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* Disabled in theAdaptation: In Gravity Falls canon, Manly Dan Corduroy has all four limbs intact. Here, he has an artificial leg, presumably from losing his real one at some point in his career in the Society of the Blind Eye.
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* Disabled in theAdaptation: the Adaptation: In Gravity Falls canon, Manly Dan Corduroy has all four limbs intact. Here, he has an artificial leg, presumably from losing his real one at some point in his career in the Society of the Blind Eye.
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* DisabledintheAdaptation: In Gravity Falls canon, Manly Dan Corduroy has all four limbs intact. Here, he has an artificial leg, presumably from losing his real one at some point in his career in the Society of the Blind Eye.
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* DisabledintheAdaptation: Disabled in theAdaptation: In Gravity Falls canon, Manly Dan Corduroy has all four limbs intact. Here, he has an artificial leg, presumably from losing his real one at some point in his career in the Society of the Blind Eye.
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* DisabledintheAdaptation: In Gravity Falls canon, Manly Dan Corduroy has all four limbs intact. Here, he has an artificial leg, presumably from losing his real one at some point in his career in the Society of the Blind Eye.
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* RaceLift: In addition to being a banshee in this universe, Ember is Irish.
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** In ''Gravity Falls'', the Pines Twins were just staying with Stan for the summer. Here, their parents died in some kind of accident, and Stan was the only relative available to take them in.
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** Played straight with Dipper and Mabel. In ''Gravity Falls'', the Pines Twins were just staying with Stan for the summer. Here, their parents died in some kind of accident, and Stan was the only relative available to take them in.
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* OrganAutonomy: The Lunchlady Ghost is able to detach her left arm and have it move by itself.
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** The Box Ghost is a brutal SerialKiller, who ''also'' cannibalized his victims when he was alive. In the show, he was a HarmlessVillain who rarely hurt anyone, though mostly because he was barely a threat.
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** The Box Ghost is a brutal SerialKiller, who ''also'' cannibalized his victims when he was alive. In the show, he the Box Ghost was a HarmlessVillain who rarely hurt anyone, though mostly because he was barely a threat.threat. Here the Boxcar Butcher was a SerialKiller and ''also'' a cannibal before he came back as a ghost.
--> ''"Beware."''
--> ''"Beware."''
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* AnArmAndALeg[=/=]AutoCannibalism[=/=]DrivenToSuicide: Rhody O'Brian's tale ends with her dying in a sanitarium after chewing her left arm off. Her ghostly form mirrors this in several horrific wounds around the offending limb.
** Wendy's father is missing his left leg.
** Wendy's father is missing his left leg.
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* AnArmAndALeg[=/=]AutoCannibalism[=/=]DrivenToSuicide: AnArmAndALeg: Rhody O'Brian's tale ends with her dying in a sanitarium after [[AutoCannibalism chewing her left arm off.off]]. Her ghostly form mirrors this in several horrific wounds around the offending limb.
** Wendy's father is missing his left leg.
** Wendy's father is missing his left leg.
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* DeathByAdaptation: Dipper and Mabel's parents were killed in an accident, resulting in Stan adopting them. It's also implied that Ford is dead since Stan says he's 'no longer with us'.
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* DeathByAdaptation: Dipper and Mabel's parents were killed in an accident, resulting in Stan adopting them. It's also implied that Ford is dead since Stan says he's 'no "no longer with us'.us."
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** The Box Ghost appears to be a brutal SerialKiller. In the show, he was a HarmlessVillain who rarely hurt anyone, though mostly because he was barely a threat.
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* ParadoxPerson: Since one of Danny's ancestors cheated death to save his pregnant wife, Danny's entire family line is like this. This is what allows Death to send him back with the ability to be possessed by the said ancestor to gain ghostly powers.
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* ParadoxPerson: Since one of Danny's ancestors cheated death to save his pregnant wife, Danny's entire family line is like this.this, basically both having and ''not'' having a soul at the same time. This is what allows Death to send him back with the ability to be possessed by the said ancestor to gain ghostly powers.
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* SealedInsideAPersonShapedCan: Since banishing the Lunch Lady didn't work, Dipper looks in one of Ford's old journals and finds a spell that allows a ghost to be sealed inside a person, but leaves them at risk of DemonicPossession. But since Danny can undergo SymbioticPossession with Alistair without being taken over, Dipper brings up the possibility of sealing the ghosts inside of ''him''.
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* SealedInsideAPersonShapedCan: Since banishing the Lunch Lady didn't work, Dipper looks in one of Ford's old journals and finds a spell that allows a ghost to be sealed inside a person, but leaves them at risk of DemonicPossession. But since Danny can undergo SymbioticPossession with Alistair without being taken over, Dipper brings up the possibility of sealing the ghosts inside of ''him''. It works with no apparent side effects for the Lunch Lady and Box Ghost.
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** This also allows the two of them to exchange information and learned skills with each other. For example, in preperation for their first fight in chapter 6, Alistair gives Danny his extensive knowledge of combat...in exchange for the latter's knowledge of video games.
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** This also allows the two of them to exchange information and learned skills with each other. For example, in preperation preparation for their first fight in chapter 6, Alistair gives Danny his extensive knowledge of combat...in exchange for the latter's knowledge of video games.
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** The Boxcar Ghost was once Wayne Jefferies, who was struggling during the Great Depression and resorted to killing and eating body parts from his victims. Since he's the second cannibal ghost they have to fight in a row, Danny lampshades this.
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** The Boxcar Ghost was once Wayne Jefferies, who was a struggling butcher during the Great Depression and resorted to killing and eating body parts from his victims. Since he's the second cannibal ghost they have to fight in a row, Danny lampshades this.
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** When being chased by one of the Lucnhlady Ghost's minions, Dipper tries to use a banishment spell that sounds like the one from ''Film/ArmyOfDarkness''. He even flubs the last word, but with a thankfully more beneficial outcome.
** Ember refers to the Lunchlady Ghost's disembodied arm as [[Series/TheAddamsFamily Cousin Itt]], before Wendy corrects her and says she's thinking of Thing.
** Ember refers to the Lunchlady Ghost's disembodied arm as [[Series/TheAddamsFamily Cousin Itt]], before Wendy corrects her and says she's thinking of Thing.
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* ImAHumanitarian: In this universe, the Lunch Lady was a human lunch lady by the name of [[NamedByTheAdaptation Rhody O'Brian]], who killed several students and fed them to the others as "mystery meat", and was caught chewing on an arm when they figured out what she was doing. When she's summoned back, the group has to stop her from cooking the school janitor.
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* ImAHumanitarian: ImAHumanitarian:
** In this universe, the Lunch Lady was a human lunch lady by the name of [[NamedByTheAdaptation Rhody O'Brian]], who killed several students and fed them to the others as "mystery meat", and was caught chewing on an arm when they figured out what she was doing. When she's summoned back, the group has to stop her from cooking the schooljanitor.janitor.
** The Boxcar Ghost was once Wayne Jefferies, who was struggling during the Great Depression and resorted to killing and eating body parts from his victims. Since he's the second cannibal ghost they have to fight in a row, Danny lampshades this.
--->'''Danny''': How many cannibals are we going to have to deal with!?
** In this universe, the Lunch Lady was a human lunch lady by the name of [[NamedByTheAdaptation Rhody O'Brian]], who killed several students and fed them to the others as "mystery meat", and was caught chewing on an arm when they figured out what she was doing. When she's summoned back, the group has to stop her from cooking the school
** The Boxcar Ghost was once Wayne Jefferies, who was struggling during the Great Depression and resorted to killing and eating body parts from his victims. Since he's the second cannibal ghost they have to fight in a row, Danny lampshades this.
--->'''Danny''': How many cannibals are we going to have to deal with!?
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* AdaptationNameChange: Sort of, Stanley was Grunkle Stan's real name in ''Gravity Falls'', but he used his brother's name, Stanford, as an alias. Here, he's called Stanley from the get-go.
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* AdaptationNameChange: Sort of, of. Stanley was Grunkle Stan's real name in ''Gravity Falls'', but he used his brother's name, Stanford, as an alias. Here, he's called Stanley from the get-go.
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** Likewise, Courtney is nicer to her brother. She's also shown to be upset when everyone, including her boyfriend Dash, ridicules Norman.
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* AdaptationOriginConnection: In the movie, Mitch and Courtney meet for the first time. In this story, they are childhood friends.
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* AdaptationalNationality: Ember is Irish in this story. In the show, she was American.
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* AdaptationOriginConnection: In the movie, Mitch and Courtney meet for the first time. In this story, they are childhood friends.
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul:
** In the movie, while Mitch does not heavily dislike Norman and is not mean to Norman directly, he disapproves of his brother's friendship with Norman and advises him not to hang out with Norman because of his reputation. In this story, he approves of Norman's friendship with Neil.
** In the movie, Courtney is at first uncaring and aloof to Norman and is not above mocking him and trying to prove he's a liar. In this story, she is much kinder to him from the start and is upset when everyone, including her boyfriend Dash, ridicules Norman.
** Gideon and Wendy were childhood friends, and she still looks after him even though he's become more of a loner. In canon, they didn't know each other well and were enemies due to his antagonism toward the Pines family. Gideon also had a crush on Mabel in canon, while here, in part due to the age difference, he seemingly doesn't even know that she exists.
** Soos in this story runs a coffee shop and juice bar, with no apparent connection to Stan, who he viewed as a father figure in canon.
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul:
** In the movie, while Mitch does not heavily dislike Norman and is not mean to Norman directly, he disapproves of his brother's friendship with Norman and advises him not to hang out with Norman because of his reputation. In this story, he approves of Norman's friendship with Neil.
** In the movie, Courtney is at first uncaring and aloof to Norman and is not above mocking him and trying to prove he's a liar. In this story, she is much kinder to him from the start and is upset when everyone, including her boyfriend Dash, ridicules Norman.
** Gideon and Wendy were childhood friends, and she still looks after him even though he's become more of a loner. In canon, they didn't know each other well and were enemies due to his antagonism toward the Pines family. Gideon also had a crush on Mabel in canon, while here, in part due to the age difference, he seemingly doesn't even know that she exists.
** Soos in this story runs a coffee shop and juice bar, with no apparent connection to Stan, who he viewed as a father figure in canon.
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* AdaptationalNameChange: Sort of, Stanley was Grunkle Stan's real name in ''Gravity Falls'', but he used his brother's name, Stanford, as an alias. Here, he's called Stanley from the get-go.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: While the Lunch Lady Ghost is already a bad guy in the series, she was nowhere near as vile as in this universe. To put things into perspective, this Lunch Lady is an outright ''cannibal''.
** The Box Ghost appears to be a brutal SerialKiller.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: AdaptationalVillainy:
** While the Lunch Lady Ghost is already a bad guy in the series, she was nowhere near as vile as in this universe. To put things into perspective, this Lunch Lady is an outright ''cannibal''.
** The Box Ghost appears to be a brutal SerialKiller. In the show, he was a HarmlessVillain who rarely hurt anyone, though mostly because he was barely a threat.
* AdaptationNameChange: Sort of, Stanley was Grunkle Stan's real name in ''Gravity Falls'', but he used his brother's name, Stanford, as an alias. Here, he's called Stanley from the get-go.
* AdaptationOriginConnection: In the movie, Mitch and Courtney meet for the first time. In this story, they are childhood friends.
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul:
** In the movie, while Mitch does not heavily dislike Norman and is not mean to Norman directly, he disapproves of his brother's friendship with Norman and advises him not to hang out with Norman because of his reputation. In this story, he approves of Norman's friendship with Neil.
** In the movie, Courtney is at first uncaring and aloof to Norman and is not above mocking him and trying to prove he's a liar. In this story, she is much kinder to him from the start and is upset when everyone, including her boyfriend Dash, ridicules Norman.
** Gideon and Wendy were childhood friends, and she still looks after him even though he's become more of a loner. In canon, they didn't know each other well and were enemies due to his antagonism toward the Pines family. Gideon also had a crush on Mabel in canon, while here, in part due to the age difference, he seemingly doesn't even know that she exists.
** Soos in this story runs a coffee shop and juice bar, with no apparent connection to Stan, who he viewed as a father figure in canon.
** While the Lunch Lady Ghost is already a bad guy in the series, she was nowhere near as vile as in this universe. To put things into perspective, this Lunch Lady is an outright ''cannibal''.
** The Box Ghost appears to be a brutal SerialKiller. In the show, he was a HarmlessVillain who rarely hurt anyone, though mostly because he was barely a threat.
* AdaptationNameChange: Sort of, Stanley was Grunkle Stan's real name in ''Gravity Falls'', but he used his brother's name, Stanford, as an alias. Here, he's called Stanley from the get-go.
* AdaptationOriginConnection: In the movie, Mitch and Courtney meet for the first time. In this story, they are childhood friends.
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul:
** In the movie, while Mitch does not heavily dislike Norman and is not mean to Norman directly, he disapproves of his brother's friendship with Norman and advises him not to hang out with Norman because of his reputation. In this story, he approves of Norman's friendship with Neil.
** In the movie, Courtney is at first uncaring and aloof to Norman and is not above mocking him and trying to prove he's a liar. In this story, she is much kinder to him from the start and is upset when everyone, including her boyfriend Dash, ridicules Norman.
** Gideon and Wendy were childhood friends, and she still looks after him even though he's become more of a loner. In canon, they didn't know each other well and were enemies due to his antagonism toward the Pines family. Gideon also had a crush on Mabel in canon, while here, in part due to the age difference, he seemingly doesn't even know that she exists.
** Soos in this story runs a coffee shop and juice bar, with no apparent connection to Stan, who he viewed as a father figure in canon.
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* AmbiguouslyBi: Courtney is dating Dash, but when she saw Ember giving her a wink, she blushed.
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* AmbiguouslyBi: Courtney is dating Dash, but she blushed when she saw Ember giving her a wink, she blushed.wink.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: The Lunch Lady is named Rhody O'Brian.
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** The Lunch Lady is named Rhody O'Brian.
** The Lunch Lady is named Rhody O'Brian.
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** The Box Ghost is named Wayne Jeffries.
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* PowerPerversionPotential: When talking to Norman and Neil, Danny jokes that Alistair might be using his powers to spy on girls. [[RightBehindMe Alistair is not amused.]]
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* SaltSolution: A common weakness for ghosts, which Stan has weaponized as [[AbnormalAmmo shotgun rounds]].
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* AbnormalAmmo: Stan uses shotgun cartridges filled with rock salt to hurt ghosts.
** The ''Box Ghost'' gets this treatment, of all ghosts, being more like his "The Ultimate Enemy" FutureBadass version.
** The Box Ghost appears to be a brutal SerialKiller.
* SealedInsideAPersonShapedCan: Since banishing the Lunch Lady didn't work, Dipper looks in one of Ford's old journals and finds a spell that allows a ghost to be sealed inside a person, but leaves them at risk of DemonicPossession. But since Danny can undergo SymbioticPossession with Alistair without being taken over, Dipper brings up the possibility of sealing the ghosts inside of ''him''.
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** Death having numerous [[Series/{{Supernatural}} Reapers]] serving to escort the deceased into the afterlife.
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** Death having numerous [[Series/{{Supernatural}} Reapers]] serving to escort the deceased into the afterlife. Stan also uses [[SaltSolution salt]] [[AbnormalAmmo shotgun cartridges]] against ghosts.
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* AdaptationalRaceLift: Ember is Irish in this story.
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** This also allows the two of them to exchange information and learned skills with each other. For example, in preperation for their first fight in chapter 6, Alistair gives Danny his extensive knowledge of combat...in exchange for the latter's knowledge of video games.
-->'''Alistair:''' This does not strike me as an even exchange.
-->'''Alistair:''' This does not strike me as an even exchange.
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* UngratefulBastard: Gideon didn't thank Danny at all for getting Dash to back off. And when Tucker hands him his book, Gideon screams at him for touching it.
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* UngratefulBastard: Gideon didn't thank Danny at all for getting Dash to back off. And when Tucker hands him picks up his book, book for him, Gideon screams at him for touching it.
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** Gideon and Wendy were childhood friends, and she still looks after him even though he's become more of a loner. In canon, they didn't know each other well and were enemies due to his antagonism toward the Pines family.
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** Gideon and Wendy were childhood friends, and she still looks after him even though he's become more of a loner. In canon, they didn't know each other well and were enemies due to his antagonism toward the Pines family. Gideon also had a crush on Mabel in canon, while here, in part due to the age difference, he seemingly doesn't even know that she exists.
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** Wendy is an excellent swords-woman.
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** Jazz is confirmed to be a lesbian in this verse.
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** Soos in this story runs a coffee shop and juice bar, with no apparent connection to Stan, who he viewed as a father figure in canon.
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** Mabel seems a bit better at combat than in canon from what we've seen so far, giving Alvin a GroinAttack when he grabs her shoulder.
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* GroinAttack: Alvin gets one courtesy of Mabel when he grabs her shoulder when she's trying to leave.
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* NobleBigot: Alistair initially distrusts Ember because she's Irish, though he tones it down after Danny explains just ''how'' wrong that kind of talk is considered in the present, and how science has outright disproved a lot of it. Alistair ''does'' apologize for his behavior.
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* NobleBigot: Alistair initially distrusts Ember because she's Irish, though he tones it down after Danny explains just ''how'' wrong that kind of talk is considered in the present, and how science has outright disproved a lot of it. Alistair ''does'' apologize for his behavior.
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* UngratefulBastard: Gideon didn't thank Danny at all for getting Dash to back off.
* UnwantedRescue: Wendy didn't like that Danny got involved in her scuffle with Dash, [[DownplayedTrope downplayed]] as she appreciates it anyway.
* UnwantedRescue: Wendy didn't like that Danny got involved in her scuffle with Dash, [[DownplayedTrope downplayed]] as she appreciates it anyway.
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* UngratefulBastard: Gideon didn't thank Danny at all for getting Dash to back off.
off. And when Tucker hands him his book, Gideon screams at him for touching it.
* UnwantedRescue: Wendy didn't like that Dannygot involved meddled in her scuffle fight with Dash, [[DownplayedTrope downplayed]] as she appreciates it anyway.
* UnwantedRescue: Wendy didn't like that Danny
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* SharedUniverse: When talking about wishing he could post a video of Danny's first hero outing, Tucker makes a passing reference to a video of a cheerleader beating up a gang, a possible reference to one of the author's other stories, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11873542/1/Nothing-is-Impossible Nothing is Impossible]]''.
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* SharedUniverse: When talking about wishing he could post a video of Danny's first hero outing, Tucker makes a passing reference to a video of a cheerleader beating up a gang, a possible reference to one of the author's other stories, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11873542/1/Nothing-is-Impossible Nothing is Impossible]]''.''Fanfic/NothingIsImpossible''.
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* CoolSword: Wendy's sword, besides being a {{BFS}}, has runes running down the middle, and Danny notes that it's ''not'' a normal weapon, given its ability to harm supernatural entities.
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* CoolSword: Wendy's sword, besides being a {{BFS}}, has runes running down the middle, and Danny notes that it's ''not'' a normal weapon, given its ability to harm supernatural entities. In a later chapter, she mentions that it's a family heirloom.
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* SomeoneToRememberHimBy: Alistair managed to save the life of his wife Katherine, who was unknowingly with child at the time. Shorty after that, he was taken by the reaper, leaving her behind with his child.
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* SomeoneToRememberHimBy: Alistair managed to save the life of his wife Katherine, who was unknowingly with child at the time. Shorty Shortly after that, he was taken by the reaper, leaving her behind with his child.
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* SomeoneToRememberHimBy: Alistair managed to save the life, of his wife Katherine, who was unknowingly with child at the time. Shorty after that, he was taken by the reaper, leaving her behind with his child.
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* SomeoneToRememberHimBy: Alistair managed to save the life, life of his wife Katherine, who was unknowingly with child at the time. Shorty after that, he was taken by the reaper, leaving her behind with his child.