblewomansLaugh: Tom laughs as he shows off how he's going to use Dobby's magic to convince people he's actually a wizard, which Hermione describes as an EvilLaugh. He insists that it's his triumphant laugh.



* PragmaticHero: The Riddles have ethics, but they treat them more as guideliness than actual rules. They well understand the concept of EnlightenedSelfInterest, admire power even amongst those who misuse it, and would happily rule the world for its own benefit. They would probably qualify as {{Unscrupulous Hero}}es, if they weren't also rather cheerful and friendly.

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* OCStandIn
** We know almost nothing about what the Riddle family was actually like as people in canon, other than that they were Voldemort's paternal family and weren't liked by their community, and this fic expands on their characters based on their known backgrounds as landed gentry. The story extrapolates out Tom's personality based on some canon aspects of Tommy, such as his arrogance, manipulation skills, ambition, and obsession with appearances, and then extrapolates personalities for Squire Riddle and Mary Riddle to make them each one half of their son.
** The story also elaborates on several canonical Wizarding characters from the era. Tom befriends Quintessa "Tessie" Prewett, for instance, who would become a Great Aunt to Ronald Weasley some fifty years later and whose dress robes Ron would wear to the Yule Ball.
* ParentalSubstitute: Hermione makes herself Tommy's nursemaid practically from his birth, despite not being his actual mother, and the two predictably become very close, with Tommy eventually calling her "Mama" once he starts babbling in English with as much earnestness as he refers to his blood father as "Papa".
* PhonyPsychic: Hermione and the Riddles pass off Hermione's knowledge of the future as her being a Seer, which she is somewhat amused by considering her dislike of divination and the fact that she is not, in fact, a Seer. It does work as a convenient excuse to get out of situations and social engagements, as she can just claim that she had an urgent vision that needed to be addressed immediately.
* PragmaticHero: The Riddles have ethics, but they treat them more as guideliness guidelines than actual rules. They well understand the concept of EnlightenedSelfInterest, admire power even amongst those who misuse it, and would happily rule the world for its own benefit. They would probably qualify as {{Unscrupulous Hero}}es, if they weren't also rather cheerful and friendly.



* RepetitiveName: Tom's friend Algie's surname is "Clamdowne-Clamdowne". In the UK, double-barrelled surnames are strongly associated with nobility and are/were intended to show off one's maternal pedigree as well as their father's. That Algie's is repetitive makes this a parody of this practice, as it implies that his parents are related and backs up his claim that he's "so inbred [he] could be a sandwich".



* RichLanguagePoorLanguage: In this fic, Little Hangleton is located in Yorkshire, [[OopNorth in the north of England]]. Tom once had the accent to match, and he hated it so much that he trained himself to speak a perfect Queen's English befitting a man of status, to the point that his friend Algie, heir to an Earldom, says Tom sounds stuffier than his elocution tutor.
* RightForTheWrongReasons: The Riddles and Hermione pass off Hermione's knowledge of the future as her being a Seer. Serpens Malfoy also recognizes signs of Cruciatus damage in her when she gets tremors, and he concludes that she's been mistreated in the past for her gifts, perhaps even tortured for not producing a vision on command. He's correct that she's been tortured by the Cruciatus, but not because she's a Seer, because she isn't a Seer.
* RockPaperScissors: When Tom accidentally disarms a witch and wins her wand from her, the wand changes allegiance to him, causing it to not work as well for her, so he proposes that he lose to her at a game of rock-paper-scissors so she can get her wand back on her side again. The witch also reveals that the Wizarding version of rock-paper-scissors is called Wand-Cloak-Stone, based on ''The Tale of the Three Brothers''- Wand summons Cloak, Cloak hides Stone, and Stone resurrects the Wand's victims. He narrates that he considers rock-paper-scissors to be a game of strategy rather than a game of chance because he can read people's tells to see what sign they'll throw. Tom got so good at that when he was a schoolboy that the other kids stopped playing rock-paper-scissors with him, and he has to consciously make himself play Stone/Rock instead of Wand/Scissors when he catches that the witch is about to play Cloak/Paper.
* RoyalInbreeding: Tom narrates that a lot of his higher-ranked noble cohorts are noticeably inbred, particularly his old friend Algie, who has "bulging blue eyes and a weak chin", a common feature on many English noble heirs that can make it hard for the uninitiated to tell them apart. Inbreeding is also a significant problem among Wizarding Pureblood families, which the Malfoys actively work against by selecting consorts from other countries- Serpens Malfoy's late first wife and Abraxas's stepmother was Njinga Shacklebolt, who is from the Empire of Axum (Ethiopia).



* SelectiveObliviousness: It's implied that Cecilia is so logical and practical that her mind refuses to believe that magic and Wizards and Witches are real, and simply assumes it's all either just a trick, or the ramblings of her clearly mentally disturbed ex. Malfoy's owl tries to get into Cecilia's study to deliver its message directly to Tom while he's visiting her, and her conclusion isn't "gee it's odd that an owl would be out during the day and flapping at my window," it's "Tom is delusional and [[HearingVoices he thinks owls are speaking to him]]." She thinks nothing of him sticking his arm into his new bottomless wallet past his elbow and asks him if his parents know he's out, like he's feeble-minded and needs to be supervised, and when Hermione accidentally Apparates right in front of her with the signature crack and even insists that there's no way she could've missed that, Cecilia instead focuses on the fact that Hermione said "shit" and begs Hermione to get Tom the help he clearly needs. Hermione doesn't even have to Obliviate Cecilia in the end.



* ShoutOut
** When the Riddles find Hermione's 1997 copy of ''Nature's Nobility'' and correctly conclude that she must be a time traveler, Tom says, wonderingly, that it's "like [[Literature/TheTimeMachine H.G. Wells’s scientific romances]]!"
** Tom's mother reads ''Literature/TheTaleOfTomKitten'' to Tommy, a story that Tom always found disturbing. The author clarified in chapter comments that they were actually thinking of ''Literature/TheTaleOfSamuelWhiskers'', the sequel, which features the protagonist almost getting turned into pudding and eaten, but this story is about playful kittens who are dressed up in fine clothes only for the titular Tom Kitten to mess them up and lose them. The implication is that Tom was TheDandy even as a young child and found the notion of not taking care of fine clothes horrifying. Another connection that can be made is that Tom Kitten's family seems to be trying to be humans, given that they wear clothing and walk on their hind paws, which contrasts with cats in other ''Tom Kitten'' stories that don't wear clothes and work as ratters, mirroring the Riddles' scheme of passing themselves off as Wizards.
** Tom pretends to go see a movie as an alibi for him [[spoiler:dosing Cecilia with Amortentia]]- the plan is to sit down somewhere near the back of the theater with a Disillusioned Dobby, have Dobby Apparate them outside while Disillusioned [[spoiler:and walk to Threepworple Manor to dose Cecilia's tea, make sure she drinks her tea]], and then Apparate back into the theater before the movie ends. The movie is ''The Triumph of the Rat'', a 1926 silent film about a former criminal pretending to be high class until he tries courting an actual aristocrat, only to be exposed for the fraud he is and sent back to his old criminal haunts in disgrace, where even they no longer respect him, forcing him to live out the rest of his days scavenging with the rats. The premise mirrors Tom's extremely precarious position in Wizarding Britain, where people seem to think he's actually a Wizard.
* StepfordSnarker: Tom snarks about aesthetics and appearances as a defense mechanism when he's afraid, whether for his life or just of his own emotions.
** When he meets Lord Woolsey, he can't help but notice that the werewolf's throne is decorated with real human skulls and mentally declares it tacky, perhaps to distract himself from the notion that they probably once belonged to people that Woolsey has killed. Then, Woolsey flexes his muscles in a clear intimidation display and Tom narrates that the man's physique would make Müller envious. He goes on to muse to himself that Woolsey would probably kill and eat Müller and mount his skull on his throne, "[[AndThatsTerrible which would be a terrible end for the Danish gymnast]]."
** And of course, when he hugs Hermione, he reminds himself that it's so that he doesn't have to look at her "ugly" visage or so that she can't see how ugly he looks when he cries, and when he crouches to hug her while she's seated, he tells himself that it's good exercise for his legs.
* TallDarkAndHandsome: Just as his son was in canon as a young man, Tom is at least OneHeadTaller than Hermione with perfectly coiffed jet-black hair and very dark eyes, and even Hermione describes him as classically handsome. He believes he got his looks from his mother, and at one point briefly (''very'' briefly) bemoans that [[SoBeautifulItsACurse if he'd been ugly, Merope wouldn't have ruined his life]].



* UnmanlySecret: Tom unironically reads Witch Weekly, a women's magazine, to stay up to date on fashion trends and Wizarding culture, finding it a better driver of and a more insightful look into Wizarding society than the drivel in the Daily Prophet. Everyone looks at him weirdly whenever he has to admit that (although he's not going to give away the advantage he gets from it). He also anonymously tips off WW's photographers and journalists as to where he'll be specifically so that Wizarding Britain sees him hanging out with high-status Wizarding families such as the Malfoys and Prewetts, building his and his family's reputations as powerful socialites.
* VillainRespect: When Tom finds out that in Hermione's time, his very own Tommy murders his entire family at the age of sixteen and successfully frames it on Morfin, then goes on to amass a following, take over the world, and kill a lot of people, he's briefly dismayed, but is taken over by complete awe at that other Tommy's sheer ambition and vision. He thinks that Tommy could do great things if only that ambition is shaped and aimed in the proper direction... by his own equally ambitious and power-hungry standards, of course.



* WakeUpFighting: Hermione's years of combat and escaping have left her very sensitive to any kind of threat. At one point, when she falls asleep in her chair, Tom moves to transfer her to a bed, and wakes up on the floor with a headache.

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* WakeUpFighting: Hermione's years of combat and escaping have left her very sensitive to any kind of threat. At one point, when she falls asleep in her chair, Tom moves to transfer her to a bed, and wakes up on the floor with a headache.headache and a previously broken nose (Hermione fixed it).


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* WeakButSkilled: Tom is a completely magicless muggle, but he's sharp and creative in ways that are uncommon in old-fashioned, stagnating Wizarding Britain and easily works out novel ways to make use of potions, his House Elf, and other Wizarding artifacts that don't require one to possess magic of their own.


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* GivingRadioToTheRomans: Hermione isn't interested in just uplifting the world by a century, but she's willing to share a few improvements in order to help people, such as the Wolfsbane Potion, and knowledge about antibiotics. The reactions of the werewolves are...mixed. [[spoiler:Those who were already trying to remain civilised are generally grateful, albeit usually too poor to make a proper business out of selling the potion. On the other hand, those who embrace the wolf, living in feral packs and viewing regular humans as mere prey, are violently displeased by this new development.]]

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* GivingRadioToTheRomans: Hermione isn't interested in just uplifting the world by a century, but she's willing to share a few improvements in order to help people, such as the Wolfsbane Potion, and knowledge about antibiotics. The reactions of the werewolves are...mixed. [[spoiler:Those who were already trying to remain civilised are generally grateful, albeit usually too poor to make a proper business out of selling the potion. On the other hand, those who embrace the wolf, living in feral packs and viewing regular humans as mere prey, are violently displeased by this new development.development, because it threatens their source of recruitment.]]
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''In the Bleak Midwinter'' is an ongoing ''Literature/HarryPotter'' fanfiction by [=TheLoud=], posted on Website/FanfictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13013582/ here]], and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/15430560 here]].

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''In the Bleak Midwinter'' is an ongoing ''Literature/HarryPotter'' fanfiction by [=TheLoud=], posted on Website/FanfictionDotNet [[https://www.Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13013582/ here]], here]]), and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.([[https://archiveofourown.org/works/15430560 here]].
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* DistractedByTheSexy: Tom struggles to continue the conversation when Hermione mentions that she has taken an antidote to the wet nurse potion she originally used, resulting in changes to her figure of which he's ''well'' aware. Especially when she looks down at herself and asks for his feedback.
--> She had the gall to direct his attention to that particular region of her anatomy, and simultaneously demand a sophisticated action like speech?

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* TraumaButton: Hermione's years of combat and escaping have left her very sensitive to any kind of threat. At one point, when she falls asleep in her chair, Tom moves to transfer her to a bed, and wakes up on the floor with a headache.
--> '''Hermione''': You startled me. Don't do that. Never do that.


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* WakeUpFighting: Hermione's years of combat and escaping have left her very sensitive to any kind of threat. At one point, when she falls asleep in her chair, Tom moves to transfer her to a bed, and wakes up on the floor with a headache.
--> '''Hermione''': You startled me. Don't do that. Never do that.

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* {{Pun}}: The Pickled Salamander restaurant serves food with relatively ordinary quality, but an impressive experience, such as bubble and squeak that periodically releases floating bubbles containing animated 'mice' made of beef and cabbage, or blackcurrant flummery that needs to be earthed ("Ah! Current.") before it can be safely eaten.
--> Tom poked at the crust of his boring toad in the hole with his sharp-tined fork. The crust tasted like reasonably good toad in the hole crust. He dug through it in search of the meat.\\
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* VisualPun: The Pickled Salamander restaurant serves food with relatively ordinary quality, but an impressive experience, such as bubble and squeak that periodically releases floating bubbles containing animated 'mice' made of beef and cabbage, or blackcurrant flummery that needs to be earthed ("Ah! Current.") before it can be safely eaten.
--> Tom poked at the crust of his boring toad in the hole with his sharp-tined fork. The crust tasted like reasonably good toad in the hole crust. He dug through it in search of the meat.\\
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* ParentalSexualitySquick: After Mrs Riddle takes a wet-nurse potion so as to share in feeding little Tommy, Tom considers the effect on her figure to be unfashionable -- but his father is instead eyeing her in a way that has Tom quickly finishing his breakfast and excusing himself from the table.



* {{Pun}}: "The Pickled Salamander" restaurant serves food with relatively ordinary quality, but an impressive experience, such as bubble and squeak that periodically releases floating bubbles containing animated 'mice' made of beef and cabbage, or blackcurrant flummery that needs to be earthed ("Ah! Current.") before it can be safely eaten.

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--> “We shall see how calmly you take the news,” said Tom.\\
“Perfectly calmly, I assure you,” his mother insisted.\\

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“Perfectly "Perfectly calmly, I assure you,” you," his mother insisted.\\
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* ReversePsychology: Before telling his parents about Merope being a genuine witch and little Tommy being magical, Tom talks up the possibility that they'll turn Hermione out of the house after hearing her story -- which, naturally, gets his mother indignant at the very idea of mistreating a guest in that way, and guarantees that she'll hear Hermione out.
--> “We shall see how calmly you take the news,” said Tom.\\
“Perfectly calmly, I assure you,” his mother insisted.\\
Tom did not smile, although he was proud of himself for nipping his mother’s anti-witch fury in the bud.
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* AndThereWasMuchRejoicing: Having only just met Hermione, Tom doesn't want to admit just how pleased and especially relieved he is to hear of Merope's death.

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* AndThereWasMuchRejoicing: Having only just met Hermione, Tom doesn't want to admit just how pleased and especially relieved he is to hear of Merope's death.
--> He was free. He was crying. Did tears of joy resemble tears of mourning closely enough that it was safe to uncover his face?
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* BabyTrap: When Fiona sees Hermione breastfeed little Tommy, she jumps to the conclusion that he must be Hermione's, not Merope's, and that Hermione is just trying to extort something from the Riddles. Hermione's explanation that she's taken a wet nurse potion is not necessarily convincing, but it certainly changes the subject.
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* LovePotion: Despite his bad history with having been controlled by Amortentia, Tom is willing to use it, if necessary, to win back the girl whom he lost when Merope enslaved him. [[spoiler:It doesn't quite go as he planned; it can induce obsession, but that doesn't change everything else about the person.]]

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* LovePotion: Despite his bad history with having been controlled by Amortentia, Tom is willing to use it, if necessary, to win back the girl whom he lost when Merope enslaved him. [[spoiler:It doesn't quite go as he planned; it can induce obsession, but that doesn't change everything else about the person. Cecilia still doesn't believe his claim that magic is real, but under the influence of the potion, she changes from being dismissive, to becoming obsessed with getting him treatment for his "madness" because she's so concerned about his wellbeing.]]
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* ExactWords: Tom prefers to make use of careful wording, rather than outright lies, to cover the fact that he's not a wizard.
--> '''Tom:''' Don't put words in my mouth, Miss Granger. I did not lie. I never claimed to be a pureblood wizard.\\
'''Hermione:''' Yes but… You stole [[spoiler:Malfoy's]] wand and threatened him with it! That does strongly imply that you are at least a wizard.\\
'''Tom:''' No it doesn't. I could have been threatening to shove it up his nose. Would have served him right, too.
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* TamperingWithFoodAndDrink: [[spoiler:Serpens Malfoy]] spikes Tom's drink with Veritaserum, causing him to reveal more than he intended. Fortunately he's able to steer the conversation away from topics that might have been fatal.
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* PricelessPaperweight: Hermione and Tom are able to recover Salazar Slytherin's locket, a priceless historical artefact that opens only in response to Parseltongue. It makes a good toy for little Tommy, who has great fun repeatedly making it open and then smacking it closed.

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