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* AdaptationExpansion: The story gives a very good explanation for why Konata and Misao dislike each other: Misao's cousin is Sakura Tanahashi, AKA the girl who nearly killed Kagami.
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* AdaptationExpansion: The story gives a very good explanation for why Konata and Misao dislike each other: Misao's cousin is Sakura Tanahashi, AKA Takahashi, aka the girl who nearly killed Kagami.Kagami in the previous story.
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* AdaptationExpansion: The story gives a very good explanation for why Konata and Misao dislike each other: Misao's cousin is Sakura Tanahashi, AKA the girl who nearly killed Kagami.
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** In chapter 2, Konata and Patricia briefly discuss episode 12 of ''VisualNovel/{{CLANNAD}}'', and how sad it was. The author's notes at the end of the chapter touch upon this, even mentioning [[spoiler:Kotomi's breakdown]].
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** In chapter 2, Konata and Patricia briefly discuss episode 12 of ''VisualNovel/{{CLANNAD}}'', and how sad it was. The author's notes at the end of the chapter touch upon this, even mentioning [[spoiler:Kotomi's breakdown]].a character having an emotional breakdown (though not mentioning [[spoiler:Kotomi]] by name).
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** In chapter 2, Konata and Patricia briefly discuss episode 12 of ''VisualNovel/CLANNAD'', and how sad it was. The author's notes at the end of the chapter touch upon this, even mentioning [[spoiler:Kotomi's breakdown]].
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** In chapter 2, Konata and Patricia briefly discuss episode 12 of ''VisualNovel/CLANNAD'', ''VisualNovel/{{CLANNAD}}'', and how sad it was. The author's notes at the end of the chapter touch upon this, even mentioning [[spoiler:Kotomi's breakdown]].
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* CosmicPlaything: Lampshaded when Tsukasa sprains her ankle.
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* CosmicPlaything: Lampshaded when Tsukasa sprains breaks her ankle.ankle in Chapter 14.
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* CosmicPlaything: Lampshaded when Tsukasa sprains her ankle.
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** In chapter 1, Konata says that she and the gang will be seeing the ''Manga/Bleach'' film, ''Diamond Dust Rebellion'', which was released at the time of the story's setting. They do indeed see it in Chapter 6 along with a few other friends.
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** In chapter 1, Konata says that she and the gang will be seeing the ''Manga/Bleach'' film, ''Diamond Dust Rebellion'', ''Anime/BleachTheDiamondDustRebellion'', which was released at the time of the story's setting. They do indeed see it in Chapter 6 along with a few other friends.
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* CannotSpitItOut: Yutaka was extremely hesitant to confess to Minami. Subverted in that ''Minami'' also couldn't spit it out.
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* CannotSpitItOut: Yutaka was extremely hesitant to confess to Minami. Subverted Partially subverted in that ''Minami'' also couldn't Minami ''also'' could not spit it out.
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** Later in the fic, Tsukasa and Miyuki see ''[[Film/NationalTreasure National Treasure 2: Book of Secrets]]'', while Konata and Kagami see a ''Franchise/SuperSentai'' film.
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** Later in the fic, Tsukasa Yutaka and Miyuki Minami see ''[[Film/NationalTreasure National Treasure 2: Book of Secrets]]'', while Konata and Kagami see a ''Franchise/SuperSentai'' film.
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** Later in the fic, Tsukasa and Miyuki see ''Film/IAmLegend'', while Konata and Kagami see a ''Franchise/SuperSentai'' film.
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** Later in the fic, Tsukasa and Miyuki see ''Film/IAmLegend'', ''[[Film/NationalTreasure National Treasure 2: Book of Secrets]]'', while Konata and Kagami see a ''Franchise/SuperSentai'' film.
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** In chapter 2, Konata and Patricia briefly discuss episode 12 of ''Anime/Clannad'', and how sad it was. The author's notes at the end of the chapter touch upon this, even mentioning [[spoiler:Kotomi's breakdown]].
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** In chapter 2, Konata and Patricia briefly discuss episode 12 of ''Anime/Clannad'', ''VisualNovel/CLANNAD'', and how sad it was. The author's notes at the end of the chapter touch upon this, even mentioning [[spoiler:Kotomi's breakdown]].
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** In chapter 2, Konata and Patricia briefly discuss episode 12 of ''VisualNovel/Clannad'', and how sad it was. The author's notes at the end of the chapter touch upon this, even mentioning [[spoiler:Kotomi's breakdown]].
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** In chapter 2, Konata and Patricia briefly discuss episode 12 of ''VisualNovel/Clannad'', ''Anime/Clannad'', and how sad it was. The author's notes at the end of the chapter touch upon this, even mentioning [[spoiler:Kotomi's breakdown]].
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** Ayaka Suzuki and Nanami Tanaka also return in this story after being introduced in The Day Everything Changed
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** Ayaka Suzuki and Nanami Tanaka also return in this story after being introduced in The Day Everything ChangedChanged.
* ShoutOut: Numerous to movies and television series:
** In chapter 1, Konata says that she and the gang will be seeing the ''Manga/Bleach'' film, ''Diamond Dust Rebellion'', which was released at the time of the story's setting. They do indeed see it in Chapter 6 along with a few other friends.
** In chapter 2, Konata and Patricia briefly discuss episode 12 of ''VisualNovel/Clannad'', and how sad it was. The author's notes at the end of the chapter touch upon this, even mentioning [[spoiler:Kotomi's breakdown]].
** Later in the fic, Tsukasa and Miyuki see ''Film/IAmLegend'', while Konata and Kagami see a ''Franchise/SuperSentai'' film.
* ShoutOut: Numerous to movies and television series:
** In chapter 1, Konata says that she and the gang will be seeing the ''Manga/Bleach'' film, ''Diamond Dust Rebellion'', which was released at the time of the story's setting. They do indeed see it in Chapter 6 along with a few other friends.
** In chapter 2, Konata and Patricia briefly discuss episode 12 of ''VisualNovel/Clannad'', and how sad it was. The author's notes at the end of the chapter touch upon this, even mentioning [[spoiler:Kotomi's breakdown]].
** Later in the fic, Tsukasa and Miyuki see ''Film/IAmLegend'', while Konata and Kagami see a ''Franchise/SuperSentai'' film.
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Konata and Kagami have now been dating for about 2 years. And there are romantic feelings beginning to blossom between 2 other pairings in the story, in this case, Yutaka and Minami, and Tsukasa and Miyuki.
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Konata and Kagami have now been dating for about 2 years.years, and their relationship has become common knowledge, a popular topic amongst the students. And there are romantic feelings beginning to blossom between 2 other pairings in the story, in this case, Yutaka and Minami, and Tsukasa and Miyuki.
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* BerserkButton: Kagami comes very close to punching Misao when the latter speaks ill of Konata. Fortunately, Ayano successfully played peacekeeper.
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** Ayaka and Nanami also return in this story after being introduced in The Day Everything Changed
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6985585/1/Holiday-Vacation Holiday Vacation]]'' is the second part of a 3 fanfic Konata and Kagami story arc, which was written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2689121/Mr-FanficGuy Mr. Fanfic Guy]]. It ended up coming right between ''Fanfic/TheDayEverythingChanged'' and ''Fanfic/LuckyStarAfterStory''. The first chapter was uploaded between May 12, 2011 and the final chapter was published on November 10, 2011, completing an 18 chapter run. Four days later, the first chapter of Lucky Star: After Story was uploaded.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6985585/1/Holiday-Vacation Holiday Vacation]]'' is the second part of a 3 fanfic Konata and Kagami story arc, which was written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2689121/Mr-FanficGuy Mr. Fanfic Guy]]. It ended up coming right between ''Fanfic/TheDayEverythingChanged'' and ''Fanfic/LuckyStarAfterStory''. The first chapter was uploaded between on May 12, 2011 and the final chapter was published on November 10, 2011, completing an 18 chapter run. Four days later, the first chapter of Lucky Star: After Story was uploaded.
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* OfficialCouple: Konata and Kagami, and later Yutaka and Minami and Tsukasa and Miyuki.
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* TrueCompanions: Mariko and Chiyoko.
* TrueCompanions: Mariko and Chiyoko.
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*[[OriginalCharacter Original Characters]]: Mariko Aratani and Chiyoko Sakamoto are both first mentioned in Chapter 5, and they were officially introduced in Chapter 11.
* Ayaka and Nanami also return in this story after being introduced in The Day Everything Changed
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*[[OriginalCharacter Original Characters]]: Mariko Aratani and Chiyoko Sakamoto are both first mentioned in Chapter 5, and they were officially introduced in Chapter 11.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6985585/1/Holiday-Vacation Holiday Vacation]]'' is the second part of a 3 fanfic Konata and Kagami story arc, which was written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2689121/Mr-FanficGuy Mr. Fanfic Guy]]. The first chapter was uploaded between May 12, 2011 and the final chapter was published on November 10, 2011, completing an 18 chapter run. Four days later, the first chapter of Fanfic/LuckyStarAfterStory was uploaded.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6985585/1/Holiday-Vacation Holiday Vacation]]'' is the second part of a 3 fanfic Konata and Kagami story arc, which was written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2689121/Mr-FanficGuy Mr. Fanfic Guy]]. It ended up coming right between ''Fanfic/TheDayEverythingChanged'' and ''Fanfic/LuckyStarAfterStory''. The first chapter was uploaded between May 12, 2011 and the final chapter was published on November 10, 2011, completing an 18 chapter run. Four days later, the first chapter of Fanfic/LuckyStarAfterStory Lucky Star: After Story was uploaded.
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Konata and Kagami have now been dating for about 2 years. And there are romantic feelings beginning to blossom between 2 other pairings in the story, in this case, Yutaka and Minami, and Tsukasa and Miyuki.Miyuki.
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[[TwentyMinutesIntoThePast The story begins on Friday December 21, 2007 and ends on Friday January 4, 2008]], taking place about 2½ years after the events of The Day Everything Changed
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[[TwentyMinutesIntoThePast The story begins on Friday December 21, 2007 and ends on Friday January 4, 2008]], taking place about 2½ years after the events of The Day Everything ChangedChanged. [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin As the title implies, the story is about the adventures the girls have on their Christmas break]].
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Konata and Kagami have now been dating for about 2 years. And there are romantic feelings beginning to blossom between 2 other pairings in the story, in this case, Yutaka and Minami, and Tsukasa and Miyuki.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6985585/1/Holiday-Vacation Holiday Vacation]]'' is the second part of a 3 fanfic Konata and Kagami story arc, which was written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2689121/Mr-FanficGuy Mr. Fanfic Guy]]. The first chapter was uploaded between May 12, 2011 and the final chapter was published on November 10, 2011, completing an 18 chapter run. Four days later, the first chapter of Fanfic/LuckyStarAfterStory was uploaded.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6985585/1/Holiday-Vacation Holiday Vacation]]'' is the second part of a 3 fanfic Konata and Kagami story arc, which was written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2689121/Mr-FanficGuy Mr. Fanfic Guy]]. The first chapter was uploaded between May 12, 2011 and the final chapter was published on November 10, 2011, completing an 18 chapter run. Four days later, the first chapter of Fanfic/LuckyStarAfterStory was uploaded.uploaded.
[[TwentyMinutesIntoThePast The story begins on Friday December 21, 2007 and ends on Friday January 4, 2008]], taking place about 2½ years after the events of The Day Everything Changed
[[TwentyMinutesIntoThePast The story begins on Friday December 21, 2007 and ends on Friday January 4, 2008]], taking place about 2½ years after the events of The Day Everything Changed
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6985585/1/Holiday-Vacation Holiday Vacation]]'' is the second part of a 3 fanfic Konata and Kagami story arc, which was written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2689121/Mr-FanficGuy Mr. Fanfic Guy]]. The first chapter was uploaded between May 12, 2011 and the final chapter was published on November 10, 2011, completing an 18 chapter run. Four days later, the first chapter of Fanfic/LuckyStarAfterStory was uploaded.
