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* GreatOffscreenWar: Exactly what happened in this AU is unknown, but it ties into the barely fleshed lore surrounding the Regis; namely, how humans sealed them away because they feared them. Somehow, this leads into how the Ancestor, the CoveredInScars Gardevoir who founded Astra's village, fled humans after being betrayed by one that she loved, taking all members of her species with her, and warded the village with Psychic defenses that only Dark-type Pokémon could penetrate. And it seems that since then, the Ralts line has otherwise disappeared from Hoenn.
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* GreatOffscreenWar: Exactly what happened in this AU is unknown, but it ties into the barely fleshed canon lore surrounding the Regis; namely, how humans sealed them away because they feared them. Somehow, this leads into how the Ancestor, the CoveredInScars Gardevoir who founded Astra's village, fled humans after being betrayed by one that she loved, taking all members of her species with her, and warded the village with Psychic defenses that only Dark-type Pokémon could penetrate. And it seems that since then, the Ralts line has otherwise disappeared from Hoenn.
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* SuddenlyBilingual: The night before Astra leaves, she touches the Ancestor's stone of power (implied to be Gardevoirite) and sees a flash of her memories meeting the human she would love for the first time. The next day, she is inexplicably capable of reading human words.
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* SuddenlyBilingual: SuddenlyAlwaysKnewThat: The night before Astra leaves, she touches the Ancestor's stone of power (implied to be Gardevoirite) and sees a flash of her memories meeting the human she would love for the first time. The next day, she is inexplicably capable of reading human words. words and familiar with certain parts of human civilization. She's unnerved when she realizes it, even if it is helpful.
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** According to Astra’s grandfather, the only way a Kirlia can evolve into Gardevoir is by going through intense stress. The Ancestor had a trial wherein she put any Kirlia interested in evolving through intense trauma to induce evolution, though the only ones who ever passed were Astra's parents.
** Astra's Treecko, May's Torchic, and Brendan's Mudkip all evolve during the battle against [[spoiler:the Exploud patriarch of Rusturf Tunnel]] after getting knocked around for a bit.
** According to Astra’s grandfather, the only way a Kirlia can evolve into Gardevoir is by going through intense stress. The Ancestor had a trial wherein she put any Kirlia interested in evolving through intense trauma to induce evolution, though the only ones who ever passed were Astra's parents.
** Astra's Treecko, May's Torchic, and Brendan's Mudkip all evolve during the battle against [[spoiler:the Exploud patriarch of Rusturf Tunnel]] after getting knocked around for a bit.
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* InstantExpert: Astra doesn't ''master'' the violin immediately, but she shows the expertise of a couple of months after practicing for only a couple of hours.
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** Another ''One Piece'' reference in Chapter 32, when May hums a sea shanty based off of Binks' Sake.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: Twice at the end of Chapter 18. First crosses with DramaticIrony, wherein Astra and May dismiss Team Aqua as a potential threat. The second is invoked, as they launch into crazy conspiracy theories about the important papers that the Devon worker was carrying.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: EntertaininglyWrong:
** Twice at the end of Chapter 18. First crosses with DramaticIrony, wherein Astra and May dismiss Team Aqua as a potential threat. The second is invoked, as they launch into crazy conspiracy theories about the important papers that the Devon worker wascarrying.carrying.
** In Chapter 28, after her class ends, Roxanne attempts to talk to Astra about her telepathy. But due to being in a lecture hall, she decides to be circuitous for the sake of subtlety. This has the unfortunate side effect of Astra mistakenly believing that Roxanne is talking about her supposed albinism.
** Twice at the end of Chapter 18. First crosses with DramaticIrony, wherein Astra and May dismiss Team Aqua as a potential threat. The second is invoked, as they launch into crazy conspiracy theories about the important papers that the Devon worker was
** In Chapter 28, after her class ends, Roxanne attempts to talk to Astra about her telepathy. But due to being in a lecture hall, she decides to be circuitous for the sake of subtlety. This has the unfortunate side effect of Astra mistakenly believing that Roxanne is talking about her supposed albinism.
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** Near the end of Chapter 24, the trio is watching a show that appears to be a version of ''Manga/OnePiece'' with an [[VideoGame/{{Splatoon}} Inkling]] as a prominent character. May also mentions that her favorite variation is one that involves [[Fanfic/ThisBites a guy with a talking snail]].
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** Near the end of Chapter 24, the trio is watching a show that appears to be a version of ''Manga/OnePiece'' with an [[VideoGame/{{Splatoon}} Inkling]] as a prominent character. May also mentions that her favorite variation is one that involves [[Fanfic/ThisBites a guy with a talking snail]]. The author's notes say that the former is a fan fiction idea that they'll never get around to writing, so they made it a show with three seasons and a movie in this story.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: In this story, May is very foul mouthed and aggressive on the surface, but insists on sharing a hotel room with Astra upon learning she was planning to sleep outside rather than getting a hotel room despite having only just met her.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: In this story, May is very foul mouthed foul-mouthed and aggressive on the surface, but insists on sharing a hotel room with Astra upon learning she was planning to sleep outside rather than getting a hotel room despite having only just met her.
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* ShoutOut: When Astra, Brendan, and May get sushi in Chapter 15 and Brendan orders Corphish, May's response is thus:
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** When Astra, Brendan, and May get sushi in Chapter 15 and Brendan orders Corphish, May's response is thus:
** When Astra, Brendan, and May get sushi in Chapter 15 and Brendan orders Corphish, May's response is thus:
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* CoverBlowingSuperpower: Astra's PsychicPowers, including telekinesis and telepathy, are potentially this. She pretends to give her Pokémon orders through violin playing while secretly using telepathy.
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* CoverBlowingSuperpower: Astra's PsychicPowers, including telekinesis and telepathy, are potentially this. She pretends to give avoids using most of her powers in public, only using telepathy to speak and disguising it as ventriloquism for normal conversation and musical direction for battling. Unfortunately, the ruse doesn't last: Pokémon orders experts like Professor Birch and Roxanne figure out her telepathy not long after meeting her, and Steven Stone sees through violin playing while secretly using telepathy.it the first time he hears her talk.
* DangerousForbiddenTechnique: The Ancestor's orb, implied to be [[spoiler:Shadow Gardevoirite]], contains some of the Ancestor's Gardevoir's memories and knowledge, as well as great and terrible power. Astra's mother used it to fight a threat to the village and died in the process, leaving behind an area of destroyed, darkened earth where nothing will ever grow again. The first time Astra truly tries diving into the orb's power, [[spoiler:she's overcome by murderous hatred towards people she's been angry at and causes a massive wake of similar destruction in the forest]]. As soon as she comes back to her senses, she's horrified.
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* SecretSecretKeeper: Professor Birch doesn't know that Astra is really a Pokémon, but he does realize after she leaves that she only speaks through {{Telepathy}}. It's also heavily implied that Steven Stone also sees through it immediately.
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* LadySwearsALot: May, and how. Norman's selfishness has given her a lifetime of issues and she doesn't hold back from showing what it's done to her.
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* GreatOffscreenWar: Exactly what happened in this AU is unknown, but we know two things for sure. First, the Ancestor, the CoveredInScars Gardevoir who founded Astra's village, fled humans after being betrayed by one that she loved, taking all members of her species with her, and warded the village with Psychic defenses that only Dark-type Pokémon could penetrate. And second, while nobody in Hoenn knows of the existence of the Ralts line, Brendan shows some kind of familiarity with the name, but can't place it.
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* GreatOffscreenWar: Exactly what happened in this AU is unknown, but we know two things for sure. First, it ties into the barely fleshed lore surrounding the Regis; namely, how humans sealed them away because they feared them. Somehow, this leads into how the Ancestor, the CoveredInScars Gardevoir who founded Astra's village, fled humans after being betrayed by one that she loved, taking all members of her species with her, and warded the village with Psychic defenses that only Dark-type Pokémon could penetrate. And second, while nobody in Hoenn knows of the existence of it seems that since then, the Ralts line, Brendan shows some kind of familiarity with the name, but can't place it.line has otherwise disappeared from Hoenn.
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The plot is an AU of Pokemon Emerald, where the Ralts that would be captured by [[FriendlyRivalry Wally]] dodges the Pokeball and flees instead. She then finds the discarded Pokeball and eventually decides to disguise herself and become a pokemon trainer, receiving the name 'Astra' as she does so.
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The plot is an AU of Pokemon Emerald, where the Ralts that would be captured by [[FriendlyRivalry Wally]] dodges the Pokeball and flees instead. She then finds the discarded Pokeball and eventually decides to disguise herself and become a pokemon trainer, Pokémon Trainer, receiving the name 'Astra' as she does so.
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* IHeardThat: In Chapter 18, after a Team Aqua Grunt sends out a Carvanha...onto the forest floor:
-->'''May''': ...do you think he knows there’s no water here?\\
'''Astra''': I don’t think we should tell him. He might get upset\\
'''Grunt''': ''(with CrossPoppingVeins)'' I can hear you!
-->'''May''': ...do you think he knows there’s no water here?\\
'''Astra''': I don’t think we should tell him. He might get upset\\
'''Grunt''': ''(with CrossPoppingVeins)'' I can hear you!
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* CurbStompBattle: Astra's first battle against May in Petalburg: with no grasp of the disadvantage that Grass has against Fire, May's Torchic beats Astra's Treecko with just two attacks.
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** Astra's first battle against May in Petalburg: with no grasp of the disadvantage that Grass has against Fire, May's Torchic beats Astra's Treecko with just twoattacks.attacks.
** May makes the fatal mistake of challenging Steven Stone to a battle and making Astra join her against him.
** Astra's first battle against May in Petalburg: with no grasp of the disadvantage that Grass has against Fire, May's Torchic beats Astra's Treecko with just two
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* SecretSecretKeeper: Professor Birch doesn't know that Astra is really a Pokémon, but he does realize after she leaves that she only speaks through {{Telepathy}}.
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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Astra and May have this reaction after May coerces Astra into a double battle against Steven Stone in Petalburg Woods, not knowing who he is. More specifically, after he sends out his Skarmory against their Torchic and Treecko.
-->'''Astra''': May?\\
'''May''': ''(gulping)'' Yeah?\\
'''Astra''': I hate you.\\
'''May''': That's fair.
-->'''Astra''': May?\\
'''May''': ''(gulping)'' Yeah?\\
'''Astra''': I hate you.\\
'''May''': That's fair.
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* HatesBeingAlone: Due to her father forcing their family to move around a lot May has subtly shown some issues with being separated from her current friends. An example being her getting visibly agitated when Brendan stays behind at Petalburg instead of traveling with her and Astra.
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* NiceGuy: Brendan is the first human that Astra becomes friends with and is one of the most friendliest and supportive members of the cast.
* NoNeedForNames: All of the inhabitants of the Pokémon village think this, due to the fact that they can simply identify each other with their Psychic Powers.
* NoNeedForNames: All of the inhabitants of the Pokémon village think this, due to the fact that they can simply identify each other with their Psychic Powers.
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* NiceGuy: Brendan is the first human that Astra becomes friends with and is one of the most friendliest and most supportive members of the cast.
* NoNeedForNames:All Most of the inhabitants of the Pokémon village think this, due to the fact that they can simply identify each other with their Psychic Powers.Powers. Once Astra gets her name, though, several of the other Ralts decide to name themselves.
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* PokemonSpeak: As Astra is a Ralts, she can only vocalize combinations of syllables in the word 'Ralts'. Luckily her telepathy lets her bypass this.
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* SecretKeeper: Brendan and May are the only ones in the main cast who know that Astra is actually using ventriloquism rather than her violin to command her Pokémon without appearing to speak. Of course, that's a subversion, as they don't know that she's actually using telepathy.
* SecretSecretKeeper: Professor Birch doesn't know that Astra is really a Pokémon, but he does realize after she leaves that she only speaks through {{Telepathy}}.
* SecretSecretKeeper: Professor Birch doesn't know that Astra is really a Pokémon, but he does realize after she leaves that she only speaks through {{Telepathy}}.
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* SureLetsGoWithThat: People tend to hand Astra the excuses that she needs to keep up her masquerade:
** In Chapter 12, the Petalburg Poké Mart clerk guesses that she's albino due to her white skin and red eyes, and that's why she keeps herself out of the sun.
** In Chapter 16, after she battles NPC trainer Lady Cindy, the latter asks if Astra had used her violin music to convey orders to her Pokémon. She adopts that excuse for every battle afterward.
** In Chapter 12, the Petalburg Poké Mart clerk guesses that she's albino due to her white skin and red eyes, and that's why she keeps herself out of the sun.
** In Chapter 16, after she battles NPC trainer Lady Cindy, the latter asks if Astra had used her violin music to convey orders to her Pokémon. She adopts that excuse for every battle afterward.
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* AdaptationalRelationshipChange: Norman seems to care far more about battling than about his family: he didn't stop moving between regions every other year when he married or when he had a daughter, and when he finally retired from traveling, he moved one last time, to Hoenn, and while his family settled in Littleroot Town, he basically lives in the Petalburg Gym he took over. Thus, May is not fond of him.
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* AdaptationalRelationshipChange: AdaptationalRelationshipChange:
** Norman seems to care far more about battling than about his family: he didn't stop moving between regions every other year when he married or when he had a daughter, and when he finally retired from traveling, he moved one last time, to Hoenn, and while his family settled in Littleroot Town, he basically lives in the Petalburg Gym he took over.Thus, He also has no patience for green trainers, not even his daughter, waving away anyone who doesn't have four badges already. Hence, May is not fond of him.him at all.
** In this story, Max is Professor Birch's second child rather than Norman's, making him Brendan's younger brother.
** Norman seems to care far more about battling than about his family: he didn't stop moving between regions every other year when he married or when he had a daughter, and when he finally retired from traveling, he moved one last time, to Hoenn, and while his family settled in Littleroot Town, he basically lives in the Petalburg Gym he took over.
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* DefeatMeansFriendship: An unusually aggressive and strong Nincanda unexpectedly showed submission and an eagerness to join Astra's party after she defeated him in Chapter 22.
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* FishOutOfWater: Astra's village's knowledge of humans comes largely from stories and occasional spy work. Astra didn't even know about timekeeping or money before she left, but she picks things up quickly.
* ForWantOfANail: The actual "nail" hasn't been identified yet, although it has been hinted at.
* ForWantOfANail: The actual "nail" hasn't been identified yet, although it has been hinted at.
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* FishOutOfWater: Astra's village's knowledge of humans comes largely from stories and occasional spy work. Astra didn't even know about timekeeping or money before she left, but she picks things up quickly.
*quickly. May tactlessly displays her incredulity about this multiple times in Chapter 15.
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* AdaptationalRelationshipChange: Norman seems to care far more about battling than about his family: he didn't stop moving between regions every other year when he married or when he had a daughter, and when he finally retired from traveling, he moved one last time, to Hoenn, and while his family settled in Littleroot Town, he basically lives in the Petalburg Gym he took over. Thus, May is not fond of him.
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* ShoutOut: When Astra, Brendan, and May get sushi in Chapter 15 and Brendan orders Corphish, May's response is thus:
-->'''May''': [[WesternAnimation/SpongebobSquarepants Big meaty claws?]] I can dig it.
* SuddenlyBilingual: The night before Astra leaves, she touches the Ancestor's stone of power (implied to be Gardevoirite) and sees a flash of her memories meeting the human she would love for the first time. The next day, she is inexplicably capable of reading human words.
-->'''May''': [[WesternAnimation/SpongebobSquarepants Big meaty claws?]] I can dig it.
* SuddenlyBilingual: The night before Astra leaves, she touches the Ancestor's stone of power (implied to be Gardevoirite) and sees a flash of her memories meeting the human she would love for the first time. The next day, she is inexplicably capable of reading human words.
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* AncestralWeapon: Astra's father was a guard of their village, a master with the spear. The day before Astra leaves on her journey, she brings the rusty spearhead to the smith, who reforges it into a knife for Astra to take with her.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast:
** Astra has shades of this; her parents pulled a HeroicSacrifice to save the village from an Alpha Mightyena before she was born, and she hates that she never knew them.
** The Ancestor, the Gardevoir who founded the village, faced betrayal at the hands of a human she loved, and she turned cold, bitter, and hateful for the rest of her life afterward.
** Astra has shades of this; her parents pulled a HeroicSacrifice to save the village from an Alpha Mightyena before she was born, and she hates that she never knew them.
** The Ancestor, the Gardevoir who founded the village, faced betrayal at the hands of a human she loved, and she turned cold, bitter, and hateful for the rest of her life afterward.
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The work can be found on [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3881578/chapters/8677237 AO3]], [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/32897/hyphen-pokemon-emerald Royal Road]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12210295/1/Hyphen Fanfiction.net]], [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.9539/ Sufficient Velocity]], and [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.312731/ Spacebattles]], though the author recommends [=AO3=] or Sufficient Velocity for proper formatting and discussion respectively.
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The work can be found on [[http://archiveofourown.[[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO]][[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3881578/chapters/8677237 AO3]], 3]], [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/32897/hyphen-pokemon-emerald Royal Road]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12210295/1/Hyphen Fanfiction.net]], [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.9539/ Sufficient Velocity]], and [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.312731/ Spacebattles]], though the author recommends [=AO3=] or Sufficient Velocity for proper formatting and discussion respectively.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: In this story, May is very foul mouthed and aggressive on the surface, but insists on sharing a hotel room with Astra upon learning she was planning to sleep outside rather than getting a hotel room despite having only just met her.
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* {{Tsundere}}: May is a Type A example, being often prickly and aggressive on the surface, but seeming to have a crush on Brendan based on her reactions when Astra asks her questions about him.
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!! ''Hyphen'' contains examples of:
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Astra co-stars in another [[FanFic fanfic]], ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-emerald.312731/post-68679730 Backslash]]'', a crossover between ''Hyphen'' and ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-backwards-grin-pokemon-mawile-si.847723/ A Backwards Grin]]'' by Flairina.
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Astra co-stars in another [[FanFic fanfic]], ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-emerald.312731/post-68679730 Backslash]]'', a crossover between ''Hyphen'' and ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-backwards-grin-pokemon-mawile-si.847723/ A Backwards Grin]]'' by Flairina.
Flairina. ''Backslash'' can also be found on [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/a-backwards-grin-pokemon-mawile-si.66235/page-45#post-16278988 Sufficient Velocity]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27170635/chapters/66359743 AO3]].
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Astra co-stars in another [[FanFic fanfic]], ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-emerald.312731/post-68679730 Backslash]]'', a crossover between Hyphen and ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-backwards-grin-pokemon-mawile-si.847723/ A Backwards Grin]]'' by Flairina..
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Astra co-stars in another [[FanFic fanfic]], ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-emerald.312731/post-68679730 Backslash]]'', a crossover between Hyphen ''Hyphen'' and ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-backwards-grin-pokemon-mawile-si.847723/ A Backwards Grin]]'' by Flairina..
Flairina.
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Astra co-stars in another [[FanFic]], [[FanFic fanfic]], ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-emerald.312731/post-68679730 Backslash]]''.
Backslash]]'', a crossover between Hyphen and ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-backwards-grin-pokemon-mawile-si.847723/ A Backwards Grin]]'' by Flairina..
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[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3881578/chapters/8677237 Hyphen]] is a {{Franchise/Pokemon}} fanfiction created by Dermonster.
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The work can be found on [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3881578/chapters/8677237 AO3]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12210295/1/Hyphen Fanfiction.net]], [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.9539/ Sufficient Velocity]], and [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.312731/ Spacebattles]], though the author recommends [=AO3=] or Sufficient Velocity for proper formatting and discussion respectively.
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The work can be found on [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3881578/chapters/8677237 AO3]], [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/32897/hyphen-pokemon-emerald Royal Road]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12210295/1/Hyphen Fanfiction.net]], [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.9539/ Sufficient Velocity]], and [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.312731/ Spacebattles]], though the author recommends [=AO3=] or Sufficient Velocity for proper formatting and discussion respectively.
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* DefeatMeansFriendship: An unusually aggressive and strong Nincanda unexpectedly showed submission and an eagerness to join Astra's party after she defeated him in Chapter 22.
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* HatesBeingAlone: Due to her father forcing their family to move around a lot May has subtly shown some issues with being separated from her current friends. An example being her getting visibly agitated when Brendan stays behind at Petalburg instead of travelling with her and Astra.
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* HatesBeingAlone: Due to her father forcing their family to move around a lot May has subtly shown some issues with being separated from her current friends. An example being her getting visibly agitated when Brendan stays behind at Petalburg instead of travelling traveling with her and Astra.
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: Astra often gets understandably uncomfortable at some human's lack of consideration to a Pokémon's feelings, such as when May captures a Lotad and initially plans to leave the area without letting it say goodbye to it's friends until Astra convinces her to allow it.
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: Astra often gets understandably uncomfortable at some human's lack of consideration to a Pokémon's feelings, such as when May captures a Lotad and initially plans to leave the area without letting it say goodbye to it's its friends until Astra convinces her to allow it.
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* MundaneObjectAmazement: Due to growing up in an isolated tribe in the woods Astra is fascinated by human culture and their creations, even getting amazed at something as mundane as ice cream and a street performer. A downside of this is that her companions often get concerned and suspicious at her startling lack of common knowledge.
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* MundaneObjectAmazement: Due to growing up in an isolated tribe Pokémon village in the woods Astra is fascinated by has a large curiosity for human culture and their creations, even getting amazed at something as mundane as ice cream and a street performer. A downside of this is that her companions often get concerned and suspicious at her startling lack of common knowledge.
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: Astra often gets uncomfortable at some human's lack of cafe to a Pokémon's feelings, such as when May captures a Lotad and initially plans to leave the area without letting it say goodbye to it's friends until she convinces her to.
* NiceGuy: Brendan is the first human that Astra becomes friends with and is one of the friendliest and supportive members of the cast.
* NiceGuy: Brendan is the first human that Astra becomes friends with and is one of the friendliest and supportive members of the cast.
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: Astra often gets understandably uncomfortable at some human's lack of cafe consideration to a Pokémon's feelings, such as when May captures a Lotad and initially plans to leave the area without letting it say goodbye to it's friends until she Astra convinces her to.
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* NiceGuy: Brendan is the first human that Astra becomes friends with and is one of the most friendliest and supportive members of the cast.
* NiceGuy: Brendan is the first human that Astra becomes friends with and is one of the most friendliest and supportive members of the cast.
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* MasterOfIllusion: Astra uses illusions to hide her non-human features. She also makes herself appear shorter to hide the sudden growth spurt from her evolution.
* MundaneObjectAmazement: Due to growing up in an isolated tribe in the woods Astra is fascinated by human culture and their creations, even getting amazed at something as mundane as ice cream and street performer. A downside of this is that her companions often get concerned and suspicious at her startling lack of common knowledge.
* MundaneObjectAmazement: Due to growing up in an isolated tribe in the woods Astra is fascinated by human culture and their creations, even getting amazed at something as mundane as ice cream and street performer. A downside of this is that her companions often get concerned and suspicious at her startling lack of common knowledge.
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* MasterOfIllusion: Astra uses illusions to hide her non-human features. She also makes herself appear shorter to hide the sudden growth spurt gained from her evolution.
* MundaneObjectAmazement: Due to growing up in an isolated tribe in the woods Astra is fascinated by human culture and their creations, even getting amazed at something as mundane as ice cream and a street performer. A downside of this is that her companions often get concerned and suspicious at her startling lack of common knowledge.
* MundaneObjectAmazement: Due to growing up in an isolated tribe in the woods Astra is fascinated by human culture and their creations, even getting amazed at something as mundane as ice cream and a street performer. A downside of this is that her companions often get concerned and suspicious at her startling lack of common knowledge.
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The plot is an AU of Pokemon Emerald, where the Ralts that would be captured by [[FriendlyRivalry Wally]] dodges the pokeball and flees instead. She then finds the discarded pokeball and eventually decides to disguise herself and become a pokemon trainer, recieving the name 'Astra' as she does so.
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The plot is an AU of Pokemon Emerald, where the Ralts that would be captured by [[FriendlyRivalry Wally]] dodges the pokeball Pokeball and flees instead. She then finds the discarded pokeball Pokeball and eventually decides to disguise herself and become a pokemon trainer, recieving receiving the name 'Astra' as she does so.
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* FanArt: It's technically comissioned, but there are many illustrations of scenes in the story from [=Dexexe1234=], creator of Webcomic/TerreneSpire.
* HatesBeingAlone: Due to her father forcing their family to move around a lot May has some issues with being separated from her current friends just as getting visibly agitated when Brendan stays behind at Petalburg instead of travelling with her and Astra.
* HelloInsertNameHere: Astra recieves her name only the night before she visits Professor Birch.
* HatesBeingAlone: Due to her father forcing their family to move around a lot May has some issues with being separated from her current friends just as getting visibly agitated when Brendan stays behind at Petalburg instead of travelling with her and Astra.
* HelloInsertNameHere: Astra recieves her name only the night before she visits Professor Birch.
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* FanArt: It's technically comissioned, commissioned, but there are many illustrations of scenes in the story from [=Dexexe1234=], creator of Webcomic/TerreneSpire.
* HatesBeingAlone: Due to her father forcing their family to move around a lot May has subtly shown some issues with being separated from her currentfriends just as friends. An example being her getting visibly agitated when Brendan stays behind at Petalburg instead of travelling with her and Astra.
* HelloInsertNameHere: Astrarecieves receives her name only the night before she visits Professor Birch.Birch.
* InnocentlyInsensitive: Astra often gets uncomfortable at some human's lack of cafe to a Pokémon's feelings, such as when May captures a Lotad and initially plans to leave the area without letting it say goodbye to it's friends until she convinces her to.
* HatesBeingAlone: Due to her father forcing their family to move around a lot May has subtly shown some issues with being separated from her current
* HelloInsertNameHere: Astra
* InnocentlyInsensitive: Astra often gets uncomfortable at some human's lack of cafe to a Pokémon's feelings, such as when May captures a Lotad and initially plans to leave the area without letting it say goodbye to it's friends until she convinces her to.
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* MundaneObjectAmazement: Due to growing up in an isolated tribe in the woods Astra is fascinated by human culture and their creations, even getting amazed at something as mundane as ice cream and street performer. A downside of this is that her companions often get concerned and suspicious at her startling lack of common knowledge.