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* BigBrotherInstinct: Harry towards Luna, as he glares at the Gryffindors admiring [[SheIsAllGrownUp Luna]].
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* ReluctantRuler: Harry dislikes having to take charge of House Gryffindor, but he does when he realizes it is needed.
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* SheIsAllGrownUp: The Gryffindor males note very much how Luna has, ahem, changed. Particularly as she doeswhen he realizes it is needed.her flexibility training in the common room.
* SheIsAllGrownUp: The Gryffindor males note very much how Luna has, ahem, changed. Particularly as she does
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* WhoWouldBeStupidEnough: When Harry discusses how to find information on the Order of Moltres, his friends point out that he could get it from someone who probably knows, that has no compulsion to keep silent and that is dumb enough to fall for Harry's fishing. Harry promptly tricks Draco Malfoy into an honor duel.
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* ChekhovsGag: [[spoiler:Luna (who claims to speak [[ShoutOut Baby]]) said that Togepi called itself Dark Queen of Evil. When Harry Speaks with Togetic (Togepi's evolution) present, she calls herself Dark Queen of Evil - and Harry [[CrowningMomentOfFunny the Provider of Hugs]].]]
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* ChekhovsGag: [[spoiler:Luna (who claims to speak [[ShoutOut Baby]]) said that Togepi called itself Dark Queen of Evil. When Harry Speaks with Togetic (Togepi's evolution) present, she calls herself Dark Queen of Evil - and Harry [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments the Provider of Hugs]].]]
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Macnair cannot begin to understand why Jack is fighting in the war against Voldemort, and believes people who give a damn about others are weak.
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*** Pretty much hurting Jasmine in any way will hit Jack's BerserkButton.
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*** At the end of the Fourth Book many of the Nocturne grunts were captured by the arriving police forces that arrived. Things look like they are calming down... til Jack sees that Jasmine was struck in the back of the head hard enough to bleed by the Carrows. He brutally murders the brother and sister and then orders the Johto Officers to kill all the prisoners before declaring war of Voldemort.
**** Pretty much hurting Jasmine in any way will hit Jack's BerserkButton.
**** Pretty much hurting Jasmine in any way will hit Jack's BerserkButton.
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* AdaptationalHeroism:
** [[spoiler:People believed Peter Pettigrew was the one who betrayed the Potters to Voldemort, and that Sirius died killing him. This story reveals that Peter was not only ''not'' a traitor, but instead died heroically trying to bring down the actual traitor, Regulus Black.]]
** [[spoiler:Severus Snape was never part of Voldemort's Team Nocturne.]]
** [[spoiler:Tobias Snape was not an abusive father/husband, but a loving, while stern, man who not only took good care of Severus, but also adopted Lily Evans.]]
** [[spoiler:Barty Crouch Jr. is one of the heroes, helping save Harry and Jasmine after the last task. He is also the Nocturne double agent instead of Snape and, as a ShoutOut to Creator/DavidTennant playing him in the movie, he is also Looker.]]
** [[spoiler:Barty Crouch Sr made sure to take care of his son, being there for him as much as possible, without falling into the trap of being MarriedToTheJob. Barty Crouch Jr. mentions this was a great influence in his upbringing.]]
** Abraxas Malfoy, who in canon was one of Voldemort's earliest followers and a pureblood supremacist, was here a powerful, yet benevolent man who had no issue with his daughter being in an homosexual relationship and opposed his son's intention to take the family into the "old family" supremacism spouted by Voldemort and Team Nocturne.
** Similarly, Orion Black, Sirius' father, who was too a early Voldemort supporter in the books, was here the one who protected Sirius, helped him escape to the Potters' when tensions got too high at House Black and named him his heir.
* AdaptationalVillainy: There are several along the story.
** Book!Cho Chang was a nice, gentle girl whose most negative qualities were being too clingy and supporting her friend after she betrayed Dumbledore's Army. In ''Chamber of the Unown'', she is an AlphaBitch that leads a pack of girls into stealing Luna's belongings [[spoiler:and willingly becomes Voldemort's host.]]
** Book!Lockhart was just an cowardly idiot who used a memory-wiping charm to take credit for other people's actions. Here, [[spoiler:he manipulates Hermione and other of his fans so they will do his job for him, using his Hypno to wipe their memories whenever they realized what he was doing, and was all too willing to destroy the entrance to the Chamber of the Unown even though it contained the one thing that could revive those people who were petrified.]]
**[[spoiler:Book!Regulus Black was a misguided man who realized too late he was getting himself in a big mess and sacrificed himself to find a way to destroy Voldemort. Here, he was the one that told Voldemort where the Potters were hiding, killed Peter Pettigrew and framed Sirius so he would be sent to Sevii - the Azkaban equivalent.]]
**[[spoiler:To contrast with Barty Crouch Jr.'s AdaptationalHeroism, Mad-Eye Moody becomes Voldemort's new host.]]
** [[spoiler:People believed Peter Pettigrew was the one who betrayed the Potters to Voldemort, and that Sirius died killing him. This story reveals that Peter was not only ''not'' a traitor, but instead died heroically trying to bring down the actual traitor, Regulus Black.]]
** [[spoiler:Severus Snape was never part of Voldemort's Team Nocturne.]]
** [[spoiler:Tobias Snape was not an abusive father/husband, but a loving, while stern, man who not only took good care of Severus, but also adopted Lily Evans.]]
** [[spoiler:Barty Crouch Jr. is one of the heroes, helping save Harry and Jasmine after the last task. He is also the Nocturne double agent instead of Snape and, as a ShoutOut to Creator/DavidTennant playing him in the movie, he is also Looker.]]
** [[spoiler:Barty Crouch Sr made sure to take care of his son, being there for him as much as possible, without falling into the trap of being MarriedToTheJob. Barty Crouch Jr. mentions this was a great influence in his upbringing.]]
** Abraxas Malfoy, who in canon was one of Voldemort's earliest followers and a pureblood supremacist, was here a powerful, yet benevolent man who had no issue with his daughter being in an homosexual relationship and opposed his son's intention to take the family into the "old family" supremacism spouted by Voldemort and Team Nocturne.
** Similarly, Orion Black, Sirius' father, who was too a early Voldemort supporter in the books, was here the one who protected Sirius, helped him escape to the Potters' when tensions got too high at House Black and named him his heir.
* AdaptationalVillainy: There are several along the story.
** Book!Cho Chang was a nice, gentle girl whose most negative qualities were being too clingy and supporting her friend after she betrayed Dumbledore's Army. In ''Chamber of the Unown'', she is an AlphaBitch that leads a pack of girls into stealing Luna's belongings [[spoiler:and willingly becomes Voldemort's host.]]
** Book!Lockhart was just an cowardly idiot who used a memory-wiping charm to take credit for other people's actions. Here, [[spoiler:he manipulates Hermione and other of his fans so they will do his job for him, using his Hypno to wipe their memories whenever they realized what he was doing, and was all too willing to destroy the entrance to the Chamber of the Unown even though it contained the one thing that could revive those people who were petrified.]]
**[[spoiler:Book!Regulus Black was a misguided man who realized too late he was getting himself in a big mess and sacrificed himself to find a way to destroy Voldemort. Here, he was the one that told Voldemort where the Potters were hiding, killed Peter Pettigrew and framed Sirius so he would be sent to Sevii - the Azkaban equivalent.]]
**[[spoiler:To contrast with Barty Crouch Jr.'s AdaptationalHeroism, Mad-Eye Moody becomes Voldemort's new host.]]
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Remus is a laid-back man, calm and easy to make friends with. If you anger him... well, that's when he shows his inner Zoroark.
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* {{Expy}}: The different nations in the Pokémon world. Kanto is Japan, Johto is Ireland, Hoenn is Italy, Sinnoh is Bulgaria, Unova is America, Kalos is France, and Avalon is Britain. There is also mention of a New Zealand Expy.
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** Her father is this in at least [[UpToEleven eleven]] different ways.
* {{Expy}}: The different nations in the Pokémon world. Kanto is Japan, Johto is Ireland, Hoenn is Italy, Sinnoh is Bulgaria, Unova isAmerica, America (with Alola representing Hawaii), Kalos is France, and Avalon is Britain. There is also mention of a New Zealand Expy.
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** [[spoiler:Sirius still got sent to prison.]]
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** [[spoiler:Sirius still ran away from home and got sent to prison.prison after being framed up.]]
** During his first Gauntlet match, he averts Flint's Graveler by clinging to the cloth in the ceiling - which is within the rules, since he's not ripping it.
** Several times at class, he sticks to the letter of the assignments while fulfilling the tasks in an unexpected way.
** In the Grand Trainer Tournament's Second Task, which is about climbing while trying to keep the First Task's egg as untouched as possible with the aid of a Pokémon, all the other trainers send out a Pokémon to climb with them. Harry sends Ludwig to ''hover'' behind him, ensuring the egg won't even touch the wall.
** Several times at class, he sticks to the letter of the assignments while fulfilling the tasks in an unexpected way.
** In the Grand Trainer Tournament's Second Task, which is about climbing while trying to keep the First Task's egg as untouched as possible with the aid of a Pokémon, all the other trainers send out a Pokémon to climb with them. Harry sends Ludwig to ''hover'' behind him, ensuring the egg won't even touch the wall.
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** When Lockhart wraps an arm around Harry without permission and tries to use him in a photo-op, Remus grabs him by the throat and makes it clear what he will do if he ever touches his adopted son again.
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* PlayfulHacker: Ginny. She is shown several times at using her dex to hack into different systems. At the end of Book 4, it is revealed she managed to steal 10 million pokédollars from the Josephs' bank (and returned it), and Book 5 has her intern in Gringotts, where she hijacks the alerts.
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* PlayfulHacker: Ginny. She is shown several times at using her dex to hack into different systems. At the end of Book 4, it is revealed she managed to steal 10 million pokédollars from the Josephs' bank (and returned it), and Book 5 has her intern in Gringotts, where she hijacks the alerts.alerts before going to meet with Harry.
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* RunningGag: Luna makes some pop culture reference - sometimes one to stories that no one InUniverse knows about.
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* RunningGag: Luna makes some a pop culture reference - sometimes one to stories that no one InUniverse knows about.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Cho Chang, in the books, never showed any sign of being a bully. Here, she is an AlphaBitch that leads a pack of girls into stealing all of Luna's belongings [[spoiler:and willingly becomes Voldemort's host, instead of Ginny.]]
** Lockhart, who was an idiot whose only talent was using the memory-wiping charm so he could take credit for other's actions, [[spoiler:becomes a complete asshole who uses Hermione's (and others') adoration for him so they will do his job for him and then use his Hypno to wipe their memory of the event (and it is implied he may have used it at some point for even less nice reasons) and was all too willing to use that to prevent Harry from going into the Chamber of the Unown to seek the one thing that could revive those people who were petrified.]]
** Lockhart, who was an idiot whose only talent was using the memory-wiping charm so he could take credit for other's actions, [[spoiler:becomes a complete asshole who uses Hermione's (and others') adoration for him so they will do his job for him and then use his Hypno to wipe their memory of the event (and it is implied he may have used it at some point for even less nice reasons) and was all too willing to use that to prevent Harry from going into the Chamber of the Unown to seek the one thing that could revive those people who were petrified.]]
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* ChekhovsGun: Ron accidentally giving Harry his Magikarp and Harry giving him Emolga sets up Harry tricking Lucius Malfoy into accepting a trade, giving him the Magikarp in exchange of Dobby.
** Poppy tells Ron that the Magikarp he captured has Everstones all over its scales, which, barring a very unlikely event, will prevent it from ever evolving. [[spoiler:After Harry gives the Magikarp to Malfoy and he sets it free, the rage the Magikarp feels at being rejected and kicked around by Draco Malfoy lets it break through the Everstones' effect, triggering its evolution into Gyarados.]]
** Poppy tells Ron that the Magikarp he captured has Everstones all over its scales, which, barring a very unlikely event, will prevent it from ever evolving. [[spoiler:After Harry gives the Magikarp to Malfoy and he sets it free, the rage the Magikarp feels at being rejected and kicked around by Draco Malfoy lets it break through the Everstones' effect, triggering its evolution into Gyarados.]]
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* ChekhovsGun: Ron accidentally giving Harry his Magikarp and Harry giving him Emolga sets up Harry tricking Lucius Malfoy into accepting a trade, giving him the Magikarp (instead of Zygarde) in exchange of Dobby.
** Poppy tells Ron that the Magikarp he captured has Everstones all over its scales, which, barring a very unlikely event, will prevent it from ever evolving. [[spoiler:After Harry gives the Magikarp to Lucius Malfoy andhe the latter sets it free, the rage the Magikarp feels at being rejected and kicked around by Draco Malfoy lets it break through the Everstones' effect, triggering its evolution into Gyarados.]]
** Poppy tells Ron that the Magikarp he captured has Everstones all over its scales, which, barring a very unlikely event, will prevent it from ever evolving. [[spoiler:After Harry gives the Magikarp to Lucius Malfoy and
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* HeroicRROD: [[spoiler:Harry's Speaking during the battle with Zygarde causes him to heavily bleed from ears, mouth and nose.]]
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* HeroicRROD: [[spoiler:Harry's Speaking during the battle with Zygarde causes him to heavily bleed from ears, mouth and nose. This is later revealed to be because Zygarde was fighting him off.]]
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* AdaptationalHeroism: [[spoiler:People believed Peter Pettigrew was the one who betrayed the Potters to Voldemort, and that Sirius died killing him. This story reveals that Peter was not only ''not'' a traitor, but instead died heroically trying to bring down the actual traitor, Regulus Black.]]
** Severus Snape was never part of Voldemort's Team Nocturne. [[spoiler: The Nocturne double agent in this fanfic is Barty Crouch Jr.]]
** Also, [[spoiler:Tobias Snape was not an abusive father/husband, but a loving, while stern, man who not only took good care of Severus, but also all but adopted Lily Evans.]]
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:Regulus Black, who not only was the traitor, but arranged things so Sirius would be sent to Sevii - the Azkaban equivalent.]]
* CallBack: When Harry fights the Traitor in Le Fay's Landing, he lays on a trap for him and his Dusknoirs and tells him he knows where he is standing just before springing the trap. [[spoiler:When he is on the top of the Astronomy Tower, with the Dusknoir Control Ball, cornered by Regulus Black, he says he remembers where he is standing before throwing the Ball out of the window.]]
** Severus Snape was never part of Voldemort's Team Nocturne. [[spoiler: The Nocturne double agent in this fanfic is Barty Crouch Jr.]]
** Also, [[spoiler:Tobias Snape was not an abusive father/husband, but a loving, while stern, man who not only took good care of Severus, but also all but adopted Lily Evans.]]
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:Regulus Black, who not only was the traitor, but arranged things so Sirius would be sent to Sevii - the Azkaban equivalent.]]
* CallBack: When Harry fights the Traitor in Le Fay's Landing, he lays on a trap for him and his Dusknoirs and tells him he knows where he is standing just before springing the trap. [[spoiler:When he is on the top of the Astronomy Tower, with the Dusknoir Control Ball, cornered by Regulus Black, he says he remembers where he is standing before throwing the Ball out of the window.]]
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** Severus Snape was never part of Voldemort's Team Nocturne. [[spoiler: The Nocturne double agent in this fanfic is Barty Crouch Jr.]]
** Also, [[spoiler:Tobias Snape was not an abusive father/husband, but a loving, while stern, man who not only took good care of Severus, but also all but adopted Lily Evans.]]
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:Regulus Black, who not only was the traitor, but arranged things so Sirius would be sent to Sevii - the Azkaban equivalent.]]
** [[spoiler:To avoid the madness of using the DNA Splicer too much, Regulus kept to his Raticate form non-stop. [[SarcasmMode Unfortunately]], that leaves him with a fear of predators like Noctowls and Sevipers - which leaves paralyzed in fear when he tries to run away after his cover is blown.]]
* {{Irony}}: [[spoiler:In the books, people thought Sirius Black betrayed the Potters, but it was Peter who did it. Here, people think Peter betrayed the Potters, but it was Regulus Black.]]
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* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:Regulus blames James Potter for driving a wedge between him and Sirius, when in truth Sirius repeatedly told Regulus they could still be friends and brothers if he just stepped away from the bad guys.]]
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* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:Regulus blames James Potter for driving a wedge between him and Sirius, when in truth reality Sirius repeatedly told tried to build bridges with Regulus they could still be friends and brothers if he just stepped away from the bad guys.attempted to bring him into his group of friends, only for Regulus to rebuff him.]]
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* AdaptationalHeroism: [[spoiler:Barty Crouch Jr. is one of the heroes, helping save Harry and Jasmine after the last task. He is also the Nocturne double agent instead of Snape and, as a ShoutOut to Creator/DavidTennant playing him in the movie, he is also Looker.]]
** [[spoiler:Barty Crouch Sr made sure to take care of his son, being there for him as much as possible, without falling into the trap of being MarriedToTheJob. Barty Crouch Jr. mentions this was a great influence in his upbringing.]]
** Abraxas Malfoy, who in canon was one of Voldemort's earliest followers and a pureblood supremacist, was here a powerful, yet benevolent man who had no issue with his daughter being in an homosexual relationship and opposed his son's intention to take the family into the "old family" supremacism spouted by Voldemort and Team Nocturne.
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:To contrast with the above, Alastor Moody becomes Voldemort's new host - although see WhamEpisode for the result.]]
** [[spoiler:Barty Crouch Sr made sure to take care of his son, being there for him as much as possible, without falling into the trap of being MarriedToTheJob. Barty Crouch Jr. mentions this was a great influence in his upbringing.]]
** Abraxas Malfoy, who in canon was one of Voldemort's earliest followers and a pureblood supremacist, was here a powerful, yet benevolent man who had no issue with his daughter being in an homosexual relationship and opposed his son's intention to take the family into the "old family" supremacism spouted by Voldemort and Team Nocturne.
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:To contrast with the above, Alastor Moody becomes Voldemort's new host - although see WhamEpisode for the result.]]
* HeyYouHaymaker: [[spoiler:This is how Barty Crouch Jr. a.k.a. Looker makes his interruption - by [[DidYouFlipOffCthulhu punching Voldemort mid-gloating]].]]
* RefugeInAudacity: [[spoiler:Barty Crouch Jr. happily demands Voldemort's and Team Nocturne's surrender when he is all alone. Of course, Barty also knows that TheCavalry is just a few minutes behind, so he [[HoldTheFloor Holds The Floor]] long enough to bring in the rest of the team.]]
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* BeatThemAtTheirOwnGame: Harry's plan to deal with Umbridge is to act like perfect students in her class - and take the fight ''outside'' the class, where her power is more limited.
* BelievingTheirOwnLies: Draco thinks himself as an important person, a great Pokémon trainer and a leader, when the truth is that he barely ranks above "nuisance" for the ones that truly lead, makes enormous mistakes during a Pokémon fight and could not lead himself out of a paper bag without instructions.
* BelievingTheirOwnLies: Draco thinks himself as an important person, a great Pokémon trainer and a leader, when the truth is that he barely ranks above "nuisance" for the ones that truly lead, makes enormous mistakes during a Pokémon fight and could not lead himself out of a paper bag without instructions.
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* BeatThemAtTheirOwnGame: Harry's plan to deal with Umbridge is to have all of Gryffindor act like perfect students in her class - and take the fight ''outside'' the class, where her power is more limited.
* BelievingTheirOwnLies: Draco thinks himself as an important person, a great Pokémon trainer and a leader, when the truth is that he barely ranks above "nuisance" for the ones that truly lead, makesenormous several dumb mistakes during a Pokémon fight and could not lead himself out of a paper bag without instructions.
* BelievingTheirOwnLies: Draco thinks himself as an important person, a great Pokémon trainer and a leader, when the truth is that he barely ranks above "nuisance" for the ones that truly lead, makes
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: During the Gryffindor-Slytherin Gauntlet match, the Slytherins activate several traps expecting Harry to fall in them, only for Draco to be the one falling in them.
* INeedAFreakingDrink: When [=McGonagall=] finds Sirius, Tonks and Harry in her office, she pulls out a whiskey bottle and pours herself (and Sirius and Tonks) a drink.
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* TakeThat: Many of Regulus' [[spoiler:Regulus']] complaints are taken from negative reviews of the story.
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* BrokenPedestal: After Harry decides to participate in the Grand Trainer Tournament, Professor [=McGonagall=] decides to give Harry the cold shoulder. This makes Harry lose most of the respect he has for her (although it had been eroded in past years), and [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone when she realizes her mistake]] Harry isn't exactly keen on forgiving her - and neither does a good part of his class group.
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* BrokenPedestal: After Harry decides to participate in the Grand Trainer Tournament, Professor [=McGonagall=] decides to give gives Harry the cold shoulder. This makes Harry lose most of the respect he has for her (although it had been eroded in past years), and [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone when she realizes her mistake]] Harry isn't exactly keen on forgiving her - and neither does a good part of his class group.
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Draco Malfoy calls Fleur "the daughter of two dyke whores". Unfortunately for him, he does it in front of Jack Kenway and Lance Blackthorn, best friends of Fleur's [[HasTwoMommies mothers]] and two of the world's best Pokémon trainers.
* ReconcileTheBitterFoes: Voldemort attacking Clair (who is Jack's wife and Lance's cousin) and Jasmine Kenway, combined with Harry requesting their help, helps Jack and Lance to mend their friendship.
* ReconcileTheBitterFoes: Voldemort attacking Clair (who is Jack's wife and Lance's cousin) and Jasmine Kenway, combined with Harry requesting their help, helps Jack and Lance to mend their friendship.
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Draco Malfoy calls Fleur "the daughter of two dyke whores". Unfortunately for him, he does it in front of Jack Kenway and Lance Blackthorn, best friends of Fleur's [[HasTwoMommies mothers]] mothers]], godfathers to Fleur and his sister and two of the world's best Pokémon trainers.
* ReconcileTheBitterFoes: Voldemort attackingClair (who is Jack's Claire (Jack's wife and Lance's cousin) and Jasmine Kenway, combined with Harry requesting their help, helps Jack and Lance to mend their friendship.friendship.
* SchmuckBait: [[spoiler:This, combined with DealWithTheDevil, is how Voldemort (who turns out to be a Spiritomb) operates. He offers his victims whatever they want, and he gives it to them - by possessing them and eventually eating their souls.]]
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* SchmuckBait: [[spoiler:This, combined with DealWithTheDevil, is how Voldemort (who turns out to be a Spiritomb) operates. He offers his victims whatever they want, and he gives it to them - by possessing them and eventually eating their souls.]]
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* LampshadeHanging: Various characters bring up actions from either Harry Potter or Pokemon that don't happen in this 'verse, as well as addressing cliches when they pop up ([[DarkIsEvil dark type Pokemon being stereotypically "evil"]] being one example).
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* LampshadeHanging: Jasmine has a good laugh at the Nocturne Agents in the Battle of Ilex Forest who use Pokemon "a 5 year old would think was evil", a Mandibuzz and a Toxicroak. She comments they should have plastered goatees on them.
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* ImpossiblyTackyClothes: Dumbledore likes to wear Alolan (Hawaii's {{Expy}}) shirts under his lab coats.
* BrokenPedestal: After Harry decides to participate in the Grand Trainer Tournament, Professor [=McGonagall=] decides to give Harry the cold shoulder. This makes Harry lose most of the respect he has for her (although it had been eroded in past years), and [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone when she realizes her mistake]] Harry isn't exactly keen on forgiving her - and neither does a good part of his class group.
* BelievingTheirOwnLies: Draco thinks himself as an important person, a great Pokémon trainer and a leader, when the truth is that he barely ranks above "nuisance" for the ones that truly lead, makes enormous mistakes during a Pokémon fight and could not lead himself out of a paper bag without instructions.
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* FalseFlagOperation: [[spoiler:Team Nocturne attacks Little Surrey while disguised as the Sons of Johto, aiming at trying to break any international support the latter have.]]
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* FreudianExcuse: Umbridge is such a fanatic because none of her parents were "important" in terms of blood or social standing, and her abrassiveness and the backstabbing means by which she ascended in the Ministry ranks means she has no friends and no descendants, so all she has is her job and she clings to it because doing otherwise would mean admitting her own failures.
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* ReconcileTheBitterFoes: Voldemort attacking Clair (who is Jack's wife and Lance's sister) and Jasmine Kenway, combined with Harry requesting their help, helps Jack and Lance to mend their friendship.
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* ReluctantLeader: Harry dislikes having to take charge of House Gryffindor, but he does when he realizes it is needed.
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* CloudCuckooLander: Luna is this in at least five different ways.
** [[spoiler:Cormac [=McLaggen=] is again the representation of Gryffindor's worst characteristics.]]
* BeatThemAtTheirOwnGame: Harry's plan to deal with Umbridge is to act like perfect students in her class - and take the fight ''outside'' the class, where her power is more limited.
* TheCloudCuckooLanderWasRight: In chapter 15, Luna makes a surprisingly in-depth analysis of why Umbridge is the way she is.
* DefensiveWhat: Ron after saying that not all Slytherins are half bad.
* TheCloudCuckooLanderWasRight: In chapter 15, Luna makes a surprisingly in-depth analysis of why Umbridge is the way she is.
* DefensiveWhat: Ron after saying that not all Slytherins are half bad.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Cormac [=McLaggen=]. When Harry attempts to explain everyone how they are going to deal with Umbridge, Cormac calls him a coward because he is suggesting to play the role of perfect students in her class, and also tries to claim he isn't a true Gryffindor because he "cuddles up with foreigners and Slytherins" and is the Heir of Slytherin.
* LikesOlderWomen: [[spoiler:Brock]] hits on Professor [=McGonagall=], whohas at least thrice could be his age.grandmother.
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* OhCrap: Rosen and Guilden when they realize that Dolores Umbridge has just entered the detention block check-in. And growing when they realize who ''who'' she has arrested.arrested.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: When the Weasley twins hear Ron claim he doesn't mind working with some Slytherins (at least, those who are not giant assholes), they think the end of the world is nigh.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: When the Weasley twins hear Ron claim he doesn't mind working with some Slytherins (at least, those who are not giant assholes), they think the end of the world is nigh.
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* PlayfulHacker: Ginny. At the end of Book 4, it is revealed she managed to steal 10 million pokédollars from the Josephs' bank (and returned it).
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* PlayfulHacker: Ginny. She is shown several times at using her dex to hack into different systems. At the end of Book 4, it is revealed she managed to steal 10 million pokédollars from the Josephs' bank (and returned it).it), and Book 5 has her intern in Gringotts, where she hijacks the alerts.
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* LikeBrotherAndSister: [[spoiler:Snape
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* LikeBrotherAndSister: [[spoiler:Snape[[spoiler:Snape reveals that this was the sort of relationship he had with Lily.]]
* MentalTimeTravel: [[spoiler:Hermione's Celebi allows her and anyone else she wants to go one hour back in time to fix things.]]
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:Regulus blames James Potter for driving a wedge between him and Sirius, when in truth Sirius repeatedly told Regulus they could still be friends and brothers if he just stepped away from the bad guys.]]
* TheReveal: [[spoiler:Sirius did not die, as believed by the general public.]]
** [[spoiler:Regulus Black is not only alive, but also told Voldemort where the Potters were, killed Peter, arranged for Sirius to be sent to prison and ensured Harry was forced to stay at Little Surrey.]]
** [[spoiler:Lily was Severus' sister in all but blood, and Ludwig is the child of their Chandlures.]]
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: [[spoiler:When the encounter with Regulus Black goes completely apeshit wrong (Hogwarts is destroyed, most of its inhabitants die under the Dusknoirs' attack, and the only survivors are Harry, Hermione, Ginny, Luna's Sudowoodo and Tonks), Celebi uses its [[MentalTimeTravel Time Turner]] ability to send the five of them one hour back in time so they can stop Regulus Black.]]
* TakeThat: Many of Regulus' complaints are taken from negative reviews of the story.
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* ActualPacifist: Dumbledore is one. Having to fight against Grindlewald turned him so much off war that he overcompensated in later times with a "forgive-and-forget" policy that allowed Voldemort's followers to [[KarmaHoudini get off lightly with their actions during the war]].
* AdaptationalHeroism: [[spoiler:Barty Crouch Jr. is one of the heroes, helping save Harry and Jasmine after the last task. He is also the Nocturne double agent instead of Snape and, as a ShoutOut to Creator/DavidTennant playing him in the movie, he is also Looker.]]
** [[spoiler:Barty Crouch Sr made sure to take care of his son, being there for him as much as possible, without falling into the trap of being MarriedToTheJob. Barty Crouch Jr. mentions this was a great influence in his upbringing.]]
** Abraxas Malfoy, who in canon was one of Voldemort's earliest followers and a pureblood supremacist, was here a powerful, yet benevolent man who had no issue with his daughter being in an homosexual relationship and opposed his son's intention to take the family into the "old family" supremacism spouted by Voldemort and Team Nocturne.
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:To contrast with the above, Alastor Moody becomes Voldemort's new host - although see WhamEpisode for the result.]]
* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler:Greyback slices Harry's hand away during the climax. He gets a prosthetic that keeps his Pokéballs in and also has an emergency, one-shot low-powered blaster.]]
* AndroclesLion[=/=]BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: [[spoiler:It is stated that Gyarados helps Ron and the others because Ron took great care of him even when he believed Magikarp would never evolve.]]
* BigDamnKiss: Harry kisses Jasmine during the Solstice Ball.
* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:Gyarados comes to save Ron and some of the others when the World Gauntlet Tournament is attacked by Team Nocturne. He also helps the Champions when they are attacked during the second task.]]
** Chapter 32. [[spoiler: Barty's surprise entry and reveal to actually be Looker followed by the arrival of the Professors, Gym Leaders, Headmasters, the parents of Hermione, Xeno Lovegood, Augusta Longbottom, Remus, Sirius, the Pack and an assortment of Police Officers.]]
* TheBusCameBack: More than a book after he was last seen, [[spoiler:the Gyarados that evolved from Ron's Magikarp returns and agrees to once more become Ron's Pokémon.]]
* ChekhovsGun: After the World Cup attack, Jack gives Harry an extra for his Dex so he can exchange Pokémons in any point. [[spoiler:During the climax, Harry uses this feature to get Zygarde without Voldemort noticing.]]
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler:Jack killing Amycus and Alecto Carrow. The former gets kneecapped and has his arms broken at the elbow, then he stabs Alecto with a knife into the brain through her chin, and finishes it by slicing Amycus' gut open.]]
* CultureClash: While most of the other schools stay in their ships or at Hogwarts the Johtoians take over one of the Forbidden Islands. When Harry visits he finds them having a massive party complete with a band and many of them having bare chested wrestling matches. Jasmine happily welcomes Harry "to the dark side".
* ForWantOfANail: The Johto-Kanto war may have been averted, if not for Oroku Koga twitching during the Johto protests, which the Kanto Elite Guard believed was an order to attack. This led to the Pokémon League Massacre that killed 47 Johtoian protestors, including Jasmine's parents, and caused Jack Kenway to break off his friendship with Lance Blackthorn and create the Sons of Johto.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: When Jack and Harry talk the first morning after Olivine's arrival to Hogwarts for the Tournament, Jack points out that Avalonians have lost a lot of knowledge about their myths, putting Merlin's fight against the spirits as an example, because no one knows why the spirits acted like they did or what happened with them after the fight. [[spoiler:This sets up the reveal that the spirits were actually a Spiritomb that Merlin trapped in a stone... a Spiritomb called Voldemort.]]
* GreenAroundTheGills: Remus gets incredibly seasick when he rides on a boat or ship.
* HasTwoMommies: Fleur and Gabrielle Delacour are the genetical daughters of Cynthia and Diantha Delacour-Malfoy.
* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:Jack has all the Team Nocturne Agents that were captured in Little Hangleton killed by the Hoods.]]
* MythologyGag: Even with obvious proof staring him in the face, Fudge will not budge and admit that Voldemort has returned.
* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Voldemort's return manages to do what was believed impossible: his actions led to Jack Kenway and Lance Blackthorn actually making peace and reforging their friendship.
** At the start of Book 4 Voldemort is able to operate in the shadows with only Harry and a passive Avalon in his way. Then he attacks Jasmine Kenway... twice. Book's end sees Jack declare war on Voldemort and Johto moving to oppose Team Nocturne while representatives from Kalos and Unova back them up.
* OffscreenTeleportation: Luna somehow manages to teleport from her seat in the stands during the Second Task to the Bravairy Jack is flying with. And then back. With no one noticing.
* OhCrap: Everybody when [[spoiler:Jack uses his fully grown Tyrantrum as Harry's opponent in the first task.]]
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Draco Malfoy calls Fleur "the daughter of two dyke whores". Unfortunately for him, he does it in front of Jack Kenway and Lance Blackthorn, best friends of Fleur's [[HasTwoMommies mothers]] and two of the world's best Pokémon trainers.
* ReconcileTheBitterFoes: Voldemort attacking Clair (who is Jack's wife and Lance's sister) and Jasmine Kenway, combined with Harry requesting their help, helps Jack and Lance to mend their friendship.
* SmallNameBigEgo: It is revealed that Lucius Malfoy is this. The original Malfoy family is from Kalos, and Lucius was Abraxas Malfoy's second child, the eldest (and heir) being Cynthia. When he demanded to be named heir of the family, since he was the eldest son, his father Abraxas told him he would not, so he "disowned" his family and left for Avalon, where he used his family name and his part of the family money to make himself look important, and upon marrying Narcissa Black used her part of the Black fortune to continue trying to make himself look like the head of House Malfoy.
* TheTease: Iris likes to tease Viktor Krum. He subsequently turns this on her, much to her shock.
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 32. [[spoiler:Voldemort and Tom Riddle are actually different entities: the former is actually a Spiritomb, a Pokémon made of lost souls that Merlin defeated and kept in a stone, and which wants to claim everything. Tom Riddle was an admittedly ambitious Pokémon trainer who found the stone and got tricked into making a deal with Voldemort, which possessed him and ate his soul - which also happened to Quirrell, Cho Chang and Alastor Moody.]]
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* AscendedFanon: Harry calls Umbridge "Umbitch".
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: When Vegeta (Harry's Kommo-o) complains that Kong (Jonas' Primeape) is not fighting to his full potential after Jonas claims Kong is out, Harry demands that Jonas stop babying him and fight him with everything he has. Jonas proceeds to beat the crap out of Harry as Kong pretty much destroys Vegeta, pointing out to Harry that ''this'' is how he fights with everything he has.
* FailedASpotCheck: [[spoiler:The Aurors remember too late that Harry's right hand is a prothesis - one with a blaster that allows him to destroy the glass separating him and his friends from the Aurors' office and begin their mission.]]
* FalseFlagOperation: [[spoiler:Team Nocturne attacks Little Surrey while disguised as the Sons of Johto, aiming at trying to break any international support the latter have.]]
* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: Guilden tells Umbridge that she seems like a "[[CountryMatters See you next Tuesday]]" kind of person.
* HowWeGotHere: Chapter 1 takes place at what appears to be the end of Harry's fifth school year.
* ISurrenderSuckers: Hermione points out to Umbridge she could have used Celebi's MentalTimeTravel ability to ensure neither her nor her friends got arrested. [[spoiler:A minute later, it is made obvious they let Umbridge arrest them so they could get into the Ministry with all of their gear - and take Umbridge out as an extra.]]
* MindRape: Hermione, thanks to training, can read minds, and Luna makes a psychiatrist first, and then Umbridge, break down, using her Veela powers.
** PlayedForLaughs when Guilden complains Umbridge's words are raping his ear.
* NoJustNoReaction: Umbridge is the kind of person that makes others curse their own parents for meeting because it puts them in her presence.
* OhCrap: Rosen and Guilden when they realize that Dolores Umbridge has just entered the detention block check-in. And growing when they realize who she has arrested.
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Umbridge. Among other pearls, calls Lily a whore and tells Harry his father should have killed him.
* SuperSenses: After doing the Long Talk with Leafeon for the first time, Harry gains a huge spike in his hearing ability, to the point he can hear the radio at such a low volume, no one else can hear anything.
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* MentalTimeTravel: [[spoiler:Hermione's Celebi allows her and anyone else she wants to go one hour back in time to fix things.]]
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:Regulus blames James Potter for driving a wedge between him and Sirius, when in truth Sirius repeatedly told Regulus they could still be friends and brothers if he just stepped away from the bad guys.]]
* TheReveal: [[spoiler:Sirius did not die, as believed by the general public.]]
** [[spoiler:Regulus Black is not only alive, but also told Voldemort where the Potters were, killed Peter, arranged for Sirius to be sent to prison and ensured Harry was forced to stay at Little Surrey.]]
** [[spoiler:Lily was Severus' sister in all but blood, and Ludwig is the child of their Chandlures.]]
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: [[spoiler:When the encounter with Regulus Black goes completely apeshit wrong (Hogwarts is destroyed, most of its inhabitants die under the Dusknoirs' attack, and the only survivors are Harry, Hermione, Ginny, Luna's Sudowoodo and Tonks), Celebi uses its [[MentalTimeTravel Time Turner]] ability to send the five of them one hour back in time so they can stop Regulus Black.]]
* TakeThat: Many of Regulus' complaints are taken from negative reviews of the story.
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[[folder:''Harry Potter and the Grand Trainer Tournament'']]
* ActualPacifist: Dumbledore is one. Having to fight against Grindlewald turned him so much off war that he overcompensated in later times with a "forgive-and-forget" policy that allowed Voldemort's followers to [[KarmaHoudini get off lightly with their actions during the war]].
* AdaptationalHeroism: [[spoiler:Barty Crouch Jr. is one of the heroes, helping save Harry and Jasmine after the last task. He is also the Nocturne double agent instead of Snape and, as a ShoutOut to Creator/DavidTennant playing him in the movie, he is also Looker.]]
** [[spoiler:Barty Crouch Sr made sure to take care of his son, being there for him as much as possible, without falling into the trap of being MarriedToTheJob. Barty Crouch Jr. mentions this was a great influence in his upbringing.]]
** Abraxas Malfoy, who in canon was one of Voldemort's earliest followers and a pureblood supremacist, was here a powerful, yet benevolent man who had no issue with his daughter being in an homosexual relationship and opposed his son's intention to take the family into the "old family" supremacism spouted by Voldemort and Team Nocturne.
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:To contrast with the above, Alastor Moody becomes Voldemort's new host - although see WhamEpisode for the result.]]
* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler:Greyback slices Harry's hand away during the climax. He gets a prosthetic that keeps his Pokéballs in and also has an emergency, one-shot low-powered blaster.]]
* AndroclesLion[=/=]BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: [[spoiler:It is stated that Gyarados helps Ron and the others because Ron took great care of him even when he believed Magikarp would never evolve.]]
* BigDamnKiss: Harry kisses Jasmine during the Solstice Ball.
* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:Gyarados comes to save Ron and some of the others when the World Gauntlet Tournament is attacked by Team Nocturne. He also helps the Champions when they are attacked during the second task.]]
** Chapter 32. [[spoiler: Barty's surprise entry and reveal to actually be Looker followed by the arrival of the Professors, Gym Leaders, Headmasters, the parents of Hermione, Xeno Lovegood, Augusta Longbottom, Remus, Sirius, the Pack and an assortment of Police Officers.]]
* TheBusCameBack: More than a book after he was last seen, [[spoiler:the Gyarados that evolved from Ron's Magikarp returns and agrees to once more become Ron's Pokémon.]]
* ChekhovsGun: After the World Cup attack, Jack gives Harry an extra for his Dex so he can exchange Pokémons in any point. [[spoiler:During the climax, Harry uses this feature to get Zygarde without Voldemort noticing.]]
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler:Jack killing Amycus and Alecto Carrow. The former gets kneecapped and has his arms broken at the elbow, then he stabs Alecto with a knife into the brain through her chin, and finishes it by slicing Amycus' gut open.]]
* CultureClash: While most of the other schools stay in their ships or at Hogwarts the Johtoians take over one of the Forbidden Islands. When Harry visits he finds them having a massive party complete with a band and many of them having bare chested wrestling matches. Jasmine happily welcomes Harry "to the dark side".
* ForWantOfANail: The Johto-Kanto war may have been averted, if not for Oroku Koga twitching during the Johto protests, which the Kanto Elite Guard believed was an order to attack. This led to the Pokémon League Massacre that killed 47 Johtoian protestors, including Jasmine's parents, and caused Jack Kenway to break off his friendship with Lance Blackthorn and create the Sons of Johto.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: When Jack and Harry talk the first morning after Olivine's arrival to Hogwarts for the Tournament, Jack points out that Avalonians have lost a lot of knowledge about their myths, putting Merlin's fight against the spirits as an example, because no one knows why the spirits acted like they did or what happened with them after the fight. [[spoiler:This sets up the reveal that the spirits were actually a Spiritomb that Merlin trapped in a stone... a Spiritomb called Voldemort.]]
* GreenAroundTheGills: Remus gets incredibly seasick when he rides on a boat or ship.
* HasTwoMommies: Fleur and Gabrielle Delacour are the genetical daughters of Cynthia and Diantha Delacour-Malfoy.
* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:Jack has all the Team Nocturne Agents that were captured in Little Hangleton killed by the Hoods.]]
* MythologyGag: Even with obvious proof staring him in the face, Fudge will not budge and admit that Voldemort has returned.
* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Voldemort's return manages to do what was believed impossible: his actions led to Jack Kenway and Lance Blackthorn actually making peace and reforging their friendship.
** At the start of Book 4 Voldemort is able to operate in the shadows with only Harry and a passive Avalon in his way. Then he attacks Jasmine Kenway... twice. Book's end sees Jack declare war on Voldemort and Johto moving to oppose Team Nocturne while representatives from Kalos and Unova back them up.
* OffscreenTeleportation: Luna somehow manages to teleport from her seat in the stands during the Second Task to the Bravairy Jack is flying with. And then back. With no one noticing.
* OhCrap: Everybody when [[spoiler:Jack uses his fully grown Tyrantrum as Harry's opponent in the first task.]]
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Draco Malfoy calls Fleur "the daughter of two dyke whores". Unfortunately for him, he does it in front of Jack Kenway and Lance Blackthorn, best friends of Fleur's [[HasTwoMommies mothers]] and two of the world's best Pokémon trainers.
* ReconcileTheBitterFoes: Voldemort attacking Clair (who is Jack's wife and Lance's sister) and Jasmine Kenway, combined with Harry requesting their help, helps Jack and Lance to mend their friendship.
* SmallNameBigEgo: It is revealed that Lucius Malfoy is this. The original Malfoy family is from Kalos, and Lucius was Abraxas Malfoy's second child, the eldest (and heir) being Cynthia. When he demanded to be named heir of the family, since he was the eldest son, his father Abraxas told him he would not, so he "disowned" his family and left for Avalon, where he used his family name and his part of the family money to make himself look important, and upon marrying Narcissa Black used her part of the Black fortune to continue trying to make himself look like the head of House Malfoy.
* TheTease: Iris likes to tease Viktor Krum. He subsequently turns this on her, much to her shock.
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 32. [[spoiler:Voldemort and Tom Riddle are actually different entities: the former is actually a Spiritomb, a Pokémon made of lost souls that Merlin defeated and kept in a stone, and which wants to claim everything. Tom Riddle was an admittedly ambitious Pokémon trainer who found the stone and got tricked into making a deal with Voldemort, which possessed him and ate his soul - which also happened to Quirrell, Cho Chang and Alastor Moody.]]
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[[folder:''Harry Potter and the Order of Moltres'']]
* AscendedFanon: Harry calls Umbridge "Umbitch".
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: When Vegeta (Harry's Kommo-o) complains that Kong (Jonas' Primeape) is not fighting to his full potential after Jonas claims Kong is out, Harry demands that Jonas stop babying him and fight him with everything he has. Jonas proceeds to beat the crap out of Harry as Kong pretty much destroys Vegeta, pointing out to Harry that ''this'' is how he fights with everything he has.
* FailedASpotCheck: [[spoiler:The Aurors remember too late that Harry's right hand is a prothesis - one with a blaster that allows him to destroy the glass separating him and his friends from the Aurors' office and begin their mission.]]
* FalseFlagOperation: [[spoiler:Team Nocturne attacks Little Surrey while disguised as the Sons of Johto, aiming at trying to break any international support the latter have.]]
* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: Guilden tells Umbridge that she seems like a "[[CountryMatters See you next Tuesday]]" kind of person.
* HowWeGotHere: Chapter 1 takes place at what appears to be the end of Harry's fifth school year.
* ISurrenderSuckers: Hermione points out to Umbridge she could have used Celebi's MentalTimeTravel ability to ensure neither her nor her friends got arrested. [[spoiler:A minute later, it is made obvious they let Umbridge arrest them so they could get into the Ministry with all of their gear - and take Umbridge out as an extra.]]
* MindRape: Hermione, thanks to training, can read minds, and Luna makes a psychiatrist first, and then Umbridge, break down, using her Veela powers.
** PlayedForLaughs when Guilden complains Umbridge's words are raping his ear.
* NoJustNoReaction: Umbridge is the kind of person that makes others curse their own parents for meeting because it puts them in her presence.
* OhCrap: Rosen and Guilden when they realize that Dolores Umbridge has just entered the detention block check-in. And growing when they realize who she has arrested.
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Umbridge. Among other pearls, calls Lily a whore and tells Harry his father should have killed him.
* SuperSenses: After doing the Long Talk with Leafeon for the first time, Harry gains a huge spike in his hearing ability, to the point he can hear the radio at such a low volume, no one else can hear anything.
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* ''Harry Potter and the Last Aura Knight'' ([=TBA=])
* ''Harry Potter and the Hour of Legends'' ([=TBA=])
* ''Harry Potter and the Blessed Child'' ([=TBA=])
* ''Harry Potter and the Hour of Legends'' ([=TBA=])
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* LikeBrotherAndSister: [[spoiler:Snape reveals that this was the sort of relationship he had with Lily.]]
* MentalTimeTravel: [[spoiler:Hermione's Celebi allows her and anyone else she wants to go one hour back in time to fix things.]]
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:Regulus blames James Potter for driving a wedge between him and Sirius, when in truth Sirius repeatedly told Regulus they could still be friends and brothers if he just stepped away from the bad guys.]]
* TheReveal: [[spoiler:Sirius did not die, as believed by the general public.]]
** [[spoiler:Regulus Black is not only alive, but also told Voldemort where the Potters were, killed Peter, arranged for Sirius to be sent to prison and ensured Harry was forced to stay at Little Surrey.]]
** [[spoiler:Lily was Severus' sister in all but blood, and Ludwig is the child of their Chandlures.]]
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: [[spoiler:When the encounter with Regulus Black goes completely apeshit wrong (Hogwarts is destroyed, most of its inhabitants die under the Dusknoirs' attack, and the only survivors are Harry, Hermione, Ginny, Luna's Sudowoodo and Tonks), Celebi uses its [[MentalTimeTravel Time Turner]] ability to send the five of them one hour back in time so they can stop Regulus Black.]]
* TakeThat: Many of Regulus' complaints are taken from negative reviews of the story.
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[[folder:''Harry Potter and the Grand Trainer Tournament'']]
* ActualPacifist: Dumbledore is one. Having to fight against Grindlewald turned him so much off war that he overcompensated in later times with a "forgive-and-forget" policy that allowed Voldemort's followers to [[KarmaHoudini get off lightly with their actions during the war]].
* AdaptationalHeroism: [[spoiler:Barty Crouch Jr. is one of the heroes, helping save Harry and Jasmine after the last task. He is also the Nocturne double agent instead of Snape and, as a ShoutOut to Creator/DavidTennant playing him in the movie, he is also Looker.]]
** [[spoiler:Barty Crouch Sr made sure to take care of his son, being there for him as much as possible, without falling into the trap of being MarriedToTheJob. Barty Crouch Jr. mentions this was a great influence in his upbringing.]]
** Abraxas Malfoy, who in canon was one of Voldemort's earliest followers and a pureblood supremacist, was here a powerful, yet benevolent man who had no issue with his daughter being in an homosexual relationship and opposed his son's intention to take the family into the "old family" supremacism spouted by Voldemort and Team Nocturne.
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:To contrast with the above, Alastor Moody becomes Voldemort's new host - although see WhamEpisode for the result.]]
* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler:Greyback slices Harry's hand away during the climax. He gets a prosthetic that keeps his Pokéballs in and also has an emergency, one-shot low-powered blaster.]]
* AndroclesLion[=/=]BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: [[spoiler:It is stated that Gyarados helps Ron and the others because Ron took great care of him even when he believed Magikarp would never evolve.]]
* BigDamnKiss: Harry kisses Jasmine during the Solstice Ball.
* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:Gyarados comes to save Ron and some of the others when the World Gauntlet Tournament is attacked by Team Nocturne. He also helps the Champions when they are attacked during the second task.]]
** Chapter 32. [[spoiler: Barty's surprise entry and reveal to actually be Looker followed by the arrival of the Professors, Gym Leaders, Headmasters, the parents of Hermione, Xeno Lovegood, Augusta Longbottom, Remus, Sirius, the Pack and an assortment of Police Officers.]]
* TheBusCameBack: More than a book after he was last seen, [[spoiler:the Gyarados that evolved from Ron's Magikarp returns and agrees to once more become Ron's Pokémon.]]
* ChekhovsGun: After the World Cup attack, Jack gives Harry an extra for his Dex so he can exchange Pokémons in any point. [[spoiler:During the climax, Harry uses this feature to get Zygarde without Voldemort noticing.]]
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler:Jack killing Amycus and Alecto Carrow. The former gets kneecapped and has his arms broken at the elbow, then he stabs Alecto with a knife into the brain through her chin, and finishes it by slicing Amycus' gut open.]]
* CultureClash: While most of the other schools stay in their ships or at Hogwarts the Johtoians take over one of the Forbidden Islands. When Harry visits he finds them having a massive party complete with a band and many of them having bare chested wrestling matches. Jasmine happily welcomes Harry "to the dark side".
* ForWantOfANail: The Johto-Kanto war may have been averted, if not for Oroku Koga twitching during the Johto protests, which the Kanto Elite Guard believed was an order to attack. This led to the Pokémon League Massacre that killed 47 Johtoian protestors, including Jasmine's parents, and caused Jack Kenway to break off his friendship with Lance Blackthorn and create the Sons of Johto.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: When Jack and Harry talk the first morning after Olivine's arrival to Hogwarts for the Tournament, Jack points out that Avalonians have lost a lot of knowledge about their myths, putting Merlin's fight against the spirits as an example, because no one knows why the spirits acted like they did or what happened with them after the fight. [[spoiler:This sets up the reveal that the spirits were actually a Spiritomb that Merlin trapped in a stone... a Spiritomb called Voldemort.]]
* GreenAroundTheGills: Remus gets incredibly seasick when he rides on a boat or ship.
* HasTwoMommies: Fleur and Gabrielle Delacour are the genetical daughters of Cynthia and Diantha Delacour-Malfoy.
* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:Jack has all the Team Nocturne Agents that were captured in Little Hangleton killed by the Hoods.]]
* MythologyGag: Even with obvious proof staring him in the face, Fudge will not budge and admit that Voldemort has returned.
* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Voldemort's return manages to do what was believed impossible: his actions led to Jack Kenway and Lance Blackthorn actually making peace and reforging their friendship.
** At the start of Book 4 Voldemort is able to operate in the shadows with only Harry and a passive Avalon in his way. Then he attacks Jasmine Kenway... twice. Book's end sees Jack declare war on Voldemort and Johto moving to oppose Team Nocturne while representatives from Kalos and Unova back them up.
* OffscreenTeleportation: Luna somehow manages to teleport from her seat in the stands during the Second Task to the Bravairy Jack is flying with. And then back. With no one noticing.
* OhCrap: Everybody when [[spoiler:Jack uses his fully grown Tyrantrum as Harry's opponent in the first task.]]
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Draco Malfoy calls Fleur "the daughter of two dyke whores". Unfortunately for him, he does it in front of Jack Kenway and Lance Blackthorn, best friends of Fleur's [[HasTwoMommies mothers]] and two of the world's best Pokémon trainers.
* ReconcileTheBitterFoes: Voldemort attacking Clair (who is Jack's wife and Lance's sister) and Jasmine Kenway, combined with Harry requesting their help, helps Jack and Lance to mend their friendship.
* SmallNameBigEgo: It is revealed that Lucius Malfoy is this. The original Malfoy family is from Kalos, and Lucius was Abraxas Malfoy's second child, the eldest (and heir) being Cynthia. When he demanded to be named heir of the family, since he was the eldest son, his father Abraxas told him he would not, so he "disowned" his family and left for Avalon, where he used his family name and his part of the family money to make himself look important, and upon marrying Narcissa Black used her part of the Black fortune to continue trying to make himself look like the head of House Malfoy.
* TheTease: Iris likes to tease Viktor Krum. He subsequently turns this on her, much to her shock.
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 32. [[spoiler:Voldemort and Tom Riddle are actually different entities: the former is actually a Spiritomb, a Pokémon made of lost souls that Merlin defeated and kept in a stone, and which wants to claim everything. Tom Riddle was an admittedly ambitious Pokémon trainer who found the stone and got tricked into making a deal with Voldemort, which possessed him and ate his soul - which also happened to Quirrell, Cho Chang and Alastor Moody.]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder:''Harry Potter and the Order of Moltres'']]
* AscendedFanon: Harry calls Umbridge "Umbitch".
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: When Vegeta (Harry's Kommo-o) complains that Kong (Jonas' Primeape) is not fighting to his full potential after Jonas claims Kong is out, Harry demands that Jonas stop babying him and fight him with everything he has. Jonas proceeds to beat the crap out of Harry as Kong pretty much destroys Vegeta, pointing out to Harry that ''this'' is how he fights with everything he has.
* FailedASpotCheck: [[spoiler:The Aurors remember too late that Harry's right hand is a prothesis - one with a blaster that allows him to destroy the glass separating him and his friends from the Aurors' office and begin their mission.]]
* FalseFlagOperation: [[spoiler:Team Nocturne attacks Little Surrey while disguised as the Sons of Johto, aiming at trying to break any international support the latter have.]]
* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: Guilden tells Umbridge that she seems like a "[[CountryMatters See you next Tuesday]]" kind of person.
* HowWeGotHere: Chapter 1 takes place at what appears to be the end of Harry's fifth school year.
* ISurrenderSuckers: Hermione points out to Umbridge she could have used Celebi's MentalTimeTravel ability to ensure neither her nor her friends got arrested. [[spoiler:A minute later, it is made obvious they let Umbridge arrest them so they could get into the Ministry with all of their gear - and take Umbridge out as an extra.]]
* MindRape: Hermione, thanks to training, can read minds, and Luna makes a psychiatrist first, and then Umbridge, break down, using her Veela powers.
** PlayedForLaughs when Guilden complains Umbridge's words are raping his ear.
* NoJustNoReaction: Umbridge is the kind of person that makes others curse their own parents for meeting because it puts them in her presence.
* OhCrap: Rosen and Guilden when they realize that Dolores Umbridge has just entered the detention block check-in. And growing when they realize who she has arrested.
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Umbridge. Among other pearls, calls Lily a whore and tells Harry his father should have killed him.
* SuperSenses: After doing the Long Talk with Leafeon for the first time, Harry gains a huge spike in his hearing ability, to the point he can hear the radio at such a low volume, no one else can hear anything.
[[/folder]]
* MentalTimeTravel: [[spoiler:Hermione's Celebi allows her and anyone else she wants to go one hour back in time to fix things.]]
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:Regulus blames James Potter for driving a wedge between him and Sirius, when in truth Sirius repeatedly told Regulus they could still be friends and brothers if he just stepped away from the bad guys.]]
* TheReveal: [[spoiler:Sirius did not die, as believed by the general public.]]
** [[spoiler:Regulus Black is not only alive, but also told Voldemort where the Potters were, killed Peter, arranged for Sirius to be sent to prison and ensured Harry was forced to stay at Little Surrey.]]
** [[spoiler:Lily was Severus' sister in all but blood, and Ludwig is the child of their Chandlures.]]
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: [[spoiler:When the encounter with Regulus Black goes completely apeshit wrong (Hogwarts is destroyed, most of its inhabitants die under the Dusknoirs' attack, and the only survivors are Harry, Hermione, Ginny, Luna's Sudowoodo and Tonks), Celebi uses its [[MentalTimeTravel Time Turner]] ability to send the five of them one hour back in time so they can stop Regulus Black.]]
* TakeThat: Many of Regulus' complaints are taken from negative reviews of the story.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:''Harry Potter and the Grand Trainer Tournament'']]
* ActualPacifist: Dumbledore is one. Having to fight against Grindlewald turned him so much off war that he overcompensated in later times with a "forgive-and-forget" policy that allowed Voldemort's followers to [[KarmaHoudini get off lightly with their actions during the war]].
* AdaptationalHeroism: [[spoiler:Barty Crouch Jr. is one of the heroes, helping save Harry and Jasmine after the last task. He is also the Nocturne double agent instead of Snape and, as a ShoutOut to Creator/DavidTennant playing him in the movie, he is also Looker.]]
** [[spoiler:Barty Crouch Sr made sure to take care of his son, being there for him as much as possible, without falling into the trap of being MarriedToTheJob. Barty Crouch Jr. mentions this was a great influence in his upbringing.]]
** Abraxas Malfoy, who in canon was one of Voldemort's earliest followers and a pureblood supremacist, was here a powerful, yet benevolent man who had no issue with his daughter being in an homosexual relationship and opposed his son's intention to take the family into the "old family" supremacism spouted by Voldemort and Team Nocturne.
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:To contrast with the above, Alastor Moody becomes Voldemort's new host - although see WhamEpisode for the result.]]
* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler:Greyback slices Harry's hand away during the climax. He gets a prosthetic that keeps his Pokéballs in and also has an emergency, one-shot low-powered blaster.]]
* AndroclesLion[=/=]BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: [[spoiler:It is stated that Gyarados helps Ron and the others because Ron took great care of him even when he believed Magikarp would never evolve.]]
* BigDamnKiss: Harry kisses Jasmine during the Solstice Ball.
* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:Gyarados comes to save Ron and some of the others when the World Gauntlet Tournament is attacked by Team Nocturne. He also helps the Champions when they are attacked during the second task.]]
** Chapter 32. [[spoiler: Barty's surprise entry and reveal to actually be Looker followed by the arrival of the Professors, Gym Leaders, Headmasters, the parents of Hermione, Xeno Lovegood, Augusta Longbottom, Remus, Sirius, the Pack and an assortment of Police Officers.]]
* TheBusCameBack: More than a book after he was last seen, [[spoiler:the Gyarados that evolved from Ron's Magikarp returns and agrees to once more become Ron's Pokémon.]]
* ChekhovsGun: After the World Cup attack, Jack gives Harry an extra for his Dex so he can exchange Pokémons in any point. [[spoiler:During the climax, Harry uses this feature to get Zygarde without Voldemort noticing.]]
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler:Jack killing Amycus and Alecto Carrow. The former gets kneecapped and has his arms broken at the elbow, then he stabs Alecto with a knife into the brain through her chin, and finishes it by slicing Amycus' gut open.]]
* CultureClash: While most of the other schools stay in their ships or at Hogwarts the Johtoians take over one of the Forbidden Islands. When Harry visits he finds them having a massive party complete with a band and many of them having bare chested wrestling matches. Jasmine happily welcomes Harry "to the dark side".
* ForWantOfANail: The Johto-Kanto war may have been averted, if not for Oroku Koga twitching during the Johto protests, which the Kanto Elite Guard believed was an order to attack. This led to the Pokémon League Massacre that killed 47 Johtoian protestors, including Jasmine's parents, and caused Jack Kenway to break off his friendship with Lance Blackthorn and create the Sons of Johto.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: When Jack and Harry talk the first morning after Olivine's arrival to Hogwarts for the Tournament, Jack points out that Avalonians have lost a lot of knowledge about their myths, putting Merlin's fight against the spirits as an example, because no one knows why the spirits acted like they did or what happened with them after the fight. [[spoiler:This sets up the reveal that the spirits were actually a Spiritomb that Merlin trapped in a stone... a Spiritomb called Voldemort.]]
* GreenAroundTheGills: Remus gets incredibly seasick when he rides on a boat or ship.
* HasTwoMommies: Fleur and Gabrielle Delacour are the genetical daughters of Cynthia and Diantha Delacour-Malfoy.
* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:Jack has all the Team Nocturne Agents that were captured in Little Hangleton killed by the Hoods.]]
* MythologyGag: Even with obvious proof staring him in the face, Fudge will not budge and admit that Voldemort has returned.
* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Voldemort's return manages to do what was believed impossible: his actions led to Jack Kenway and Lance Blackthorn actually making peace and reforging their friendship.
** At the start of Book 4 Voldemort is able to operate in the shadows with only Harry and a passive Avalon in his way. Then he attacks Jasmine Kenway... twice. Book's end sees Jack declare war on Voldemort and Johto moving to oppose Team Nocturne while representatives from Kalos and Unova back them up.
* OffscreenTeleportation: Luna somehow manages to teleport from her seat in the stands during the Second Task to the Bravairy Jack is flying with. And then back. With no one noticing.
* OhCrap: Everybody when [[spoiler:Jack uses his fully grown Tyrantrum as Harry's opponent in the first task.]]
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Draco Malfoy calls Fleur "the daughter of two dyke whores". Unfortunately for him, he does it in front of Jack Kenway and Lance Blackthorn, best friends of Fleur's [[HasTwoMommies mothers]] and two of the world's best Pokémon trainers.
* ReconcileTheBitterFoes: Voldemort attacking Clair (who is Jack's wife and Lance's sister) and Jasmine Kenway, combined with Harry requesting their help, helps Jack and Lance to mend their friendship.
* SmallNameBigEgo: It is revealed that Lucius Malfoy is this. The original Malfoy family is from Kalos, and Lucius was Abraxas Malfoy's second child, the eldest (and heir) being Cynthia. When he demanded to be named heir of the family, since he was the eldest son, his father Abraxas told him he would not, so he "disowned" his family and left for Avalon, where he used his family name and his part of the family money to make himself look important, and upon marrying Narcissa Black used her part of the Black fortune to continue trying to make himself look like the head of House Malfoy.
* TheTease: Iris likes to tease Viktor Krum. He subsequently turns this on her, much to her shock.
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 32. [[spoiler:Voldemort and Tom Riddle are actually different entities: the former is actually a Spiritomb, a Pokémon made of lost souls that Merlin defeated and kept in a stone, and which wants to claim everything. Tom Riddle was an admittedly ambitious Pokémon trainer who found the stone and got tricked into making a deal with Voldemort, which possessed him and ate his soul - which also happened to Quirrell, Cho Chang and Alastor Moody.]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder:''Harry Potter and the Order of Moltres'']]
* AscendedFanon: Harry calls Umbridge "Umbitch".
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: When Vegeta (Harry's Kommo-o) complains that Kong (Jonas' Primeape) is not fighting to his full potential after Jonas claims Kong is out, Harry demands that Jonas stop babying him and fight him with everything he has. Jonas proceeds to beat the crap out of Harry as Kong pretty much destroys Vegeta, pointing out to Harry that ''this'' is how he fights with everything he has.
* FailedASpotCheck: [[spoiler:The Aurors remember too late that Harry's right hand is a prothesis - one with a blaster that allows him to destroy the glass separating him and his friends from the Aurors' office and begin their mission.]]
* FalseFlagOperation: [[spoiler:Team Nocturne attacks Little Surrey while disguised as the Sons of Johto, aiming at trying to break any international support the latter have.]]
* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: Guilden tells Umbridge that she seems like a "[[CountryMatters See you next Tuesday]]" kind of person.
* HowWeGotHere: Chapter 1 takes place at what appears to be the end of Harry's fifth school year.
* ISurrenderSuckers: Hermione points out to Umbridge she could have used Celebi's MentalTimeTravel ability to ensure neither her nor her friends got arrested. [[spoiler:A minute later, it is made obvious they let Umbridge arrest them so they could get into the Ministry with all of their gear - and take Umbridge out as an extra.]]
* MindRape: Hermione, thanks to training, can read minds, and Luna makes a psychiatrist first, and then Umbridge, break down, using her Veela powers.
** PlayedForLaughs when Guilden complains Umbridge's words are raping his ear.
* NoJustNoReaction: Umbridge is the kind of person that makes others curse their own parents for meeting because it puts them in her presence.
* OhCrap: Rosen and Guilden when they realize that Dolores Umbridge has just entered the detention block check-in. And growing when they realize who she has arrested.
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Umbridge. Among other pearls, calls Lily a whore and tells Harry his father should have killed him.
* SuperSenses: After doing the Long Talk with Leafeon for the first time, Harry gains a huge spike in his hearing ability, to the point he can hear the radio at such a low volume, no one else can hear anything.
[[/folder]]
to:
* LikeBrotherAndSister: [[spoiler:Snape reveals that this was the sort of relationship he had with Lily.]]
* MentalTimeTravel: [[spoiler:Hermione's Celebi allows her and anyone else she wants to go one hour back in time to fix things.]]
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:Regulus blames James Potter for driving a wedge between him and Sirius, when in truth Sirius repeatedly told Regulus they could still be friends and brothers if he just stepped away from the bad guys.]]
* TheReveal: [[spoiler:Sirius did not die, as believed by the general public.]]
** [[spoiler:Regulus Black is not only alive, but also told Voldemort where the Potters were, killed Peter, arranged for Sirius to be sent to prison and ensured Harry was forced to stay at Little Surrey.]]
** [[spoiler:Lily was Severus' sister in all but blood, and Ludwig is the child of their Chandlures.]]
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: [[spoiler:When the encounter with Regulus Black goes completely apeshit wrong (Hogwarts is destroyed, most of its inhabitants die under the Dusknoirs' attack, and the only survivors are Harry, Hermione, Ginny, Luna's Sudowoodo and Tonks), Celebi uses its [[MentalTimeTravel Time Turner]] ability to send the five of them one hour back in time so they can stop Regulus Black.]]
* TakeThat: Many of Regulus' complaints are taken from negative reviews of the story.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:''Harry Potter and the Grand Trainer Tournament'']]
* ActualPacifist: Dumbledore is one. Having to fight against Grindlewald turned him so much off war that he overcompensated in later times with a "forgive-and-forget" policy that allowed Voldemort's followers to [[KarmaHoudini get off lightly with their actions during the war]].
* AdaptationalHeroism: [[spoiler:Barty Crouch Jr. is one of the heroes, helping save Harry and Jasmine after the last task. He is also the Nocturne double agent instead of Snape and, as a ShoutOut to Creator/DavidTennant playing him in the movie, he is also Looker.]]
** [[spoiler:Barty Crouch Sr made sure to take care of his son, being there for him as much as possible, without falling into the trap of being MarriedToTheJob. Barty Crouch Jr. mentions this was a great influence in his upbringing.]]
** Abraxas Malfoy, who in canon was one of Voldemort's earliest followers and a pureblood supremacist, was here a powerful, yet benevolent man who had no issue with his daughter being in an homosexual relationship and opposed his son's intention to take the family into the "old family" supremacism spouted by Voldemort and Team Nocturne.
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:To contrast with the above, Alastor Moody becomes Voldemort's new host - although see WhamEpisode for the result.]]
* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler:Greyback slices Harry's hand away during the climax. He gets a prosthetic that keeps his Pokéballs in and also has an emergency, one-shot low-powered blaster.]]
* AndroclesLion[=/=]BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: [[spoiler:It is stated that Gyarados helps Ron and the others because Ron took great care of him even when he believed Magikarp would never evolve.]]
* BigDamnKiss: Harry kisses Jasmine during the Solstice Ball.
* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:Gyarados comes to save Ron and some of the others when the World Gauntlet Tournament is attacked by Team Nocturne. He also helps the Champions when they are attacked during the second task.]]
** Chapter 32. [[spoiler: Barty's surprise entry and reveal to actually be Looker followed by the arrival of the Professors, Gym Leaders, Headmasters, the parents of Hermione, Xeno Lovegood, Augusta Longbottom, Remus, Sirius, the Pack and an assortment of Police Officers.]]
* TheBusCameBack: More than a book after he was last seen, [[spoiler:the Gyarados that evolved from Ron's Magikarp returns and agrees to once more become Ron's Pokémon.]]
* ChekhovsGun: After the World Cup attack, Jack gives Harry an extra for his Dex so he can exchange Pokémons in any point. [[spoiler:During the climax, Harry uses this feature to get Zygarde without Voldemort noticing.]]
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler:Jack killing Amycus and Alecto Carrow. The former gets kneecapped and has his arms broken at the elbow, then he stabs Alecto with a knife into the brain through her chin, and finishes it by slicing Amycus' gut open.]]
* CultureClash: While most of the other schools stay in their ships or at Hogwarts the Johtoians take over one of the Forbidden Islands. When Harry visits he finds them having a massive party complete with a band and many of them having bare chested wrestling matches. Jasmine happily welcomes Harry "to the dark side".
* ForWantOfANail: The Johto-Kanto war may have been averted, if not for Oroku Koga twitching during the Johto protests, which the Kanto Elite Guard believed was an order to attack. This led to the Pokémon League Massacre that killed 47 Johtoian protestors, including Jasmine's parents, and caused Jack Kenway to break off his friendship with Lance Blackthorn and create the Sons of Johto.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: When Jack and Harry talk the first morning after Olivine's arrival to Hogwarts for the Tournament, Jack points out that Avalonians have lost a lot of knowledge about their myths, putting Merlin's fight against the spirits as an example, because no one knows why the spirits acted like they did or what happened with them after the fight. [[spoiler:This sets up the reveal that the spirits were actually a Spiritomb that Merlin trapped in a stone... a Spiritomb called Voldemort.]]
* GreenAroundTheGills: Remus gets incredibly seasick when he rides on a boat or ship.
* HasTwoMommies: Fleur and Gabrielle Delacour are the genetical daughters of Cynthia and Diantha Delacour-Malfoy.
* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:Jack has all the Team Nocturne Agents that were captured in Little Hangleton killed by the Hoods.]]
* MythologyGag: Even with obvious proof staring him in the face, Fudge will not budge and admit that Voldemort has returned.
* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Voldemort's return manages to do what was believed impossible: his actions led to Jack Kenway and Lance Blackthorn actually making peace and reforging their friendship.
** At the start of Book 4 Voldemort is able to operate in the shadows with only Harry and a passive Avalon in his way. Then he attacks Jasmine Kenway... twice. Book's end sees Jack declare war on Voldemort and Johto moving to oppose Team Nocturne while representatives from Kalos and Unova back them up.
* OffscreenTeleportation: Luna somehow manages to teleport from her seat in the stands during the Second Task to the Bravairy Jack is flying with. And then back. With no one noticing.
* OhCrap: Everybody when [[spoiler:Jack uses his fully grown Tyrantrum as Harry's opponent in the first task.]]
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Draco Malfoy calls Fleur "the daughter of two dyke whores". Unfortunately for him, he does it in front of Jack Kenway and Lance Blackthorn, best friends of Fleur's [[HasTwoMommies mothers]] and two of the world's best Pokémon trainers.
* ReconcileTheBitterFoes: Voldemort attacking Clair (who is Jack's wife and Lance's sister) and Jasmine Kenway, combined with Harry requesting their help, helps Jack and Lance to mend their friendship.
* SmallNameBigEgo: It is revealed that Lucius Malfoy is this. The original Malfoy family is from Kalos, and Lucius was Abraxas Malfoy's second child, the eldest (and heir) being Cynthia. When he demanded to be named heir of the family, since he was the eldest son, his father Abraxas told him he would not, so he "disowned" his family and left for Avalon, where he used his family name and his part of the family money to make himself look important, and upon marrying Narcissa Black used her part of the Black fortune to continue trying to make himself look like the head of House Malfoy.
* TheTease: Iris likes to tease Viktor Krum. He subsequently turns this on her, much to her shock.
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 32. [[spoiler:Voldemort and Tom Riddle are actually different entities: the former is actually a Spiritomb, a Pokémon made of lost souls that Merlin defeated and kept in a stone, and which wants to claim everything. Tom Riddle was an admittedly ambitious Pokémon trainer who found the stone and got tricked into making a deal with Voldemort, which possessed him and ate his soul - which also happened to Quirrell, Cho Chang and Alastor Moody.]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder:''Harry Potter and the Order of Moltres'']]
* AscendedFanon: Harry calls Umbridge "Umbitch".
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: When Vegeta (Harry's Kommo-o) complains that Kong (Jonas' Primeape) is not fighting to his full potential after Jonas claims Kong is out, Harry demands that Jonas stop babying him and fight him with everything he has. Jonas proceeds to beat the crap out of Harry as Kong pretty much destroys Vegeta, pointing out to Harry that ''this'' is how he fights with everything he has.
* FailedASpotCheck: [[spoiler:The Aurors remember too late that Harry's right hand is a prothesis - one with a blaster that allows him to destroy the glass separating him and his friends from the Aurors' office and begin their mission.]]
* FalseFlagOperation: [[spoiler:Team Nocturne attacks Little Surrey while disguised as the Sons of Johto, aiming at trying to break any international support the latter have.]]
* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: Guilden tells Umbridge that she seems like a "[[CountryMatters See you next Tuesday]]" kind of person.
* HowWeGotHere: Chapter 1 takes place at what appears to be the end of Harry's fifth school year.
* ISurrenderSuckers: Hermione points out to Umbridge she could have used Celebi's MentalTimeTravel ability to ensure neither her nor her friends got arrested. [[spoiler:A minute later, it is made obvious they let Umbridge arrest them so they could get into the Ministry with all of their gear - and take Umbridge out as an extra.]]
* MindRape: Hermione, thanks to training, can read minds, and Luna makes a psychiatrist first, and then Umbridge, break down, using her Veela powers.
** PlayedForLaughs when Guilden complains Umbridge's words are raping his ear.
* NoJustNoReaction: Umbridge is the kind of person that makes others curse their own parents for meeting because it puts them in her presence.
* OhCrap: Rosen and Guilden when they realize that Dolores Umbridge has just entered the detention block check-in. And growing when they realize who she has arrested.
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Umbridge. Among other pearls, calls Lily a whore and tells Harry his father should have killed him.
* SuperSenses: After doing the Long Talk with Leafeon for the first time, Harry gains a huge spike in his hearing ability, to the point he can hear the radio at such a low volume, no one else can hear anything.
[[/folder]][[spoiler:Snape
* MentalTimeTravel: [[spoiler:Hermione's Celebi allows her and anyone else she wants to go one hour back in time to fix things.]]
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:Regulus blames James Potter for driving a wedge between him and Sirius, when in truth Sirius repeatedly told Regulus they could still be friends and brothers if he just stepped away from the bad guys.]]
* TheReveal: [[spoiler:Sirius did not die, as believed by the general public.]]
** [[spoiler:Regulus Black is not only alive, but also told Voldemort where the Potters were, killed Peter, arranged for Sirius to be sent to prison and ensured Harry was forced to stay at Little Surrey.]]
** [[spoiler:Lily was Severus' sister in all but blood, and Ludwig is the child of their Chandlures.]]
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: [[spoiler:When the encounter with Regulus Black goes completely apeshit wrong (Hogwarts is destroyed, most of its inhabitants die under the Dusknoirs' attack, and the only survivors are Harry, Hermione, Ginny, Luna's Sudowoodo and Tonks), Celebi uses its [[MentalTimeTravel Time Turner]] ability to send the five of them one hour back in time so they can stop Regulus Black.]]
* TakeThat: Many of Regulus' complaints are taken from negative reviews of the story.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:''Harry Potter and the Grand Trainer Tournament'']]
* ActualPacifist: Dumbledore is one. Having to fight against Grindlewald turned him so much off war that he overcompensated in later times with a "forgive-and-forget" policy that allowed Voldemort's followers to [[KarmaHoudini get off lightly with their actions during the war]].
* AdaptationalHeroism: [[spoiler:Barty Crouch Jr. is one of the heroes, helping save Harry and Jasmine after the last task. He is also the Nocturne double agent instead of Snape and, as a ShoutOut to Creator/DavidTennant playing him in the movie, he is also Looker.]]
** [[spoiler:Barty Crouch Sr made sure to take care of his son, being there for him as much as possible, without falling into the trap of being MarriedToTheJob. Barty Crouch Jr. mentions this was a great influence in his upbringing.]]
** Abraxas Malfoy, who in canon was one of Voldemort's earliest followers and a pureblood supremacist, was here a powerful, yet benevolent man who had no issue with his daughter being in an homosexual relationship and opposed his son's intention to take the family into the "old family" supremacism spouted by Voldemort and Team Nocturne.
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:To contrast with the above, Alastor Moody becomes Voldemort's new host - although see WhamEpisode for the result.]]
* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler:Greyback slices Harry's hand away during the climax. He gets a prosthetic that keeps his Pokéballs in and also has an emergency, one-shot low-powered blaster.]]
* AndroclesLion[=/=]BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: [[spoiler:It is stated that Gyarados helps Ron and the others because Ron took great care of him even when he believed Magikarp would never evolve.]]
* BigDamnKiss: Harry kisses Jasmine during the Solstice Ball.
* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:Gyarados comes to save Ron and some of the others when the World Gauntlet Tournament is attacked by Team Nocturne. He also helps the Champions when they are attacked during the second task.]]
** Chapter 32. [[spoiler: Barty's surprise entry and reveal to actually be Looker followed by the arrival of the Professors, Gym Leaders, Headmasters, the parents of Hermione, Xeno Lovegood, Augusta Longbottom, Remus, Sirius, the Pack and an assortment of Police Officers.]]
* TheBusCameBack: More than a book after he was last seen, [[spoiler:the Gyarados that evolved from Ron's Magikarp returns and agrees to once more become Ron's Pokémon.]]
* ChekhovsGun: After the World Cup attack, Jack gives Harry an extra for his Dex so he can exchange Pokémons in any point. [[spoiler:During the climax, Harry uses this feature to get Zygarde without Voldemort noticing.]]
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler:Jack killing Amycus and Alecto Carrow. The former gets kneecapped and has his arms broken at the elbow, then he stabs Alecto with a knife into the brain through her chin, and finishes it by slicing Amycus' gut open.]]
* CultureClash: While most of the other schools stay in their ships or at Hogwarts the Johtoians take over one of the Forbidden Islands. When Harry visits he finds them having a massive party complete with a band and many of them having bare chested wrestling matches. Jasmine happily welcomes Harry "to the dark side".
* ForWantOfANail: The Johto-Kanto war may have been averted, if not for Oroku Koga twitching during the Johto protests, which the Kanto Elite Guard believed was an order to attack. This led to the Pokémon League Massacre that killed 47 Johtoian protestors, including Jasmine's parents, and caused Jack Kenway to break off his friendship with Lance Blackthorn and create the Sons of Johto.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: When Jack and Harry talk the first morning after Olivine's arrival to Hogwarts for the Tournament, Jack points out that Avalonians have lost a lot of knowledge about their myths, putting Merlin's fight against the spirits as an example, because no one knows why the spirits acted like they did or what happened with them after the fight. [[spoiler:This sets up the reveal that the spirits were actually a Spiritomb that Merlin trapped in a stone... a Spiritomb called Voldemort.]]
* GreenAroundTheGills: Remus gets incredibly seasick when he rides on a boat or ship.
* HasTwoMommies: Fleur and Gabrielle Delacour are the genetical daughters of Cynthia and Diantha Delacour-Malfoy.
* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:Jack has all the Team Nocturne Agents that were captured in Little Hangleton killed by the Hoods.]]
* MythologyGag: Even with obvious proof staring him in the face, Fudge will not budge and admit that Voldemort has returned.
* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Voldemort's return manages to do what was believed impossible: his actions led to Jack Kenway and Lance Blackthorn actually making peace and reforging their friendship.
** At the start of Book 4 Voldemort is able to operate in the shadows with only Harry and a passive Avalon in his way. Then he attacks Jasmine Kenway... twice. Book's end sees Jack declare war on Voldemort and Johto moving to oppose Team Nocturne while representatives from Kalos and Unova back them up.
* OffscreenTeleportation: Luna somehow manages to teleport from her seat in the stands during the Second Task to the Bravairy Jack is flying with. And then back. With no one noticing.
* OhCrap: Everybody when [[spoiler:Jack uses his fully grown Tyrantrum as Harry's opponent in the first task.]]
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Draco Malfoy calls Fleur "the daughter of two dyke whores". Unfortunately for him, he does it in front of Jack Kenway and Lance Blackthorn, best friends of Fleur's [[HasTwoMommies mothers]] and two of the world's best Pokémon trainers.
* ReconcileTheBitterFoes: Voldemort attacking Clair (who is Jack's wife and Lance's sister) and Jasmine Kenway, combined with Harry requesting their help, helps Jack and Lance to mend their friendship.
* SmallNameBigEgo: It is revealed that Lucius Malfoy is this. The original Malfoy family is from Kalos, and Lucius was Abraxas Malfoy's second child, the eldest (and heir) being Cynthia. When he demanded to be named heir of the family, since he was the eldest son, his father Abraxas told him he would not, so he "disowned" his family and left for Avalon, where he used his family name and his part of the family money to make himself look important, and upon marrying Narcissa Black used her part of the Black fortune to continue trying to make himself look like the head of House Malfoy.
* TheTease: Iris likes to tease Viktor Krum. He subsequently turns this on her, much to her shock.
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 32. [[spoiler:Voldemort and Tom Riddle are actually different entities: the former is actually a Spiritomb, a Pokémon made of lost souls that Merlin defeated and kept in a stone, and which wants to claim everything. Tom Riddle was an admittedly ambitious Pokémon trainer who found the stone and got tricked into making a deal with Voldemort, which possessed him and ate his soul - which also happened to Quirrell, Cho Chang and Alastor Moody.]]
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* AscendedFanon: Harry calls Umbridge "Umbitch".
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: When Vegeta (Harry's Kommo-o) complains that Kong (Jonas' Primeape) is not fighting to his full potential after Jonas claims Kong is out, Harry demands that Jonas stop babying him and fight him with everything he has. Jonas proceeds to beat the crap out of Harry as Kong pretty much destroys Vegeta, pointing out to Harry that ''this'' is how he fights with everything he has.
* FailedASpotCheck: [[spoiler:The Aurors remember too late that Harry's right hand is a prothesis - one with a blaster that allows him to destroy the glass separating him and his friends from the Aurors' office and begin their mission.]]
* FalseFlagOperation: [[spoiler:Team Nocturne attacks Little Surrey while disguised as the Sons of Johto, aiming at trying to break any international support the latter have.]]
* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: Guilden tells Umbridge that she seems like a "[[CountryMatters See you next Tuesday]]" kind of person.
* HowWeGotHere: Chapter 1 takes place at what appears to be the end of Harry's fifth school year.
* ISurrenderSuckers: Hermione points out to Umbridge she could have used Celebi's MentalTimeTravel ability to ensure neither her nor her friends got arrested. [[spoiler:A minute later, it is made obvious they let Umbridge arrest them so they could get into the Ministry with all of their gear - and take Umbridge out as an extra.]]
* MindRape: Hermione, thanks to training, can read minds, and Luna makes a psychiatrist first, and then Umbridge, break down, using her Veela powers.
** PlayedForLaughs when Guilden complains Umbridge's words are raping his ear.
* NoJustNoReaction: Umbridge is the kind of person that makes others curse their own parents for meeting because it puts them in her presence.
* OhCrap: Rosen and Guilden when they realize that Dolores Umbridge has just entered the detention block check-in. And growing when they realize who she has arrested.
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Umbridge. Among other pearls, calls Lily a whore and tells Harry his father should have killed him.
* SuperSenses: After doing the Long Talk with Leafeon for the first time, Harry gains a huge spike in his hearing ability, to the point he can hear the radio at such a low volume, no one else can hear anything.
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* OffscreenTeleportation: Luna somehow manages to teleport from her seat in the stands during the Second Task to the Bravairy Jack is flying with. And then back. With no one noticing.
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Welcome to the Avalon Region. Here, children go to Hogwarts, the premiere school for inspiring trainers, where they learn how to train Pokémon. This year promises to be special, for Harry Potter, the destroyer of Voldemort, is coming to take his place among the future trainers and begin his Pokmon Pokémon Journey.
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Welcome to the Avalon Region. Here, children go to Hogwarts, the premiere school for inspiring trainers, where they learn how to train Pokemon. Pokémon. This year promises to be special, for Harry Potter, the destroyer of Voldemort, is coming to take his place among the future trainers and begin his Pokemon Pokmon Journey.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: [[spoiler:Barty Crouch Jr. is one of the heroes, helping save Harry and Jasmine after the last task. He is also the Nocturne double agent instead of Snape and, as a ShoutOut to [[DoctorWho David Tennant]] playing him in the movie, he is also Looker.]]
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* AdaptationalHeroism: [[spoiler:Barty Crouch Jr. is one of the heroes, helping save Harry and Jasmine after the last task. He is also the Nocturne double agent instead of Snape and, as a ShoutOut to [[DoctorWho David Tennant]] Creator/DavidTennant playing him in the movie, he is also Looker.]]
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