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* ChallengeSeeker: Taylor is unhappy to find herself in a 1-vs-4 tournament match with no reinforcements or substitutions allowed. She would really prefer to face ''eight'' opponents for a proper workout. When her requests is denied, she decides to turn into a small kitten to keep the fight more challenging.
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* ChallengeSeeker: Taylor is unhappy to find herself in a 1-vs-4 tournament match with no reinforcements or substitutions allowed. She would really prefer to face ''eight'' opponents for a proper workout. When her requests request is denied, she decides to turn into a small kitten to keep the fight more challenging.
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''Hybrid Hive: Eat Shard?'' is a CrossOver fanfiction between ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' and ''Anime/MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha'', published by [=ComptrWz=] on Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hybrid-hive-eat-shard-worm-mgln-complete.55056/ here]]), and is [[CompletedFic complete]].
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''Hybrid Hive: Eat Shard?'' is a CrossOver fanfiction between ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' and ''Anime/MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha'', published by [=ComptrWz=] on Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom Website/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hybrid-hive-eat-shard-worm-mgln-complete.55056/ here]]), and is [[CompletedFic complete]].
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* TryToFitThatOnABusinessCard: Hayate Kagami is astounded to be introduced to '[[spoiler:Her Royal Majesty Queen Minerva, Iridescent Will of Please Ignore the Secret Kingdom, the Endslayer and the Hopebringer, Destroyer of Worlds, Liberator of Planets, Consumer of Star Systems, Bane of the Shards, Defender of Humanity, Royal Maintenance Technician, Reluctant Leader of the Realm, Accidental Goddess of Escalation]]', and doubly so upon hearing the explanation of each title.
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* TryToFitThatOnABusinessCard: Hayate Kagami Yagami is astounded to be introduced to '[[spoiler:Her Royal Majesty Queen Minerva, Iridescent Will of Please Ignore the Secret Kingdom, the Endslayer and the Hopebringer, Destroyer of Worlds, Liberator of Planets, Consumer of Star Systems, Bane of the Shards, Defender of Humanity, Royal Maintenance Technician, Reluctant Leader of the Realm, Accidental Goddess of Escalation]]', and doubly so upon hearing the explanation of each title.
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--> '''Rainbow:''' Hello mister! You dropped your arm, and you shouldn't leave boom boxes sitting around like that.
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--> '''Taylor:''' Right. Remote detonation is a last resort thing.
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* ChallengeSeeker: Taylor is unhappy to find herself in a 1-vs-4 tournament match with no reinforcements or substitutions allowed. She would really prefer to face ''eight'' opponents for a proper workout.
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* ChallengeSeeker: Taylor is unhappy to find herself in a 1-vs-4 tournament match with no reinforcements or substitutions allowed. She would really prefer to face ''eight'' opponents for a proper workout. When her requests is denied, she decides to turn into a small kitten to keep the fight more challenging.
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* ChallengeSeeker: Taylor is unhappy to find herself in a 1-vs-4 tournament match with no reinforcements or substitutions allowed. She would really prefer to face ''eight'' opponents for a proper workout.
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: Missy gets a special shredder to help deal with her fan mail, with settings ranging from "cut into strips" all the way up to "reduce to dust and then ignite the dust in a contained explosion".
--> Needless to say, she currently had it in that mode, because who wouldn't? Beyond those tired of the thumps of the explosions, anyway.
--> Needless to say, she currently had it in that mode, because who wouldn't? Beyond those tired of the thumps of the explosions, anyway.
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** Missy gets a special shredder to help deal with her fan mail, with settings ranging from "cut into strips" all the way up to "reduce to dust and then ignite the dust in a contained explosion".
--> ---> Needless to say, she currently had it in that mode, because who wouldn't? Beyond those tired of the thumps of the explosions, anyway.anyway.
** Hive designs an orbital insertion pod that passes 99 out of a hundred safety tests. But the range of things she tests for is far beyond real-world usage.
---> "The one failure was when the pod was intentionally fired into a supervolcano ready to erupt, triggering the eruption, with an 'unfolded'[[note]]ie destroying all dimensions in the manner of Flechette's power[[/note]] asteroid coming down behind it."
** Missy gets a special shredder to help deal with her fan mail, with settings ranging from "cut into strips" all the way up to "reduce to dust and then ignite the dust in a contained explosion".
** Hive designs an orbital insertion pod that passes 99 out of a hundred safety tests. But the range of things she tests for is far beyond real-world usage.
---> "The one failure was when the pod was intentionally fired into a supervolcano ready to erupt, triggering the eruption, with an 'unfolded'[[note]]ie destroying all dimensions in the manner of Flechette's power[[/note]] asteroid coming down behind it."
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* DeadMansSwitch: When building a device for a young child, Taylor makes sure to restrict it to defensive spells -- with the caveat that if the user is attacked and rendered unconscious, all capabilities are unlocked until the situation is resolved.
--> Not quite to the degree that Hive's systems, or even Dragon's, would go to, but still a surprise for anyone who triggered it.
--> Not quite to the degree that Hive's systems, or even Dragon's, would go to, but still a surprise for anyone who triggered it.
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* DeadMansSwitch: DeadMansSwitch:
** When building a device for a young child, Taylor makes sure to restrict it to defensive spells -- with the caveat that if the user is attacked and rendered unconscious, all capabilities are unlocked until the situation is resolved.
--> ---> Not quite to the degree that Hive's systems, or even Dragon's, would go to, but still a surprise for anyone who triggered it.it.
** Taylor is forced to intervene unexpectedly on an alternate Earth after a parahuman sets up a whole arsenal of weapons of mass destruction to go off if he dies, as a precaution against assassination, then foolishly gets drunk and is killed by a bull, without anyone else being at fault.
---> Their rival had immediately gone into a panic because the infection was supposed to be a 'released ''somewhere'', then spread until suddenly people start falling over dead' type thing. Hive had spotted the whole thing a couple months ago, but the shard device kept tabs on the infectious agents and made it difficult to 'disarm' them ahead of time.
** When building a device for a young child, Taylor makes sure to restrict it to defensive spells -- with the caveat that if the user is attacked and rendered unconscious, all capabilities are unlocked until the situation is resolved.
** Taylor is forced to intervene unexpectedly on an alternate Earth after a parahuman sets up a whole arsenal of weapons of mass destruction to go off if he dies, as a precaution against assassination, then foolishly gets drunk and is killed by a bull, without anyone else being at fault.
---> Their rival had immediately gone into a panic because the infection was supposed to be a 'released ''somewhere'', then spread until suddenly people start falling over dead' type thing. Hive had spotted the whole thing a couple months ago, but the shard device kept tabs on the infectious agents and made it difficult to 'disarm' them ahead of time.
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* DeadMansSwitch: When building a device for a young child, Taylor makes sure to restrict it to defensive spells -- with the caveat that if the user is attacked and rendered unconscious, all capabilities are unlocked until the situation is resolved.
--> Not quite to the degree that Hive's systems, or even Dragon's, would go to, but still a surprise for anyone who triggered it.
--> Not quite to the degree that Hive's systems, or even Dragon's, would go to, but still a surprise for anyone who triggered it.
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--> '''Rainbow:''' It’s just throwing little bits of metal. I don’t think that’s a good thing.
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--> '''Rainbow:''' It’s just throwing little bits of metal. I don’t think that’s that's a good thing.thing.
* ImprobableWeaponUser: Based on lessons learned from shards like Uber's, the kingdom's automatons can devise a combat style for any weapon. ''Any'' weapon.
--> '''Fate:''' To test them, I asked about options for improvising a weapon out of a child's sippy cup and got a surprisingly detailed training plan that included strategies for varying levels of 'filled' and different contained liquids.
* ImprobableWeaponUser: Based on lessons learned from shards like Uber's, the kingdom's automatons can devise a combat style for any weapon. ''Any'' weapon.
--> '''Fate:''' To test them, I asked about options for improvising a weapon out of a child's sippy cup and got a surprisingly detailed training plan that included strategies for varying levels of 'filled' and different contained liquids.
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** With Taylor's help, Uber and Leet could build actual lightsabers, but they know from experience that it's a horribly impractical design for fighting with.
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** With Taylor's help, Uber and Leet could build actual lightsabers, but they know from experience that it's a horribly impractical design for fighting with. [[spoiler:When the TSAB finally arrives and gets to try assembling their own "cutting tool" lightsabers, they have to agree that despite the cool factor, they're not actually likely to be a good choice in combat, being ineffective against magic and inferior to a simple shield for defence.]]
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* HappinessInSlavery: Taylor is annoyed to realise that her attempt at writing laws left enough leeway that people are able to voluntarily become pets, servants, or even slaves. And she only realises because of people wanting to become ''her'' servants.
--> '''Taylor:''' There are only a handful of 'pet' and 'slave' requests in the queue and they haven't gotten very far, but apparently being a personal servant to the Queen is seen as a good thing among some groups.
--> '''Taylor:''' There are only a handful of 'pet' and 'slave' requests in the queue and they haven't gotten very far, but apparently being a personal servant to the Queen is seen as a good thing among some groups.
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* TryToFitThatOnABusinessCard: Hayate Kagami is astounded to be introduced to '[[spoiler:Her Royal Majesty Queen Minerva, Iridescent Will of Please Ignore the Secret Kingdom, the Endslayer and the Hopebringer, Destroyer of Worlds, Liberator of Planets, Consumer of Star Systems, Bane of the Shards, Defender of Humanity, Royal Maintenance Technician, Reluctant Leader of the Realm, Accidental Goddess of Escalation]]', and doubly so upon hearing the explanation of each title.
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* InstantExpert: One of the few ways that parahuman powers work better than magic is that they're easier to start using immediately -- because the shards aren't bothered by altering someone's brain to make things instinctive. A parahuman might be able to start flying immediately with reasonable success, whereas a mage who wants to fly will first need to master an assortment of protective and life support spells for when they inevitably bury themselves in a cliff, launch into orbit, or splash down in the ocean. Even then, getting a handle on three-dimensional movement can take days or weeks of practice, and it just doesn't come naturally to some people at all, [[spoiler:such as Amy, who instead diverges into wall-running and strength-boosted jumps]].
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* DangerousForbiddenTechnique: Many of the techniques learned by consuming shards are rated as just too dangerous to use. The shards themselves apparently didn't care much about the risks inherent in tearing someone apart into individual atoms and rebuilding them later, or constructing bombs that could tear holes in the dimensional fabric, but for those who care about the long-term stability and survival of the planet, lots of things are off limits.
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* PercussiveTherapy: After facing the emotional and political entanglements of [[spoiler:Amy's desire to give up her powers]], Taylor starts wondering if ''intentionally'' destroying a planet is good for stress relief.
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** After facing the emotional and political entanglements of [[spoiler:Amy's desire to give up her powers]], Taylor starts wondering if ''intentionally'' destroying a planet is good for stressrelief.relief.
** One of the attractions at Taylor's theme park world is [[spoiler:firing all manner of weapons at ''Behemoth'', who has been transferred there. None of it is powerful enough to do him any harm, but he doesn't mind -- a fight is his "natural habitat" -- and it's fun for the guests.]]
** After facing the emotional and political entanglements of [[spoiler:Amy's desire to give up her powers]], Taylor starts wondering if ''intentionally'' destroying a planet is good for stress
** One of the attractions at Taylor's theme park world is [[spoiler:firing all manner of weapons at ''Behemoth'', who has been transferred there. None of it is powerful enough to do him any harm, but he doesn't mind -- a fight is his "natural habitat" -- and it's fun for the guests.]]
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* IThoughtEveryoneCouldDoThat: Taylor is an absolute monster when it comes to multi-tasking, on-the-fly spell editing, and magical combat in general -- but she doesn't realise that. It's only when Vista gains her device that Taylor gets some perspective on how far outside the norm she actually is. Even then, she assumes that a properly trained mage would trounce her, but Hive strongly doubts that, when Taylor can control hordes of Endbringer-grade drones from another dimension. Possibly a dimension that pure mana techniques can't easily access.
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* IThoughtEveryoneCouldDoThat: Taylor is an absolute monster when it comes to multi-tasking, on-the-fly spell editing, and magical combat in general -- but she doesn't realise that. It's only when Vista gains her device that Taylor gets some perspective on how far outside the norm she actually is. Even then, she assumes that a properly trained mage would trounce her, but Hive strongly doubts that, when Taylor can control hordes of Endbringer-grade drones from while sipping tea in another dimension. Possibly a dimension that pure mana techniques can't easily access. When she devises a standardised system of testing and ranking capabilities, from 0 to 100[[note]]although actually scoring 0 or 100 is intended to be impossible, with even a corpse being resilient enough against weak attacks to score a quarter of a point[[/note]], she is the only one surprised by her result: [[spoiler:93, compared to others scoring between 30 and 60]].
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** Taken to a somewhat ludicrous extent with Taylor/Queen Minerva's personal ship "workshop one" [[spoiler: it is a Dyson sphere.]]
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** Taken to a somewhat ludicrous extent with Taylor/Queen Minerva's personal ship "workshop one" [[spoiler: it one". [[spoiler:It is a Dyson sphere.]]
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* YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame: When Legend indicates that Ethan's past as Madcap may have been morally right even if legally wrong, Ethan is disappointed. He's worked hard to build a specific reputation, and now it's officially gone.
