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* DisabilitySuperpower: Downplayed. Mirabel spend ten years without glasses and had to learn how to function while half blind. She got so used to it that, even even after getting her glasses back, she prefer to do needlework without them.
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* DisabilitySuperpower: Downplayed. Mirabel spend ten years without glasses and had to learn how to function while half blind. She got so used to it that, even even after getting her glasses back, she prefer to do needlework without them.
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--> '''Mirabel''': You don't reroute a river[. N]ature is horrible. It does what it wants, whether you change it to be a certain way or not...don't uh, don’t tell Señora Pepa I said that...\\
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--> '''Mirabel''': You don't reroute a river[. N]ature river. Nature is horrible. It does what it wants, whether you change it to be a certain way or not...don't uh, don’t tell Señora Pepa I said that...\\
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* BigSisterInstinct: Getting her sister back after ten years missing have made Isabela more tender and protective of her in comparison to the original movie. She's the first to realize that the orphanage where she and the kids lived was a horrible place just out of noticing Mirabel stocking up food.
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* BigSisterInstinct: Getting her sister back after ten years missing have made Isabela more tender and protective of her in comparison to the original movie.
** She's the first to realize that the orphanage where she and the kids lived was a horrible place just out of noticing Mirabel stocking upfood.food.
** She never stopped looking for her sister even after everyone else did, nevermind she had to sacrifice nights of sleep to do so.
** She's the first to stand up to Alma when her grandmother ''kicks Mirabel out of the house'' for leading Isabela astray from the perfect path she had laid for her.
** She's the first to realize that the orphanage where she and the kids lived was a horrible place just out of noticing Mirabel stocking up
** She never stopped looking for her sister even after everyone else did, nevermind she had to sacrifice nights of sleep to do so.
** She's the first to stand up to Alma when her grandmother ''kicks Mirabel out of the house'' for leading Isabela astray from the perfect path she had laid for her.
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* DisabilitySuperpower: Downplayed. Mirabel spend ten years without glasses and had to learn how to function while half blind. She got so used to it that, even even after getting her glasses back, she prefer to do needlework without them.
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* MySisterIsOffLimits: While in her first walk in town, one of Camilo's friends, Lorenzo, becomes quite flustered around Mirabel. Camilo promptly scares him away using Agustín's image.
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* MySisterIsOffLimits: While in her first walk in town, one of Camilo's friends, Lorenzo, becomes quite flustered around Mirabel. Camilo promptly scares him away using Agustín's image. He goes as far as to tell Luisa about him for good measure.
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* SecretSecretKeeper: Dolores knows about Bruno in the walls, and everyday she cleans away the handfuls of salt he throws away. This time is even more significant because everyone in Encanto believes him to be Mirabel's kidnapper so she keeping his secret means there's more to Mirabel's ddisappearance.
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* SecretSecretKeeper: Dolores knows about Bruno in the walls, and everyday she cleans away the handfuls of salt he throws away. This time is even more significant because everyone in Encanto believes him to be Mirabel's kidnapper so she keeping his secret means there's more to Mirabel's ddisappearance.disappearance.
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* TraumaButton: Mirabel is still haunted by her failed gift ceremony despite not being able to remember it. Antonio's ceremony sent her into a feverish AngstComa.
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* TraumaButton: Mirabel is still haunted by her failed gift ceremony despite not being able to consciously remember it. Antonio's ceremony sent her into a feverish AngstComa.
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* CallingTheOldWomanOut: Mirabel is able to stand up against Alma much easier than in the movie thanks to don't having the psychological effects of a decade seeking her approval, and having a decade long bad experience with elderly women with authority.
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* CallingTheOldWomanOut: Mirabel is able to stand up against Alma much easier than in the movie thanks to don't having since she doesn't have the same psychological effects of a decade dependency seeking her approval, and approval as the rest of the family, as well as having a decade long bad experience experiences with [[EvilOrphanageLady elderly women with authority.authority]].
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* TheInsomniac: Mirabel struggles with a certain form of insomnia, often embroidering or doing chores to keep herself busy because of it.
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* CallingTheOldWomanOut: Mirabel is able to stand up against Alma much easier than in the movie thanks to don't having the psychological effects of a decade seeking her approval, and having a decade long bad experience with elderly women with authority.
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* SecretSecretKeeper: Dolores knows about Bruno in the walls, and everyday she cleans away the handfuls of salt he throws away. This time is even more significant because everyone in Encanto believes him to be Mirabel's kidnapper so she keeping his secret means there's more to Mirabel's ddisappearance.
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* BigSisterInstinct: Getting her sister back after ten years missing have made Isabela more tender and protective of her in comparison to the original movie. She's the first to realize that the orphanage where she and the kids lived was a horrible place just out of noticing Mirabel stocking up food.
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* ChildHater: Downplayed with Dolores. She doesn't hate children, but knows and understands that they can be loud, something that's quite difficult for her to bear with her super hearing. One of the things that warmed her towards Elena is that she's the quietest toddler she's ever known.
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* MySisterIsOffLimits: While in her first walk in town, one of Camilo's friends, Lorenzo, becomes quite flustered around Mirabel. Camilo promptly scares him away using Agustín's image.
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* TraumaButton: Mirabel is still haunted by her failed gift ceremony despite not being able to remember it. Antonio's ceremony sent her into a feverish AngstComa.
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* AwesomeButImpractical: Mirabel addresses the "rerouting the river" task that Luisa is given as this.
--> '''Mirabel''': You don't reroute a river[. N]ature is horrible. It does what it wants, whether you change it to be a certain way or not...don't uh, don’t tell Señora Pepa I said that...\\
'''Luisa''': But if someone asked...?\\
'''Mirabel''': Uh, figure out why, I guess? If it was for something silly like it being in their way, I'd build a bridge. If it was flooding their crops I'd build a flood wall. If the river couldn't reach their fields, I'd dig irrigation channels.
--> '''Mirabel''': You don't reroute a river[. N]ature is horrible. It does what it wants, whether you change it to be a certain way or not...don't uh, don’t tell Señora Pepa I said that...\\
'''Luisa''': But if someone asked...?\\
'''Mirabel''': Uh, figure out why, I guess? If it was for something silly like it being in their way, I'd build a bridge. If it was flooding their crops I'd build a flood wall. If the river couldn't reach their fields, I'd dig irrigation channels.
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: When Luisa pours her heart out to Mirabel about the laborious tasks she partakes in every day (collecting donkeys and rerouting rivers being two examples), Mirabel states various solutions that would be much easier than simply relying on Luisa's SuperStrength (baiting the donkeys with food, fixing the flaws in the gate that let them escape in the first place and addressing the various reasons why a river needs rerouting) and humoring the idea that some problems aren't Luisa's to fix.
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: When Luisa pours her heart out to Mirabel about the laborious tasks she partakes in every day (collecting donkeys and rerouting rivers being two examples), Mirabel states various solutions that would be much easier than simply relying on Luisa's SuperStrength (baiting the donkeys with food, fixing the flaws in the gate that let them escape in the first place and addressing the various reasons why a river needs rerouting) and humoring rerouting). She also humors the idea that some problems aren't Luisa's to fix.fix, it being much more efficient to teach others how to do certain tasks rather than dump all of their problems onto one person.
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: When Luisa pours her heart out to Mirabel about the laborious tasks she partakes in every day (collecting donkeys and rerouting rivers being two examples), Mirabel states various solutions that would be much easier than simply relying on Luisa's SuperStrength (baiting the donkeys with food, fixing the flaws in the gate that let them escape in the first place and addressing the various reasons why a river needs rerouting) and humoring the idea that some problems aren't Luisa's to fix.
--> '''Mirabel''': My motto is this; work smarter, not harder.
--> '''Mirabel''': My motto is this; work smarter, not harder.
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* EvilOrphanageLady: The Matrona at the orphanage that Mirabel grew up in was an abusive bitch that starved the kids and would beat them if they stepped out of line.
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** Dolores ends up developing a close bond with the adolescent Elena.
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** Dolores ends up developing a close bond with the adolescent Elena.toddler Elena.
* RuggedScar: Juan bemoans how Julieta's food heals all of his wounds because he won't get any cool scars out of their NearDeathExperience. Pablo retorts that he ''already'' has enough scars.
* RuggedScar: Juan bemoans how Julieta's food heals all of his wounds because he won't get any cool scars out of their NearDeathExperience. Pablo retorts that he ''already'' has enough scars.
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* ParentalSubstitute: Mirabel unwittingly became like a mother to the younger children at the orphanage, going hungry so that they could eat, doing their laundry, taking punishment for them and nearly sacrificing her life to the horsemen chasing them at the beginning of the story.
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** Mirabel unwittingly became like a mother to the younger children at the orphanage, going hungry so that they could eat, doing their laundry, taking punishment for them and nearly sacrificing her life to the horsemen chasing them at the beginning of thestory. story.
** Dolores ends up developing a close bond with the adolescent Elena.
** Mirabel unwittingly became like a mother to the younger children at the orphanage, going hungry so that they could eat, doing their laundry, taking punishment for them and nearly sacrificing her life to the horsemen chasing them at the beginning of the
** Dolores ends up developing a close bond with the adolescent Elena.
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On the night that Mirabel didn't get her gift, she and Bruno disappear without warning and everyone assume that the latter had kidnapped the former. Ten years later, a small earthquake shakes the encanto and one of the mountains cracks open. Coming through that crack is Mirabel, who was raised in an orphanage protecting its children. Now back home with her family, Mirabel relearns how to live with her amazing family and discover the circumstances of how she was separated from them, as well as the possibility that the magic is dying.
''Guiding Light'' is an ''WesternAnimation/{{Encanto}}'' fanfic by [=AuroraRose2081=] that can be read on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/35480788/chapters/88441795 here]].
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade:
** This version of Mirabel wound up separated from her family for years and lived in an OrphanageOfFear for ten years, living in squalor under an abusive EvilOrphanageLady. She will sometimes suffer from panic attacks based off of traumatic experiences and [[TraumaInducedAmnesia has blocked off]] how exactly she was separated from her family. Also, she didn't have glasses, so she had to learn how to live with ''extremely'' bad eyesight.
** On top of all of the underlying issues being a Madrigal brought them, the entire family had to live with not knowing what became of Mirabel (assuming that the BlackSheep of the family had ''kidnapped'' her), each of them feeling on some level for her disappearance. When she returns, over half of them tail her under the paranoid belief that she could disappear again.
* TheBusCameBack: The plot is about Mirabel returning to the Encanto ten years after she was (allegedly) kidnapped and left to fend for herself out in yonder.
* EveryoneHasStandards: When Alma goes off on the kids for almost going into Bruno's room -- a taboo thing to do in Casita Madrigal -- Mirabel is quick to stick up for them and is willing to take their punishment. Having been raised in an OrphanageOfFear, she thinks that she was going to beat them, [[WouldNotHurtAChild something that appalls her family to no end]].
* ForWantOfANail: The plot of the story involves Mirabel going missing at the same time as Bruno. She ends up living at an orphanage beyond the Encanto and doesn't come back until right before Antonio's gift ceremony. She also brings along a small group of orphan children who become honorary members of the family.
* HistoryRepeats: Mirabel's return to the Encanto reflects her Abuela's experiences when the Encanto was originally created.
* NearDeathExperience: The story opens with Mirabel nearly dying of blood-loss after just barely getting away from a group of horsemen out to either kill or kidnap them.
* ParentalSubstitute: Mirabel unwittingly became like a mother to the younger children at the orphanage, going hungry so that they could eat, doing their laundry, taking punishment for them and nearly sacrificing her life to the horsemen chasing them at the beginning of the story.
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''Guiding Light'' is an ''WesternAnimation/{{Encanto}}'' fanfic by [=AuroraRose2081=] that can be read on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/35480788/chapters/88441795 here]].
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade:
** This version of Mirabel wound up separated from her family for years and lived in an OrphanageOfFear for ten years, living in squalor under an abusive EvilOrphanageLady. She will sometimes suffer from panic attacks based off of traumatic experiences and [[TraumaInducedAmnesia has blocked off]] how exactly she was separated from her family. Also, she didn't have glasses, so she had to learn how to live with ''extremely'' bad eyesight.
** On top of all of the underlying issues being a Madrigal brought them, the entire family had to live with not knowing what became of Mirabel (assuming that the BlackSheep of the family had ''kidnapped'' her), each of them feeling on some level for her disappearance. When she returns, over half of them tail her under the paranoid belief that she could disappear again.
* TheBusCameBack: The plot is about Mirabel returning to the Encanto ten years after she was (allegedly) kidnapped and left to fend for herself out in yonder.
* EveryoneHasStandards: When Alma goes off on the kids for almost going into Bruno's room -- a taboo thing to do in Casita Madrigal -- Mirabel is quick to stick up for them and is willing to take their punishment. Having been raised in an OrphanageOfFear, she thinks that she was going to beat them, [[WouldNotHurtAChild something that appalls her family to no end]].
* ForWantOfANail: The plot of the story involves Mirabel going missing at the same time as Bruno. She ends up living at an orphanage beyond the Encanto and doesn't come back until right before Antonio's gift ceremony. She also brings along a small group of orphan children who become honorary members of the family.
* HistoryRepeats: Mirabel's return to the Encanto reflects her Abuela's experiences when the Encanto was originally created.
* NearDeathExperience: The story opens with Mirabel nearly dying of blood-loss after just barely getting away from a group of horsemen out to either kill or kidnap them.
* ParentalSubstitute: Mirabel unwittingly became like a mother to the younger children at the orphanage, going hungry so that they could eat, doing their laundry, taking punishment for them and nearly sacrificing her life to the horsemen chasing them at the beginning of the story.
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