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''If I Was Your Nazi'' is a ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'' fanfic that drew infamy for taking Organization XIII and setting them in a pseudo-HighSchoolAU UsefulNotes/NaziGermany while UsefulNotes/{{the Holocaust}} is in full swing, all while portraying them as heroic Nazis. Throughout the fanfic, Roxas and Axel run around being horrified by the Holocaust, yet they never do anything about it. Meanwhile, other characters from the game will show up from time to time with varying degrees of relevance to the plot.
After about fourteen chapters, the author abandoned the project, and, under much scorn, finally pulled it from [[Website/FanFictionDotNet FanFiction.net]]. Despite this, the ''Snakes on a Sora'' Website/LiveJournal still holds [[http://snakesonasora.livejournal.com/tag/if%20i%20was%20your%20nazi an abridged sporking of it]] and WebVideo/TheFanFictionCritic did a review.
After about fourteen chapters, the author abandoned the project, and, under much scorn, finally pulled it from [[Website/FanFictionDotNet FanFiction.net]]. Despite this, the ''Snakes on a Sora'' Website/LiveJournal still holds [[http://snakesonasora.livejournal.com/tag/if%20i%20was%20your%20nazi an abridged sporking of it]] and WebVideo/TheFanFictionCritic did a review.
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''If I Was Your Nazi'' is a ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'' fanfic that drew infamy is best known for taking Organization XIII and setting them in a pseudo-HighSchoolAU UsefulNotes/NaziGermany while UsefulNotes/{{the Holocaust}} is in full swing, all while portraying them as heroic Nazis. Throughout the fanfic, Roxas and Axel run around being horrified by the Holocaust, yet they never do anything about it. Meanwhile, other characters from the game will show up from time to time with varying degrees of relevance to the plot.
After about fourteen chapters, the author abandoned theproject, and, under much scorn, finally project and pulled it from [[Website/FanFictionDotNet FanFiction.net]].net]] following large amounts of backlash. Despite this, the ''Snakes on a Sora'' Website/LiveJournal still holds [[http://snakesonasora.livejournal.com/tag/if%20i%20was%20your%20nazi an abridged sporking of it]] and WebVideo/TheFanFictionCritic did a review.
After about fourteen chapters, the author abandoned the
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A notorious little fic, ''If I Was Your Nazi'' takes Organization XIII from ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'' and sets them in a pseudo-HighSchoolAU UsefulNotes/NaziGermany while UsefulNotes/{{the Holocaust}} is in full swing, all while portraying them as heroic Nazis. Roxas and Axel run around being horrified by the Holocaust, yet they never do anything about it. Meanwhile, other characters from the game will show up from time to time with varying degrees of relevance to the plot.
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** None of the other Nazis seems to take issue with Roxas being gay, being a Jew, or opposing Hitler.[[note]]Notably, in real life, actor Creator/AntonDiffring was forced to flee Nazi Germany in 1938 for precisely that reason.[[/note]]
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** None of the other Nazis seems to take issue with Roxas being gay, being a Jew, or opposing Hitler.[[note]]Notably, in real life, actor Creator/AntonDiffring was forced to flee Nazi Germany in 1938 for precisely that reason.those reasons.[[/note]]
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A notorious little fic, ''If I Was Your Nazi'' takes Organization XIII from ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'' and sets them in a pseudo-HighSchoolAU UsefulNotes/NaziGermany while UsefulNotes/{{the Holocaust}} is in full swing... ''without'' giving up their DracoInLeatherPants[[invoked]] status. Roxas and Axel run around being horrified by the Holocaust, yet they never do anything about it. Meanwhile, other characters from the game will show up from time to time with varying degrees of relevance to the plot.
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A notorious little fic, ''If I Was Your Nazi'' takes Organization XIII from ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'' and sets them in a pseudo-HighSchoolAU UsefulNotes/NaziGermany while UsefulNotes/{{the Holocaust}} is in full swing... ''without'' giving up their DracoInLeatherPants[[invoked]] status.swing, all while portraying them as heroic Nazis. Roxas and Axel run around being horrified by the Holocaust, yet they never do anything about it. Meanwhile, other characters from the game will show up from time to time with varying degrees of relevance to the plot.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Rikku is depicted her as wanting to become the DistaffCounterpart of Hitler (according to Axel, that is).
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Rikku is depicted her here as wanting to become the DistaffCounterpart of Hitler (according to Axel, that is).
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Rikku is depicted her as wanting to become the DistaffCounterpart of Hitler (according to Axel, that is).
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* WhamLine: The very first chapter establishes Axel's connections with the Nazis:
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* WhamLine: The very first chapter establishes Axel's connections with the Nazis:Nazis right out of the gate:
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%%* WhamLine: "He frantically took a shortcut through a side alley and found himself at his destination. After walking through the doors, the redhead found himself face-to-face with Himmler, the head of the SS and Axel’s father."
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-->"He frantically took a shortcut through a side alley and found himself at his destination. After walking through the doors, the redhead found himself face-to-face with Himmler, the head of the SS and Axel’s father."
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* HistoricalVillainDowngrade: UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler is basically presented as [[WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons Mr. Burns]]. His speeches are also not the rousing, exciting, theatrical affairs they were in RealLife.
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** UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler is basically presented as [[WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons Mr. Burns]]. His speeches here are also not the rousing, exciting, theatrical affairs they were inRealLife.RealLife.
** Likewise, the most Heinrich Himmler does here is try to set Rikku and Axel up as a couple.
** UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler is basically presented as [[WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons Mr. Burns]]. His speeches here are also not the rousing, exciting, theatrical affairs they were in
** Likewise, the most Heinrich Himmler does here is try to set Rikku and Axel up as a couple.
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* InThePastEveryoneWillBeFamous: Axel's dad is Heinrich Himmler, who is portrayed in similar terms to [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Gendo Ikari]].
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* InThePastEveryoneWillBeFamous: Axel's dad is Heinrich Himmler, who is [[HistoricalVillainDowngrade portrayed in similar terms terms]] to [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Gendo Ikari]].
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* PlotHole: At the start of the fic, Roxas is ecstatic to be made an SS member, despite the fic making it very clear that he both [[PoliticallyCorrectHistory opposes the Nazi regime]] and belongs to at least two minorities who were persecuted at the time himself (Jewish people and homosexuals).
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** During the Second World War, the First World War was usually referred to as the Great War instead of UsefulNotes/WorldWarI.[[note]]It ''was'' sometimes called the First World War, but that was because it was considered the first war of its kind to occur.[[/note]]
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** During the Second World War, the First World War was usually referred to as the Great War instead of War, not UsefulNotes/WorldWarI.[[note]]It ''was'' sometimes called the First World War, but that was because it was considered the first war of its kind to occur.[[/note]]
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* ThoseWackyNazis: This fic manages to mostly ''avert'' this trope. The ''Kingdom Hearts'' characters are nowhere close to being stereotypical Nazis (with the possible exception of Seifer), though this is mostly because of the whole DracoInLeatherPants[[invoked]] thing going on with the Organization.
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* ThoseWackyNazis: This fic manages to mostly ''avert'' this trope.Averted for the most part. The ''Kingdom Hearts'' characters are nowhere close to being stereotypical Nazis (with the possible exception of Seifer), though this is mostly because of the whole DracoInLeatherPants[[invoked]] thing going on with the Organization.
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* ArtisticLicenseReligion: In the basement of the house of a Jewish family are a bunch of glass figurines of the Virgin Mary.
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* ArtisticLicenseReligion: In the basement of the house of a Jewish family are a bunch of glass figurines of the Virgin Mary. The Virgin Mary doesn't serve much of a role in Judaism, if at all. In fact, Jewish tradition states that she was an adulteress who didn't have a virgin birth.
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* TransplantedCharacterFic: The fanfic basically transplants ''Kingdom Hearts'' characters into a World War II-era Nazi Germany.
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* TransplantedCharacterFic: The fanfic basically transplants ''Kingdom Hearts'' characters into a World War II-era Nazi Germany.Germany during the Holocaust and rewrites them as Nazis.
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* ThoseWackyNazis: This fic manages to mostly ''avert'' this trope. The ''Kingdom Hearts'' characters are nowhere close to being stereotypical Nazis (with the possible exception of Seifer), mostly because of the whole DracoInLeatherPants thing going on with the Organization.
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* ThoseWackyNazis: This fic manages to mostly ''avert'' this trope. The ''Kingdom Hearts'' characters are nowhere close to being stereotypical Nazis (with the possible exception of Seifer), though this is mostly because of the whole DracoInLeatherPants DracoInLeatherPants[[invoked]] thing going on with the Organization.
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** None of the other Nazis seems to take issue with Roxas being gay, being a Jew, or opposing Hitler.
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** None of the other Nazis seems to take issue with Roxas being gay, being a Jew, or opposing Hitler.[[note]]Notably, in real life, actor Creator/AntonDiffring was forced to flee Nazi Germany in 1938 for precisely that reason.[[/note]]
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* HandWave: How did Roxas make it into the SS despite the fact that he is Jewish? Hitler overlooked his background just because he's the "ideal German". How can Axel be Himmler's son? Himmler has "so many illegitimate children", and he's just one of them.
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* HandWave: How did Roxas make it into the SS despite the fact that he is Jewish? Hitler overlooked his background just because he's the "ideal German". How can Axel be Himmler's son? Himmler has "so many illegitimate children", and he's he just happens to be one of them.
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A notorious little fic, ''If I Was Your Nazi'' takes Organization XIII from ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'' and sets them in a pseudo-HighSchoolAU UsefulNotes/NaziGermany while UsefulNotes/{{the Holocaust}} is in full swing... ''without'' giving up their DracoInLeatherPants[[invoked]] status. Roxas and Axel run around being horrified by the Holocaust, yet they never do anything about it. Meanwhile, other characters from the game will show up from time to time.
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A notorious little fic, ''If I Was Your Nazi'' takes Organization XIII from ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'' and sets them in a pseudo-HighSchoolAU UsefulNotes/NaziGermany while UsefulNotes/{{the Holocaust}} is in full swing... ''without'' giving up their DracoInLeatherPants[[invoked]] status. Roxas and Axel run around being horrified by the Holocaust, yet they never do anything about it. Meanwhile, other characters from the game will show up from time to time.
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* AdaptationalWimp: UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler is basically presented as [[WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons Mr. Burns]]. His speeches are also not the rousing, exciting, theatrical affairs they were in RealLife.
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* HandWave: How did Roxas make it into the SS despite the fact that he is Jewish? Hitler overlooked his background just because he's the "ideal German". How can Axel be Himmler's son? Himmler has "so many illegitimate children", as the author put it, and he's just one of them.
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* HandWave: How did Roxas make it into the SS despite the fact that he is Jewish? Hitler overlooked his background just because he's the "ideal German". How can Axel be Himmler's son? Himmler has "so many illegitimate children", as the author put it, and he's just one of them.
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** The Final Solution was implemented in 1942. This fic takes place in around 1940 when the Blitz would be going on. Although Jews were being killed in camps before the Final Solution was implemented, the story implies that it has been going on for ages already.
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** The Final Solution was implemented in 1942. This fic takes place in around circa 1940 when the Blitz would be going on. Although Jews were being killed in camps before the Final Solution was implemented, the story implies that it has been going on for ages already.
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** During the Second World War, the First World War was usually referred to as the Great War instead of UsefulNotes/WW1.[[note]]It ''was'' sometimes called the First World War, but that was because it was considered the first war of its kind to occur.[[/note]]
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** During the Second World War, the First World War was usually referred to as the Great War instead of UsefulNotes/WW1.UsefulNotes/WorldWarI.[[note]]It ''was'' sometimes called the First World War, but that was because it was considered the first war of its kind to occur.[[/note]]
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** During the Second World War, the First World War was called the 'Great War', not UsefulNotes/WW1.
** The Final Solution was implemented in 1942. This fic takes place in around 1940, when the Blitz was. Although Jews were being killed in camps before the Final Solution was implemented, the story implies that it has been going on for ages already.
** In chapter three, Axel claimed that Himmler's sister helped raise him. Himmler did have two brothers, but he didn't have any sisters.
*** Speaking of Himmler, the author claimed that it made sense for Axel to be Himmler's son because the latter had "so many illegitimate children". Himmler only had a set of twins with no records of any other illegitimate children outside of those two.
** In the last chapter, Roxas is upset with all of the {{Christmas Special}}s that are on TV. There were no Christmas specials in the 1940s and there wouldn't be any until the late fifties to early sixties. (Ironically, one of the earliest ones is [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/From_All_of_Us_to_All_of_You a Disney one]].)
** The Final Solution was implemented in 1942. This fic takes place in around 1940, when the Blitz was. Although Jews were being killed in camps before the Final Solution was implemented, the story implies that it has been going on for ages already.
** In chapter three, Axel claimed that Himmler's sister helped raise him. Himmler did have two brothers, but he didn't have any sisters.
*** Speaking of Himmler, the author claimed that it made sense for Axel to be Himmler's son because the latter had "so many illegitimate children". Himmler only had a set of twins with no records of any other illegitimate children outside of those two.
** In the last chapter, Roxas is upset with all of the {{Christmas Special}}s that are on TV. There were no Christmas specials in the 1940s and there wouldn't be any until the late fifties to early sixties. (Ironically, one of the earliest ones is [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/From_All_of_Us_to_All_of_You a Disney one]].)
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** During the Second World War, the First World War was usually referred to as the Great War instead of UsefulNotes/WW1.[[note]]It ''was'' sometimes called the 'Great War', not UsefulNotes/WW1.
First World War, but that was because it was considered the first war of its kind to occur.[[/note]]
** The Final Solution was implemented in 1942. This fic takes place in around1940, 1940 when the Blitz was.would be going on. Although Jews were being killed in camps before the Final Solution was implemented, the story implies that it has been going on for ages already.
** In chapter three, Axelclaimed claims that Himmler's sister helped raise him. Himmler did have had two brothers, brothers in real life, but he didn't have any sisters.
*** Speaking of Himmler, the author claimedno sisters. The story also claims that it made sense for Axel to be Himmler's son because the latter had "so many illegitimate children". Himmler only had a set of twins with no records of any other illegitimate children outside of those two.
** In the last chapter, Roxas is upset with all of the {{Christmas Special}}s that are on TV. There were no Christmas specials in the1940s 1940s, and there wouldn't be any until the late fifties '50s to early sixties.'60s. (Ironically, one of the earliest ones is [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/From_All_of_Us_to_All_of_You a Disney one]].)
** The Final Solution was implemented in 1942. This fic takes place in around
** In chapter three, Axel
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** During the Axel-Rikku date chapters, Axel and Rikku have more {{UST}} than Axel and Roxas. Hell, Rikku and Axel come across as practically {{Tsundere}} for each other.
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** During the Axel-Rikku date chapters, Axel and Rikku seem to have more {{UST}} than Axel and Roxas. Hell, Rikku Roxas, and Axel they come across as practically {{Tsundere}} for each other.
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** The story only seems to know four or five German words, which leads to "augen" ("eyes") being used as both a street name and the name of an Auschwitz guard.
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* TransplantedCharacterFic: The fanfic basically transplants ''Kingdom Hearts'' characters into a World War II-era Nazi Germany.
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** The author only seems to know four or five German words, which leads to "augen" ("eyes") being used for both a street name and the name of an Auschwitz guard.
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* HistoricalAU: The fic transplants ''Kingdom Hearts'' characters into UsefulNotes/NaziGermany.
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* DeadFic: The fanfic was ultimately left incomplete after fourteen chapters and then deleted not long afterwards.