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* WonderChild: Priyanka says that they tried to have more children, but they were lucky enough to have had Connie.
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* WonderChild: Priyanka says that they she and Doug tried to have more children, but they were lucky enough to have had Connie.
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* EmotionalMaturityIsPhysicalMaturity: When Priyanka finds Stevonnie, they infuse with Steven crying as a much younger boy. When she assures him that they are not in-trouble, he changes back.
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* EmotionalMaturityIsPhysicalMaturity: When Priyanka finds Stevonnie, they infuse unfuse with Steven crying as a much younger boy. When she assures him that they are not in-trouble, he changes back.
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It initially starts out as a Fluffy one-shot where Steven and Connie end up fusion to share Connie's pain during [[NoPeriodsPeriod that time of the month]], but when Dr. Maheswaran finds Stevonnie, her misguided concern for her daughter leads to her accidentally insulting them. All of them.
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It initially starts out as a Fluffy one-shot where Steven and Connie end up fusion fusing to share Connie's pain during [[NoPeriodsPeriod that time of the month]], but when it continues (to the author's apparent confusion) with Dr. Maheswaran finds Stevonnie, finding Stevonnie for the first time, and her misguided concern for her daughter leads to her accidentally insulting them. All of them.
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The fanfic can be read on Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11539498/1/Fusion-Impression here]] or on ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/4923142 here]]
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The fanfic can be read on Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11539498/1/Fusion-Impression here]] or on ArchiveOfOurOwn Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/4923142 here]]
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It initially starts out as a Fluffy one-shot where Steven and Connie end up fusion to share Connie's pain during her MenstrualMenace, but when Dr. Maheswaran finds Stevonnie, her misguided concern for her daughter leads to her accidentally insulting them. All of them.
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It initially starts out as a Fluffy one-shot where Steven and Connie end up fusion to share Connie's pain during her MenstrualMenace, [[NoPeriodsPeriod that time of the month]], but when Dr. Maheswaran finds Stevonnie, her misguided concern for her daughter leads to her accidentally insulting them. All of them.
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* MenstrualMenace: This is the first time Steven has ever encountered anybody going through their mensuration cycle, having not even known about it beforehand.
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She must eventually come to terms with her daughter's growing independence as well as her relafionship with Steven and all that may entail.
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She must eventually come to terms with her daughter's growing independence as well as her relafionship relationship with Steven and all that may entail.
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''Fusion Impression'' is a ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1312886/John-Cribati John Cribati]].
Dr. Maheswaran meets Stevonnie. She reacts. Stevonnie reacts to her reaction. Things don't end well.
The fanfic can be read on Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11539498/1/Fusion-Impression here]].
Dr. Maheswaran meets Stevonnie. She reacts. Stevonnie reacts to her reaction. Things don't end well.
The fanfic can be read on Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11539498/1/Fusion-Impression here]].
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''Fusion Impression'' is a ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1312886/John-Cribati John Cribati]].
Cribati]]
It initially starts out as a Fluffy one-shot where Steven and Connie end up fusion to share Connie's pain during her MenstrualMenace, but when Dr. Maheswaranmeets Stevonnie. She reacts. Stevonnie reacts finds Stevonnie, her misguided concern for her daughter leads to her reaction. Things don't end well.
accidentally insulting them. All of them.
She must eventually come to terms with her daughter's growing independence as well as her relafionship with Steven and all that may entail.
The fanfic can be read on Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11539498/1/Fusion-Impressionhere]].here]] or on ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/4923142 here]]
It initially starts out as a Fluffy one-shot where Steven and Connie end up fusion to share Connie's pain during her MenstrualMenace, but when Dr. Maheswaran
She must eventually come to terms with her daughter's growing independence as well as her relafionship with Steven and all that may entail.
The fanfic can be read on Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11539498/1/Fusion-Impression
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''Fusion Impression'' is a ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1312886/John-Cribati John Cribati]].
Dr. Maheswaran meets Stevonnie. She reacts. Stevonnie reacts to her reaction. Things don't end well.
The fanfic can be read on Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11539498/1/Fusion-Impression here]].
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: By the end of Chapter 2, Priyanka accidentally implies that fusion is Steven's way of taking advantage of Connie. He does not take it well.
* EmotionalMaturityIsPhysicalMaturity: When Priyanka finds Stevonnie, they infuse with Steven crying as a much younger boy. When she assures him that they are not in-trouble, he changes back.
--> "Uh... sorry about that. Still not that good with shapeshifting. Sometimes I'm only as old as I feel I am."
--> Dr. Maheswaran chuckles. "There's a power I wouldn't mind having."
--> "I almost died of old age," Steven counters. Simultaneously, Connie says "He turned into a baby once."
--> She cringes. "... I'm not sure which is more terrifying."
* IWantGrandkids: Having seen that Steven and Connie's relationship is pure and genuine, not only does she give them their blessing, but she then sees Stevonnie as what she would picture their kids to be like.
--> Priyanka pecks him on the cheek. "Our grandchildren are going to be ''gorgeous''."
--> Doug freezes.
--> "Curry, you said?" Priyanka continues with a grin. "I hope you didn't use too much paprika like last time."
--> Doug stands by the door, his brain desperately struggling to reboot. Finally, he manages to utter a single word.
--> "Grandchildren?"
* MenstrualMenace: This is the first time Steven has ever encountered anybody going through their mensuration cycle, having not even known about it beforehand.
* {{Realpolitik}}: Whereas the Crystal Gems view fusion as an expression of love and relationships, Jasper sees it more as power-play, similar to how people use strength and social-standings as a means of ascending societal ranks.
* SplitPersonality: Priyanka remarks that Stevonnie acts like someone with Dissociative identity disorder whenever they end up talking to each other out loud.
* UnderstandingBoyfriend: When Steven sees that Connie is bleeding, he immediately goes into panic mode and looks for help. When it is explained to him what exactly it is, he is quick to be encouraging towards her and even helps share the pain as Stevonnie.
* WonderChild: Priyanka says that they tried to have more children, but they were lucky enough to have had Connie.
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Dr. Maheswaran meets Stevonnie. She reacts. Stevonnie reacts to her reaction. Things don't end well.
The fanfic can be read on Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11539498/1/Fusion-Impression here]].
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: By the end of Chapter 2, Priyanka accidentally implies that fusion is Steven's way of taking advantage of Connie. He does not take it well.
* EmotionalMaturityIsPhysicalMaturity: When Priyanka finds Stevonnie, they infuse with Steven crying as a much younger boy. When she assures him that they are not in-trouble, he changes back.
--> "Uh... sorry about that. Still not that good with shapeshifting. Sometimes I'm only as old as I feel I am."
--> Dr. Maheswaran chuckles. "There's a power I wouldn't mind having."
--> "I almost died of old age," Steven counters. Simultaneously, Connie says "He turned into a baby once."
--> She cringes. "... I'm not sure which is more terrifying."
* IWantGrandkids: Having seen that Steven and Connie's relationship is pure and genuine, not only does she give them their blessing, but she then sees Stevonnie as what she would picture their kids to be like.
--> Priyanka pecks him on the cheek. "Our grandchildren are going to be ''gorgeous''."
--> Doug freezes.
--> "Curry, you said?" Priyanka continues with a grin. "I hope you didn't use too much paprika like last time."
--> Doug stands by the door, his brain desperately struggling to reboot. Finally, he manages to utter a single word.
--> "Grandchildren?"
* MenstrualMenace: This is the first time Steven has ever encountered anybody going through their mensuration cycle, having not even known about it beforehand.
* {{Realpolitik}}: Whereas the Crystal Gems view fusion as an expression of love and relationships, Jasper sees it more as power-play, similar to how people use strength and social-standings as a means of ascending societal ranks.
* SplitPersonality: Priyanka remarks that Stevonnie acts like someone with Dissociative identity disorder whenever they end up talking to each other out loud.
* UnderstandingBoyfriend: When Steven sees that Connie is bleeding, he immediately goes into panic mode and looks for help. When it is explained to him what exactly it is, he is quick to be encouraging towards her and even helps share the pain as Stevonnie.
* WonderChild: Priyanka says that they tried to have more children, but they were lucky enough to have had Connie.
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