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* AdaptationalFriendship: In the film, Courtney had a crush on Mitch and it was their first time meeting. Here, they're childhood friends and she doesn't have a crush on him.
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* {{Catchphrase}}: The Box Ghost repeatedly whispers, "''Beware...''" in a CreepyMonotone.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11830311/1/Harbinger Harbinger]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/DannyPhantom'', ''WesternAnimaton/GravityFalls'', and ''WesternAnimation/ParaNorman'' FusionFic by Creator/{{Finmonster}}.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11830311/1/Harbinger Harbinger]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/DannyPhantom'', ''WesternAnimaton/GravityFalls'', ''WesternAnimation/GravityFalls'', and ''WesternAnimation/ParaNorman'' FusionFic by Creator/{{Finmonster}}.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11830311/1/Harbinger Harbinger]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/DannyPhantom'' ''WesternAnimation/DannyPhantom'', ''WesternAnimaton/GravityFalls'', and ''WesternAnimation/ParaNorman'' FusionFic by Creator/{{Finmonster}}.
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* SharedUniverse: When talking about wishing he could post a video of Danny's first hero outing, Tucker makes a passing reference to a video of a cheerleader beating up a gang, a possible reference to one of the author's other stories, ''Fanfic/NothingIsImpossible''.
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** Walker’s full name is Josiah Walker.
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** [[spoiler:Walker was like this in life as well, he became a ghost because he chased a pair of escaped slaves and their child to Blithe Hollow and ended up killing them trying to bring them in. The people of the town ended up trying and hanging him for that.]]
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* ImprovisedWeaopn: How does Neil fight Walker? By throwing [[SaltSolution extra salty]] potato chips at him.
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* ImprovisedWeaopn: ImprovisedWeapon: How does Neil fight Walker? By throwing [[SaltSolution extra salty]] potato chips at him.
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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:Walker captures Norman and the Pines twins (but failed to capture Neil) and plans to hang them if Danny doesn't show up. Gideon was pressured by Him into summoning Walker since Norman and Dipper are valuable assets.]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:Walker captures Norman and the Pines twins (but failed to capture Neil) and threatens to hang them if Danny doesn't show up. Gideon was pressured by Him into summoning Walker since Norman and Dipper are valuable assets.]]
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* AdaptationalJobChange: Soos has gone from working at the Mystery Shack to working at a juice stand.
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** Soos has gone from working at the Mystery Shack to working at a juicestand.stand.
** Walker was changed from a prison warden to a sheriff.
** Soos has gone from working at the Mystery Shack to working at a juice
** Walker was changed from a prison warden to a sheriff.
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* UngratefulBastard: Gideon doesn't thank Danny for getting Dash to back off. And when Tucker picks up his book for him, Gideon snatched it from him and shouts at Tucker for touching it.
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* UngratefulBastard: Gideon doesn't thank Danny for getting Dash to back off. And when Tucker picks up his book for him, Gideon snatched it from him and shouts at Tucker him for touching it.
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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:Walker captures Norman and the Pines twins (but failed to capture Neil) and plans to hang them if Danny doesn't show up. Gideon was pressured by Him into summoning Walker since Norman and Dipper are valuable assets.]]
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* AbnormalAmmo: Stan uses shotgun cartridges filled with rock salt to hurt ghosts.
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* AbnormalAmmo: Stan uses shotgun cartridges filled with [[SaltSolution rock salt salt]] to hurt ghosts.
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* IAlwaysWantedToSayThat: Danny says this right before performing a 'kick open the doors'-style DramaticEntrance.
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* IAlwaysWantedToSayThat: Danny says this right before performing a 'kick open the doors'-style DramaticEntrance.
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* IAlwaysWantedToSayThat: Danny says this right before performing a 'kick open the doors'-style DramaticEntrance.ImprovisedWeaopn: How does Neil fight Walker? By throwing [[SaltSolution extra salty]] potato chips at him.
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** When Walker comes to try and kidnap Neil, he's able to fend him off by throwing extra salty potato chips, and later a container of salt, the latter of which surpresses his intangibility powers enough for Mitch to deck him across the face.
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** In the show, Walker, while a villain, was mainly focused on inflicting order on the chaos of the Ghost Zone via his "rules", even if he would make new ones up to justify imprisoning Danny. Here, he kidnaps Dipper, Mabel, and Norman to use as hostages against Danny, fully planning to ''hang'' them if Danny doesn't show up.
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* WhatDoesSheSeeInHim: Courtney is going out with Dash. She may be wondering the same thing, as she doesn't like it when Dash makes offhand remarks against Norman.
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* WhatDoesSheSeeInHim: Courtney is going out with Dash. She may be wondering the same thing, as she doesn't like it when Dash makes offhand remarks against Norman. In Chapter 21, Ember even nearly quotes the trope name word for word when talking to Courtney. It's pretty telling that Courtney struggles to name ''any'' positive qualities besides his looks.
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Danny Fenton has never had a choice. Dragged around the country by parents whose passion he doesn't believe in, let alone share, he's always felt isolated. But upon arriving in Blithe Hollow, he finds himself dragged into a world that he didn't think existed. Now Danny has to decide which is worse, the powers that want to destroy the town or those that want his help.
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed]] and [[InvertedTrope Inverted]] with Norman Babcock and Mr. Prenderghast.
** Like in canon, Norman is an outcast because of his ability to see the dead, but in this story it appears that he has a much closer relationship with his family than in the beginning of the movie. His sister Courtney, in particular, is much kinder and closer to him in this story, where in the movie's beginning she was almost as dismissive of him as the rest of the town. Also his new friendship with other characters (especially some with supernatural abilities of their own) helped alleviate some of his angst.
** Like in canon, Mr. Prenderghast is an outcast in the community and estranged from his family, however his friendship with Stan Pines implies that he is not completely alone like he was in the movie.
** Like in canon, Norman is an outcast because of his ability to see the dead, but in this story it appears that he has a much closer relationship with his family than in the beginning of the movie. His sister Courtney, in particular, is much kinder and closer to him in this story, where in the movie's beginning she was almost as dismissive of him as the rest of the town. Also his new friendship with other characters (especially some with supernatural abilities of their own) helped alleviate some of his angst.
** Like in canon, Mr. Prenderghast is an outcast in the community and estranged from his family, however his friendship with Stan Pines implies that he is not completely alone like he was in the movie.
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** Like in canon, Norman is an outcast because of his ability to see the dead but in this story, it appears that he has a much closer relationship with his family than at the beginning of the movie. His sister Courtney, in particular, is much kinder and closer to him in this story, where in the movie's beginning she was almost as dismissive of him as the rest of the town. Also his new friendship with other characters helped alleviate some of his angst.
** Like in canon, Mr. Prenderghast is an outcast in the community and estranged from his family, however his friendship with Stan Pines implies that he is not completely alone like he was in the movie.
** Like in canon, Norman is an outcast because of his ability to see the dead but in this story, it appears that he has a much closer relationship with his family than at the beginning of the movie. His sister Courtney, in particular, is much kinder and closer to him in this story, where in the movie's beginning she was almost as dismissive of him as the rest of the town. Also his new friendship with other characters helped alleviate some of his angst.
** Like in canon, Mr. Prenderghast is an outcast in the community and estranged from his family, however his friendship with Stan Pines implies that he is not completely alone like he was in the movie.
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed]] and [[InvertedTrope Inverted]] with Norman Babcock and Mr. Prenderghast.
** Like in canon, Norman is an outcast because of his ability to see the dead, but in this story it appears that he has a much closer relationship with his family than in the beginning of the movie. His sister Courtney, in particular, is much kinder and closer to him in this story, where in the movie's beginning she was almost as dismissive of him as the rest of the town. Also his new friendship with other characters (especially some with supernatural abilities of their own) helped alleviate some of his angst.
** Like in canon, Mr. Prenderghast is an outcast in the community and estranged from his family, however his friendship with Stan Pines implies that he is not completely alone like he was in the movie.
** Like in canon, Norman is an outcast because of his ability to see the dead, but in this story it appears that he has a much closer relationship with his family than in the beginning of the movie. His sister Courtney, in particular, is much kinder and closer to him in this story, where in the movie's beginning she was almost as dismissive of him as the rest of the town. Also his new friendship with other characters (especially some with supernatural abilities of their own) helped alleviate some of his angst.
** Like in canon, Mr. Prenderghast is an outcast in the community and estranged from his family, however his friendship with Stan Pines implies that he is not completely alone like he was in the movie.
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed]] and [[InvertedTrope Inverted]] with Norman Babcock and Mr. Prenderghast.
** Like in canon, Norman is an outcast because of his ability to see the dead, but in this story it appears that he has a much closer relationship with his family than in the beginning of the movie. His sister Courtney, in particular, is much kinder and closer to him in this story, where in the movie's beginning she was almost as dismissive of him as the rest of the town. Also his new friendship with other characters (especially some with supernatural abilities of their own) helped alleviate some of his angst.
** Like in canon, Mr. Prenderghast is an outcast in the community and estranged from his family, however his friendship with Stan Pines implies that he is not completely alone like he was in the movie.
** Like in canon, Norman is an outcast because of his ability to see the dead, but in this story it appears that he has a much closer relationship with his family than in the beginning of the movie. His sister Courtney, in particular, is much kinder and closer to him in this story, where in the movie's beginning she was almost as dismissive of him as the rest of the town. Also his new friendship with other characters (especially some with supernatural abilities of their own) helped alleviate some of his angst.
** Like in canon, Mr. Prenderghast is an outcast in the community and estranged from his family, however his friendship with Stan Pines implies that he is not completely alone like he was in the movie.
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* AdaptationalCheerfulnessUpgrade:
** Like in canon, Norman is an outcast because of his ability to see the dead but in this story, it appears that he has a much closer relationship with his family than at the beginning of the movie. His sister Courtney, in particular, is much kinder and closer to him in this story, where in the movie's beginning she was almost as dismissive of him as the rest of the town. Also his new friendship with other characters helped alleviate some of his angst.
** Like in canon, Mr. Prenderghast is an outcast in the community and estranged from his family, however his friendship with Stan Pines implies that he is not completely alone like he was in the movie.
** Like in canon, Norman is an outcast because of his ability to see the dead but in this story, it appears that he has a much closer relationship with his family than at the beginning of the movie. His sister Courtney, in particular, is much kinder and closer to him in this story, where in the movie's beginning she was almost as dismissive of him as the rest of the town. Also his new friendship with other characters helped alleviate some of his angst.
** Like in canon, Mr. Prenderghast is an outcast in the community and estranged from his family, however his friendship with Stan Pines implies that he is not completely alone like he was in the movie.
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** Gideon and Wendy were childhood friends, and she still looks after him even though he's become more of a loner. In canon, they didn't know each other well and were enemies due to his antagonism toward the Pines family. Gideon also had a crush on Mabel in canon, while here, in part due to the age difference, he seemingly doesn't even know that she exists.
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** Gideon and Wendy were childhood friends, and she still looks after him even though he's become more of a loner. A later chapter reveals that [[spoiler:he's developed romantic feelings for her, but she doesn't reciprocate]]. In canon, they didn't know each other well and were enemies due to his antagonism toward the Pines family. Gideon also had a crush on Mabel in canon, while here, in part due to the age difference, he seemingly doesn't even know that she exists.
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* NotQuiteDead: Lampshaded by Dipper when Ford turns up in town, given that Stan's comments had led him to believe that he was dead.
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* UngratefulBastard: Gideon didn't thank Danny at all for getting Dash to back off. And when Tucker picks up his book for him, Gideon screams at him for touching it.
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* CrossoverCouple: Dash Baxter and Courtney Babcock, though the latter might be developing feelings for Ember McLain.
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* CrossoverCouple: Dash Baxter and Courtney Babcock, though the latter might be developing feelings for Ember McLain.[=McLain=].