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* ShoutOut: Gebura's power was inspired on Leona Kingscholar of ''Twisted Wonderland''.
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* ShoutOut: Gebura's power was inspired on Leona Kingscholar of ''Twisted Wonderland''. Unlike him, however, she can also [[spoiler: use ThePowerOfGlass]].
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* CharacterDevelopment: Angela [[DiscussedTrope thinks about this]] with Hod and Roland.
--> Angela thinks that Roland has grown. If this were to be happening when he first arrived, he wouldn't offer help like this. [...] And with that, Angela thinks that Hod is also no longer how she was when she awoke.
--> Angela thinks that Roland has grown. If this were to be happening when he first arrived, he wouldn't offer help like this. [...] And with that, Angela thinks that Hod is also no longer how she was when she awoke.
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** Notably, this is also the only thing that [[spoiler: Netzach hears once his 'light goes out'. This leads to them having to practice together]].
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* ByThePowerOfGreyskull: After some practice, [[spoiler: Yesod and Netzach eventually manage to keep the latter's power in check behind a trigger phrase only these two know. Questions understandably arise once someone other than Yesod triggers Netzach to go on his second rampage]].
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* EmptyEyes: [[spoiler: Netzach, when he's mindless. His [[FrozenFace face also seems stuck at the same blank expression]]]].
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* EmptyEyes: [[spoiler: Netzach, when he's mindless. His [[FrozenFace face also seems stuck at the same blank expression]]]].expression]]. His silence along with this is what sets others off]].
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** [[spoiler: Tiphereth enters the scene just after a mindless Netzach attacks Hod and captures him]].
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** [[spoiler: Tiphereth enters the scene just after a mindless Netzach attacks Hod and captures him]]. Even the chapter description says 'Also, Tiphereth is a badass'.
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Tiphereth enters the scene just after a mindless Netzach attacks Hod and captures him]].
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* BigDamnHeroes: Arguably, [[spoiler: Yesod ''finally'' speaking up and saving Gebura from being killed by Netzach]].
** [[spoiler: Tiphereth enters the scene just after a mindless Netzach attacks Hod and captures him]].
** [[spoiler: Tiphereth enters the scene just after a mindless Netzach attacks Hod and captures him]].
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* EyeScream: [[spoiler: On his second rampage, Netzach tears out Hod's eye]]. [[DismembermentIsCheap Not that it's permanent, of course]].
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* CompellingVoice: Yesod has this, with some specific rules attached. Basically, ''everything'' he says hypnotizes everyone who hears it, except for when he specifies the one he talks to - in that case, only that person will be affected. [[spoiler: This leads to him reluctantly becoming a ThirdPersonPerson by way of LoopholeAbuse since his power obviously doesn't affect himself]].
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* CompellingVoice: Yesod has this, with some specific rules attached. Basically, ''everything'' he says hypnotizes everyone who hears it, except for when he specifies the one he talks to - in that case, only that person will be affected. [[spoiler: This leads to him reluctantly becoming a ThirdPersonPerson by way of LoopholeAbuse [[RequiredSecondaryPowers since his power obviously doesn't affect himself]].himself]]]].
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* RequiredSecondaryPowers: Naturally, everyone is immune to their own powers. For example, Gebura can't turn her clothes into sand. The outer walls and the floor also seem to be immune, as Hod can't phase through those either. [[spoiler: Yesod uses the former to his advantage by becoming a ThirdPersonPerson]].
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* DeadpanSnarker: Yumi.
-->'''Yumi''': This another ploy to get rid of your work?
-->'''Yumi''': Damn, finally a Floor without weird fuckery going on.
-->'''Yumi''': Of course you would say that.
-->'''Yumi''': This another ploy to get rid of your work?
-->'''Yumi''': Damn, finally a Floor without weird fuckery going on.
-->'''Yumi''': Of course you would say that.
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* SoftGlass: [[DiscussedTrope Discussed]] when [[spoiler: Gebura learns how to create glass]].
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* LoopholeAbuse: Chapter 7's description says 'Loopholes for the win'. It is in that chapter that [[spoiler: Yesod figures out a loophole in his power]].
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* ThirdPersonPerson: [[spoiler: Yesod, reluctantly so. Because of RequiredSecondaryPowers, he is immune to his own power. Thus, he needs to say his name every time he talks in order to cancel out his own power]].
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* TheBerserker: [[spoiler: Netzach. When he's stressed, he loses consciousness, but the rest of him continues to do things without any inhibitions. The first time this happens, he almost kills [[ActionGirl Gebura]]]].
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* TheBerserker: [[spoiler: Netzach. When he's stressed, he loses consciousness, but the rest of him continues to do things without any inhibitions. The first time this happens, he almost kills [[ActionGirl Gebura]]]].Gebura]]. The second time, he [[EyeScream tears out Hod's eye]] before Tiphereth does a BigDamnHeroes]].
* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Tiphereth enters the scene just after a mindless Netzach attacks Hod and captures him]].
* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Tiphereth enters the scene just after a mindless Netzach attacks Hod and captures him]].
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Julian, an assistant on the Keter Floor, pushes a fellow assistant off the ladder after noticing she sorted a book wrong. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by Angela:
-->'''Angela''': Julian, you can't push Elena from the ladder just because she's sorting one book wrong.
-->'''Angela''': Julian, you can't push Elena from the ladder just because she's sorting one book wrong.
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* CompellingVoice: Yesod has this, with some specific rules attached. Basically, ''everything'' he says hypnotizes everyone who hears it, except for when he specifies the one he talks to - in that case, only that person will be affected. [[spoiler: This leads to him reluctantly becoming a ThirdPersonPerson by way of LoopholeAbuse since his power obviously doesn't affect himself]].
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* MundaneUtility: Tiphereth says she's been using her power mostly to grab a quick snack, since she can also create fruit and most vegetables. [[spoiler: Chesed eagerly awaits the day the can use MindOverMatter to brew coffee without leaving his chair]].
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* EmptyEyes: [[spoiler: Netzach, when he's mindless]].
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* EmptyEyes: [[spoiler: Netzach, when he's mindless]].mindless. His [[FrozenFace face also seems stuck at the same blank expression]]]].
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* SandBlaster: Gebura, to the point that everything she touches save for herself, the floor and the outer walls is immediately turned into sand. [[spoiler: Extends to ThePowerOfGlass later]].
* ShoutOut: Gebura's power was inspired on Leona Kingscholar of ''Twisted Wonderland''.
* ShoutOut: Gebura's power was inspired on Leona Kingscholar of ''Twisted Wonderland''.
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It can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/37170685/chapters/92733898 here]].
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* PoisonousPerson: Malkuth generates nitric acid, and although she is immune to it, the people surrounding her are not except for when Angela casts temporary immunity on them. Later, it turns out that [[spoiler: Malkuth's power extends to chemicals in general, not just nitric acid]].
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* EmptyEyes: [[spoiler: Netzach, when he's mindless]].
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* LittleBitBeastly: Hokma. The Light caused him to be part bird of prey, and thus he is affectionately dubbed 'Hawkma'.
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* LittleBitBeastly: Hokma. The Light caused him to be part bird of prey, and thus he is affectionately dubbed 'Hawkma'. The most obvious sign are the wings attached to his arms, but his eyesight has gotten better to the point that he doesn't need any vision aid anymore and his nails are permanently claw-like. For some reason, while it doesn't seem to be visible, his hair is also feather-like.
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* LittleBitBeastly: Hokma. The Light caused him to be part bird of prey, and thus he is affectionately dubbed 'Hawkma'.
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* UnSorcerer: Netzach is the only one seemingly unaffected by the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent, which is something he notices himself and Gebura is annoyed at. [[spoiler: But [[SubvertedTrope then]] we found out as to why this trope seemed to be in effect]]...
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* UnSorcerer: Netzach is the only one seemingly unaffected by the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent, which is something he notices himself and Gebura is annoyed at. [[spoiler: But [[SubvertedTrope then]] we found find out as to why this trope seemed to be in effect]]...effect at first]]...
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* MassSuperEmpoweringEvent: The entire premise. For a yet unexplained reason, the Light has given each Patron Librarian save for Roland and Angela superpowers.
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* MassSuperEmpoweringEvent: The entire premise. For a yet unexplained reason, the Light has given each Patron Librarian save for Roland and Angela superpowers.superpowers.
* UnSorcerer: Netzach is the only one seemingly unaffected by the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent, which is something he notices himself and Gebura is annoyed at. [[spoiler: But [[SubvertedTrope then]] we found out as to why this trope seemed to be in effect]]...
** Both Angela and Roland did not gain any powers from the Light. Roland speculates it is because he was brought in later, and Angela assumes it is because she is a RobotGirl.
* UnSorcerer: Netzach is the only one seemingly unaffected by the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent, which is something he notices himself and Gebura is annoyed at. [[spoiler: But [[SubvertedTrope then]] we found out as to why this trope seemed to be in effect]]...
** Both Angela and Roland did not gain any powers from the Light. Roland speculates it is because he was brought in later, and Angela assumes it is because she is a RobotGirl.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: [[spoiler: Rose and Netzach speculate that the Light reacted on their situations right before they got their powers. For example, Netzach wanted a way for time to pass faster during moments he's in distress, and Yesod complained about one of his assistants never listening to him]].
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You know the Library's Light? The thing you use as ManaPoints to fight and what [[MundaneUtility Netzach uses to create infinite alcohol at will]]? What if, one day, the Light has a major unforseen hiccup? [[MassSuperEmpoweringIncident And leaves the Patron Librarians with uncontrollable powers]]? Well, this answers those questions as well.
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You know the Library's Light? The thing you use as ManaPoints to fight and what [[MundaneUtility Netzach uses to create infinite alcohol at will]]? What if, one day, the Light has a major unforseen hiccup? [[MassSuperEmpoweringIncident [[MassSuperEmpoweringEvent And leaves the Patron Librarians with uncontrollable powers]]? Well, this answers those questions as well.
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A ''VideoGame/LibraryOfRuina'' fanfic that answers what happens when you combine the game with ''Fanfic/TheNucleusIncident''.
You know the Library's Light? The thing you use as ManaPoints to fight and what [[MundaneUtility Netzach uses to create infinite alcohol at will]]? What if, one day, the Light has a major unforseen hiccup? [[MassSuperEmpoweringIncident And leaves the Patron Librarians with uncontrollable powers]]? Well, this answers those questions as well.
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* TheBerserker: [[spoiler: Netzach. When he's stressed, he loses consciousness, but the rest of him continues to do things without any inhibitions. The first time this happens, he almost kills [[ActionGirl Gebura]]]].
* GravityMaster: Chesed, who is like Scout stuck in his own reversed gravity at first. This means that he is only able to move across the ceiling as if it were the floor. [[spoiler: He does improve and he tries to use it as [[MindOverMatter telekinesis]] instead]].
* GreenThumb: Tiphereth, who has incidentally the same power as Sniper in the original story. Similarly to him, she accidentally causes the entire Floor to turn into a forest after the Light is disturbed. [[spoiler: She gets better after Netzach's second rampage]].
* InstantExpert: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] for pretty much everyone. The closest to this would be Binah.
* MassSuperEmpoweringIncident: The entire premise. For a yet unexplained reason, the Light has given each Patron Librarian save for Roland and Angela superpowers.
You know the Library's Light? The thing you use as ManaPoints to fight and what [[MundaneUtility Netzach uses to create infinite alcohol at will]]? What if, one day, the Light has a major unforseen hiccup? [[MassSuperEmpoweringIncident And leaves the Patron Librarians with uncontrollable powers]]? Well, this answers those questions as well.
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* TheBerserker: [[spoiler: Netzach. When he's stressed, he loses consciousness, but the rest of him continues to do things without any inhibitions. The first time this happens, he almost kills [[ActionGirl Gebura]]]].
* GravityMaster: Chesed, who is like Scout stuck in his own reversed gravity at first. This means that he is only able to move across the ceiling as if it were the floor. [[spoiler: He does improve and he tries to use it as [[MindOverMatter telekinesis]] instead]].
* GreenThumb: Tiphereth, who has incidentally the same power as Sniper in the original story. Similarly to him, she accidentally causes the entire Floor to turn into a forest after the Light is disturbed. [[spoiler: She gets better after Netzach's second rampage]].
* InstantExpert: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] for pretty much everyone. The closest to this would be Binah.
* MassSuperEmpoweringIncident: The entire premise. For a yet unexplained reason, the Light has given each Patron Librarian save for Roland and Angela superpowers.
