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* GetOut: Emma's reaction to Taylor trying to comfort her at the hospital. She felt like Taylor was [[DontYouDarePityMe pitying her]].
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* FalseFriend: Downplayed. Laserdream's friendship with Captain Marvel is genuine, and she does care about her, but she is also using her to boost New Wave's credibility following the past death of one of their members in civilian identity. Her intentions are wholly noble and she is a kind-hearted person though.
%%** Sophia is this for Emma, being the reason why she became a {{jerkass}} bully.* GetOut: Emma's reaction to Taylor trying to comfort her at the hospital. She felt like Taylor was [[DontYouDarePityMe pitying her]].
%%** Sophia is this for Emma, being the reason why she became a {{jerkass}} bully.* GetOut: Emma's reaction to Taylor trying to comfort her at the hospital. She felt like Taylor was [[DontYouDarePityMe pitying her]].
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* PoisonousFriend:
** Downplayed. Laserdream's friendship with Captain Marvel is genuine, and she does care about her, but she is also using her to boost New Wave's credibility following the past death of one of their members in civilian identity. Her intentions are wholly noble and she is a kind-hearted person though.
** Sophia is this for Emma, being the reason why she became a {{jerkass}} bully.
** Downplayed. Laserdream's friendship with Captain Marvel is genuine, and she does care about her, but she is also using her to boost New Wave's credibility following the past death of one of their members in civilian identity. Her intentions are wholly noble and she is a kind-hearted person though.
** Sophia is this for Emma, being the reason why she became a {{jerkass}} bully.
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This story is a CrossoverFanfic between ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' and ''ComicBook/{{Shazam}}'', where Taylor gains the powers of Shazam rather than the Queen Administrator Shard like she did in canon. What has drawn many readers into this story is how ''[[LighterAndSofter lighthearted]]'' it is compared to canon (though to be fair, [[CrapsackWorld this isn't really that hard to do]]). It so far explores Taylor having the powers the wizard has granted her and using them for good.
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This story is a CrossoverFanfic {{crossover}} between ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' and ''ComicBook/{{Shazam}}'', where Taylor gains the powers of Shazam rather than the Queen Administrator Shard like she did in canon. What has drawn many readers into this story is how ''[[LighterAndSofter lighthearted]]'' it is compared to canon (though to be fair, [[CrapsackWorld this isn't really that hard to do]]). It so far explores Taylor having the powers the wizard has granted her and using them for good.
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This story is a CrossoverFic between ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' and ''ComicBook/{{Shazam}}'', where Taylor gains the powers of Shazam rather than the Queen Administrator Shard like she did in canon. What has drawn many readers into this story is how ''[[LighterAndSofter lighthearted]]'' it is compared to canon (though to be fair, [[CrapsackWorld this isn't really that hard to do]]). It so far explores Taylor having the powers the wizard has granted her and using them for good.
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This story is a CrossoverFic CrossoverFanfic between ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' and ''ComicBook/{{Shazam}}'', where Taylor gains the powers of Shazam rather than the Queen Administrator Shard like she did in canon. What has drawn many readers into this story is how ''[[LighterAndSofter lighthearted]]'' it is compared to canon (though to be fair, [[CrapsackWorld this isn't really that hard to do]]). It so far explores Taylor having the powers the wizard has granted her and using them for good.
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This story is a crossover between ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' and ''ComicBook/{{Shazam}}'', where Taylor gains the powers of Shazam rather than the Queen Administrator Shard like she did in canon. What has drawn many readers into this story is how ''[[LighterAndSofter lighthearted]]'' it is compared to canon (though to be fair, [[CrapsackWorld this isn't really that hard to do]]). It so far explores Taylor having the powers the wizard has granted her and using them for good.
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This story is a crossover CrossoverFic between ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' and ''ComicBook/{{Shazam}}'', where Taylor gains the powers of Shazam rather than the Queen Administrator Shard like she did in canon. What has drawn many readers into this story is how ''[[LighterAndSofter lighthearted]]'' it is compared to canon (though to be fair, [[CrapsackWorld this isn't really that hard to do]]). It so far explores Taylor having the powers the wizard has granted her and using them for good.
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* BigGood: The Wizard, Shazam, or Shaz for short.
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* BigGood: The Wizard, Shazam, or Shaz for short. He's the one who gave Taylor her powers and helps offer her worldly advice.
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* PetTheDog: Sophia can be somewhat lenient every now and then:
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* PetTheDog: Sophia can be somewhat lenient every now and then:then.
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* {{Omniglot}}: When Taylor first activates her powers, she goes into shock and tries to find a word in different languages that can describe her situation... only to stop and realize that she ''actually understands'' all the languages she was thinking of.
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* {{Omniglot}}: When Taylor first activates her powers, she goes into shock and tries to find a word in different languages that can describe her situation... only to stop and realize that she ''actually understands'' all the languages she was thinking of.
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** Taylor - AKA Captain Marvel - is the champion of Shaz. Tawny refers to her as this, much to Taylor's annoyance.
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** Taylor - AKA Captain Marvel - is the champion of Shaz.Shaz, the Wizard. Tawny refers to her as this, much to Taylor's annoyance.
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This story is a crossover between ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' and ''ComicBook/{{Shazam}}'', where Taylor gains the powers of Shazam rather than the Queen Administrator Shard like she did in canon. What has drawn many readers into this story is how ''[[LighterAndSofter lighthearted]]'' it is compared to canon (though to be fair, [[CrapsackWorld this isn't really hard to do]]). It so far explores Taylor having the powers the wizard has granted her and using them for good.
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This story is a crossover between ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' and ''ComicBook/{{Shazam}}'', where Taylor gains the powers of Shazam rather than the Queen Administrator Shard like she did in canon. What has drawn many readers into this story is how ''[[LighterAndSofter lighthearted]]'' it is compared to canon (though to be fair, [[CrapsackWorld this isn't really that hard to do]]). It so far explores Taylor having the powers the wizard has granted her and using them for good.
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* DeadFic: The story hasn't received any updates or news of updates in three years.
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* DeadFic: The story hasn't received any updates or news of updates in three years.years on any of the sites it's posted to.
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* DeadFic: The story hasn't received any updates or news of updates in three years.
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* DontYouDarePityMe: Emma asks why Taylor would go out of her way to save her from [[spoiler:Mr. Grant]] after all she did to her. Taylor responds, "You looked like you needed help". Emma... didn't take it well, at all.
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* DontYouDarePityMe: Emma asks why Taylor would go out of her way to save her from [[spoiler:Mr. Grant]] after all she did to her. Taylor responds, "You looked like you needed help". Emma... didn't take it well, at all.
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* ''LighterAndSofter'': Besides Taylor not being an Undersider, this fanfic also has goofy villains that wouldn't be out of place in a 60s comic, several comedic moments, and Taylor being overall much more chipper and upbeat (In large part due to Emma's betrayal being recent). All in all, it's a much more pleasant place than canon was.
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* ''LighterAndSofter'': LighterAndSofter: Besides Taylor not being an Undersider, this fanfic also has goofy villains that wouldn't be out of place in a 60s comic, several comedic moments, and Taylor being overall much more chipper and upbeat (In large part due to Emma's betrayal being recent). All in all, it's a much more pleasant place than canon was.
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** [[spoiler: Mr. Grant only targets bullies, and tries to protect their victims.]]
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** [[spoiler: Mr. Grant Grant]] only targets bullies, and tries to protect their victims.]]
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: Mr. Grant seems like an upstanding teacher since he's pleasant and is shown to be the only teacher at Winslow to actually be doing something about Taylor's bullying problem, but [[spoiler:then we learn that he really only does this as a means for revenge against all bullies for his daughter's torment and actively tortures them to death.]]
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: Mr. Grant seems like an upstanding teacher since he's pleasant and is shown to be the only teacher at Winslow to actually be doing something about Taylor's bullying problem, but [[spoiler:then we learn that he really only does this as a means for revenge against all bullies for his daughter's torment and actively tortures them to death.]]death]].
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* BaitAndSwitch: Mr. Grant seems like an upstanding teacher since he's pleasant and is shown to be the only teacher at Winslow to actually be doing something about Taylor's bullying problem, but [[spoiler:then we learn that he really only does this as a means for revenge against all bullies for his daughter's torment.]]
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: Mr. Grant seems like an upstanding teacher since he's pleasant and is shown to be the only teacher at Winslow to actually be doing something about Taylor's bullying problem, but [[spoiler:then we learn that he really only does this as a means for revenge against all bullies for his daughter's torment and actively tortures them to death.]]
