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->"''My handsome little cherub, close your eyes.''\\
''Mommy's going to give you clear blue skies.''\\
''So you’ll laugh and dance and play in the air.''\\
''And sing the song of angels everywhere.''"
[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/101559/herald Herald]] is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic DarkFic written by {{Creator/shortskirtsandexplosions}}.
Mrs. Cake had just tucked in her children and gone to sleep. She was woken up by a loud crashing noise, finding the house empty, with its doors and windows boarded.
Something is causing the pegasi to grab other ponies, lift them high above the clouds, and drop them to their death.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* [[spoiler:AnyoneCanDie]]
* [[IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming Idiosyncratic Chapter Naming]]: Each chapter title is a line of the poem above.
* [[ImplacableMan Implacable Pony]]: The pegasi. [[spoiler:Even death is not enough to stop them.]]
* LighterAndSofter: If this story is too dark for you, you can instead read a lighter story inspired by it, [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/143257/huggled Huggled]].
* OurZombiesAreDifferent
* [[spoiler:TheKillerInMe]]: [[spoiler:Mrs. Cake, of the Amnesiac Killer variant.]]
* [[spoiler:UnreliableNarrator]]: The story is narrated in [[PointOfView third-person limited]], following Mrs. Cake's point of view. [[spoiler:Since she's one-quarter pegasus, she's also been affected by the crystal.]]
* WhamLine: [[spoiler:"Didn't Mr. Cake once tell me that you were one-quarter pegasus on your mother's side?"]]
* ZombieApocalypse
* ZombieFic
''Mommy's going to give you clear blue skies.''\\
''So you’ll laugh and dance and play in the air.''\\
''And sing the song of angels everywhere.''"
[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/101559/herald Herald]] is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic DarkFic written by {{Creator/shortskirtsandexplosions}}.
Mrs. Cake had just tucked in her children and gone to sleep. She was woken up by a loud crashing noise, finding the house empty, with its doors and windows boarded.
Something is causing the pegasi to grab other ponies, lift them high above the clouds, and drop them to their death.
----
!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* [[spoiler:AnyoneCanDie]]
* [[IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming Idiosyncratic Chapter Naming]]: Each chapter title is a line of the poem above.
* [[ImplacableMan Implacable Pony]]: The pegasi. [[spoiler:Even death is not enough to stop them.]]
* LighterAndSofter: If this story is too dark for you, you can instead read a lighter story inspired by it, [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/143257/huggled Huggled]].
* OurZombiesAreDifferent
* [[spoiler:TheKillerInMe]]: [[spoiler:Mrs. Cake, of the Amnesiac Killer variant.]]
* [[spoiler:UnreliableNarrator]]: The story is narrated in [[PointOfView third-person limited]], following Mrs. Cake's point of view. [[spoiler:Since she's one-quarter pegasus, she's also been affected by the crystal.]]
* WhamLine: [[spoiler:"Didn't Mr. Cake once tell me that you were one-quarter pegasus on your mother's side?"]]
* ZombieApocalypse
* ZombieFic
