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* BerserkButton: Despite the two learning about their feelings for one another, Mewtwo ''really'' doesn't like it when Mew is in harm's way or being threatened in any way, shape, or form.
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* BerserkButton: Despite the two learning about their feelings for one another, Mewtwo ''really'' doesn't like it when Mew is in harm's way or being threatened in any way, shape, or form.
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* BerserkButton: If you hurt Mew at all, better hope she wants to stop Mewtwo from killing you.
** Heavily implied this happens to Latios when his sister gets hurt badly.
** Heavily implied this happens to Latios when his sister gets hurt badly.
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* BerserkButton: If you hurt Mew at all, better hope she wants to stop Despite the two learning about their feelings for one another, Mewtwo from killing you.
''really'' doesn't like it when Mew is in harm's way or being threatened in any way, shape, or form.
** Heavily implied thishappens happened to Latios in the past when his sister gets hurt badly.got badly hurt.
** Heavily implied this
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Skip ahead two months to when the rumored war comes to pass, and the future looks grim. That is until the [[ApocalypseHow world is suddenly destroyed,]] leaving the Legendaries alive and devastated.
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Skip ahead two months to when the rumored war comes to pass, and the future looks grim. That is until the [[ApocalypseHow world is suddenly destroyed,]] leaving the Legendaries alive and devastated.
but devastated, unsure what to do about their [[MyGreatestFailure failures]].
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* BreakThemByTalking: The method Legion uses the most.
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* BreakThemByTalking: The method Legion uses the most.most when [[EvilGloating gloating]].
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* EvilLaugh: Always Legion, bordering on LaughingMad at times. Made creepier as it's done through Mew.
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* LaughingMad: Always Legion. Made creepier as it's done through Mew.
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* ImmortalImmaturity: Most of the Legendaries, much to the chagrin of the others.
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* [[MidSeasonTwist Seventh Chapter Twist:]] Exactly when the plot takes a sudden, dark turn.
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* WhamEpisode: The end of chapter seven.
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* WhamEpisode: The end of [[SeventhEpisodeTwist chapter seven.seven]].
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* [[MidSeasonTwist SeventhChapterTwist:]] Exactly when the plot takes a sudden, dark turn.
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* [[MidSeasonTwist SeventhChapterTwist:]] Seventh Chapter Twist:]] Exactly when the plot takes a sudden, dark turn.
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* LoveEpiphany: Mewtwo had one of these, revealed in a flashback.
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* HandOnWomb: [[spoiler: Mew does this after being impregnated. This was used in an early chapter to foreshadow the ForegoneConclusion.]]
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* FlowerMotif: [[spoiler: The revived Tree of Beginning's crystalline heart is in the shape of a water lily.]]
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* DespairEventHorizon: Good ''God'' this happens a lot. Even though a lot of characters go through this, it's [[spoiler: Mew]] who has it worse off.
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* DespairEventHorizon: Good ''God'' this happens a lot. Even though a lot of characters go through this, The Fanfic. However, it's [[spoiler: Mew]] who has it worse off.
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* HeroicBSOD: Happens a couple of times with Mewtwo, but most notably [[spoiler: after seeing Mew's memories and how ''she'' got the BSOD herself.]]
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* IntimateHealing: [[PrincessMononoke Mewtwo does]] [[ShoutOut this]] with a starved Mew, which eventually leads to a [[SacredFirstKiss kiss]]. She doesn’t take it well.
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* IntimateHealing: [[PrincessMononoke [[Anime/PrincessMononoke Mewtwo does]] [[ShoutOut this]] with a starved Mew, which eventually leads to a [[SacredFirstKiss kiss]]. She doesn’t take it well.
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* ShoutOut: The aforementioned IntimateHealing came from PrincessMononoke.
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* ShoutOut: The aforementioned IntimateHealing came from PrincessMononoke.''Anime/PrincessMononoke''.
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** [[HigurashiNoNakuKoroNi LIAR!]]
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** [[HigurashiNoNakuKoroNi [[VisualNovel/HigurashiWhenTheyCry LIAR!]]
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* EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor: Legion shows subtle shades of a sense of sick, albeit sexual humor.
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* [[spoiler: MedicalRapeAndImpregnate]]
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: WordOfGod says chapter eleven wasn't originally going to be from [[spoiler: Mew's point of view]], but there was a given option of rewriting the entire chapter to [[spoiler: literally project Mewtwo into the past and not in her head]] on request if it proved too confusing to the reader.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: WordOfGod says chapter eleven wasn't originally going to be from [[spoiler: Mew's point of view]], but there was a given option of rewriting the entire chapter to [[spoiler: to literally project Mewtwo into the past and not in her head]] on request if it proved too confusing to the reader.
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* AbuseIsOkayWhenItIsFemaleOnMale: Usually between Suicune and her brothers, though other females have smacked around other males for [[AllMenArePerverts being perverts]] or for saying something out-of-line; this is often done for comedic reasons. [[SubvertedTrope Not so when it comes to a possessed Mew smacking around Celebi and Mewtwo.]]
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* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: Usually between Suicune and her brothers, though other females have smacked around other males for [[AllMenArePerverts being perverts]] or for saying something out-of-line; this is often done for comedic reasons. [[SubvertedTrope Not so when it comes to a possessed Mew smacking around Celebi and Mewtwo.]]
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The story is currently on-going, and can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5842142/1/Forsaken here]].
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The story is currently on-going, and can be read both [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5842142/1/Forsaken here]], and [[http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?477884-Forsaken here]].
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* HollywoodAtheist: Giratina
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** Deoxys made an off-hand remark he once [[SelfHarm gouged out his own eyes]] [[BrainBleach for witnessing human sex.]] Given his [[AllMenArePerverts character]], this was PlayedForLaughs.
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** Deoxys made an off-hand offhand remark he once [[SelfHarm gouged out his own eyes]] [[BrainBleach for witnessing human sex.]] Given his [[AllMenArePerverts character]], this was PlayedForLaughs.
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* ClimbingClimax: [[spoiler: The climb of the Tree of Beginnings.]]
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* ClimbingClimax: [[spoiler: The climb of the Tree of Beginnings.Beginning.]]
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** [[SelfHarm Deoxys once mentioned gouging out his own eyes]] [[BrainBleach for witnessing human sex.]]
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** Deoxys made an off-hand remark he once [[SelfHarm Deoxys once mentioned gouging gouged out his own eyes]] [[BrainBleach for witnessing human sex.]]]] Given his [[AllMenArePerverts character]], this was PlayedForLaughs.
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* CPRCleanPrettyReliable: Goes hand-in-hand with KissOfLife in a spiritual sense. [[spoiler: It's not until Mew drowns that it becomes mostly averted.]]
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* KissOfLife: Done on a more spiritual sense [[spoiler: until it's played straight when Mew drowns.]]
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The story begins three centuries in the future with bad news: [[CrapsackWorld the Pokémon world is on the brink of a world war.]] Ho-oh calls for a conference for the Legendaries on this issue, giving first-hand accounts about the world falling apart. For fear of becoming as the common man, he instructs everyone to get over rivalries and make friendships with one another.
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The story begins three centuries in the future with bad news: [[CrapsackWorld the Pokémon world is on the brink of a world war.]] Ho-oh calls for a conference for the Legendaries on this issue, giving and give first-hand accounts about the world falling apart. For fear of becoming as the common man, he instructs everyone to get over rivalries and make friendships with one another.
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Have we mentioned this is a [[{{Shipping}} romance story]]?
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Have we mentioned this is a [[{{Shipping}} romance story]]?
romance]]?
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** Upon crashing through a wall, Lugia asks if he [[WesternAnimation/Robots missed the butt-kicking.]]
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** Upon crashing through a wall, Lugia asks if he [[WesternAnimation/Robots [[WesternAnimation/{{Robots}} missed the butt-kicking.]]
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* GoryDiscretionShot: Played straight during [[spoiler: the C-section]], but was subverted with [[spoiler: the deaths of the scientists.]] Later on, it's nearly-played straight when Manaphy was whipped, but when [[spoiler: Legion turns on Mewtwo]] the scene cuts away to Mew's physical reactions to the whipping, then shortly returns for the end result.
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* GoryDiscretionShot: Played Zigzagged for the most part. For example, it is played straight during [[spoiler: the C-section]], but until it was subverted with [[spoiler: the deaths of the scientists.]] Later on, it's nearly-played straight when Manaphy was whipped, but when [[spoiler: Legion turns on Mewtwo]] the scene cuts away to Mew's physical reactions to the whipping, then shortly returns for the end result.]]